Beyond the Verse - 'Because I Could Not Stop For Death': Emily Dickinson's Mediation on Mortality
Episode Date: November 28, 2024In this week’s episode of Beyond the Verse, the official podcast of PoemAnalysis.com and Poetry+, hosts Joe and Maiya delve into the hauntingly serene world of Emily Dickinson with a close reading a...nd analysis of her iconic poem, ‘Because I Could Not Stop for Death.’ They analyze Dickinson’s portrayal of death as a kind companion, exploring themes of immortality, religious context, and classical allusions, particularly the comparison to Charon, the ferryman of Greek mythology. The discussion highlights Dickinson's unique position in the literary canon, her secluded life, and how her personal experiences and religious influences shaped her contemplative writing style.The hosts also address the challenges of interpreting her work, given the posthumous publication of many of her poems, emphasizing her significant impact on American poetry despite her reclusive life. Additionally, they touch on the broader implications of analyzing posthumously published works, comparing Dickinson's isolated genius to contemporaries like Walt Whitman and Robert Frost, and exploring how her intimate, introspective voice has defined her lasting literary legacy.Poetry+ users can access exclusive PDFs of ‘Because I Could Not Stop for Death’:Full PDF GuidePDF Snapshot GuidePrintable Poem PDFwith Rhyme Schemewith Meter Syllableswith both Rhyme and MeterFor more on Emily Dickinson’s poetry, visit PoemAnalysis.com, where you can also explore extensive resources in our PDF Learning Library, browse hundreds of analyzed poems, and much more – see our Emily Dickinson PDF Guide.Tune in and discover:The gentle yet radical portrayal of death as a companionDickinson’s blending of Christian and pagan influencesThe power of meter to evoke a hymn-like quSend us a textSupport the showAs always, for the ultimate poetry experience, join Poetry+ and explore all things poetry at PoemAnalysis.com.
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Because I could not stop for death, he kindly stopped for me.
The carriage held but just ourselves an immortality.
We slowly drove, he knew no haste, and I had put away my labour and my leisure too for his civility.
We passed the school where children strove at recess in the ring.
we passed the fields of gazing grain, we passed the setting sun, or rather he passed us.
The Jews drew quivering and chill, for only gossamer, my gown, my tippet only tool.
We paused before a house that seemed a swelling of the ground.
The roof was scarcely visible, the cornice in the ground.
Since then, tis centuries, and yet feel shorter than the day, I first surmised the horse's heads were towards eternity.
Welcome to Beyond the Verse, a poetry podcast brought to you by the team at Permanalysis.com and Poetry Plus.
Thank you so much for that reading, Maya, of today's poem, because I could not stop for death by Emily Dickinson.
We're going to be discussing a range of themes today, including Dickinson's portrayal of death,
the influence of religious thought on her work, and her unique position in literary history.
But, Maya, before we talk about the poem itself, me he tells us a little bit more about Dickinson as a poet and her position in 19th century life.
Of course. So Dickinson actually occupies a really singular position in the literary canon.
She was born in 1830 in Massachusetts and died in 1886.
Now, for the majority of her life, she was actually a recluse.
What we know about Dickinson is mediated mostly through letters that she wrote to friends and confidence.
She actually spent the majority of her time from what we understand in her room.
Now, the reason this is interesting is because we talk a lot of.
lot on this podcast about how the influence of other poets, the influence of being part of a
movement can massively impact the poetry you write. And I think it's safe to say that Dickinson's
poetry is unlike any other. It truly is singular in the sense that from what we can gather,
she really had nobody proofreading, editing her work, nobody to hugely influence or impact
her style either. Now, in terms of background, she was very well educated. She came from a fairly
affluent family. Her father was a prominent lawyer and congressman. She was relatively close to her
brother and sister, Lavinia, who would be the one to discover most of her work after her death.
Now, during her lifetime, she had, I believe it was 10 poems published and one letter. After her death,
over 1,800 were discovered.
Now, this is where we get the bulk of her work.
So, Joe, with this poem, can you tell us a little bit more about it?
Well, I think I'd like to begin with the way in which death itself is portrayed
because it's one of the things about this poem that has really stood the test of time,
this very powerful and unique portrayal of death.
So just to reiterate those first two lines of the poem,
because I could not stop for death, he kindly stopped for me.
And the decision to personify death, to give death agents,
see in this poem is really, really interesting because despite the fact that Dickinson is, of course,
writing in a very Christian context, this harked back to kind of pre-Christian ideas about what death is
and how death acts within the world. So I know, Maya, that you're as interested as I am about
sort of classical retellings and classical illusions in poetry. We talk about this a lot on the podcast,
and this to me really calls back to those kind of ancient Greek portrayals of death, whether it's
through the god tantalus, the god of death,
or whether it's through the figure of Karin, the ferryman.
And given, of course, the fact that death in Dickinson's poem
is driving a carriage, is taking somebody somewhere,
that relationship with Karen, the ferryman,
who takes souls across the river Styx after they die,
I think is a really strong connection.
I mean, what do you think about that?
Can you tell us a little bit more about the way in which Karin is evoked in this poem,
you know, what your views on the presentation of death are?
I think the point that you raise about Christian theology
is one that is very much worth exploring with these two lines in particular.
Because in Christian theology, you have the opposing figures of God and the devil, right?
These two figures that are really strongly juxtaposed throughout the whole biblical text.
Now, what this serves to do in the Bible is to create a really strong feeling of what is good and what is not.
You have good and evil as to opposing forces, right?
In the modern consciousness, death is so often conflated with the latter.
It is something that is portrayed negatively.
It is scary.
It is used as something that is quite dark and looming.
This poem doesn't do that.
From the outset, death is given kindness.
Death is given gentleness.
I love that Dickinson is able to take something
that could instill fear in so many people.
and transmute it into something that is soft and sweet in a way, you know, death being personified in a way that he stops the carriage.
I mean, this is very little.
He stops the carriage to allow her to board because she is unable to.
It offers her friendship from him.
It offers her a companion.
And for someone who, and again, this is something we touch on, a lot in this podcast is how much should context impact your reception of a poem?
but for a poet that was so often alone,
writing this poem, most likely alone in her room,
not looking to get it published anywhere,
to write something that is so kind to a companion
that is so often deemed as something negative,
is really telling of, I think, her world outlook, really.
I think that image of the fairy man,
that image of someone who is simply doing a job
and not creating an end,
is one that is critical to the reception of this poem.
And I really love the fact that in this poem, when we explore death,
death as a companion figure, offers a lot more gentleness and kindness.
Death in so many ways represents an end, at least in many Western religions.
Despite having some form of an afterlife, it is a passing on.
For Dickinson in this poem, death becomes that pherom and becomes that companion
to hand her over to a life of immortality.
When you look at the Christian narrative, there very much is a black and white, good and evil split.
Now, this is something Emily Dickinson doesn't lean into, which is so interesting about the way she writes,
is that she really exists in the grey area.
And I just love how soft and subtle this is portrayed.
It is not this huge change.
It is as simple as getting into a carriage to take a journey.
There's a lot more balance there.
But what do you think, Joe?
I mean, I love that point.
And I think it's really important just to get the nuances of kind of Dickinson's religious
background here. So the world in which Dickinson lived in was a religious world, but it was a
Protestant world. So what that means in terms of that lack of middle ground is if you come from
the Catholic tradition, you at least have the kind of existence of what we call purgatory,
which is that kind of middle ground where you are not immediately granted access to heaven,
but nor have you done anything particularly terrible to send you to hell.
Protestant tradition doesn't have purgatory. So it is very binary. You are either
a good enough person to enter heaven, or you are a bad enough person to justify being punished
in hell. And what Dickinson refuses to do is accept that binary. And I think we get that strongly
evoked if I could actually just jump to the final standard of the poem, because there was a specific
mention of the word centuries. That tendency to measure things in spans of 100 years, I actually
think it's really significant because again, it calls back to the figure of Karin. And if we can just
briefly go back to the ancient world, so the story goes, souls that had the proper funeral rights
could be granted access across the river sticks.
And again, it's important for us to note that that is not the moment of judgment.
Judgment occurs once the soul has crossed the river sticks.
You can still be punished, rewarded, or sort of just accepted in the underworld.
This is just about getting there.
But crucially, what the stories tell us is that souls that did not have the proper funeral right
have to wait on the shores of the river sticks for a century, for 100 years before
Karin will agree to take them on.
So there is that sense of this kind of.
limbo space that is almost a prejudgment. There's no sense in this poem of the speaker being
taken, presumably having died, otherwise death wouldn't have come for her. But there is no sense
that they've been judged or that judgment is imminent. There is a feeling of deferral when it comes
to the judgment. And I think that's one of the things about the poem that I find so enduringly
fascinating because she's writing against that religious context with kind of great subtlety
while calling back to the classical world. One of the things that makes a poem more complex is actually
the way the poem itself resembles some Christian work. So the poem is written, like many of
Dickinson's poetry in Common Meter, which for those who aren't to wear means the lines alternate
between being written in niambic tetrameter and niambic trimeter. Now that's significant because
lots of hymns and religious songs also are written in common meter. So just some examples
that many of our listeners will be aware of. The Christmas Carol O'Little Town of Bethlehem
and the hymn Amazing Grace are both written in common meter. So despite the fact that Dickinson,
is taking a really kind of ambivalent look at the Christian world
by deliberately situating her poem in kind of pre-Christian pagan context.
She is also kind of alluding to that world.
She is almost presenting the poem as though it were some kind of religious hymn.
And I find the balance of those two things to be one of the really subtly powerful things about this poem.
And again, intention is one of the things I'm sure we'll discuss later on, Joe.
But to look at this a little bit broader for a second,
These poems, and this poem in particular, was not published by her.
She was highly likely writing this at home, inspired by the things she was listening to,
using the inspiration around her, particularly in her town, as a jumping off point to write these poems.
In 1845 in Amherst, Massachusetts, there was actually a religious revival where lots of people within the town reaffirmed their faith.
So Christianity was very much on the rise.
It was a bit of a national trend at this point.
looking at a poet who was writing within that context.
So I love the idea that actually she's kind of internalizing a lot of these religious
overtones and making them something that really speaks to her personally.
Yeah, I think that's a fascinating point.
And I think, again, we can't read Dickinson's poetry without considering the impact of
the biography that you mentioned earlier.
This was somebody who had travelled extremely little.
I mean, she barely left Amherst.
So I think it's really fascinating the way she considers death.
the final journey is through the lens of a physical journey, journeys that she did not take very often.
I mean, of course, she had been in carriages to go to the relatively few public occasions that she did attend.
But this notion of taking a long journey was not something familiar to her.
And I think it's really fascinating that she mediates her views on death through the lens of this physical journey that to her would have felt very unnatural.
And I mean, just to add to that, you know, you mentioned about that sense of delay.
this is a poem that is not in a rush at all.
If I just jump forward to the second stanza,
we slowly drove, he knew no haste.
As I said before, very kind, very gentle,
but also very considerate.
It feels as if her relationship with death
is not one that is fraught by fear.
It is one that is very considerate of her feelings
and how she would want to approach a situation.
A poem like this very much stands in odds to a poem like Dylan Thomas'
do not go gentle into that good night,
which is really quite angry and averse to that final moment,
whereas for Dickinson here, it feels like this, yes, is a journey,
but it doesn't necessarily have an end point.
She says that the horse's heads were towards eternity
and that the carriage held immortality.
Both of these aren't final destinations.
They are endless.
And I really think that helps to slow the poem down.
I'm really glad you mentioned Dylan Thomas's poem because I think it's a fascinating
sort of companion piece because when we think about famous poetic portrayals of death
and the final moments before it, these two poems are often sort of raised in those conversations
and I think it's really interesting because Dickinson's poem has a real sense of gentleness,
a real sense of calmness and acceptance that perhaps stands in opposition to a poem like that.
And I think her ability to mediate really strong intense emotions through the gentle
of language is one of the things that makes the poem so enduringly powerful. Because, I mean,
just to give a brief sense of contact here, one year before that religious revival that Maya
mentioned earlier, Emily Dickinson's beloved cousin passed away very suddenly through illness. And
it's difficult to overstate how much this affected the poet. I mean, she was completely heartbroken.
In fact, she wrote her the letter at the time that, quote, it seemed to me, I should die too
if I could not be permitted to watch over her or even look at her face.
And that kind of very raw, very dramatic outpouring of grief is kind of conspicuous by its absence here.
There is almost a sense that in the years between the death of her cousin in 1844 and the writing of this poem,
Dickinson has been able to kind of work through that.
But there is a really interesting lack of intensity at times.
There is a real lack of urgency not only in regard to the figure of death, who as he mentioned is in
no haste, but also in the speaker,
almost as though they are happy to be taken to this place that they're going
because they know they'll be reunited with a loved one.
And that kind of ambivalence, that acceptance, is really fascinating,
especially when one considers the way in which death is ordinarily portrayed
as this great climactic moment in poetry and art more generally.
Let's not forget as well that this poem is framed in such a unique way.
It actually tracks not just the passing of a day,
also tracks a full life.
As you follow through the stanzas, you first meet a school where children are at recess,
and then we end with what is often construed to be a grave in the ground.
Now, there's two points that I think are really worth dwelling on.
One is that sense of scale of time, but two is the fact that when this poem ends,
the sun is setting, but it has not set yet.
So, Joe, would you like to tell us a little bit more about what this represents?
Yeah, I'd love to, and it's really fascinating.
of a lot of layers to Dickinson's portrayal of the sun, because obviously on the one hand,
we use the passing of the sun as a really easily measurable example of the passage of time,
right? The passing of the sun, it rises, it falls, and thus a day takes place. And yet we can
also view that 24-hour cycle as a metaphor for an entire life, right? The rising, peaking and
setting of the sun is often used as a metaphor to represent an entire lifespan of 60, 70, 80, 100 years.
what I find particularly fascinating about this poem
is it doesn't really offer a clear sense
of which of those interpretations Dickinson favours.
In fact, of course, it could be both
because every time a day passes for all of us,
for some people, that is their first day, for others,
it is a midpoint of their lives and for others.
It is the last time.
So that kind of concurrent symbolism, I think, is really interesting.
But the thing I think I would really like to focus on
and it's between those two stanzas
is the third stanza concludes
we passed the setting sun,
but the following stanza begins, or rather he passed us.
So there's a few things to unpick there.
One, it's another example of personification.
The sun now is being personified.
So this relationship between individual people
and kind of abstract elements of the natural world, death, the sun.
The whole poem is imbued with personality,
imbued with agency.
But the thing I'm really interested in that is,
this notion of who is passing who.
Because, of course, the notion of we pass the sun
implies that we kind of existed beyond it. We were able to outlast it. We were able to
go beyond the light of the sun. But it also implies movement, and we know that Dickinson's
figure is in a carriage. There is a sense there of progression. When we get that line he passed
us, suddenly the focus shifts. And it's much more likely that the speaker is therefore in a
stationary position, because the significance of claiming that the sun past us implies the speaker
is now stationary. And as Maya mentioned, it very quickly becomes clear that actually they are
stationary because they have reached the destination. I'm careful not to use the word final destination,
because as we said, the poem sort of goes back and forth on where that destination might be,
but we have reached this coffin. We have reached the place of burial. And after that, of course,
it is the sun that will move by and you will appear stationary. And I think the way in which he
uses that symbol to concurrently represent a very brief amount of time in 24 hours, an enormous
amount of time in a life, but also the way that they continue uses it to represent the stillness
that awaits them when they are buried, that kind of stationary permanence that awaits us all
is absolutely fascinating to me. And tense is so important here, because as you enter this poem,
you're introduced to something that you believe from the outset is in really the immediate
past, because I could not stop for death, he kindly stopped for me. You feel as if she's relating
this story to you, perhaps as you sit in the carriage with.
her, as she's just disembarked maybe. However, that final stanza changes everything.
Dickinson has told a beautiful story about this passing of time, and in that first line of the
lastanza, since then, tis centuries. She completely overturns a reader's sense of time and
scale by telling you that the speaker is relating a story from centuries before. And what an
incredible way to, as we often say, wrong foot your reader, you really enter this poem with
the assumption that perhaps the speaker, yes, though they are poster, that it is maybe an
experience they have just had. The carriage ride, the freshness of those memories, seems so
clear to be a short-term memory. And yet finding out at the end of this poem that the speaker
is actually retelling a memory that has been centuries old. I think when an average reader,
approaches this poem, it's very, it's not beyond the scope of belief, at least with a slightly
westernised view of religion. It's very easy to listen to a tale like this, especially one that
recounts a journey, even if it is after death, to still find the humanity in the speaker. You know,
we have a very strange conception of what is ghostly and monstrous, slightly removed from the
real world, especially when you talk about, you know, people that have been dead for centuries.
In this instance, you spend the majority of this poem believing that the speaker is someone
who is just past that point of humanity. They have just tipped over the edge. They have just passed
away. And yet right at the end when you find out they have been dead for centuries,
for me, entirely flips it on its head because you have been sympathizing, and especially in a Christian
context, you've been sympathizing with someone who has been dead for centuries. Now, what I think
this primarily plays into is she had experienced grief in a strong, strong way. The passing of her
cousin impacted her for life. So when she says tis centuries and yet feel shorter than the day,
yes, that can be a commentary on the journey that she is envisioning, but it's also a commentary on grief
and how long that can last. Though you can love someone and cherish them, the grief that you
endure, whether it's a month, a year, 10 years, a hundred years, the love and the grief
that you endure doesn't go away.
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So before the break,
we touched on the importance of time within this poem.
Now, I would like,
to extrapolate this a little bit because we know so little about Emily Dickinson's
literary process. She actually wrote over 1,800 poems in her lifetime. Now for a poem like
because I could not stop for death that is so considered in its approach, it really sits at odds to
the sort of writer that we assume her to be someone who could barely contain her words so much
so that she had to write them on a page almost all day every day. Now it asks a very interesting
question of our analysis of Emily Dickinson because we still don't know whether her
intention was to publish these poems. We're very lucky to have the wealth of poems that we do.
However, we don't know whether these are final drafts, first drafts. We don't know whether
perhaps these were her personal diaries. So, Joe, I have a slightly complicated question to ask
you, but how much do you think our analysis can be, you know, correct or even right in
addressing some of the things we explore within a poem like this?
Wow. Well, I mean, it is a very big question. And again, if you'll allow me just to sort of flesh out my answer before I give it, I think it's important for listeners to note that Dickinson is far from the only poet about whom we've discovered more things after their death, right? I mean, almost every major writer of note leaves behind unpublished material, notes, letters that offer some kind of insight into their process. But for Dickinson to have virtually the entirety of her literary reputation to be.
developed after her death is very, very unusual. As Maya mentioned earlier on, 10 poems and one letter
published during her lifetime. So we're looking at a fraction of the overall work. And I think
Dickinson is so unique insofar as she almost feels like a figure from a thousand years ago
because of those gaps, because of that ignorance that we have as kind of academic scholars and readers
about her work. I mean, 1830 to 1886, as my mention, was her lifespan. That is not really that
old. I mean, it might seem old to us in terms of an individual lifespan, but in terms of literary
studies, I mean, we study people from thousands of years ago about who we know very little
and knowing very little about those people as kind of assumed. When you compare Dickinson to
some of her contemporaries, we know so much more about their process. We know so much more about
them as figures because they were publishing during their lives and there was kind of a public
need to record and investigate. I think it does really affect the way we talk about her as a poet.
I think not only is her lack of published work during her lifetime and influence, but also
her seclusion, because what that allows us to do is cast the net much wider when it comes
to her influences, because ultimately she didn't have a great many real life experiences on
which to draw. She was very reclusive. She didn't go out a lot. She never saw the sea, for example,
despite the fact that some of her poetic descriptions of the sea are really, really moving and
really unique. And I think
ordinarily, I mean, Maya and I have talked in
previous episodes of Beyond the Verse about the
importance of the people
with which poets are interacting. We talked
about Kamala Das and her family members.
We talked about the significance of different literary
movements and the importance of being
in the environment surrounded by your peers.
With Dickinson, we have to kind of
redefine the parameters of what influence looks like.
So I think you have to
approach a poet about whom we know less
than we would like with a certain degree
humility when it comes to making assertions about their work. But also I think you have to think
outside the box a little bit more in terms of where they got their influences from. Who were they
bouncing ideas off? Because she wasn't in the cafes. She wasn't in the publisher's houses.
She wasn't talking to fellow poets in the same way that we associate with other great writers
of her era or other eras. And I think it does require a different kind of interpretation. But what do you
think? I think you're absolutely right. However, you know, as a
a slight contrast to that. I think when we have as much of Dickinson's work as we do, we can see that
she is a very fully fleshed out writer. You know, aside from not having many poetic influences,
aside from maybe not having someone to edit and revise her work in terms of a publisher,
you can look at her whole body of work and I would highly, highly recommend any listeners to go to
Poemanalysis.com and explore the poems that we have on the site because they are so similar in so many
ways because her tone of voice, you can't compare it to anyone else's. I think, you know,
you and I, Joe obviously love literature. We love poetry. So if a Dickinson poem was placed in front
of us, we'd probably be able to point it out. She is someone that has clearly, aside from not
publishing, refined her voice. So I think when it comes to tonality and exploring recurrent
themes and things like that, we very much have a right as explorers of her work to make certain
assumptions because she makes it evidently clear throughout the work. My question is really
more so, how accurate can we be when we have immeasurable access that we potentially weren't meant
to have? I think it's really interesting and I think it opens up a real sort of Pandora's box
about how much authorial intention matters more broadly, I suppose. I mean, I suggest you go and
check out the episode of Beyond the Verse we did on William Words to Us, I wondered lonely as a cloud
because we talked a lot about him and he's a really interesting counter example as somebody who was
very much a collaborative poet, somebody who worked within a movement. And if we take, for example,
his long poem, the prelude, that was a poem that we know was revised over more than 50 years. We have
multiple editions, revisions, etc. How much that matters from a scholarly position, I think,
if you're just reading as a general reader, perhaps you might want to take the most quote up-to-date
version, the poet's final version. But from a scholarly perspective, I think there is every,
it's every bit as valuable to read the early versions as is to read the final one, because you
might get a sense of kind of the early beginnings of that work. And I think it really depends on
what kind of relationship you want to have to the literature. If you're reading for pleasure,
if you're reading solely to understand the emotions of the poem, then perhaps it doesn't matter
which version you want. Whichever one resonates with you really is the one that's right for you.
I think from a scholarly vantage point, the differences, the gaps between the versions in many ways
is the most interesting thing. Why did this get added and this get taken away? But you are right
with Dickinson that while there is, of course, some evidence about which versions came
first, because obviously often her diaries were noted, there is a real lack of understanding
with regard to what she envisioned as her best work, what she envisioned as the work that
she wanted to see in the world. I mean, something as simple as when poets published collections,
they put poems in a particular order. You know, we don't have that. We don't have a sense
of what kind of sequence we're meant to engage with these poems in. I mean, most of the poems
don't have proper titles. For readers who aren't familiar with them,
it's looking to the poems. Almost every title that you read of a Dickinson poem is actually
just the first line, including this one. Most of her poems also have a numerical title
because we simply don't know. And the way in which you title a poem, the way in which you
order them in a collection, these things change the perception of the poems themselves.
And those are the bits that we really lack with a poet like Dickinson, all of which was
decided by other people. You know, it's so interesting you bring up that point because
obviously there's a certain level where we have a bit of a formula on this podcast. And usually
when we approach a poem, we will start with the title. And that will so often frame our
understanding of what is meant to be important within the poem. Because we don't have that
for Dickinson, it really creates a level of vulnerability that I think makes her work so
powerful and so strong because you feel so much more intimately involved with the content
you're reading. And I think this poem, you know, further strips back that vulnerability. Now,
one of the things Joe and I talked about before recording this episode is actually wanting to owe
a certain level of respect to Dickinson because we didn't want to confuse gentleness
and softness with the fact that she was a female writer.
And one of the things I'd really like to touch on is actually that fourth stanza in this poem.
And I'll just repeat it for listeners.
The Jews drew quivering and chill for only gossamer, my gown, my tippet only tool.
Now, the point I'd like to make here is that sometimes it's very easy to conflate comfort with gentleness or comfort with softness.
Because what this poem does is tell us that the speaker is comfortable with her situation.
And this stanza shows it very clearly because for the benefit of listeners who aren't aware,
gossamer and tool are both luxurious lightweight fabrics.
They are something that doesn't offer much warmth, much protection.
So when you explore something by contrast to the dews quivering, you're introducing cold,
you're introducing a level of discomfort.
But the speaker is so lightly closed and yet doesn't experience that discomfort,
which tells us that she is enduring a sense of warmth, that the atmosphere isn't necessarily providing.
So comfort is something that is really critical in this poem.
And I love the fact that, yes, we can talk about the fact that,
the way in which Dickinson writes is soft and gentle, but it is also very powerful.
It is soft and it is gentle, but it is not a light touch.
It is very intentional.
It's really important that we don't look at this as a kind of soft touch poem.
It's one that is imbued with meaning.
I think that's a fascinating point, and I think to view it alongside the broader conversation
we're having about Dickinson's work, there is a sense of intimacy.
There is a sense of closeness, a sense of vulnerability.
that I think Dickinson's poetry innately has to readers
because there aren't the guardrails that most poets have,
there aren't the titles, there aren't the collections,
there aren't the editing processes that most poets have
to almost protect their work
or to shape the way in which it is perceived.
When you read Dickinson's work,
you do feel like you're getting access to this private world,
and I think that creates the actual experience of reading the poems
becomes a much more intimate and personal process
as a result of that sense of reading kind of an unfiltered, unadulterated version of an artist's work.
It feels innately more personal.
Absolutely.
And one of things Joe and I talks about before this podcast was actually that, you know,
she is often noted as one of the great American poets.
Now, in the literary canon, she stands almost directly next to someone like Walt Whitman, for example.
But one of the things I think is particularly interesting about the relationship between the two of them
is that Whitman was writing these grand poems
aiming to speak on behalf of the whole of America.
He was looking to be that plural American voice.
Now, what Dickinson is doing is almost the exact opposite.
She is solely looking to be a singular personal voice.
And yet her work has become so instrumental
in defining the American voice,
especially as a female poet at the time.
So it's a really fascinating way to explore voice, tone,
an intention in American poetry at the time.
But, I mean, Joe, do you have any thoughts on that?
I think the Whitman example is a really good one.
I think the other example that comes to my mind is another poet that Maya and I've discussed, Robert Frost.
I think viewing her work in relation to other great American poets,
and I think those three are often sort of regarded as being, you know,
sort of on an island of greatness or their own with regard to American poetry.
But to view that solely in retrospect misses the point.
Whitman and Frost knew they were great because,
people told them. Their greatness was assumed during their lifetimes and in fact they continued
to write work under the assumption of their own greatness. Dickinson did not. Dickinson did not
have financially or critically the feedback that this work was going to be regarded as kind
of seminal, as canonical as it has gone on to become. And I think we'll never know how Whitman's
work would have been different had his greatness not been presumed or Frost. I mean Frost won
the Pulitzer Prize, I think four times.
You know, this, when he publishes the fifth collection or the sixth collection,
it is viewed in relation to the success he's had up to that point.
And sometimes that can be a hindrance and sometimes it can be positive.
But I think trying to understand Dickinson, as she would have been writing these
poems at the time is really important to us because of the way in which she has become
so iconic in the years after her death.
It's almost hard to strip back those layers in retrospect.
And remember that this was somebody who had.
I had no idea that her work was going to be as respected as it's gone on to become.
We've just mentioned Whitman and Frost.
We talked about Dylan Thomas earlier.
I think that there is a tendency when you have a writer with so many biographical gaps
or so much kind of blankness in Dickinson's biography.
There is a tendency to kind of fill in the gaps.
And I think the way in which her work can be kind of projected onto the lives of others
and viewing the way in which it intersects with other people is really fascinating.
She feels like a poetic figure that's much older than she was.
I mean, the 19th century is not that long ago, as I mentioned.
I mean, Mara and I did an episode on Sappho's The Anactoria poem a few months ago.
And I think to view her in relation to someone like Sappho can be really helpful
because they almost have kind of an inverse relationship.
So again, for listeners who want to learn more about Sappho,
I suggest they go and check out that episode.
But I'll just quickly summarize.
Sappho was an ancient Greek poet of enormous renown, hugely respected,
you know, held up alongside the likes of Homer as the world's premier poet.
but less than 1%
2% of her work survives to this day
so you have this kind of really
odd relationship as readers
to the greatness of this figure
but the lack of evidence
the lack of poetry
the lack of surviving work
to view that in contrast
as someone like Dickinson
to whom we have
huge amounts of material in terms of raw
poetry but very little
sense of her greatness during her life
very little response of contemporaries
I think is really
fascinating but I mean there are loads of comparisons
that work with Dickinson.
We talked again in the previous episode about William Blake's The Tiger.
Now, William Blake's collection, Songs of Innocence and Experience sold absolutely appallingly
during his lifetime and only really took off after his death.
And I think, you know, those kind of things, the Van Goghs of this world are always going
to interest people because when we have great artists in retrospect, we always struggle
to reconcile the fact that they weren't considered great in their time.
And I mean, I don't know, Maya, are there any other writers or poets that, you know, you
think of when we talk about Dickinson, that you find there are parallels with their
experience? Well, perhaps not another poet, but it does bring me back to what I truly believe is
maybe the central core of this poem, which is Psalm 23 from the Bible. Now, in Psalm 23, we have this
image of walking through the valley with the shadow of death. This passage is one of the few times in the
Bible where death has a physical presence. And yet in the Bible, death is not personified in the
same way that it is in this poem. It is given a certain level of darkness. It is the shadow. It is
something that is slightly more ominous, something that follows, something that overshadows.
In this poem, however, death is given a lightness and a brightness. Even the description of
the setting is the setting sun. The light is still there. Yes, it is going down. Yes, it is
reducing, but they are still in almost the after blow. The speaker and death and this journey are
taking place really in what now I think we would call the golden hour, but the afterglow of
this beautiful sunset. So I think the portrayals are, you know, sensitive to religion, but maybe
not really following at least the broader brushstrokes of it. So Dickinson's portrayal of
death has something that has form and substance is one that I think really sits at odds to that
sort of Protestant Christian mentality that is so popular in her era. It's a really interesting
comparison. And I think the thing that really stands out to me is that that passage, if we
just continue, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I shall fear no evil for
God is with me. Death is something that the speaker requires protection against and comfort
against, whereas in Dickinson's poem, the presence of death is almost a comforting presence
in its own right. And again, we mentioned this earlier, but the way in which she is able to
hold the pagan, the pre-Christian and the Christian in tandem without sort of
of feeling contradictory is one of the great skills of this poem, I think.
And I guess that's the key word of this poem really, isn't it?
It's comfort, because I think we tend to fall into a trap a little bit with Dickinson
in the way that she is quite soft in assuming that that maybe doesn't have many layers,
but actually she takes some really tough images and manages to add so much depth to them.
And the one that is always so powerful for me is that penultimate stanza,
I'm just going to reread it for the benefit of listeners.
We pause before a house that seemed a swelling of the ground.
The roof was scarcely visible, the cornice in the ground.
Now, I mentioned this earlier.
This is often taken to be a grave or a resting place,
but what's really important to me is that she does not use those words.
She doesn't use grave, tomb, coffin,
none of those more negatively associated elements of death.
She uses a house.
Now, for someone that spent so much time in her own house, in her own room, that found comfort in those four walls, I think it's a really beautiful image that her final resting place really mimics the point at which she was most comfortable in her life.
And I say final resting place advisedly because obviously we understand that the speaker in the poem is watching this place and not necessarily there yet.
But the fact that the ground has risen up around this house, that it has become part of it.
of the nature around it, just further adds to that image that Dickinson is trying to portray
that death is natural and it is a journey and it is something to her that she can find comfort in
still. But what do you think, Joe? I agree completely and you mentioned, you know, the word
gentleness and the word comfort and I've used the word subtlety quite a few times in this episode.
And I think oftentimes we miss how radical she can be as a poet. I mean, the insinuation here is that
if the soul never progresses beyond this point, which, you know, let's describe it what
it is, it's a hole in the ground. I mean, she dresses it up in a very comforting way, but
the decision to do so suggests that if the soul never moves beyond this place, that she is
okay with that. And again, I can't stress enough. That might not seem particularly radical
to a kind of a more secular modern readership, but the idea that in a deeply religious context,
that sense of the soul never reaching judgment, never having to,
be sent along these binary lines to either heaven or hell.
And for that to be okay is deeply radical and really quite moving.
I think there is a sense of acceptance, a sense of humility in the face of things that we
can't control and cannot truly know that I think comes across in a really gentle, subtle way,
as I've mentioned, but it is actually deeply powerful.
And Dickinson is one of those poets that is so vastly concerned with interiority.
I mean, I just want to briefly touch on one of her other poems.
One need not be a chamber to be haunted.
Which opens, one need not be a chamber to be haunted, one need not be a house.
The brain has corridors surpassing material place, far safer of a midnight meeting external ghost
than an interior confronting that's whiter host.
I really just find with Emily Dickinson's poems that there is a hugely fleshed out sense of self,
And that is the core of pretty much every poem I read.
She is someone that spends so much time with herself and on herself
that you can start to understand where these common threads come through the poems.
And you can really see that perhaps unlike some of the other poets that we investigate
that revise and edit,
she sees almost the internal workings of her brain as that editing machine.
So I love the idea that maybe these poems are viewed by us as more fully form.
because she has already done the work, but perhaps just not on the page.
Definitely.
I mean, we mentioned earlier about how she's not a poet that existed in conventional artistic circles,
alongside fellow writers in a particular literary movement.
We've spoken in previous episodes about how important those relationships can be for writers,
but Dickinson is a really unique example of somebody who perhaps withdrawn from those circles
without those influences.
We might even regard those influences actually to be disqualmed,
distractions. She creates a more singular, a more coherent, and a more deeply introspective
poetic style that perhaps she wouldn't have done, were she being called in different directions
by different editors and fellow poets. We could talk about that poem and Dickinson's others for
many more hours, I'm sure. But if readers and listeners are not satisfied with that, they can go to
pomeanalysis.com and read literally hundreds Dickinson's poems with brilliant analysis on
the website. Next week, Maya and I are going to be closing out season one.
of Beyond the Verse by talking about Chinoa Achebe's love cycle.
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