Creepy - Seventeen
Episode Date: April 2, 2018No bad deed is ever forgotten...or forgiven...***Content Warning: child death, suicide***Written by Dave Taylor, with guest narration by Heather Thomas***Subscribe to the show on YouTube at: https://...www.youtube.com/channel/UCQ3SrH_3fsROXFAjomKcUtw***Please consider supporting the podcast at Patreon.com/Creepypod or creepypod.com/support***Produced by Steve Blizin***Title music by Alex Aldea***Intro/Outro Narration by Joe Stofko Hosted on Acast. See acast.com/privacy for more information. Hosted by Simplecast, an AdsWizz company. See pcm.adswizz.com for information about our collection and use of personal data for advertising.
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Written by Dave Taylor
Edgar raised his head from his chest.
back pressed firmly into his favorite recliner.
His entire body drenched in cold sweat.
He stared into the shadows at the edge of the living room,
eyes welling with tears as he lifted the revolver slowly and deliberately to his temple.
17, he whispered to the darkness.
The index finger of his right hand had already found its perch on the trigger during the weapon's assent,
during which he had hesitated no more than a second.
His only concern ensuring that the angle he chose would prove fatal.
He clenched his left hand into a fist at his side, stealing his will.
He inhaled sharply, and with further need of neither breath nor will, he clenched his right hand.
Darkness flashed brilliantly to light from the barrel of a 38th special, as the gunshots dull thunder echoed around the room.
the remains of Edgar Freeman slumped sideways in what had once been his favorite chair.
The other man with him in that chamber smiled softly.
The one in the shadows who have been briefly illuminated by the muzzle flare.
That sallow man in the dark suit with the pale blue eyes.
He smiled as everything turned gray.
Edgar flailed his way to a sitting position,
ripping the covers off the bed as he always did when waking from the,
that goddamn nightmare. After the fourth night in a row with the same dream he'd taken to sleeping
with his bedside lamp turned on. After the sixth night in a row, his frenzy upon waking
had sent it crashing to the floor, ball broken and shade cracked by the impact. Tonight had been
the eighth night, and he had recited every vulgarity he could recall into the inky darkness
of his bedroom. He swore that today he'd find the time to go purchase a box of light
involuntarily recalling the stranger in the dream's inappropriately sweet smile.
He reminded himself to ask the clerk for their highest wadage.
After a warm shower and a few minutes collecting his thoughts on the side of the bed,
Edgar said about his day.
Nearly tasteless scrambled eggs and coffee which would have been merciful if it had been tasteless
comprised his breakfast, and his thoughts turned to how absurdly better Haley's morning meal would have
been. Whatever other problems they had, Haley's cooking had been beyond reproach. He would regularly
wake to the mouth-watering aroma of a nutritious breakfast which he had prepared for him, usually egg
whites on a weak English muffin with a tall glass of orange juice. At least, before the morning
sickness had started and kept her occupied in her prayers to the porcelain goddess for her first
waking hour of every day.
All this, he reminded himself briefly, was in the past now.
As the vice president of marking for the second largest athletic apparel company in the country,
and, as he thought of himself, a reasonably attractive man,
Edgar was more than used to the occasional flirting, both casual and aggressive,
from young female interns and employees within his department.
It came with the territory, and it was never anything he couldn't brush off.
off. Thoughts of either taking it further than flirtations or reporting it to human resources
very rarely crossed his mind. The former on account of his pregnant wife, the latter on account of
the ego boost it provided. One month ago, however, Agripp began an affair with a particularly
buxom college intern named Samantha. Above and below the brassiere, she had been nothing special,
just a warm body to quell the urges to which Haley had been unwilling or unable to take her.
attend after entering her third trimester.
Even the sex was unremarkable.
Their first rendezvous took place in a motel a few blocks away from the office,
the type of place with bay windows overlooking less than scenic freeway overpasses,
and even the roaches used black lights before scurrying under the unmade bed.
As a cursory nod to legitimacy, the establishment stopped short of offering rates on a per-hour basis.
a fact known because Edgar had inquired upon checking in.
After that first encounter, the two grew bolder and less discerning in their indiscretions.
Edgar's office came next, and that time had been a little more satisfying,
a combination of the danger and the skirt Samantha kept on at his request.
But boldness turned quickly to carelessness,
and Edgar was an apprentice of infidelity less than two weeks
before Haley discovered his betrayal.
Whether it was a whiff of unfamiliar perfume
or a phone call from one of Edgar's jealous rejects
who had spotted the two of them around the office,
his adultery with Samantha was in the topic
to which Edgar returned home from work.
The accusation was on her face the minute he walked through the door.
He had come home late from a particularly wild romp with Samantha,
and the words from Haley's trembling lips quickly disclosed
exactly how much she knew. It would have been pointless to lie. She had too many details and he
too little imagination. So Edgar confessed and made a perfunctory effort to justify his behavior.
She cursed him with the severity and intensity which Edgar had never seen from her before.
And in her final words to him, she made it clear that she was leaving and that she would make sure
he would never in his life have a role in raising their child.
Despite his heartache at the prospect of losing Haley, Edgar had spent too long in a cut-throat business to take threats passively, even from his wife.
He laughed bitterly and reminded her of the quality of the lawyers within his means.
When he was done, Edgar said with words he instantly regretted but found himself powerless to silence.
She would be lucky to get weekends and a few holidays with the kid.
That was a lie, and he knew it.
But at the time, his main objective was to get off the defensive and regain the upper hand in the fight,
maybe even make Haley reconsider her choice to leave.
He would happily cut some hefty checks to a marriage counselor if it saved him from the much larger ones
in the form of alimony and child support.
But something in the way Haley was smiling at him suggested that he had misunderstood her intentions.
And as he realized far too late,
if he had been more observant he might have noticed an empty hook on their key caddy and connected it to that sardonic grin she was wearing she hadn't left right away like he had expected
isn't that always the way it works in movies and on television the guy comes out of the bathroom or back from the bar a little while after the fight to find the gal's suitcase dusted off and bulging with all the expensive clothes he brought her over the course of their relationship
her haughty and defiant, him prostrate and pleading.
Edgar would have never played the latter role in his life,
but he had fully expected the former from Haley.
Instead, an hour after he walked away from their screaming match
to a much-needed shower,
he stuck his head in the living room to find her sitting in his favorite chair.
What a bitch!
Staring off into space and rubbing her,
God damn, is she ready to pop, pregnant stomach.
As far as Edgar was concerned, that was the end of the first of presumably many arguments on the subject.
He ascended the stairs quietly and slipped into bed.
The day had been long enough, and she clearly wasn't going anywhere or she would have left already.
Haley never came to bed, but neither did he hear the front door slamming behind her before he drifted off,
so it seemed she had decided to stay at least for the night.
All will be well, Edgar told himself his sleep overtook him,
but I doubt she's going to fix my breakfast for a few days.
The noise which ripped him out of that deep slumber came just after 5 o'clock in the morning,
according to his alarm clock.
By the time consciousness took hold, the sound had died as quickly as it came.
He stood reflexively and scanned over the bed with eyes barely awake enough for even that simple task.
eventually determining Haley's side to be empty, Higgard shuffled out of the bedroom door
and down the stairs to determine what caused the sudden clamor.
He didn't need to reach the bottom of the staircase or allow his eyes further time to adjust
to know that she had decided to leave him after all.
One glance into the living room cleared up any doubt on that subject.
There were no bulging suitcases or hoddy looks.
Just an unlocked and opened gun cabinet.
A crimson splatter on the wall, and a steady trickle of the same, beating down the side of his
favorite chair and pooling on the hardwood floor beside it.
After a moment of shock and paralysis, Edgar lunged for the house phone in huge, desperate strides.
The rapidity was not for the sake of Haley, through whose newly ventilated skull he could clearly
catch glimpses at the televised presidential debate at the far side of the room.
but for her blameless passenger of seven and a half months.
He gave all the pertinent information to the infuriatingly indifferent emergency control room operator
and waited in the hallway with the front door flung open wide.
The gunshot had drawn a crowd of early waking neighbors to the driveway in front of the Freeman residence,
a phenomenon bred not out of bravery in the face of danger,
but from casual ignorance of danger reserved exclusively for neighborhood.
peoples peopled by the wealthy and sheltered.
They eyed him accusingly, none with less than dawning suspicion in their gaze.
Eggur raged at them for this, first with harsh thoughts, then with guttural growls and impotent
flailings.
They would collectively step backwards when his fury and frustration flowed strongest and advance
again when the yelling waned in ferocity.
A human tide of slack-jaw gawkers.
The spectacle was temporarily dissolved by the wailing sirens and subsequent appearance of an advanced life support ambulance,
from which paramedics rapidly spawned just a few minutes after Edgar's conversation with their dispatcher,
another feature exclusive to the type of neighborhood in which Edgar and Haley Freeman resided.
The crowd made way for the emergency vehicles, but soon found new vantage point on Edgar's lawn.
The paramedics discovered Edgar's wife slumped over in his recliner,
and strapped her lifeless form into a gurney.
Once she was properly secure, they wheeled her rapidly out of the house and into the back of
their ambulance.
Edgar jumped in as well, but there was no time to either ask or answer any questions before the
crew slammed the bay doors and sped off towards the county hospital.
Between checking vital signs and attempts to keep oxygen pumping into the corpse of his wife
for the sake of their unborn child, Edgar noted the cautious glance as being shot his way
by the paramedics, as well as the blue flashes from the multiple police vehicles which followed
close behind the ambulance.
I didn't have anything to do with it.
I wanted to say, to scream.
But in the back of his mind, he knew that was just a degree or two away from being precisely
the truth.
And so he remained silent.
He thought they would throw handcuffs on him as soon as they arrived at the hospital.
But instead, the throng of police officers just explained they would wait with Edgar.
while the doctors did what they could for the baby.
He maybe get some information from him if he felt up to talking.
Edgar nodded assent,
largely because the officers bore all the mannerisms of men
who intended to get some information from him
whether or not he felt up to talking.
They stood outside the operating room,
lined up in the viewing area.
The officers gave Edgar his space.
His face mere inches from the glass,
taking occasional breaks to wipe the window,
off with his sleeve after frantic breaths had fogged it to the point of opacity.
They questioned him hesitantly.
He answered them hastily and with little regard for the words he used.
His concerns were elsewhere, and he knew that there was nothing he could unintentionally
blurt out to incriminate himself.
He watched as a surgeon made a large incision in Haley's lower abdomen.
At least she's sedated for this.
Edgar thought insanely.
and said about removing the baby from her womb.
Within a few minutes, everyone in the viewing area knew everything they needed to know.
The officers knew that Haley had apparently died by her own hand.
The autopsy would either confirm or deny this,
that she had likely done it as a result of her husband's infidelity,
and that Edgar had seen little or no warning signs leading up to the suicide.
Edgar, meanwhile, knew that the baby was alive but fading fast,
that the baby was a boy.
They wanted the gender to be a surprise,
one of the few things on which he and Haley never disagreed,
and that the baby was being placed in an incubator
as a last-ditch effort to save its life.
Agri stood outside the room,
the police now keeping an even more respectful distance
as he watched his infant son die.
There was little commotion about it,
and little the doctors could do to prevent it.
The child's eyes opened once in the entire time,
time, and the next thing Edgar knew they were pronouncing the time of death at 5.46 a.m.
They just caught him out of Haley at 529, Edgar thought frantically.
My kid, my son, was alive less than half an hour.
I didn't even have time to name him.
A girl and Haley names him a boy and I name him.
That was a promise we made since we couldn't even fucking agree.
on names. Edgar slammed his fist into the wall and distantly felt his knuckles grinding.
As he fell to his knees, his hand hurt far less than the scalding hot tears welling behind his eyes.
That was two weeks ago. Today, Edgar ate nearly tasteless scrambled eggs and drank coffee
that would have been merciful if it were tasteless.
Eight nights now, he lived with a nightmare of killing himself, destroying any sense.
semblance of sleep.
Eight nights now he lived with the man in the shadows of that nightmare smiling at his decision
to do so.
Light bulbs.
A huge box of them.
Highest watchage to the hardware store cells.
Today after work.
Edgar again reminded himself of the errand as he threw on his jacket and walked out the door.
Work went much the same as always, only with he had a distraction and morbid water cooler fodder
provided by his wife's suicide. It was annoying more than anything. Edgar first became
consciously aware of a man's form standing just outside the threshold of his office's open doorway
when he glanced at the clock to determine exactly how far into the night he had been lost in
paperwork. He had come to work at dawn and knew it was now certainly dusk at a minimum. The day
had been typical office fare for the return of a bereaved co-worker. Mindless play.
platitudes and weightless sympathy, empty words from the empty hearts if people paid just enough
to pretend to care, but not enough to do so convincingly.
There was no telling exactly how long the man had been silently standing in the darkness of the
hallway, but Edgar recollected the first vague feelings of being watched a few minutes prior.
Everyone but the night shift security guard had left hours ago, giving him a welcome respite
in which to concentrate and catch up on missed work.
Or so you had thought, until this new interruption.
Hello?
Edgar hesitantly greeted the interloper,
fearing the inevitable next in a long line of ham-handed jabs at emotional consolment.
Evening, sir.
The reply came, grating and flemy.
His eyes still attempting to adjust the drastic change from the brightness of his
office to the hallway illuminated only by the ambient moonlight, streaking in from sporadically placed
windows. Edgar judged by the unfamiliar voice that this was either a stranger, a vendor, perhaps,
or a colleague with particularly a nasty cold that he'd better not be spreading around.
Step inside. I've been burning holes in my retinas under the slam for the past two hours. I can't
see a damn thing out there. Can't really stay. The man intoned.
practically gargling.
Just passing through.
Yeah, I know what you mean.
It's been quitting time for...
Have we met?
Edgar's eyes had begun to adjust, and he grew uneasy.
The stranger was still dim and blurry,
but clearly wearing a dark suit of indeterminable quality.
Another minute, it would be clear
if this was some sort of tight-ass internal auditor
from the 14th floor, or another detective sniffing around after Haley's death.
Whoever it was, the suit betrayed him for a stranger.
Fridays around the office were always casual day,
even when the senior executives wore polos and khakis.
The man was showing no signs of leaving,
so Edgar made his eyes next mission determining whether or not
he had one of those idiotic access badge and lanyards they all had to wear around the building.
I'm new.
I'm a messenger.
I'm here to deliver a package.
Edgar cocked his head, dubious.
A courier in a three-piece suit?
Pull the other one.
No badge either.
Edgar did not reply, hoping the process server, Jehovah's Witness?
Stranger would state their business and move along.
You work such long hours.
Don't you miss your family, sir?
And not materialized in Edgar's throat.
He sat bolt upright in his chair.
After the initial shock wore off, Edgar softened his posture,
quickly convincing himself of the question's innocuous nature.
A labor union representative, of course.
He slipped in here to try and play on some suit's delicate sensibilities,
blather about unpaid overtime and kids'
tucking themselves into bed, just trying to get us to abolish our non-unionizing claws with
factory workers.
I received fair compensation for the work that I do, and so does everyone in our employ.
So no, I'm fine, really.
Thanks.
That should get the point across, you thought, with a certain grim satisfaction.
Oh, I'm sorry to hear that.
The stranger turned slightly as if to leave, paused,
and leaned his head inside the office for the first time.
They certainly miss you.
The words scrape like icicles up the length of Edgar's spine,
gripping his skull with tendrils as cold as the grave.
The face had gone from view as quickly as it came,
the form of the man as well.
But the hideous visage remained burned into Edgar's brain,
and in the recesses of his mind he was acutely aware
that it would be etched there.
until his dying breath.
The eyes were of a milky blue so pale and distant they suggested blindness,
but met Edkers with an unerring gaze that insisted they saw him very well indeed.
The rest of the face was unburdened with such signs of vitality.
The skin was sallow and sickly,
and even at a distance it appeared to be the texture of well-worn leather.
The man's cheeks and eye sockets were sunken.
The flesh drooping loose in these places, yet drawn tight against the skull around his forehead and mouth.
Gaunt and cadaverous, every feature from the greasy matted hair to the quivering waddle of flesh
when he spoke was identical to that of the dark stranger and Edgar's recently acquired nightmares.
But everything else was peripheral to the all-encompassing terror,
which he felt at seeing those damned eyes.
There was something
Unpleasantly familiar in them
Something horrible
Which he found himself powerless to name or explain
Once he regained control of his frozen limbs
Edgar lunged toward the doorway
Where the man had stood moments prior
The elevator hadn't dinged its arrival
And the stubborn latch on the stairway door
Hadn't let out the audible clack
Customary to every opening and closing
He's still somewhere on this floor
Agger thought frantically
The idea gave him strength, but no real clarity of purpose.
He knew only that he needed to confirm that the stranger's presence here was more than merely a result of his overtaxed mind and guilty conscience.
There were no desks, no bathroom stalls, no supply closets left unsearched by the time Edgar's frenzied investigation reached its fever pitch.
Motivational posters tacked to the walls of overbearingly congenial and downright suspiciously diverse business.
people. Smiling and clasping hands warmly seemed to be mocking him.
Silent conspirators against Edgar in his quest.
Sure. We know who he is and where he went.
Edgar could imagine them saying,
but we're too busy leveraging our synergy and engaging in the value-added interfacing
to dialogue with your initiative.
He dragged both hands through his hair, gripping thick handfuls of it and tugging
slightly. His visitor, if something more than a delusion, had departed unseen and unheard. Edgar could hear
his heart pounding wildly, seemingly slamming against the back of his ribcage. He stopped only to grab
his briefcase before sprinting down the stairs to escape the increasingly oppressive emptiness of the
office. The executive parking deck was windled us, and thus even darker than the building from which he had
just departed. It was barren except for him and his Lexus, and likely had been since the security
guard made their most recent tour through it hours ago, the guard having shut off all but the
emergency lights on the way out. Despite that small assurance, Edgar found himself casting
furtive glances over both shoulders, and quickening his pace each time they revealed the total
lack of reason to do so. He had never been a superstitious man. Any fear of my
The monsters have been laid to rest long ago by the waking horrors which walk amongst men brazenly in the daylight.
Student loan debt, insurance premiums, layoffs, mortgage payments, life.
Edgar had learned decades ago, sports fangs and claws that make laughing stocks of those belonging to the vampires and werewolves made invented to cope with it.
And yet, he scolded himself while fumbling nervously for his keys.
All it takes is a little nudge from the imagination to awaken that primordial terror,
to populate the uninhabited darkness with things which have no right to exist.
He was five feet from his car and it just unlocked it with the electronic remote attached to his keys when he heard to scream.
It was high-pitched, womanly, terrified, and resonated from the office area directly behind him.
Did Haley scream that way right before she pulled the trigger?
Edgar thought wildly.
He stopped in his tracks, turned sharply, and saw nothing.
Then, as if in response to his silent inquiry, the gunshot came.
Edgar snatched the cell phone from his pocket, frantically calling 911 for the second time in his many weeks.
He flipped the phone open to his ear, but the operator requesting the nature of his emergency sounded a thousand miles.
miles away. The clacking, dragging footsteps coming down the corridor from the sound of the shot
and towards the executive parking garage, however, sounded very close indeed. Edgar dropped the phone
and practically dove into his car. His foe was on the accelerator as quickly as he could throw
the vehicle into gear. The roads outside the office were illuminated solely by the streetlights
and the occasional flash of the passing motorist headlights. The sun had vanished.
below the horizon hours ago, when people in khakis or sensible shirts departed on a 14-hour
break from pretending to care about each other's children or gastrointestinal complications,
and left Edgar alone with two weeks' worth of backlogged paperwork.
Stress, he rationalized, can make you hear things.
Emotional trauma.
None of it took any pressure off of his mind or the gas pedal as he sped.
toward home. Upon his frantic arrival, Edgar knew something was wrong before he ever burst through
the front door. He hadn't turned any lights off since the nightmares started, much less when he expected
to be out past sunset. And yet he found himself fumbling around the darkness of his hallway for the lights.
When his blind groping finally brushed across the light switch, there was very little surprise
in finding the knob broken off.
Following the day's events, it would have been a bigger surprise if the switch had been in working order.
Instinct told him to turn and flee the house.
But the flashing red number one on his answering machine called with an even greater urgency.
Despite his hands anxious trembling, Edgar's finger struck the play button with unerring precision.
Emotion he had grown well acquainted with over the past two weeks.
people he hadn't spoken to or thought about since practically before meeting Haley had seemingly not forgotten him
and had spent the interval between his wife's death and now calling to offer their condolences.
Their concern only served to compound his feelings of guilt with each message.
What had he done to deserve such loyal friends?
He fully anticipated another instance of the same consolation
when one of the last voices he would have ever expected emanated.
from the machine.
The voices normally chipper lilt came, tinged with an unmistakable edge of caution.
And I can't tell you how sorry I am for what happened.
There was a pause in what sounded like a sob.
Edgar thought this was quite possibly the most real orgasm less emotion he had heard from Samantha
since they first met.
Coming back and thought you didn't deserve to have to bear seeing me on top of everything
else. I could only imagine how hard it must be for you right now. And to tell the truth,
I was scared to see you. Scared you might point at me every time someone asked or something.
I know it's stupid and selfish, but it came by the office just now to pick up some work to take
home with me. And I saw your car in the parking garage.
Edgar eyed the time of the message on the answering machine.
She had called sometime between the end of his frantic search of the office
and before he made it to his car,
which means that she was there right about the time that...
The voice on the machine kept talking,
and Edgar found himself now listening more intently than ever,
his knuckles turning white from clenching the kitchen counter so tightly.
Like a tornado hit it.
Someone really tore through here.
I thought about you right away, so that's why I'm calling.
I don't know if this is long overdue,
or if I should have just done a quick fade and found another job and never called you again or what.
I mean, what's the appropriate thing to do here?
I can never make things right, but...
I'm just so sorry, Edgar.
Please call me back when you get this.
I miss.
Miss was the last word spoken by Samantha,
unless one counts a blood-curdling scream,
following which came the sound that silenced whatever would have come next.
The gunshot rang out like a thunder clap
and lost none of its horrible potency on the way through the phone lines
to Edgar's answering machine.
The ensuing silence was deafening,
and Edgar stood rigid in front of the machine.
bent forward and staring at it intently, as if he expected it to begin displaying visual
clues as to what had taken place.
He got audio instead.
A male voice, undeniably the same as earlier that day, gargled as it chuckled into the receiver.
The machine beeped, and a solid red zero informed him that he now had no unheard messages.
But to Edgar, the zero represented far more than that.
It seemed almost an answer to not just how many messages he had,
but to every question that mattered.
What, why, who, how?
What's left?
What matters?
What will tomorrow bring?
Nothing but zero, of course.
Just a big, blood-red negation.
Edgar released his death grip from the counter and groped his way into the darkness of the living room.
He passed another light switch on.
the way, noted with no real interest that the switch had been broken off of this one as well,
then flopped down into his favorite recliner.
I have had. Edgar whispered into the emptiness of the house that would never again be a home.
A very tough months. The answer to his presumably recipientless statement came in the form of a chuckle
from the dark corner of the chamber. Edgar felt every muscle in his body. Hector felt every muscle in his
body go tense and he lost all control of his bladder. He could not possibly have cared less
about the ladder. He merely stared into the darkness and waited for whatever must come next
as the warmth spread across the front of his pants. The man in the shadow stepped forward and
Edgar winced again, sinking as deep into the plush chair as he could dig himself. The stranger,
simply put, had gone from looking like his flesh was preparing to free itself from its
earthly prison to actually having accomplished the task. Edgar was staring at the face and body of a man
who had begun to lose some very respectable chunks of himself, like butter melting in a warm room.
Some of it actually sloughed off as he made a methodical exit from the darkness. I know you're
wondering why I am here and why the past few weeks have seen your life seemingly spiral out of control.
At this point, it comes down to fate.
Fate is like playing tug of war
with an adversary significantly stronger than you.
There will always be times when you feel the rope inching your way.
Your heels dug in and your earnest exertions
yielding the result you've worked so hard for.
The victory you know you deserve.
But even the times
in which you feel the most control, the firmest ground.
Those are merely your opponent adjusting its grip.
But that doesn't preclude what you might call free will.
The choices people make are what set fate in motion.
And those are the pivotal moments.
He paused, then seemingly as an afterthought, like you, renting that motel room.
Very few things from that moment did this one have been in your control, and none of them
of any consequence.
Your whore is dead now and killed by your own gun.
Her right eye looks a great deal like your answering machine now.
Just a big red zero.
No new messages.
By dawn you'll be in a cell.
Your wife found out about you and that whore a few weeks ago.
Maybe she took her life.
Maybe you had a role in that.
The whore, though.
She was murdered.
There's no jury in the world for whom you're killed as anything but a foregone conclusion.
Edgar breathed the inquiry flally, incapable of inflection.
He had never felt so tired, so completely drained in a moment.
hollow in his entire life. With each word, the pale stranger spoke a deep burning emanated
from every muscle in Edgar's body. And yet the frantic scurrying of his mind remained as strong
as ever. Desperate to place those eyes he felt he knew so well. Why what? Why did you stray from
the wife who once loved you? I couldn't help you there. Not that knowing would change anything
for either of us.
But that isn't the most important why for you, is it?
You want to know why this is happening to you, why I'm doing this.
But for some reason, you're afraid to ask who I am.
The true question behind the why, to which I can only say that you must answer for both
of us.
And the stranger resumed his lumbering gate towards Edgar.
Hulting and awkward as he tottered ever closer.
Edgar's mind was drawn deep inside of itself to access the half-recalled memory of something he saw years ago
in a mid-dawn walk across the parking lot on his way to work.
A tattered salt and pepper moth.
Deceased at the base of a light pole.
A coroner's inquest doubtlessly would have revealed a cute case of banging oneself repeatedly
into a dome-like miniature plastic-electric sun.
Then came a stiff breeze which sent the moth airborne,
flapping and tumbling towards Edgar's path through the parking lot.
The breeze settled, and the moth resumed being a body perfectly arrest,
as all dead things should.
Edgar reckoned, unless acted upon by an outside force.
An unseen force in the case of the moth,
and Edgar again reckoned
in the case of the man now standing before him
because in his movements
Edgar saw that moth very clearly
these were the movements of something which once lived
and was now being acted upon by an entirely different unseen force
one which could only approximate the mechanisms of the vessel it now controls
the wind had been the name of that force
driving the moth back into a perversion of life
but to name the force which could do the same for a man
after a moment of silence which seemed to stretch for hours
Edgar met the stranger's pale blue eyes with the last shred of curgey had
more confidently
Your death
A stranger laughed uproariously
His gaunt frame convulsing with the rhythm of his dry wheezing cackles
The withered flesh of his face stretching away from
black and gums and all too white teeth in the most hideous approximation of a smile Edgar could
have ever imagined. After his laughter subsided, the dark man spoke, wiping away tears which
were not there. You misunderstand me. It wasn't my intention to be cryptic. I was merely
requesting that you provide me with a name. This body,
I'm approximating.
It's the body I might have had had I lived to grow into it.
But the eyes, they're the windows to the soul, so they say,
and I had hoped that you would remember mine.
I forgive you, though.
You saw me only briefly and under duress,
but you were supposed to name me.
Dying without a name was the worst.
Comprehension, more horrible than the bill-wilderment had ever been, began to spawn in Edgar,
as an icy, all-encompassing chill washed over him.
The man clapped him gently on the shoulder and leaned in close,
placing four pounds of cold steel into Edgar's open palm.
Told you I was a messenger.
And now my task is done.
Mom asked me to give you that.
She says to hurry.
She promises not to be too hard on you if you come home quickly or quivered helplessly.
His eyes have begun to water and burn, searching for any sign of consolation in those of
his son.
He parted his lips as if to speak, but he could not find the words.
His silent pleas response came in presumably the most compassionate tone manageable by his visitor.
Not terrible there.
It's just
The corpse things had cocked to the side
A very boyishly chaotic look
In those pale blue eyes
Gray
It's gray there
Time moves much slower
If at all
They show you things
They showed me all I would have known in life
Which your actions denied me
Venom in that decaying voice
now and Edgar knew that pulling the trigger himself would be the only mercy granted today.
The visitor turned, stagering clumsily into the dark towards the edge of the room,
as Edgar sat and examined the loaded revolver.
His would-be progeny had almost completely exited from sight
and spoke without a discernible emotion.
One more thing.
After they cut me out,
How long did I last in that incubator?
She doesn't know, but I thought you might.
I tried my best to hang on, but it couldn't have been long.
Fifteen minutes?
Twenty?
Edgar raised his head up from his chest.
Back pressed firmly into his favorite recliner.
His entire body drenched in cold sweat.
He stared into shadows at the edge of the living room.
Eyes welling with tears as he lifted the revolver slowly and deliberately to his temple.
17.
He whispered to the darkness.
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