Beyond the Verse - Reflecting on the War Years with Siegfried Sassoon (WWI Mini-Series)
Episode Date: February 27, 2025In this episode of Beyond the Verse, the official podcast of PoemAnalysis.com and Poetry+, hosts Joe and Maiya conclude their mini-series on the poets of the First World War with an in-depth explorati...on of Siegfried Sassoon. They discuss his privileged early life, his pre-war poetry as a Georgian Romantic, and his transformation into one of the most outspoken critics of the war. The episode delves into Sassoon’s military service, his wartime bravery, and the pivotal moment when he publicly denounced the war in his 1917 'Soldier’s Declaration.'Through an analysis of Sassoon’s poetry, Joe and Maiya examine how his work evolved from patriotic beginnings to biting satire and scathing critiques of political leadership. They discuss key poems like 'Suicide in the Trenches' and 'Counter-Attack,' highlighting Sassoon’s stark portrayal of disillusionment, the psychological toll of combat, and his use of structure and sound to intensify the horrors of war. The hosts also explore how Sassoon’s influence extended beyond his own poetry, shaping the legacy of Wilfred Owen through their friendship at Craiglockhart War Hospital.Finally, the episode reflects on Sassoon’s post-war years, his shifting perspectives, and his role in shaping modern understandings of war literature. Joe and Maiya discuss his influence on later poets, the timeless relevance of his anti-war stance, and the ways in which his poetry continues to resonate in contemporary discussions on conflict and memory.Poetry+ users can get exclusive access to analysis, content, and PDFs, including the following that relates to this episode:First World War Poets PDF GuideSiegfried Sassoon PDF Guide'Suicide in the Trenches':Poem PDF GuidePoetry Snapshot PDFPoem Printable PDF'Counter-Attack':Poem PDF GuidePoetry Snapshot PDFPoem Printable PDFSend us a textSupport the showAs always, for the ultimate poetry experience, join Poetry+ and explore all things poetry at PoemAnalysis.com.
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Welcome to Beyond the Verse, a poetry podcast brought to you by the team at Permanalysis.com and Poetry Plus.
I'm Joe and I'm here with my co-host, Maya, and we are delighted to bring you the third and final installment of our mini-series on the Poets of the First World War.
And today, Maya and I are going to be talking about the poet, novelist, and soldier, Siegfried Sassoon.
Maya, can you give us a little bit of a background about Sassoon's life pre-war and give us a chronology?
absolutely well thanks joe to run through a couple of the key dates that are important when we're talking about so soon he was born in 1886 he led a very privileged life growing up he attended marlborough college in the UK and then Cambridge but didn't actually graduate from Cambridge University he is generally regarded in this period as a Georgian romantic poet he published a collection called poems in 1906 and a follow-up collection called sonnets in 1909 and we will see this sonnet form
up time and time again in some of his later poems as well. Of course, as we've talked about in
our previous two episodes of this miniseries, there is definitely a different spin on the
sonnet form when we're talking about the war, as compared to what we would usually expect from
a sonnet. A few more key dates. In 1914, when the war broke out, that was when Siegfried
Sassoon volunteered. He was commissioned as a second lieutenant in 1915, and in 1916 was awarded
the military cross for bravery. But 1917 is when
things really changed. Sassouin writes an open letter that is published in the London Times,
it's read in Parliament, called a soldier's declaration. Now in this, he is very negative about
wartime, and I'm going to ask Joe kindly to read that for us. I am making this statement as an act
of willful defiance of military authority, because I believe the war is being deliberately
prolonged by those who have the power to end it. I am a soldier, convinced that I'm acting on
behalf of soldiers. I believe this war upon which I entered as a war of defence and liberation
has now become a war of aggression and conquest. I believe that the purposes for which I and my
fellow soldiers entered upon this war should have been so clearly stated as to have made
it impossible for them to be changed without our knowledge, and that, had this been done, the
objects which actuated us would now be attainable by negotiation. I have seen and endured the
sufferings of the troops, and I can no longer be a party to prolonging those sufferings
for ends which I believe to be evil and unjust. I am not protesting against the military
conduct of the war, but against the political errors and insincerities for which the fighting
men are being sacrificed. On behalf of those who are suffering now, I make this protest against
the deception which is being practiced on them. Also, I believe it may help destroy the callous
complacence with which the majority of those are home regard the continuance of agony,
which they do not share
and which they have not sufficient imagination to realize.
Now this is absolutely damning evidence
and this is one of the reasons that when we talk about Sassoon
he is so often regarded as the most prominent critic of the war.
As I noted before, this was published in 1917.
It would have been general practice to court-martial
someone who speaks so openly against the war.
However, instead, he was diagnosed with Shellshock, he was sent to Craig Lockhart,
which, as we talked about in our prior episode, is where he met Wilfred Owen and became his mentor.
So if you haven't had a chance to listen to our previous episode, please do check that out.
Now it'll give you a little bit of context around their relationship and how this grew whilst they were both spending time there.
In 1918, Sassoon publishes the Anti-War Collection, Counterattack and Other Poems,
a very openly anti-war collection.
Now this is one of the most prominent and influential collections
when it comes to changing attitudes towards the war.
So in terms of the poems we're focusing on today,
we will of course be focusing primarily on the wartime poems.
However, it is worth stating,
Sassouin lived until he was 80 years old,
obviously with many of the poets that we've discussed.
Up to this point, we only have a very small amount of work from them
given how young they were by the time they died.
However, Sassoon continued to publish for the remainder of his life.
He spent the years after the war with the Bloomsbury Group,
who we also talked about in our last episode.
In 1957, he converted to Catholicism.
His poetry took a slightly more spiritual turn.
And by 1967, aged 80, he died.
Now, Joe, in terms of key dates, what do you want to pick up on here?
Well, thanks, Maya.
That's going to be really helpful for listeners to get a really interesting sense of his life,
because one of the things, I imagine it's going to be a theme of
today's episode we're going to talk about is Sassoon is a poet that changes, a poet of transition.
And obviously, the years after the war allow more time for that transition, you know, time not
afforded to the likes of Brooke or Wilfred Owen. But even within the confines of the war,
we're going to talk about how Sassoon's attitude, his beliefs, and even the poetry itself
alters and changes over the course of those years as a result of new poetic influences, but also,
of course, the growing realization of the horrors and the injustice of this war, which is typified
by the Open Letter, which I read earlier on.
But actually, I'd like to just go back pre-war for a moment
because I think they really help elucidate one of the themes
we've been talking about how this war represents an inflection,
sort of a point of no return.
And this might seem like a trivial instance,
but Maura and I were talking about Sassoon before this episode,
and one of the things that came up during our research
was that Sassoon sort of after leaving Cambridge University
kind of spent a few years in the wilderness.
As Maya mentioned, he was quite an affluent gentleman, he was well off.
and it sort of feels like he spent those years occasionally writing poetry,
not publishing loads of work over what is a six or seven year span,
but spending quite a lot of time hunting and playing cricket,
and these are themes that he would go on to return to in his post-war writing as well.
And this might seem like an insignificant detail given everything that happened in the war.
I think it really helps ground this view of what Britain was like in these years pre-war.
Again, we're talking about a Britain that is still one of the world's primary colonial powers,
an incredibly powerful, influential, affluent nation.
And the idea that this upper middle class gentleman could afford to go to Cambridge,
not get his degree, and spend years, it seems, living a sort of hedonistic lifestyle,
really brings the horrors of the war into focus.
The idea that this war shattered those kind of early 20th century notions
of what it meant to be a British gentleman, what it meant to be a British member of the middle class.
So I think I'd just like to really give listeners that context.
about who this guy was going into the war.
He was not somebody that you might think would be a war hero.
And yet, as Maya mentioned, he won the military cross in 1916
and he even garnered the nickname Mad Jack
for his sort of manic acts of bravery in the early years of the war.
I think the contrast between the horrors of those first two years of the war
that he experienced and his sort of incredibly comfortable hedonistic pre-war years
kind of functions as a symbol for how the war changed the world,
not only because people died, but also because the kind of dreamlike states that people were in pre-war
could never be returned to afterwards.
In terms of the war itself, Maya and I, of course, have discussed a lot of these key dates over the first two episodes,
and if you haven't checked out those episodes already, I implore you to do so.
Sassoon is kind of the bridge between those two poets, and not only in terms of his poetry,
some of Sassoon's early war poetry was more similar to Rupert Brooks in the sense that it expressed a more patriotic
view of the war and kind of a sense of pride in fighting for your country. But by the end of the war,
his poetry is the most satirical, the most biting in its criticism, particularly of the
leadership back home, not actually about the horrors of the war itself as much. But he's also
a literal bridge between these two figures. He met Rupert Brooke and he met Wilfred Owen and those
two never actually met one another. He was also friends with the war poet and writer Robert Graves.
And Sassoon is this kind of centrepiece.
He's almost the kind of central figure
around which these other poet orbit.
And that's why I think it's lovely to close off the series with him today.
Now, Maya, talking about the poetry itself,
we are going to kick off by talking about one of Sassoon's most famous poems.
And again, it's one of those late war poems that really sticks in the public's imagination
what we now think about the horrors of war.
And it's suicide in the trenches.
Well, for the benefit of listeners, I will do a reading of this poem
so they can really understand how it conveys the horrors of war.
Obviously, when you look at poems such as the one published by Rupert Brooke,
you're exploring a very patriotic, very positive view of war.
This is one of these poems that, you know, aside from the title,
obviously immediately creating that image in your head, suicide in the trenches,
it just demonstrates a complete lack of honour and glory in fighting this war.
Of course, yes, lives were lost from.
the war itself, but here we explore the relationships between soldiers, the horror that accompanies
just enduring this. So for the benefit of listeners, this is how the poem goes.
I knew a simple soldier boy who grinned at life in empty joy, slept soundly through the
lonesome dark, and whistled early with the lark. In winter trenches, cowed and glum,
with crumps and lice and lack of rum, he put a bullet through his.
his brain, no one spoke of him again. You smug-faced crowds with kindling eye who cheer when
soldier lads march by. Sneak home and pray you'll never know the hell where youth and laughter go.
Now Jo, I'd love to know your thoughts on this, but I really want to start by focusing on who this
criticism is aimed at, because that last stanza is absolutely telling, I think.
100%. And I think this is something that for listeners who aren't familiar with Sassoon's work, they might be surprised to know that this is going to be a theme that runs through a lot of his poetry, is that he is turning his gaze not on the enemy, or the kind of traditionally assumed enemy across the trenches. He is so often directing his anger, directing his fury at crowds, at people who prolong the war, at politicians, at military leadership. There is a really surprising lack of animosity towards the enemy. He is much more interested.
in exposing what he believes to be the hypocrisy of the leadership back home.
And this final standard shows that really well.
As you've said, you smug-faced crowds with kindling eye.
Well, the use of the direct address straight away create a sense of, on the one hand,
urgency and immediacy, but also universality, because he is on the one hand talking to one person
in the crowd back home.
And yes, of course, he is also talking to every person back home.
And he is laying the blame at their door.
He is saying this man's death should be on your conscience.
You drove him to do this.
Now, you might not have pulled the trigger
and you might not have given him the gun yourself.
But he is only at this war because you allow this war to continue.
And if you had stopped it, this young man might still be alive.
I couldn't agree more.
And I think what's really interesting here is that we have that direct contrast
between the accusatory you and the personal eye.
This opens with an I knew a simple soldier boy.
This is not a poem that is generic in any.
sense. Sassoon, as the speaker, is telling you that he had a friend, a fellow soldier,
who he personally witnessed go through this. Now, of course, in many poems, when we talk about
the speaker, it can be assumed in many senses that the speaker isn't the poet themselves,
but Sassoon goes on post-war to write autobiographical poetry. So when we talk about suicide in the
trenches, I think it is made that much more powerful by the fact that you can understand
that Sassoon, in reality, is writing about something he viscerally experienced.
Definitely. And yet, I think one of the things about it that I really admire is even though, as you've said, this is being drawn from personal experience, this is fairly autobiographical.
What I find really powerful about it is, how matter of fact it is, how dispassionate it is.
For example, we look at the title of Suicide in the Trenches, which kind of, again, slightly wrong foots the reader, because what that title suggests to us is that the titular suicide is going to be.
be our primary objective interest in this poem. And yet the suicide itself is done in a single
line. He put a bullet through his brain. There's no frills. There's no adjectives. There's no drawn out
metaphors or symbols. There's nothing at all. It's a simple statement of fact followed by another
line. No one spoke of him again. And then it's done. Before that, the boy is alive. After that, he is
dead. There is no sense at all of lingering on the act itself. Now, partly, the nobody spoke of him again
thing is, of course, an insinuation that this is something that people ought to be
embarrassed by or ashamed by, that suicide was associated with cowardice and all of the things
that go with that association. And yet it's also a reflection of the fact that these things
were so normal that this horrific suicide, this incredibly traumatic thing to witness or be
aware that was happening around you, doesn't even really land with any of these soldiers.
They either can't or aren't willing to consider it, talk about it anymore. To them, it's
simply another act, we need to move on tomorrow because somebody will die tomorrow and somebody
will die the day after that. The dispassionate nature of the death actually served to elevate
its importance. Because if the poem dedicated lines and lines to how miserable and sad everybody
was about the suicide of this young man, that would perhaps imply that they weren't used to
this kind of death when of course these young men horrifically were exposed to this every day of
their lives virtually. And I think the subtlety with which he's able to convey that message
with so few words is one of the things that makes this poem so powerful.
Absolutely. And what this poem makes me think of is, again, that comparison that so many of
these poets bring up, which is the trench being hell itself, being a very physical manifestation
of hell. Earlier in this mini-series, we talked about the poem Strange Meeting by Wilfred
Owen, in which we have the narrative of a dead soldier who finds himself under the trenches
speaking to the enemy. And again, you know, I used the word visceral before, but I do
find it, this poem just shakes you to your core. There is this real sense of dread that
accompanies it. And it's fascinating to me because, you know, a lot of the time when we talk
about poems that have a rhyme scheme like this or it's written in couplets, you know, boy, joy,
dark, lark, if you draw these words out and look at them alone, obviously, it's a very regular
haired poem, but the content just makes it so much more disturbing. But Joe, how do you think
the rhyme scheme here aids that sense of discomfort?
I think it speaks to that sense of finality that I mentioned earlier on.
If we look at the suicide itself and it's done in that single couplet, the kind of nice
symmetry of that rhyming couplet serves to say, well, there's nothing more to say here.
I think what the couplets serve to do is emphasise the fact that these soldiers were forced
to continually complementalise, deal with something before they have to move on to the next thing.
There was no time to kind of contemplate their own feelings.
And ultimately, you know, the moment that Sassoon did get a chance to contemplate his feelings, because he was back in the UK in 1917, that's when he wrote a soldier's declaration that I read earlier on.
The moment that he began to dwell on the horrors of war, he realized or he became aware of the fact, or he believed that, the war was unjust.
That is why I think it is so important that we bring up a soldier's declaration when we talk about Sassoon's poetry, because I think it would be very easy to abstract some of his work.
But I think one of Sassoon's real strengths is that more often than not, he writes on behalf of the soldiers.
I just want to bring up that line from a soldier's declaration where he says,
I am a soldier convinced that I am acting on behalf of soldiers.
He uses others' stories to really convey the horrors of the war.
And one of the poems that I think also speaks to this in a very similar way to suicide in the trenches is a subaltern,
which opens with the lines, he turned to me with his kind.
sleepy gaze and fresh face slowly brightening to the grin. And this really beautiful descriptor
of a fellow soldier, someone who he serves with potentially every day, being contrasted against the
trenches, which in this poem are described as being full of squeaking rats across the slime,
the grey-polzied weather, stamping and shivering in the rain. There is a real contrast
between the freshness and the youth of these soldiers against the setting of the poem.
And I think I see this time and time again in Sassoon's poetry that the focus on the other,
the subaltern, the other soldier, really just brings out the depth and the dank nature of being in the trenches.
I absolutely think it's him at its best.
Yes, it's an incredible poem.
It really is.
And I think there's so many layers to this that I'd just love to unpick a couple of
of them. So first of all, we get that, that completely anachronistic reference to cricket and
that opening stanza, which feels so inappropriate. It feels so divorced from the reality being
described in the poem. And that's the point. I think Sassoon himself here is acknowledging
that's a different life, that's a different world, a world that ultimately it's unlikely I will
ever be able to return to. And I don't just mean that in a literal sense, of course, Sussum was facing
life and death every day. There's every chance that you won't be able to go back because you'll be
dead. And yet I think what the hint here is that Sassu knows, there will be no return to that
regardless of whether I live or die, because that world simply does not exist anymore. It's not to
suggest that people stopped playing cricket after the war. That obviously didn't happen. But that
sense of the cricket, the English countryside, the summer afternoon, the lazy way in which
time was passed before the war, is gone. It cannot be reclaimed. I also want to quickly look in
that second stanza because there's two lines in particular I'd like to talk about. The first is that
line, my stale philosophies had served him well. And I think what we have to remember here,
of course, is that Sassoon himself was an officer, a junior officer, yes, not one of the kind of
high-ranking military leadership that he criticised, and yet to soldiers of lower rank than him,
he was still their leader, he was still the person they looked up to. And I think there's this
real feeling of guilt here, this feeling that he feels complicit in passing on messages that
he doesn't believe in, that he is leading soldiers, just as he himself is being led by people,
who he doesn't have faith in, that stale philosophy, that sense of regurgitating language that
you know no longer has meaning. So that word stale, I think, is a lovely way that he a expresses
his growing disillusionment with the war, but also he acknowledges that he has ownership of those
as well. There is a sense that he is reflecting on his own role in leading people to their death.
And then, just to jump forward slightly once again, he discusses this other soldier, and he says
dreaming about his girl had sent his brain
blanker than ever, she'd
no place in hell.
And Maya's nodding for listeners who
obviously can't see her, because I think she wants to talk
about this as well. And again, what you have here
is the sense that the war is
almost happening in a different universe,
a different plane, a plane that people
who have not seen it can never
enter. The idea that once you've
witnessed these horrors in the trenches,
you can never escape them. It's like an eternal
punishment, of course, hell is not somewhere you go
for a weekend. Hell is somewhere where you are
damned for eternity.
Even when the war ends,
these constant references to hell from Sassoon
and Owen as well suggest that
they are aware of the fact that the war
might end in a sense
but the horrors will remain and
ultimately they will be eternally
damned to relive these experiences
and those who haven't lived them
their wives, their partners, their friends,
their siblings, their parents back home
will always be dislocated
from them. They'll never truly exist
in the same world again.
Joe's absolutely right.
I think it's one of the most powerful lines in this poem
that I think is very much overlooked.
You know, Joe's hit pretty much every point I wanted to talk about that.
I also just wanted to kind of extrapolate it a little bit further
because when we talk about World War I,
much of the propaganda that surrounded it was concerned with defense.
You know, as we read in a soldier's declaration, it was about liberty.
It was about defense.
However, one of the lines that always sticks with me is this one because war propaganda
it, it was about returning home to your loved ones. It was about defending them. Your personal
relationships were very much leveraged in order to make you want to go to war. However, here, as Joe
says, by the time they return, they've endured such horrors, shell shock, PTSD, that they begin to
exist very much mentally on another plane. But I also want to talk about the fact that so many of
these soldiers that signed up to fight had to do such barbaric acts that here, what we're talking about
as well is the fact that this individual soldier doesn't believe that he has the right to go to
heaven. He doesn't believe that the acts that he's done in his lifetime will justify that.
Upon his death, he won't even have the privilege of being reunited with his loved ones
in the afterlife because they haven't done the same things that he's done. He believes in the purity,
the innocence of his girl back home, but even after death, he won't be able to be reunited with her.
And I think that is one of the, you know, most depressing lines in this poem, because if anything, you know, you fight for love, you fight for the right to come home to your loved ones.
And here you really get the sense of being totally alone in this conflict, despite fighting alongside all your other soldiers.
I think that's a fascinating point.
And just something I'd like to pick up on and actually talk about a couple of other poems by Sassoon, because what you've struck upon there about the fact that basically he believes he,
no longer has the right to enter heaven. There's a sense of real sort of self-loathing there, this
idea that one doesn't deserve salvation, one doesn't deserve forgiveness. And I think, although, of course,
Sassoon is giving those words to another soldier, I think there's undoubtedly those feelings in his
poetry as well with regard to himself. And I mentioned earlier on that a lot of Sassoon's poetry
turns its attacks back home. It talks about the failings of the political class. It talks about
the failings of the crowd of people that celebrate soldiers.
And I'd just like to touch upon a couple of moments that I think illustrate this point,
but also illustrate perhaps a deeper sense of self-loathing.
Now, one of the poems I would like to talk about is Glory of Women by Seagfreetassoon,
which is this very odd poem in the sense that its anger is directed at the mother's,
partners, girlfriend, sisters of the soldiers back home,
who sort of greets the returning soldiers in open arms and celebrate them,
which feels like an odd group to direct your anger at because, you know, they were largely
blameless. And of course, women didn't have the vote at the time, so they're not responsible
for the political leadership either. I'd just like to zoom in on a couple of lines in this poem,
though. So Sassoon writes, you worship decorations. You believe that chivalry redeems the
war's disgrace. And there's a really caustic tone there. What Susuon is saying is that this belief
that you have in the decency and the goodness of this war and our heroism is a lie. And it's a lie that
you should have seen through by now.
Now, that might seem a very caustic attack against these women back home.
And yet I want to just contrast that against some lines from a much earlier and less well-known
poem from Sassoon.
This is a poem Absolution, which was written in 1915, and it's really important to understand
this because, as we mentioned earlier, Sassoon does change his attitudes, okay?
Brooke remains steadfast in them and dies relatively early in the war.
Owen's poetry is kind of fairly cynical from the outset.
Sassoon is the one who goes on this real journey.
So keep those lines in your head.
That line in particular, when Sassoon says in Glory of Women,
you worship decorations, you believe that chivalry redeems the war's disgrace.
And just contrast those against these lines from Absolution,
in which he writes,
The anguish of the earth absolves our eyes till beauty shines in all that we can see.
So when he says in glory of women,
how could you possibly believe this?
How could you ever believe this lie?
Yes, he's talking about the women, but he's also talking to himself because he believed those same things.
He believes that the glory of war would absolve, would forgive.
And I think to view the journey that he went on through those lines and to, it becomes possible to regard almost every instance that Sussuon is criticizing people back home to actually be a criticism of his former self.
But, I mean, Maya, what do you think about that?
I think you're absolutely spot on and it sits really well in contrast to glory of women.
You know, I'm looking at the follow-up line.
You listen with delight by tales of dirt and danger fondly thrilled.
You have this real understanding that the way that the war is being communicated back home is not the day to day.
And I think that's one thing that any listener needs to remain kind of critically aware of
is that there is this huge discrepancy between the way stories are being told.
I do have one to touch on, in glory of women, you know, we said in the opening that he often doesn't focus on the enemy as such, or at least the enemy within the war.
But here, the closing lines of glory of women go, O German mother dreaming by the fire, while you are knitting socks to send your son, his face is trodden deeper in the mud.
Now again, the way this poem closes, it's not arrogant, it's not boastful.
It is just stating facts.
Sassoon is incredible at really just taking the most simple moment
and making it the most devastating line in the poem.
He immediately conjures an image not of the adversary, not of the enemy,
but of their mother.
Someone who is creating softness, knitting socks.
You have this real sense of warmth and joy
immediately contrasted against the fact that her son is mostly,
likely dead or dying. And that is just an absolutely heartbreaking way to describe this
conflict, you know. Again, I'm going to root back time and time again to a soldier's declaration,
that this war was pointless. It was about occupation, not defence. And Sassoon never relents in
this in his later poems. He is so adamantly against this kind of senseless violence. Glory of
women is such an interesting one, because it's not often that we talk about the role
of women in the war. And as Joe said, women didn't have a vote at this stage. Yes, they were
working in munitions factories. But in terms of where blame lays, it's a really fascinating
one to explore because, you know, Joe and I were talking before the podcast and we discussed
the fact that Sassoon really just kind of hates everyone. He really directs anger towards
everyone in this war. Because again, it's, you know, no one person is to blame. It was the
amalgamation of every single aspect of this war, culminating in one of the greatest
tragedies of their world at that stage. It is, you know, it's unrelenting. I think that's the word
I would always use.
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1917, which as my mentioned earlier on, is a really pivotal year for Sassoon as a poet and also
for the war as a whole. So a soldier's declaration had already been published and read out in the
Houses of Parliament and Maya mentioned that Sassoon is sent to Craig Lottcar Hospital. Now, we spoke a lot
in our previous episode in Wolfred Owen because the two met there and Sassoon became an enormous
influence on Owen's work. The following year, Sassoon did briefly return to the front lines, but he
was shot in the head and had to return back to the UK. And as we mentioned, our last episode,
Wilfred Owen died just one week before the war's conclusion. And the relationship between these two men
is one of the things that I think really defines our perception of the war poets,
this idea of this really close bond, united by circumstance,
united by a love of language, but ultimately, of course, destined to end in tragedy.
And just to kind of give listeners a sense of how important these men were to one another,
Wilfred Owen wrote in a letter that Sassoon became, and I quote,
Keats and Christ and Elijah to him, this sense of how,
important Sassoon was as a friend but also as a poetic influence and a lot of those poems that
we now know as iconic Wilfred Owen compositions would not have been the same if Sassoon had not
been. An indirect and a direct influence we're going to talk about at the moment and I just like
to read something Sassoon wrote about Wilfred Owen's death some years later when he reflected
that Wilfred's death was an unhealed wound and the ache of it has been with me ever since.
when we talk about poetry and we talk about artistic renderings and we talk about big ideas
as Myra and I often do on this podcast, sometimes we can lose sight of the human tragedy.
These were two young men.
Sassoon was 30 years old in 1917.
Owen was in his early 20th.
They were not meant to be thrown together in these circumstances and yet they were.
And the bonds that they forged in those awful months together really have stood the test of time.
And I think it's important to pay tribute to that.
And it also allows me to sort of jump into Sassoon.
and his enduring influence in the years after the war.
As Maya mentioned, his criticism of the ruling establishment,
particularly the way they were conducting the war on a political level,
endured after the war itself.
And so much of our modern conception of war is shaped by the poems of, for example,
Wilfred Owen.
Sassoon edited that collection.
Owen's collection of poems that was published in 1920.
Not only did he edit them, he also wrote the preface to those poems.
For any listeners out there who were wondering,
you know, why are we dedicating a whole episode to Sassoon?
he's perhaps less famous than Brooke, he's certainly less famous than Owen.
It's impossible to understand Owen, and it's impossible to really appreciate Brooke's early poetry
without the influence of Sassoon, because his poetic journey kind of bridges the gap between those two men,
but also his real life, very practical influence on the publication of Owen's poetry,
means that we owe him an enormous debt when it comes to remembering the First World War and its horrors.
Well, thank you so much for that, Joe.
I think it is really important for listeners to understand Susu.
influence. And actually, their influence on each other, one of the poems that I'm thinking about,
you know, just off the back of what you were saying is counterattack. Now, much of Sassoon's
poetry is short. It is written in a sonnet form or similar, but counterattack is one of those
that the length of it has always stood out to me. And I think if anything, I'd almost call it
Owen-esque. I think it is inspired by Owen's longer poems. Because, you know, of course,
these two were working together. They were reviewing each other's work. They were
editing. And I think you can see so much of Owen in counterattack. I'm looking at kind of even
small phrases such as blind with smoke, the jolly old rain. You have this sense that these two
had an artistic relationship that absolutely cements the other in history. And I think I want
to focus on counterattack really to kind of close up this episode because again, it's a very
matter-of-fact poem. It details the process of a counter-attack. But most of the
importantly, the final line of this poem ends with the death of a soldier that also constitutes
the end of this battle. And it goes, lost in a blurred confusion of yells and groans, down and down,
he sank and drowned, bleeding to death. The counterattack had failed. Now this is one of the
most powerful ends to a poem that I've read in a long time. I think it really just cuts through that
sense of glory because again we're talking about other soldiers here. We're not talking about
Sassoon's personal experience. Again, he lived through this war. He had to live with the memory
of all of this for so many more years. And yet, the confusion, the uncertainty, the sense of
finality in that death just reminds me of Owen's exposure again. Yeah, I think I can definitely
see Owen's presence in this poem, that kind of ability to delve into sort of sordid detail,
or the emphasis on the soundscape.
I mean, there's a really interesting use of alliteratives and sibilants in this
poem that I think is sort of typical of Owen's work.
The thing I find really sort of impressor about it lies in that second stanza.
And the standard begins a yawning soldier knelt at the bank.
And straight away, before we have anything else in that stanza,
the image of a yawning soldier feels at odds with our perception of the war, right?
Because yawn implies, obviously, fatigue, which is perhaps in keeping,
but it also suggests sort of a degree of boredom almost.
And, you know, our perception of this war is rooted in its awful moments.
But of course, when you live and die and fight and eat and sleep at the front,
all manner of human experience is present.
Sometimes you are bored, as crazy as it seems to us,
that anybody could be bored and not in perpetual terror.
When you live there, and that's your reality,
there will be moments where you're simply yawning and he's sort of thinking about other things.
If I could just read a few lines later, this stanza closes with the description that follows.
He crouched and flinched, dizzy with galloping fear, sick for escape, loathing the strangled horror and butchered frantic gestures of the dead.
The juxtaposition between somebody who was yawning and kneeling was perhaps a bit tired or perhaps a bit bored
and the immersive, horrific description that follows at the end of that stanza.
These are separated by literally five or six lines.
The pace at which life changes, the pace at which somebody could go from something mundane and ordinary and recognisable to the average reader who hasn't experienced war, the act of yawning, to these kind of nightmarish descriptions, which again I think are fairly Owen-esque, that horrible, kind of surreal and sickening renderings of violence and death.
And then as Mara's mentioned earlier, we go back to that dispassionate voice that closes the poem,
the oscillation between, on the one hand, very matter of fact, very simple language, very direct declarations of circumstance,
and these really dreamlike, nightmarish sequences captures something about the absurdity of war,
that the mundane and the nightmarish sort of coexist or exist in such close tandem with
one another. I think what really adds to that as well is actually the sense of pace in this poem
because at a first look, it seems to offer kind of end-stop lines, a very regular format. However,
as you move through the poem and it's really the last stanza I want to focus on, you actually
have the addition of, say, zero. And what this does is slow the poem down. Because the way I read
it in my head, the speed is something that is constantly slowed down, then brought back up to speed,
slowed down again, and it goes.
Bullets spat, and he remembered his rifle,
rapid fire, and started blazing wildly.
Then a bang crumpled and spun him sideways,
knocked him out to grunt and wriggle,
non-heeded him.
He choked and fought the flapping veils of smothering gloom.
I mean, even the way that you hear this read aloud,
you get this real sense of mechanisation.
Originally it begins with this slightly confusing,
action, it's very much slowed down. Even the rapid fire, having either side of it, these
pauses, gives a sense of uncertainty that the soldier that is in this war has no idea what
they're doing. There's no sense of decision here. It's simply a knee-jerk reaction. However,
the following lines just build on this pace. And I love the idea that, you know, without even
knowing the weaponry that's used or the way in which war is conducted, Sassoon conveys so strongly
that war can be these long stretches of waiting
and then sudden bursts of action and then death.
You have effectively a battle condensed into such a short stanza
that ends with death.
It immediately stops.
And the way that he uses punctuation to demonstrate this in the poem
is absolutely fantastic.
And it captures that thing I was talking about
the way that a lot of war,
especially trench warfare that sort of defines the first world war,
was this bizarre contrast between nothing happening or things happening kind of in an overwhelming
fashion. Lots of the time at the front was spent simply sitting in the trench looking over,
but when things were happening, they were utterly horrific and almost happened without warning.
I mean, people were trying to tunnel under your trench and blow you up, and you know they're
doing it because you're trying to do it to the enemy as well.
But you have no sense of the progress being made when you're in the trench.
You don't know if it's five meters away.
you don't know if it's five minutes away
or whether it's not going to happen at all.
That contrasts between the stillness
at moments in this poem
and the energy, the frenetic pace of other parts
I think is really typified by that punctuation
that you've mentioned.
And, you know, it would be remiss of me
not to talk about that line.
Bullet spacked.
I love that description from Sassoon
because again, it comes back to that point
I've been making about how
he is constantly challenging,
not necessarily the enemy.
This might seem like a poem
that's more conventional
about people are trying to show
shoot at us and we're trying to shoot at them and yet the bullets spat obviously the act of spitting is
something that's incredibly rude incredibly disrespectful i think what he's suggesting there is
the soldiers on both side are being not only wounded and killed but actually disrespected
and not disrespected by one another but disrespected by the people who commands them to continue
firing those bullets this idea that the soldiers are sort of scum their sort of low lights that
they deserve to be spat on, that they're derised.
For me, this is another example of Sassoon actually saying,
the person firing the gun at me may be my adversary today,
but my real enemy is the person who commands me to shoot back at him.
It's really interesting, actually, that you bring up the way the soldiers were portrayed
because I think a poem like this stands in contrast to one,
such as the soldier by Ruperbrook that we talked about in our first episode,
in the soldier, he talks about being blessed by sons from home.
You know, you have this sense of brightness and warmth and glory.
And all of those things kind of combine when we talk about the soldiers
because of the duality between the sun and the sons of war.
But here in counterattack,
I absolutely love this description of the break of dawn.
Of course, in much poetry, the breaking of dawn signals new life.
It signals the start of a new day.
Here, Sassoon writes,
dawn broke like a face with blinking eyes, pallid, unshaven and thirsty, blind with smoke.
Now, aside from this being just an excellent line and impeccably written, the way that the sun is
portrayed here, the way that the start of the day is portrayed, is almost paralleling to the soldiers
that are in the trenches, pallid, unshaven and thirsty, blind with smoke. Now, of course, blind with smoke,
assume this is a cloudy day, but there is absolutely no sense of warmth in this line,
which is one of the things I find really quite disruptive about this poem.
The way that, you know, I've already talked about the way that Sassoon plays with speed,
but here the way he plays with light and time and really disrupt what you would expect to
be a new day. They gained their first objective hours before the dawn.
and here you almost build up to what should be a moment of glory, a moment of togetherness.
Dawn broke like a face.
You immediately have the image of a soldier's face being split apart,
and that is gruesome and gory and just contributes to the sense of dread in this poem, I think.
I completely agree, and the ability to subvert the sun,
which is of course ordinarily a symbol of regeneration, right?
It's a new day and it's a day in which the sun is going to shine brightly again.
And yet in this poem, it simply becomes a microcosm of continuing fatigue, of decline.
You know, the soldier's faces, as Maya says, exhausted, dirtied by smoke, unshaven.
This sense of deterioration and decline is in sharp contrast to the way that the sun is normally used in literature and film.
You know, the sun is meant to be something fresh and new and invigorating.
And yet, Sassoon takes all of those qualities away from it, which again is quite Owen-esque in so far as it's kind of a reverse pathetic fallacy.
You know, pathetic fallacy is a technique in which the weather or the environment reflects or predicts the events of a story or poem.
And yet in Owen's poetry and in this scene, it's actually the horrors of war.
It's mankind's ability to destroy things that seem to have an effect on the natural world that seem to
rob nature of its beauty, its vitality and its ability to be symbols of hope and regeneration.
So as we reflect on sort of the end of this episode and the end of our mini-series on the poets
of the First World War and first of all, you know, we hope listeners have really enjoyed this
series. I'm sure some of the subject matter has been difficult at times. We hope that we've
given you a fresh perspective on some of the most important poets of the early 20th century.
And as always, if you have things you'd like us to discuss in future episodes, please do
reach out to us. We are always keen to hear your thought and questions.
Maya, as we reflect on the three poets we've mentioned and the conflicts that defines the poetry we've talked about over these three episodes,
what are the kind of key takeaways that you think you'd like to focus on?
Do these poems and these poets continue to resonate in the modern world?
That is definitely a big question.
I think one of the key takeaways is actually something we mentioned, really right off the bat,
which is so often art and poetry can reflect the mood of a name.
but it can also shape it.
Every single poet we've talked about across this series
has an incredible ability,
even following their passing,
to really shape reality.
And I think, obviously, of course,
we love poetry and the way that we talk about it.
We personally believe it's powerful.
But when we explore poets
that are directly responding to a conflict such as this,
and when we explore poets such as Sassoon,
such as Brooks, such as Owen, who were directly responding to a conflict that, you know, shaped
the world at that time, it's absolutely critical that we pay attention to what they were saying.
I think it's a lesson that we can apply, even moving, you know, towards the future, to be perfectly
honest, there is, there are so many incredible poets writing now about the state of the world
that have the power to change and have the power to shape people's opinion.
And I think, if anything, these poets really just stand as a testament to the power of art
and the power that a single voice can have to speak on behalf of the many.
And I think it also proves, you know, that poetry like this is timeless.
Of course they were written at a specific moment for a specific moment.
You know, we've encountered these poems multiple times throughout our lives.
at school for pure enjoyment in the research for this episode
and I find something new every time
and I think the power that these poems have to shape
even my individual person, even my mind,
even my opinions on things.
Just show that if you can find art,
if you can find poetry that speaks to you,
you are able to take that with you and carry it with you
and that is what these poets have done
for millions and millions of people across the world.
the reason we think of war, as we do today, is in no small part thanks to these poets.
So I think it's important and be grateful for their influence in so many ways.
But I'd love to know what you think.
Well, that was really beautifully expressed.
And I completely agree.
And I think it's a reminder, as you said, that art doesn't exist in a vacuum.
Art exists in response to and in dialogue with the world in which it's created.
As we've mentioned, lots of times, this war changes war in general.
It changes the way the public.
perceive it, it changes the way that the political leadership go about embarking on it. It changes
everything. You know, unfortunately, as we all know, this was not the end of war in the 20th century or
indeed the 21st. And the Second World War is a very different kind of conflict in the public's
imagination. There is a much clearer sense, particularly in retrospect of the fight against evil.
But of course, there have been many other conflicts, you know, the Vietnam War, the Gulf Wars,
you know, various civil wars that have plagues the 20th century and beyond. You know, I think it's
impossible to conceive of a poet like the US poet Yusuf Kuminyaka, who's a, you know,
for listeners who onto I was a remarkable poet who was a soldier in the Vietnam War and some of
his work, I think, definitely demonstrates the influence of people like Owen. And it doesn't
always have to be direct influence. I think that's the important thing to remember is that it's not
simply that poets who fought in subsequent wars read Wilfred Owen or Sassoon or anybody else
and liked their poetry and thought there are important themes in it. It's the fact that the messages
from these poems have seeped into the public consciousness, and that then informs the poets
that come after them. So there is both a direct and an indirect influence. And I think, you know,
reading a soldier's declaration in particular in preparation for this episode, you know,
so many of those themes feel resonant, you know, in the world that we're living in in,
you know, the 21st century. I mean, a lot of those arguments would have been made, for example,
around the wars in Iraq and Afghanistan. I think there are a great many people who might see
the relationship between some of Sassoon's ideas and the war in Ukraine and various other conflicts
around the world. So it's a reminder of the immediacy of the poetry, even though it was written
more than a century ago. Well, that was a really lovely way to close up the end of our first
miniseries, Joe, and of course our first three episodes of season two. Now, as you mentioned before,
it would be amazing to hear your feedback. If you'd like this miniseries, if you'd like to see us do
more miniseries, please do send us your feedback, your thoughts, your questions to beyond
the verse at Poemanalysis.com. Now next time we're going to be talking about someone we've mentioned
on the podcast a few times but never analysed a poem of and that is Sylvia Plath and her poem
daddy. I for one cannot wait for that, but for now it's goodbye from me. And goodbye from me and the whole
team at Poemanalysis.com and Virtue Plus.
Thank you.