Creepy - The Rental
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The Rental
Written by Christopher Maxim,
narrated by Nate DuFort,
and produced by Steve Blizzin.
I stood still for a moment, awestruck.
The pictures didn't do it justice.
It was a large but quaint home located on a secluded island near Cape Cod.
A small piece of land, void of life.
Only the cottage and a lighthouse visible across the water.
Verified as an Airbnb Plus rental, one week's rent came to a little over $3,000.
The price was steep.
but completely worth it.
This would be the best place to clear my head and finish writing my novel.
I happily trotted across a stone walkway to the front door and grabbed the knob,
ready to map out the rest of my book.
It would be my second release.
My publisher had been breathing down my neck for months, constantly asking for updates.
Now, I had the perfect environment.
to complete it.
Upon opening the door, and I was caught off guard.
Hello?
I nearly jumped out of my skin.
There was a man inside.
Late 50s, average build, gray mustache.
Took me a moment to match the face to the one in this super host profile.
It was Garrett, the owner of the property.
Sorry, Garrett, he startled me.
I didn't expect anyone to be here.
He smiled.
I greet all of my guests.
You people are my livelihood, after all.
Please, come in.
We have some important matters to discuss.
I joined him in the living room.
We sat in armchairs on opposite sides of a long coffee table.
Garrett simply continued to smile.
So, what did you want to discuss? I asked.
He pulled a folded sheet of paper out from his jacket
and slid it across the coffee table.
It stopped in front of me.
I picked it up for a closer look.
The edges were worn, and it felt almost canvas-like between my fingers.
I began unfolding, but Garrett stopped me.
Don't? You'll have plenty of time for that later.
Just listen.
I looked up at him, confused but compliant.
The house has been in my family for generations.
Staying here can be a rewarding experience, but it can also be a dreadful one if you're not careful.
Come on, Garrett. Don't tell me the places. Haunted.
I was the only one smiling now.
Garrett looked at me, thoroughly unamused.
My smile vanished, and I gestured for him to continue.
On that sheet of paper are some rules.
You must follow every last one of them.
There are no exceptions, so long as you do this,
your vacation will be a pleasant one.
With that, Garrett stood up from the chair and walked to the front door.
He turned to me on his way out and offered a final sentiment before leaving.
Follow the rules, Jack.
If you don't, you're in for a bumpy ride.
When he left, I unfolded the list,
expecting to see a reiteration of a stay requirements.
No pets, no modifications, clean up after yourself, that sort of thing.
This was not the case.
On the paper was a set of rules that only served to bookend our strange encounter.
with further confusion.
1. No lights on past 11.25 p.m.
2. Do not answer your phone.
Callers cannot be trusted.
3. Only 2 people are permitted inside.
Hank Penston and Jessica Covenwood.
Ask for last names.
4.
Do not exit the house after midnight until sunrise.
5.
If your room changes location, close the door and try again.
Only leave when connection has been reestablished.
6.
The voices are harmless.
Do not converse with them.
7.
Never.
lock the doors.
8. If you have any trouble, call Jessica Covenwood at this number, 0371.
This is the only phone call you can trust.
This lifeline may only be used once during your rental period.
At the bottom of the page was a final note.
I will come to collect you, but only when the rental period is over.
Not a moment sooner.
There is no leaving until then.
As I sat there, mulling over the list,
it all became clear.
Garrett was a lunatic.
Neither that or this was a poor attempt at humor.
Neither way.
I brushed off our meeting and the list of rules altogether,
placing the paper on the coffee table,
where it stayed for the rest of the night.
A majority of the first night was peaceful.
Of my novel's final six chapters it needed completing, I was able to stay up late and finish two of them, first drafts at least.
There was still a lot left to do.
My final days on the island would have to be spent proofreading the entire manuscript and filling cracks in the narrative before sending it to my editor.
Still, two chapters was not a bad night's work all things considered.
after patting myself on the back for a job well done.
I looked at my phone.
It was 12.18 a.m.
My lips spread into a slight smile as I looked at the desk light,
wavering in and out of life.
It was past 1125, Garrett.
Was this why I needed to turn off the lights?
So they wouldn't flicker?
I chuckled to myself as another rule came to mind.
Number four.
if I remembered correctly,
do not exit the house after midnight.
I continued to laugh to myself as I ventured downstairs,
opened the front door, and stepped out into the night.
The view was brilliant.
A blanket of stars covering the cape,
only broken up by the gorgeous lighthouse jutting upward,
practically cutting a hole in the night sky.
It was a breathtaking sight
Well worth the partial advance for my book
What's the reasoning behind this rule, Garrett?
You didn't want me to enjoy the view?
I turned and stepped back into the house
I then locked the door.
Oops, that's another rule broken.
Hope the house doesn't chastise me.
With that, I traveled upstairs to the bedroom
and fell into a blissful sleeve the moment.
My body met the sheets.
My slumber would not last.
3.27 a.m.
I awoke to a thunderous banging at the front door.
In a groggy slur of motion, my legs just barely managed to pull the rest of my body out of bed.
Practically sleepwalking.
I eventually made my way downstairs and opened the door.
Outside, there were no longer any stars.
Their light was replaced with a thick fog rolling over the ocean.
The water and air were still, frozen in place.
There was no one there but me.
I closed the door and went back to bed, certain that the sounds I heard were remnants of
a dream overlapping with waking life.
My body fell onto the bed and sleep.
took hold once more.
4.42 a.m.
I awoke again,
ripped from a dreamlike state
where I was turning in my novel
to the publishing house.
For whatever reason, in this dream,
Garrett was my boss.
He held the manuscript to my face
and flipped the pages,
revealing a lack of ink.
There's nothing here, Jack.
all that time and nothing to show for it.
He continued to flip through before stopping somewhere in the middle.
Unlike the other pages, this one had text.
The words were familiar, but they weren't written by me.
Garrett's rules painted the page,
the pitch black ink slowly dripping from the paper.
His forms soon followed,
melting onto the floor below.
You should have followed the rules, Jack.
That's when I sprung to life, my heart pounding as I sat up in bed.
The sound of pages turning rang in my ears.
But it hadn't leaked over from my nightmare.
Over on the desk was my manuscript.
Its paper wildly flapping about.
My heart nearly sank before I noticed a chill in the room.
I had left the world.
window open. It was just the wind. Relieved, I shut the window and went back to sleep.
5.19 a.m. No sound woke me this time. Instead, it was nature calling, beckoning me to take a late
night trip to the bathroom. Fortunately for me, this would not be an easy task. Upon opening
the bedroom door, I was greeted by a deep,
unsettling sight.
It was a hallway, not the hall that should have been there, mind you.
An entirely different hallway, noticeably different.
It was narrow, almost too thin for a person to walk through, and it was long, very long,
seemingly longer than the building itself.
Lining the sides was a plethora of doors, more doors, and I need the house to have.
It was, by all means, unexplainable.
I rub my eyes to test their acuity.
The hallway was still there.
I wondered for a moment if I was dreaming, but quickly discarded the notion,
certain that I could tell the difference between what was real and what wasn't.
But if not a dream, then what?
With an air of hesitance about me, my feet pattered into the narrow void.
I tried each door along the way, but they were all locked.
Halfway in, a harrowing sound cut through the air.
I turned my head to see that the bedroom door had shut itself.
Running back and turning the knob was futile.
It wouldn't budge.
Without a whole lot of options, I continued down the hall.
At the end, was a final door, different than the rest.
A fix to it was a plaque with a designation.
like when you might see in a hotel.
According to the text, it was room 371.
The knob offered no resistance as I turned it
and gently pushed the door open.
There was no light inside.
Still, I could make out something standing in the center of the room, facing me.
It was a shadowy figure, slightly darker than the blackness around it.
A vague glow outlined its form.
It was tall, taller than any man.
I had the inclination to close the door and turned back, but fear kept me anchored in place.
My breathing became erratic and my heart rate soared to new heights as it took a step towards me.
In a flash, it lunged to my position.
Everything went black.
My eyes opened to sunlight pouring into the room.
I was back in bed.
This was strange.
Every bone in my body told me it wasn't a dream,
but rational thinking dictated otherwise.
I had no choice but to entertain the idea
that I was having vivid night tears
in the face of a fast approaching publishing deadline.
The sooner I finished the book, I thought,
the sooner they would vanish.
Though it didn't sit well with me,
It was the only explanation I had.
My phone buzzed on the bedside table.
I knew who it was, but with my deadline on the horizon,
I couldn't afford the distraction.
When the buzzing ceased, I crawled out of bed and started the day.
My first few hours awake were productive.
I was able to write over half of the next chapter
and tweak some finer details throughout the rest of the book.
My progress was, however, impeded by a knock at the front door.
Unlike the night previous, there was someone out there, a man.
Can I help you? I asked, confused.
It was open I could help you, actually.
The name's Hank. I'm a locksmith from the mainland.
Garrett sent me to check the locks on all the doors.
I pondered for a moment, then grabbed the list of rules from the coffee.
table. I looked it over before meeting Hank back at the door. Well, it looks like you're on the list.
Splendid. May I come in then? And a naturally wide smile danced across his cheeks.
Yeah, sure. Uh, come in. Hank walked past the threshold inside. There was a long moment of silence before he
spoke again. What a lovely place. Can't wait to sink my teeth in and get to work.
He then sauntered off upstairs
I sat down on the couch and continued writing
hoping my creative breakthrough hadn't subsided
An hour passed
Then another
I was able to finish up some more work
But something kept scratching at the back of my mind
I knew locksmithing wasn't the loudest job out there
But I expected to hear at least some sort of tinkering
coming from upstairs
A distant sound of keys scraping against the locks in her chambers, but no.
There was only silence.
I then wondered why Hank was up there to begin with.
This was far from a typical rental experience, especially one on a secluded island.
I skimmed the list again.
Two things stood out.
Rule number seven.
Never lock the doors.
Even if Garrett was derailed.
It was clear he didn't want the doors locked, so...
Why then would he send a locksmith?
Who'd be breaking in out here anyway?
The second thing that jumped out at me was the end of rule number three.
Ask for last names.
Something wasn't adding up, but...
Nye intended to get to the bottom of it.
Hank?
I yelled out, hoping to get his attention.
There was no answer.
Hank, can you please come down here?
No response.
Only silence.
This was my cue to investigate.
To my dismay, the second floor was completely vacant.
I scoured every room, every nook, and cranny the house had to offer to no avail.
Hank was nowhere to be found, and I couldn't make heads or tails of it.
How could a person just up and vanish like that?
I returned to the first floor.
Hank was there, sitting on the couch, looking over my manuscript.
There was no way he could have snuck by me.
Say, this is pretty good.
I wonder how it's going to play out.
Help me out here, Jack.
Is there a happy ending?
Or does the man succumb to his own demons?
I stood frozen at the bottom of the stairs.
Hank?
What's your last name?
A grin formed beneath his nose.
Raden.
The name's Hank Rayton.
Why'd you ask?
I look down at the list in my hand.
Penston.
His name was supposed to be Hank Penston.
No reason, just curious.
Hey, do you mind tossing me my phone?
Hank looked down at my phone on the coffee table.
A few moments passed before he grabbed it and looked over at me.
He stared for a long time, almost as if calculating the distance, and then finally threw it over.
I caught it and ran for the front door.
Thanks, I'll be right back.
I sprinted to the edge of the island, unsure of who or what, was inside the house.
It was becoming ever apparent that Garrett might not be so crazy after all.
something truly strange was afoot and i wanted no part of it at first i called the ferry station no answer then garrett still no answer before i could try another number my ex-wife called i had been ignoring her calls for weeks charlotte thank god i met an air bn b off the cape i need you to she interjected blood ran cold was said with the same tone and
resentment as it was two years before.
But once, the floodgates opened, and a slew of memories poured in.
Once I had tried desperately to repress, Leslie was our daughter, before Charlotte and I divorced.
She was struck by a car on her way home from school.
Charlotte was at work, and I was supposed to pick Leslie up.
But I was too wrapped up in my first novel.
I forgot all about her.
My own daughter.
She walked a good mom.
while before the collision.
I never forgave myself.
Neither did Charlotte.
Charlotte, why are you saying this?
Tears rolled out my face.
Her voice became louder and less distinct,
until I could barely recognize the cadence,
an inhuman growl.
You're to blame.
I'm down at the list,
now stained with a steady stream of droplets dripping from my cheeks.
And that's what I remembered rule number two.
Do not answer your phone.
Callers cannot be trusted.
As much as it pained me, I hung up on her.
It wasn't real, but it sure is how felt like it was.
I wiped away my tears and looked at the last rule.
Braving the fierce currents of the ocean likely wouldn't end well.
The shore nearly 16 miles away.
So, Jessica's my only hope.
The only phone call you can trust, according to getting.
I dialed the number and waited.
After two tones, my ear was met with a female voice.
A few, actually, give or take.
She let out a sigh.
Did you let anyone in?
Yes, Hank.
No, Hank Raiden.
There was another disappointed sigh.
Okay, listen carefully.
Okay.
I did as instructed on my way around the house.
I looked through the window.
Hank was no longer in the living room.
There was a slight spike in my adrenaline,
but I held my composure until turning the corner, that is.
Standing at the back of the house, waiting for me, was Hank.
Hey there, Jack, what are you up to?
Jessica chimed in, in the most casual voice I could muster.
I repeated what Jessica said.
Hank bore a stoic expression for a few moments and then spoke
That darn thing
I'll see what I can do
He walked past me
Went off to the front of the house
I was officially rattled
Jessica's voice broke the tension
I surveyed the area and noticed the box
It was embedded in a tree stump of all places
One that struck out of the ground at an all
awkward angle.
Yes, I see it.
I was confused.
How is this going to help exactly?
There was a third sigh of frustration.
I didn't understand how it all worked,
but I'd heard enough to warrant an obvious follow-up question.
Couldn't I just leave it off?
There was no sigh this time.
Just anger.
At this point, I saw Hank walking alongside the house.
I fix that lock for you,
Jack.
Jessica must have heard because her voice adopted a tone of urgency.
I did as she said and began counting.
Hank continued to walk towards me.
His form phasing in and out like a bad television signal.
Jack, what are you doing?
Need a hand?
His pace grew faster until his walk became a run.
My heart was pounding.
Just as he was closing in, the ten seconds were up and I forced the lever back.
Hank vanished.
completely, and the stump receded into the earth below.
I fell back onto the ground in relief.
Jessica, we did it.
Clearly, she wasn't as pleased with the victory as I was.
That was fine.
I was just thankful to be alive.
Once inside the house, I lay down in bed and held the list to my face,
scrutinizing every last detail.
I was determined not to break another rule for the rest of my stay.
That night was peaceful.
I made sure all the doors were unlocked, turned off the lights by 1125,
and refused to answer any calls.
When I slept, there were no strange dreams.
No dreams at all, in fact.
It was a truly restful night, the best sleep I'd had in years.
Despite my predicament, I awoke hopeful, hopeful that I could weather the storm and survive the week.
I was even able to write some more of my book.
Not much, but enough to jumpstart my creativity.
The next night didn't go nearly as well.
2.12 a.m.
I had woken without cause.
In an effort to fall back asleep, I shut my eyes and allowed my mind to wander.
I thought of my book and the deadline, thought of my eventual departure from the island.
Before long, I thought of Charlotte and Leslie.
The image of our once happy family would forever be seared into my broken heart.
I felt my eyes begin to water.
But something interrupted the sadness.
A sound.
Footsteps.
My eyes opened and I sprang to life, sitting upright in bed.
The footsteps stopped just outside the room.
With a great deal of apprehension, I got out of bed.
Took a deep breath and tiptoed to the door.
When I turned the knob and opened it,
I found myself at the entrance of the house.
With rule number five in mind, I shut the door and opened it again.
I was now at the living room.
Next was the bathroom.
Then, a hallway.
A familiar hallway.
Off in the distance, I heard the click of room 371's door.
The tall shadow stepped out.
The hall began to shrink.
The figure closed the gap between us in a matter of seconds.
Luckily, my will to live outweighed the fear that held me in place.
I managed to shut the door just in time to prevent my demise.
When I opened it again, the room was back where it was supposed to be.
3.47 a.m.
Just as I was finally drifting back to sleep, the voices started.
Hey, Jack, enjoying your stay?
Though frightened, rule number six came to mind, and I followed it.
The voices were harmless, and I was not to converse with them.
What's wrong, Jack?
Hung up on Garrett's rules?
That's no fun.
I closed my eyes as the voice grew louder and hid beneath the covers.
Don't hide, Jack.
We won't hurt you.
Honest.
The footsteps were back.
Walking outside the room, they stopped at the door.
He's here now, Jack.
I can tell you how to make him go away.
But you have to talk to me.
The door creaked open, and the footsteps recommenced.
Walking over to the side of the bed, he's leaning over you now.
I can make him leave.
Just say the word.
I couldn't give in to the ploy.
I had to obey the rules.
But then, there was a tug on the sheets.
My heart nearly stopped.
Wake up, Jack!
I jolted to a sitting position.
It was empty, and the door shut.
It was a dream.
But that didn't explain the hand-shaped impression on the edge of the bed.
No matter the culprit, I would endure the torment.
It was only a week.
You can get through this, Jack.
Leslie's face flashed in my mind and forced an unexpected tear out.
You've been through so much worse.
The next few nights came and went without issue.
There were some dicey,
moments. But I learned to handle the odd voice here and there and the room moving every now and
again. I ignored knocks at the front door altogether, avoiding any and all potential repeats of the
Hank incident. Night six, however, was by far the worst. Some things never change. Dark clouds
loomed over the ocean as waves crashed into the island. Just like the night Leslie was
was killed. I became deeply engrossed in my writing, to the point that nothing in the world could
have pulled me away. Even after everything that had happened in the house, I was somehow able to
finish my book. Maybe the shock to the system inspired me. My fear had transformed into focus,
granting me a greater mental clarity.
When all was said and done and the editing complete,
there was a horrible revelation.
According to my phone, it was 1124 p.m.
My heart sank to the depths of my soul
as I raced across the house shutting lights off,
knocking over furniture and decorations in the process.
And I came back to the bedroom
to turn off the final light at the door,
desk. I glanced at my phone once more. The readout is now etched into my memory.
1126 p.m. I clicked off the light, praying that my phone's readout was somehow wrong and that I still
had time. 1127 p.m. The bedroom door slammed itself shut behind me. I jostled the knob and pushed my weight against it.
but it remained unmoved.
A swirling black vortex of smoke was expelled from beneath the bed.
Covered the floor in an instant and began rising to fill the rest of the room.
I had no intention of waiting to see what would happen to me in the darkness.
So I flung myself at the window and shattered the glass.
Landing on my back in a bed of shrugby below,
the impact knocked the wind out of me.
shortly thereafter
I passed out
1138 p.m.
I dreamt
I know it was a dream
and not the house is doing
because it was one I'd had many times before.
The setting
my daughter's school.
The bell rang and a stampede of children
rushed out into the world,
excited to leave for the day and see their parents.
The last person
and out was Leslie, left alone to her own devices. Daddy, where are you? Her eyes darted back and
forth. I tried to call out to her, but much like the day in question, I wasn't there. In the dream,
I was only an observer, forced to watch as the horror unfolded before me.
Leslie waited for 15 long minutes before heading off in the direction of our home.
I bore witness to her trek, a poor girl, alone in the cold, and then it happened.
Dream tears flooded my field of view as a car swerved,
and the heart-wrenching scream of that beautiful young girl rang through the winter air.
1156 p.m.
I woke up on the ground covered in tears and broken glass.
The ocean waves crashed against the walls of the house.
There was no time to waste.
Without my phone, I didn't know exactly what time it was, but it had to be close to midnight.
Another broken rule would only make matters worse.
I raced to the front door, opened it, and swiftly shut it behind me.
Somewhat thankful to be back in the house, but also somewhat terrified.
The coming moments would echo the latter emotion, adding to my woes.
12.5 a.m. I was able to open the bedroom door and retrieve my phone.
Luckily, the smoke had vanished.
Upon venturing back down to the living room, I was shattered, just like the glass on the ground outside.
There, sitting on the couch, where Hank sat before her.
was Leslie, my Leslie.
I reached the bottom step and nearly fell to my knees,
almost forgetting to breathe in the process.
She was the same, exactly the same,
every feature identical to the day I last saw her.
How was this possible?
Hi, Daddy.
Her voice pulled a wave of emotion out of me,
stronger than anything I'd ever felt before.
Was it really her?
Was this really my precious Leslie brought back to life?
Surely this wasn't the house's doing.
Was it?
Sweetheart, is that you?
Is it really you?
She looked over at me with innocent eyes.
Yes, Daddy, it's me.
I ran over to her and shook her in my arms.
My face now drenched in an ocean of tears.
Oh, Leslie, sweetheart, I missed you so much.
I pulled away to get a better look at her.
That's when I saw it.
For an instant in between blinks, her eyes were solid pools of black.
This was not my Leslie.
I backed away at once.
What's wrong, Daddy?
I continued my retreat to the stairs.
You're not real. This isn't real.
We buried you.
Her next word stopped me in my tracks.
No, Daddy.
You buried.
me. Her eyes locked with mine as I cried. You killed me. You're the reason I'm dead. Before responding,
near I was a terrible father and I deserve every moment of torture this house puts me through.
If I ever get out of here, I'm going to visit your grave for the first time and tell you how
sorry I am and how much I've missed you over the years. Not a day goes by that the guilt doesn't
Eat me up inside.
I swallowed the lump in my throat and wiped away the tears as she looked up at me.
Her head tilted in observation.
But you're not.
I ran up those stairs as fast as I could.
Leslie's piercing screams echoed through the house,
followed by the sound of every window breaking in reaction to the pitch.
Once in the bedroom, I closed the door behind me and slid down into a sitting position on the floor against it.
utterly defeated and emotionally drained.
I pulled out my phone and dialed Jessica's number.
After two tones, she picked up, I'm going to die tonight, Jessica.
Her perturbed tone vanished, replaced with concern.
I can't fight it anymore.
It's too much.
As much as I wanted to live, I could feel myself giving up.
I don't even know why I called her.
She couldn't help.
The lever was gone.
and it was past midnight.
The storm outside was destroying the house.
Soon, I'd be swept out to sea, never to be heard from again.
Click.
She wouldn't be coming.
Even if the fairies ran that late, they wouldn't dare operate in a storm that violent.
The end was near.
And I could feel it.
11.A.m.
after a good long while of wallowing and self-pity
there was a knock at the front door
Jessica?
No, it couldn't be.
I cautiously exited the bedroom
and slowly descended the staircase to the living room below.
The storm raged on outside,
a gust of wind howling through the house.
In reaching the bottom step, I noticed that the coast was clear.
Leslie's ghost was nowhere in sight,
as quickly as I could without drawing.
any unwanted attention to myself, I patted over the door and opened it. Behind it was a beautiful
woman in her 30s, black hair, peach skin, and a tasteful spattering of freckles on either side of her
nose. Jessica? I asked, who else would it be? Her voice and sassy attitude answer my question in
spades. I stepped aside and she barged in, clearly upset. I closed the door behind. I closed the door
her, careful not to lock it, and risk breaking another rule. I was less scared of the supernatural
consequences than I was of Jessica's fury. You really had to be worried, Jack. What did you do anyway?
Before I could answer, a small figure appeared from behind the couch. It was Leslie. Jessica
followed my gaze and looked across the room. Jack? Who's that? My daughter.
I didn't know she was here with you.
You don't understand.
My daughter's been dead for two years.
Jessica backed up to the door where I was standing.
Oh, I see.
Just as before, Leslie let out an awful shriek that rang through the house.
It was louder than before.
Much louder.
Jessica turned to me, our hands cupping our ears.
Jack, we need to get out of here.
follow me.
We raced past Leslie and up the stairs to the bedroom.
Okay, Jack, let's get going.
She shut the door and opened it.
She continued this routine, revealing the many rooms of the house.
At one point, it opened up into the living room.
Jessica quickly slammed it shut before Leslie could make her way in to get us.
Finally, it opened up into the hallway.
Yes, that hallway.
Jessica grabbed my wrist.
Come on, let's go.
I yanked my arm back in refusal.
Are you insane?
I've been in there, and I don't plan on going back.
Have you seen room 371?
Jessica let out one of her signature sighs.
Yes, I know all about it.
So long as we get to where we're going before the shadow notices, we'll be fine.
Now, come on.
We don't have a whole lot of time here.
I reluctantly respected her wishes.
I wasn't keen on facing that ominous stretch of hall again, but Jessica's advice hadn't failed me yet.
Besides, I was ready to die just an hour ago.
Whatever fate would befall me in there could be any worse than seeing my dead daughter resurrected.
Okay, Jessica.
I'm ready.
136 a.m.
Matching each other's pace step for step, we disappeared into the dark hallway, the bedroom door closing behind us.
I whispered so as not to wake the bridge.
beast. Where are we going anyway? None of the doors down here open. Without hesitation,
she answered. One does. It took a moment for it to sink in. No, Jessica, are you seeing it? It lives in there.
She turned to me and put her hands on either side of my face. She stared into my eyes with a look of
pure kindness. I was taken aback by the unexpected intimacy. Jack, you need just trust.
me, we're going to be fine, I promise.
As far as explanations go, that was pretty vague.
Still, it was reassuring.
I can't explain it, but I was compelled to believe her.
There was something about Jessica I really liked, a warmth that radiated around her,
a contagious soothing force.
We continued down the hall, and I didn't bring up my resurrection.
observations again.
142 a.m.
We reached the door.
This was it.
The moment of truth.
I was about to open it when Jessica pulled my hand back.
In order for this to work, you need to knock three times.
No more and no less.
I nodded in agreement.
I raised my hand to the wood and knocked precisely three times.
A deep anxiety racked my nerves as the anticipation.
The invitation grew. After a few moments, the door was pulled open, revealing the shadowy figure within. It stepped away and motioned for us to enter. I looked over to Jessica for approval. She nodded and followed me in. The entity softly closed the door behind us, and then walked over to where we stood in. Changed. Its dark form turned to light.
illuminating the rest of the room.
It was the bedroom, only it wasn't exactly the same.
Something was amiss.
I couldn't quite put my finger on it.
It just felt different.
The bright figure then shrunk down to a glowing orb and drifted away,
phasing through one of the walls, leaving us by ourselves.
Moonlight shone through the window.
The glass wasn't broken anymore.
There was no storm outside.
Everything was Christine.
Jessica, what just happened?
This is the house's safe space, a failsafe for when too many rules are broken.
She could tell I wasn't following.
It's a copy of the bedroom from just before things went south,
a moment suspended in time that we can stay in for a while.
At dawn, everything will revert to normal.
Why didn't you tell me about it before?
Honestly, it's a risky move.
The shadow is a fickle being.
When you enter room 371, there's only a 50% chance you'll accept your entrance.
Otherwise, you're doomed.
I couldn't believe it.
You're telling me we could have died?
You risked our lives on a 50% chance?
She came over and placed her hands on my face again.
Jack, we're safe. There's no need to be angry. Relax. We would have died anyway at the hands of the
house. This was our only option. She was right. Honestly, I was happy she was there. Without
her, I would have been a goner. 3.17 a.m. Jessica spent some time going over my manuscript.
I filled in some of the blank so she could skip the more fatty sections and finish before bed.
Jack, this is beautiful.
I wasn't so sure.
Maybe I put too much of myself in it.
Maybe the blood I poured under the pages covered up the meaning.
Who in the right mind would want to swim through my despair to reach a story even I wasn't sure I believed in?
It's about you, isn't it, Jack?
This is your life from the moment your daughter died to now.
I felt myself unraveling.
I'm tired, Jessica.
I think I'm going to call it a night.
I offered her a half smile, waltzed over to the bed, and laid down.
To my surprise, she laid down with me and placed her hand on my chest.
It's okay, Jack.
I've never lost a child, so I can't imagine the kind of things you're dealing with.
I do know that things will never be the same.
That doesn't mean you have to give up.
What would your daughter have wanted?
There was no fighting the tears any longer.
You don't understand, Jessica.
I'm responsible.
She was waiting for me when it happened.
I was her father, and I wasn't there for her when she needed me.
Jessica didn't respond.
I sobbed until there was nothing left in me.
When the moment passed, I asked her a question.
Why do these things happen here?
Honestly, I don't really know.
We turned to each other.
Her warmth reared its head again, inviting me to come to it.
Our lips met and with it, an intense feeling was born.
Like nothing.
I'd ever felt. A somber, quiet energy filled the air and coated the room. In a turn of events
I will never fully fathom. Jessica and I made love. 532 a.m. Jessica fell asleep in my arms.
I stayed awake, content for the first time in years. Then, a familiar disembodied voice
burrowed into my ear and poisoned my mind.
What your feeling isn't real.
By this point, I was all too familiar with the voices and their antics.
I ignored its statement.
She does this to every tenant.
She's a seductress.
I was tempted to reply, but conversing was forbidden.
I couldn't afford a broken rule this close to the finish line.
Only two people are allowed in, Jack.
Two. It's a simple rule.
What did that have to do with anything? What was the voice up to?
Jesco was one of the two. Despite my unrest, I continued to bite my tongue.
Always ask for last names. There was a moment of pause.
Before the realization washed over me, the rule had indeed been broken.
I jumped and backed into the corner of the room.
Jessica was standing next to the bed.
I hadn't even seen her get up.
Jack, are you okay?
My breathing became labored.
It was hard to construct my query in a normal fashion.
Jessica, are you really you?
Was this?
What is your last name?
The light left her face.
Her now empty eyes cut right through me.
I slid to the floor.
A long period of sense.
Silence passed before anything changed.
Before she changed.
5.51 a.m.
Jessica's face widened.
Her eyes became large as if physically engorged with bloodlust.
She lunged.
I dodged the attack and hit the door hard.
I reached for the knob, but it wouldn't turn.
Jessica's new form spoke,
a gurgling metallic sound that ricocheted off the walls.
It looks like you're stuck with me, Jack.
She lunged again.
I slid under the bed to escape her reach.
Her feet paced around its perimeter.
A predator, circling its prey.
It was just a matter of time now.
I closed my eyes and thought of Charlotte and Leslie,
playing in the snow the last day I saw them together.
This would be my final thought as death approached.
As beautiful a thought as one could have before dying.
At least now,
I could be with her again.
A pained outcry from Jessica broke my concentration.
The light in the room had changed.
I rolled out from underneath the bed and saw her writhing in the corner.
The sun was coming up over the horizon outside.
This was my chance.
I raced over to Jessica and clenched her neck.
She struggled but was too weak to break free.
I forced her against the window.
Her skin melted, gripping like you.
candle waxed to the floor. Her hair burned to a crisp. I looked to her eyes for even a shred of
humanity, something that might convince me to spare her for all she had meant to me. There was none,
only malice. In that moment, I sincerely wished that she had been real. With as much force as I could
muster, I pushed her through the window, born disintegrated before I could reach the ground.
The wind carried her ashes away
Into the endless expanse of the ocean
She was
No more
The house was still
Hours passed
As my rental period came to a close
I sat in the living room
And reflected on the events of the week
In a weird way
I'd come to terms with Leslie's death
The guilt would always
be there, but I felt I could move on now, free of the restraints that once bound me.
Knock, knock. I opened the door and let Garrett in. Your fairy awaits. I nodded and gathered my
things. I was anxious to leave, but felt the need to ask him something first. Garrett,
What is this place?
He smirked.
Many words come to mind.
Anomily, portal, impossibility.
I personally think it's a mirror, showing us ourselves in a way we never thought possible.
A place where our past and present intersect.
Perhaps the right word for it is closure, I smiled.
You might be on to something, Garrett.
Splendid.
Does that mean you'll leave a good review?
I chuckled.
You know what?
I'll do it right now.
I opened the app and click through to the listing.
A bit of information caught my eye as I scrolled.
Checkout time?
12 p.m.
I looked up at the readout at the top of my phone's display.
lay. It turned from 1159 to 12 as I watched. I let someone in before time was up, meaning a rule had been broken.
The note at the end of the list came to mind as the dread set in.
I will come to collect you, but only when the rental period is over. Not a moment sooner. That wasn't Garrett.
I looked up to see him standing directly in front of me.
Something wrong, Jack?
I dropped my things and ran to the dock as fast as I could.
The ferry had just arrived, the real Garrett aboard, motioning for me to hurry.
After boarding, I turned back and looked at the house.
One last time, a silhouette stood at the window.
Waving goodbye.
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