Podcast Page Sponsor Ad
Display ad placement on specific high-traffic podcast pages and episode pages
Monthly Rate: $50 - $5000
Exist Ad Preview
Beyond the Verse - Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night: Writing against Mortality with Dylan Thomas
Episode Date: April 15, 2025In this week’s episode of Beyond the Verse, the official podcast of PoemAnalysis.com and Poetry+, Joe and Maiya unpack Dylan Thomas’s iconic villanelle, 'Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night....' Written in 1947 and published in 1951, this powerful plea to resist mortality remains one of the most famous poems of the 20th century.Joe and Maiya explore how Thomas’s poetic form—strict yet expressive—mirrors the poem’s defiant message. They trace the emotional roots of the piece in Thomas’s personal life, particularly the declining health of his father, and examine the deeper cultural backdrop of post-WWII grief. From the poem’s bold address to archetypes like wise men and wild men, to the ambiguity of “gentle” vs “gently,” the discussion reveals how Thomas wrestles with legacy, loss, and the human impulse to fight against the inevitable.Get exclusive PDFs on 'Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night' available to Poetry+ users:Full PDF GuidePoetry Snapshot PDFPoem Printable PDFwith meterwith rhyme schemewith both meter and rhyme schemeDylan Thomas PDF GuideTune in and discover:Why the villanelle form intensifies the poem’s emotional powerHow Thomas balances personal grief with universal themesWhat makes this poem a striking counterpoint to wartime poetryHow Thomas’s refusal to conform shaped both his fame and critical legacySend us a textSupport the showAs always, for the ultimate poetry experience, join Poetry+ and explore all things poetry at PoemAnalysis.com.
Transcript
Discussion (0)
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Old age should burn and rave at close of day.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Though wise men at their end no dark is right,
because their words had forked no lightning,
they do not go gentle into that good night.
Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright their feet,
frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, and learned too late they grieved it on
its way. Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men near death who see with blinding
sight, blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, rage, rage against the dying of the
light. And you, my father, there on the sad height, curse, bless me now with your fierce
tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the
light. Welcome to Beyond the Verse, a poetry podcast brought to you by the team at
permanautist.com and poetry plus. I'm Joe and I'm here with my co-host Maya and today we're
going to be discussing the poem that Maya has just beautifully read for us, Dylan Thomas's
Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night. And we're going to
going to be discussing a range of themes, including the impact of poetic structure, writing against
mortality and the myth of the poet. But before we get into the poem itself, Maya, can you tell
us a little bit more about Dylan Thomas as an individual, where he came from, a little bit about his
life? Of course. Thanks, Joe. So Dylan Thomas was born in 1914 in Swansea, which is a seaside
town in Wales. He attended a grammar school, but was generally a sickly child. He spent a lot of
time at home with his mother and father, and his father was an English teacher.
this is where he gets his love of poetry from.
He started writing as a teenager
and was first published in the New English Weekly
in 1933, aged just 19.
And a year later, released his first collection 18 poems,
that's in 1934, where he then moved to London
to pursue his writing career.
During the 1940s, during World War II,
he worked for the BBC as a script writer,
but he died in 1953, age only 39,
from heavy drinking.
Now, that is a very quick pit stop tour of his life,
but Joe, I'd love to know from you.
What do we know about Thomas
that kind of influenced his life as a poet?
Where does the poem we're talking about today come from?
Thanks, Maya.
So, as you mentioned in that brief biography,
Dylan Thomas achieved poetic success at a very young age.
In fact, a large majority of the poems that went on
to become the canon of Dylan Thomas
were written when he was in his early 20s.
This poem is much later.
He began writing the poem in 1947
when he was on a trip to Florence in Italy.
And the poem, as we're going to discuss later on,
is inspired by his own father's failing health.
On the one hand, he's very drawn to Welsh mythology,
especially the famous collection of Welsh prose stories
known as the Mabinogion.
But he's also drawing upon contemporary figures,
so he was an enormous fan of the likes of James Joyce,
French poet Arthur Rimbaud from the 19th century.
Like lots of writers in the 20th century,
he's also engaging in different forms of cultural analysis
and psychological analysis,
and he was influenced by the writing of Sigmund Freud, for example.
So he's really drawing on several different strands of cultural and literary life.
Most people will be aware of Dylan Thompson's poetry for its vivid use of language,
its use of wordplay, its use of rime, it's really verbally dense,
especially his early poetry.
And sometimes those factors blur some of the more interesting things that his poetry is doing
in terms of drawing on those myriad influences.
But to answer your question, Maya, this poem we're talking late 40s,
and of course any poem about mortality like this one that's written in the late 40s
must be viewed in the context of the horrors of the Second World War
in which millions of people were killed.
We're going to be diving into the poem now.
And Maya, I know you want to talk about form and for any listeners who aren't aware,
this poem is written as a Villanelle.
So, Maya, can you tell us a little bit more about what that means?
Absolutely.
So a Villanelle is a 19 line, very highly structured poem.
It contains a lot of repeated lines.
you have the repetition of do not go gentle into that good night, the dying of the light,
all of these kind of lean into that villanelle.
However, the specific structure is written in five tersepts, which are five sets of three
lines, and it ends with a final quatrain, and that is a four-line stanza.
Now, what I think is really important to note here is that with a villanelle, it does an
incredible job of actually telling a story without even looking at the content.
Now, if you were to solely take the repetition of those ters, the repetition of those stanzas,
you would have what is effectively a rolling poem, you would have something that doesn't really have an end.
The quatrain at the end, however, not only changes the form, but gives us a sense of finality.
These four lines and the final rhyming couplet offers a sense of finality that we haven't had at any other point in this poem.
And I really love the fact that when a lot of poets talk about death, it can often be seen as this very abstract and not quite material thing.
But Thomas does an amazing job of making it very visceral and very real.
And I think the form just adds to that.
But what do you think, Joe?
Well, I completely agree when writers, particularly 20th and 21st century writers, when they employ a strict form like this,
I'm always curious about the justification because it's worth noting that in the 20th century, especially by the time this poem was written,
Freeverse had become the dominant form of poetry.
Not everybody, there was a movement back against the rise of Freeverse in the 20s and 1910s
that sought to restore what they viewed as pro-poetry by returning to more traditional,
fixed, rhyming and metrical forms.
But Thomas could absolutely have written this in Freeverse.
The reason he didn't, therefore, becomes really significant.
And what I find fascinating about this is he's taking a poem that is ultimately about
resistance, that is about fighting against the inevitable.
but he's laid us out in a poem that has incredibly strict parameters.
The Villanelle form has a place where it has to go.
You are quite limited in what you can do as a poem.
You are limited by only being able to use two types of rhymes.
There's only A and B rhymes in this poem.
The poem's subject matter is about fighting back against something
you ultimately cannot defeat,
but nevertheless have a kind of moral imperative to resist.
And what the form of the poem means that we see that same battle taking place
because the words that Thomas is using are resisting and fighting.
against really strict confines. And I think that's a wonderful way of thinking about what the
poem is doing, because ultimately Thomas's narrator knows that their father, who the poem is addressed
to, cannot defeat death. It's not about overcoming anything. It's simply about the value
in lasting a little longer against overwhelming odds. And just to add to that, with the repetition
of certain lines, we see an even more constricted view of this poem. If you ignore the repeated
lines, Thomas has only really had about 10 lines of this poem to convey the idea that he
really wants to put forward. That in itself can serve almost to imprison ideas, but instead
what we have here is Thomas really using the limited space that he has to branch out and
explore this very tough topic to talk about. So what I'd like to do is jump straight into the
poem and as any regular listeners will know, there are some poems that we like to go through
kind of line by line and explore the poem, how it develops. This one I would like to do. This one I would
like to begin right at the start. In the second line, we have this idea that old age should
burn and rave at close of day. I think this is a really interesting line because so often in poetry
and in fact in some of Thomas's earlier poetry, we see older generations, we see age as almost
a passive and slightly lighter description. But here it is active. It should burn and rave.
But what do you think this sort of resistance here really means to Thomas? What do you think this
conveys to the reader from the outset of the poem?
Well, it's a really good question, and I think it's doing several things at once.
All great poets are able to do.
On the one hand, I want to just remind readers that at this stage of the poem, these opening
lines, it's not clear who, if anybody, is actually dying.
It's only in the final stanza that we really get revealed to us that this is a poem
addressed personally to the narrator's father.
At this stage of the poem, we don't know whether the narrator themselves are the ones who
are dying.
We don't know whether they are the people.
we don't know whether they are the person experiencing old age.
It really changes the way I read these lines once you finish the poem to go back.
I remember reading this poem for the first time and finding those lines really resonate differently once you have that context.
Because if this person is able to speak to their father who is an old man, it implies that they are not old themselves.
Or at least you can extrapolate.
Obviously, there's no way of knowing necessarily how old this narrator is in relation to their father.
But we can assume they're much younger.
So these views about old age are being expressed by somebody.
who was not themselves old.
And I think that's a really interesting thing to be aware of.
This is all about rooting the perm in its context,
which maybe sounds odd because this poem does feel so universal.
We all die and most of us, thankfully, do get to reach old age.
And in many ways it speaks to really universal themes.
The reason for that is, as we mentioned,
the poem was written in 1947.
So we're talking just two years after the conclusion of the Second World War
in which millions of people had been killed.
It goes out saying that the majority of those millions of people were soldiers
and therefore were young men.
in particular. So this notion of old age being something we can all expect, which is a view that
many of us might hold in the 21st century, was absolutely not a given. Millions of young men had
been denied the right to ever grow old because of the horrors of the Second World War. So I always
read that line as a challenge to those who are lucky enough to grow old, that it's not something
that should be embraced passively, as my mentioned earlier on. And that's one of the things about
this person that's so deeply subversive is it takes our expectations of old age, which we might
associate with wisdom, but also with grace and with gentleness, it's a complete rejection of
those things. Thomas is saying millions of people never got the right to grow old gracefully
and meekly accept their eventual demise. You have a kind of responsibility to those people
to fight, to resist, to cling on to breath and life for as long as you possibly can. But what do
you think, Maya? One of the things that I find incredibly interesting about, especially this descriptor,
is that very often when we address wartime poems,
especially from people based in the UK,
you're looking at a primarily Christian readership.
Now, the Christian framework that is set up when we talk about death
is so often approaching the light.
The moment at which you die, you walk towards the light.
It is interpreted as your entrance to heaven.
Here, having Thomas repel that light, the dying of the light,
we have a bit of a reversal here that I always find quite,
unusual when set against that kind of moment of passing. Instead of having a light that is
welcoming, warm and bright, you have a light that is instead threatening. And I think, you know,
we've talked about this in many previous episodes about the importance of the sun. And I massively
recommend to anyone who's listening to this episode to also listen to the episode we did on
Chinoa Chebe's love cycle, because we talk a lot about how the sun is mythologized in that.
the fact that it is something that is being taken away from the reader.
And I think what Thomas does really excellently here
is actually just supplement the anxiety and the fear that can surround that moment of death.
We get a very fresh perspective towards the end of this poem
where we understand that it's written from a very personal point of view.
It's a son writing to a father.
And of course there's a level of fear and terror here.
You know, I think what Joe said about,
you have to read this poem twice to really understand it.
absolutely stands because as you go through this poem and you can pick out where those
specific anxieties are, I think it tracks very well that light here is not imbued with
goodness and kindness, but it instead is something that the speaker is terrified of.
They don't want to lose their father, regardless of whether they're going to a more positive
place.
I love that, and I'm sure we're going to talk more about this in the second half of today's
episode when we talk about the kind of the myth of Thomas, his reluctance to align himself,
his reluctance to offer certainty.
But we see that absolutely in this first answer, because Maya's absolutely right,
talking about the dying of the light, talking about death as this final end,
really stands at odds with a Christian readership or even a readership who might be secular,
but as many people in the West are, kind of rooted in a Christian tradition.
And yet the opening line specifically tells us it is a good night.
So there's this real ambiguity about whether this is an end,
or whether this is a new beginning, or whether there is an afterlife awaiting it the father or not.
Now, the brilliance of this ambiguity is that it's the same ambiguity that all of us have.
Even devout Christians experience moments of doubt about whether or not there is a Christian heaven
and the same with people who believe in other faiths and the same with people who believe in no God at all.
Even people who do not believe there is an afterlife might find themselves hoping there is one for themselves
or for their loved ones as a means of comforting.
The ambiguity in these opening lines, the uncertainty, the kind of oscillating between implying
that there is an afterlife and there isn't one, is one the things that makes this term about mortality
feel so genuine, because those are exactly the kind of apprehensions and concerns and worries
that people have themselves when they or loved ones are dying.
Because in those moments, our ignorance is no obstacle to hope.
We hope for the best for our loved ones and for ourselves,
but we play games with ourselves about whether or not we actually believe there is anything good about the night to come,
whether there is simply impending darkness,
or whether there might be some kind of salvation in the form of light.
I'm really glad you brought up about the myth of Thomas as well,
because just to move briefly onto this second stanza,
though wise men at their end no dark is right,
because their words had forked no lightning,
they do not go gentle into that good night.
I have always interpreted that stanza in particular
to be more about legacy and inspiration,
and I find this descriptor of, you know,
that moment of inspiration as a fork of lightning,
a flash in the otherwise dark life.
Really fascinating.
I think it's such an interesting way to describe
any form of making a difference or making a point or being remembered for something.
And what Thomas is saying here is that if you haven't had that moment where you've proved yourself
to the world, where you've had something that someone can remember you by, then you can't pass on.
You can't take that next step.
Joe and I were talking before the podcast episode about how Thomas is a slightly odd figure
when you look at the poetic scene generally because though he was immensely popular, especially
in the US, and I think Joe, you mentioned he was the UK's 10th face.
favorite poet in a more recent survey. But when it comes to us doing our research before the
episode and really exploring that, I certainly hadn't ever seen Thomas as this absolutely
famous poet, a must read. I knew of his work. I knew of him. But it seems that other poets
that Joe and I both like and admire have much more reverence for his work. So when we talk about
legacy in a poem that is about death, I almost find this stanza a little offensive on a second
read? Because when it's written to his father, what I almost translate this as, you haven't done
enough to pass yet. You can't leave me. But what that really is, again, that fear playing into it.
So the myth of Thomas and how his legacy has leaked into a lot of the work that we read, I almost
don't see the man and the poet here. I see that kind of scared little boy more so. And I think
that comes out much more strongly in this poem than in a lot of the other poems that we can read
for Thomas's. Yeah, I mean, we were talking before the episode about reading this poem as a bit of
a companion piece with one of Thomas's other most famous poems, which is, and death shall have
no dominion, which is written much earlier, written in 1933, as a competition with a fellow poet and
friend of his, Bert Trick. And yet, one of the key differences that I see is that kind of, you're right,
the evocation of that small child, that kind of really sincere fear that you feel in this poem,
this apprehension about being left alone in the world.
And I think what this poem is able to do is,
and I mention this when we're talking about the first answer,
is it captures something authentic about the experience of having a loved one pass away
while being applicable to countless other loved ones.
And maybe those two things are different sides of the same coin,
because there's something about Thomas's ability to balance the personal and the universal
that makes this poem so enduringly appealing to people.
and it's a really strange poem. It's considered by many to be a funeral poem, and yet in some ways it feels completely at odds with what we tend to imagine about the end of life. And it's so provocative in that way. It's so inflammatory. And I think that there is a real honesty about that inflammatory nature. I mean, how many people put on a face and pretends that actually, oh, no, it's my time or it's the time of my loved one. And when actually there is a kind of inner child in us that screams, no, I don't want my
I loved one to pass word. I'm not ready for my father or my mother or my friend. And there's a real
urgency and intensity to this poem that I think speaks to those feelings, even if they're feelings
that we wish we weren't having. Absolutely. I couldn't agree more. And I think, again, just to
root back to this whole mythology piece we're talking about, one of the things that is so enduring
about the kind of mythology around Thomas, if you want to call it that, is the fact that he never
really subscribed to any manifestos. He wasn't part of literary movements. He never really fell
into one of those brackets. And I think, Joe, I'd love to know if you agree or not, but I think
a lot of the time when we do have those literary movements, it becomes very easy for us, when we
analyze as readers, to almost shoehorn sometimes and say, okay, well, this phrasing is because they
were a modernist or this phrasing is because they were a romantic poet. Whereas because Thomas had
very few affiliations in this sense. It makes it really touching to read a poem that really has
nowhere else to go. This poem is absolutely standalone in so many ways other than to relate to
Thomas's other work. And I think, as you said, when it is provocative and a little bit unsettling
in a way, that just adds to this sense that it's an absolutely individual poem. And although, yes,
it speaks to a greater sense of loss, ultimately this is one person's poem about their singular
relationship with their father and the fear of losing that person and losing that loved
one. Again, I think all of this feeds into just his absolute sense of individuality.
Yeah, and we're going to talk more about this in the second half of today's episode about
how certain decisions that Thomas made in his life actually away from the poetry and away
from the drama itself shapes the way those poems and those dramas are viewed today.
I mean, for any listeners who haven't already checked out our episode on Sylvia Plath,
I really implore you to do that because it was a really good.
interesting conversation that covered not just individual poems of hers, but also the space she occupies
in the public conversation. And, you know, Thomas has achieved a similar kind of mythology. I mean,
as recently as another episode, I would plug for listeners, our interview we did in December with
Christy Frederick Doherty and the collection she edited where poets responded to the songs of Taylor Swift,
because Taylor Swift named Drought Dylan Thomas in her most recent album, where she mentioned him alongside
the likes of Patty Smith and talked about the Chelsea Hotel, which maybe we'll get on to in the second half as well.
This kind of sense that he is a larger than life figure, and people know Dylan Thomas's name, even if they can't name a Dylan Thomas poem.
Now, what that does to the work itself and the way the work is perceived is absolutely fascinating.
And I think in some ways it allows his poetry, as my mention, to be kind of free of ideological shackles.
You know, he's not having to write poetry because he believes that poetry should be a certain way, as many other 20th century poets were.
Again, I would suggest listeners go and check out our most recent episode on Tears Heliot's the Wasteland.
if you want a really interesting companion piece about a poet who is also carrying an ideology
on his back, Thomas is free of those kind of responsibilities. And yet there is a dark side to that
as well, because when you are so reluctant to align yourself with any kind of school of thought
or any kind of particular identity as a poet, sometimes that means that you can be a little
bit tetherless in the conversation, because ultimately all artists' legacies are not decided by
them, they're decided by others. Now, Thomas has achieved massive public renown, very well known
amongst the public, and actually maybe there's a chance that that's hindered some of his
critical reception. You know, there are great many scholars who are doing great work on Dylan
Thomas, but he is not held in the same kind of esteem in academic circles as some of his
contemporaries. I'm fascinated as to why that is. My view is that his reluctance to align himself,
not just literary movements, but Dylan Thomas is a Welsh poet and is in many ways one of Wales's
greatest ever writers. And yet he was quite dismissive of quite a lot of Welsh issues,
and particularly the idea of Welsh nationalism. He was very caustic in his view of what
Welsh nationalism represented and his views on whether or not he thought it was a good idea.
And that makes it harder to view him in the Welsh context, because yes, he is a great poet
from Wales, but whether or not you have to align yourself with certain national values
in order to be considered a great poet of the nation, not merely from the nation, is another
question. And I'm fascinated about him as an individual, his utter reluctance.
to be pigeonholed, his refusal to be viewed in this light or the other, on the one hand,
really helps him in individual poems, but possibly hinders him when you view his legacy as a whole.
But what do you think about that, my?
I think that's a really interesting take, actually, Joe.
And I hadn't really considered the broader impact of that refusal.
But I think you're right.
When I think about Thomas, I don't necessarily think about Thomas.
I think about a very particular era in his life.
I feel like there was three very distinct sections.
to Thomas's life, one being his young life, his popularity, and then his kind of quiet end
in a weird sort of sense. There is a real sense that you can take his best years and almost
sort of package them up. And that is the perfect Thomas that is put out to the public.
As you mentioned, he was incredibly well known, especially in the US, for touring his poems.
He was well renowned for being pioneer of reigniting the spark of oral poetry and performance.
That is why he is so well-loved, especially in the US.
But in the UK, I think there's always been a little bit controversial.
But I think in the UK, especially when it comes to poetry, there's a little bit more reverence for rules and form, to be honest.
I think there's a lot of poets that are part of our canon that are famous because of how they write as a manifesto, for example,
exactly like you said, with T.S. Eliot's The Wasteland.
It is this incredibly dense long poem that is written to say something.
something to make a point. And I think because Thomas doesn't necessarily conform in society,
even though we see incredible examples like Do Not Go Gentle, where he has this real tension
when it comes to exploring form. Using a Villanelle is quite literally one of the hardest poems to
write. I have tried to do it and it is so tough. There's just not the same reverence for him in the
UK and I do wonder where that comes from, but I think you did an excellent explainer of potentially
the reasons why.
Now, by happy coincidence, our 25th episode of Beyond the Verse, which we did on Sylvia Platt's poetry,
also coincided with the day in which we analysed our 5,000th poem on Permanalysis.com.
Yes, 5,000 poems.
So what I would suggest to any listeners who want to explore more about poetry who are enjoying the podcast is go to Permanalysis.com,
sign up for a poetry plus membership, which will give you.
access to all of the materials that accompany those 5,000 analyzed poems.
We've talked about this in previous episodes of the podcast, but just to quickly run through
some of the member benefit.
We have a weekly newsletter written by yours truly, in which we go through key poetic news,
book recommendations, and much more.
We have bespoke resources available to poetry plus members, including a PDF learning library
on which has more than 300 PDFs on kind of elements of poetry, including individual poets,
form, symbols and imagery within poetry, and lots more.
mention the fact that you can access tons of bonus materials that are on those articles
I mentioned, more than 5,000 articles on different poems that are exclusively available to
poetry plus members. For those of you who are enjoying the podcast and can't wait for us to get
to 5,000 episodes, you can go and read about 5,000 poems right now at pomeanalysis.com.
So just to continue the conversation we were having before the break, I'm really interested in the
opening lines of some of these stanzas. Because you mentioned earlier on,
standard two begins with though wise men. And the following three standards we get references
to good men in stanza three, wild men in stanza four, and grave men in stanza five.
And Thomas is exploring about how all of these men react differently to their ends,
to impending death. And I just wonder, why do you think he structures it in this way? Why these
different archetypal male figures, wise, grave, etc. What is he trying to say about the universality of
death and the way that different kinds of people meet it?
It's a really great question, Joe.
I think it's that first point you mentioned about the universality piece.
I think that is really at the core of this poem because, of course, as you mentioned, on a
first reading, we don't understand who the intended recipient of this poem really is.
The poem is made up of, let's not forget, commands.
Do not go.
Rage against.
I personally believe the reason we don't find out who the recipient of this poem is until
the very end, is because Thomas wants to focus on the universality.
As you noted in the first part of this podcast, death is a universal experience for every
single person on this earth, whether it's close family or friends.
You know, the old saying is one of the only sure things in life is death.
And I think using these very different archetypal male figures is a really interesting
choice from Thomas because, of course, as we mentioned in that second stanza, you look at
a wise man who feels as if they've had no real moment of inspiration or no legacy to,
leave behind. I think the reason that Thomas uses these very different but very archetypal male
figures is, again, to show this universality, but also to really demonstrate that no matter
what type of person you are, there's never going to be an absolutely perfect way to pass on.
The wise men don't think that they had enough inspiration. They don't feel like they left enough
of a legacy. The good men in this poem feel as if all of the good deeds they've done in their
life are frail. The wild men sought to be wilder. They didn't think that they'd done enough.
And the grave men are given blinding sight. They are given foresight. They are given clarity.
And yet it still doesn't feel like enough. There is absolutely no fulfillment in any of these
lines. And I think, as we mentioned earlier, the form helps that. Because we have tersets,
yes, we have the rhyme of right a night, bright and light, flight a night. But there really doesn't
seem to be this sense of completion because we immediately move on to the next.
stanza, all of these people, all of these subjects in the poem are left wanting. And personally,
I find one of the more enduringly powerful parts of this poem is that living or dead or on the brink
of serious illness, there is always a wanting. There's always more to be had. And I think what I find
at the end of the poem and what I take from Thomas's writing is that regardless of the wanting,
regardless of the desire that's left at the end, you have to come to peace with it. Because you'll never
going to do enough. You're never going to do everything you set out to accomplish. You are going to be
driving for more, driving for better, and that's just life. You can do the most amazing thing and
potentially still feel like there was more to be done. That doesn't negate your success. That doesn't
mean that your life has no worth, if anything. It's the wanting that makes it worth it. It's the wanting
that drives you to be more, to do more, to be better. And I love that after all of these generalizations,
the wise men, the good men, the wild men, the grave men, you're left with his father,
who has the ability to both curse and bless Thomas, who is, after all of these slightly more
abstracted ideas, becomes a really concrete piece of this poem, becomes a figure to really
tether the reader to, but that's what I think, and I'd love to know your thoughts.
I'm enthralled listening to that. It was really wonderful. Thank you, Maya.
There's so much to say. Let me try and distill these thoughts. I think the first thing that
reminds you of is what you mentioned earlier on and what we've been saying really the whole
episode, which is the fact that this is the fate for us all. Wise, grave, good, bad, ugly, handsome.
We all die. I'm cool to mind of that line. I think it's from Hamlet, how a king may go a progress
through the guts of a beggar, the idea that regardless of your earthly qualities, the earth is
the ultimate destination. The next thing I want to talk about with these different descriptions of
the men is, again, that word ambiguity. Because you're right, we get these different versions
of men and what men are, there are good men, they're great men, etc. And then we get the father
and there is a real sense of ambiguity about which of these categories does this person fall into,
which of them, if any, are appropriate to describe the narrator's father. And the poem doesn't
give us a clear-cut answer of that. And maybe that's Thomas kind of playing with this notion
of distilling people into these categories anyway. And this really strikes at the core of something
I find about this poem that really interests me. And it's not something I noticed on first reading.
I first read this poem years ago, and it was only really in preparation for this episode that I started thinking about this, which is that we all have a tendency when people die to try to distill them, to try and characterize them, to try and capture something of their essence.
I mean, anybody who's ever attended a funeral knows that when people talk about their loved one, their friend, their family member who's passed away, they tend to talk about them as this kind of permanent enshrined thing.
This is what the story of their life added up to.
they were kind, they were generous.
Those things cease to become things that person did
and they become who that person was.
And I think that this poem really captures something of our human tendency
to oversimplify, to distill.
The men in this poem are not doing things wisely or gravely
or in a kind or generous manner.
Those are adjectives.
They become who those people were,
not simply how they conducted themselves.
And for me, the ultimate clue that this is the kind of tendency that Thomas is exploring is in that title and that opening line, that refrain. Do not go gentle into that good night. No mention of do not go gently. Because of course, in most uses of language, that would be an adverb, not an adjective. Going is something you do gently. It's not something you are. And yet I think there's something about that sliding doors moment of life and death where the actions that we form in life become the people.
we were when we were alive and the way we did those actions become something innate about our
personhood. And I find that ability that Thomas has to shine a light on something that we all do.
We're all guilty of doing this. I mean, read any obituary for any famous person or any
funeral that you've ever attended for anyone that you knew personally. We all have a tendency
to stamp characteristics onto people's lives rather than acknowledge that during life we're capable
of behaving both wisely and stupidly or kindly and unkindly. And ultimately, our multifaceted nature
kind of gets flattened out when we view an entire life.
And I think it's so impressive to me that Thomas is able to do that without making it the kind of overarching point of the poem.
He just includes it as part of that process we all undergo when somebody is dying.
And for me, that speaks to the authenticity that lies beneath the clarity of this poem.
That was really well put, Joe.
Thank you.
I also think maybe remiss of us to not address this in the first instance.
but the difference between gently and gentle makes all of the difference in this poem.
On reflection, this is a poem written not for people who have reached old age and are ready to pass on,
who have felt that they have lived their life.
It is a poem for the young people they leave behind.
It's full of youth and vitality and rage and power and strength.
But here, where gentle is a descriptor, where it's an adjective used to describe the person who is passing,
It suggests that they are at peace with this moment.
They are ready to go gentle.
They are simply that, as you mentioned,
they are distilled down into this slight gentleness, this peace, this relative happiness.
You know, gentle is not a descriptor that is weak.
As you said, to distill a whole person down into one singular descriptor is a human tendency,
but also very powerful when you think about it.
There is so much to be said for the fact that,
This poem can also be framed in the view of war.
There were so many young men going to war to fight with rage and hatred and anger and frustration
and all of these more negative or fierce emotions in this final stanza, your fierce tears.
Everything comes from this very strong rooted emotion, but to contrast it to a man who is at the end of his life,
who has lived his life as he sees fit, who is ready to pass on.
And again, we see this in the difference, the sad height that the father stands on.
I almost see this as a pedestal moment.
The younger son is looking up at his father and saying there is so much growth to be had
between the person that I am now and the person that I might be at the end.
And maybe the reason that Thomas is unwilling or not ready to accept the father's passing
is because he doesn't have the experience of life.
He doesn't have the experience of living through what his father has lived through.
So gentle is such a quietly powerful word in this poem that I think remiss of us perhaps not to have mentioned it in the first instance.
But when we think about that central tension, the relationship between the father and the son and the difference between being gentle and being fierce, where does that situate the reader in all of this?
What are we left with at the close of the poem?
Well, for me, this is testament to the poem's ability to do this.
For me, it depends on where the reader themselves are.
It's on the table, speaking as a 27-year-old person, so I don't think I account.
us in old age just yet. But I imagine that reading this poem as an older person, it's possible
to take kind of a level of inspiration from it, this idea that yes, I will push on, yes, I will
reject the oncoming kind of frailty that we associate with old age. But I could also imagine
an elderly person saying, hang on a minute, someone in their 30s wrote this poem. What the hell
do they know about growing old? And likewise, I can imagine somebody who is in sort of the
position of the narrator where it's their parent or their grandparents that is growing old
but perhaps imminently about to die.
And I can imagine that person really feeling the passion that Thomas is expressing here,
really feeling that, no, you must push on.
You have a responsibility to push on.
You have an imperative to push on,
even if that feeling is ultimately a selfish one,
because whether or not the narrator wants the father to push on for their father's sake
or actually because they don't want to confront their father's death themselves
is another question.
But I can equally imagine somebody feeling really perturbed by this poem
because we don't want to think of our loved ones, parents, grandparents,
in their final moments as being fighting or as being rageful.
We like to think of them at peace.
But again, who is that feeling for?
Is that because we want them to be at peace or we are comforted by the fact we tell
ourselves they were at peace?
So the brilliance of the poem is I think you can have people from different walks of life,
people of different ages, people who have vastly different outlooks on the world,
who can all take something from this poem, whether it's embodying the spirit of the
perm or whether it's defining yourself in opposition to the spirit of this poem.
And that, for me, is really powerful.
But I've got a question for you, Mike.
How important is it for this poem, but also for Thomas more generally, that he didn't get to reach old age?
He died at 39, as you've mentioned.
And given this poem and others of his are so concerned with mortality and death and old age, what does that say about the poetry?
And do you think it changes the way the poetry is perceived?
In short, yes, I think it absolutely changes the way that his poems are perceived.
I think the circumstances of his death also changed things.
You know, because Thomas didn't pass of old age or unavoidable health problems, it was very much
lifestyle driven, we tend to have a very different perspective of who he was as a poet and a person.
In our Sylvia Plath episode, we talked about how the myth of Plath is centred around the fact that
she had this almost continuous drive towards death. It was very intentional. It was purposeful.
That in itself creates a story behind many of her poems that concern death. I hesitate to say it,
But because Thomas was writing about death without the intention of death, without actively seeking it,
or even reaching the end of his life and looking back on his many years,
it almost has a slightly looser framework to me.
I don't think it has the same impact as it does when you have a line such as in Plath,
where she says that she's the dew that flies suicidal.
You almost remove an element of the power from the poem.
I think actually where you draw power from in poems like,
do not go gentle into that good night, is from, as I mentioned before, the fear and the anxiety
surrounding the death of someone else. But you mentioned this poem before, and death shall have no
dominion, is a wonderful poem, but it's concerned about just death as a general concept. And I
personally don't find it has the same moral backing or strength that perhaps some of his later
poems do, just to read a few lines from this poem. With the man in the wind and the west moon,
when their bones are picked clean, the clean bones gone.
They shall have stars at elbow and foot.
Though they go mat, they shall be sane.
Though they sink through the sea, they shall rise again.
Though lovers be lost love shall not.
And death shall have no dominion.
Now, I'd love to know your thoughts on those lines in particular,
but I also do think it's worth noting to listeners today
that just because it can be very easy to overlay the story of a poet's life
with the poetry that they write,
I think if you were to take, do not go gentle into that good night, and apply it to a poet like Plath, for example, who had an objectively more tragic life.
Readers would certainly feel very differently about it.
I think it becomes perhaps more of a mirror to society that we don't necessarily see that as contributing to the poor tortured artist persona that we talk about so often on the podcast.
Because Joe and I were talking about this before the podcast, but it was generally seen that Thomas was not the easiest person to be around, especially based on some.
some of the things that other poets and other people have said about him. But just because of that,
does that mean that we should take less away from his poetry? Does that mean that we shouldn't
have the same reverence or respect for his writing? I don't think so. I think we have to, as you said,
Joe, take a poem at the point of life we're at. The point of poetry is to reflect something about
yourself. You have something to find of yourself in every poem you read. And perhaps as we age and
we grow older, maybe we'll take more from Thomas. Or perhaps as you get past that point at which he
live to, you'll feel slightly differently because 39 is still very young to pass. He certainly had
a successful career. He left a legacy. He left an imprint. But does that mean that we say,
okay, he lived to nearly 40, so enough's enough and he didn't really need any more? I don't
think that's true at all. But what do you think? It's worth remembering, I think, that for people
like myself who are pretty immersed in the literary world, we read a lot, we read widely. We
both studied to master's level of universities. Thomas was somebody that you vaguely have an idea
that you have a handle on. Certainly, I'll just speak for myself. You think, OK, I've read some of the poems I've
seen under Milkwood. There are things that I really admire about his writing. But doing sort of more
research on him for this episode, I'm just so struck by the writer and the status that he could
have occupied had he made different decisions. And just to give some examples of this,
writers don't exist in a vacuum. We've said this so many times. We talked about this for the
First World War episode. We talked about it in the Kipling episode. Writers reflect and embody or challenge
certain elements of their contemporary moment, and that can be in a literary sense, in a cultural sense,
people like Tiers Elliot, who are absolutely at the forefront of redefining what poetry could be.
It can be in a political sense, writers who associate themselves with particular political parties or particular political movements,
whether that's around individual law changes or independence movements, it could be all kinds of things.
Thomas's life seems to be defined by his reluctance to align himself with any single group.
And just to give some examples, Dylan Thomas's work is so rooted for my mind in,
Welsh stories. Under Milkwood, if anyone's not aware, this fabulous play the hero. It's probably
his most famous work alongside this poem. It's all about these Welsh people in this imagined
Welsh town and it's been performed by some of the great Welsh actors of all times. I'm talking
Richard Burton, Sir Anthony Hopkins. I was lucky enough to see Michael Sheen perform in this role.
Great Welsh actors about this great Welsh story. And yet Thomas's reluctance to align himself
with Welsh nationalism and his quite rude comments about it, as my mentioned, he could be quite
a difficult man, mean that it's difficult to view him as a Welsh voice, even though he's from
Wales. Likewise, politically, we know that he was a left-wing figure, and yet his reluctance to
publicly align with any kind of political movement. For example, just to illustrate the point,
just after he wrote this poem in 1947, in 1949, he was invited to visit Prague at the invitation
of the communist Czech government, because they saw that he was this very sympathetic figure
to the left, and he was working on Undermilkwood at the time. But publicly, he wasn't
making grand political statement. So it's difficult to view him in that light. And then we come
to the literary side of things. As regular listeners will know, I love the mythology around different
poetic movements and I'm sure we're going to do an episode later on, some of them in particular.
But a lesser known movement, there was a group known as the New Apocalyptics who came to prominence
in the 1930s and 1940s. And what listeners who aren't aware need to understand is that
kind of the literary landscape is like a great tide. It goes in and goes out. Things come into fashion
and then there's a reaction against them and their reaction against the reaction. People who
enjoyed our T.S. Eliot episode will know that there was this great wave of modernist thinking in the
1920s, around free verse, around intellectualizing poetry. It's an intellectual pursuit reading something
like the wasteland. Thomas's poetry isn't like that at all. It's much more vivid. It's much more about
feeling immersed in the emotion of a particular poem. And that was very much aligned with these
new apocalyptic poets who were reacting against the kind of intellectualization of poetry that's
associated with T.S. Eliot. Now, these poets in that movement wanted Thomas to come on board. They
wanted him to be a part of the movement. And he said no, even though they were people that
broadly speaking, his poetry was aligned with already. And that refusal to nail your colours
to the mast of any particular movement, whether it's political, whether it's national, whether it's
literary, is really fascinating to me. And there was no way I was going to get through an episode
on Dylan Thomas without talking about Bob Dylan, who is listeners will know is my favourite songwriter
and an important literary figure in his own right. And one of the most long-standing theories about
where Bob Dylan chose his name is that he based it off of Dylan Thomas. And I think
the parallels between the two in their private lives is so interesting because it is about that
refusal to be pigeonhole, the refusal to let people tell you what your work is about. And again,
on the new apocalyptic, I think this is a fascinating comparison, the things that the new
apocalyptic movement believed about poetry were very similar to the things that were being
expressed in Dylan Thomas's poetry. It was not to have been a stretch for him to align himself with that.
And just to take Bob Dylan in the 1960s as an example of this, he was writing these incredible
protest songs and yet never acknowledge that's what they were refuses to this day to call them
protest songs. And anyone who's seen the recent Timothy Chalamay biopic will know about his character
and his reluctance to align himself with a particular movement or a particular group, whether it's
the folk musicians or whether it's the protest singers. And I think that you can really
map Dylan Thomas's life by looking at the groups that he was reluctant to be a part of.
I hesitate to say it, but I almost think that perhaps even the debate we're having here today,
were Dylan Thomas alive to listen, he'd probably be quite glad that people still to this day
can't pigeonhole him. They can't put him into something. I almost like to think that had he been
approached for awards and being part of wider anthologies, he potentially would have rejected those
too. So actually his position may have been one that was in many ways intentional, created not to be
this huge literary figure, but also not to just fade away into the distance either. I completely agree
with that my own. I think it's worth just finishing off this episode by saying that the things I've
mentioned about these broader movements, they help subsequent readers and academics get a sense
of where this person sits. What I think Dylan Thomas would be really heartened by, and I'm sure
he was at the time, is the fact that if you look at individual writers who admire Dylan Thomas, you
briefly do away with movements and beliefs and political views, the sheer number of people who were
influenced by him. And I've mentioned Bob Dylan, we've got a Nobel Prize winner right there. Sylvia
Plath, you've done an episode on her already, an enormous fan, waited an entire day outside his hotel to meet Dylan Thomas. At the time Dylan Thomas died in New York in hospital after falling ill at the Chelsea Hotel, this home of great writers for decades. John Berryman, the poet was with him when he died. There were stories of him having lunch with Louis McNeice. He exchanged letters with T.S. Eliot. As a poet, he had this kind of gravitational pull for other artists. And I think sometimes that does get lost in the story of Dylan Thomas. We do make the mistake. We do make the mistake.
of thinking that other poets weren't as engaged with his work as they were, perhaps because of
his kind of very individual path that he elected to take. So I hope listeners enjoyed that
episode. I had a brilliant time discussing that with you, Mya. That was really fascinating.
And as always, if listeners want to learn more about Dylan Thomas or other poets on the site,
go to permanentances.com now and sign up for a Poetful Plus membership. I would also just
once again do a plug. Just before we go, a big thank you to everybody who's been listening to
the podcast. You've now downloaded it nearly 40,000 times at the time.
of recording, which we are really delighted by. We want to keep hearing from you. If there are
episodes you'd like us to do, if you have comments, questions, please do get in touch. Remember
to like and rate the podcast wherever you get yours and recommend it to friends and family
so we can keep making the podcast for you because we really enjoy doing it. Now, Maya, next week,
we are going to be discussing Ode to a Nightingale by John Keat, and I cannot wait for that
conversation. But until then, it's goodbye from me. And goodbye from me and the whole team at
Poe Analysis and Poetry Plus.
Thank you.
Thank you.