Creepy - Mother Penitent
Episode Date: July 20, 2026Mother Penitent (starts at 2:14)***Written by: R. Todd Campbell and Narrated by: Jimmy Ferrer, Michelle Kane, and Rissa Montanez***Content warning: child abuse***Better to Drown (starts at 39:12)***Wr...itten by: Piper Raupp and Narrated by: Alicia Atkins***Baby Teeth (starts at 55:59)***Written by: G. Christopher Williams***Support the show at patreon.com/creepypod***Title music by: Alex Aldea Hosted on Acast. See acast.com/privacy for more information.
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First up, a compassionate priest answers a late-night call to administer last rights,
only to discover that the dying woman's final confession is unlike anything he's ever encountered.
written by R. Todd Campbell and narrated by Jimmy Ferrer, Michelle Kane, and Rissa Montanaz.
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Mother Penitent
It was a late hour, or it was quite early.
Depending on one's own day-to-night sensibilities.
Whatever the viewpoint, it was almost 2.30 a.m.
And most homes were darken, and their occupants were likely dreaming.
Father Alex, tall, and made to withstand strife, took the most direct route as he walked thoughtfully through the still neighborhood to the penitence house.
He was familiar with these streets, having traversed them many times over in his life.
He was familiar with the people who lived here, including the ones outside of his faith, for it was in his nature to know.
them, even if the familiarity wasn't reciprocated.
He was dressed in the standard dark pants and shirt, complete with a white Roman collar.
That all in his vocation wear.
He looked to be in his fifties, but any who met him would swear that he was either much
older or much younger.
No one could seem to agree.
Yet he was always welcomed by the locals.
really everywhere he went.
Because he made it, his life's work to be a fixture that folks could count on.
No matter their respective troubles were celebrations.
He walked tonight with purpose, but without urgency.
And the sodium vapor lamps of the streetlights illuminated the seemingly timeless features of his face
and cast various odd shadows on the ground.
It was autumn, so the air suggested that one should wear at least a light jacket to keep oneself from too much exposure to the emerging chill.
Father Alex wore a long trench coat, which may have been overkill for some, but he liked to be warm.
The rectory received the call for last rites about an hour before Father Alex began his trek.
Young woman on the other end of the line made it clear that, while it was not an emergency,
her mother was indeed living her final days.
And thus wished to make confession and receive her last rites before she passed on.
She requested that it happened as soon as possible, just to be safe.
As long as it was of no inconvenience, Father Alex was already wide awake.
So he suggested that he put on his shoes and come to her residence right away.
And the young woman agreed.
It was unusual, though,
because although the young woman had never met him,
Father Alex knew of her and her mother.
And he knew of their lack of religious affiliation.
That they were not Catholic and unbaptized was even more unusual for anyone asking for last rights.
but this was someone in need, and that was good enough for Father Alex.
And while his superiors frowned upon such a deviation of protocol, he was a rebel,
and he did things his own way.
His casual gate fell in step with the tune he whistled quietly to himself,
as he strolled closer to his destination.
It was the bridal chorus from Wagner and Lowengris.
and it had been stuck in his head for the past two days,
ever since he attended one of the most decadent
and celebratory weddings of his recent memory.
For him, it wasn't one of those songs
that, aggressively and almost out of spite,
remained in one's memory,
playing on unwanted repetition.
Rather, it was a welcome reminder of the passion he'd felt
for participating in some way
in his neighbor's most significant moment.
Music in general was a source of great pleasure for him, and Wagner was simply one of his favorites.
Another one of his favorite things was his role in duty in confession.
This wasn't because of any voyeuristic tendencies, though.
It was all about seeing the realness of people.
He rather liked confession, because he felt a kinship to the penitent that was often lost in the formalities of his
regular dealings with them. Confession meant honesty. It was real. It was raw. And he believed when
people were stripped down to their most basic humanity, they were finally able to transition
properly from this life to the next. It was his job to hold the mirror that mercifully showed
them all the dark things that had made them hate themselves before they succumb.
Finally, after musing on his role in the world in the power of Wagner, he arrived at the home of a dying woman.
Much like all others in the neighborhood, the house was built sometime in the late 19th or early 20th century.
It could have used a coat of fresh paint, but it was otherwise remarkably well kept.
The adjacent homes on both its left and right side were colorful, and as Father Alex noted,
their porch ceilings were painted of pleasant sky blue.
However, the porch on which he stood had no such distinction.
The wood was bereft of hue, but the earth tones were nonetheless inviting.
At least Father Alex thought so.
A dim light radiated from somewhere inside.
Giving the glass panes that decorated the top of the front door,
the soft, warm glow, he knocked firmly.
A few moments passed before gentle footsteps approached from the other side of the door.
He listened to the clicks as the locks were unfastened,
and the door opened up,
revealing a pale, wispy young woman in her early 30s.
She wore a plain white dress, starkly contrasted by the straight blue-black hair that fell below her lithe waist.
There were visible scars criss-crossing both of her arms.
Hello.
She said with a soft meekness.
Hello.
I am Father Alex, said the priest.
She stood in the doorway saying nothing more.
Father Alex studied her, peering into her eyes, looking for any inviting welcome to enter the home.
There were none.
Am I too late?
No, I'm Jen.
She said almost inaudibly.
It's nice to meet you, Jen.
The priest replied.
She stared at him wide-eyed, as if he were a haint, hoping for the entrance of a brand-new haunt.
Father Alex reached out his hand,
but she either didn't see it,
or her completely ignored the gesture,
for she did not return the greeting.
Whatever the case,
Father Alex lowered his hand awkwardly,
and smiled in his usual magnanimous way.
May I come in?
Father Alex asked as delicately as possible,
for it was clear that there was
something off with the young woman.
And he did not wish for any unnecessary troubles.
Yes, of course.
She said as she stepped back and allowed Father Alex to enter the home.
Thank you, he said.
As she closed the door behind him and re-engaged the locks with their respective clicks.
Inside, Father Alex took note of the richness of the decor that gave the home an almost museum quality.
to it. It was clean, yet close to being too cluttered, heavily decorated with a variety of items,
paintings and various clocks on the wall, carved figures, glass figures, and many other trinkets of
every kind and size, and all the colors, sitting upon sturdy shells. He fancied himself knowledgeable
on a great many things.
And he read a wide array of books on matters ranging from theology to architecture,
art, and much, much more.
Therefore, he felt confident in determining that many of the things that adorn the walls
and shelves of the humble home were probably at least a century or more old.
It was quite the collection, an anomaly.
A brand new shovel.
And an array of cleaning products and garbage bags.
Resting on an antique table stood out from the rest of the older things in the room.
Jen caught his gaze moving from the out-of-place items back to her face.
I've been gardening and cleaning.
She lied to the priest.
Father Alex stole another look at her spotless attire.
You wash up rather well.
He said.
Gin inhaled a deep breath, hoping that he wouldn't pick up on her nervousness.
She had never been great at being untruthful, which often led to beatings by her mother.
If she lied to anyone, and it wasn't perfectly undetectable, she received a beating.
But if she lied to her mother about anything at all.
She also received a beating, and a severe one at that.
So, she collected herself, redirected her thoughts, and forced herself not to shake.
May I take your coat?
She asked, tapping one finger on her stomach.
It was one of her tics that emerged whenever she was uncomfortable, which for Jen was most of her waking hours.
No.
Thank you.
Father Alex replied, noticing her disquiet, but remaining calm and composed for her sake, of course.
Something to drink?
She asked, trying her level best to be a gracious host.
She wondered if she was actually being gracious, though.
Thank you.
I'm not thirsty.
Perhaps I should just go ahead and meet her.
He said,
Jen hesitated
She realized that she had been stalling in her own conspicuous and feeble way
But there was nothing else she could do
She would lead the priest to meet her mother
She would have to live with that
As she always did
When her mother made her do things against her nature
You seem kind
She said
Father Alex thought he detected a sense of sadness
in her voice.
This wasn't anything new to him.
People were always sad during confession
and their last rites.
Indeed, it was sad for people
when their loved ones were close to death.
Please follow me.
He did as she asked and followed her
without any further comment to perform
his duties for her dear mother.
Jen led Father Alex down,
a somberly lit hallway
that opened into the shadows of her mother's room and opened the unusually ornate door.
She stepped inside, and Father Alex did the same.
Room was decorated much like the rest of the house.
Antiques of all kinds arranged into a busy scene of collective millennia of history.
There was a musk of heavy perfumes mixed with the acidic sting of urine that hit Father Alex's senses.
with a strong severity as soon as he stepped inside,
and laying on the bed in the center of the room.
Underneath a thick-patched quilt was Jen's ancient mother Lily.
Lily's face told a decrepit story of human fragility.
Many years ago, she had been spry,
and full of energy that allowed her to do incredible things.
some would say even unexplainable things.
Those days were now far behind her.
She had to be in her 90s or even older.
She stared at the ceiling, unmoving at the entrance of Jen and Father Alex.
But after a few moments of silence, she lifted her head and shifted her body to acknowledge her awaiting guest.
You're the priest, then.
She croaked matter of factly through a noticeably parched throat.
And though her milky gray eyes revealed,
an eyesight long diminished from proper function,
she nonetheless looked directly at Father Alex
and locked her gaze with his own.
I'm Father Alex.
And you're Lily.
He returned steadily.
She nodded as best as she could and coughed.
She moistened her crack lips with her tongue and turned to Jen.
Give me a moment alone with him, daughter.
She croaked.
But mother.
Jen began.
Now, girl, I will call for you.
Lily interrupted with a surprising fury for someone so feeble.
Jen looked down at her scars involuntarily.
Just as she looked down.
often did when berated by the old woman.
Yes, mother, I will be right outside, said Jen lowly.
She turned and scurried away, like a rodent fleeing the wrath of the broom, and closed the door behind her.
She's a willful child.
Lily stated with unchecked disdain.
Father Alex stared at the closed door after the young woman, then looked back.
back at the diminished figure on the bed.
He said nothing.
But Lily must have known what he had been thinking.
I imagine that you have questions, priest.
She said with a sneer,
Father Alex remained impassive but intrigued.
Of course he had questions.
But he knew people and how to read them.
He answered his own unspoken inquiry
before the spavin-figured reply.
How can I be the mother of such a young, soft beauty?
When my womb would be rotten long before she was born.
She asked in a mocking voice.
She cocked a thick gray eyebrow and looked amused by the question.
She's my adopted daughter.
She came to me late in life, Lily explained.
I see.
Father Alex replied simply, he revealed nothing more, although Lily was certain, she was certain, that he was bothered.
And that made her happy.
She couldn't wait to tell him more about it.
Come closer, she told him.
He approached her bed slowly, then gestured to the old desk and chair, adorned with the plush red cushion seat nearby.
May I sit?
He asked her.
He was always mindful of his manners, even when met with clearly ill-tempered and unpleasant people.
Of course.
She offered out of a false courtesy
That was both obvious and exaggerated
He grabbed the chair and he brought it to the side of the bed and sat down
He watched as her wisen breasts
Heaved up and down with every rattled breath
Heavy with the sounds of great labor and wear
It appeared to him that each intake of air was painful
And drew her closer to the grave
Jen was wrong when she said that the visit was no emergency.
Her end was imminent, and her time was close at hand.
She closed her eyes and said nothing for a good minute or two.
His eyes wandered, and he observed the room and the embellishments collected on his floor and walls.
Again, he noted that the items in the room were certainly not procured from any box chain retail
giant. They were unique, well-made, and aged. Some were curiously of the macabre variety,
with many depicting various stages of human decay and violence. He examined an oil painting of
an disemboweled pig hanging prominently above the headboard of Lily's bed. He recognized it
immediately, and even knew the name of the artist.
It was commissioned, painted, and celebrated in mid-18th century New England,
then disappeared sometime during the Great Depression.
Its vanishing was one of the mysteries of American art.
Yet, here it was.
Soaking up the stench of the room to match the vulgarity of its canvas.
Father Alex was certain in the discovery, for his studies in art led him to have no doubts about its authenticity.
Truly, this was a remarkable and priceless find, but the painting could wait.
He was here for one purpose.
You have a very unloathly home, Lily, he said softly.
Lily opened her eyes and drew a shuddering breath.
It's important to keep a clean home.
She said simply, nodding to herself in self-agreement.
How long have you lived here?
Father Alex asked.
Since before you were born, priest.
She said, with a testy edge coming back in her voice,
the priest grinned.
He preferred when the penitent was lucid.
Whether or not they spoke acerbically.
That would mean a long time ago indeed.
A hero pied calmly.
At that it began to rain, ostensibly hard.
The droplets bombarded the glass of the bedroom window with unexpected force and sudden rhythm.
Lully began to cough, and the spell was of the more violent variety.
A nearby glass of water sat on her nightstand, and Father Alice reached for it and brought it to her lips.
She drank greedily, then shoved his hand away, spilling some of the contents onto her quilt.
The wet spot blended in with some older, more yellow stains.
He waited until the fit passed before speaking again.
I was told that you wanted to make confession.
He said when she seemed more stably reposed.
I wish to make a confession to you.
Lily said as her voice collapsed into a noisy grinding breath.
Father Alex studied her features,
mentally noting that the valleys are ridges that made up the ancient wrinkles in her face.
He mused on the significance at the end of one's life.
life. It was common to describe them as indicative of life well-lived.
Having only a short time in her presence, he wondered if those who knew Lily would say the same
about hers. Only the Lord could judge. You're not Catholic, are you?
He asked gently, already knowing the answer. Lily's crack lips curled into a smile.
I'm a believer.
She said simply.
Staring into the priest's dark eyes as best as her mere blinded once could.
Then I'm ready to listen, Lily, said Father Alex, eager to hear all that she had to say.
Jen must be here.
She said firmly, glowering at him.
Are you certain?
Confession is sacred.
Most penitents.
Father Alex began.
I wish for Jen to be here, she cried out.
Cutting into the delicate nature of Father Alex's intonations and deliberate delivery.
Of course.
Ah.
He said as he stood up and turned around to retrieve a young pale woman.
But Jen was already in the room, standing just inside of the door.
which caused him to swallow his words and marvel at Jen's silent nature.
I'm here, Jen said.
She appeared unmoored and rocked back and forth in a manner that was unmistakably agitated.
Perhaps it was even pathological.
Good.
Lily noted, bearing her spoiled teeth.
Now, we may begin.
Father Alex took a moment.
Watching the scared young woman, considering the possible catalysts for her troubles, then sat back down.
Duty must come first.
I'm ready when you are.
He said, turning his back on Jen and addressing the enfeebled woman once more.
How should I begin?
She asked, almost pleasantly.
Honestly, just be honest.
honest with me, said Father Alex, leaning forward. He was closer to her face now, and her fetid breath
enveloped him in further distorted olfaction. He ignored the smell and waited for her to speak.
I've done a lot of bad things, Father Alex. She said finally, no one but the Lord is flawless.
all of mankind is lacking.
He said in a scripted manner of response.
Have you ever killed anyone, priest?
Because I have.
The Lord wanted to know the depths of my loyalty.
Oh, not your Lord, of course.
Lily said.
Father Alex's gaze moved to Jenna,
as she tried and failed to shrink to be unnoticeable.
I will spare you the details,
only because I'm eager to move forward.
Did you know that infant fat contains power?
It extends life.
It enhances it.
It allows it.
allows mortals to walk to and fro between this world and the next and with all authority.
Father Alex sat motionless, taking in all that the woman conceded.
It was not the typical act of confession by any measure of the penitents that he had known in this neighborhood, or anywhere for that matter.
but if what he heard was mortifying, he remained outwardly placid and stoic.
Lily searched for any sense of fear or discomfort in the priest's face, but she saw nothing.
Perhaps it's my poor vision, she thought, to herself.
Her failing, blurry senses caught a glimpse of the old wooden clock, one of her favorites,
hanging on the wall behind the priest.
And she gestured towards the antique with her bony hand.
I claimed that from the little one's home.
It seemed appropriate to me.
A simple reminder of the preciousness of time.
And of course, I just wanted it.
Lily started to laugh, but it turned into a cough,
followed immediately by the wind picking up and screaming to a crescendo.
Storm outside appeared to mock them,
and the same shock of Lily's admission.
A rogue tree branch slammed through the window,
shattering the glass into thousands of shimmering pieces.
Jen jumped at the suddenness of the crash, and Father Alex stood slowly, loomed over the bed with a newly self-pronounced murderous.
Sit.
Lily spurred it out between hacks.
But neither Jen nor Father Alex attempted to make any aid to the old woman.
They waited until the coughing spasms died, which was only a few seconds of.
abrasive rancor. For Father Alex took his seat once more, and Jen merged her back into the
false comfort of the wall. And though her throat burned and her lungs threatened to burst,
Lily was elated, for she had no doubts as to the source of the storm. It was her lord,
coming to aid her in her most triumphant and glorious time.
Once she was back in control of her voice, she continued her confession.
The clock was not all I took.
Jen was there, and I claimed her as my own.
She was not much older, but she didn't scream once,
as I cut her baby sister into pieces.
I thought it admirable.
So I spared her.
And when I'm anointed, standing side by side with the Lord as his bride,
Jen shall continue my work here.
Lily said with a mixture of both immutable will and contempt.
Jen shrank you back even further and slid down the wall with her mouth agape.
You don't remember, do you?
Jen shook her head, still stunned by the relevatory dread.
No, she didn't know, priest.
but it was time.
So this, this is what I wanted to tell you, Father Alex.
This is my confession, but there is one more thing.
Though the blood of babes have given me a long life and dominion,
there is even more power.
In the blood of a priest.
She screamed with all the powers of hell she had left in her broken down body and lunged at Father Alex.
His eyes widened.
He looked down to see a knife protruding from his belly, held by Lily's cadaverous hand.
He tumbled over and fell to the floor.
And Jenda offered her own screams to harmonize with that of the bloody disdeme.
sentence. And now
the Lord
will reward me with
eternity because you came
so willingly to the
slaughter.
She began to laugh.
Jen
sobbed uncontrollably,
holding her face in her hands.
Father Alex's
moans mixed with terrible
mirth from the old
evil hag.
However,
After a moment of unmelodious, shrill symphony, he joined Lily's dark cheer with his own wicked laughter.
Then with a snarl, he stood erect and snatched the wooden carved clock from the wall behind him,
and smashed it over Lily's face, breaking her jaw and unhinging it.
He then sprang over to Jen and grabbed the young woman by her girl.
Gaunt-faced and hurled her to the floor, instantly breaking her neck.
Lily's eyes darted back and forth as her breathing became an even more horrible sound than it was
before.
Father Alex walked over to Jen's lifeless body and stood over her, taking in the crumbled,
misshaping details.
She seemed kind, he said indifferently.
completely devoid of emotion.
Then like a starving beast,
he tore Jen apart with only his hands and teeth,
as Lily watched from her deathbed.
The gore painted the room in glistening reds,
staining the wood finishes and coloring Lily's bone-white hair to a ripe crimson.
After a few brutal moments, he stood back up,
covered in Jen's decimated viscera,
And I dressed Lily with a voice that was both his own and that of a hollow infinity.
You thought that one child, priest, would bring you that esteem.
Perkins in this manner is intriguing, but not enough to merit anything more than suffering.
Said Father Alex to the mutilated old woman.
Because you've earned your eternity, you will not be how you envisioned it.
and with a rapturous howl.
The figure of the priest ripped Lily apart,
with the barbarity rarely seen.
Even amongst the most disturbed men,
her screams were smothered into nothingness.
Lily's home was quiet and the sky was clear
as Father Alex emerged from the front door.
His clothes were clean,
and his face was unblemished and unbothered as ever.
In the coming weeks, the smell from Lily and Jen's rot would alert the neighbors to call the local police.
Where the terrible scene would make one of the rookie cops vomit all over his newly pressed uniform.
It would be the second time since that night where brutality stole away, the peace of the community.
First being the several murders of several priests, the local rectory, occurring.
the very night of Lily's confession.
Only Father Alex would survive that attack,
and his stature among his flock and beyond would become even stronger
through the symphony and grief of strangers.
Of course he already knew all of this,
and he mentally rehearsed what he would tell the police
when he called them about the murdered priests,
sending them on a wild hunt that would ultimately lead
to an innocent man's arrest.
It would be fun.
He enjoyed this form and enjoyed being a priest.
He smiled to himself as he walked back to the dwelling that Father Alex called home,
whistling his favorite tune from his favorite composer.
And next, after waking up trapped in a strange room containing only a deep swimming pool
and two towering water slides, a college student desperately searches for a way to escape
before time runs out.
From Raider Piper, Rob been narrated by Alicia Atkins.
Creepy presents, better to drown.
Water leapt gently at my bare feet, stripped of my socks and shoes that I had tossed into a corner
hours ago.
I stared into the blue sloshing pool, squinting into the depths.
At about 11 feet down, I stopped being able to see.
sea, shadows overtaking the otherwise clear water, too deep to make out.
According to the depth measurement on the far wall of the pool, it went down 63 feet.
I couldn't help but morbidly wonder, what lived down there at the bottom of the pool?
What I could feel was watching me, hair raising on the back of my neck whenever I turned my back to the
hungry water. What made me scramble out of the waves with an uncontrolled.
primal fear whenever I fell into the shallows, even though it appeared as if nothing was coming to get me.
I knew something was there, waiting.
I just didn't know what.
I wondered how long it would take for that monster to drag me down to the depths.
How long would it take for the air to leave my lungs, bubbling back up to the surface through the brackish water?
How long would it take for me to drown?
how long it would take for people to find my body.
I shook my head, pushing the morbid thoughts from my mind,
rising to my feet and forcibly stepping away from the pool.
My feet slapped against wet tile.
When I'd first gotten here, the tile had been dry.
The water in the pool had been rising, though,
spilling over the edge and out onto the floor.
All right, stop staring into the pool like a sad loser.
I yelled at the room, my voice echoing against the gray walls.
Back to work!
I paused next to the pool to squeeze water out of my damp pants before strolling over to where my shoes and socks sat.
I was relieved to find that at least my socks were somewhat dry by now,
carefully balanced on top of my shoes after I'd fallen into the pool several hours ago,
while trying to climb up the inside of one of the slides.
The same could not be set for my shoes,
and the rest of my clothes.
I shivered slightly, clothes clinging to my damp skin.
I pulled my shoes and socks back on,
red nail-polished catching and flaking off as I did.
My once pristine nails were now broken and chipped,
leaving a small red trail behind me wherever I went.
I grimaced when I noticed the lingering green residue glued to my palms,
sticky and clinging to my skin.
The scum was left to my skin.
over from when I had attempted to climb up the inside of the slides. I had no idea exactly what
it was, but it was too sticky and too dark to be algae. And when I'd experimentally sniffed the
slime, I found that it smelled alarmingly metallic, like blood. I wiped the residue off of my jeans
and tried not to think about it. At least I don't have to deal with wet socks. I grumble to myself,
reaching up to pull my dripping locks back into a ponytail,
my hair having freed itself during my previous escape attempt.
My voice, despite my best efforts, did little to feel the deafening silence of the room.
With my hair up and shoes back on,
I made my way to the wall where I had taken to scratching tally marks,
the source of my broken nails.
I quietly added a third tally to the wall,
using a small chunk of broken cement that had fallen off somewhere.
I had no idea if it had actually been three days.
It was hard to tell, with no windows and the bright, never-ending fluorescent lighting.
But every time I stood up, my vision darkened,
and my throat ached like sand had been stuffed past my teeth.
I was quickly running out of energy, starving, dehydrated, and restless.
I could only assume,
It had been three days.
Despite my very thorough examination of the room over the last three days, though,
I still had no idea where I was or how I had gotten there.
I had woken here three days ago, sprawled out on the rough gray tile, head pounding,
with no clue how I had ended up in this strange room.
The room was fairly large, with half of it taken up by the pool.
There were two bright red closed-off tube slides that disappeared into the tall, vaulted ceiling.
I had attempted to climb up the insides of both twisting slides, but the only result I got was my drenched clothes.
Besides that, there wasn't anything else in the room, just the pool and the slides.
I shivered at the very memory of climbing up those slides.
It had been small within the tube, and it felt like the walls were closed.
in on me. The metallic smell had been overwhelming, leaving me lightheaded as I tried to climb.
I could swear that over the sound of my heavy breaths that I could hear something skittering in the
dark, claws scraping against the inside of the slide, could swear I had seen a dark,
hungry mouth waiting at the bottom, just waiting for me to slip and fall into its jaws.
I blinked, shuddering, and was surprised to find myself just sitting there, staring at the tally marks on the wall.
I had been staring off into space a lot lately, I'd noticed.
I was panting just from the few movements I had made.
Spots flickered in my eyes.
Not for the first time, I debated drinking the pool water.
I blinked again.
I think I might have passed out at one point,
just sitting there, head bobbing limply.
The fluorescent lights burned my eyes, watering underneath the harsh beams.
I had to shut my eyes and open them slowly, in an attempt to adjust my pupils to the blaring bulbs.
I had no idea how long I'd been unaware of my surroundings.
It could have been hours or just a few minutes.
It was impossible to tell.
When I opened my eyes again, they fell on the three flaking tally marks, crooked and small.
I want to go home.
I said, quietly, voice raspy and loud in the silent room.
The only other noise, the soft lapping of the water in the pool.
I want to go home.
I wept, attempting to straighten myself to a standing position, head lolling forward.
My voice scraped against my throat, drawing blood that I could taste on the back of my tongue,
pennies dancing against my taste buds.
I wiped a tear off my cheek.
I was so dehydrated at this point that I could only muster that single tear.
When I'd first woken up here, I sobbed like a baby.
Now I could barely cry at all.
I slowly crawled my way to the pool, fingers clawing.
at the tile. What would my parents think if they saw me like this? What would my parents do if I
died here? How would they have a funeral if they had no body to bury? Left here in this hell.
I had a test coming up next week that I had spent hours studying for. I had been two months away
from finishing my chemistry major. I had promised to take my girlfriend out to see the tulip fields
that Friday, since she had never seen them. How could I do any of that if I were dead?
I want to go home. I begged. I reached the edge of the pool. With a dry sob, I stuck my chin in the
water like a dog and drank. The water tasted like chlorine. I gagged on the first mouthful,
but forced myself to swallow. I drank as much as I could before dragging myself back onto land.
Even on the tile, the water covered my ears, waves muffling the lights buzzing above,
making everything feel distant and unreachable as I lay on my back.
I passed out again.
When I woke up, I felt less like dying.
I was still weak with hunger, my hands trembling harshly, and my mouth tasted foul.
But I could stand up and walk without getting too dizzy.
I announced to the silent room, pointing an accusing finger at the water.
Take that, pool. I didn't die from drinking you.
I paused, frowning.
Uh, knock on wood?
There was no wood in the room, so I just knocked on the wall.
With my energy restored, I resumed my mission to search for an exit with vigor.
My search only increased in intensity when I realized that the water had risen to my
ankles. It was rising faster.
Damn it, I muttered, kicking at the water, sending it splashing against the wall as I waited
forward. My socks were soaked again. If I didn't hurry, I'd either starved death or drowned because
of the rising water. Whichever came first. Awesome. What great choices of death I have.
I said out loud, sarcasm biting against the quiet water.
With a sudden sense of urgency, one that had been bogged down by exhaustion,
and the relative peace in the room until now,
I ran through the room, running my hand against the wall,
searching for a hidden door, a secret switch, anything.
Finding nothing, I moved my gaze back to the slides.
Previously, I had tried to climb the inside of the slide,
But as my gaze traveled slowly up the length of the tubes,
I was surprised to see light peeking through the edges where the plastic met the ceiling.
I let my gaze linger on the ridges of the slide,
hope beginning to rise in my chest.
Would it be easier to reach the ceiling by climbing the outside of the slide,
rather than the slippery smooth inside?
Determined to try out my new idea,
I edged around the surface of the pool,
water sloshing close to my knees.
I ended up on the tile right by one of the slides.
Taking a deep breath, I tried to wheel my limbs to stop shaking.
Once the trembling had eased from my hands, I reached out, grasping the ridge of the slide,
and took a standing leap forward, clinging to the outside of the slide.
The slide rattled under my weight, and I waited, tense, for the slide to stop shaking.
When it eventually settled, I began to inch my way up the tube, hands clenched around it tightly,
plastic eating away at my skin. It must have taken at least an hour to reach the ceiling.
I had to keep pausing to take great heaving breaths, exhaustion tugging at my bones as I panted.
My fingers were cracked and bleeding from gripping the sharp edges of the slide, and my ears were
beginning to ring, bells filling my head to the point that I could no longer hear my own heartbeat.
But finally, I had made it to the top. The ceiling was oddly spongy and soft, and when I tentatively
reached a hand upward, wrapping my legs tightly around the slide, and prodded hesitantly at the ceiling
attached to the plastic of the slide, it gave way, bending underneath my fingers. My eyes widened,
And I pushed harder, beginning to tear the ceiling away from the plastic.
Soft, dim light greeted my vision, caressing my eyes and head gently in comparison to the fluorescent lights.
I caught a glimpse of green grass, a lone dandelion, and couldn't help the laugh that escaped my mouth.
Caught up in my excitement, I began to shove away the ceiling, ripping it to shreds violently,
determined to create a hole big enough to fit through.
Any pain that I'd been feeling faded away with pure adrenaline, pulse thumping in my ears like a drum,
breath warm and shallow as I panted, leaning forward to just reach a little more ceiling,
a little more, and then it would be wide enough that I could escape, just a little more.
I hadn't even realized how far forward I had leaned, how weak my legs had become.
The way my whole body trembled as I tried to really.
rip apart the ceiling with energy I no longer possessed.
Oh, I thought as if regarding another person.
I was so close, wasn't I?
If I had done this a little bit earlier, if I had been a little bit more careful, I would have been free.
I plummeted towards the ground.
My arm slammed against the edge of the pool, taking the brunt of the fall.
hitting the tile with a loud smack,
ulna splitting through the skin like my flesh was paper.
My head bounced forward with the momentum,
the edge of my forehead colliding with the floor.
The world spun violently,
and boiling blood began to spill from the side of my head,
saining the clear blue pool with shades of red.
I flailed as my body began to slip off the edge and into the pool,
choking and coughing as water flowed,
blooded into my mouth, head pounding as blood caked into my hair and stained my skin and clothes.
My arm burned as if fire were licking up the length of the limb, fingers numb at the tips as if
with frostbite. I gurgled desperately, spitting out water as I tried to heave myself back
onto the slick tile with my good arm, but I was too disoriented to do so. As I sobbed, blood, trailing down the back of my
neck. Distantly, I wonder if it would have been better to have just broken my neck during the fall.
My death would have been faster, at least. I just wanted it to be over. As I tried to wipe pink
water from my eyes, legs thrashing and sending waves of liquid splashing over the edge, flooding the
room further. I could only think that I wanted it all to be over. That's so. That's.
when it grabbed me.
A hand, gently wrapping around my ankle.
It gave a friendly tug, as if testing its strength.
I could only make out a dark shape underneath me, eyes bleary.
I was sure that it must have smelled my blood, like a shark,
sniffing through red-tinted bubbles to find where water met flesh.
Its teeth clamped around my leg,
tearing through the meat of my calf.
I screamed, hoarse and blood-curdling,
searing pain lancing up my leg and through my spine.
The creature kept chewing,
slowly tearing away pieces of my skin,
as if it were a delicate meal,
almost gentle with its touch.
As my consciousness slowly faded to black,
my last thought was unbidden,
not a goodbye to my family and friends, but instead something as morbid and dark as the water
swallowing me whole. It would have been better to just drown.
And finally, while babysitting during a violent storm, a teenager is stalked by someone or
something that keeps begging to be let inside.
From writer G. Christopher Williams, creepy presents, baby teeth.
She stood on the porch and watched the rain.
It fell in thick, heavy sheets, very hard and very fast.
So hard and fast, in fact, that when she extended her hand into the wall of water,
it was swallowed completely in its torrent.
It was the best time of night when babysitting.
When your charge was fast asleep,
and the big, weird house that she didn't belong in belongs to you.
Audrey withdrew her hand from the pouring rain and a lot of her.
the chilly water to drip down her arm onto the porch.
The big puddle would dry on its own, she thought,
figuring that she would have enough to clean up before the Baxter's return from their party.
Not that Beatrice made much of a mess.
She was a baby, after all.
She'd spent most of the earlier portion of the evening rolling back and forth on her back
while holding a ring of plastic keys high above her head.
She snapped her gums and her few tiny white teeth at those keys whenever they happened to
angle close enough to possibly reach with her mouth.
It was time to at least feign to do her job.
She sighed as she abandoned her view of the storm.
Check in on Beatrice just to be sure, she thought.
As if something would happen to her in an empty house.
She shook her head at the simplicity of babysitting at this point in the evening.
Before checking, though, she was thirsty, so she took a quick right instead of heading upstairs.
As she stood there drinking juice, a dim white light began to play along the walls of the hallway just beyond a kitchen.
It wasn't the light produced by car headlights.
It was much softer than that.
She hadn't left any lights on in the living room when she turned off the television and went out to the porch a few minutes ago.
Feeling confused, she put her glass down on the counter and went to investigate.
Weirdly, when she entered the room, the television was on.
but the display was so strange that she had a powerful sense of something otherworldly existing in the space.
Well, for a few moments, the television displayed a field of snow and emitted the soft growl of white noise,
like a television might have done decades and decades ago.
A face began to emerge through that field.
A wistply bearded man pressed his cheek grotesquely against the screen.
His thick, bulbous nose was pushed to skew against it.
and he squeezed his left eye shut as his other giant pop eye looked out at her.
People scanning up and down, left and right.
He licked his lips and continued to press his face harder and harder against the glass
as if trying to shove it through the television screen into the living room.
You need to let me in.
The creature insisted.
His thick fingers soon emerged right next to the face,
pressing at the glass just as hard again as of seeking a way out.
You need to let me in.
She fought a queasy feeling that was rising in her gorge
and looked frantically for the remote.
It lay perched on the edge of the arm of the couch.
She lunged forward and, catching it up, pressed the power button.
The image of the face vanished.
With the remote hanging from her right hand,
Audrey stood relieved, staring at the empty screen.
She could have sworn that she turned that thing off.
What a creepy movie.
Normally she liked a creepy film.
That was when she was with her friend Judith,
not alone in a house that she didn't really know all that well.
Replacing the remote on the arm of the couch,
she returned to the kitchen to put her glass away.
She always liked to clean up after.
herself as soon as possible when babysitting.
She didn't like the idea of not keeping the house straightened up as she went.
That left much less to concern oneself with before the homeowners returned.
In truth, she should probably go get a towel to soak up the puddle that she had left on the porch.
She was far too concerned with leaving a good impression on the people who hired her to leave
any evidence behind that she wasn't a responsible and capable sitter.
Judith would have left the puddle and eaten the whole bag of Fritos left for her in the kitchen,
but not Audrey.
Audrey never touched the chips and would leave them untouched for the whole of the evening,
and she wasn't leaving that puddle for them to judge her by either.
After putting the glass in the dishwasher,
she left the kitchen and mounted the stairs in search of a linen closet.
Her phone vibrated in her pocket,
unconcerned but curious, she casually took it out and glanced at its face.
Was Judith calling now?
But it wasn't Judith's voice she heard when she answered and turned on the speakerphone,
nor was it Judith's avatar, a German shepherd with a lolling tongue that remained on the phone's screen.
Instead, the screen looked gray and cloudy.
A voice intoned,
We need to talk
That horribly widening eye emerged
From the cloudy darkness of the screen
Then additional features appeared
Thick lips framed by wispy hair
And the smaller eye that darted in opposing directions
From the dominant pop-eye that belonged
To the weird, leering man
We need to talk
Two spittle-fleck lips mouted again
Audrey pressed the cell phone screen
where the disconnect button usually lay
and was relieved to see only her own
distressed reflection in the now
otherwise dark screen.
She had reached the top of the stairs, though,
and now heard a gentle tapping
coming from behind her.
She was faced with another darkened glass,
the glass of the window behind the stairs,
which framed the apparition
of that pop-eyed face once again.
The face pressed against the glass,
pressing harder and harder,
distorting itself into uglier and uglier shapes.
Frantic fingers searched the face of the glass as if they could locate some aperture,
some opening to press those lips and that nose and those asymmetrically sized eyes through.
It's time for me to come in.
He said, his face twisting into a grimace, then a grin.
Stay out! Stay out!
She shouted over and over again, turning from that grin in her.
treating into Beatrice's room.
She thought she heard the voice again from behind her.
It's time for me to come in.
However, as she turned towards the baby's crib in front of her,
a little hunched figure already stood on the stool with its back towards her,
hovering over the crib.
It turned, revealing the familiar, frightful face smiling toothsomely now.
I'm already here.
He's.
said. Then the little man extended his hand towards her, turning his palm up. On it lay three
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