Just Creepy: Scary Stories - 12 HOURS of Scary Stories to Help You Sleep or Relax at Home

Episode Date: October 30, 2024

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Starting point is 00:01:11 more money than usual, and I knew why. Those woods were thick and wild, a place we rarely went, but I was saving up for a truck, so I figured it'd be worth it. I packed my gear that night and set my alarm for the crack of dawn. The morning sun was already high by the time I loaded up the truck. Chainsaw, gas, lunch, and my camping gear. Dad said I might need to stay overnight, just in case. I didn't mind. It was just trees.
Starting point is 00:01:42 How scary could it be? The drive was rough, bumpier than usual, and the trees started to close in as I went farther. Branches clawed at the sides of the truck, and the sunlight seemed to fade as I got deeper into the woods. Finally, I reached the clearing, an overgrown patch of wild trees. It was quiet, so quiet that I could hear my own breathing. I took a moment to look around,
Starting point is 00:02:08 feeling a strange, prickling sensation on the back of my neck, like someone was watching. But when I turned, nothing was. was there. I shook off the feeling and got to work. The chainsaw roared to life, echoing through the empty woods as I cut the first few trees. It felt good to be working, and I soon forgot the odd feeling. But as the hours passed, weird things started happening. One tree I cut just disappeared. I swear I'd cut it down. The stump was there, cleanly sliced, but the tree itself was nowhere to be seen. I walked around, looking in every direction, but it was gone. I shook my head,
Starting point is 00:02:52 convincing myself I must have dragged it off without realizing. Then as I took a break, the strange feeling returned, only stronger. I felt like someone was right there, just outside my line of sight. I turned quickly, but all I saw were the trees and shadows. And then I heard it, faint, but unmistakable. Laughter. It was on. almost like a whisper carried by the wind. It had to be in my head, I told myself. I was alone. But no matter how much I tried to ignore it, the feeling wouldn't go away.
Starting point is 00:03:26 I tried to keep working, focusing on the next tree. But every time I glanced up, the shadows seemed closer, like they were shifting when I wasn't looking. The sun started to sink, casting the whole clearing in an eerie golden light that somehow made the woods seem even more haunting. When night finally fell, I decided to set up camp and finish the job in the morning. I built a small fire, hoping it would keep whatever was out there away. But as I sat there, staring into the dark woods, I felt that prickling sensation again,
Starting point is 00:03:59 stronger than ever. It felt like eyes were watching from every shadow, waiting for me to make the wrong move. The forest, once a place of freedom, felt like it was closing in, holding its breath, just waiting. settled over the clearing, swallowing up everything beyond the light of my little fire. I sat close to the flames, but the warmth didn't do much to shake off the strange chill that had crept over me. It felt like the woods were alive somehow, breathing with a slow, heavy rhythm I could almost feel. The shadows cast by the fire danced around, but each time I looked, they seemed to stop, freezing as if they didn't want me to notice. I took a deep breath, telling myself it was just my mind
Starting point is 00:04:42 playing tricks. As I ate dinner, I heard it again, a soft rustling just outside the light. I shown my flashlight around, but all I could see were trees, thick and looming like they were pressing in on me. Then, out of nowhere, came a sound that made my blood turn to ice. Faint, but unmistakable. Laughter. It sounded like someone was just beyond the fire's edge, laughing softly, like they were watching me and finding this all very funny. Hello? I called out, my voice shaky. Silence, not a single sound, just the crackling of the fire and my own heartbeat pounding in my ears. I grabbed my flashlight, shining it through the trees, but there was nothing there. I tried to calm myself down, telling myself it had to be the wind. But deep down, I knew it wasn't. I sat back down by the fire, trying to focus on staying warm, staying alert. But the strange feeling of being watched kept crawling over me, making it impossible to relax. I didn't want to think about what could be out there, lurking just beyond the trees,
Starting point is 00:05:52 hiding in the shadows. The stories Dad had told me when I was little, about things in the woods, things that weren't just animals, flooded my mind, and I found myself glancing over my shoulder every few seconds. Finally, after what felt like hours, I crawled into my tent, hoping I could block it all in sleep. But no sooner had I zipped up the tent than a loud thump jolted me awake. I froze, listening hard, every nerve in my body on high alert. The sound came from right by the truck, and it was followed by what I could only describe as breathing, slow, heavy breaths, close, far too close. My hand trembled as I unzipped the tent just a tiny crack, peeking out into
Starting point is 00:06:38 the moonlit clearing. Everything looked still, the truck and trailer parts, and the truck and trailer parked right where I'd left them, but then I saw it, just a glimpse of a shadow, tall and thin, slipping behind a tree. My heart raced as I tried to tell myself it was nothing, just my imagination, but deep down I knew better. I tried to sleep, but every sound outside made me jump. The laughter was gone, but the breathing was still there, steady and closer than ever. I didn't dare move. I lay there, stiff as a board, eyes wide open, listening, feeling the forest close in around me, like it was waiting for me to make one wrong move. I barely made it through the night.
Starting point is 00:07:21 Every time I closed my eyes, I felt that heavy breathing, closer than before. When the first hint of dawn broke, I scrambled out of the tent, packed up in record time, and jumped into the truck, ready to leave. My hands were shaking so bad it took a few tries to get the keys in the ignition. The engine roared to life, and I took off, leaving the forest and whatever was in it behind me. When I got home, I didn't tell Dad the whole story, just that I'd had trouble with the trailer and didn't feel like staying out overnight. He looked at me a bit funny, probably because I must have looked like I hadn't slept in days, but he didn't push. He only told me we'd go back in
Starting point is 00:08:03 the morning to retrieve the trailer I'd left behind. The drive back to the clearing felt lower than ever. Everything looked different in daylight, almost normal. The shadows were gone, and the trees didn't seem to close in the same way, but my heart wouldn't stop pounding. I could feel that unease creeping back, reminding me of every sound, every breath I'd heard in the dark. When we reached the clearing, the trailer was exactly where I'd left it, still loaded with logs. I helped Dad hook it up to the truck, but as we worked, I felt eyes on me again. I glanced at the trees, and for a split second I could have sworn I saw a shadow moving, tall and thin, slipping behind a tree. I tried to ignore it, telling myself it was just my imagination,
Starting point is 00:08:51 but it was hard to shake the feeling that we weren't alone. On the drive home, the image of that shadow stuck in my head, and I felt the need to know what I'd seen. That night, after Dad went to bed, I crept into his study. He kept a lot of old books in there, mostly about history. but some were about local legends and folklore. I hadn't paid much attention to them before, but I pulled one off the shelf, flipping through until something caught my eye, a chapter on creatures that supposedly lurked in the deep woods.
Starting point is 00:09:22 My hands trembled as I read. The creature described was called The Lurker, a twisted shadowy figure said to prey on people who wandered alone into the woods. It was known for hiding behind trees, staying just out of sight, and following its victim's sight, following its victim silently, patiently.
Starting point is 00:09:41 I thought of the laughter, the breathing, and that shadow slipping through the trees. I felt a chill run down my spine. The next day, I mentioned it to Dad, careful to act like it was no big deal. He looked at me strangely, and then told me that my great-grandfather used to talk about creatures like that, shadows in the woods that no one could explain. He said some locals still refused to go too deep in. into the forest at night. And now I understood why. Now every time I pass the edge of our property, I feel it, the same prickling, the same heavy feeling, like someone's watching. And I know,
Starting point is 00:10:21 deep down, that something's out there, lurking in the shadows, waiting, and I won't be going back any time soon. I'd walk these trails my whole life. The Appalachian Mountains were the kind of place you learned to respect, quiet, ancient, and always watching. I thought I knew every bend and trail marker, each trick of light that made it seem darker than it really was. But when I saw that unfamiliar path stretching off to the right, narrow and barely there, I hesitated. I don't know what compelled me to step onto it. Maybe it was the way the trees curved over, or maybe something about the silence that seemed even quieter than usual. So against my better judgment, I turned and walked into the unknown. After a few steps, the forest grew denser, and I could barely
Starting point is 00:11:17 see the sky through the thick branches. The air had an odd metallic tang, like blood or rust, sharp enough to sting the back of my throat. The trees around me were blackened and twisted. Some bent so far their trunks nearly touched the ground. Each one looked scorched, as if fire had once swept through here and stopped in the middle of nowhere. I stopped, taking in the silence, heavy, waiting sort of quiet, as if even the birds had learned to steer clear. Then I saw it. A massive, open wound in the forest floor, a crater so deep I could barely see the bottom. Chard roots jutted from its sides, clawing toward the center where something strange glinted in the sunlight. I moved closer, my footsteps muffled by the blackened dirt. As I reached the edge,
Starting point is 00:12:04 I saw what had caught the light. It was a book, a small leather journal resting right in the heart of the pit. Something about it made my skin prickle, but I couldn't leave it behind. I lowered myself into the crater, hands digging into the loose earth as I slid down. The journal was cold when I picked it up, colder than it should have been. The leather was old, worn and cracked, with the words fallen kingdom, faintly embossed on the cover. Flipping it open, I saw sketches, disturbing ones. trees twisted into unnatural shapes, strange symbols carved into stones, and creatures drawn in heavy, shadowed lines. Each page seemed to pulse with something dark, something that didn't belong in the light, and then, scrawled on one of the pages, was a name, Lewis Caldwell.
Starting point is 00:12:56 My blood ran cold. I knew that name. Lewis Caldwell was my uncle, the one who had disappeared into these woods nearly 20 years ago. They'd searched, combed every trail and hollow, but never found a trace of him. And yet, here was his journal, as if it had been waiting for me to find it. I looked up, suddenly feeling exposed, like eyes were pressing in from the forest's edge. Shadows moved, just at the edge of my vision, shapes that didn't match any animal I knew. The air turned even colder, carrying a faint whisper that might have been the wind but felt too deliberate. My legs tensed, and I scrambled up the side of the crater, clutching the journal tight.
Starting point is 00:13:38 I could feel something watching me, something that knew I'd taken its secret. A shiver ran down my spine, and I felt the forest close in around me, its silence heavy and almost expectant. I walked fast, nearly jogging, with the journal weighing heavy in my hands. Every breaking twig made me jump. Every gust of wind felt like a warning. By the time I reached the main trail, my heart was racing, and I glanced back one last time. The trees stood silent as if they'd never seen me, but I couldn't shake the feeling that I was already marked.
Starting point is 00:14:13 The next night, I couldn't sleep. The forest seemed to press in tighter around the cabin, thick and stifling, a silent watcher waiting just out of reach. I'd been pouring over the journal all afternoon, reading Lewis's scrawled notes until the words blurred on the page. feeling him in every line, the terror he must have felt, the disbelief. His sketches filled the margins, crude drawings of things he'd seen out here. Creatures that hid between the trees, half-formed faces peering from twisted shadows, and one note repeated, over and over in his jagged heavy handwriting, Never look behind you.
Starting point is 00:14:53 I don't know why I stayed, some combination of curiosity and loyalty maybe, a pull to know the truth about Lewis. Whatever it was, it made me ignore the quiet voice in my head screaming for me to leave. Instead, I shut the journal, pocketed my flashlight, and stepped out into the night. The darkness swallowed me whole. The trees were just towering shadows, gnarled arms reaching up to block out the thin slice of moonlight. I walked down the path toward the clearing, feeling my way like a blind man. Everything seemed sharper at. at night, the rustle of leaves, the whisper of the wind threading through the branches. I kept my steps light, almost unwilling to disturb the silence. That's when I heard it. A faint crunch,
Starting point is 00:15:40 somewhere close, like leaves underfoot. I froze, straining to listen. The sound came again, deliberate and slow, circling me. I didn't dare turn, didn't want to know what might be watching me from behind. Lewis's words rang in my ears. Never look behind you. I kept moving, telling myself it was just the wind or some animal moving through the underbrush. But deep down I knew. I felt it, a weight just outside my line of sight, something following, keeping time with my steps. My hand tightened on the flashlight in my pocket, but I didn't dare pull it out. It felt like an admission, like if I turned on the light, whatever was out there would know I knew it was there.
Starting point is 00:16:25 The footsteps grew louder, each one sinking into the silence, drawing closer. My skin prickled with every crunch of the leaves, every crack of a twig. I took another step holding my breath, and that's when I heard it. A whisper, soft but clear, calling my name. A shiver clawed up my spine, icy fingers twisting through my gut. I kept my eyes fixed ahead, my pulse hammering in my ears. But that whisper, God, it sounded so close, like someone standing just behind me, leaning in, breath warm against my neck.
Starting point is 00:17:02 I could feel its presence, the space it took up in the dark, a cold, patient shadow. I forced myself to move forward, each step dragging against the weight of that whisper. It followed, relentless, echoing in the silent trees. My mind raced, replaying the stories I'd read in Lewis's journal, of shadows that take shape, creatures that wait in the dark. I'd thought it was his imagination, his fear. Now I wasn't so sure. Finally I saw the cabin through the trees,
Starting point is 00:17:34 its outline a lifeline in the blackness. I didn't look back, not even when the footsteps stopped, fading into the night, the forest falling silent once more. But I felt it, even as I crossed the threshold and bolted the door. Whatever was out there wasn't gone.
Starting point is 00:17:51 It was waiting. I didn't wait for morning. Something about the stillness felt too heavy, like the forest was holding its breath, waiting for me to make a mistake. I packed my things, hands shaking as I zipped up my bag, and jammed the journal into my coat pocket.
Starting point is 00:18:10 The cabin walls seemed to close in, pressing me toward the door. I'd told myself I'd find answers here, but all I'd found was fear. Whatever was out there, It wasn't something I could make sense of or confront. It was something older, something that didn't want me here. Stepping outside, the cold night air hit me like a slap.
Starting point is 00:18:32 My flashlight barely cut through the dark, the beam bouncing as my hands trembled. The silence felt thicker tonight, heavier. I walked fast, telling myself I just needed to make it to the main trail. Then it would be fine. But I could feel it, that presence lurking somewhere behind me. Out of sight, but not out of mind. My heartbeat echoed in my ears, drowning out the crunch of my boots on the dirt. That's when I heard it, a low, throaty growl, rumbling from deep in the woods.
Starting point is 00:19:03 It was close, far too close, and it wasn't the sound of any animal I'd ever heard before. I froze, gripping the flashlight, its feeble light trembling as I held it out toward the sound. The darkness shifted, like something moving just beyond the beam's reach, and I could make out the vague outline of antlers twisting into the sky, forming a grotesque crown above a hulking shadow. My breath caught as I saw those eyes, burning yellow, fixed on me, holding me there like prey caught in a trap. My legs moved before I knew what I was doing.
Starting point is 00:19:38 I turned and ran, tearing down the trail as fast as I could, the journal thumping against my chest with each step. I could hear it behind me, its massive steps heavy and deliberate, closing the distance. Branches lashed at my face, thorns scraping my arms, but I kept going, heart pounding, lungs burning. The trail twisted and I stumbled, nearly losing my footing. When I looked up, my heart sank. I was back at the crater, the very place I'd tried to leave behind.
Starting point is 00:20:09 The beast loomed at the edge of the pit, its shadow spilling over the earth, waiting. Its eyes glowed brighter, and a sickening growl rolled from its thither. throat, reverberating through the ground. I backed away, but the ground was loose, crumbling beneath my boots. Panic gripped me, and for a moment I thought I'd tumble into the pit. I reached into my pocket and gripped the journal, clinging to Lewis's words like a lifeline. There was a phrase he'd scrawled, a desperate incantation he'd used to keep the shadows at bay. My voice was barely a whisper, but I forced the words out, repeating them over and over. My voice. My voice was a voice growing louder as the beast drew closer. For a moment, the creature paused, as if the words
Starting point is 00:20:56 had struck it. Its yellow eyes flickered just for an instant, and I took my chance. I scrambled up the edge of the crater, lunged forward, and bolted through the trees. My legs felt like they'd give out at any second, but I kept moving, tearing through the forest, every breath ragged. When I finally saw the main trail ahead, I didn't look back. I burst out of the trees, collapsing on the dirt path, the forest's silence crashing down like a wall. The Appalachian mountains stood behind me, still and silent, but I knew it wasn't finished. I could feel it, waiting for the next time I dared to return. And part of me knew, if I did, I'd never leave again. When I got to the reservation that summer, I couldn't wait to see my cousins. Everything out here
Starting point is 00:21:53 was different. The trees were bigger. The air smelled fresher, and it was a little. It was way quieter than the city. My cousins, Lucas, Sarah, and Eli were already waiting for me on the front porch, and from the look on Lucas's face, I knew he had something planned. It was after dinner, and we were sitting on the porch, just watching the sun dip down behind the trees. The adults were inside, talking and laughing like they always did. I hadn't been back for long when Lucas leaned in close and whispered, "'What if we go camping tonight?' Sarah frowned immediately. "'You know Grandma and Grandpa wouldn't want us out there after dark,' she said,
Starting point is 00:22:34 looking toward the house. They've told us like a million times. Don't go in the woods at night.' Lucas shrugged, giving us his usual grin. That's why we won't tell them. I felt a nervous thrill at the idea. We could just ask, you know, I suggested, even though I already knew what Lucas would say. They'll just say no, he replied, waving a hand. Come on, it'll be fun. We'll set up a tent, tell some stories, and come back before sunrise. They won't even know. Eli, who was only 11, looked really nervous. What if we get caught, he asked, glancing toward the house. Sarah glanced over at me trying to make up her mind. I was excited, but there was a part of me that didn't feel quite right. But then I thought, what's the worst that could happen?
Starting point is 00:23:24 All the kids my age at school would say something like Yolo. All right, I said finally, but we have to be careful. Eli sighed, but eventually agreed too, even though he still looked worried. When midnight came, we waited until the adults were all asleep. We could hear our grandparents snoring from their bedroom as we crept past the door, trying not to step on any of the old floorboards that creaked. Then, quietly as we could, we slipped out the back door and into the door. the cool night air. As we walked through the forest, everything felt different. By daylight, we knew
Starting point is 00:24:01 this path like the backs of our hands, but now it seemed darker, even with the moon shining through the trees. Every sound felt louder, every shadow a little creepier. A branch snapped somewhere to our left, and we all jumped, but Lucas laughed it off, trying to keep the mood light. After about 20 minutes, we made it to the creek, where there was a little clearing surrounded by trees. We set up the tent, which was harder than it looked without a light. Once we finally got it standing, we huddled around a small battery-powered lantern. Its soft glow was just enough to light our faces, but everything outside our circle seemed pitch black. Lucas rubbed his hands together with a grin.
Starting point is 00:24:45 All right, who's got a good story? Sarah's eyes gleamed in the dim light. I've got one. Have you guys ever heard of the Raven Mocker? Eli hugged his knees. I don't like that one. But Lucas just leaned closer, his eyes full of excitement. We sat in a tight circle around the little lantern. Our faces half lit, shadows flickering across the tent walls. Sarah leaned in, her eyes serious. The Raven Mocker is a spirit that steals the hearts of the dying, she began. It takes the years they would have had to live longer itself. She paused, glancing at each of us. It can look like a raven, or even like a person,
Starting point is 00:25:26 but only medicine men can see it in its true form. Eli's face was pale. Do we have to talk about this? he whispered, looking around like he expected something to swoop out of the dark. Lucas grinned. Oh, come on, Eli, it's just a story. But I could tell even he was a little nervous. Besides, I've got one that's even scarier.
Starting point is 00:25:47 He leaned in close, lowering his voice. Have you guys heard of the dear woman? Sarah rolled her eyes, but I couldn't help but shiver as he started. They say she looks like a beautiful woman to trick people into following her into the woods. But once she's got you far enough away, she changes. Lucas paused for effect, his eyes wide. She has hooves for feet and a face like a stag. I glanced at the shadows outside, swallowing hard.
Starting point is 00:26:17 The idea of something pretending to be human was creepy, and the thought of her wandering somewhere out in the dark made me feel like we weren't alone. All right enough, Eli said, clutching his knees. Can we talk about something else? I decided to jump in, hoping to lighten the mood. What about the legend of the star people, I said? They're supposed to be peaceful. They come from the stars to teach people wisdom.
Starting point is 00:26:42 They're not scary at all. Lucas rolled his eyes. That's lame. Ben. He looked around, his face dead serious now. My grandpa told me something once, something he swore was real. Sarah's expression darkened. Lucas don't. But Lucas leaned in, undeterred. He said when he was our age, he saw a skinwalker. The tent fell silent. We all knew about skinwalkers, but we'd never really talked about them before. Even the elders didn't like to mention them. A skinwalker is a witch. Lucas continued. His voice bare.
Starting point is 00:27:17 barely above a whisper, who can turn into animals to do dark magic. My grandpa was outgathering wood with his dad, but somehow they got separated. Then, in the middle of the clearing, he saw a coyote standing on two legs, staring right at him. Lucas don't, Sarah whispered, but she looked just as curious as I felt. Lucas kept going, his face pale. He thought he was seeing things, but then the coyote started walking toward him. its body twisting and changing. Lucas shivered.
Starting point is 00:27:52 It had the face of a man stretched tight over its skull, and it whispered his name. Eli whimpered, clutching my arm. I think we should go to sleep, I suggested, my voice shaky. Just as we started to settle down, I heard a sound outside,
Starting point is 00:28:08 a soft shuffling, like feet dragging through leaves. We all froze, staring at each other in terror. The shuffling grew louder, closer. Lucas turned to us, his face drained of color. Did, did you guys hear that?
Starting point is 00:28:24 The shuffling sound grew louder, coming closer with every step. My heart was pounding so hard I thought it might burst right out of my chest. I looked around at my cousins. Sarah's eyes were wide with fear. Eli was gripping my arm so tightly at hurt. And even Lucas looked terrified. His mouth set in a thin line. What is that?
Starting point is 00:28:46 Eli whispered, his voice barely audible. Sh, Lucas mouthed his finger to his lips. He reached slowly for the flashlight, his hand shaking. Carefully, he unzipped a tiny section of the tent flap, just enough to peek outside. We huddled behind him, each of us straining to see without making a sound. The flashlight beam cut through the darkness, sweeping across the trees.
Starting point is 00:29:10 At first, there was nothing but shadows and branches. But then, something moved. A figure emerged from behind a tree, and I felt a cold shiver run down my spine. It looked like a coyote, but not like any coyote I'd ever seen. Its body was twisted and stretched, with long, bony limbs that didn't seem to fit. Patches of its fur were missing, and its skin looked pulled too tightly over its bones. But the worst part was its face. It was like someone had tried to stretch a human face over a coyote's skull.
Starting point is 00:29:43 The eyes were sunken and dark, and its mouth hung open in a silent scream. The creature moved slowly, in a jerky unnatural way, circling our tent. I held my breath, not daring to move. It didn't seem to notice us, at least, not yet. It was looking around, its head twitching from side to side, as if it were searching for something. Sarah covered her mouth to keep from screaming, and Eli's grip on my arm tightened. Lucas slowly lowered the flap, turning off the flashlight. We all huddled together, barely breathing, hoping that if we stayed quiet, it would go away.
Starting point is 00:30:22 The shuffling grew louder, circling closer and closer to the tent. Then, in a raspy, distorted voice, we heard it speak. Help. Me. It whispered, each word sounding like it was being forced out of something that barely knew how to speak. A wave of terror washed over me. It was mimicking a human voice, but it was. It sounded wrong, too low, too harsh, like it was trying to trick us. Please, help, me. Eli began to shake,
Starting point is 00:30:50 tears welling in his eyes. Sarah put a hand on his shoulder, mouthing, don't move. We were all frozen, hoping, praying that it would leave. The creature pressed against the tent fabric close enough that we could see its shadow, stretched and distorted. A rotten smell filled the tent, something like decay mixed with sulfur. I clenched my eyes. I clenched my eyes. I clenched my eyes shut, silently begging it to go away. Finally, after what felt like hours, the shuffling noise started to fade. We sat there, still frozen, as the sounds moved farther and farther away, until the forest was quiet again. As the first light of dawn broke through the trees, we scrambled out of the tent and ran back home, leaving everything behind. None of us dared
Starting point is 00:31:37 look back. I worked as a logger, spending my days in the forest, cutting down trees for a new housing project. To be honest, I didn't feel great about it, knocking down trees and clearing land. But hey, it paid the bills. The forest was beautiful and peaceful most of the time, even if it had its strange moments. The guys I worked with had found old, abandoned tents, jackets, and even shoes left behind. But some stories were downright creepy. Once, someone found bones that nobody could identify. They were still still being talked about, the remains of some poor person who'd never been found. I always thought the stories were just legends to spook us, but that was before my last week
Starting point is 00:32:30 out there. That evening, just before sunset, I had gone a little further into the trees to find some privacy. I could still hear my two co-workers laughing and talking near the truck, but their voices were faint. I walked into the deeper part of the woods, keeping an eye out for any thorny branches or rocks. It was just about 6 p.m. and the light was fading fast. In the winter, it got dark earlier, which meant we were usually packing up by now. I had wandered a bit further than I should have, but the guys knew I'd be back soon. As I was standing there, I suddenly heard a loud snap,
Starting point is 00:33:07 a branch breaking, close by. My heart started beating faster. I turned slightly, thinking it was one of my co-workers trying to mess with me. Nice try, guys. I was a little. I was a little bit of my co-workers. I I muttered under my breath, feeling a little uneasy. I heard another crack even closer this time, followed by a low, weird chuckle. That laugh didn't sound quite right. It was strange, almost like it had a rasp to it. But I convinced myself it was just them, playing around. Come on, guys, I said louder now.
Starting point is 00:33:38 Let's get out of here. It's getting cold. They didn't answer. I zipped up my jacket, feeling a shiver run down my spine. something didn't feel right. I could see shadows growing in the trees as the last bits of daylight faded. The forest was so quiet I could hear my own heartbeat. But then, there was another snap, this time coming from behind a thick, shadowed tree.
Starting point is 00:34:03 I spun around and there it was, a figure, tall and strange, half hidden behind a tree about 50 yards away. It was about my height, maybe a little taller, but its head was odd, almost too big, and its eyes, red, glowing like embers in the shadows. I froze, staring at it, unable to move. A thin trail of steam rose from its body in the cold air. It looked like it was breathing heavily, almost like a growl, and I could hear every rough, raspy breath. My feet felt like they were glued to the ground.
Starting point is 00:34:36 I couldn't tell what I was looking at, but I knew it wasn't anything normal. I took a shaky step backward, then another, but the thing didn't move. It just stood there, watching me, its glowing eyes fixed on me. Finally, I forced myself to turn and run back to the truck, my heart pounding louder than ever. My feet stumbled over roots and rocks, but I kept going, hearing only silence behind me. But even as I reached the truck, I couldn't shake the feeling that it was still out there, watching. The next morning I still felt that same chill from the night before. Like something had followed me home, even though I knew it couldn't have.
Starting point is 00:35:14 I'd barely slept, haunted by the memory of those red glowing eyes and the strange, rough breathing that had echoed through the forest. When I got to the job site, the guys were already there, talking in low voices. They looked over when I arrived, and I could tell they were just as spooked as I was, even if they didn't want to admit it. Our boss didn't believe us. When we told him what we'd seen, he laughed it off. You boys got too many ghost stories in your heads. It's just shadows and wildlife out there. He said shrugging.
Starting point is 00:35:47 Now get back to work. These trees aren't going to cut themselves. I didn't argue, but I could tell the others were still on edge. None of us wanted to be there, especially not after what we'd seen. But work was work, and we didn't have a choice. We got to the clearing, the area where we'd been cutting down trees and went right to work. I tried to focus on my job, tried to ignore the way the forest felt. It was too quiet, like it was holding its breath.
Starting point is 00:36:16 Normally we'd hear birds or squirrels, or even the wind rustling the leaves. But now, nothing. Just the steady hum of the chainsaws and the crunch of our boots on the cold hard ground. Every so often I'd look up, scanning the trees. I knew it was out there. I could feel it. But the forest looked empty. My skin prickled, and every snap of a branch or rustle of leaves made me jump.
Starting point is 00:36:42 The guys were jumpy too. Every time I glanced over, one of them was looking around, squinting into the shadows just like me. The silence wrapped around us, growing heavier with every hour. Finally, as we were packing up for the day, I heard it again. A growl, deep and low, coming from the south. My heart started pounding. The other guys froze, and I saw the fear flash in their eyes. None of us wanted to move, but we had to know if it was there.
Starting point is 00:37:10 Slowly, we all turned toward the sound, squinting into the fading light. At first, there was nothing, just shadows between the trees. Then one of the guys whispered, there, and pointed. My stomach twisted as I spotted it, the creature from last night. It was closer now, standing still, watching us, its red eyes blazing in the dim light. I could see the strange shape of its head, the thin steam rising. off its skin. It looked more terrifying in the daylight than it had in the dark. Without thinking, my co-worker reached into the truck, pulled out a pistol from the glove box, and took aim,
Starting point is 00:37:53 crack. He fired once, twice, and we saw the creature stumble, the shots hitting it in the leg in the chest. But it didn't fall. It let out a horrible, angry snarl, then retreated back into the shadows, disappearing as suddenly as it had appeared. We jumped into the truck, barely speaking, and drove back to camp. My heart was racing, my mind spinning. I didn't know what we had seen, but I knew one thing. Whatever it was, it was still out there, and it wasn't going to leave us alone. I didn't want to go back out there. After what we'd seen, I was ready to quit, to walk away from logging and the forest altogether, but we didn't have much of a choice. Our boss was firm, either show up or get fired.
Starting point is 00:38:41 So there we were, the three of us, heading back into that forest as the sun started rising. Our breath visible in the cold morning air. The ride was quiet. Nobody spoke. We were all thinking the same thing about those red eyes and that awful, heavy breathing. My hands were shaking as we parked the truck and got out,
Starting point is 00:39:02 each of us carrying our gear without a word. Every step felt heavier as we moved toward the clearing. The forest was completely silent, not even a bird chirping. It felt like we'd walked into a graveyard. We started our work quickly, eager to get it done and get out. None of us wanted to be there longer than we had to be, but as the hours passed, I kept glancing over my shoulder, feeling like I was being watched.
Starting point is 00:39:28 Every so often, I'd catch one of the other guys doing the same. We didn't say anything. but I knew they felt it too. The air was thick with tension, like the forest itself was holding its breath, waiting for something to happen. Finally, we started packing up the equipment, ready to get out of there.
Starting point is 00:39:47 That's when I heard it, the growl. My blood turned to ice as the sound filled the clearing, low and menacing, coming from somewhere to the south. I saw my friends freeze, their eyes wide with fear. We turned, looking toward the trees, but saw nothing.
Starting point is 00:40:04 The growling grew louder, echoing around us. It was closer this time, a horrible rumbling sound that made my skin crawl. One of the guys pointed, and I followed his gaze. There, just at the edge of the clearing, was the creature. Its red eyes glowed, staring straight at us. It looked bigger somehow and angrier. I could see the dark spots where the bullets had hit it yesterday, but it didn't seem hurt.
Starting point is 00:40:32 If anything, it looked more furious. like it was out for revenge. My co-worker with the pistol raised it again, his hands shaking. He fired once, then twice, but the creature didn't even flinch. It took a step toward us, its growl turning into a snarl.
Starting point is 00:40:49 My heart pounded as we backed up, moving toward the truck, never taking our eyes off it. Get in, I shouted, and we scrambled into the truck, slamming the doors behind us. The creature lunged forward, slamming into the side of the truck,
Starting point is 00:41:03 with a force that rocked us sideways. It led out a horrible scream, a sound I'll never forget, half roar, half wail, like it was something not of this world. My friend floored the gas, and we sped down the dirt road, away from the clearing,
Starting point is 00:41:18 away from the thing that haunted that forest. As we hit the main road, the growling faded, but the memory of those red eyes stayed with us. We didn't talk much on the ride back, but we all knew one thing. Whatever that creature was, it wasn't gone.
Starting point is 00:41:33 It was still out there lurking in those dark trees waiting. I couldn't remember the last time I'd been this far from the city. Michael's old Jeep rattled down the winding dirt road, bouncing over potholes as tall trees stretched up around us. The world was getting quieter and darker as the day slipped into dusk, and for the first time I was questioning this whole idea of camping out here in Shawnee National Forest. But Michael, my best friend, was going through it after his younger brother's death, and he needed this. So here we were, me, Andre, Leah, and Michael, all packed into the car
Starting point is 00:42:21 with our camping gear and more bags than we probably needed for a weekend. After a few miles of nothing but forest, we finally found a clearing where we could set up camp. The air felt thick with quiet, broken only by the sounds of our shoes crunching on the dirt and the rustling of leaves. As we unloaded the tents and bags, I noticed Leah staring off into the trees. Her face shadowed with something I couldn't read. You good? I asked, nudging her. She snapped out of it, flashing me a quick grin. Just, it's spooky out here, isn't it?
Starting point is 00:42:56 I nodded, but didn't think much of it. We were deep in the woods, after all. What did she expect? Once the tents were set up and a small fire was crackling, we finally started to relax a little. We roasted marshmallows, told jokes, and swapped dumb stories from school. For a moment, things felt normal, even good. Michael laughed for the first time in ages, his face softening in the firelight.
Starting point is 00:43:21 I could see him relaxing, like maybe we'd made the right call bringing him out here. As the night dragged on, Leah decided to sleep outside in her hammock, saying she wanted to fall asleep under the stars. The rest of us headed to our tents, our flashlights bounced. dancing off the trees and making weird shadows. The noises of the night felt like they were growing louder, crickets, branches cracking in the distance, the low hoot of an owl. I tried to brush it off, reminding myself we were just in the middle of nature. But just as I was drifting off, something caught my ear, a faint, distant sound that almost sounded like, singing?
Starting point is 00:44:04 I lay there in the dark, holding my breath, trying to listen. It was probably nothing, maybe a bird or the wind. Still, I checked my phone and saw a text from Leah. Can you see them? There are kids out here. My stomach dropped. Kids? Here?
Starting point is 00:44:23 In the middle of the forest? I unzipped my tent as quietly as I could and peered outside. Leah was frozen in her hammock. Her eyes fixed on something just beyond the firelight. I squinted, trying to see what she was looking at, and that's when I noticed them. Two small figures, no taller than four feet, standing at the edge of our camp. They didn't move. They just stood there, their faces hidden in shadow.
Starting point is 00:44:48 I stepped out of the tent, my heart pounding. Hey, are you guys lost? I called out. One of the figures tilted its head, like it was thinking, then finally answered. Its voice was low and flat. We're cold. Can we come closer? A shiver crawled up my spine.
Starting point is 00:45:08 There was something wrong about the way it spoke, something that made the hairs on my neck stand up. I felt André come up beside me, whispering, This isn't right, man, we should leave. But I couldn't look away from those kids. We all stood there, frozen, staring at the kids standing just beyond the firelight. They were so still, like statues,
Starting point is 00:45:30 their faces hidden in shadow. Leah finally whispered, What are they doing out here? Her voice was shaking and honestly so was I. Michael cleared his throat, trying to sound calm. Maybe they're lost, he said, though he didn't look convinced.
Starting point is 00:45:46 Are you guys all right? He called again, louder this time. One of the kids, the smaller one, tilted its head to the side, as if considering the question. Then, in a voice so flat and cold it felt like a slap, the kid replied,
Starting point is 00:46:00 please let us in. We're called. cold. I don't know why, but that simple request made my stomach twist. Something was off, something I couldn't put my finger on. Michael glanced at me, his expression just as uneasy. Leah, looking torn, took a shaky step forward. Maybe we should. I mean, they're just kids, right? They could be lost. But Andre grabbed her arm, stopping her. Wait. Look at their eyes, he whispered. His voice barely a breath. It was only then that I was. noticed. The firelight flickered across the kids' faces, and I could finally see their eyes. Black,
Starting point is 00:46:39 pitch black, like they had no whites or irises at all, just two inky voids staring back at us. My heart hammered in my chest, every instinct telling me that whatever these kids were, they weren't normal. Michael took a shaky step back, his hand clenching into a fist. Uh, look, he said, trying to keep his voice steady. We, we don't have room in the tent, but maybe we could call someone for you tomorrow. He was stammering, practically tripping over his words. The kids didn't react. They just stood there, staring at us, unblinking.
Starting point is 00:47:17 Then, after what felt like forever, one of them spoke again. It's voice colder than before. It's rude to leave us out here. Invite us in. Leah looked at us, eyes wide. What do we do? They're just kids. Are they?
Starting point is 00:47:33 Andre cut her off, his face pale. They don't seem right. Just then, the fire flickered, casting long shadows over the campsite, and a chill swept over us, colder than the forest air. The kids took a step closer, and my heart practically jumped into my throat. I forced myself to speak, my voice shaking. We can't let you in. It's too.
Starting point is 00:47:56 It's too cold for anyone else. At that, one of the kids smiled. Only, it wasn't a normal smile. It was too wide, too forced, like someone pretending to be happy. The other kid said, We don't need warmth. We need you to let us in. Panic flared through me.
Starting point is 00:48:16 This wasn't right. This wasn't normal. I pulled out my phone, desperate to call someone, anyone. But the screen was dead. the battery drained even though I'd charged it before we left. I looked around, seeing the others checking their phones too, each of their faces turning pale as they realized the same thing. No one had service.
Starting point is 00:48:38 No one had power. The kids were still standing there, closer than before. Their eyes never leaving us. Leah's voice was barely a whisper. What? What are they? None of us had an answer. we just backed away huddling together as the voices of the kids rose again in a haunting chant
Starting point is 00:48:58 repeating, let us in. The chanting grew louder, filling the night air with a creepy rhythm that made my skin crawl. Let us in. Let us in. It was as if the words had a life of their own, echoing around us, bouncing off the trees. I couldn't tell if the voices were coming from the kids or from somewhere deeper in the forest. Andre clenched his fists, his eyes darting from me to Michael. We have to get out of here, he whispered, urgency thick in his voice. Now, Michael didn't argue. We all scrambled to pack up our gear as fast as we could, hands shaking, throwing everything into the Jeep without bothering to organize it. The kids just stood there watching us with those empty black eyes, never blinking. Their eerie smiles stretching wider with every passing second,
Starting point is 00:49:48 I took one last look at them before diving into the Jeep. It was the way they stared, like they knew something we didn't, like they were waiting for us to mess up and invite them in by mistake. I could hardly breathe as Andre slammed the door shut behind us, his knuckles white as he fumbled with the keys, finally getting the engine to roar to life. The headlights sliced through the darkness, illuminating the kids one last time.
Starting point is 00:50:14 They hadn't moved, but they were still watching. their smiles fading into blank expressions as we pulled away. I held my breath, praying we'd just speed out of the forest and never see them again. But as we picked up speed, something caught my eye in the trees, a shadow, small and quick darting from tree to tree. They're following us, Leah whispered, her voice barely audible. How? How are they keeping up?
Starting point is 00:50:41 I didn't know. None of us did. But every time I looked out the window, I saw one. of those shadowy figures flitting between the trees, always just on the edge of the headlights, as if they were taunting us, daring us to stop. After what felt like hours, we finally saw the lights of a gas station up ahead. It was run down, but the bright lights spilling across the parking lot felt like the first breath of safety we'd had all night. We pulled in, parking as close to the entrance as we could. The four of us stumbled out, practically collapsing into the
Starting point is 00:51:15 the store, where a gray-haired man was standing behind the counter, his face a mask of mild curiosity. You kids all right, he asked, his eyes narrowing as he took in our pale faces and shaking hands. Michael tried to speak, but his voice cracked. I ended up explaining, words tumbling out of my mouth about the kids with black eyes, the chanting, the way they'd followed us here. The man listened quietly, not interrupting, but when I mentioned the black, but when I mentioned the
Starting point is 00:51:45 black eyes, his expression darkened. He looked at us, then slowly shook his head. You've seen them, he muttered, almost to himself. They've been showing up here for years, though people don't talk about it much. They look like kids, but they aren't. They'll try to get in, use every trick they can to make you let them. But if you let them in, you'll never be seen again. My blood ran cold. The words sank in, heavy and terrifying. Will, will they still follow us? Leah asked, her voice breaking. The man looked out the window, his face serious. Maybe. They don't like to be ignored.
Starting point is 00:52:26 But if you get far enough, maybe they'll lose interest. He looked back at us. Just don't ever open your door to them again, not anywhere. We stayed in that gas station until dawn, clutching our coffees, watching the dark edges of the parking lot for any sign of movement. By the time the sun rose, we were too exhausted to speak. But one thing was clear. None of us would ever forget those faces,
Starting point is 00:52:52 or the feeling of being hunted by something we couldn't understand. And no matter what, I knew one thing for sure, I'd never feel safe in the dark again. I'm Henry, and last week I decided to head out alone to a hidden fishing spot deep in the Tennessee woods. My friend Will had told me about it, saying it was full of fish, big ones too. He'd only found it a few days before but swore it was worth the trip.
Starting point is 00:53:26 Since his daughter was sick, he couldn't come with me, so I was on my own. I followed his directions as best as I could remember. It took longer than I thought, twisting through thick trees and rough trails. The air was so still. Usually when I'm in the woods, I hear birds, bugs, maybe a squirrel or two, but here, nothing, just the crunch of leaves under my boots and the soft rustle of branches. At one point, I stopped because it felt like something was watching me. I shook off the feeling, trying to convince myself it was just my imagination. Still, a chill ran down my spine. After what felt like hours, I finally reached the pond. But it wasn't a pond. It was much bigger, more like a small, murky lake.
Starting point is 00:54:16 Dark water stretched out before me, with shadows from the thick trees around it making the whole place feel gloomy. I found a big, rotting log near the shore, so I set down my stuff and got ready to fish. The silence was strange. Usually when you're by water, you hear frogs, bugs, splashes, something.
Starting point is 00:54:38 But here, there was nothing but stillness. I cast out my line. trying to ignore the uneasy feeling crawling up my back. I kept telling myself it was just my mind playing tricks. I'd been fishing for a while and even caught a couple of small fish when I heard something across the water. It was a sloshing noise, like something moving around. I squinted, trying to see better, but the tree's shadows made it hard. And then I saw it. Something was crouched on the other side of the pond, drinking from the water. At first, I thought it was a deal. or maybe a bear, but it was hunched in a weird way, almost like it had too many joints or its
Starting point is 00:55:19 legs were bent wrong. Its skin had an odd, shiny look to it, almost like fish scales, which didn't make any sense. My heart pounded as I watched it lift its head, but it was too far for me to make out much detail. Just as I started convincing myself it was some regular animal, the thing moved forward and slipped into the water without a sound. I tried to focus on fishing again, telling myself it was nothing, just some animal I hadn't seen before, but every nerve in my body was on edge. I couldn't shake the feeling that this place was wrong. I didn't belong here. My instincts told me to leave, but my curiosity kept me sitting there, watching the water, waiting for any sign of movement. Just then, my fishing pole jerked, harder than any fish I'd ever caught. Before I could grab it,
Starting point is 00:56:09 the pole flew out of my hands and into the water. I sat there, stunned, staring at the ripples spreading across the pond, feeling a sudden, deep fear. I sat there, frozen, staring at the dark, swirling water where my fishing pole had just disappeared. My heart hammered in my chest, and my hands felt numb. I'd been fishing all my life, and I'd never seen anything strong enough to pull a pole out of my hands like that. Whatever was under that murky water wasn't normal. I glanced around, my eyes darting between the shadows cast by the trees. A few seconds passed, and the pond's surface was completely still again, like nothing had happened. But I knew better.
Starting point is 00:56:53 Something was down there, something I couldn't see, something that wanted to be hidden. I felt a chill creep over me, like icy fingers trailing down my spine. I decided it was time to leave. Maybe I was overreacting, but there was no way I was sticking around to find out. what had yanked my pole into that dark water. My hands shook as I started packing up, every sound making me flinch. Even the quiet seemed different, thicker somehow, like the forest was holding its breath. Just as I slung my backpack over my shoulder, I heard it, a sloshing sound, soft but unmistakable, coming from right behind me. My whole body went stiff. I could feel my heart
Starting point is 00:57:34 thumping in my throat. Slowly, I turned around, gripping my pocket knife, even, even though I knew it was way too small to protect me from whatever was out there. And that's when I saw it. Standing just a few yards away, dripping with water and mud, was the thing I had spotted across the pond. But up close, it was way worse. It was bigger than I'd thought, standing on all fours with a strange twisted stance.
Starting point is 00:58:01 Its skin was slimy and scaly, a sickly green with patches of darker shades. It had long webbed fingers that ended in, sharp claw-like tips, and its mouth was wrong. It was wide, stretching almost too far across its face, and filled with tiny needle-like teeth. Worst of all were its eyes, small, black, and cold, like it was looking right through me. The creature's neck was lined with these pulsing gills that flared in and out, making a wet, wheezing noise with each breath. I gagged at the smell, a thick rotting stench, like something that had been left to decay under the sun for days.
Starting point is 00:58:43 The creature stared at me, then took a slow, deliberate step forward. It made a low hissing noise, its mouth curling into what looked like a sick grin. I held my knife up, even though I knew it wouldn't do much. My hands were trembling, but I wasn't going down without a fight. Suddenly it lunged. Instinct kicked in. I swung the knife as hard as I could. connecting with the creature's neck, hitting one of the gills. The creature let out a high-pitched screech, stumbling back as thick, black sludge oozed from the wound. It flinched, snarling at me,
Starting point is 00:59:20 and then, just as quickly as it appeared, it turned and fled, slinking back into the pond. I didn't wait to see if it would come back. Dropping everything, I ran, crashing through the forest, not daring to look back. By the time I got back to my truck, was shaking so hard I could barely get the key into the ignition. My heart was racing, and I felt like the thing's eyes were still watching me from somewhere deep in the woods. I couldn't get the sight of that creature out of my mind, its scaly, slimy skin, the wide, grinning mouth filled with sharp teeth, and the awful sloshing sound of its gills breathing. The entire drive home, I kept checking my mirrors, half expecting to see it chasing me.
Starting point is 01:00:06 The moment I got home, I called Will. He didn't believe me at first. Who would? But there was something in my voice that must have convinced him. He finally agreed to meet me the next day to go back to the pond, to see if there was any proof of what I'd seen. As much as I wanted to avoid that place, I needed someone else to see what I'd seen,
Starting point is 01:00:27 just so I knew I wasn't losing my mind. The next day, Will picked me up, and we drove in silence to the trail. The closer we got, the more my stomach twisted with dread. As we walked through the forest, it was like every noise was louder, every shadow darker. Even Will, who usually cracked jokes to lighten the mood, was silent, his eyes darting around the trees.
Starting point is 01:00:52 When we finally reached the pond, everything looked exactly the same, still, dark, and quiet. But then I saw them, the footprints, huge, webbed and clawed, leading from the water to the very spot where I'd been sitting the day before. I pointed them out to Will, my throat dry. He stopped laughing. His face went pale, and he crouched down to get a closer look. These, these are too big for any animal, he whispered, staring at the prince. I nodded, too scared to speak. The prince were deep, like something heavy had stepped there, and they led straight into the water where they disappeared into the pond's black surface.
Starting point is 01:01:34 We both stood there in silence, staring at the water, when we heard a soft splash from somewhere across the pond. Will and I turned at the same time. A ripple moved across the water, slow and eerie, like something was swimming just below the surface. The smell hit us then, a foul, rotten stench that made me gag. The ripple grew closer, and we saw a shape rise. just above the water, the creature. Its head broke the surface, those black soulless eyes
Starting point is 01:02:05 staring straight at us. The gills on its neck pulsed, making that sick, wet noise with each breath. Will grabbed my arm, his face filled with horror. We. We need to leave, he whispered. I didn't need to be told twice. We backed away slowly, keeping our eyes on the creature as it watched us. Just as we turned to run, it led out a low, guttural growl that sent chills through my entire body. We ran faster than I've ever run in my life, crashing through branches, not stopping until we were back at the truck. We never went back to that pond. If you're a QuickBooks customer looking to grow your business without the growing pains, you need the Intuit ERP. Upgrade to Intuit Enterprise Suite in a matter of hours.
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Starting point is 01:03:16 whose remarkable intelligence leads her to a life-changing discovery. Watch remarkably bright creatures with your remarkable moms this Mother's Day weekend. Only on Netflix May 8th. Halloween was always a big deal in our neighborhood. Houses were decorated with fake cobwebs, glowing pumpkins, and spooky skeletons hanging from the trees. Kids in costumes raced down the sidewalks, their candy buckets swinging with every step. Everyone seemed to love it, except my wife, Rachel. Ever since I met Rachel, she's never liked Halloween.
Starting point is 01:03:57 In fact, she acted like it didn't even exist. Back when we were dating, she'd always come up with some excuse to skip parties or gatherings. I have a headache, she'd say, or I think I'm coming down with something. At first I believed her. I mean everyone gets sick sometimes, right? But after a while, it started to feel off. Now that we were married and had a little girl, Lily, I thought things would change. But every Halloween, Rachel stayed the same.
Starting point is 01:04:24 While I carved pumpkins and decorated the yard, she stayed inside, avoiding the whole thing like it was a plague. I never understood it, and this year I was determined to. to find out why. Ready to go, Lily? I asked, helping my daughter into her sparkly princess costume. She twirled in the mirror, her face lighting up with excitement. At only three years old, she was already obsessed with Halloween, probably because I made such a big deal about it.
Starting point is 01:04:52 I smiled at her, but a glance at Rachel sitting silently in the corner made my smile fade. Rachel sat by the window, staring out at the darkening sky. She looked pale, her hands gripping the edge of the edge of the world. the chair like she was bracing for something. You coming with us this year? I asked, trying to keep my tone light. Rachel turned to me, her eyes wide and nervous. I'm not feeling well. She muttered, her voice barely above a whisper. I sighed. You always say that, Rachel. Every year. What's really going on? I told you, I don't feel good, she said again, this time a bit sharper. Her gaze drifted back to the window, as if something out there had her attention. A chill
Starting point is 01:05:34 ran down my spine, though I wasn't sure why. You seemed fine all day, I pressed, frustrated now. Come on, it's just Halloween, it's fun. Lily would love for you to come with us. Rachel flinched slightly at my words, her eyes darting toward Lily, who was now playing with her candy bucket. I can't, she whispered, her voice shaking. Please, just take her and go. I'll stay here. It was like she was terrified. I couldn't figure it out. I didn't want to argue in front of Lily, so I let out a long breath and nodded. Fine, but this can't go on forever, Rachel. We're a family. You need to be a part of this. Rachel didn't respond. Instead, she stood up, wrapped her arms around Lily in a tight hug,
Starting point is 01:06:22 and kissed her on the forehead. I love you, sweetie. Have fun tonight, she said, her voice trembling. As we headed out the door, I glanced back at Rachel. She stood there watching us go. her face a mixture of fear and something else. Something I couldn't quite place. But what could be so bad about Halloween? We weren't out trick-or-treating for long before Lily tripped and scraped her knee. She tried to be tough, but the tears came fast,
Starting point is 01:06:50 and before I knew it, we were headed back home. We rounded the corner to our street, and that's when I saw it. Our bedroom light was on. Rachel had said she was going to bed, that she wasn't feeling well, but clearly she hadn't gone to sleep like she said. said. I wasn't just frustrated anymore. I was angry. It wasn't just the Halloween thing. It was the
Starting point is 01:07:11 lying, the secrets. What could she be hiding? I helped Lily inside, cleaned up her knee, and set her in front of the TV with her favorite cartoon. Then I headed upstairs, my heart pounding harder with each step. When I reached the top of the stairs, I froze. There it was again. That voice. Rachel was talking to someone. The door to our bedroom was closed, but I could hear her clearly, whispering in a low, urgent tone. My mind raced. Who could be in there with her? Who could she be talking to at this hour with the door locked and the lights off?
Starting point is 01:07:49 I stepped closer, pressing my ear against the door. My blood ran cold. The voice on the other side didn't sound right. It was Rachel's voice, but at the same time it wasn't. There was something wrong with it. something darker, like it was being twisted by something I couldn't see. Rachel! I knocked on the door, my voice loud and shaky.
Starting point is 01:08:12 Rachel, what's going on? Open the door. The whispering stopped. There was silence for a long moment, and then the light under the door flickered out. My heart pounded in my chest. I tried the doorknob, but it wouldn't budge, locked. Rachel! I pounded harder. Open the door.
Starting point is 01:08:31 Now! A few more seconds of dead silence passed, and then I heard a soft click. The door creaked open and Rachel stepped out. My breath caught in my throat. She looked horrible. Her skin was pale, paler than usual, and her eyes were hollow, like she hadn't slept in days. Her hair hung limp around her face, and she trembled as she stood there in the doorway. You shouldn't be home yet, she whispered, her voice barely audible.
Starting point is 01:08:58 You need to leave. Leave, I repeated, staring at her in disbelief. What are you talking about? Who were you talking to? Her eyes flickered toward the bedroom, but she didn't answer. I followed her gaze, my stomach twisting in knots. Rachel, what's going on? I asked. My voice quieter now, filled with dread. She hesitated, glancing at the floor. You need to know the truth, she whispered, finally meeting my eyes.
Starting point is 01:09:25 I was supposed to die, Ethan, years ago in that car accident. I was supposed to die. I stared at her, not understanding. But something... Something saved me, she continued, her voice shaking, and every Halloween it comes back, to collect its payment. Just then, from inside the bedroom I heard it. Three slow, heavy knocks on the closet door.
Starting point is 01:09:48 The knocks echoed in the silence, slow and deliberate, each one sending a cold chill down my spine. My legs felt frozen and I couldn't move. I stared at the bedroom door, my heart racing. trying to make sense of what Rachel had just told me. Something saved her? And now it wanted payment? Rachel, what was that?
Starting point is 01:10:10 I whispered, though I wasn't sure I wanted to know the answer. Her eyes filled with tears, and her whole body was trembling. I told you, she said, her voice barely a whisper. It's here. It comes every Halloween, and tonight it wants more. I took a step back, fear twisting in my chest. more. What do you mean? Before Rachel could answer, the closet door inside our bedroom creaked open. Slowly. My stomach flipped as a cold gust of air rushed from the room, making the hair on the back
Starting point is 01:10:41 of my neck stand on end. Out of the darkness stepped a tall, shadowy figure. It was cloaked in tattered black robes, its face hidden beneath a hood, but I could feel its eyes, watching me, burning through the darkness. The figure's breath rasped like dry leaves, scraping against the ground. I couldn't see its face, but I knew it was grinning. Somehow, I just knew. Rachel backed away from the figure, her hands shaking. Please, she begged, her voice breaking. Not tonight, not yet. The figure didn't answer. It just lifted one long, bony hand and pointed at Rachel. A strange, cold energy filled the room, and I could feel the air thickening with tension. My legs were locked in place.
Starting point is 01:11:29 but my mind screamed for me to run. Rachel turned toward me, her face a mask of fear and pain. I can't fight it anymore, Ethan. It's too late. You have to take Lily and leave. I shook my head. I'm not leaving you here with that thing. Her eyes were wide, pleading.
Starting point is 01:11:48 You don't understand. If you don't go, it'll take both of you. Please just take Lily and run. But I couldn't move. I didn't want to leave her. My wife, who I thought I'd, knew, was standing there, facing this impossible horror alone. The figure stepped closer to Rachel, its fingers reaching for her, and as soon as they touched her skin, I watched in horror as she began
Starting point is 01:12:12 to wither. Her face became pale, her skin stretched tight, and her eyes sunk deep into her face. It was like she was aging in front of me, her life being drained away with each touch. No, I shouted, but Rachel turned to me with one last glance. her lips trembling in a weak, sad smile. Run, I bolted out of the room, racing down the stairs with my heart pounding so hard I thought it might burst. I grabbed Lily from the couch, threw her into my arms, and ran out the front door,
Starting point is 01:12:44 not daring to look back. As I sped down the driveway, I caught a glimpse of the upstairs window. Rachel, or what was left of her, stood in the window, watching us. And next to her, the dark figure loomed, grinning down at us like it had all the time in the world. It would be back.
Starting point is 01:13:11 It was a cold October evening when I pulled up to Black Hollow Elementary for the Halloween carnival. The air felt different that night, heavier, like something was watching us from the shadows. I didn't say anything to Emma, though. She'd been excited for weeks, and I didn't want to spoil it. Dressed as an angel, complete with wings made of glitter and tool, she bounced in her seat as I parked the car. Daddy, do you think Mommy will be there? Emma asked, her wide eyes staring at me hopefully. It was the same question she asked every time we did something special. And every time I gave her the same answer, knowing full well it was a lie. I'm sure she's watching over us, sweetie,
Starting point is 01:13:54 I said, forcing a smile. It was easier than explaining the truth. Lila wasn't watching us. She was gone, and no amount of wishing was going to bring her back. We stepped out of the car. crunch of gravel under our feet the only sound in the empty parking lot. Ahead of us, the school was lit up with orange and purple lights, pumpkins lining the walkway. I could hear kids laughing from inside the gym, but something felt off. The air was thick with an unsettling chill that made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. I shook it off.
Starting point is 01:14:27 It was just a Halloween carnival, nothing more. Inside, the gym was packed. Kids dressed as witches, ghosts, and superheroes darted. between games and snack tables. There was laughter, music, and the smell of popcorn, but I couldn't shake the feeling that something wasn't right. I tried to ignore it, watching Emma as she ran off to find her friends. Daddy, I'm going to play, she called, already disappearing into the crowd of kids. I nodded, giving her a small wave, but my mind was elsewhere. I scanned the room, my eyes drawn to the windows at the far end of the gym. Beyond the
Starting point is 01:15:05 glass, the parking lot was dark, and something about it made me uneasy. I forced myself to focus on the carnival. The decorations were simple, plastic spiders, fake cobwebs, and cardboard cutouts of pumpkins. But every now and then, the lights flickered just for a second. Each time I found myself looking toward the doors, half expecting to see what exactly. I didn't know, but the sense of being watched gnawed at me. I wandered over to the snack table, grabbing a cup of punch. As I took a sip, I noticed Emma standing by the window, staring outside. Her face was pale, and she wasn't smiling anymore. Emma? I called, making my way over to her. What are you doing, sweetie? She didn't turn to look at me. Her eyes were locked on something in the darkness outside. Mommy's out there,
Starting point is 01:15:56 she whispered. A chill ran down my spine. I followed her gaze, squinting into her eyes, squinting into the blackness beyond the window. At first I saw nothing but the faint outline of cars in the parking lot, but then I noticed something. Under the flickering streetlight, a figure stood, completely still. Too still. I blinked, my heart pounding in my chest. The light flickered again, and the figure was gone. The noise of the carnival started to fade as I made my way down the dimly lit hallway leading to the school's basement. The event coordinator had asked me to grab more candy from the storage room, and I'd agreed, hoping the task would calm the uneasiness gnawing at me. But now, walking alone, the silence pressed in around me, and I felt that same creeping dread
Starting point is 01:16:43 from earlier crawling up my spine. The basement door creaked when I opened it, and the stairwell beyond was dark. Only a single flickering light bulb hung from the ceiling at the bottom of the stairs, casting long shadows that seemed to dance and shift. I took a deep breath and started down, my footsteps echoing off the concrete walls. The air down here was colder, damp, and it smelled faintly of mildew. Each step felt heavier, like something was pulling me back, but I kept going. The storage room was at the far end of the basement, just past the old gym lockers and unused sports equipment. I fumbled for the light switch as I entered the room, but nothing happened.
Starting point is 01:17:24 Great. The light was out. I pulled out my phone, using its flashed. to search for the candy. As I scanned the shelves, I heard something. It was faint, like a distant whisper, but enough to make me freeze in place. My heart thudded in my chest as I listened, straining to hear it again. Silence. Just my imagination, I told myself. Get the candy and get out. I found the boxes of candy and hoisted one into my arms. As I turned to leave, the sound returned, this time louder. It wasn't a whisper anymore. It wasn't a whisper anymore. It was a It was a scratching noise, like nails dragging across the concrete floor behind me.
Starting point is 01:18:05 I spun around, my phone's light sweeping across the room. There was nothing there. My breath came in quick, shallow bursts as I backed toward the door. But the scratching continued, growing closer, more insistent. It was right behind me now. I bolted for the stairs the candy forgotten, my mind screaming at me to run. The moment my foot hit the first step, the lights in the stairwell flickered, and everything went dark. I could hear it now, footsteps, slow and deliberate, coming from the shadows at the
Starting point is 01:18:36 bottom of the stairs. They were uneven, like whoever or whatever was walking, had a limp, dragging one foot behind the other. I forced myself to keep moving, gripping the railing so tight my knuckles turned white. Halfway up the stairs the lights blinked back on, and I dared to glance back. There, at the base of the stairs, stood a figure, shrouded in darkness. It was tall and twisted, its limbs too long, its head cocked unnaturally to the side, as if its neck was broken. It didn't move, but I could feel its eyes on me. I didn't wait to see what it would do next.
Starting point is 01:19:14 I sprinted up the remaining steps, slammed the door behind me, and leaned against it, gasping for breath. Whatever that thing was, it wasn't human. When I got back to the carnival, everything felt wrong. The noise inside the gym had done. died down to a low murmur, and the lights seemed dimmer than before, casting strange shifting shadows on the walls. It was colder, too, much colder. I scanned the crowd for Emma, my heart racing from what I'd seen in the basement. I tried to tell myself it was just a trick of the light,
Starting point is 01:19:47 or my mind playing games, but I couldn't shake the image of that twisted figure at the bottom of the stairs. I couldn't see Emma anywhere. Panic began to rise in my chest as I wove through the crowd, looking for her familiar white angel costume. Emma! I called out my voice cracking. No response. I spotted some kids gathered near the windows by the playground, all of them staring outside completely still. My stomach churned with dread. Pushing through the crowd, I made my way to them, and then I saw her. Emma was standing by the window, staring out into the dark night just like the other kids. Her face was pale, and she wasn't moving, not even blinking. Emma! I rushed to her, grabbing her shoulders gently. Sweetheart, what are you doing?
Starting point is 01:20:34 What's wrong? She didn't look at me. Her eyes were fixed on something outside. I turned to see what she was staring at, and my blood turned to ice. Under the flickering streetlight, at the far edge of the playground, stood a figure. At first, I thought it was just someone in a costume, someone playing a cruel prank. But the longer I looked, the more I realized how wrong it was. Its head was tilted at an unnatural angle, like its neck had been broken, and its body, its limbs. They were too long, too thin,
Starting point is 01:21:09 like the bones inside had been snapped and twisted out of place. It stood completely still, just watching. My heart pounded in my chest, a voice in my head screaming at me to grab Emma and run, but I was frozen in place. Then it moved. In one swift, jerky motion, it took a step forward, and that's when I saw it, its face.
Starting point is 01:21:33 My breath caught in my throat. The face looked like my wife, Lila. But it wasn't her. It couldn't be. Lila was gone, but this thing, it had her eyes, her smile, only twisted into something monstrous. Michael, the voice that came from the figure,
Starting point is 01:21:51 wrong. It was Lila's voice, but hollow, warped, like it was coming from a broken speaker. Come with me, Michael. Bring Emma. We can be together again. I stumbled back, pulling Emma with me. She was still staring at the figure like she was in a trance. The other kid started moving toward it, drawn to the thing wearing Lila's face. I watched in horror as one boy stepped outside. The creature grabbed him, its long, spindly fingers twisting around him. him. He let out a scream, but it was cut off as his body went limp, collapsing like a puppet with its strings cut. I turned and ran dragging Emma with me. We had to get out of there before it got us too. I slammed the gym door behind us, my heart pounding in my ears. Emma clung to my arm,
Starting point is 01:22:41 her face pale, eyes wide with fear. I had no idea what that thing outside was, but I knew we had to hide. The other parents and kids were scattered, some screaming, some frozen in place, trying to make sense of the nightmare unfolding around them. But I didn't have time to think. We had to move. We need to find a place to hide, I whispered to Emma, my voice shaking. Come on, let's go. The gym echoed with shouts as the kids who had followed the creature outside scrambled back in,
Starting point is 01:23:12 terror etched on their faces. Whatever was out there wasn't stopping. I could hear it moving closer, its slow, jerky steps echoing through the night. The thought of those spindly fingers wrapping around us made my skin crawl. I spotted a hallway leading to the back of the school and pulled Emma with me. We raced down the dimly lit corridor, our footsteps echoing in the eerie silence. Doors on either side of us were locked or barricaded. I didn't have time to check every room.
Starting point is 01:23:43 Finally, we reached the janitor's closet at the end of the hall. I threw open the door and shoved Emma inside before quickly following and locking it behind us. The closet was small, cramped, and smelled of bleach and old rags. I leaned against the door, gasping for breath, trying to steady my shaking hands. Emma stood in the corner, hugging herself, her eyes still wide with shock. Daddy, she whispered, her voice trembling. Is mommy really out there? My stomach twisted.
Starting point is 01:24:15 How could I explain this to her? How could I make her understand that the thing we saw wasn't her mother? I knelt in front of her, taking her hands in mine. No, sweetie, that's not Mommy. I know it looks like her, and I know it sounds like her, but it's not. Mommy's... She's gone. She's not coming back.
Starting point is 01:24:37 Emma blinked, tears welling up in her eyes. But she talked to me. She called my name. I felt a lump in my throat, guilt weighing heavily on me. All those years of telling Emma that her mom was still watching over us, Those lies were coming back to haunt me. I'm so sorry, I whispered, barely holding back my own tears. I lied to you.
Starting point is 01:24:58 Mommy's gone, and we have to stay safe now. We have to be strong. Suddenly there was a loud crash from down the hallway, followed by the sickening sound of something scraping against the floor. I pressed my ear to the door, heart racing. It was coming for us. The scraping grew louder, and then, a voice. Michael, Emma.
Starting point is 01:25:21 The voice was twisted, but still Lila's, calling for us from the darkness. Let me in. Emma started to move toward the door, but I grabbed her, pulling her back. No, Emma, I whispered urgently. It's not her. Don't listen. The door rattled, and I held my breath. The thing outside started pounding, harder and harder. I didn't know how long the door would hold.
Starting point is 01:25:47 Then just as suddenly as it started, the pounding stopped. Silence filled the air. But I knew better than to think it was over. Whatever that thing was, it wasn't giving up. It was just waiting. And so were we trapped in the dark, with only the thin door standing between us and the nightmare outside. The pounding stopped, leaving the air thick with silence.
Starting point is 01:26:09 But the sense of dread clung to me like a cold sweat. My breath was shallow, and my heart raced as I strained to hear any, outside the janitor's closet. Emma clung to my arm, trembling, her small fingers digging into my skin. For a moment I allowed myself to hope. Maybe it had left, maybe we were safe, but deep down I knew better. It wasn't gone. It was waiting. Suddenly there was a crash from the far end of the hallway. The door to the gym had been blown open, and I heard terrified screams from the few survivors still inside. That thing was tearing through the school, hunting anyone who remained. I pulled Emma close, whispering,
Starting point is 01:26:50 We're going to get out of here, okay? I promise, but you have to stay quiet and stick close to me. She nodded, her eyes wide with fear, but she was brave. She had to be. I eased the door open a crack, peeking out into the hallway. It was dim, the only light coming from the emergency exit signs glowing faintly at the end of the corridor. The creature was nowhere in sight, but I could hear the sound of it moving. Its twisted, jerking steps. scraping against the floor tiles. This was our chance. If we could make it to the exit, we might have a shot. Come on, Emma, I whispered, taking her hand and leading her into the hallway. We moved as quietly as possible, every creak of the floor beneath our feet making my heart jump.
Starting point is 01:27:34 The screams from the gym were growing louder, and I knew we had to move fast. We crept down the hallway, my eyes darting in every direction. The exit door was just ahead. I could almost feel the cool air of freedom waiting for us beyond it. But just as we reached the door, a low, rasping voice echoed from behind us, Michael, Emma, wait for me. I turned to see it, her, the thing that wore Lila's face, broken and twisted, its limbs bending at unnatural angles, dragging itself down the hall toward us. Its hollow eyes locked onto mine, and its mouth stretched into a gruesome smile. Come back, we can be together. The voice, Lila's voice slithered from its mouth. Emma gasped, and I could feel her grip tightening on my hand.
Starting point is 01:28:23 My heart pounded in my chest as I pushed open the exit door. We stumbled out into the cold night, the fog thick around us, but we weren't safe yet. I glanced back, and the creature was almost at the door, its long, jagged fingers reaching for us. It was faster than before, like it knew we were about to slip from its grasp. Run, I yelled, pulling Emma with me as we sprinted. toward the parking lot. The fog was thick, but through it I could see the faint outline of our car. My lungs burned and my legs ached, but I didn't dare stop. I could hear the creature's footsteps behind us, faster and louder, its grotesque body closing in. We reached the car and my hands shook as I fumbled with the keys. I could hear it now, just feet away, its breath raspy, its voice
Starting point is 01:29:12 taunting. Don't leave me. Finally, I jammed. rammed the key into the lock, yanking the door open. I shoved Emma inside and scrambled into the driver's seat. The creature's hand slammed against the window, its fingers dragging down the glass, leaving streaks of blackened blood. Its face was pressed against the window, grinning at me with those dead eyes. I turned the key, and the engine roared to life. Hold on, Emma, I shouted, slamming my foot down on the gas. The tires screeched as the car lurched forward and I swerved out of the parking lot. The creature's hand slid off the window and I caught a final glimpse of it standing there in the fog, watching us as we sped away into the night.
Starting point is 01:29:56 For a few minutes, neither of us said anything. My heart was still racing, my hands trembling on the wheel. I glanced over at Emma. She was staring straight ahead, her face pale, but she was safe. We had made it, barely. As we drove farther away from Black Hollow, the fog began to lift, and the stars appeared overhead. The nightmare was behind us now, but I couldn't shake the feeling that it wasn't truly over. That thing. It wasn't just a monster. It knew us. It knew how to hurt us. Emma broke the silence. Daddy, was that really, mommy? I swallowed hard, glancing at her. No, sweetheart, I said, my voice hoarse. That wasn't her. She nodded slowly. Her eyes filled with a sadness beyond her years. I miss her. I do too, I whispered, fighting back the tears.
Starting point is 01:30:52 As we disappeared into the night, I couldn't help but wonder, would we ever truly escape? Or had that thing already left its mark on us, forever chasing us in the shadows? But for now, we were alive, and October will never be the same. I didn't think much of the trail at first, just another forgotten path winding through the woods, choked with weeds and underbrush, the kind that makes you wonder how long it's been since anyone cared to walk it. But Mia did. She stood there, staring at it like it was something more than just a stretch of dirt and broken branches. Her eyes narrowed, lips pressed tight, like she could sense something I couldn't.
Starting point is 01:31:41 Maybe we should just stick to the main trail, she said, her voice unusually flat. I shook my head flashing her a grin. Come on, Mia, where's your sense of adventure? It's Halloween. Perfect time for a little mystery, don't you think? She hesitated, her hand brushing a strand of blonde hair out of her face, eyes flicking toward the woods like she was listening for something. Mia's always been cautious, way more than me, but that's part of why I like her.
Starting point is 01:32:08 She balances out my reckless streak. Still, I could tell something about this trail wasn't sitting right with her. It's not on the map, Alex, she finally said her voice low. Shouldn't that be a red flag? I glanced at the old trail marker, faded and half rotten, barely visible beneath the creeping moss. If anything, that made it more intriguing. Exactly. Means no one else is dumb enough to take it.
Starting point is 01:32:35 Come on, Mia. We'll be back before dark. She sighed, but the tension in her shoulders softened. Fine, but if we get lost, I'm sorry. I'm blaming you. I laughed and led the way. The path wasn't easy. I'll admit that. The farther we went, the more the underbrush tried to trip us up, thorny vines reaching for our legs like nature's own booby traps. The air was thick and still, like the woods were holding their breath, waiting for something. But I kept going, pushing back the strange sense that we
Starting point is 01:33:09 were walking into something we shouldn't. An hour in, the uneasiness started creeping up. on me too. Mia hadn't said much, which wasn't like her. Every now and then, she glanced back the way we came, her face pale, eyes flicking through the trees like she was expecting something, or someone, to be there. Do you hear that? she asked suddenly. Her voice barely above a whisper. I stopped, straining to listen. Nothing. The woods were dead silent. No wind, no birds, not even the rustle of leaves. It was like the forest itself had gone still. No, I said slowly. What are you hearing? She shook her head, brow furrowed. I don't know. Maybe it's nothing. We kept moving, but something had shifted. The silence pressed in on us, thick and oppressive,
Starting point is 01:34:03 like a weight on our backs. Then I saw it, the obelisk. It stood off to the side of the trail, half hidden behind twisted trees, an ancient stone pillar covered in strange carvings. Moss clung to its surface, and at its base, a pile of shoes, watches, and bits of tattered clothing lay scattered, like some kind of offering. Mia froze beside me. Alex, what the hell is that? I didn't have an answer. My heart thudded in my chest as I stepped closer, reaching out to touch one of the shoes. It was worn, scuffed, and covered in dirt. And it was far too modern to belong here. A cold shiver crawled up my spine.
Starting point is 01:34:47 We need to go back, Mia said. Her voice trembling now. I opened my mouth to argue, but stopped. For the first time since we stepped onto that trail, I wasn't so sure anymore. The silence broke with the sound of a twig snapping behind us. Mia was right. We should have turned back when we saw that damned obelisk.
Starting point is 01:35:09 I see that now. clear as day. But at the time, something inside me, pride maybe, kept pushing us forward. I didn't want to be the guy who backed down because of some eerie pile of shoes in a weird stone. But things were different now. The air felt heavier, colder. It wasn't just the evening chill. It was something else, something pressing down on us. We've been walking for hours, Alex. This trail, it's wrong, Mia said. Her voice low and tight. Her voice low and tight. with fear. I glanced at her, her face was pale, her eyes wide, darting toward the trees. We were lost, that much was clear. The trail had become a twisted version of itself,
Starting point is 01:35:54 narrowing and darkening with every step. What once felt like a fun off-map adventure now felt like a trap, closing in around us. We'll figure it out, I said. But the confidence in my voice wasn't fooling anyone, not even me. The woods were so silent it felt. felt unnatural. No birds, no rustling leaves, not even the distant hum of insects. It was as if the whole forest had gone still, waiting for something. The trees themselves seemed to shift, their twisted limbs reaching out like bony fingers. I glanced at my compass, hoping to get my bearings, but the needle spun in lazy circles, useless. Great, I muttered under my breath. What? Mia snapped, her nerves fraying at the edge of the edge of the edge of,
Starting point is 01:36:41 The compass isn't working, I admitted, trying to sound calm like I could fix this, but I couldn't. That's it. We're turning around, she said, her voice trembling. I don't care if it takes all night. We're getting out of here. I nodded, not bothering to argue this time. I didn't want to stay out here either. But when we retraced our steps, the path behind us wasn't the same. The trees, the underbrush, they'd changed, shifting in ways I couldn't explain. We should have seen the obelisk again, but it was gone. Every landmark we'd passed earlier, disappeared, replaced by unfamiliar terrain. Mia grabbed my arm, her nails digging into my skin,
Starting point is 01:37:24 were going in circles. This place, she paused, swallowing hard. This place doesn't want us to leave. I opened my mouth to tell her she was being paranoid, but I couldn't. She was right. There was something about this forest that felt, alive, like it was shifting and moving around us, keeping us in its grip. The more we walked, the more the trail twisted and narrowed, until it felt like we were walking through a tunnel of trees, the branches closing in, blocking out the last of the fading light. Then we heard it, a soft, distant whisper like wind moving through the trees,
Starting point is 01:38:02 but it wasn't the wind. It was voices, faint, unintelligible, but unmistakably human, and they were getting closer. Did you hear that? I whispered, my mouth dry. Mia nodded, her face pale as a ghost. We need to move. Now. We turned and hurried down the trail,
Starting point is 01:38:26 but no matter how fast we walked, the whispers followed us, louder, closer, like they were circling us. I stole a glance over my shoulder, and that's when I saw it, figures, shadowy and indistinct, moving through the trees just at the edge of my vision. I stopped dead in my tracks.
Starting point is 01:38:45 Mia. But when I turned back, she was gone, as if she'd vanished into the trees without a sound. My heart pounded in my chest, a cold, creeping terror gripping me as the whispers closed in, circling like vultures. Mia! I shouted, my voice swallowed by the suffocating silence of the woods. The trail behind me was nothing but darkness. I stood frozen. staring into the blackness where Mia had been just moments before.
Starting point is 01:39:13 My heart thundered in my chest, panic flooding my veins. She couldn't have just vanished, not like that. Mia! I shouted again, my voice cracking. The woods swallowed the sound, giving nothing back but the same unnatural silence. I turned in a circle, frantic, shining my flashlight into the thick wall of trees. shadows danced at the edge of the beam, twisting like something alive, but no sign of her. Just more darkness, more of the same. She was gone.
Starting point is 01:39:47 The whispers were back, louder now, wrapping around me, filling the air with a low hum. I strained to understand them, but they were just out of reach, as if they weren't meant for human ears. My pulse quickened. I had to find her. I took a shaky step forward, then another. The trail was nothing more than a threadbare path now, barely visible underfoot. But it didn't matter anymore. I wasn't following the trail.
Starting point is 01:40:14 I was following the whispers. They were leading me somewhere, pulling me deeper into the woods, and I didn't have a choice but to follow. The trees thickened around me, their branches clawing at my jacket, snagging on my clothes like they were trying to hold me back. I kept moving, though, the light from my flashlight barely cutting through the suffocating darkness. The whispers grew louder with every step, shifting and merging into something almost familiar.
Starting point is 01:40:41 Voices. My voice. And Mia's. Suddenly the ground gave way beneath my feet. I stumbled forward, sliding down a steep, rocky slope, my flashlight tumbling from my hand. The fall felt like it lasted forever, dirt and rocks scraping against me, roots snagging at my limbs. When I finally came to a stop, I was lying at the mouth of a large, gaping cavern. I picked myself up, wincing as pain shot through my arm. The flashlight was gone, swallowed by the darkness. I could feel the weight of the cavern pressing in on me, heavy and damp. And then I saw it, a faint pulsing glow deep within the cave. I didn't want
Starting point is 01:41:24 to go in. Every instinct told me to run, to turn back and find another way out of this nightmare. But I couldn't leave Mia, not without knowing. I stepped inside, my breath echoing off the stone walls. The air was thick and stale, carrying a faint metallic scent that reminded me of blood. The glow ahead grew brighter, revealing the chamber at the heart of the cave. My feet stopped cold. Skeletons, dozens of them, some hanging from the ceiling by ropes of flesh-like sinew. Others scattered across the floor in grotesque poses.
Starting point is 01:42:01 Their empty eyes seemed to watch me, accusing me of something I couldn't understand. stand. In the center of the chamber stood a massive, grotesque statue, half human, half something else, with hollow eyes and a gaping mouth. It seemed to pulse with a life of its own, and at its feet lay something I almost missed. A small leather-bound journal. I knelt down, hands trembling, and picked it up. The pages were brittle, the writing frantic, desperate. It told of a man who had walked this same path, lost and confused, just like. like me. The last few entries were a blur of fear, ramblings about an ancient force in the woods, something that fed on fear and despair, something called the lost one. A sudden noise behind me
Starting point is 01:42:49 snapped me back to the present, footsteps, slow, deliberate. I turned slowly, my heart in my throat. Mia? I whispered, but I knew better. Whatever was standing in the shadows wasn't Mia. It stepped forward, just enough for me to see the twisted grin, the hollow glowing eyes. The whispers that had followed me through the woods filled the chamber, deafening now. And then it lunged. The thing that came out of the shadows wasn't Mia, not even close. My body froze, every muscle locked in place as the figure stepped into the faint glow of the chamber. Its grin was too wide, too stretched, like the skin on its face had been pulled tight over bones that didn't quite fit. It's eyes, black, hollow, empty, seemed to swallow the light. And yet somehow, I knew it was watching me,
Starting point is 01:43:41 studying me, like it knew exactly what I was thinking. I backed up, my breath shallow, my heart hammering against my ribs. My hand brushed the cold stone of the chamber wall, but there was nowhere to go, nowhere to run. Mia? I whispered, barely able to get the word out. My voice cracked in the thick, heavy air. The thing didn't respond, but the whispering in my head grew louder. The voices merging and twisting until I could hear Mia's voice, distorted, overlapping with my own. You can't leave. The figure stepped closer, its movements jerky, unnatural. My legs trembled, but I held my ground, fighting the instinct to turn and bolt. I didn't know what this thing was, the lost one the journal had called it. But I knew one thing.
Starting point is 01:44:31 It fed on fear, and I was giving it exactly what it wanted. I swallowed hard, forcing myself to breathe, to stay calm. I wasn't going to die here, not like this. I glanced around the chamber, searching for anything I could use, anything at all. The skeletons on the floor, the grotesque statue looming over me, it all felt like part of a sick, twisted game. The journal's final words echoed in my head. The only way to survive is to confront it.
Starting point is 01:45:03 I took a step forward, forcing myself to meet the thing's hollow gaze. My mind screamed at me to run, but my body wouldn't budge. Where is she? I demanded, my voice steadier than I felt. The figure tilted its head, as if considering the question, then grinned wider. The air in the room grew colder, the whispers louder, drowning out my thoughts. My flashlight lying forgotten on the ground, flickered, casting long, jagged shadows across the chamber. And then I saw her.
Starting point is 01:45:35 Mia was standing just beyond the figure, her face pale, her eyes wide with terror. She was alive, but barely. Her mouth moved, whispering something I couldn't hear over the growing din. She looked at me, pleading, her eyes filled with fear. Alex, she mouthed, her voice drowned out by the growing roar in my head. I had to act, now. With a surge of adrenaline, I lunged for the flashlight, snatching it off the ground. The figure darted toward me, its arms outstretched, fingers curling like claws.
Starting point is 01:46:09 I swung the flashlight, slamming it into its face with all the strength I could muster. The creature reeled back, shrieking, the whispers in my head reaching a deafening crescendo. I grabbed Mia's arm and pulled her toward the mouth of the cavern. She stumbled but kept pace, her breathing ragged. Her eyes wide with terror. We didn't look back. We couldn't. Whatever that thing was, whatever had claimed these woods,
Starting point is 01:46:36 it wasn't going to let us go without a fight. We burst out of the cave, the cold night air hitting us like a slap to the face. The woods were still, eerily quiet, but I didn't stop running. Neither did Mia. The trail ahead of us twisted and shifted, but I didn't care. I kept moving, pulling her with me, every muscle in my body soon. screaming for me to keep going. Behind us I could hear the whispers fading, growing fainter with every step. The trees, once gnarled and twisted, started to look normal again, the path widening,
Starting point is 01:47:11 as if the forest was finally letting us go. When we finally reached the clearing where we'd started, I collapsed to the ground gasping for air. Mia fell beside me, shaking, her hands still clutching my arm. I looked back at the woods, expecting to see the figure standing there watching us. But there was nothing, just the stillness of the trees and the soft rustling of leaves in the wind. We were safe, for now. But as I looked down at my hands, I noticed something that made my heart stop. Dirt, wet, black dirt, smeared across my palms, and in my mind, faint and distant I could still hear the whispers. I'll admit, I was the one who pushed for it. A Halloween camping trip deep in rocky mountain woods sounds like to be in the
Starting point is 01:48:06 sounded like the perfect way to cap off our final year in college. Sure, Sarah had her doubts, but she always did. It wasn't her fault. She'd grown up on too many ghost stories, the kind that latch on to you and refuse to let go. But this was different. This was real life, not some haunted campfire tale. At least, that's what I kept telling myself.
Starting point is 01:48:29 Jack, Nate, Emily, Sarah, and me, Lena. Five of us crammed into Jack's beat-up SUV. rolling down that narrow dirt road with nothing but the tree canopy above and shadows below. The further we drove, the darker it got. I could almost feel the woods swallowing the daylight whole, piece by piece. It felt like the road itself was closing in on us, but we were too busy cracking jokes and giving Sarah hell about the so-called silent ones to notice. You really believe that crap?
Starting point is 01:49:00 Nate scoffed from the passenger seat, flipping through a crumpled local brochure he found at a gas station. They're probably just bears or something. Tall, pale and quiet. Sounds like a bad date. Sarah rolled her eyes, arms crossed tight over her chest. It's not just bears, Nate. There have been reports.
Starting point is 01:49:19 People have gone missing. And not just one or two. Dozens. Dozens? Huh? I caught her eye in the rearview mirror. They don't teach you how to fact-check at journalism school? Jack snorted, cutting the wheel to avoid a pothole that sent the SUV lurching.
Starting point is 01:49:36 This road better lead to something more than legends, or I'm turning around. We didn't drive three hours just to end up at a dead end. I glanced out my window at the thickening forest. The trees had a way of creeping right up to the edge of the road, their branches stretching across like fingers. But there was something else in the air. I couldn't put my finger on it just yet, something heavy, waiting. We finally reached the clearing by late afternoon.
Starting point is 01:50:05 A small lake shimmered on the far side, the water dark and still. It wasn't much, but it felt isolated enough for what we needed. A night of beer, stories, and maybe a few jump scares to get the adrenaline pumping. Jack killed the engine, and the silence dropped like a curtain. Not the comfortable kind either. The woods were completely still, no wind, no birds, not even the distant rustle of leaves. Just the five of us standing there are breathing the only sea. sound. I tried shaking it off, getting the tent up, and the fire started. But the feeling lingered,
Starting point is 01:50:43 gnawing at me like an itch you can't quite reach. As the sun began to sink behind the trees, we gathered around the fire, the flames crackling loud in the unnatural quiet. Nate was the first to bring up the silent ones, naturally. He loved to stir the pot. Come on, Sarah, give us the whole spooky rundown. What's the story? Sarah shifted. uncomfortably but cleared her throat. They're not ghosts, not exactly. People say they're something older, spirits of the lost, people who wandered into the woods and never came back. Jack rolled his eyes. Sounds like a Netflix special, but Sarah's voice was steady now. They watch, and if you see them, it's already too late. That's when I felt it, the shift. I looked up, and between the trees,
Starting point is 01:51:30 just at the edge of the firelight, something was standing there, pale, tall, tall, motionless. I blinked, and it was gone. By morning I convinced myself it was a trick of the firelight. Shadows play games when your brain's been marinating in ghost stories all night. The others, they didn't even mention it. Maybe they hadn't seen what I did. Maybe I imagined the whole thing. I wanted to believe that. The sun sat low behind the trees, barely casting enough light to slice through the fog. The woods felt different. thicker somehow, like they were closing in. But we had a plan for the day. Explore, maybe hike a bit, check out the lake. The plan sounded normal, and I needed normal after last night.
Starting point is 01:52:19 Emily walked ahead keeping a brisk pace as we moved deeper into the trees. Her laugh echoed through the branches, but it felt wrong, too loud for the silent woods. Come on, guys. Where's that sense of adventure? She called back grinning. Jack followed close behind her, scanning the path ahead, his confidence still solid. Nate and Sarah lagged behind, bickering quietly about which way we should go, typical. Then there was me, bringing up the rear, a growing sense of dread sitting heavy in my gut. The kind of feeling you get when you realize you left the house without locking the door, only this was different, bigger, more dangerous.
Starting point is 01:52:58 As we wandered deeper, something gnawed at the back of my mind, something I could, couldn't shake. I kept glancing over my shoulder, eyes darting to the edges of the trail. The woods weren't just quiet. They were silent in a way that wasn't natural. No birds, no rustling, nothing. Just the sound of our boots crunching dead leaves underfoot. About an hour in, Nate stopped dead in his tracks. Hold up. His voice was quieter than usual, serious. Anyone else notice how, off this place feels? Emily snorted. Don't start with that silent one's crap again. No, Nate said, more forcefully this time.
Starting point is 01:53:39 Look. He held out his compass. The needle was spinning in lazy circles, not pointing anywhere. Jack grabbed it from him, frowning. That's busted. Nate shook his head. It was working fine before. Sarah moved closer to Nate, staring at the compass.
Starting point is 01:53:56 We should go back. Seriously? It's just a stupid compass, Jack muttered, already pushing forward. But I agreed with Sarah. I could feel it the way the air had changed. Every time I blinked, the shadows seemed to stretch a little longer, creeping over the trail. I kept thinking about last night, about that figure in the trees. Maybe I hadn't imagined it. We continued walking, trying to keep conversation light, but the tension wrapped around us like a tightening noose. My mind raced, every noise, or lack thereof, twisting my nerves into knots.
Starting point is 01:54:33 Then, out of nowhere, Sarah gasped, her hand flying to her mouth. There, she pointed ahead, her eyes wide with fear. I followed her gaze, but all I saw were trees. What did you see? Her voice dropped to a whisper. Someone's watching us. No one else had seen it, but I believed her. I'd seen it too.
Starting point is 01:54:55 Or maybe it was just paranoia, spreading like a virus through the group. Jack pressed on, leading us forward, but the path was different. I swear we'd been walking in a straight line, but now it felt like we were circling. We'd pass the same tree, at least it looked like the same tree, over and over again. The forest was playing tricks. We weren't alone. I knew that now. Whatever was out there wasn't human. My heart thudded hard against my ribs as I realized we were being hunted, but by what?
Starting point is 01:55:27 The silent ones were real, and they were closing in. Panic had set in by the time the sun started. started to sink behind the trees again. The temperature was dropping fast, but it wasn't just the cold making my hands tremble. Every step forward felt like stepping into quicksand. Sarah's quiet sobs behind me weren't helping, but I didn't have the energy to calm her down. Hell, I couldn't even calm myself. Not anymore. Jack, always the stubborn one, had tried to lead us out, cutting his own path through the woods. But no matter which way we turned, no matter how far we walked, It all led us back.
Starting point is 01:56:05 Like the forest had twisted itself around us, trapping us inside. I'd never been a believer in supernatural nonsense. But after today, after seeing the figures between the trees, that was changing, fast. Emily stopped dead ahead of me, her breath coming out in ragged gasps. Did you hear that? I froze. At first all I heard was the steady thrum of my own heartbeat in my ears. Then there it was, faint, like whispers carried on the wall.
Starting point is 01:56:33 wind, voices too low to understand, but unmistakably there. Sarah grabbed my arm, her nails digging in hard enough to hurt. We need to keep moving, Jack said, his voice flat, more desperate than he wanted to admit. He wasn't in control anymore, and that scared him as much as it scared the rest of us. I didn't want to follow, not really, but the alternative was standing still and waiting for whatever was out there to get us. We trudged forward, the woods thickening with every step. The air itself felt heavy, like it was pressing down on us. Then Nate stopped. He stood perfectly still, his back to us, just staring into the trees. Nate, I called out, my voice barely above a whisper. He didn't respond. Jack moved toward him, waving a hand in front of his face. Nate,
Starting point is 01:57:26 Nothing. Nate didn't even flinch. His eyes were wide, pupils blown like he was staring at something no one else could see, something inhuman. I edged closer and followed his gaze. That's when I saw it. One of them. Tall, pale, standing motionless between the trees, just out of reach. I couldn't see its face, if it even had one, but it was watching us, watching him. Suddenly Nate collapsed. His body hit the ground hard, twitching as if something invisible had wrapped around his throat and was squeezing the life out of him. Jack dropped beside him, shouting his name, slapping his face. But Nate's eyes stayed open, fixed on the figure in the trees. They're taking him, Sarah whispered.
Starting point is 01:58:14 She didn't sound panicked anymore, just hollow. Nate's body stilled, his chest no longer rising. I wanted to scream, but my throat felt locked shut. Jack stood up, fists clenched. His face a mask of helpless rage. We have to go. Now! But it didn't matter. The forest had swallowed us whole, and the silent ones, they were here to collect what was theirs.
Starting point is 01:58:38 As we turned to flee, I knew the truth. There was no escape, not anymore. There are rules in Hollow Creek, rules that everyone in the Hollow Follows without question. They're not written down anywhere, but they've been passed from parent to child for as long as anyone can remember. My father drilled them into me and my sister Eliza every year as Halloween approached. He said they came from our ancestors, the ones who lived across the ocean in Wales before they fled from something dark that followed them all the way here. We don't celebrate Halloween like other places. There are no costumes, no trick or treating.
Starting point is 01:59:24 Instead we prepare to survive the night. Every year, we have to be careful, very careful, because on Halloween, the fleshless one comes. It starts like this. Before sundown, we draw symbols in ash around every window and smear chicken blood on the door frames. It's supposed to keep whatever's out there from coming inside. The most important thing, though, is the bread. We bake a special loaf with ingredients passed down through our family
Starting point is 01:59:51 and leave it on the doorstep as an offering. It's said the fleshless one will take the bread and leave us alone. At least, that's how it's supposed to work. My father always made sure we followed the rule, to the letter. Never open the door after dark, unless it's to give the offering. Never look at whatever stands on the other side of that door. And most of all, never leave the house once the sun goes down. He told us the rules weren't just old stories. They were the only things keeping us safe. This Halloween, though, something felt different. There was a tension in the air,
Starting point is 02:00:27 like the whole hollow was holding its breath. The woods, which usually buzzed with crickets and rustling leaves, were silent. It was as if the trees themselves were afraid. Even my father, who never showed fear, seemed nervous as he prepared the house. He kept glancing out the windows, his face pale and tight. Don't look outside no matter what you hear, he warned us, checking the ash lines again, and when I opened that door, keep your eyes down. We nodded, though I could see the fear in Eliza's eyes. She was younger than me by a few. years, and while she had always followed the rules, I knew this night was scaring her more than ever. The sun dipped below the mountains, casting long shadows over the hollow. We huddled inside the
Starting point is 02:01:15 house, the air heavy with silence. Then it came, a knock at the door. It was soft, slow, and deliberate, just as it always was. My father stood up, his face grim, and went to the door. He cracked it open just a sliver, keeping his eyes low as he reached out with the bread. I watched, heart pounding in my chest, as his hand stretched through the gap. The loaf slipped from his fingers and tumbled onto the porch. For a moment, there was silence. Then, my father looked up. His eyes widened in horror. Before I could react, a bony hand shot through the door, grabbed him by the arm, and yanked him outside. And just like that, he was gone.
Starting point is 02:02:03 I couldn't breathe. My father was gone, dragged out into the darkness by something I didn't want to imagine. The door slammed shut behind him, and the house fell into an awful silence. My heart raced, pounding in my ears. Eliza was crying, clutching my arm with fingers so tight it hurt. We have to get him back, she sobbed,
Starting point is 02:02:26 her voice cracking with fear. She was already heading for the door. No! I grabbed her arm, pulling her away from it. We can't. You know the rules. We can't go outside, not after dark. But he's out there!
Starting point is 02:02:40 Her eyes were wild with panic. Her face pale. We have to help him. I wanted to. Every part of me screamed to run out into the night and find my dad, but the rules were clear. Once the sun was down, the door stayed shut. Whatever had taken him was still out there, waiting. If we went out now, we'd be next.
Starting point is 02:03:02 Eliza, listen, I said, trying to calm her down, even though my own fear was choking me. We can't break any more rules. If we go out there, we'll never come back. You know that. Eliza stared at me, tears streaming down her cheeks. She shook her head, like she couldn't believe it. I didn't want to believe it either, but the rules were the only thing keeping us alive. or at least that's what I had always believed.
Starting point is 02:03:29 Suddenly the silence in the house was broken by a sound that made my blood run cold, a slow dragging noise, like something heavy scraping across the floorboards. It was coming from the hallway. Eliza, get back, I whispered, grabbing her hand and pulling her toward the living room. The scraping grew louder, closer. I couldn't see anything, but I could feel something in the house with us. My skin prickled and the air turned icy.
Starting point is 02:03:56 Then I heard it, a voice, low and raspy, but familiar. Help! Me! It was my father's voice. I froze. Every muscle in my body tensing. Eliza gasped and looked at me with wide, hopeful eyes. He's alive, she whispered.
Starting point is 02:04:15 No, I said, shaking my head. My heart sank with dread. I wanted to believe it was him, but I knew better. The rules were clear. Never respond to voices you don't recognize. Even if they sound familiar. It wasn't him. It couldn't be.
Starting point is 02:04:32 Eliza, don't listen to it, I said, my voice trembling. It's not Dad. She stared at me, confused and scared. The voice came again louder this time. Please, let me in. The dragging sound was getting closer. I grabbed Eliza's hand, pulling her toward the corner of the room. We crouched behind the couch,
Starting point is 02:04:52 hiding in the shadows trying to stay as quiet as possible. The door rattled. Something was on the other side, something that wasn't my father. I could hear it breathing, heavy, raspy, unnatural. Eliza, stay quiet, I whispered, squeezing her hand. We huddled together, barely breathing as the thing outside tried to get in. The door creaked under the pressure. It felt like the walls were closing in, like the whole house was being swallowed by the darkness. The rules were broken.
Starting point is 02:05:22 The house wasn't safe anymore, and I knew, deep down, that whatever had taken my father was coming for us next. We sat huddled behind the couch, barely daring to breathe. The thing outside the door was still there, and I could hear it scratching at the wood, slow and deliberate. It wasn't in a hurry like it knew we had nowhere to go. The door rattled again, and a horrible scraping noise followed, like nails on a chalkboard. Eliza whimpered softly beside me, clutching my arm so hard it felt like she might break it. It's going to get in, she whispered, her voice shaking. No, it won't. I lied. I didn't know what else to say. The rules were broken, and I had no idea what was going to happen next. We were supposed to be
Starting point is 02:06:11 safe as long as we stayed inside, but it didn't feel that way anymore. Everything felt wrong, like the night itself was alive and hunting us. The sound of chains dragging across the floor echoed through the house again, this time from inside. My heart pounded so loudly in my ears that I thought I might pass out. Something had gotten in. Eliza, I whispered, trying to keep my voice steady. We have to move, quietly, now.
Starting point is 02:06:38 She nodded, her eyes wide with terror, and we crawled along the floor, staying low, moving toward the back of the house where the kitchen was. I kept glancing over my shoulder, expecting to see something behind us, something that shouldn't be there. Every shadow seemed to stretch and move on its own, twisting into horrible shapes that made my stomach lurch. We reached the kitchen, and I carefully pulled myself up to peer out the window. My breath fogged up the glass, and I wiped it away with trembling fingers. Outside, I saw it.
Starting point is 02:07:10 The old Pritchard House. There were candles burning in every window now, flickering like a hundred ghostly eyes watching us. The wind howled, carrying with it strange whispers I couldn't make out, like the voices were speaking directly into my mind. We can't stay here, I muttered half to myself. The house isn't safe. But we can't go outside, Eliza said, her voice rising in panic.
Starting point is 02:07:37 We'll be breaking the rules again. The rules are already broken, I snapped, louder than I meant to. Dad's gone, and something's in here with us. We need to get away from the house. I didn't know where we could go, but the Pritchard house seemed like the only option. The thought of going there sent a shiver down my spine. No one who entered that house had ever come back. But I felt it in my gut. We couldn't stay here. Whatever had dragged Dad into the woods was coming for us next. Eliza, we have to try, I said, grabbing her hand. It's our only chance. We moved to the back door, every step feeling heavier than the last.
Starting point is 02:08:19 I reached for the handle, my hand shaking. The sound of chains dragging grew louder, and I could hear something breathing behind us, slow and raspy. Without thinking I yank the door open, cold night air rushed in carrying the scent of decay. We bolted out into the darkness, running as fast as we could toward the cursed Pritchard house, hoping, praying, that the rules hadn't doomed us completely.
Starting point is 02:08:45 The night wasn't over yet, but deep down I knew we might not survive what came next. I've always lived in a small town called Willow's Rest, a tiny place surrounded by mountains and thick forests. There isn't much to do here, so my best friend Dave and I spend most of our time hiking. We've explored almost every trail nearby, except for one, the Lost Canyon. We always heard stories about it, how the local tribe, the Chinook, considered it cursed. people say strange things happen to anyone who goes too deep into that forest. Most folks in town don't even talk about it. But Dave, well, he's the kind of guy who never backs down from a challenge.
Starting point is 02:09:34 So one day, he came up with the bright idea that we should hike the Lost Canyon. He said it like it was no big deal, like all those old stories were just rumors to keep people out. I didn't want to go. I had a bad feeling about it, but Dave wouldn't take no for an answer. Come on, he said. you've got to see it to believe it, and I didn't want him to go alone, so I gave in. We started our hike early in the morning. At first the forest felt like any other, quiet and peaceful, with the smell of pine and the crunch of leaves under our boots.
Starting point is 02:10:08 But as we went deeper, I noticed something strange. The usual sounds of birds and wind rustling through the trees were gone, completely. It was as if the forest itself had gone silent. The only thing I could hear was our footsteps, and the further we walked, the louder they seemed to get. I glanced at Dave, but he didn't seem to care. He kept talking about how cool it was to finally see the Lost Canyon, but I couldn't shake the feeling that we weren't alone. There was this heavy, tense feeling in the air, like something was watching us. I told myself I was just being paranoid, but it didn't help. After an hour or so, I had to step off the trail to pee.
Starting point is 02:10:51 I told Dave I'd catch up and headed behind some bushes. That's when I saw it. There was a small clearing in the trees, and in the middle of it were these weird old wooden totem standing in a circle. Inside the circle the ground was completely bare, no grass, no leaves, nothing. Just cold, hard dirt. It was like the earth had been scorched, but the trees around it looked untouched. In the center of the clearing there was a large black stone.
Starting point is 02:11:20 I walked closer and saw that it had strange symbols carved into it. Symbols I didn't recognize, but they gave me the creeps. The air around the stone felt colder too, like standing in front of an open freezer. A shiver ran down my spine, and I quickly turned back to the trail. When I caught up to Dave, I told him about what I saw, but he just laughed. You probably found some old tribal stuff, he said. Cool, but nothing to worry about. I wanted to believe him, but something about that place felt wrong.
Starting point is 02:11:53 Deep down, I knew we shouldn't have come here. But it was too late to turn back now. We had already crossed into the Lost Canyon, and whatever was waiting for us, we were walking right toward it. The deeper we went into the Lost Canyon, the stranger everything became. The trees started to look, wrong. Their trunks were all twisted, like they had been warped by some kind of force. Some of the bark was blackened, as if it had been blackened. as if it had been burned a long time ago, but there wasn't any sign of fire.
Starting point is 02:12:24 I couldn't shake the feeling that the forest was different here, like it had been tainted somehow. It was quiet, too quiet. I hadn't heard a single bird since we started, and there were no signs of any animals, no squirrels, no bugs, nothing. Dave didn't seem to care, though. He was more excited the further we went, talking about how we'd be the only ones to ever explore this place. but I wasn't so sure that was a good thing. I kept feeling like something was watching us, just out of sight.
Starting point is 02:12:55 It made my skin crawl, but every time I looked over my shoulder there was nothing there, just trees, all gnarled and dark. Do you hear that? I asked after a while. Dave glanced at me and raised an eyebrow. Hear what? I stopped walking for a second, listening. It was faint, but I could have sworn I heard whispers, soft, like they were being carried by the wind.
Starting point is 02:13:20 I couldn't make out what they were saying, but it made me uneasy. I strained my ears, but the whispers seemed to slip in and out, like they were coming from the trees themselves. I don't know, just something weird, maybe it's nothing. Dave shrugged and kept walking, but my heart was pounding in my chest. I felt like we were being followed, like something, or someone was trailing us just beyond where I could see. Every time we paused, I'd hear the faintest rustling in the bushes. Dave didn't seem to hear it, though.
Starting point is 02:13:53 After a while, the rustling became more frequent, louder. I kept looking over my shoulder, expecting to see something dart between the trees, but there was nothing. Just shadows. We're not alone, Dave, I muttered, trying to keep the shakiness out of my voice. Dave laughed. Dude, it's probably just a deer or something. Relax. But I couldn't relax.
Starting point is 02:14:18 The sound was too close, too steady. It wasn't like an animal. It was like something was keeping pace with us. That's when I saw it, just for a second. Something moved between the trees ahead. It was quick, just a blur, but I knew I saw it. I grabbed Dave's arm, my voice low. There, did you see that?
Starting point is 02:14:36 He squinted in the direction I pointed but shook his head. You're getting jumpy over nothing. The rustling grew louder again, and this time Dave couldn't ignore it. He finally stopped, looking around like he was starting to get it. All right, I'll check it out. Without waiting for me, he stepped off the trail, disappearing behind a thick patch of trees. Dave, I called after him, but he waved me off.
Starting point is 02:15:03 A minute passed, then too. The forest around me felt like it was holding its breath. No sound, no movement, just dead silence. My skin prickled as I realized how long he had been gone. Dave, I called again, louder this time. Still nothing. Dave, I called out again, louder this time, but my voice felt like it was swallowed by the forest. Still no answer.
Starting point is 02:15:29 The trees around me seemed even darker now, the shadows longer, like they were stretching out toward me. My stomach twisted with worry. Dave had been gone too long. I didn't want to go after him, but I didn't want to go after him, but I was. I knew I couldn't leave him behind. My heart raced as I stepped off the trail and into the thick brush where I had last seen him disappear. The forest felt different here, heavier somehow, like the air itself was thicker. The whispers I'd heard earlier seemed to start up again, only this time they were louder, clearer. They sent chills crawling up my spine. Dave, I called again,
Starting point is 02:16:06 pushing through branches that seemed to claw at me. I moved as fast as I could, but the deeper I went, the harder it became to breathe. Something wasn't right. The forest seemed alive, as if it was trying to close in around me. After what felt like forever, I found a small clearing. My breath caught in my throat as I froze, taking in the scene in front of me. There was blood, a lot of blood. It was everywhere, splattered across the trees, soaked into the ground, smeared on the leaves. My mind went blank for a second as I tried to process what I was seeing. The air smelled like copper, sharp and sickening. There were deep drag marks in the dirt, like something, or someone, had been pulled through the mud.
Starting point is 02:16:52 Dave? I whispered, my voice trembling now. I took a shaky step forward, following the trail of blood and drag marks, though every instinct in my body screamed at me to run. My legs felt weak, but I had to know what happened. Then, just beyond the trees, I saw something moving. My heart pounded in my chest as I edged closer, staying low to the ground. At first I thought it might be Dave, hurt and trying to crawl back, but as I got closer,
Starting point is 02:17:23 I realized it wasn't him at all. It was a creature, and it wasn't like anything I had ever seen before. Standing on the other side of the ravine, it towered over the ground, at least eight feet tall. It had the head of a deer, a massive twisted skull with hollow eyes that seemed to glow faintly in the shadows. Blood dripped from its antlers, which were jagged and sharp like broken glass. But its body, its body was wrong. It was human-like but grotesquely deformed, with long muscular arms ending in claws and legs that bent in unnatural ways. Patches of fur clung to its skin, but most of it was bare, revealing twisted muscle.
Starting point is 02:18:05 and bones that shouldn't have been there. And in its claws it held Dave. I felt like my heart stopped. Dave's body hung limp in its grip, and his head, his head was twisted at an impossible angle. His eyes were wide open, frozen in terror, but there was no life in them. The creature dropped him like he was nothing, and its hollow eyes locked on to me. I couldn't move. My legs were frozen, my mind screaming at me to run, but I just stood there, staring into the eyes. of the monster. Then, it moved. Its head tilted to the side as it stepped toward me, its heavy claws dragging through the dirt, slow and deliberate. That's when I snapped back to reality. My body took over, and I turned and ran as fast as I could. I ran. I didn't think. I didn't look back. I just ran,
Starting point is 02:18:58 crashing through the trees, branches tearing at my arms and legs. My breath came in ragged gasps, chest burning as I pushed myself harder than I ever had before. All I could hear was the pounding of my heart and the distant thudding of heavy footsteps behind me. The creature was following me. I could feel it, gaining on me. There was no plan in my mind, no path. I was just running in pure terror, trying to get as far away from that thing as possible. Every few seconds, I expected to feel its claws dig into my back to hear that guttural growl right behind me. But I didn't dare turn around. If I saw it, I knew I'd freeze again, and this time I wouldn't be so lucky. My feet slipped on the damp ground and I nearly fell, but somehow I kept going. The trail had to be close. I
Starting point is 02:19:51 just had to make it back to the trail. If I could find the road, I'd be safe. That's what I told myself anyway. My legs burned and my lungs screamed for air, but I couldn't stop. Not yet. Then I heard it. A deep, horrible roar echoed through the trees, like a mix between a deer's call and a bear's growl. It sent a jolt of fear straight through me, but it also made me realize something. The sound wasn't right behind me anymore. It was further away. The creature had slowed down. Maybe it was losing interest. Maybe I could outrun it after all. With renewed hope I pushed harder, my legs pumping as far as far as far as. fast as they could. The forest around me started to thin, the trees less dense. And then, through
Starting point is 02:20:38 the gaps in the branches, I saw it. The trail. Relief flooded through me. I was almost there. I burst onto the trail, nearly collapsing as I stumbled forward. For a split second, I allowed myself to believe I was safe. But then, out of instinct, I glanced back toward the forest. There it was. Standing at the edge of the trees, just a few feet from the trees, just a few feet from the trail was the creature. It didn't chase me anymore, but it didn't leave either. Its glowing eyes were fixed on me, watching silently. Its deer skull head hung at a strange angle, and blood still dripped from its antlers and claws. The thing didn't look tired at all. I froze, locking eyes with it, my entire body trembling. It was like it was waiting for me, almost daring me to
Starting point is 02:21:28 come back. My mind raced with a thousand questions. What was it? How could it be real? But none of that mattered. I knew one thing for sure. It wasn't finished with me. I tore my gaze away and ran for the car, my legs barely holding me up. I could see the gravel road up ahead. My car was still parked where we left it. I fumbled for my keys, my hands shaking as I finally reached the door. throwing myself into the driver's seat, I jammed the key into the ignition and floored it. As I sped away, I couldn't help but glance in the rearview mirror one last time. The creature was still standing there at the edge of the forest, watching me. It didn't follow, but I knew, deep down, I knew.
Starting point is 02:22:12 It was letting me go, for now. I haven't been back to the Lost Canyon since that day. They never found Dave. I never told anyone what really happened either. no one would believe me, but I can't shake the feeling that it's still out there, waiting. And sometimes, in my worst nightmares, I see it again, standing just at the edge of the trees, watching. I've never really been scared of the forest. Not until recently, anyway. My best friend Eli lives just across a patch of woods from me. His house is on the edge of the
Starting point is 02:22:55 Navajo Reservation, and I've been walking that same path since we were kids. It's only a mile or so, and usually I don't even think twice about it, but lately something has felt different. The forest wasn't always this creepy. Sure, it's full of shadows and strange noises, but I've grown used to it. I know where every tree and rock is, and I've always been good at ignoring the way the branches sometimes sway when there's no wind. Eli's grandpa has told us stories about the skinwalkers, monsters that can take the form of animals or people, but I never took them seriously, just legends, right? They were interesting when I was younger, but now they're just that.
Starting point is 02:23:36 Stories. But tonight, as I walked home from Eli's, the forest felt different. I'd stayed too late at his house playing video games, and by the time I left, the sun was already sinking behind the hills. The sky had turned a deep orange, and shadows stretched across the path in front of me. I tried to shake off the uneasiness as I entered the woods. I could do this walk with my eyes closed.
Starting point is 02:24:02 Ten steps in, the familiar chill of the forest crept up my spine. The trees seemed taller, closer together than I remembered. The sounds of birds and crickets faded, leaving the air heavy and quiet. The silence was so thick I could hear my own breathing, loud and shaky. I told myself it was just in my head that I was being silly. But then I heard it. Snap. A twig breaking.
Starting point is 02:24:28 not far from me. I froze. I knew that sound, but it wasn't the harmless kind, like when a squirrel jumps on a branch. It was the sharp, sudden crack that screamed, you're not alone. My heart started pounding in my chest. I swallowed hard, feeling my throat go dry. Hello? I whispered, my voice shaky and uncertain. I don't even know why I said anything. The second the word left my mouth. I wished I hadn't. Then, something worse happened. From somewhere in the trees, the same word came back to me. Hello? It sounded like me, but not quite right. The voice was hollow, like it was coming from far away, but I knew it wasn't. The hairs on the back of my neck stood up. My breath came in short gasps, and my legs felt like they were glued to the ground.
Starting point is 02:25:19 I forced myself to speak again, louder this time. Stop it. Silence. For a long, terrifying moment, nothing happened. No wind, no bugs, no movement. Just me, standing there, heart racing. And then I heard it again, echoing from the trees. Stop it. My voice, but not mine. My heart hammered in my chest.
Starting point is 02:25:44 I wanted to run, but I couldn't move. I stood frozen in the middle of the path, staring into the shadows, waiting for something to step out, something that wasn't human. Suddenly, the bushes to my left rustled. I whipped my head toward the sound just in time to see something massive, something with antlers, pushing through the trees. That's when I ran.
Starting point is 02:26:07 I barely made it through the front door before slamming it shut, leaning against it like I was holding back something from breaking in. My heart was still pounding, and I couldn't shake the image of those antlers, that twisted thing in the forest. I tried to catch my breath, but it felt like the air in the house was as, thick as it had been in the woods. Mom was in the kitchen, humming to herself. She poked her head around the corner.
Starting point is 02:26:33 Everything okay, Sam? I forced a smile and nodded, my hands trembling. Yeah, I'm just, tired. She gave me a funny look but didn't press me. I was thankful for that. There was no way I could tell her what had happened. No way she'd believe me. I didn't even believe me.
Starting point is 02:26:50 I rushed up to my room and locked the door behind me, my mind spinning. did I just see. What was out there? I grabbed my phone and called Eli. He picked up on the second ring. Hey, what's up? I blurted it out, the whole story, how the forest went quiet, the snapping branch, the voice that mimicked mine, and the creature with the antlers. Eli listened without interrupting, but when I was done, the line went silent. Eli, you there? Sam, he said his voice low. Whatever you do tonight, don't answer it. My stomach dropped. Don't answer what? He paused. If you hear anything, your name, a knock, anything. Just don't answer. I have to talk to my grandpa. I'll explain everything tomorrow. What are you talking about? Eli, what's going on?
Starting point is 02:27:41 But he wouldn't say anymore. He just told me to keep my doors and windows locked and hung up. I sat on my bed, gripping my phone, trying to make sense of what he said. I didn't believe in all those old legends, but the fear in his voice was enough to make me uneasy. That night, I couldn't sleep. Every little creek of the house or rustle of wind outside made my heart jump. The minutes dragged by, and just when I started to think maybe it was all in my head, I heard it. A soft, slow tapping on my window, tap, tap, tap. I froze, my blood turning to ice.
Starting point is 02:28:19 My window was on the second floor. There was no way anyone could reach it. I pulled the covers up to my chin, my whole body shaking. Maybe it was just a tree branch. It had to be. Then I heard it. My name. It was a whisper, barely loud enough to hear, but I knew that voice.
Starting point is 02:28:36 It was mine, my own voice, calling from outside the window. My heart slammed against my ribs. I squeezed my eyes shut, trying to block it out, but it came again louder. Come here. I bit my lip, my mind racing. Eli's warning echoed in my head, Don't answer it. I stayed completely still, not daring to make a sound.
Starting point is 02:29:00 The voice continued, growing more insistent. Samantha, come outside, open the door. It wasn't going to stop, and all I could do was pray for the sunrise. The next morning, I barely felt human. I had spent the entire night huddled under my blankets, my heart pounding with every whisper, every tap on the window. By the time the first light of dawn filtered through my curtains, the voice had stopped, but the silence that followed was almost worse. It was like the creature
Starting point is 02:29:31 was still there, just waiting for night to fall again. I didn't tell my mom what happened. She'd think I was going crazy. Maybe I was. Instead, I called Eli as soon as I woke up. His voice sounded as tired as mine. Did you hear it? I asked, my voice shaky. Yeah, he said. I talked to my grandpa this morning. He said it's a skin walker. They can take the form of animals or people, and once they know you, they don't stop. It knows you now, Sam. It knows your voice. A chill ran down my spine. What does that mean? What do I do? Eli paused. You need to stay inside at night. Keep the doors and windows locked. Don't let it in, no matter what. and whatever you do, don't answer it. Once it gets in, it'll never leave.
Starting point is 02:30:24 My heart sank. The fear that had been swirling inside me since last night became a solid weight in my chest. I couldn't live like this, jumping at every sound, terrified of my own shadow. But I didn't know what else to do. The rest of the day passed in a haze. I went through the motions, eating breakfast, pretending to listen to my mom, but my mind was elsewhere. I kept thinking about the forest, the mimicry, and Eli's warning. Every time I passed a window, I caught myself checking outside, expecting to see the thing standing there, watching me. That night, I did everything Eli said. I locked every door, made sure every window was closed, and turned off all the lights. My room was pitch black, but I didn't care.
Starting point is 02:31:13 If I couldn't see it, maybe it couldn't see me. I crawled into bed and pulled the covers up tight, trying to calm the rising panic in my chest. Hours passed and nothing happened. The house was quiet, and for a brief moment, I thought maybe it was over that the creature had lost interest. Then, just as I started to drift off, the tapping started again. Tap, tap, tap, tap, my heart turned.
Starting point is 02:31:39 dropped. I squeezed my eyes shut praying it would stop, but the sound grew louder. It wasn't just at the window now. I heard it at the door. Then, my name, Samantha. It was soft, almost like a question. The sound of my own voice, but twisted, wrong. Samantha, let me in. I covered my ears, but it didn't stop. It just kept calling, over and over, getting louder with each passing second. I felt like I was suffocating. My own name repeated back. at me, mocking me. Finally, I snapped. Go away! I screamed, throwing the blanket off me. For a moment, there was silence. Then the voice returned, but this time it wasn't mine. It was my mom's. Samantha, open the door, honey. My blood turned to ice. The voice outside my door, my mother's voice, sent a wave of cold terror through me. I knew it wasn't really her. It couldn't be. She was asleep in her room down the hall, but hearing her voice calling to me in the middle of the night, soft and coaxing, made me doubt everything. Samantha, honey, open the door. I need you. My heart pounded in my ears. I knew what
Starting point is 02:32:52 Eli had told me. Don't answer. Don't let it in. But the way it spoke, the way it mimicked her perfectly, made me hesitate. What if something had happened to her? What if she needed help? I stood in the middle of my room frozen, my mind spinning. My hand drifted toward the door handle, but I stopped myself just in time. This wasn't real. This wasn't my mom. I had to remember that. I backed away, sitting on the edge of my bed, my legs trembling.
Starting point is 02:33:23 Then the voice came again, more desperate. Please, Samantha, it's dark out here. I need you. I clenched my fists trying to drown out the sound. My whole body shook with fear. and I felt like I was losing my grip on reality. It knew exactly how to get to me, how to use the voice of someone I love to break me down.
Starting point is 02:33:43 Suddenly, the voice shifted. It wasn't my mom anymore. It was Eli. Samantha, it's me. Please let me in. I need your help. My chest tightened. Eli's voice sounded scared like he was in trouble.
Starting point is 02:33:58 The fear in his tone made my heart race. But deep down, I knew it wasn't him. It was the skinwalker. playing its sick game, trying to trick me. I can't, I shouted, my voice cracking. You're not real. Go away! The tapping on the door stopped. For a brief moment I thought maybe it had worked,
Starting point is 02:34:18 that maybe the creature had finally given up. But then, the voice came again, this time softer, more insidious. Open the door, Samantha. You know you want to. Just open the door. I felt my resolve slipping. My whole body was tense. My fingers trembling as I stared at the door.
Starting point is 02:34:38 The whispers clawed at my mind, relentless. Part of me wanted to give in, to stop fighting. It was exhausting, and I didn't know how much longer I could hold on. Then I remembered what Eli had said. Once it gets in, it'll never leave. I couldn't let that happen. If I opened the door, it would be over. I'd be giving up everything.
Starting point is 02:35:01 I took a deep breath, forcing myself to stand up. My legs felt like jelly, but I moved toward the door, determined. I'm not opening it, I whispered, though my voice shook with fear. You're not real. Silence. The air around me felt heavy, like the house itself was holding its breath, waiting for me to break. But I didn't. I stayed strong, even though every muscle in my body screamed for me to run.
Starting point is 02:35:28 Then the creature spoke again, in a voice that sent shivers down my spine. Fine, it said in my voice. I'll be back tomorrow. And then, everything went quiet. The next morning I barely managed to drag myself out of bed. Every muscle in my body ached from tension, and my mind felt like it had been through a blender. But even though the night was behind me,
Starting point is 02:35:51 I couldn't shake the feeling that I wasn't safe. The creature's last words echoed in my head over and over again. I'll be back tomorrow. I knew I couldn't stay here another night. Whatever this thing was, It wasn't going to stop until it got to me. Eli's warning had been clear, but now I needed more than just a locked door and hope. I called him the second my mom left for work.
Starting point is 02:36:16 We need to do something, I whispered, pacing back and forth in the kitchen. It's not going to stop, Eli. It's getting stronger. I can't do this alone anymore. Eli sounded grim. My grandpa can help, but you need to come here, now. It's too dangerous to stay in your house. The thought of going back through the woods made my stomach twist with fear, but staying here, waiting for the thing to come back tonight, felt even worse.
Starting point is 02:36:45 I had no choice. I grabbed my jacket and threw on my shoes not even bothering to eat breakfast. The sooner I got to Eli's house, the better. The walk to Eli's usually only took about 20 minutes, but this time, every second felt like an eternity. The sky was overcast, casting a gray, muted light over everything. The trees along the path swayed with a low wind, their shadows stretching like claws across the dirt road. I kept my head down refusing to look too deeply into the trees.
Starting point is 02:37:16 Every rustle, every whisper of the wind sent my heart racing. I couldn't shake the feeling that something was watching me, lurking just out of sight, waiting for the right moment to strike. Halfway to Eli's, the air grew unnaturally cold. The familiar weight of dread settled over me like a heavy blanket. I knew what was coming before I heard it. Tap, tap, tap, tap, what, that horrible sound again. Only this time it wasn't at my window, it was behind me. I turned, my heart slamming into my ribs. Standing at the edge of the forest was the creature. Its twisted, antlered body loomed out of the shadows, its eyes locked onto mine. But now, in the daylight, it looked even more horrifying, its body bent and wrong as if the skin barely clung to its bones.
Starting point is 02:38:03 Its eyes were black voids, sucking the light out of the air around them. Samantha, it hissed. Its voice a mix of mine, Eli's and my mothers, all blended together in a grotesque chorus. My legs felt like they were made of lead, but somehow I turned and ran. The trees blurred around me as I sprinted, faster than I thought possible, my feet pounding the dirt. I could hear it behind me. the heavy unnatural thumping of its limbs hitting the ground chasing me i ran faster the sound growing closer with each second my lungs burned and panic clawed at my throat but i refused to stop elie's house was just ahead
Starting point is 02:38:44 the red roof barely visible through the trees if i could just make it there i'd be safe but the creature was faster just as i reached the clearing something cold and sharp grabbed my ankle i screamed as i was pulled to the ground my hands clawing at the dirt as it dragged me backward, closer to the forest's edge. The creature's voice filled my ears, louder and more insistent now. Samantha, let me in, let me in. I kicked wildly, fighting to break free, but its grip tightened. Its cold, skeletal fingers wrapped around my leg, pulling me closer and closer to the dark, twisted trees. And then, suddenly, Eli was there.
Starting point is 02:39:25 He grabbed my arms, pulling me up with all his strength. Get up. We have to go. His voice was frantic, his eyes wide with fear. With one final desperate tug, Eli yanked me free from the creature's grip, and we stumbled toward his house. Behind us, the creature let out a shriek so loud it pierced the air, like the sound of a thousand voices screaming in pain. We bolted through the door and slammed it shut behind us.
Starting point is 02:39:52 Eli's grandfather was already there, waiting. He didn't say a word, just nodded and began chanting and nodding. Mavaho, spreading a thick, smoldering herb around the room. The smell was strong, earthy, and for the first time in days, I felt a small flicker of hope. Eli and I collapsed onto the floor, gasping for breath as his grandfather continued the ritual. The creature's shrieks echoed from outside, but it didn't come any closer. The house was protected, at least for now. I didn't know how long the ritual lasted, or how much time passed. But when it was finally over, the world outside had grown quiet again. Eli's grandfather sat down beside us, his face tired but calm.
Starting point is 02:40:36 The Skin Walker will keep searching for you, he said quietly, but as long as you stay close to us, it can't harm you. You'll be safe here. I nodded, tears of relief welling up in my eyes. I wasn't sure what the future held, but for now, I had survived. I had escaped, and that was enough. Whether it's a movie night or just midday, Skinny Pop is a salty snack that keeps on giving. Made with just three simple ingredients for an irresistibly delicious taste and a large serving size that lasts. Deliciously popped, perfectly salted.
Starting point is 02:41:17 Skinny Pop, popular for a reason. Shop Skinny Pop now. The wind outside had dropped to nothing. That kind of dead silence in the forest always unsettled me, though I'd never say it out loud. Claire would laugh, call me paranoid. But there's something about the quiet that makes the world feel too still, too watchful, like it's waiting for something to happen.
Starting point is 02:41:47 I was alone in the den, sitting in my worn-out recliner, bathed in the dim blue glow of the TV. Claire had turned in hours ago, tired from her early morning shift at the clinic. The dogs, Duke, and Scout were with her. Usually they be out here with me, but for some reason they stuck to her side tonight. curling up at the foot of our bed. The house had settled into its familiar nighttime rhythm, the faint hum of the refrigerator,
Starting point is 02:42:15 the occasional creek of floorboards, as the old cabin shifted on its foundation. Out here, deep in the forest, the isolation never bothered me. In fact, I liked it. No neighbors for miles, just the trees, the wildlife, and a sky full of stars.
Starting point is 02:42:34 It gave us room to breathe. That's why, when I heard the scratching noise, I didn't think much of it at first. I figured it was one of the dogs, maybe Duke, pawing at the back door, asking to be let out. But the scratching continued, slow and deliberate. My attention shifted from the TV, my ears tuning in, tracking the sound. I muted the TV and listened. The scratching came again, faint but unmistakable. My gut tightened, but I told myself it was nothing.
Starting point is 02:43:05 probably Duke wanting to chase some nocturnal critter he caught a whiff of. Still, the dogs were unusually quiet tonight. Normally they'd have been barking their heads off at anything that came near the house. Pushing up from the recliner, I patted down the hall, the wooden floor cold beneath my bare feet. As I passed the bedroom, I glanced in, just to check on Claire. She was curled up under the blankets, her soft breathing the only sound in the room. But the dogs They were awake both of them
Starting point is 02:43:38 Sitting up and staring at the open bedroom door I stopped in my tracks Duke and Scout weren't barking They weren't even moving Just staring Their ears pricked their bodies unnaturally still A chill ran down my spine Something was off
Starting point is 02:43:56 These weren't guard dogs Not in the traditional sense But they always reacted to anything out of place Duke, I whispered. His head snapped toward me, but he didn't wag his tail, didn't get up, just stared at me with wide, dark eyes. I glanced at Scout. Same thing. Their gaze drifted back to the doorway, as if they were waiting for something to appear.
Starting point is 02:44:21 I shook off the unease crawling up my back and moved toward the mudroom, where the scratching was louder now, more insistent. The frosted glass of the dog door was hazy in the dim light. But through it, I saw a shadow. It was crouched low, too big to be Duke or Scout, and it wasn't moving like a dog either. The shadow shifted, and for the first time, a sense of real fear crept in. I reached for the back door handle, my hand shaking. I swung the door open, nothing, just the empty dark of the night,
Starting point is 02:44:55 the faint rustle of leaves in the breeze. But I knew something had been there. I could feel it, like the air had just. changed around me. I couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong, really wrong. It stayed with me crawling under my skin long after I had closed the door. The shadow had been there, I knew it. I wasn't imagining things. But now, standing alone in the mudroom, staring out at the dark woods, I couldn't convince myself it had been just an animal. I made my way back to the bedroom, the floor creaking under my feet. But every
Starting point is 02:45:33 Everything sounded louder in the silence. The dogs hadn't moved from their spot, still sitting there, still staring at the open doorway, but now they looked tense, their hackles raised slightly, their ears twitching with every sound. Duke, scout? I called, but they didn't turn this time. Whatever had them spooked, it was still out there, and they knew it. I crawled into bed next to Claire, who hadn't stirred once through all of this. How she could sleep so soundly in this kind of quiet always amazed me.
Starting point is 02:46:06 I turned off the lamp and lay there, my heart still thudding from the strange encounter at the door. I tried to reason it out. It could have been anything, a raccoon, maybe even a stray dog passing through. But then, why had it felt so wrong? I pulled the blankets tighter around me, trying to settle the uneasy knot in my stomach, but sleep didn't come. My eyes flick to the doorway, then to the window.
Starting point is 02:46:34 Everything outside was still, the night pressing in too close. And then I heard it, a sound I'd never forget, slow, heavy breathing, coming from the hallway. It wasn't the dogs. It was too deep, too deliberate, as if whatever was out there had followed me inside. I held my breath, listening. The dogs had gone completely silent, not even a whimper. It was as if they were too afraid to make a sound. The breathing grew louder, closer, and I could almost feel the presence standing just outside
Starting point is 02:47:08 the bedroom door. My heart pounded so hard I thought Claire might wake up, just from feeling it against the mattress. I slowly reached for the lamp again, my hand trembling. I told myself that it was nothing, just my imagination running wild after seeing the shadow earlier. But deep down, I knew it wasn't. Click.
Starting point is 02:47:30 The room flooded with light. I froze. Standing in the hallway, half shrouded by the shadows, was the figure. It was hunched, just like before. But now I could see its face, if you could call it that. Its skin was pulled tight over its skull, and its mouth was twisted into a grotesque grin, teeth too long and sharp. But what froze me were the eyes.
Starting point is 02:47:53 They were wrong. Too human. For a long moment it just stared at me, its mouth twitching as it was. if it were trying to smile or speak. I couldn't move, couldn't breathe. Then suddenly it jerked backward, moving in a way no living thing should. It scrambled down the hall, its limbs making sickening cracking sounds as it bolted on all fours. I shot out of bed, yelling, fumbling for the baseball bat under the bed, but by the time I reached the doorway, the thing was gone.
Starting point is 02:48:24 The back door swung open, slapping against the frame in the cold night air. The dogs were whimpering, cowering in the corner, refusing to even look at the doorway. I stood there, bad in hand, staring into the night. My skin crawling with the realization that whatever it was, it had been inside the house, and it had been watching us. The next morning, the house felt colder, emptier. Claire noticed it too. She kept commenting on how off everything seemed,
Starting point is 02:48:55 but I didn't have the nerve to tell her what really happened. she knew something wasn't right but she chalked it up to my restlessness keeping her awake half the night maybe i should have let her believe that after a long silent breakfast i went out to check around the property just to settle my nerves the dogs followed though duke stayed closer to the cabin than usual his nose constantly in the air scout normally bold was skittish trotting ahead and doubling back like he couldn't stand being alone for even a few seconds The claw marks were the first thing I noticed. They were deep, gouging long streaks into the wood of the back door. I crouched down to inspect them, running my fingers over the rough edges. They were fresh, too fresh. And whatever made them had claws bigger than anything I'd seen in these woods.
Starting point is 02:49:46 No animal I knew left marks like that. I swallowed hard and stood up, scanning the tree line for any movement, but everything was still, too still. The normal sounds of birds and rustling leaves were absent. The forest felt wrong. Claire came outside a few minutes later, asking what I was up to. I told her it was just some animal scratching at the door. She shrugged it off, figuring it was a raccoon or a bear,
Starting point is 02:50:15 but I saw the way she looked at the marks. There was doubt in her eyes. I spent the rest of the day trying to focus on anything else, chores around the cabin, splitting firewood, cleaning the shed, but that feeling stayed with me, the sense of being watched. Every so often, I'd stop what I was doing and glance over my shoulder, half expecting to see that figure standing just inside the tree line, those dead eyes staring back at me. But it never showed. By the time night fell, my nerves were frayed. I locked every door, checked every window twice, maybe three
Starting point is 02:50:52 times. The dogs wouldn't leave my side, their noses constantly sniffing the air like they were tracking something I couldn't see. Claire gave me an odd look when I suggested we leave the outdoor lights on overnight. It wasn't like me to worry about things like that, but I couldn't shake the feeling. I needed to see what was out there. I went to bed with the shotgun next to the nightstand. Claire didn't say anything about it, but she noticed. We lay in silence, neither of us sleeping. listening to the sounds, or the lack of them, outside. Around 2 a.m., I heard it again, the breathing. I sat up, heart racing, every muscle tensed.
Starting point is 02:51:34 Claire stirred beside me, sensing the tension, but she didn't wake. I strained to listen, trying to pinpoint the sound. It wasn't outside this time. It was closer, too close. I reached for the shotgun, gripping it tight. The dogs were whimpering again, huddled against the door, refusing to move. I could hear the breathing now, slow and steady, coming from just beyond the window. I couldn't bring myself to look. Instead, I just sat there, gripping the shotgun, waiting for
Starting point is 02:52:04 whatever was out there to make the first move. I hadn't slept. I couldn't. The breathing outside the window never stopped, not until dawn broke over the mountains and bathed the cabin in its pale light. By then the noise had faded, but the tension remained. I stayed up, shotguns still clutched in my hands, scanning every shadow that stretched along the floor, half expecting that thing to burst through the door any second. Claire found me sitting there, eyes red-rimmed, the gun in my lap, when she woke up. She didn't say anything, just gave me that worried look, the one that said more than words ever could. I knew she thought I was losing it. Hell, maybe I was. But I couldn't ignore it anymore. I wasn't imagine. I wasn't imagine.
Starting point is 02:52:51 imagining things. This wasn't just some animal creeping around in the woods. It was something else. Something worse. I could see it in the dog's eyes, the way they trembled, how they wouldn't leave my side, and how they refused to even glance at the window. After breakfast I stepped outside again, shotguns slung over my shoulder. The sky was clear, the air still, but that unnatural silence was back. No birds, no rustling leaves. Just a dead, quiet stillness, as if the forest itself was holding its breath. I scanned the perimeter of the property, my eyes drawn again and again to the tree line. Every so often I thought I saw something moving just beyond the edge of the woods,
Starting point is 02:53:37 but whenever I looked directly at it, it was gone. And then I heard it, faint, barely noticeable at first, but unmistakable, scratching. Not at the door this time, but somewhere deeper in the trees, as if it was taunting me, daring me to come closer. I loaded the shotgun, the click of the rounds sliding into place somehow comforting, even though I wasn't sure it'd do me any good against whatever this thing was. I wasn't hunting now. I was confronting it. As I made my way toward the sound, the trees seemed to close in around me,
Starting point is 02:54:12 their branches reaching out like skeletal arms. The air grew colder, a biting chill that prickled the back of my neck. Every instinct screamed for me to turn back, but I kept going, drawn forward by a mix of anger and fear. And then I saw it. It was standing just inside the tree line, half hidden in the shadows. The same hunched figure, its twisted form bent in unnatural angles, its face, a grotesque mix of human and animal, was clearer in the daylight. Though it still seemed to blur and distort the longer I looked at it, its eyes locked onto mind. hollow and dead, but filled with some kind of cruel intelligence.
Starting point is 02:54:56 I raised the shotgun, hands shaking. Get the hell away from my house! The creature let out a low, guttural growl, its mouth twisting into that horrific grin. And then, in one fluid motion, it bolted, faster than anything I'd ever seen. I fired, the shot echoing through the trees, but it was already gone, disappearing into the depths of the forest, as if it had never been there at all. I stood there for a long time, my heart racing, the shotgun still aimed at the empty woods. I knew it wasn't over, it would come back, and next time I wasn't sure if I'd be ready.
Starting point is 02:55:43 It was one of those mornings where everything felt sharp and alive. The kind of morning that made me feel like the world was as it should be, where the air tasted clean and crisp, and my mind was finally starting to clear. I needed this. I'd been craving it for weeks, a hike out on Devil's Ridge, just me in the mountains. I woke early, threw my gear into the truck, and started driving before the sun had fully broken the horizon. Devil's Ridge was three hours from home, far enough away that it felt like a different world,
Starting point is 02:56:16 and that's exactly what I was looking for. The last thing I needed was to think about my ex-girlfriend or the job I hated. out here there was none of that just pine trees fresh air and solitude the drive took me through winding back roads each one quieter and more remote than the last the town had faded in my rearview mirror an hour ago and now it was just endless stretches of forest tall pines lining the road like sentinels i didn't mind the isolation i never had in fact i looked forward to it Too many people never seemed to realize how loud life was until they got out here, into the middle of nowhere. That's when the silence hit them, when it closed in like a blanket. For me, the quiet was a relief. When I pulled up to the trailhead, there was only one other car there, an old beat-up sedan, its paint peeling in spots. I checked my watch, 6.30 a.m., early enough that I wouldn't run into anyone else on the trail for hours,
Starting point is 02:57:21 maybe all day if I was lucky. I scanned the area, half expecting to see someone else getting ready to head out, but there was nothing. Just the car and the trees, standing tall in the morning light. I got out of the truck, shouldered my pack, and glanced up at Devil's Ridge. The mountain loomed in the distance, jagged and quiet, bathed in the early morning sun. This was my kind of place, rough, wild, and untouched, a challenge, the kind of hike where you didn't have to share the trail with the
Starting point is 02:57:56 Instagram crowd. Out here, it was just you, and whatever the mountain decided to throw at you. I started up the trail at a steady pace, taking in the crisp smell of pine and the crunch of dirt beneath my boots. Birds flitted from tree to tree, and every so often I'd hear the snap of a branch, probably a deer or a fox moving through the underbrush. It was peaceful, too peaceful maybe. The kind of quiet where your mind started to play tricks on you, filling the space with things that weren't really there. I pushed those thoughts aside, focusing instead on the trail ahead. My legs fell into a rhythm, each step carrying me further into the wilderness. I stopped a few times to take photos, the landscape too beautiful to ignore. Towering trees framed the distant peaks,
Starting point is 02:58:45 and the sun cast long shadows across the path. But as I climbed higher, Something shifted. The air felt colder, and the birds that had been singing only moments ago seemed to disappear. I slowed, scanning the forest around me. The trail stretched out ahead, but the silence had deepened. No wind, no rustling leaves, just nothing. I told myself it was normal that nature had its own quiet moments, but I couldn't shake the feeling that something wasn't right. The mountain was watching, waiting. The descent started easy, enough. Sunlight still filtered through the treetops, casting long shadows across the trail as I made my way down. I felt good, sweaty, sure, but the kind of tired that comes from doing something that matters to you, my mind was clearer than it had been in weeks. But as the trees thickened, the light began to fade faster than I expected. I glanced at my watch, surprised to see how quickly time had slipped away. The sun had started to sink behind the ridge, and with it any sense of warmth
Starting point is 02:59:51 disappeared. I picked up my pace, knowing I had miles to go before I hit the parking lot. I'd done plenty of hikes that ended in the dark, and I wasn't too concerned, not yet, but the further I went, the quieter it got. The birds that had been chirping and flitting through the trees earlier had vanished, leaving behind an odd stillness, the kind of stillness you feel in your gut more than you hear. I told myself it was just evening settling in. Nature's bedtime, right? But I couldn't shake the feeling that something else was going on. Then I felt it. That prickling sensation, the one that crawls up the back of your neck when you know someone, or some thing, is watching you. I stopped dead in my tracks, my heart pounding in my ears.
Starting point is 03:00:38 I scanned the trees looking for movement, but all I saw were shadows stretching longer as the faded. My breath was coming faster, my instincts screaming at me to keep moving, but every time I glanced back, the trail was empty. Still, that feeling wouldn't leave. I started walking again, this time faster, practically power hiking down the trail. Every rustle of leaves, every snap of a branch made me jump, and the footsteps, they started faint, so distant I almost convinced myself they weren't there at all. But as I kept moving, they grew louder, keeping pace with. with me. Too far back to see anything when I looked over my shoulder, but close enough that I could hear them. Footfalls, matching mine. I told myself it had to be another hiker, maybe the person
Starting point is 03:01:27 who'd left the car at the trailhead. But why would anyone be this far out now, at dusk? No one else had been on this trail all day. It didn't make sense. The feeling of being watched got worse. I could feel eyes on me, following me with every step. I whistled a tune, anything to distract myself from the growing tension in the pit of my stomach. But the sound seemed to fall flat, swallowed up by the thickening shadows. I quicken my pace again, glancing over my shoulder every few seconds, expecting to see someone. But there was nothing, no one. Just that damned feeling.
Starting point is 03:02:05 I kept moving, pushing harder, the forest closing in around me as not. night took hold. That's when I heard it. The footsteps weren't just matching mine anymore. They were getting closer, a lot closer. I glanced behind me again, expecting to see a person. But what I saw, it wasn't human, it wasn't even close. It was standing just at the edge of the trees, eyes glowing like something out of a nightmare. I didn't think, just ran. My legs kicked into overdrive, tearing down the trail like a madman, Each breath a ragged gasp, whatever was behind me, it wasn't human. That much was clear.
Starting point is 03:02:46 I could still see those eyes, glowing like green embers in the dusk, burned into my mind. My heart hammered in my chest, my throat dry and tight as I pushed myself harder than I ever had before. The footsteps behind me were faster now, no longer subtle or distant. They pounded the earth, closing the gap between us with each step I took. I was out of options, out of time. I needed to move, or I was dead. Branches whipped at my face as I tore through the trail,
Starting point is 03:03:17 barely able to see in the fading light. The air was thick, the trees towering like sentinels on either side, trapping me on this narrow strip of dirt. I risked a glance over my shoulder, hoping, praying. It was just some hallucination or maybe a trick of the fading light. But what I saw almost made me stop dead. The thing wasn't a deer anymore. It was standing on two legs, towering well over seven feet tall,
Starting point is 03:03:44 its long skeletal arms swaying unnaturally as it moved. Its skin hung in tatters, patches of matted fur mixed with sickly gray flesh. Its face was something out of a nightmare, hollow sockets where eyes should have been, and a mouth that was too wide, filled with teeth like shards of broken glass. The glowing eyes I'd seen earlier were go. gone, replaced by two black pits that seemed to swallow the light around them. And it was fast, too fast. I whipped my head forward, focusing on the trail ahead, my mind racing.
Starting point is 03:04:19 What the hell was this thing? A bear, a freak of nature. No, nothing natural looked like that. This was something else, something old, something wrong. It screamed again, that awful gut-wrenching sound, half-human, half-animal. It sliced through the trees, echoing in the dark, sending fresh adrenaline surging through me. I pushed harder, legs burning, lungs on fire. But no matter how fast I went, it was gaining on me.
Starting point is 03:04:50 I could hear its footsteps getting louder, closer, until I could practically feel its breath on the back of my neck. Then it swung. I felt the sharp, hot sting as claws raked across my shoulder, tearing through my jacket and into my skin. The pain was instant, blinding. I stumbled nearly falling, but somehow managed to keep my feet moving. My right arm hung limp, blood dripping down my side, each step sending fresh waves of pain through my body. I couldn't stop, not now.
Starting point is 03:05:23 If I did, I was dead. Ahead the trail narrowed sharply, dropping off into a steep slope. My only option was to run straight toward it. No time to think, no time to plan. I leaned into the fall, praying the slope wasn't as steep as it looked. I hit the ground hard, tumbling head over heels. Rocks and branches slammed into me as I rolled down the embankment, smashing against trees, dirt, anything in my path.
Starting point is 03:05:51 Pain radiated through every part of my body, but I didn't care. I had to keep moving. When I finally came to a stop, I was lying in a heap at the base of a tree. My ankle was twisted, maybe broken. blood soaked my jacket. The thing's footsteps were still up there, somewhere in the dark, searching for me. And I knew it would find me soon. The world was spinning, and my body felt like it had been through a meat grinder.
Starting point is 03:06:20 Every breath was agony, my ankle a pulsing fire, but I couldn't stop now. I could hear it above me, pacing the ridge like a predator stalking its wounded prey. Its guttural breathing echoed through the trees, closer than a little. I'd hoped. Too close. I forced myself to sit up, wincing as I gingerly touched the torn skin on my shoulder. Blood soaked my jacket, but that wasn't what worried me. What worried me was that sound, the thing's ragged breaths, deep and deliberate, as if it was savoring this moment. I needed to hide, or fight, something. My pack had spilled when I fell, my flashlight gone, leaving me half blind in the thickening darkness.
Starting point is 03:07:07 But my hand grazed something solid, the knife I always kept on me, its grip cold and reassuring. I clung to it like a lifeline. Not much, but better than nothing. The creature was still there, prowling along the ridge above, and I knew I didn't have long before it found its way down.
Starting point is 03:07:25 I glanced around, desperate. There, a bush, thick enough to hide me, if only for a few minutes. I dragged myself over, my ankle screaming in protest, and threw myself into the tangled branches. I pulled the leaves around me, trying to steady my breath, gripping the knife so tightly my knuckles ached. The thing was close now. I could hear the crunch of its feet as it descended, slow, deliberate. The snapping of branches under its weight. My heartbeat matched the rhythm of its steps,
Starting point is 03:07:58 each one louder, more insistent. I bit my lip. hard enough to draw blood, fighting the panic that was threatening to overtake me. I couldn't afford to break down. Not now. I waited, holding my breath as the creature's movement slowed. It was just a few feet away, its hulking form casting long shadows as it sniffed the air. I caught a glimpse of its twisted figure through the leaves, those long bony arms that face, or lack of one. The thing that had once been a deer, now looked like something that had crawled out of the leaves.
Starting point is 03:08:32 of the deepest pits of hell, its hollow eyes scanning the area, searching, and then it stopped. I could hear its breaths, ragged and low, right beside me. It had found me. Without thinking, I exploded out of the bush, knife in hand, slashing wildly. The blade connected with something solid, a sickening crunch followed by an ear-splitting scream. Inhuman, guttural, like the death wail of something that should have never been alive. I drove the knife deeper, into its skull, the blade sinking through flesh and bone until my hand was slick with blood, warm and thick, running down my arm. The creature thrashed, collapsing to the ground in front of me. Its body convulsed violently, limbs jerking as if trying to pull itself back up. But I didn't let go.
Starting point is 03:09:20 I kept pushing, stabbing, until its movement slowed, until it was still. I collapsed next to it, my chest heaving, body trembling from exhaustion and pain. The forest was silent at it. again. No more footsteps, no more breathing, just silence. The relief that washed over me was almost enough to make me cry, but I didn't. I couldn't, not yet. I lay there, next to the creature's lifeless body, staring at the sky, waiting for it to move again, half expecting it to rise and finish what it started. When the sun began to rise, its warmth cutting through the cool air, I realized I had made it, somehow. I forced myself to stand, my body screaming in protest, and stumbled back toward the trail.
Starting point is 03:10:08 The creature was gone, its body, my knife, all of it. Only a trail of blood led back into the woods, disappearing into the thick shadows. I wasn't going to wait around. I limped as fast as I could, the haunting scream still echoing in my head, knowing that whatever it was, it wasn't finished with me yet. And I wasn't sure I'd survive another night with it. I limped down the trail, every step sending a bolt of pain through my twisted ankle and torn shoulder. The sun was creeping higher now, its light cutting through the trees, but it did little to warm me.
Starting point is 03:10:45 I was cold, colder than I should have been, and my hands shook uncontrollably. The trail stretched endlessly ahead, like some kind of cruel joke. each bend leading only to more trees, more silence. It was like the woods themselves were conspiring to keep me here. The creatures' scream still echoed in my mind. Even though I had left its convulsing body behind, I couldn't shake the feeling it was still watching me, still hunting me. Every rustle of leaves, every snap of a branch made me jump,
Starting point is 03:11:18 made my heart race in my chest. I kept glancing over my shoulder, half expecting to see those glowing eyes again, That twisted face lurking just beyond the shadows. But there was nothing. Just me and the woods. And the growing sense that I wasn't really alone. I wasn't running anymore. I couldn't.
Starting point is 03:11:38 My body was too beaten up, my mind too frayed. All I could do was stumble forward, one agonizing step at a time. The blood had dried on my jacket, but the wound on my shoulder throbbed, and my ankle felt like it was being stabbed with every step. but I couldn't stop. I had to keep moving. Stopping meant thinking, and thinking meant remembering, remembering that thing, how it had chased me down, how it had almost taken me apart piece by piece. Somehow I made it back to the trailhead where my truck sat waiting. The sight of it, old and familiar, was almost enough to bring me to my knees. I'd never been so relieved to see anything
Starting point is 03:12:19 in my life. I fumbled with the keys, my fingers trembling too much. to work right. But after what felt like an eternity, I got the door open and threw myself inside. I slammed the door shut behind me, locking it instinctively, like that thin sheet of metal and glass would keep out whatever was out there. But right now, it was all I had. The engine roared to life, and I floored it, the tires spitting gravel as I tore down the dirt road. I didn't look back. I couldn't. I couldn't bear to see if something was standing in the shadows at the edge of the woods, watching me go. I just drove, hands clenched tight on the wheel as the forest disappeared behind me. My heart was still racing, and my breaths came shallow and ragged, but I kept driving, kept putting
Starting point is 03:13:08 miles between me and that cursed mountain. An hour passed, maybe more, before I even dared to breathe normally again. The sun was high in the sky now, and the trees were thinning, the road leading me back to civilization. But the feeling didn't leave me. that thing the way it had changed the way it had stalked me none of it felt real but it was i could still feel the weight of its eyes on me the slash of its claws the sound of its scream tearing through the trees i was lucky no lucky didn't even begin to describe it i was alive barely but i knew one thing for sure i was never coming back to these woods not to devil's ridge not to anywhere i was alive barely but i knew one thing for sure i was never coming back to these woods not to devil's ridge not to anywhere like it. Some places weren't meant for people. Some places held things that we were never supposed to see, never supposed to survive. And I wasn't foolish enough to test my luck twice. As the last of the trees disappeared in my rearview mirror, I whispered a promise to myself. I would never return. Not to devil's
Starting point is 03:14:14 ridge, not to any woods like it, because the next time I might not make it out alive. My name's Eric, and let me tell you, life hasn't exactly been a walk in the park. I'm 25 now, and I've been on my own for as long as I can remember. My parents? Well, they've been in and out of jail and rehab my whole life. That left me to figure out how to survive by myself. Right now, I've got two jobs, one as a waiter at a local diner and another cleaning offices at night. Between the long hours and endless bills, life feels like one big treadmill I can't get off. One evening, after a particularly rough day at the diner, I was nearing the end of my shift.
Starting point is 03:15:05 All I wanted was to get through the last few tables and go home. But there was this group of guys, high schoolers by the looks of them, acting like they owned the place. They were loud, obnoxious, and making everyone around them uncomfortable. I'd already asked them once to keep it down, but of course they didn't listen. I walked over trying my best to stay calm, though I could feel the frustration building.
Starting point is 03:15:31 Hey guys, I said, putting on a polite but firm tone. I need you to quiet down a bit. You're disturbing the other customers. One of them, a tall kid with messy blonde hair, looked me right in the eye and sneered. We just came from prom, man. We're trying to have a good time. Why don't you mind your own business? His breath reeked of alcohol, and I knew he wasn't just drinking soda like the rest of them. I held my ground. You've been warned. If you don't settle down, I'll have to ask you to leave. That's when the guy's smirk turned into something darker. Before I could even react, he picked up his drink, a large cup of soda, and tossed it in my face. I stood there, soaked, the sticky liquid running down my neck. For a second, everything
Starting point is 03:16:19 went red. I wanted to grab him, to show him he couldn't treat people like that. But But just as I took a step forward, I felt a hand on my shoulder. It was Glenn, the owner of the diner pulling me back. Let it go, Eric, he said quietly, his voice steady. I'll handle this. In the back room, as I wiped the soda from my face, Glenn shook his head. I've never seen you this upset before, he said, his eyes studying me. What's going on?
Starting point is 03:16:51 I tried to brush it off, but he didn't buy it. It's more than the soda, isn't it? He wasn't wrong. For the past few months, it felt like everything was piling up. The long hours, the constant bills, the endless grind. I was exhausted, burned out. But I didn't want to admit it. Glenn crossed his arms leaning against the counter.
Starting point is 03:17:13 Eric, you've been working non-stop. You need a break before you crack. I'm taking you off the schedule for a week. Go home, rest. Get your head on straight. At first I argued, I couldn't afford to take time off, but Glenn wouldn't listen. He was right, though. I needed a break, whether I liked it or not. That night I walked back to my apartment feeling lost. Without work to distract me, what was I supposed to do with myself? As I opened the door, the silence inside felt suffocating. It was just me, alone, with my thoughts, and I didn't like where they were headed. The next morning, I woke up to a loud banging on my apartment door. I wasn't expecting anyone, so I hesitated before opening it.
Starting point is 03:18:01 When I did, there stood Damon, my cousin, with his signature cocky grin. Damon was the kind of guy who always seemed to have it all together, money, confidence, and a lifestyle that couldn't be more different from mine. Hey Eric, Damon said, pushing past me and into the apartment. He looked around at the clutter, raising an eyebrow. Still living the dream, huh? I ignored his jab and asked, What are you doing here?
Starting point is 03:18:28 Damon clapped a hand on my shoulder. I rented a cabin in the mountains for a few days. Figured I'd invite you along. You could use a break. At first I wanted to say no. Damon and I didn't have much in common. He was into hunting and outdoor stuff while I'd rather stay inside,
Starting point is 03:18:45 away from bugs and dirt. But then I remembered Glenn forcing me to take time off and how lost I felt with nothing to do. Maybe getting out of town for a bit wouldn't be so bad. I sighed and nodded. Sure, why not? A few hours later, we were on the road, heading deep into the mountains. Damon's truck was packed with all his hunting gear, rifles, ammo, and enough beer to drown an army.
Starting point is 03:19:12 He talked the whole way, mostly bragging about his latest hunting trips, his job, and the new expensive rifle he'd brought along. I mostly tuned him out, staring out the window as the scenery changed. The trees got taller, the road narrower, and the sky seemed to close in above us. By the time we arrived at the cabin, the sun was already low in the sky. The place was more run down than I expected. The wooden structure creaked as we walked up to it, and the windows were small and dark. Inside it was even weirder. The walls were covered with hunting trophies, deerheads.
Starting point is 03:19:50 antlers and animal pelts. It felt like we were stepping into some kind of hunter's museum. The air smelled musty, and the furniture looked like it hadn't been touched in years. Damon didn't seem bothered at all. He threw down his bags, cracked open a beer, and tossed one to me. This is what you need, man, fresh air, cold beer, and some quality hunting. I took the beer, but my stomach was tight with unease. The cabin felt too quiet, the forest around it too still. Something about this place didn't sit right with me, but I couldn't explain why. As night fell, we sat by the fireplace, drinking. At first, Damon was in a good mood, talking about his hunting plans and how excited he was for me to finally bag a deer. But the more he drank, the more his
Starting point is 03:20:41 attitude shifted. He started teasing me about my life, how I worked too much, how I didn't have any friends and how I was always stuck in that same old apartment. His words were like little jabs, each one hitting closer to home. I tried to shrug it off, but it was getting harder to keep my cool. Finally, when he made some snide comment about how pathetic my life was, I'd had enough. Without saying a word, I grabbed one of his rifles and stood up. I'm going hunting, I said, needing to get away from him and clear my head. Damon just laughed. Good luck, man. Don't get lost out there. I stepped outside into the cold, dark forest, the rifle heavy in my hands.
Starting point is 03:21:24 The trees towered over me, and the air felt thick and damp. I wasn't a hunter. I didn't even know what I was doing, but right now, being out here felt better than being in that cabin with Damon's insults echoing in my ears. I didn't plan to actually shoot anything. I just wanted some space, some quiet. But as I ventured deeper into the woods, a strange sense of dread started to creep over me. The forest was too quiet. It felt like something was watching me,
Starting point is 03:21:53 hidden in the shadows. I don't know how long I walked through the woods, but the further I went, the darker it got. The trees seemed to close in around me, their branches twisted like claws. The air was colder now, and an eerie mist had settled over the forest floor, swirling around my feet as I moved. I had no real direction, just trying to put as much distance as I could between me and Damon's drunken taunts. I stopped for a moment, trying to catch my breath. The quiet was unnerving. No birds, no insects, nothing.
Starting point is 03:22:28 Just the soft crunch of my boots on the fallen leaves. My grip tightened on the rifle, more out of instinct than anything else. I wasn't really planning to use it, but in that silence, the weight of the gun felt like my only sense of security. Suddenly, something caught my eye up ahead, a flash of movement through the trees. I froze, squinting through the dim light, trying to make out what it was.
Starting point is 03:22:53 My heart pounded in my chest. Maybe it was just a deer. Damon had brought me out here to hunt after all. But something about the way it moved seemed weird. I took a cautious step forward, my pulse quickening. That's when I saw it. Antlers sticking out from a bush just ahead of me. Relief washed over me for a second.
Starting point is 03:23:15 It really was just a deer. But as I moved closer, that relief quickly turned to horror. The deer wasn't standing. It was lying on the ground, motionless, and it was torn apart, ripped open in the most brutal, bloody way I'd ever seen. Its guts were strewn across the ground. Its body mangled beyond recognition. The stench hit me like a punch to the gut, and I had to fight the urge to vomit. I'd never seen anything so violent, so wrong.
Starting point is 03:23:43 That's when I heard it, the sound of something large moving through the trees behind me. Heavy, deliberate footsteps. My heart leapt into my throat, and I turned, eyes wide, scanning the darkness. Whatever it was, it was getting closer. The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end. I couldn't see anything, but I could feel it. Something was out there, something big, and it wasn't scared of me. Suddenly, out of the mist, it emerged.
Starting point is 03:24:14 At first I couldn't process what I was seeing. It was huge, easily over eight feet tall, with dark matted fur covering its massive body. Its eyes glowed a deep, unnatural red, and its teeth. They were long and sharp, stained with blood. In one of its massive hands it clutched a chunk of meat, likely from the deer it had just mutilated. I stood frozen in terror, my legs refusing to be.
Starting point is 03:24:40 to move. The creature snarled, a deep gutteral sound that vibrated through the trees. My mind screamed at me to run, but my body was rooted in place. Then, with a horrifying speed, it lunged toward me. The force of its strike hit me like a truck. I was knocked off my feet, the rifle flying out of my hands as I crashed into the dirt. My head spun and pain exploded through my body as I scrambled to get up. But before I could, the creature was there, towering over me, its red eyes locked on mine. I was sure I was going to die. But in that moment of pure panic, my hand found the rifle. Without thinking, I grabbed it and fired. The gunshot echoed through the forest and the creature let out a deafening roar, staggering back as the bullet tore into
Starting point is 03:25:29 its shoulder. I didn't wait to see what would happen next. I ran. I ran faster than I ever had in my life, the sound of the beast's furious howls chasing me through the trees. I had to get back to the cabin. I had to get away. I didn't stop running. My legs burned and my lungs felt like they were going to explode, but I couldn't slow down. Every step felt like it wasn't fast enough. Behind me, the creature's roars filled the night, getting louder, closer, twigs snapped underfoot, and branches scratched at my face, but I didn't care. All I could think about was really, reaching the cabin. When I finally saw the faint glow of the cabin's windows through the trees, a surge of relief hit me. I burst through the door, slamming it behind me, gasping for breath.
Starting point is 03:26:18 Damon looked up from cleaning one of his rifles, a beer still in his hand. His eyes went wide when he saw me, covered in dirt, blood, and pure panic. Eric, what the hell happened to you? he asked, standing up. We have to get out of here. Now, I shouted, my voice shaking. I rushed to the window peeking through the blinds. The trees outside swayed and the distant thud of heavy footsteps told me the creature wasn't far behind. Damon frowned, clearly not understanding the urgency.
Starting point is 03:26:50 Calm down, man. You probably just saw a bear or something. Relax. No, I snapped, turning to him. This wasn't a bear. This thing, it's huge, Damon. And it's coming, right now. Before I could explain further, a loud bang echoed from the side of the cabin.
Starting point is 03:27:09 The whole building shook. Damon's face paled. He wasn't laughing now. We both stood frozen for a moment as the sound of something massive circling the cabin filled the air. It was like the walls themselves were groaning under the pressure. Grab the guns, Damon whispered, his voice tight with fear. He quickly loaded his rifle and tossed another one to me. I barely caught it.
Starting point is 03:27:32 my hands trembling. The creature pounded on the walls again, this time harder. The windows rattled. It was testing the cabin, looking for a way in. I backed up, heart pounding in my chest. Damon stood by the door, rifle raised, eyes darting from side to side, waiting for the inevitable. Suddenly, there was a crash. The front window shattered and a giant clawed hand reached through, swiping wildly. Glass flew everywhere, and we both jumped back. Damon fired, the sound of the gunshot deafening in the small cabin. The creature let out a monstrous roar, pulling its hand back, but we knew it wouldn't stop. It was angry now, desperate to get inside. We have to get out of here, I yelled, already heading for the back door. Damon hesitated for a second, but then nodded,
Starting point is 03:28:25 grabbing his gear. Another crash came from the front as the door began to buckle under the creature's strength. We didn't have time. Without looking back, we burst out the back door and ran into the dark woods. I didn't know where we were going, but I knew we couldn't stay there. The creature's roars echoed behind us, closer now. Every second felt like it was about to catch us, like we were running from the very jaws of death. The forest felt endless, and the darkness swallowed everything, but we kept running, pushing through the trees, slipping on rocks and dirt. The creature's footsteps followed us for what felt like ours, but finally, mercifully, they began to fade. Maybe it had lost interest, or maybe it couldn't keep up. I didn't care. I just knew we were still alive. Eventually we found
Starting point is 03:29:15 the road. Damon's truck still parked where we left it. We jumped. in and Damon floored the gas. The tires screeched as we sped away from the woods, the cabin shrinking in the rearview mirror. Neither of us spoke the whole ride back. By the time we reached town, the sun was starting to rise. I was exhausted, every muscle aching, but we had made it out, barely. As Damon parked the truck, he finally broke the silence. We're never going back there, he said, his voice low. I nodded, staring out the window at the rising. sun. Whatever was in those woods, it wasn't something meant to be found. I didn't know what it was, but I knew one thing for sure. I was never going near that cabin, or any forest, again. My name is Levi,
Starting point is 03:30:13 and I'll never forget that night in the woods. It started out like any other night with my cousins and me playing Manhunt. We had our own version of the game, hiding in teams and trying to sneak around without being caught. My cousin Marty and I were on one team, and I, and I were on one team, and I was a our cousin Lorelei and her friend Blaine were on the other. We always played in the woods near Nana's house in Nibo, Louisiana. The woods felt different at night, though. There was something about the darkness. Marty and I were walking deeper into the forest, looking for a good place to hide. The trees started to look strange the further we went. They weren't random like normal trees. They were all lined up in perfect rows. It gave me the creeps, but I didn't say anything. We found a spot to hide and turned
Starting point is 03:30:57 off our flashlights. Everything went completely silent except for the sound of our breathing. We crouched there for what felt like forever, waiting to hear Lorelei and Blaine coming after us. That's when we heard it, the sound of footsteps. At first it was faint, like someone carefully stepping on dry leaves, but soon the footsteps got closer and louder. There were no bushes to hide in, just trees and piles of dead leaves on the ground. Marty and I exchanged nervous glances. We were sure it had to be Blaine or Lorelei trying to sneak up on us. Marty, I whispered. Did you hear that? He nodded, his eyes wide. Yeah, but it doesn't sound like them. I felt a shiver run down my spine. We hadn't seen anyone, and by now, Blaine or Lorelei
Starting point is 03:31:47 should have been close enough for us to spot them with our flashlights. Marty's hand shook as he raised his phone and sent a quick text to Lorelei, asking where they were. We sat there, in the dark, waiting for a reply, trying not to panic. Then I heard it, a soft rustle, like something moving just beyond the trees. Marty's phone buzzed. He looked at it, and I saw the color drain from his face. Blaine's at the house, he said, his voice barely above a whisper, Lorelei's on Nana's porch. My heart skipped a beat. If Blaine and Lorelei were at the house, then who, or what, was in the woods with us. Just then, Something darted past us, so fast that we could barely see it.
Starting point is 03:32:31 Marty jumped up, shining his flashlight around, but all we saw were the rows of trees and the thick shadows between them. Whatever it was, it wasn't human, and it was fast. I didn't need to say anything. Marty and I locked eyes, and we both knew what to do. We bolted out of the woods running as fast as we could. My feet pounded the ground, leaves crunching underfoot as I tried not to trip. I didn't dare look back. By the time we reached Nana's house, we were both out of breath, hearts racing.
Starting point is 03:33:01 We stood there in the safety of the porch, staring into the dark woods. Whatever was out there wasn't Lorelei, Blaine, or any of us. And it wasn't done watching us either. Something was in those woods that night. Something fast. Something dangerous. A few years after that creepy night in the woods, I figured I had moved on. I mean nothing weird had happened since, right?
Starting point is 03:33:25 but even though I told myself I'd forgotten about it, the truth is, that night never really left me. Still, life goes on, and as teenagers, my cousins and I found new ways to have fun. That usually meant hanging out on the dirt roads near the oil fields late at night, where nobody bothered us. One night it was me, my cousin Jaden, our friend Gage, and a couple of other friends, maybe E.J., I can't remember exactly. We had this favorite spot on a hill where all the trees had been cleared out. It gave us a perfect view of the sky. We'd go out there to smoke and drink and just relax, especially on nights like this one, when the stars were bright and the air was cool. The open sky
Starting point is 03:34:09 always felt peaceful, but there was something about the quiet that night that made me uneasy. We started walking down the dirt road toward the hilltop, and I was trailing behind, as usual. I was a little buzzed, so I wasn't really in a rush. The others were ahead of me, laughing and talking, their voices fading in and out as I lagged behind. It was kind of calming, but that's when I started to notice Gage acting strange. He kept glancing back at me, his face looking tense, like something was bothering him. I figured he was just high, so I didn't pay much attention. Finally, we reached our spot.
Starting point is 03:34:48 The sky above was wide open, stars sparkling like glitter. I sat down on the ground feeling the cool breeze against my face. That's when E.J. came up to me with this weird look on his face. Hey Levi, he said. Gage is tripping out. He thinks you're a skinwalker or something. I laughed. I thought it was hilarious that Gage was so high he thought I was a skinwalker.
Starting point is 03:35:11 I mean, come on, a skinwalker. Those are just stories, right? But then Gage spoke up, his voice dead-send. serious. No, Levi, I didn't think you were a skin walker. I saw something behind you. I froze. What do you mean behind me? I asked. My voice suddenly not so confident anymore. Gage stared at me, his eyes wide. When we were walking back here, I saw something. Tall. It was moving behind you, but when I looked again, it was gone. My stomach dropped. Suddenly, I wasn't laughing anymore.
Starting point is 03:35:49 Gage wasn't the type to mess around like that, and the way he looked at me, it wasn't a joke. I swallowed hard, my heart pounding in my chest. Are you sure you weren't just seeing things? I asked, hoping that he was just too high to know what he saw. But Gage shook his head. No, man, I know what I saw. Something was following you, Levi.
Starting point is 03:36:11 I didn't say anything. I couldn't. My mind was racing, flashing back to that night. in the woods, when Marty and I had run from something we couldn't explain. Was it possible that whatever had been out there was still watching us, still following us? That night, I couldn't stop looking over my shoulder, waiting to see something lurking in the shadows. And from that moment on, I couldn't shake the feeling that something was still out there, waiting. One night, not long after Gage's freaky Skinwalker story, I was hanging out at my parents' house. We live in an even
Starting point is 03:36:46 more remote place now, a spot called Possum Point. Yeah, I know, funny name, but the place is anything but. It's quiet, almost too quiet sometimes. The kind of place where, when the sun goes down, the only sounds you hear are your own footsteps, and maybe the wind rustling through the trees. It's peaceful during the day, but at night, well, it's different. My younger sister, Georgia, used to love walking the dirt roads around our house after dark. She's like, me in that way. We've always enjoyed being out there, just soaking in the stillness. But lately, Georgia had stopped taking those walks. It was weird and I wanted to know why. One night I convinced her to go on a walk with me. We were going to smoke a blunt, just chill like we used to. She agreed,
Starting point is 03:37:35 but she seemed nervous. It wasn't like her. As we started walking down the road, I asked her, What's up? You don't seem like yourself. Georgia hesitated before answering. I don't really like walking out here at night anymore. I looked at her, surprised. Why not? You used to love it. She bit her lip and finally said, something happened. Now she had my full attention. What do you mean something? Georgia sighed and told me about the night she had gone for a walk with our outdoor cat. She said everything was normal at first. The cat was following her, meowing like it always did. But then, out of nowhere, she heard another meow, except this one didn't come from the cat that was with her. It came from somewhere in the woods, just ahead of her.
Starting point is 03:38:23 There's only one cat, she said, her voice shaky. So how could there be two meows? A chill ran down my spine. You sure it wasn't just an echo or something? Georgia shook her head. No, it wasn't an echo. It sounded like, like something was copying the cat. I freaked out and went straight back to the house. I felt my heart start to race. The thought of something mimicking sounds, especially animal noises, made me think of one thing, skin walkers. I had read about them before.
Starting point is 03:38:56 There are these creatures from Native American legend that can mimic animals or even people, but those were just stories, or at least, I thought they were. Georgia, I said slowly. Do you know what skinwalkers are? She frowned. Not really, why? I told her everything I knew,
Starting point is 03:39:16 how Skinwalkers were said to imitate sounds to lure people in. How they could even mimic voices to make you think it was someone you knew. By the time I finished, George's face had gone pale. You think that's what it was, she whispered. I don't know, I admitted, but it's starting to feel like more than just a coincidence. We stood there for a moment, staring into the woods that surrounded us.
Starting point is 03:39:41 I couldn't shake the feeling that we weren't alone out here, that something was watching us from the shadows. We walked back to the house quickly after that, our heads on a swivel, listening for any sound that didn't belong. That night, I couldn't stop thinking about the second meow. If something had been copying the cat, what else could it be copying? And what would it want with us? I couldn't stop thinking about what Georgia told me.
Starting point is 03:40:09 The meowing in the woods, Gages' story. about something following me and the thing Marty and I ran from in the forest years ago. It all seemed connected somehow. Like whatever it was hadn't left us alone. It was still out there watching, waiting. The more I thought about it, the more I felt like I needed to face it. I couldn't keep running forever. So one night, I made up my mind to camp out in the woods, alone. It was a dumb idea I know. But something inside me needed to know if what I feared was real, if there really was something lurking in the woods around Nibo. I packed a small bag, just a flashlight, a blanket, and some snacks, and headed out after dark. The woods felt different
Starting point is 03:40:53 at night, darker than usual. Every sound seemed louder, every shadow longer. I tried to shake off the fear creeping up my spine, but it clung to me, heavy and thick. I reached the clearing where Marty and I had hidden that night. The trees were still in perfect rows. like soldiers standing at attention. I set up a small fire, the flickering flames casting long, dancing shadows all around me. I sat there, staring into the woods, waiting. At first nothing happened.
Starting point is 03:41:25 Just the usual night sounds, crickets chirping, wind rustling through the leaves. But then, after a while, the crickets went silent. The hairs on the back of my neck stood up. I scanned the tree line with my flashlight, my heart pounding in my chest. The feeling was back, the feeling that I was being watched. I kept telling myself it was just my imagination, but deep down I knew it wasn't.
Starting point is 03:41:53 Something was out there, and it was getting closer. Suddenly, I heard it, a soft rustling like footsteps moving through the leaves. My heart jumped into my throat. I shined my light toward the sound, but I didn't see anything. The footsteps stopped. Silence. I held my breath, my hands shaking. Then, from the opposite direction, I heard it again.
Starting point is 03:42:16 Footsteps, this time faster, like something running. I whipped my light around, but there was still nothing. My pulse was racing now, panic clawing at my chest. I grabbed my blanket and stood up, ready to run, but I didn't know which way to go. That's when I saw it. Just for a second, a flash of movement between the trees, something tall, fast, and, watching me. I froze, my mind screaming at me to run, but my legs wouldn't move. The thing, it was there, just beyond the reach of my flashlight, lurking in the darkness. I took a step back, my heart
Starting point is 03:42:54 hammering in my ears, and then, in the silence, I heard it, a sound that made my blood run cold. It wasn't an animal, it wasn't the wind, it was a voice, a whisper, soft and clear, my own voice calling out from the woods. Levi. That was it. I turned and bolted, running as fast as I could, the voice echoing behind me.
Starting point is 03:43:17 I didn't stop until I reached the house, breathless and shaking. I don't know what that thing was, but I know one thing for sure. It's still out there, watching, waiting, and one day it might come back for me. The Utah desert stretched out endlessly in front of us,
Starting point is 03:43:43 all red rocks and dusty trails. I'd never seen anything like it. Mark was driving, his hands tight on the wheel as the car bumped along the dirt road. Emily sat next to him in the passenger seat, flipping through the map we probably didn't need. It was the middle of nowhere, exactly what we'd been looking for. Did you guys know that this area is full of ancient Native American legends? Mark said, glancing at us in the rearview mirror. They say skinwalkers used to roam these canyons. I rolled my eyes from the back seat.
Starting point is 03:44:17 Seriously, Mark? We're here to camp, not listen to ghost stories. Emily smiled but didn't say anything. I could tell she was already a little freaked out. Mark had a habit of spouting off weird facts whenever we went on these trips, and this one was no different. Still, something about the way he said skin walkers made me uneasy. I shoved the feeling down and focused on the scenery outside the window. The canyons were beautiful, with towering.
Starting point is 03:44:47 red walls and narrow crevices that looked like they had been carved out over centuries. It was peaceful, but lonely. After what felt like ours, we finally found a spot to set up camp. It was perfect. No other campers, no sign of civilization, just us and the wild. We pitched our tents in a small clearing by a rocky ledge. The sun was beginning to set, casting long shadows across the canyon. I watched as the colors shifted from orange to deep purple, the sky slowly darkening. We gathered around the fire, eating dinner and laughing about how we were going to survive without cell service for a whole week. Mark told us more about the area, but this time I didn't feel like joking around. The air had changed, it was cooler, and a slight breeze picked up, rustling the bushes
Starting point is 03:45:39 around us. There was something in that breeze, a faint sound like whispering, but I couldn't make out what it was. You guys hear that? I asked, my eyes scanning the darkness beyond the firelight. Emily shook her head, looking a little pale. Probably just the wind, she said, but her voice was unsure. Mark shrugged. It's the desert. It can mess with your senses. I nodded, trying to convince myself it was nothing, but I couldn't shake the feeling that we weren't alone. The shadows seemed to move, just at the edge of the light, like something, or someone, was watching. I kept telling myself it was my imagination. I mean, we were miles away from anyone else, right? Later, when we crawled into our tents, I tried to sleep, but my mind wouldn't let me. Every time I closed my eyes,
Starting point is 03:46:33 I'd hear something, a branch snapping, footsteps, or maybe just the wind. I didn't know any more. Then I heard it, my name, whispered softly from somewhere outside. Ryan, my heart jumped into my throat. It was Emily's voice, but when I peeked out of my tent, she was still zipped up in hers, fast asleep. I blinked into the darkness, my breath caught in my chest. I couldn't see anything, but I knew what I heard. It was impossible, but it was real.
Starting point is 03:47:05 I laid back down, pulling the sleeping bag tighter. around me, my pulse pounding in my ears. Something wasn't right. As the fire died down outside, I couldn't shake the feeling that this was just the beginning of something much worse. By morning, the strange feeling from the night before hadn't gone away. The air was heavy, like something was lurking just beyond the camp. I shook off the thought and helped Mark and Emily pack up our gear for the day's hike. We planned to explore one of the deeper canyons nearby, a place we were sure no one else would be. As we started hiking, the sun was already beating down on us. The heat bounced off the canyon walls, making everything feel hotter. The path was narrow,
Starting point is 03:47:50 with cliffs towering on either side. It was beautiful, but something about it made me feel small, like we were being swallowed up by the landscape. Every sound echoed, and it made me jumpy. Mark was up ahead rattling off more facts about the area. These canyons have been here for millions of years. People say they hold secrets no one's ever uncovered. He laughed, but his voice didn't have the usual ease it did. I think he was feeling it too, the sense that something was off. As we moved deeper into the canyon, I started noticing things. The rustling in the bushes that I'd heard last night came back, but this time, it wasn't the wind. I could hear it, something moving, following us. Every now and then I'd look at.
Starting point is 03:48:37 back, but there was nothing there. My stomach tightened with dread. I didn't want to freak out, but I couldn't help it. I could feel it in my bones. We weren't alone. You guys hear that? I finally asked stopping in my tracks. Emily and Mark turned. Emily's eyes were wide, and I knew she heard it too. Probably an animal, Mark said, but even he didn't sound convinced. Coyotes, maybe. No way, Emily muttered. Coyotes don't sound like that. We kept walking, but now the mood had changed. None of us said it, but we were all listening for the sound. It came again, closer this time, footsteps. I swear I saw something out of the corner of my eye, something dark and fast, but when I turned, it was gone. We reached a narrow part of the canyon where the walls closed in, and the trail was barely wide enough to walk single file. That's when the noises got louder. A rustling behind a us. Then the sound of rocks tumbling down a slope. We spun around, flashlights out, searching the shadows. Nothing. Ryan stopped looking so paranoid, Mark said, but his voice shook. He was trying to keep it
Starting point is 03:49:51 together, but I could tell he was scared. We pushed on, the tension building. The canyon seemed to go on forever, and every step we took felt heavier. My heart was racing, and I couldn't shake the feeling that something was right behind us, watching. Suddenly we heard it, loud and clear this time, a voice. Mark, it was Emily's voice, but she was right next to me. She froze, her face pale as a ghost. What was that? She whispered. I didn't answer. I couldn't. We all stood there, frozen, staring into the dark canyon ahead. Let's go back, I said, my voice shaking. But before we we could turn around, the voice came again. This time, it was mine. Ryan, chills ran down my spine. Something was playing with us. Something was out there, and it was getting closer. By the time we
Starting point is 03:50:48 got back to camp, the sun was already setting. None of us spoke the whole way back. The air felt thicker, heavier, and even the wind seemed like it was whispering something we couldn't understand. I couldn't shake the feeling that we were being hunted. Emily's face was pale, and she kept glancing over her shoulder. Mark, usually the confident leader, had gone quiet too. His jokes had dried up, and now he just looked tired, like the weight of everything was pressing down on him. I think we should leave tomorrow, Emily said quietly as we sat around the fire that night.
Starting point is 03:51:24 This doesn't feel right. Mark shook his head. we can't just leave. We're miles from the main road, and we'd never make it back before dark. Then let's leave at first light, I said, my voice sounding more desperate than I meant it to. Something's out there, Mark. You can't pretend you don't feel it too. Mark poked at the fire, not looking at either of us. It's probably just wildlife, coyotes or something. But I could hear the doubt in his voice. He didn't believe what he was saying, and neither did I. The fire crackled, but it didn't make me feel safe.
Starting point is 03:52:02 It only made the shadows bigger, deeper, like something could be hiding just outside the light, watching us. My skin crawled with the thought. I kept glancing toward the edges of the camp, where the trees and rocks blurred into blackness. Every time the fire popped, I jumped, half expecting to see something standing there. Maybe we're just spooking ourselves, Mark said,
Starting point is 03:52:26 trying to sound casual. People hear things when they're scared. Emily shook her head, staring into the flames. That wasn't my voice calling your name, Mark. It wasn't me. No one had a response for that. The silence that followed was suffocating. I didn't want to admit it, but she was right. What we had heard out there wasn't something we could explain. It was something else, something old, something evil. The hours dragged by, and the hours dragged by, and the fire started to die down. We didn't talk much after that, just sat there, listening to the sounds of the night. I kept hearing rustling in the bushes, but every time I shined my flashlight, there was nothing there. My heart pounded in my chest, and I felt like a rabbit trapped in a cage,
Starting point is 03:53:15 waiting for the predator to strike. Then Mark disappeared. It happened so fast I barely even registered it. One moment, he was sitting by the fire, and the next, he was gone. His chair was empty, his flashlight lying in the dirt. Emily gasped, jumping to her feet. Mark, I called out my voice breaking. Mark, where are you? No answer. Just the wind and the whispering sounds that seem to circle around us. Ryan, we need to find him, Emily said, her voice shaking. We grabbed our flashlights and searched the campsite, but there was no sign of him. Panic surged in my chest. Where could he have gone? There was nowhere to go. Just endless darkness and the feeling of being watched. Then, after what felt like hours, Mark came stumbling back into the light. But something was
Starting point is 03:54:08 wrong. His eyes looked glassy, and his movements were slow, stiff, like he wasn't sure how to move his own body. Mark, what happened? Emily asked. rushing over to him. He didn't answer right away. He just stared at her with this strange, distant look on his face. I got lost, he finally muttered, but his voice didn't sound right. It was slower, like it was someone else trying to imitate him. I took a step back, my stomach twisting with fear. Something wasn't right. That wasn't the mark we knew. We didn't sleep that night, not after what happened to Mark. Emily and I sat close to the dying fire. Our flashlights gripped tightly in our hands. Mark was back, but something was wrong. He hadn't said much
Starting point is 03:54:58 after stumbling into camp, just sat there, staring into the darkness. His eyes looked distant, like he wasn't really with us anymore. Every time he spoke, his voice sounded just a little off. Emily leaned in close to me. Ryan, I don't think. think that's Mark. Her words sent a chill down my spine, but I couldn't disagree. I had been thinking the same thing ever since he returned. The way he moved, the way he talked, it didn't feel right. But what could we do? If that wasn't Mark, where was he? And what was sitting next to us? We need to get out of here, I whispered back. At first light we run. We don't stop. Emily nodded, her face pale with fear.
Starting point is 03:55:44 But as the minutes ticked by, the sky still dark and endless, I realized we couldn't wait until morning. The feeling of being watched was growing stronger, the sounds of movement in the bushes creeping closer. Whatever was out there, whatever had taken Mark, was closing in. Suddenly Mark stood up. His movements were slow, stiff, like he was learning how to use his body all over again.
Starting point is 03:56:08 I need to go for a walk. said in that strange, dragging voice. Emily's hand tightened around my arm. Don't let him go. But before I could say anything, Mark turned and walked into the darkness. My heart pounded in my chest. I knew we couldn't let him out of our sight, but at the same time, I was terrified of following him. What if we weren't just dealing with a skin walker? What if it had already taken Mark, and we were next? We have to go, I whispered urgently to Emily. Now! She nodded, her eyes wide with fear.
Starting point is 03:56:45 We grabbed our backpacks and flashlights, not even bothering to pack everything. As quietly as we could, we started to move away from the camp, our footsteps soft on the dirt. The fire had died completely, and the night was so dark that every sound seemed amplified, the crunch of gravel under our feet, the wind whistling through the canyon, and that awful low whispering that seemed to follow us. We had barely made it a few steps when we heard it. voice calling from the shadows. Emily. Ryan. Where are you going? I froze. It wasn't him. It couldn't be him. My heart raced as I glanced at Emily. Don't look back, I whispered. Just run. We took off
Starting point is 03:57:27 down the canyon, our flashlights bouncing wildly in the dark. I could hear something chasing us. Its footsteps unnaturally fast. Its breath ragged and close. My lungs burned as I ran, but I didn't stop. I couldn't stop. The narrow walls of the canyon closed in around us, and suddenly, we were trapped. Dead end. I spun around, my flashlight shaking as I pointed it into the dark. I could hear it, whatever it was, getting closer. We have to hide, Emily gasped, her voice barely above a whisper. There was a small crevice in the canyon wall, just big enough for us to squeeze into. We shoved ourselves into the crack, holding our breath as we heard the thing, the skinwalker, approach. Its footsteps slowed like it knew we were nearby but couldn't see us.
Starting point is 03:58:17 For what felt like hours we stayed hidden, not daring to move or even breathe. Finally the footsteps faded and the whispers stopped. We need to move, I whispered, now. We crawled out of the crevice and kept moving, slower this time, making our way through the canyon. As dawn's light started to creep over the horizon, we saw it, the road. We had made it. But as we stumbled toward the edge of civilization, something didn't feel right.
Starting point is 03:58:47 I glanced at Emily, her face covered in dirt and sweat. And then, I looked at Mark, who was following close behind us, his expression blank. The road wasn't the end. Something had followed us out of the canyon. It all started the day Maya told me about the path of the forsaken. I'd never even heard of it before, but I guess that's because I wasn't from around here. I'd only been living with my Aunt Laura for a few months, ever since my dad disappeared. Mom couldn't handle everything after the accident, so she shipped me off to this tiny, creepy town
Starting point is 03:59:29 in the middle of the Appalachian Mountains. My aunt was nice enough, but the house was old and smelled like dust and mothballs, and I felt alone all the time. The town felt even worse, quiet, with too many dark corners and fall. that never seemed to go away. Maya, Caleb, and Jordan were the only kids who talked to me at school. They weren't bad, but they had all known each other forever. I always felt like an outsider, like I was trying to break into some secret club.
Starting point is 03:59:58 Still, they let me hang out with them most days after school. That's when Maya first brought up the legend. You haven't heard about the path? Maya asked one afternoon, as we sat on the rusted swings at the old playground. It was chilly, and the wind kept blowing the dead leaves around in little circles. I shrugged. Nope. What is it?
Starting point is 04:00:21 Caleb leaned in, his eyes wide. It's an old trail that only shows up during a blood moon, he whispered, like it was some big secret. If you walk it, you can make a wish. Any wish, but... He paused dramatically. If you step off the path, the forsaken will get you. I raised an eyebrow. The forsaken?
Starting point is 04:00:42 Jordan, who usually didn't talk much, nodded. Spirits of people who walked the path and didn't follow the rules. They're stuck there forever, and if you make a mistake, they twist your wish into something terrible. My stomach did a little flip. It sounded like one of those ghost stories meant to freak people out, but I could tell they believed it. Caleb's older brother had supposedly done it, and he swore it was real. I didn't want to seem like a scared little kid, so I tried to act cool. So when does this blood moon happen? I asked, keeping my voice steady.
Starting point is 04:01:17 Tonight, Maya said, her eyes gleaming with excitement. We're going to try it. For a second, I thought about saying no. Something about the way they talked about the path gave me the creeps, but I didn't want to be the only one who chickened out. I'd already been feeling out of place since I moved here, and if I backed out now, they'd probably never let me forget it. I'm in, I said, forcing a small... mile. My heart thudded a little too hard in my chest, but I told myself it was just a story. Nothing was going to happen. Meet us by the old signpost in the woods, Caleb said, at midnight. As I walked home that evening, the clouds were thick, but I could still see the edges of the
Starting point is 04:01:59 blood moon starting to rise in the sky. The air felt colder than usual, and the trees lining the road seemed to loom closer, their branches like skeletal hands reaching for me. That night, I I lay in bed staring at the ceiling, my stomach churning with a mix of nerves and excitement. The house creaked around me, and every time I closed my eyes, I imagined shadows creeping through the hall. Finally, I couldn't take it anymore. I grabbed my jacket and my flashlight. It was time.
Starting point is 04:02:31 Midnight felt a lot scarier than I thought it would. I crept out of my aunt's house as quietly as I could, closing the door behind me without a sound. The night air was freezing. colder than it should have been for early fall, and the thick fog that seemed to constantly surround this town was heavier tonight, almost suffocating. The full-blood moon hung low in the sky, glowing a deep red through the mist,
Starting point is 04:02:55 casting everything in an eerie light. It didn't feel real. It felt like something out of a nightmare. I made my way down the road toward the old signpost in the woods where we were supposed to meet. My flashlight flickered as I walked. and for a second I thought about turning back. But I wasn't about to back out now.
Starting point is 04:03:16 I was already this far, and I wasn't going to be the only one too scared to go through with it. When I got there, Maya, Caleb, and Jordan were already waiting for me. Their flashlights cast long, thin beams of light that cut through the fog like knives. Caleb was grinning like he'd just won a prize. Ready for the path of the forsaken? he asked. His voice filled with excitement. I swallowed hard and nodded.
Starting point is 04:03:41 not trusting myself to speak. All right, Maya said, stepping up to the old, weathered signpost. It looked ancient, with faded lettering and a wooden arrow pointing into the dark forest. This is where it starts. Jordan, quiet as ever, pulled out his phone and checked the time. It's midnight, he said. We have to do it now. Caleb explained the ritual again, even though we already knew it.
Starting point is 04:04:08 Turn off your flashlights, close your eyes, and think of a very night. your wish. If we're worthy, the path will appear. I hesitated, my thumb hovering over the button on my flashlight. My mind raced. Did I really want to do this? But before I could change my mind, the others turned off their lights, plunging us into complete darkness. The fog was so thick, I could barely make out their shapes in the moonlight. Close your eyes, Caleb whispered. I closed them, even though it made my heart pound harder in my chest. I didn't want to be here. I didn't want to do this.
Starting point is 04:04:45 But what choice did I have? I couldn't back out now. In the darkness behind my eyelids I thought about my dad, how he disappeared on that boat months ago, how no one ever found his body. The ache in my chest grew stronger as I made my wish. I wanted him back. I wanted to see him again, alive and well,
Starting point is 04:05:05 like nothing had ever happened. The silence around me was deafening. No one said a word. The air felt heavy, like it was pressing down on me. And then, without warning, the feeling changed. The ground beneath my feet seemed to shift. I opened my eyes, my heart racing. The others were gone.
Starting point is 04:05:25 Instead of the old signpost and the familiar woods, there was a path, a narrow, winding trail stretching out in front of me, illuminated by the blood moon's crimson light. The trees were closer now, their branches gnarled and twisted, reaching toward the path like long, bony fingers. I swallowed hard and clicked my flashlight, but it didn't work. I hid it against my hand a few times, but it stayed dead. I looked around, hoping to see Maya, Caleb, or Jordan, but there was no sign of them.
Starting point is 04:05:59 It was just me, alone. I took a shaky breath, the cold air burning my throat. There was only one way to go, so I started walking. I kept walking. the eerie red light of the blood moon casting strange shadows along the path. Every step I took made the air feel heavier, colder. The trees on either side of the trail seemed to press in closer, their twisted branches reaching toward me like they wanted to pull me off the path.
Starting point is 04:06:26 The silence was thick, too thick. I could hear my own breathing, loud and shaky, echoing in the cold night air. Then came the footsteps. At first, I thought it was just my imagination. I stopped to listen, but when I did, the footsteps stopped too. I held my breath, heart pounding in my chest, and waited, silence again. Maybe it was nothing, I told myself, just the wind or something. But when I started walking again, there it was, soft, but steady, like someone was walking
Starting point is 04:07:02 just behind me. I spun around, shining my flashlight into the dark trees, but there was no one there, only more twisted branches and shadows. I gripped the flashlight tighter, my hands starting to sweat despite the cold. Hello? I called out my voice shaky. No response, just the stillness of the forest around me. I kept walking, but this time faster. The path seemed to stretch on forever, winding through the woods like it was leading me
Starting point is 04:07:30 somewhere I didn't want to go. The footsteps were back, closer this time. They followed me no matter how quickly I moved. I could feel something watching me, lurking just beyond the edge of the trees. My throat felt tight, and panic started to claw its way up my spine. After what felt like hours of walking, I saw something up ahead. A flicker of light. I hurried toward it, hoping it was Caleb, Maya, or Jordan.
Starting point is 04:07:57 But when I got closer, I realized it wasn't them. It was a small cabin, barely standing, with a weak fire burning in a pit outside. The cabin looked like it had been abandoned for years, the wood rotting and covered in moss. But the fire was new, crackling in the stillness of the night. I hesitated at the edge of the clearing, every instinct telling me to turn around and run. But where would I go? The path behind me seemed darker than ever, and the footsteps, they'd stopped, but I knew whatever had been following me was still out there.
Starting point is 04:08:33 Suddenly a voice cut through the silence. You came to walk the path, didn't you? I spun toward the fire and saw him, a boy about my age standing next to the fire pit. He was pale, way too pale, and his clothes were old, tattered. His eyes were black, like there was nothing inside him. He smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes.
Starting point is 04:08:54 You want your wish, right? he asked, his voice low and strange. I made my wish too, but I stepped off the path. I took a step back, my pulse racing. What do you mean? He pointed to the trees behind me. They're waiting for you to make the same mistake. Step off the path and the forsaken will get you, just like they got me.
Starting point is 04:09:16 Before I could respond, the ground beneath him seemed to open up like a mouth, swallowing him whole. One second he was there, and the next, he was gone. The fire went out, plunging the clearing into total darkness. My heart pounded in my chest and I stumbled back, my breath coming in sharp panicked bursts. I turned, staring at the path ahead, my legs trembling. I didn't want to keep going, but I had no choice. So I ran, my legs burning with every step. The darkness around me felt alive, like the trees themselves were shifting, closing in on me.
Starting point is 04:09:52 The wind picked up, howling through the twisted branches, and I could swear I heard whispers in the gusts, low, menacing voices calling my name. But I didn't stop. I couldn't. The path seemed to stretch. stretch on forever, and every second I stayed on it, the pressure in the air grew thicker, heavier. I could hear the footsteps again, no longer soft but pounding now, like something massive was
Starting point is 04:10:16 chasing me. It wasn't just one set anymore. It was many. Whatever the forsaken were, they were close, and I knew if I stopped they would catch me. Suddenly, the path took a sharp turn, leading me down a steep hill. My feet stumbled over the rocks and roots, and I almost fell. but I caught myself just in time. At the bottom of the hill, the trees thinned out, revealing a wide ravine, and in the center
Starting point is 04:10:43 of it, a black swirling river. The water looked wrong. It wasn't like any river I'd ever seen. It moved too fast, churning like a whirlpool, and the sound it made wasn't natural. It sounded like something deep and ancient, like a monster roaring beneath the surface. My stomach dropped. The path led straight to the river's edge. but there was no bridge, no way across. I was trapped. I looked back up the hill. The footsteps were
Starting point is 04:11:13 getting louder, closer. The whispers in the wind turned into a growl, deep and hungry. My breath came out in ragged gasps as I scanned the area, searching for any way out, but the only way forward was the river. As I stood there, frozen in fear, the water began to ripple. Dark shapes started to rise from the riverbed. skeletal hands black and twisted clawing their way out of the water they stretched toward me their fingers long and bony reaching for my ankles panic shot through me and without thinking i backed away my foot slipped off the path hitting the muddy ground and suddenly the voices in the wind screamed the forsaken were coming i could feel it no i shouted scrambling back onto the path my heart was racing so fast i thought
Starting point is 04:12:05 it would burst. I had to do something or I was going to die. Desperately I pulled out my flashlight, even though it had been dead for hours. My hands were shaking so badly I almost dropped it, but I flicked the switch anyway, hoping for a miracle. The flashlight flickered just once, and a thin beam of light shot out. It wasn't much, but it was enough. The beam hit the river, and to my shock, the water parted. A narrow, glowing path appeared across the river, leading to the other side. I didn't think. I just ran. The skeletal hands tried to grab at my legs, but I dodged them, leaping onto the glowing path. My feet hit the solid ground, and I sprinted across, not daring to look back. The air around me was filled with screams, and I could feel the forsaken
Starting point is 04:12:51 reaching for me, their icy breath on my neck. But I didn't stop. The moment I reached the other side of the river, the path behind me vanished, swallowed by the darkness. I collapsed onto the ground, gasping for breath, my entire body trembling. For a second, everything was still. Then, slowly, the fog around me began to lift. The whispers faded, and the air lightened, like the weight that had been pressing down on me was finally gone. I stood up shakily, clutching my cracked flashlight. In front of me was the edge of the forest. I could see the town just beyond it, and there, waiting at the old signpost where Maya, Caleb, and Jordan. They were laughing, talking like nothing had happened, like they hadn't disappeared.
Starting point is 04:13:39 I stumbled toward them, my heart still racing. Guys? Caleb turned grinning. Nothing happened, huh? He said. Guess the legend's just a story. I didn't say anything. I couldn't, but I knew the truth. I had barely escaped. We had been looking forward to this trip for months. Camping always made me feel alive, like we could escape from the world for a while. We could escape from the world for a while, just me, Bill, and his parents. But the moment we pulled up to the campground, something felt wrong. I don't know why, but when we stepped out of the car and my boots sank into the mud, this strange feeling hit me. The lake, which was supposed to be our little escape, had completely flooded. The beach we were excited about, gone. Just a mushy, waterlogged mess.
Starting point is 04:14:38 and there were only three campsites still usable. Ours, one next to it, and another a bit farther off, maybe 100 feet away. The rest, underwater or too soaked to even think about. Bill was his usual optimistic self, though. He shrugged like it was no big deal. We'll make it work, Sarah, he said, smiling at me like I was being dramatic. I wanted to believe him, but I couldn't shake this weird feeling that something wasn't right. It was way too quiet, like unnaturally quiet.
Starting point is 04:15:11 No birds, no breeze, just stillness. I mean, we were in the middle of the woods by a huge lake. There should have been sounds, right? Anyway, we started setting up camp, trying to make the best of it. Bill's parents were off doing their own thing, totally at ease. But I couldn't stop looking around, scanning the tree line like something was going to jump out at us. Paranoid? Maybe. but I couldn't help it. Something was nagging at me. Then, around 7 p.m., this rusty old sedan pulled up into
Starting point is 04:15:44 the campsite right next to ours. I remember Bill, and I just kind of exchanged a glance. It wasn't exactly the kind of car you'd expect for a camping trip, you know? But what really threw me was the couple who got out, middle-aged, but like, really rough around the edges. Their clothes were wrinkled, like they'd been living in them for days. The guy was tall, stiff, didn't make eye contact with anyone. The woman? Same. Like they were just going through the motions. I mean, they didn't even look at each other. Who does that? I tried not to stare, but it was hard not to. They didn't bring anything out of the car. No tent, no cooler, no gear. They just sat there. It felt wrong. It looked wrong. My gut was screaming at me that something was seriously off. I nudged Bill, trying to keep my voice low.
Starting point is 04:16:38 Isn't that kind of weird? They don't have any gear. Bill just shrugged, rolling his eyes a little like I was being paranoid again. Maybe they're sleeping in their car, he said, like that explained everything, but even he couldn't hide the little crease of worry on his forehead. He wasn't completely convinced either, no matter what he said. As the sun started to set, that the sun started to set, That creepy feeling only got worse. The clouds were rolling in, thick and heavy. You could smell the rain coming. Sure enough, a storm hit not long after.
Starting point is 04:17:13 It was intense, thunder shaking the ground, rain pounding the tent. We had to hold the sides down just to keep the thing from collapsing on us. I kept glancing out, wondering what the couple next to us was doing. The rain was so loud I couldn't hear anything but the storm. But I knew one thing for sure. They were still sitting in their car. No lights on. No windows cracked.
Starting point is 04:17:37 Just sitting there. The storm was wild, but the fact that they weren't moving at all, that was worse. It was like they didn't care that the world around them was tearing itself apart. I couldn't shake the feeling that they were watching us, even though I couldn't see their faces. I could just feel it. You know that sensation, like when someone's staring at your face. you, and you just know. Hours passed before the storm finally calmed down.
Starting point is 04:18:07 Bill's parents had already gone to bed in their trailer, and I wanted to do the same, but I couldn't. I was too wired, too on edge. I kept thinking about that couple. Were they still in their car? Why hadn't they moved? Why hadn't they said anything? Bill fell asleep pretty quickly,
Starting point is 04:18:26 snoring softly beside me, but I lay there wide awake, every little sound making me jump. My mind was racing, spinning out of control. And then, just when I thought maybe I was finally starting to calm down, I heard footsteps. Soft, deliberate, close. I held my breath, my heart pounding so hard I thought it would wake Bill.
Starting point is 04:18:49 Whoever it was, they were right outside the tent. My mind went into overdrive. I didn't want to look. I really didn't want to look, but I had to. Slowly, trying not to make a sound, I unzipped the corner of the tent just a tiny bit and peeked out, and there they were, two figures standing just a few feet away. I couldn't see their faces, but they had these red headlamps on, casting this weird, eerie glow.
Starting point is 04:19:16 They were just standing there, watching us. I ducked back inside the tent, my heart in my throat. I didn't care if Bill thought I was overreacting anymore. Something was seriously wrong. Bill, I whispered, shaking him awake. Bill, wake up. We need to get out of here. I couldn't sleep.
Starting point is 04:19:37 I kept replaying what I saw outside the tent. Those two figures just standing there, wearing those creepy red headlamps, like they were watching us or waiting for something. The way the guy's head tilted, like he was enjoying the fact that I was scared. What the hell were they doing? I tried waking Bill again after that.
Starting point is 04:19:57 shaking him harder this time. He groaned, half asleep, clearly not getting it. Sarah, it's probably nothing, he mumbled, rubbing his eyes. Maybe they were just checking on something, gathering firewood, or I don't know. Gathering firewood? At midnight? During a storm? No way.
Starting point is 04:20:19 But Bill just turned over and went right back to sleep, leaving me alone with my racing thoughts. Typical. I stayed perfectly still, just listening, straining my ears for anything, footsteps, voices, anything that would tell me those weirdos were still out there. The tent felt suffocating, like the walls were closing in. I wanted to unzip the door, peek out again, but I couldn't. My heart was pounding too hard.
Starting point is 04:20:47 I kept imagining them standing right there, inches away, staring. What if they were waiting for us to fall asleep? Hours passed, or maybe it was minutes. Honestly, I couldn't tell. It was like time slowed down, the darkness pressing in on me. Every tiny sound made me jump, leaves rustling, twigs snapping, the tent fabric flapping. I started convincing myself that they were trying to get in, maybe cutting into the tent with a knife. I knew it sounded ridiculous, but I couldn't shake it.
Starting point is 04:21:22 The soft scratching noise I heard earlier came back to me. me. I told myself it was just the wind, but deep down I wasn't so sure. And then, all of a sudden, the footsteps stopped. Dead silence. My breath caught in my throat. Where did they go? Were they still outside hiding just out of sight? Or did they leave? I lay there tense, my body buzzing with this weird combination of fear and adrenaline. Eventually, exhaustion caught up to me, and I must have dozed off for a bit because when I opened my eyes, the sky was starting to lighten. Morning. I never thought I'd be so grateful for the sun. I crawled out of the tent, feeling groggy and still on edge. Everything was wet from the rain, the air thick and humid.
Starting point is 04:22:12 I looked over at the other campsite, half expecting the creepy couple to be gone, but no. Their car was still there, parked exactly where it had been the night before. But now, there was a new addition, a tarp, tied up between two trees, making some sort of flimsy shelter. It looked pathetic, like they didn't care at all about camping, and to make it even weirder, they were still wearing the same clothes, dark pants, heavy boots, completely wrong for the weather. I glanced back at Bill, who was still snoring away, oblivious to everything. I wanted to shake him awake and make him look, really look, but I held back. What was the point? He'd just tell me I was overreacting again, but I wasn't. I knew I wasn't.
Starting point is 04:22:59 I tried to focus on packing up some of our stuff, pretending everything was fine, but I couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. Every time I moved, I felt it, and when I looked up, there she was, the woman sitting on a log, just staring at me, not saying a word, just watching. It was like she didn't blink. Her eyes tracked me, cold and empty, and I swear I felt. to chill run down my neck even though it was warm outside. The man wasn't far behind her, standing by the car, his arms crossed. Watching, always watching. Like they were waiting for something.
Starting point is 04:23:37 But what? I tried to distract myself by helping Bill's parents with breakfast, but I kept glancing over, and every time I did, they were still there. Still watching. I felt like an animal being stalked by predators. It didn't make sense. None of it did. Why weren't they doing normal camping things? Why were they just there? Finally, I couldn't take it anymore. Bill, we need to leave, I said, trying to keep my voice steady.
Starting point is 04:24:08 Something's not right. He gave me this look, half annoyed, half concerned, but I could tell he was starting to feel it too. The atmosphere was wrong. Even his parents were quieter than usual, like they sensed it but didn't want to say anything. After a bit of back and forth, we finally agreed to pack up and leave early. Honestly, I felt relieved.
Starting point is 04:24:31 I thought maybe, once we decided to go, I'd feel better. But the second we started breaking down our tent, something happened that made my stomach drop. The couple, they started packing up too. Fast, frantic, like they couldn't get out of there quick enough. They tossed things into their car without even folding the tarp, throwing it in like it didn't matter. And the way they looked at us, there was something panicked in their eyes, something desperate.
Starting point is 04:24:59 Like they knew we were leaving and couldn't risk staying behind without us. That's when I knew. This wasn't just me being paranoid. They had been waiting for us to leave, or maybe, they were planning to follow us. We threw our stuff into the car as fast as we could. I didn't care if things were packed neatly anymore. I just wanted out of there. As we pulled away, I looked in the rearview mirror and saw them, still in their car, engine running, waiting. We drove in silence for a while. The car rattled along the dirt road, and all I could think about was how quickly that couple had packed up.
Starting point is 04:25:39 It didn't make sense. It felt like they were copying us, like they were only there because we were there. The whole thing had me on edge, and the farther we got from the campground, the more it gnawed at me. I kept glancing in the side mirror, expecting to see that rusty old sedan tailing us. Every time a car passed or I saw headlights in the distance, my stomach twisted into knots. What if they were following us? What if they'd been waiting for us to leave so they could... What? I didn't even know, but I knew it wasn't good. Bill must have noticed the way I was gripping the seat because he reached over squeezing my hand.
Starting point is 04:26:17 Hey, it's over, okay? We're out of there. They're not following us. I wanted to believe him. I really did. But something about it just felt unfinished, like we'd barely escaped whatever creepy plan those people had. My brain kept replaying the night over and over again. The red headlamps. The way they just stood there.
Starting point is 04:26:38 The guy's head tilted in that weird way. And then, this morning, with the woman staring at me like I was some sort of prey, I couldn't shake the feeling that it wasn't over. When we finally pulled into Bill's parents' driveway, I let out a breath I didn't even realize I'd been holding. Safe. We were safe now, right? But even as we unpacked the car, I couldn't stop checking over my shoulder. What if they showed up here?
Starting point is 04:27:07 What if they found out where we lived? Inside the house, I tried to distract myself with the normalcy of it all. Bill's mom made sandwiches, and we sat around the kitchen table like it was just another camping trip. Like the past 24 hours hadn't been the most unsettling thing ever. But then, Bill's dad, out of nowhere, said something that made my skin crawl. So, I didn't want to freak you out back at the campground, but that guy, the one from the other sight, he paused, glancing at Bill's mom, then back at me. I caught him messing with the dogs last night.
Starting point is 04:27:44 My heart skipped a beat. Messing with the dogs? What do you mean? Bill's dad scratched his chin, looking more serious than I'd ever seen him. He was just standing there, right outside the trailer, staring at them. The dogs were going nuts, barking, growling, and he didn't flinch, just stood there, staring at them like he was testing them or something. I felt sick.
Starting point is 04:28:10 The guy had been that close just outside their trailer and we hadn't even known. Why hadn't Bill's dad said something earlier? He didn't do anything else, I asked, my voice shaky. No, Bill's dad said. But it was weird. He didn't react at all like he wasn't afraid of them. Usually people back off when they see our dogs like that. But him, he just stared.
Starting point is 04:28:34 Gave me the creeps. Yeah, no kidding. I felt a cold sweat forming at the back of my neck. Everything about this just kept getting worse. I thought back to last night, how I'd heard those footsteps outside our tent. What if it had been him? What if he'd been creeping around while we slept? Bill's mom chimed in, trying to lighten the mood. Well, it's over now. We're home. No more weird campers.
Starting point is 04:29:00 But I wasn't so sure. My mind kept spinning. I remembered something else, something I hadn't even thought about until now. When they'd arrived at the campground, they didn't face the lake like everyone else did. Their entire setup, if you could even call it that, had been pointed directly at our campers. They weren't there to enjoy the view. They were watching us, the whole time. I could feel my heart racing again, my thoughts getting all jumbled up. It made sense now, didn't it? The way they didn't have any real camping gear, how they stayed so close to us, never saying a word, just observing. It wasn't random. They weren't just awkward campers who didn't know what they were doing. They were there for us.
Starting point is 04:29:45 I stood up, unable to sit still anymore, pacing the kitchen like I could walk off the anxiety buzzing inside me. Bill watched me, confused, but I didn't care. I had to get it all out. They weren't there to camp, I said, the words spilling out before I could stop them. They were stalking us, Bill. Everything they did was weird, and now this. Messing with the dogs, packing up when we did, it's all connected.
Starting point is 04:30:15 They were watching us the whole time. Bill blinked, sitting up straighter now. Sarah, come on. That's a little... No, it's not. I cut him off, my voice rising. Think about it. They didn't even look at the lake, Bill.
Starting point is 04:30:32 Everything they did was pointed at us. What if they were planning something? Something bad. Bill's dad cleared his throat, looking uncomfortable. We did leave pretty fast. They packed up the second. we did. Bill was quiet for a moment. I could tell he didn't want to believe it, but even he couldn't brush it off anymore. Okay, he finally said. It was weird. I'll admit that. We all sat in silence for a
Starting point is 04:30:59 minute, the air heavy with everything we weren't saying. What if we hadn't left early? What if we'd stayed another night? Would they have waited until we were asleep to do something? I shuddered, not wanting to finish that thought. But it stuck with me, clawing at the back of my mind, making it impossible to feel safe. Even now, in the comfort of Bill's parents' home, I couldn't shake the feeling that it wasn't over. Not yet.
Starting point is 04:31:28 And worst of all, I knew deep down, they were still out there, somewhere, watching, waiting. It all started during the pandemic, when everything just felt off. You know what I mean, right? bored out of my mind, barely seeing my friends, stuck at home like the rest of the world. That was until we found mountain biking. It saved us honestly. Living in Washington State, there were woods everywhere, perfect for biking. We couldn't drive to any legit parks, too young for that,
Starting point is 04:32:09 but we didn't care. We made our own trails, hidden away from everything, felt like our secret world. There was this one trail we built, deep in the woods, way off the main path. You wouldn't know it was there unless you were looking for it. And trust me, no one else was. It took forever to make, but that was part of the fun. Mud, fallen trees, ferns taller than my waist. It was like an obstacle course just to get to it. But it was ours.
Starting point is 04:32:39 Our escape. Except the woods weren't always, I don't know, welcoming. Sometimes they felt wrong, like something was watching us. I never said anything to the guys, though. Didn't want to sound paranoid. We were just kids, right? What could happen? One afternoon it was raining.
Starting point is 04:33:00 Of course it was. It's Washington. I decided to check on the trail by myself. Well, not totally alone. My little sister tagged along. I didn't want to, but my mom made me take her. My brother was supposed to come too, but he bailed last minute. No big deal.
Starting point is 04:33:18 I figured I'd be in and out. check for storm damage, maybe clear some branches. It wasn't supposed to be a long trip. The woods were creepy that day. The rain made everything quieter, you know, like no birds, no wind, just... Still. My sister didn't notice. She was busy messing around, probably kicking mud or something.
Starting point is 04:33:39 But me? I couldn't shake the feeling that something was... Off. We got to the trail after about ten minutes, and everything seemed normal. muddy, sure, but nothing out of the ordinary. I called my mom to check in, and she said my brother had come looking for us but couldn't find the trail. I wasn't surprised.
Starting point is 04:34:00 It's not easy to find, even if you know where to look. I told my sister to head back to the entrance and wait for him. Seemed like a simple enough plan. I'd stay behind, clear a few fallen branches, maybe ride the trail once or twice, and then we'd all head home together. except that's when things got weird. I was working on a branch,
Starting point is 04:34:21 struggling with it because everything was soaked and slippery, when I realized it had been a while. My sister hadn't called to say she found our brother. I wasn't super worried at first, but I decided to check on her. I made my way back to the old forest road, the one that leads to the hidden trail, expecting to see her waiting there with my brother.
Starting point is 04:34:42 But instead, I saw someone else. At first I thought it was her, but something didn't feel right. The person was wearing a hoodie, but not the one she'd been wearing. This one was white, or maybe gray, kind of hard to tell in the rain. I watched for a second, confused. Why would she change clothes? The figure was walking slowly, like really slowly, not looking around or anything, just moving.
Starting point is 04:35:11 That's when it hit me. This wasn't my sister. My stomach dropped. I stopped dead in my tracks, staring at this person, who still hadn't noticed me. Something about the way they were moving freaked me out. Like they weren't in a hurry, but also weren't lost. They were just there, and they didn't belong. I ducked behind a tree, trying to figure out what the hell was going on.
Starting point is 04:35:37 My heart was pounding so hard I could barely think straight. I pulled out my phone and called my sister. The second the phone started ringing, I heard it, a voice low and raspy. right behind me. What are you doing? I nearly dropped my phone. I whipped around ready to bolt, but it was just my sister, crouched behind some bushes, looking at me like I'd lost my mind. There's no one here, she whispered, like I was making it all up. But I know what I saw. I swear I saw someone. I peeked out from behind the tree, but the figure was gone. Just, gone. No sound, no trace. Nothing but the rain hitting the leaves. My sister looked confused, like she didn't believe me.
Starting point is 04:36:23 But I knew something was wrong. We needed to get out of there. Now. We hurried back to where we left our bikes, and that's when I saw it. Footprints in the mud. Not ours. Bigger than ours. Deep, fresh. Someone had been there, and they weren't just passing by. They had been watching us. I couldn't shake the feeling that we weren't alone in those woods. Even now, thinking about it, I get this tightness in my chest, because whoever, or whatever, I saw that day, they didn't leave. And they're still out there, watching, waiting. So there I was, crouched behind a tree, my heart going a million miles an hour, my phone still buzzing in my hand after I'd called my sister. I kept thinking about that figure in the hoodie. I mean who the heck was that? They were there clear as day walking down the trail and then
Starting point is 04:37:17 poof, gone, like they never existed. My brain was scrambling to make sense of it, but nothing fit. One second they're there, and the next, just gone. That doesn't happen, not in real life. My sister crouched next to me, her face all scrunched up in confusion. What are you doing? she whispered, like I was the one acting weird. She hadn't seen the person, or maybe she just didn't want to admit she had. I don't know, but I wasn't imagining things. There was someone. I hissed back, my voice barely steady, right there.
Starting point is 04:37:54 I pointed toward the trail, but I knew I sounded crazy. The empty path stretched out in front of us, wet and muddy with no sign of anyone. Just the trees, standing still like they were waiting for something. No one's here. Stop being weird, my sister said. like it was all no big deal, but I could tell by the way she glanced around that she wasn't totally convinced. She was trying to act tough, but even she was starting to get that look in her eyes, the one that says this doesn't feel right. I didn't argue with her, though. We had to get back
Starting point is 04:38:28 to the bikes fast. I don't know why, but this pressure in my chest was building, like something bad was about to happen. Like if we didn't move now, we wouldn't get another chance. I grabbed her arm and started tugging her toward the hidden path where we'd left our bikes. Every step I took, I felt like something was behind us, just out of sight, watching, waiting. The mud squished under our shoes, and every sound felt too loud, like we were announcing exactly where we were. My eyes darted around constantly, scanning the trees, but everything looked wrong. I don't even know how to explain it. The shadows felt deeper, the trees taller, almost like the forest had shifted when I wasn't paying attention. I kept expecting to see that figure again,
Starting point is 04:39:15 but there was nothing, just silence, thick and heavy, like the woods were holding their breath. We were almost to the bikes when I saw it, footprints, big ones, way bigger than mine are my sisters. They were fresh, too, sunk deep into the mud, overlapping our own tracks from earlier. My throat went dry, and I grabbed my sister's arm harder, probably harder than I meant to. but I didn't care. Look, I said, pointing down at the ground. She followed my gaze, and I could tell by the way her eyes widened that she finally got it. Those aren't ours, she whispered, her voice barely audible.
Starting point is 04:39:53 Nope, I said, my pulse pounding in my ears. That's when it hit me. Whoever that person was, they'd been following us. Maybe for longer than I realized. And the worst part, I didn't know where they were now. They could have been hiding anywhere, watching. us from the trees, waiting for, I don't even know what. I felt this overwhelming urge to get out of there, like we were on borrowed time. I started moving faster, almost dragging my sister behind me.
Starting point is 04:40:24 We had to get to the bikes, had to get out. I didn't even care about the mud anymore, didn't care if we slipped or fell, as long as we kept moving. My mind was racing with a hundred different possibilities, none of them good. What if they took our bikes? What if they were waiting for us there? What if we never made it out of these woods? Finally, after what felt like forever, we reached the spot where we'd hidden the bikes. And thank God they were still there, but something wasn't right. I froze, my breath catching in my throat. Around the bikes the mud was all messed up, like someone had been pacing back and forth. But that wasn't the worst part. On one of the trees nearby, there were smudges, dark, almost black against the bark.
Starting point is 04:41:11 My stomach churned when I realized what it was, blood. Someone had wiped their hands on the tree, like they'd been hurt, or worse. I couldn't think, couldn't breathe. My sister didn't see it at first, but when she did, her face went pale. She didn't say anything, just stared, wide-eyed. I didn't want to know whose blood that was, or why it was there. We need to go, I muttered, my voice barely working. I could feel my hands shaking as I grabbed my bike.
Starting point is 04:41:42 I was trying to act calm for my sister's sake, but inside I was freaking out. Everything in me was screaming run, but I couldn't even think straight. We jumped on our bikes and started peddling, mud sprang everywhere as our tires spun out. I didn't care. I just needed to get out of those woods. My heart was pounding, my eyes darting back and forth. waiting for something, someone to jump out from behind the trees. I kept looking over my shoulder, expecting to see that figure in the white hoodie,
Starting point is 04:42:13 but the path behind us stayed empty, except it didn't feel empty. It felt like something was still there, just out of sight, watching us leave. And I knew, deep down, that we'd only just escaped, for now. But whoever, or whatever, had been there. They weren't done with us. I don't think I've ever peddled so fast in my life. The wheels kept slipping in the mud, but I didn't care. I just kept pushing harder.
Starting point is 04:42:43 Like if I slowed down for even a second, something would catch up with us. I didn't want to look back. I couldn't. But the feeling. It was still there, that gut-wrenching sense that we weren't alone in those woods, that something was following us, just out of sight. Every time a branch snapped or the wind rustled the trees, my heart nearly jumped out of my chest.
Starting point is 04:43:05 My sister was right behind me, quiet for once, which freaked me out even more. She's never quiet. But I think she felt it too. That pressure like the woods were closing in on us, like we were being watched. We finally reached the wooden bridge that leads back to the neighborhood,
Starting point is 04:43:23 and for a split second I thought we were safe. But as soon as we got closer, my stomach dropped. There, clear as day, were footprints, fresh ones, right in the mud, leading across the bridge, big ones, way bigger than ours. And they didn't belong to anyone we knew. I slammed on the brakes, skidding to a stop just before the bridge. My sister nearly crashed into me, but I didn't even care. My eyes were glued to the footprints. What? What the heck? My sister mumbled, her voice shaking a little. She was staring at them too. her face pale.
Starting point is 04:44:01 They started on our side of the bridge, like someone had been standing right where we were now, watching us. Then they went halfway across the bridge, and just stopped. No more prints, no sign of whoever made them, like they had disappeared into thin air. How, how is that possible, I whispered, but I wasn't really asking her. I was asking the woods, the universe,
Starting point is 04:44:24 whatever was out there watching us, messing with us. Because this wasn't normal, People don't just vanish like that. I scanned the trees on the other side of the bridge, half expecting to see someone standing there, but there was nothing, just the empty trail, leading deeper into the forest.
Starting point is 04:44:42 Everything was still, too still, like the whole world was holding its breath, waiting. We need to go, my sister said, her voice barely a whisper. She was already climbing back on her bike, her eyes darting from the bridge to the trees, then back to me.
Starting point is 04:44:59 Now. She didn't have to tell me twice. I hopped back on my bike, but my hands were shaking so bad. I almost dropped it. We rode across the bridge as fast as we could, mud splattering everywhere. The whole time I kept thinking about those footprints. Who made them? Where did they go? And why were they there in the first place? Once we crossed the bridge, I thought we'd feel better, but that tight, paranoid feeling wouldn't go away. My heart was still pounding. and every sound made me jump. The way back to the neighborhood was only a few minutes, but it felt like forever. I couldn't shake the feeling that someone, or something, was still following us, hiding in the trees, waiting for us to let our guard down. Every now and then, I'd glance back,
Starting point is 04:45:48 expecting to see that person in the white hoodie standing in the middle of the trail, just watching. But no one was there. It didn't matter. I felt them. I couldn't see them, but I knew they were there. Finally, we broke through the tree line and hit the edge of our neighborhood. I should have felt relieved, but instead, I felt off, like we hadn't really escaped,
Starting point is 04:46:13 like we'd brought something back with us. The street was quiet, too quiet for this time of day. No kids playing, no cars driving by, just silence. The only sound was our bikes, tires crunching on the gravel as we slowed to a stop in front of my house. My sister jumped off her bike and ran inside without saying a word. She didn't even look back at me. I stood there for a second, catching my breath, trying to shake the feeling of eyes on me, but it wouldn't go away. My skin was prickling, like something was wrong, like I was still being watched. I finally went inside, slammed the door behind me,
Starting point is 04:46:52 and locked it. I didn't care if it was the middle of the day. I wasn't taking any chances. My parents weren't home yet, so I went upstairs to my room and sat on the edge of my bed, trying to make sense of everything. But the more I thought about it, the less it made sense. Who was that person in the hoodie? Why were they in the woods, in our secret trail following us? And those footprints? How do footprints just stop like that?
Starting point is 04:47:21 People don't just vanish. My head was spinning, and I could feel the panic rising in my chest again. I got up and looked out my bedroom window, staring at the woods behind our house. For a second, I thought I saw something, a flash of white just at the edge of the trees. But when I blinked, it was gone. My heart was pounding so loud, I thought I might be losing it. I was probably imagining things, right? There's no way that person had followed us all the way back here.
Starting point is 04:47:50 But then I looked down, and my blood ran cold. There, in the mud just outside our front door, were the same large deep footprints, leading right to our house, but none going back. It was supposed to be just another adventure. Alex and I had done this a million times, sneak off into the woods after school, try to find something creepy or cool. But this time, something was different. From the moment we stepped into the trees, everything felt different.
Starting point is 04:48:30 At first, I couldn't put my finger on it. the air was thicker than usual, like it was hard to breathe, and it was too quiet. You know how when you walk into the woods, you usually hear birds, or the wind rustling through the leaves. Not today. There was nothing, just an eerie, unnatural silence that made me feel like the entire forest was holding its breath. Alex, my best friend, was usually the fearless one. He was big and strong, built like a bodybuilder from all the time he spent at the gym. He never got scared, but today he was acting weird. He kept glancing around like he was expecting something to jump out at us. His shoulders were tense, and he wasn't joking around like he normally did.
Starting point is 04:49:16 Something's wrong, he muttered, more to himself than to me. I tried to laugh it off. Dude, it's just a quiet day. You scared of a few trees. I nudged him, but deep down, I could feel it too. Something wasn't right. We kept walking, though, deeper into the woods. The further we went, the darker it got.
Starting point is 04:49:39 The sun was starting to sink behind the trees, casting these long shadows that seemed to stretch forever. Every time I looked down a path, I could swear I saw something move, just out of the corner of my eye. But every time I whipped my head around, there was nothing there. My heart started to race a little faster. And then it happened. A bark, high-pitched, sharp,
Starting point is 04:50:02 cutting through the silence like a knife. I jumped, and so did Alex. But this wasn't a normal dog barking. No, this sound was... Weird. It was hollow, like someone was trying to mimic a dog but didn't quite know how. It repeated over and over the same sound like a broken record.
Starting point is 04:50:21 Alex's eyes went wide and I could see it, real fear in his face. That's not right, he whispered, barely loud enough for me to hear. Another bark. louder this time closer we both stood there frozen
Starting point is 04:50:36 listening the barks kept coming rhythmic almost mechanical my skin prickled and every instinct screamed at me to run but my feet were glued to the ground I glanced around trying to figure out where the sound was coming from but all I saw were the shifting shadows between
Starting point is 04:50:52 the trees the woods felt alive now not in a good way though it was like the trees were watching us waiting for something. The silence that had been so weird earlier was now filled with this horrible noise, echoing through the trees and twisting my stomach into knots. Let's get out of here, Alex finally said, his voice shaking. I didn't argue. We turned and started walking fast, too fast maybe, like we were trying to outrun whatever was making that noise. But the faster we
Starting point is 04:51:24 moved, the louder the sound got. And that's when we heard it. Footsteps, not ours. Something else was moving through the forest with us just out of sight. The snapping of twigs and crunching of leaves followed us, matching our pace. My heart was pounding so hard I thought it might burst out of my chest. Run! Alex shouted, and I didn't need to be told twice. We bolted, sprinting through the trees, branches whipping against my face and legs. The footsteps behind us sped up too, and I swear I could feel something, someone right on my heels. The feeling of being watched morphed into the terrifying realization that we
Starting point is 04:52:04 were being hunted. I risked a glance back and saw, nothing, but I knew I could feel it. Whatever was out there was just inches away. I could hear it breathing, this horrible, raspy sound like it was right on my neck. Every step I took, it took too, closing the distance. Faster, Alex yelled, but I could My legs felt like they were going to give out. The forest around us seemed to close in, the trees growing thicker, their branches reaching out like claws, trying to grab us. By the time we burst out of the woods and onto the road, my lungs were burning, and I was gasping for air.
Starting point is 04:52:45 We didn't stop running until we got back to Alex's house, slamming the door behind us. Locking it like that could somehow keep whatever was out there from following us. For a minute, neither of us said any. We just stood there, panting, drenched in sweat. My whole body was shaking. Did you hear it? Alex finally asked. His voice barely above a whisper. I nodded, still trying to catch my breath. No, he said, his eyes wide and haunted. Not the footsteps, the breathing. It was right behind us. I swear, it was right behind me. I felt a chill run down my spine. This wasn't
Starting point is 04:53:26 just some animal in the woods. Alex was scared, really scared. And if he was scared, I knew whatever was out there was real, real, and dangerous. And I had a sinking feeling that it wasn't done with us yet. It had been months since that night in the woods, but I couldn't shake the feeling. That creeping, nagging fear that something was still watching. Alex didn't talk about it much anymore, but I knew it bothered him, too. He wasn't the same. He didn't like going up. He didn't like going out much, and when he did, he was always looking over his shoulder. I thought maybe it would fade over time, but it didn't. If anything, it was getting worse. And then came the night it all went downhill. Alex texted me late one Friday, saying he was home alone. His parents were out of
Starting point is 04:54:15 town, so he was chilling in his room, playing video games like usual. I didn't think much of it at the time, just a regular night for him. But then, a couple hours later, I got the time. I got this panicked message from him. Three words that made my heart skip a beat. Something's outside. Help. I called him immediately, but it went to voicemail. I tried again, but still nothing. I grabbed my jacket, ready to sprint over to his house, but then my phone buzzed. It was Alex, a text. Wait, I'll explain. I didn't know what to do, so I just sat there staring at my phone, heart pounding in my chest. Finally, after what felt like forever, my phone rang.
Starting point is 04:54:57 Alex. Dude, he whispered, his voice shaky. There's something outside my window. What are you talking about? What do you mean something's outside? I don't know, he said, his voice trembling. It started with this smell. It was so gross, like something dead, like rotting meat or something.
Starting point is 04:55:16 I felt a cold chill run down my spine. What, like, in your room? No, man. It came out of nowhere. I was just playing my game and then, boom, this smell hit me so bad I almost threw up. I looked around, checked the whole house, but nothing. No dead animals, no trash, nothing. I was trying to process what he was saying, but it didn't make sense. So, what? You think it's a skunk or something? No, listen. His voice cracked a little, and I could hear how scared he was. When I got back to my room, I thought it was gone, but then this, this tapping started at my window.
Starting point is 04:55:58 My heart thudded in my chest. What kind of tapping? It was light at first, like, like someone barely tapping their nails against the glass. I thought it was just the wind, but then it got louder, like, deliberate. I swallowed hard. Did you see anything? No, not at first. It was dark, but then I saw.
Starting point is 04:56:19 saw it. My stomach dropped. Saw what? The thing. His voice was so low now I had to strain to hear. It was standing outside my window. I didn't see its face at first, just this shape, like a shadow. But when I looked closer, he stopped like he couldn't find the words. What did you see, Alex? I whispered my skin crawling with fear. It was, it was a person or something shaped like a person. but its face was all wrong. Pale, like, too pale. The skin was stretched thin, and there were these big black holes
Starting point is 04:56:57 where the eyes should have been. And its mouth? He trailed off, and I could hear him breathing hard through the phone, like he was trying not to freak out. What about its mouth? It was open, like way too wide, and its teeth were... He choked on his words.
Starting point is 04:57:14 Sharp, crooked. It looked like it was smiling at me, but in this creepy, twisted way, and then the smell got worse, like it was coming from it. I felt sick just hearing it. What did you do? I pulled the curtain shut and locked my door, but I think it's still out there. It didn't leave. I jumped to my feet already grabbing my keys. I'm coming over. I'll be there in five minutes. No, Alex said, suddenly urgent. You can't. I don't think it wants you. It's here for me. What are you talking about? I don't know, he practically shouted. But ever since that day in the woods, I feel like it's been following me. Like, it's watching me.
Starting point is 04:57:57 I can't sleep anymore without hearing it or seeing something move outside my window. And now, now it's here. I didn't know what to say. Alex was losing it, and I didn't blame him. Everything he described made my skin crawl, and I couldn't imagine how terrifying it must have been to see that face up close. You don't think... I didn't want to say it, but the thought was already in my head. Skin Walker, Alex whispered, like he was afraid to say it too loud. I've been reading about them. They're supposed to wear the skin of the dead. And I don't know. Maybe it's crazy. But what if... No, man, that's... That's impossible, I said. But even as the words came out, they didn't feel right. I didn't believe them. I don't know what it is.
Starting point is 04:58:44 Alex said, his voice trembling. But it's not going to stop. I know that. It's not going to stop until it gets me. I couldn't stand hearing him like this. Stay inside. Don't look out the window. I'm coming over.
Starting point is 04:58:58 No, he snapped. Don't, just stay away. I'll be fine. I didn't believe him. I could hear the fear in his voice, and I knew whatever was out there wasn't going to just go away. But before I could say anything else, he hung up. I stared at the phone, my hands shaking.
Starting point is 04:59:16 That feeling from the woods, the sense of something watching us, had never really gone away. And now it was worse, much worse. Whatever it was, it had found Alex. And I had no idea how to stop it. I hadn't seen Alex in a couple of weeks. After that night he called me, terrified about the thing at his window, he started to pull back.
Starting point is 04:59:39 He stopped coming to school as much, didn't answer my texts or calls, and I was starting to get seriously worried. I mean, Alex was never the type to freak out about stuff. But whatever happened that night, it changed him, and not in a good way. I couldn't get that call out of my head, the way his voice shook when he described that thing outside his window. It didn't feel like just a bad dream or some weird animal. I could hear the fear, and honestly, it made my skin crawl just thinking about it.
Starting point is 05:00:09 I tried telling myself it was just his imagination. that he was stressed out, but deep down, I didn't believe that. Not after what we both saw in the woods. Not after all those noises and footsteps, the breathing so close it felt like it was right behind us. Something was seriously wrong. One Friday afternoon, I decided to go to Alex's house. I had to see him, talk to him, make sure he was okay. His place was pretty isolated, way out on the edge of town,
Starting point is 05:00:41 with nothing but empty fields and woods stretching out behind it. By the time I got there, it was already getting dark, the sun dipping below the horizon and casting long shadows across the yard. His house looked different. Not in a big way, but there was something not right. The curtains were all closed, the windows dark, and I couldn't see any lights on inside. Normally, Alex's place would be alive with the sound of music,
Starting point is 05:01:10 or his gaming setup. But tonight, it was dead silent. I knocked on the door. Nothing. I knocked again, harder this time. Alex? Dude, it's me! I called out, my voice sounding too loud in the stillness. Still nothing. No movement, no sound. My stomach twisted into knots. Something was wrong. I could feel it. After a few minutes of standing there, debating whether to just leave, I heard something from inside. It was faint at first, but as I pressed my ear against the door, I could hear it more clearly, scratching,
Starting point is 05:01:49 like something scraping against wood, slow and deliberate. My heart pounded in my chest. Alex, I called again, but this time I didn't expect an answer. I tried the door handle, and to my surprise, it turned. The door creaked open, revealing the dark, empty hallway beyond. I stepped inside, every instinct screaming at me to leave. but I couldn't, not without making sure Alex was okay. The house smelled weird, like stale air mixed with something else,
Starting point is 05:02:19 something rotten, like the stench of spoiled meat. I gagged a little, covering my nose with my sleeve as I made my way down the hallway. The scratching sound continued, coming from upstairs. I called out again, my voice shaky. Alex? Where are you, man? No answer. just that scratching, slow and steady, like it was waiting for me. I crept up the stairs each step creaking under my weight.
Starting point is 05:02:47 The higher I climbed, the stronger the smell got, thick and putrid. By the time I reached the top, it was so bad I had to stop and catch my breath. That's when I heard it, whispers. I froze. The whispers were soft, barely there, but they were coming from behind Alex's bedroom door. I couldn't make out what they were saying, but the tone, it was wrong, creepy, like a voice trying to imitate speech but not quite getting it right. I pushed the door open, the hinges groaning as I did. There, sitting in the dark corner of the room, was Alex. His back was to me, and he was hunched over, his shoulders tense. The scratching was louder now, and I realized it was coming from him.
Starting point is 05:03:34 He was dragging his nails along the wall, over and over again, like he couldn't stop. Alex? I whispered, taking a step forward. He didn't respond, didn't even flinch. I walked closer, my heart hammering in my chest. Dude, what's going on? Are you okay? Finally, he stopped.
Starting point is 05:03:56 The room fell into an eerie silence, except for the sound of my own shaky breathing. Alex slowly turned his head, and when I saw his head, and when I saw his eyes, he stopped. his face, my stomach dropped. He looked, wrong. His eyes were wide, bloodshot, like he hadn't slept in days. His skin was pale, almost sickly, and there were dark circles under his eyes. But it wasn't just that. It was the way he looked at me, like he didn't recognize me, like he wasn't even him anymore. It's here, he whispered, his voice barely audible. It's been here the whole time. My blood ran cold. What's here? Alex blinked, and for a second I thought I saw something move in the shadows behind him.
Starting point is 05:04:38 My breath caught in my throat, and I took a step back, my heart racing. The thing from the woods, he said, his voice trembling. It followed me home. It's been watching me, waiting. And now, now it's inside. I felt a wave of panic rise in my chest. We need to get out of here. Now. Alex shook his head, his expression, empty.
Starting point is 05:05:02 It's too late. It's already taken me. I stumbled back, my mind racing. The room felt smaller, like the walls were closing in. I could feel it, the same presence we felt in the woods, the same eyes watching from the dark, waiting, lurking. I didn't know what to do, but I knew one thing for sure. Whatever this thing was, it wasn't going to stop, and I was next. It was supposed to be just another hunting trip.
Starting point is 05:05:38 Nothing special, nothing out of the ordinary, just me and my brother out in the woods. freezing our asses off in the middle of nowhere. Southeast Minnesota, dead of winter. You could hear the crunch of snow under every step. The air so cold it stung when you breathed it in. I hate winter, but there we were, thinking we'd bag a deer and be back home before the worst of the storm hit. We'd been out there for hours, mostly just trudging around,
Starting point is 05:06:06 not seeing anything worth shooting. Then, out of nowhere, this huge buck crosses our path, I'm talking massive, antlers like something out of a wildlife magazine. My brother spots it first and takes the shot. It drops. No problem. Easy. We don't want to drag it back through the snow without a sled, so we figure we'll just leave it there, go back to the cabin, grab the sled, and haul it out.
Starting point is 05:06:31 No big deal, right? We were only about a mile away from the cabin, so it didn't seem like a huge hassle. We marked the spot, even though it was pretty obvious where the deer was. There was blood in the snow, and that buck wasn't going anywhere. At least that's what we thought. When we get back, maybe 30 minutes later, the deer is gone. Just gone. At first, I thought we'd gotten turned around.
Starting point is 05:06:55 Like maybe we were just a little off and the deer was still close by, but we were looking in the wrong spot. But no, there was the same patch of blood in the snow. Only now there was no deer. No tracks either. No drag marks. No paw prints. Nothing. My brother's cursing under his breath, and I'm just standing there, staring at this weird, clean patch of snow, trying to make sense of it.
Starting point is 05:07:20 How does a full-grown buck just disappear? The snow's fresh. We should have seen something, tracks, a trail, anything. But there was nothing, like the damn thing had just lifted off the ground and floated away. So we start searching. I mean, what else were we supposed to do? We comb the area going farther out. figuring maybe a coyote or something dragged it away. But the more we look, the worse it gets. After a few minutes, we find it, or what's left of it. It's not even a hundred yards from where we left it, but it's all torn up, like torn to shreds. Its legs are missing, like they've been hacked off or something, but not messy, clean, almost surgical. I'm not kidding. It looked like someone took a saw to this thing, which makes no sense at all. There's no blood around it, no tracks.
Starting point is 05:08:10 Just this deer, all mutilated and wrong, lying there in the snow like some kind of sick joke. And then there's this leg. One of its legs is just sitting on this big rock nearby, like it was placed there. Not tossed, not dropped, placed. I'm standing there, staring at this leg on the rock, and I swear to God, my stomach turned. It's like the whole forest got darker all of a sudden. I know that sounds stupid, but it's true. The sun wasn't even setting yet, but everything felt wrong.
Starting point is 05:08:45 Like the shadows around us were closing in. My brother's talking, but I barely hear him. My mind's racing. I'm thinking, what could do this? What kind of animal could drag a deer, cut it up like this, and leave no tracks? Nothing about it made sense. The Department of Natural Resources had been warning people about wolves coming down from the north, but this. No way, wolves don't do this.
Starting point is 05:09:10 Nothing does this. We decide to head back to the cabin. Screw the sled. We're not dragging this thing home. But as we're leaving, I hear something, a crack in the woods behind us. My first thought is, oh great, whatever did this is coming for us now. I turn around, and I swear for a second I see something, just beyond the trees, a shape maybe, or a shadow. It's not clear.
Starting point is 05:09:36 It's like, like something's there, but it's not moving, just watching. My heart's pounding, and I feel that familiar tightness in my chest again, the same feeling I had when I was a kid back in Washington, when we heard those whispers in the woods. I grabbed my brother's arm, and I don't even need to say anything. He feels it too. The air is heavy, almost buzzing with something we can't see, but we can feel it, pressing in on us.
Starting point is 05:10:03 We start walking faster, not quite running but close, trying to act like we're not scared out of our minds. I keep glancing back, expecting to see something, anything, following us, but there's nothing. Just the trees and the snow, and that awful gnawing feeling that we're not alone. We finally make it back to the cabin, slam the door behind us, and lock it tight. My brother's pacing, swearing, trying to figure out what the hell just happened. I'm shaking, trying to calm down, but I can't. All I can think about is the deer's leg on that rock and the shadows I saw.
Starting point is 05:10:40 saw, or thought I saw, in the trees. We didn't go back out there after that. We didn't talk about it much either. But sometimes late at night, I swear I hear it. That same crack in the woods, that same shadow moving just beyond the tree line. It was one of those winter nights where the cold sinks into your bones. You know the kind? Where no amount of blankets or layers can keep the chill out.
Starting point is 05:11:14 I was staying at my uncle's cabin, way out in the middle of nowhere, southeastern Minnesota. Like, when I say nowhere I mean it. No neighbors, no streetlights, nothing but trees and snow for miles. Kind of peaceful, but kind of creepy too, if I'm being honest. I wasn't supposed to be out there alone, but Uncle Ray had gone into town to get supplies, said he'd be back by morning, told me to enjoy the quiet like that was some kind of gift. Sure, I thought, I'll sit out here in the freezing cold in the middle of the woods and enjoy the dead silence. great idea it was around 10 p.m. and the sky was clear stars everywhere i was sitting on the porch trying to relax but something just felt off like i couldn't shake the feeling that i was being watched stupid right
Starting point is 05:12:05 but no matter how many times i told myself it was all in my head i couldn't settle down my eyes kept drifting to the tree line that dark stretch of forest just beyond the cabin and then Then, I saw it. At first I thought it was just my eyes playing tricks on me, shadows moving between the trees. But they weren't moving right. They didn't sway like the branches in the wind or dart around like deer. No. These shadows were slow, deliberate.
Starting point is 05:12:35 It was like they were pacing back and forth, like something or someone, was out there, waiting for. I don't even know what. I sat up trying to get a better look, but it was just too too. dark to see clearly. Still, my heart was pounding, and I could feel this tightness in my chest. I should have gone inside right then, locked the door and waited for Uncle Ray to come back, but instead I stayed there, frozen, just staring. I couldn't help it. I kept thinking, maybe it's nothing, maybe I'm just being paranoid. Then I heard it, a faint, rhythmic thudding.
Starting point is 05:13:12 At first I thought it was just the wind knocking a branch against the cabin, but it wasn't that kind of sound. It was heavier, like footsteps in the snow, but they were slow, deliberate, like whoever, or whatever, was out there wasn't in any kind of hurry. I was sure I was imagining things by this point. I mean, what else could it be? It's not like people just wander through these woods in the middle of the night. And yet, the sound kept coming, steady and relentless. I shot up from the porch and practically sprinted inside. My hands were shaking so bad I fumbled the door lock twice before I finally got it to click. I stood there, back against the door, my breath coming out in ragged puffs, and I listened.
Starting point is 05:13:57 Nothing. The thudding had stopped, just the wind now, whistling through the trees. I laughed at myself, out loud, because I felt so ridiculous. Like, really? I'm losing it over a couple of shadows and some wind. I tried to calm down, even made myself some tea, but the unease just wouldn't go away. It was like the quiet had teeth, sinking into my nerves. And then it started, this scratching sound.
Starting point is 05:14:28 It was soft at first, like someone dragging their fingers across the outside of the cabin, just under the window. I froze, teacup halfway to my lips, listening. The scratching moved along the wall. around the corner of the cabin, like something was circling me. I didn't want to look. I didn't want to move. I just sat there, gripping the cup so hard my knuckles went white. Scratch, scratch, scratch.
Starting point is 05:14:59 It was everywhere, moving from one wall to the next, like whatever it was, was trying to find a way in. I kept telling myself it was an animal, maybe a raccoon or a stray dog, but the sound. It wasn't right. It was too precise, too... Human. Like fingernails scraping across the wood. And the worst part?
Starting point is 05:15:21 Every time I got the courage to look, there was nothing there. No tracks in the snow, no shadows moving. Just that damn scratching. I couldn't take it anymore. I grabbed my phone and called Uncle Ray, but of course no signal. I don't know why I thought there would be. There never was out there. The scratching got louder, more frantic, like it was getting impatient.
Starting point is 05:15:44 I couldn't stay there. I had to do something. So I ran upstairs and locked myself in the bedroom, hoping that if I couldn't hear it, it would stop, but it didn't. It followed me up the walls, across the ceiling, like it knew exactly where I was. And then, just as suddenly as it started, the scratching stopped. The silence that followed was worse than the noise.
Starting point is 05:16:07 I didn't sleep that night, just laid there in bed, staring at the ceiling, waiting for it to start again. When morning finally came, I stepped outside, half expecting to find scratches all over the cabin, but there was nothing, no marks on the walls, no footprints in the snow, nothing at all. But I know what I heard. I know something was out there, and whatever it was, I don't think it was done with me. Well, I guess this was it, the trip I'd been dreaming about for years. My daughter Emily and I were finally heading out on our very first solo camping trip, just me and her, deep into the wilderness of Ravens Hollow.
Starting point is 05:16:55 I can't tell you how excited I was to share this adventure with her. Emily was just six, but I could see the same spark in her eyes that I used to have when my dad took me into the woods. The drive felt like it took forever. The road twisted and turned as we left behind the familiar cityscape and plunged into the thick green of the Appalachian Mountains. Emily sat in the back, her nose practically glued to the window, her eyes wide as she took in the tall trees, and the way the light filtered through them. Honestly, I couldn't blame her. Those woods were beautiful, like something out of a storybook. We made a quick stop in this tiny town just on the outskirts of the forest. I think it might have been called Hollow Creek or something like that. I'm not entirely sure. The name wasn't really important. The town itself felt kind of.
Starting point is 05:17:45 of... Forgotten. You know what I mean? Like one of those places that time just skipped over. The little general store had a creaky old door that let out a groan when we stepped inside. The guy at the counter gave me this odd look when I mentioned Raven's Hollow. He had these thick glasses and a face that seemed permanently set in a frown. You're heading up there?
Starting point is 05:18:08 He asked. Like I just told him I planned to camp on Mars or something. Yep, just a little father-daughter trip. I replied, trying to keep it light. He didn't say anything for a moment, just shook his head slightly and muttered something like, that place can be unpredictable. I gave him a polite smile, but honestly, it was a little weird. I mean, I figured he was just one of those guys who liked to make a big deal out of nothing.
Starting point is 05:18:35 So I paid for our marshmallows and hot dogs, and we headed back to the car. The road to Ravens Hollow got narrower the further we went, the trees pressing in on either side. It was almost like they were swallowing us up, but not in a bad way. It felt peaceful, I guess. Emily kept pointing out things she saw, like a deer that darted across the road and a hawk circling up in the sky. Every time she'd see something new, she'd let out this little gasp, and it made me smile. This was exactly why I wanted to bring her here. Finally, we reached the clearing. Raven's Hollow was just as I'd imagined, a wide-open space surrounded by thick forest, with a little stream running nearby. Perfect. We got out and Emily was off like a shot,
Starting point is 05:19:23 running to pick some wildflowers. I started setting up the tent, feeling that familiar rush of satisfaction. There's nothing quite like setting up camp, you know? Everything in its place, a little slice of home out here in the middle of nowhere. Once the tent was up and the fire was gathered, we got the campfire going. I showed Emily how to roast hot dogs, and she giggled as hers caught on fire, waving it around like a little torch. I told her all about fire safety, though she seemed more interested in seeing just how charred she could get her marshmallow before it fell off the stick. As the sun started to set, I noticed how quiet it was. Not like we're far from the city quiet, but a kind of heavy quiet that made my skin prickle a little. No crickets, no birds,
Starting point is 05:20:11 Just nothing. I tried to brush it off, telling myself it was just the way things were out here. But honestly, it felt strange. Emily didn't seem to notice, though. She was busy showing me an old rusted charm she'd found near the stream. It looked like an eye, and the metal was so worn, it was barely recognizable. Look, Daddy, it's a forest guardian, she said, her eyes shining. I chuckled, but something about that charm made me feel uneasy. I didn't know why, but I didn't want to spoil her fun. So I nodded and said,
Starting point is 05:20:46 Yep, looks like it. You should keep it, Em. Maybe it'll keep watch over us tonight. She beamed, and we tucked the charm into her pocket before settling down for the night. I lay there for a while after Emily had fallen asleep, just listening to the forest. The stillness was almost oppressive, like the whole place was holding its breath. I told myself it was fine. There was nothing out there but trees and shadows.
Starting point is 05:21:11 Eventually my eyes started to droop and I let myself drift off. But even as I did, I couldn't shake that weird feeling, like something was just out of sight, watching. I told myself I was being silly, that this was just a normal night in the woods, but deep down, I wasn't so sure. I guess that's the thing about the wilderness. It's beautiful, but it's also unpredictable.
Starting point is 05:21:37 And as I finally fell asleep, I had no idea just how true those were. words were about to become. I woke up suddenly in the middle of the night. You know how sometimes you just snap awake and you're not sure why? Yeah, it was like that. For a second, I just lay there, staring at the roof of the tent, wondering what had pulled me out of sleep. I could hear Emily murmuring beside me, and it made me smile. She had this little habit of talking in her sleep, just like her mom. I closed my eyes, thinking I'd just drift. back off, but then I heard something else. It was faint, like a whisper, and it definitely
Starting point is 05:22:18 wasn't Emily. My heart skipped a beat, and I told myself it was just the wind, probably rustling through the trees. But honestly, it didn't sound like the wind. It sounded closer. I held my breath listening as hard as I could, and then I heard it again. This time it was clearer, like someone saying Emily's name, almost like my wife's voice, but it was. was off somehow. It was too calm, too flat, like there was no feeling behind it. My stomach twisted, and I felt a shiver run down my spine. I sat up slowly, trying not to make a sound. I glanced at Emily, who was still fast asleep, her tiny form curled up in her sleeping bag. I wanted to believe it was just my imagination, but something about that voice was all wrong. It was like it
Starting point is 05:23:08 was trying to sound like my wife but didn't quite know how. I unzipped the tent just a crack and peered out into the darkness. The fire had burned down to just a few glowing embers, and everything beyond that was pitch black. I couldn't see anything, but I had that feeling, you know, the one where you're sure someone's watching you. My heart was pounding so loud, I was afraid it might wake Emily. Then I heard it again. Emily, the voice whispered from somewhere out there in the dark. It was soft, but it cut through the silence like a knife. It was coming from the left, near the tree line, and this time it sounded like my wife, but twisted, almost mechanical, like it was a recording. I felt my whole body go cold. I reached for my hunting knife,
Starting point is 05:23:57 the one I always kept close when we camped. My hand was shaking as I gripped it, trying to decide what to do. I didn't want to leave Emily alone, but I also couldn't just sit there. I was sit there and do nothing. I had to protect her. "'Who's out there?' I called. My voice barely more than a whisper. I didn't want to wake Emily, and honestly I didn't want to draw too much attention either. No answer. Just silence. I waited, my ears straining, and then I heard the whisper again, louder this time, like it was right outside the tent. "'Come outside, sweetheart. I'm here.'
Starting point is 05:24:33 The voice was hollow, empty, and it made my skin crawl. There was no warmth, no love, just words, my wife's voice but wrong. I knew then that whatever was out there, it wasn't human. My heart was racing, and I felt this fierce, protective anger rise up inside me. I wasn't about to let anything near my daughter. I grabbed the lantern with my free hand, and slowly unzipped the tent the rest of the way, stepping out into the cold night air. It was so dark, I could barely see a few feet ahead of me.
Starting point is 05:25:05 I held the lantern high, the weak light flickering, barely pushing back the shadows. I scanned the campsite, my eyes darting from tree to tree, but there was nothing, just darkness. I wanted to believe that whatever it was had gone, but deep down I knew it was still there. Then I heard a branch snap, and my head whipped around. The sound came from the edge of the clearing, and I turned the lantern towards it, my hand tightening on the knife. That's when I saw them, two glowing eyes shining from the darkness. They were yellow at first, almost beautiful. But as I stared, they seemed to change, shifting to a deep, angry red.
Starting point is 05:25:48 The eyes were low, behind a bush, and then they started to rise. Slowly, whatever it was stood up, and I could feel my stomach drop. It was tall, too tall. Its shape was all wrong, stretched and thin. like it didn't quite fit together properly. My heart pounded in my ears as I watched it, the lantern light flickering as if it was struggling to stay lit. Suddenly, Emily screamed from inside the tent,
Starting point is 05:26:16 and my blood ran cold. The creature's head snapped towards the sound, and I could see its mouth open, wide and unnatural, with this sickening snap that made me want to gag. It was like it was smiling, but there was nothing human about it. Without even thinking, I lunged forward, slashing at the air with my knife, yelling as loud as I could. I didn't even know what I was saying, just noise, anything to get it away from my daughter.
Starting point is 05:26:43 The creature let out this high-pitched shriek, a sound that felt like it was piercing right through me, and then it was gone, vanishing into the trees so fast I almost didn't see it move. I stood there, breathing hard, my eyes darting around, trying to catch any sign of it. But there was nothing, just the dark, empty forest. I backed towards the tent, never taking my eyes off the tree line, and ducked inside, pulling Emily into my arms. She was crying, shaking, and I whispered to her that it was okay, that it was just a bad dream. But I knew it wasn't a dream. Whatever that thing was, it had been real. And as I held Emily close, knife still clutched in my hand, I knew one thing for sure. We weren't
Starting point is 05:27:31 safe here. Not anymore. I didn't sleep for the rest of the night. How could I? Every tiny sound outside the tent made my heart pound, and I gripped that hunting knife so tightly, my hand started to ache. Emily, thankfully, had settled down, her little head resting on my lap. I kept the lantern dim, just enough to cast a soft glow so I could see her peaceful face. I tried to stay calm, you know, telling myself that maybe it was all just a bad dream, that my mind had somehow played tricks on me. But deep down I knew better. I knew what I saw, that thing, those eyes, the way it moved. It wasn't anything natural.
Starting point is 05:28:15 And I couldn't shake the feeling that it was still out there, lurking, watching us. As soon as the first light of dawn broke through the trees, I felt a wave of relief. I can't even begin to tell you how good it felt to see the sun again. I carefully moved Emily off my lap and started packing up our camp as quietly as I could. My hands were still trembling, and every time I looked at the tree line, I half expected to see those glowing eyes staring back at me. Emily woke up while I was stuffing the sleeping bags away. She rubbed her eyes and gave me a sleepy smile.
Starting point is 05:28:50 Daddy, why are we leaving so early? She asked, her voice still groggy. I forced a smile trying to keep my voice light. We've got a long drive ahead, kiddo. thought we'd get an early start. Plus, I bet we can grab some pancakes on the way home. That seemed to do the trick. Emily's eyes lit up, and she started talking excitedly
Starting point is 05:29:10 about what kind of pancakes she wanted. Chocolate chips, obviously. I nodded along, but I couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. It was like an itch I couldn't scratch, a constant sense of something just beyond my vision. With everything packed up, I grabbed Emily's hand, and we started towards the car. I kept her close, my eyes scanning the forest, the knife still tucked into my belt.
Starting point is 05:29:34 The morning was quiet, too quiet. No birds, no rustling leaves, just our footsteps crunching on the path. It was like the whole world was holding its breath. We were almost to the car when I heard it, a rustling sound off to the side, like something moving through the underbrush. My heart skipped a beat, and I pulled Emily closer, trying to keep my voice calm. Let's hurry up, Em, I said, my eyes darting to the source of the noise. For a split second, I saw something, just a shadow, darting between the trees. It was fast, too fast to be a person. My stomach twisted in fear, and I felt a cold sweat break out on the back of my neck.
Starting point is 05:30:18 Emily didn't seem to notice, thankfully. She was too busy telling me all about her dream, something about a magical forest guardian that protected us from bad guys. I forced a smile, nodding, but all I could think about was getting her to safety. When we reached the car, I opened the back door and practically shoved her inside, locking it behind her. I was about to get in myself when I heard it again. That voice.
Starting point is 05:30:42 My wife's voice. Calling my name. It was coming from the trees and it sounded different this time, angry, almost mocking. David, it called, the word stretching out in this unnatural twisted way that made my skin crawl. I turned, my eyes searching the tree line, and for just a moment, I saw them. Those red eyes, glowing from the darkness, watching me. My heart pounded in my ears, and I felt this mix of fear and anger rising up inside me. I wasn't about to let whatever this was get anywhere near my daughter.
Starting point is 05:31:17 I raised my knife, shouting, You stay away from us! My voice echoed in the stillness, and for a moment everything seemed to freeze. Then, just like that, the eyes were gone. The forest seemed to come back to life. Birds started chirping, and I could hear the rustle of leaves in the breeze. It was like whatever had been there had just... Disappeared.
Starting point is 05:31:41 I didn't waste any time. I jumped into the car, started the engine, and tore down that narrow road as fast as I could. I kept glancing in the rearview mirror, half expecting to see that thing chasing us. But all I saw was the empty road. the forest slowly fading into the distance. Emily was quiet for a while, and then she spoke up. Daddy was something wrong? She asked, her voice small.
Starting point is 05:32:09 I took a deep breath, trying to steady my hands on the wheel. No, sweetheart, I lied. Just thought we'd get home a little faster, that's all. She nodded, but I could tell she wasn't convinced. Honestly, I wasn't either. I knew what I saw, and I knew. knew that whatever it was, it was still out there, somewhere in those woods. We stopped at a diner a few hours later, and I tried to act normal.
Starting point is 05:32:37 Emily seemed to bounce back quickly, chattering about the pancakes and how she wanted to go camping again. I just smiled and nodded, but inside I felt this heavy weight, like a knot in my chest that wouldn't go away. Before we left, I noticed the rusted charm Emily had found back at the campsite. She'd left it on the table while she was eating. and I picked it up, turning it over in my hands. There was something about it, something that felt wrong. I didn't want it anywhere near us. So when Emily wasn't looking, I dropped it into the trash can by the door.
Starting point is 05:33:11 Maybe it was silly, but it made me feel a little better, like I was leaving a piece of that nightmare behind. As we drove home, I kept glancing in the mirror, half expecting to see something out there, something following us. I didn't see anything, but I couldn't shake. the feeling that it wasn't over, that whatever was out there in Ravens Hollow was still watching, waiting. And as we pulled into our driveway, Emily waved at something behind us, a big smile on her face. I glanced in the mirror again, my heart skipping a beat, but there was nothing there,
Starting point is 05:33:45 just the empty road. Still, I couldn't help the chill that ran down my spine as I quickly ushered her inside, locking the door behind us. I felt like I couldn't pack up fast enough, My hands were clumsy, fumbling with the tent poles, my eyes darting around the clearing. Every rustle of leaves, every sway of a branch, it all made my heart skip. I mean I knew that whatever was out there had retreated for now, but it was like I could still feel its eyes on me. Honestly, it felt like the whole forest was watching us. Emily was still half asleep, sitting on a rock with her teddy bear in her lap,
Starting point is 05:34:22 her eyes blinking drowsily as she watched me. I plastered on a smile, even though my insides were twisted in knots. How about we get some pancakes on the way home, Em? I said, trying to keep my voice cheerful. She smiled, and for a moment it almost felt normal. Almost. Once everything was packed, I grabbed Emily's hand. Stay close, sweetheart, I told her. She nodded, her little fingers gripping mine tightly. I tried to keep my eyes on the path ahead, but I could. couldn't help glancing at the trees. The shadows seemed deeper now, like they were hiding something
Starting point is 05:35:00 just out of sight. I didn't hear any birds, no rustling of animals, just this heavy, awful silence. We were about halfway to the car when I heard it. A rustling, like something moving through the brush. My chest tightened, and I squeezed Emily's hand a little harder, picking up the pace. Daddy, you're hurting my hand, she said, her voice small. I lose. I'd loosen my grip, forcing myself to take a breath. Sorry, M. Let's just keep moving, okay? I could feel my pulse pounding in my ears. I glanced over my shoulder, and for just a second I thought I saw something,
Starting point is 05:35:37 a dark shape slipping between the trees. My stomach did a flip, and I turned back, practically dragging Emily along now. I knew I had to get her to safety. That was the only thing that mattered. When we finally reached the car, I felt a rush of relief so strong, it almost made me dizzy. I opened the back door and helped Emily inside, buckling her in as quickly as I could. Daddy, what's wrong? She asked, her eyes wide and confused. I tried to smile, but I knew it probably looked more like a grimace. Nothing, sweetheart, we're just in a bit of a hurry, that's all.
Starting point is 05:36:14 I slammed the door shut, and that's when I heard it. The voice. My wife's voice, coming from somewhere deep in the woods. David, it called, stretched, out my name in that same strange, hollow tone. My blood ran cold. I turned, my eyes scanning the trees, and there they were, those red eyes, glowing from the shadows. They stared at me, unblinking, and I felt this wave of anger and fear crash over me. I wasn't going to let that thing get anywhere near my daughter. Not now, not ever. I raised my knife, pointing it towards the tree line. Stay away from us, I shouted my voice. voice cracking. The eyes narrowed and for a moment I thought I saw a twisted smile beneath them,
Starting point is 05:37:00 a mouth full of sharp, jagged teeth. Then, just like that, the eyes vanished. The forest seemed to breathe again. Birds started to chirp. The wind rustled through the leaves. It was like whatever had been there had just disappeared. But I knew better. It wasn't gone. It was just hiding, waiting. I jumped into the driver's seat, my hands shaking as I started the car. I didn't look back. I couldn't. I just drove, the tires kicking up dirt as we sped down that narrow, winding road. I kept glancing in the rearview mirror, half expecting to see those glowing eyes following us, but all I saw was the empty road, the forest fading into the distance. Emily was quiet for a while, her eyes on the window. Then she spoke, her voice barely a whisper,
Starting point is 05:37:49 Daddy, was something out there? I swallowed, trying to keep my voice steady. No, sweetheart, it was just... Just the wind, probably. I knew she didn't believe me, and honestly I didn't believe myself either. We stopped at a diner a couple of hours later. I needed a break.
Starting point is 05:38:07 I needed to catch my breath. Emily seemed to bounce back quickly, smiling as she dug into her pancakes, talking about how she wanted to go camping again soon. I just nodded, but inside, I felt like I was still out there, in those woods, with that thing watching me. Before we left, I noticed something on the table, Emily's rusted charm, the one she'd found by the stream. She must have taken it out of her pocket while she was eating. I picked it up,
Starting point is 05:38:38 turning it over in my hands. There was something about it, something that felt wrong. I didn't want it anywhere near us. So when Emily wasn't looking, I slipped it into the trash can by the door. Maybe it was silly. Maybe it didn't mean anything. But it made me feel a little better, like I was leaving a piece of that nightmare behind. The drive home was quiet.
Starting point is 05:39:04 I kept glancing in the mirror, half expecting to see something there, something following us. But there was nothing, just the empty road stretching out behind. When we finally pulled into our driveway, I felt a weight lift off my shoulders. We were home. We were safe.
Starting point is 05:39:22 I helped Emily out of the car, and she ran up to the front door, waving at something behind us. I felt my heart stop. I turned, my eyes scanning the street, but there was nothing. Just the empty road, the sun dipping low on the horizon. Still, I couldn't shake the chill that ran down my spine as I hurried her inside, locking the door behind us. I've always liked to think of myself as someone who's comfortable alone, really alone,
Starting point is 05:40:00 the kind of person who can set up camp miles away from another human and feel right at home. I've done it more times than I can count, wandering deep into the wild places of whales, where the only company you're likely to find is whatever's hiding behind the thick screen of trees. It's something that used to bring me peace. But well, let's just say this particular trip made me question everything I thought I knew. It started out just like any other trip, really. I'd parked my car down an old dirt lane that barely passed for a road, grabbed my gear, and hiked a few miles into the forest.
Starting point is 05:40:37 The air was crisp, that perfect kind of cool that makes you want to breathe deep and just fill your lungs. There was a stillness that settled over everything, like the whole world had decided to take a rest. I found a spot by a small clearing, where the trees opened up enough for me to get a good view of, of the sky. It was perfect, secluded, quiet, far from anyone or anything, just how I liked it. I set up my tent, got a little fire going, and relaxed with a good book. The sun dipped below the trees
Starting point is 05:41:10 in slow motion, painting everything in a warm golden light that eventually slipped away into shadows. The forest felt safe, cozy even, with the fire crackling and the stars coming out above. The kind of night where you feel like the world's a good place, where the line between civilization and wilderness blurs in just the right way. But you know, there's something funny about the woods when the sun goes down. Sometimes, all that peace and quiet can start to feel, different. You can't help but notice when the usual rustle of leaves or distant calls of animals just vanish. That night, as I lay in my tent, it was like the forest decided to hold its breath. I remember the silence being so deep, it almost had a weight to it. I figured it was just my mind playing tricks on me.
Starting point is 05:42:01 Maybe I'd scared off some critters while settling in. It wasn't until much later that I realized just how wrong that assumption was. The next day was about as perfect as it could get. I spent it hiking through the woods, stopping by a little village for a pint at the local pub, just enjoying the simple freedom that comes with being out in the wild. By the time, time I made it back to camp, the sun was already setting, and I had a belly full of good food and a warm buzz from the beer. The sky was clear, stars coming out one by one, and I felt that kind of contentment that only a day well spent in the outdoors can give you. I watched the fire burned down to embers and crawled into my tent, more than ready for sleep, but that's when
Starting point is 05:42:47 things started to change. It was sometime past midnight when I woke up. That kind of half-hapes, awake state where you're not quite sure why your eyes are open. I didn't move at first, just listening, and that's when I heard it, a sound that didn't belong, a humming, melodic, almost beautiful, but in a way that made the hair on the back of my neck stand up. It was too perfect, each note held just right, no break or hesitation, like it wasn't a person making that sound, but something else entirely. I tried to tell myself it was just someone messing around, maybe a couple of kids trying to freak me out.
Starting point is 05:43:29 But there was something about that tune, so haunting and unnatural, that made it impossible to ignore. My heart started to pound, and I could feel that prickling fear creeping in, the kind that you can't shake no matter how hard you try to rationalize things. I lay there for a minute, maybe more, just listening.
Starting point is 05:43:49 The sound didn't stop. It stayed steady, like it was waiting for something. Eventually I knew I couldn't just lie there. I had to see what it was. So I reached for the zipper of my tent, and as soon as I started to open it, the humming cut off. Just like that, like someone had hit the pause button. The silence rushed back in, almost deafening,
Starting point is 05:44:13 and I could feel my pulse in my ears. I wasn't sure if I wanted to laugh or scream. Maybe it was just some prankster after all. I took a breath and, without thinking too much, yelled out into the night, hoping it would be enough to scare off whoever was out there. But then it came again. The humming. Only this time it was different.
Starting point is 05:44:35 It wasn't where it had been before. No, it was closer now, coming from the opposite direction. Somewhere it shouldn't have been able to get to that fast. The kind of distance that makes you realize, whatever's out there. it doesn't play by the same rules as you and me. I felt my blood run cold, a kind of fear that went straight down to my bones. I fumbled with the zipper, my hands shaking, and forced myself to peek out. That's when I saw it.
Starting point is 05:45:04 A figure, standing tall against the tree line, taller than any person should be, with arms too long and a head too small. It was swaying, just slightly, as if it was in time with that haunting impossible tune. And in that moment, all the peace, all the comfort I'd ever found in the woods just drained away, leaving nothing but an emptiness I can't quite describe. I don't know if you've ever had a moment where the world suddenly seems wrong, where everything looks the same, but you can feel that something's fundamentally different. That's how I felt as I stood there, staring at that tall, swaying figure.
Starting point is 05:45:42 It wasn't just that it didn't belong, though that much was obvious. It was the way everything else seemed to fade away, like the world was losing color and sound and meaning. For a long, breathless moment, I just stood there, feeling like my brain was struggling to catch up, to make sense of something that had no business being in this world. I think maybe some part of me was still hoping it was a trick of the light or a shadow or, hell I don't know, a figment of an overactive imagination. But then it hummed again, that's a thing. same melodic tune, and any illusion I had left shattered. I've heard people talk about being
Starting point is 05:46:22 scared out of their minds, but let me tell you, I understood it then. My mind didn't want any part of this. It just shut down, leaving my body to figure it out. The humming had stopped for that second I looked out, and now it started up again, but it wasn't where it had been before. It was closer, too close. Coming from somewhere it couldn't have moved to in that short amount of time. I felt like I was being played with, and that realization sent a bolt of panic straight through me. It felt like my chest was going to explode. I wanted to move, to do anything besides just stand there, but fear had me locked in place. I was rooted to the ground, staring at that thing, swaying in the shadows. I knew I had to get out of there, but the sheer wrongness of it all
Starting point is 05:47:11 held me tight. I could hear my own breath, ragged and shallow, and I could feel the blood pounding in my ears. The figure, it wasn't just swaying now, it was shifting, like it was stepping closer, moving without really moving, if that makes any sense at all. And the humming, that's when I realized it wasn't just humming anymore. It was saying my name, over and over, a sick, distorted version of my own voice, like someone had recorded me and twisted the sound into something awful. I can't really explain what that does to. a person, hearing your own voice like that, twisted and taunting. It felt like it was trying to reach inside me, trying to pull at something deep and raw and scared. I'd had enough. My body
Starting point is 05:47:59 finally caught up with my brain, and I did the only thing I could. I turned and ran. I didn't care that I was leaving my tent behind, or that I wasn't wearing shoes. None of it mattered anymore. I just ran, crashing through the underbrush, my socks getting torn by the brambles. branches whipping against my face. I didn't even think about where I was going. I just wanted to get as far away from that thing as I could. The forest was pitch black, and every shadow seemed alive. I had no idea if the thing was following me. I didn't dare look back. All I knew was that I could still hear it, that low droning hum, echoing through the trees like it was bouncing from place to place, coming from all directions at once.
Starting point is 05:48:43 It wasn't right, and no matter how fast I ran, it felt like I wasn't getting away. Finally, I stumbled to a stop, my chest heaving, lungs burning. I leaned against a tree, trying to catch my breath, trying to listen. There was nothing, no sound, no movement, just the oppressive silence of the forest at night. I stayed like that, not moving, barely breathing, for what felt like forever. My hands were shaking. My legs felt like they might give out at any moment, and all I could think was that I'd made a huge mistake coming out here.
Starting point is 05:49:18 I know it sounds strange, but part of me started to wonder if it was all in my head, if maybe I'd just imagine the whole thing. Fear can do that to you, you know? It can make you see things that aren't really there, hear things that don't exist. I wanted to believe that. God, I wanted to believe that I'd just scared myself
Starting point is 05:49:38 into seeing shadows where there weren't any. But the memory of that voice, my own voice, twisted and wrong, kept me from convincing myself. After what must have been a couple of hours, I finally forced myself to move. My legs were stiff, my feet were sore and cold, and every step felt like it might be my last, but I couldn't stay there forever. I had to get back to my tent. I had to get my phone, my car keys, something, anything to make me feel like I could get out of there for good. The walk back felt like it took a lifetime. Every rustle of leaves, every creek of branches
Starting point is 05:50:18 made me freeze, sure that it was coming for me. The forest felt different now, like it was watching me, waiting. I don't know how to explain it, but it felt like the trees themselves were holding their breath, like they were in on some secret that I wasn't a part of. When I finally got back to my camp, I could see the tent standing there, untouched, like nothing had happened. The fire had long since died out, and everything was quiet, too quiet. I didn't waste any time. I grabbed my phone and my keys, and I got out of there. I didn't bother packing up. I left everything else behind and ran, my feet barely feeling the cold earth beneath them as I made my way back to the car. I don't think I've ever driven with my hands shaking that bad before.
Starting point is 05:51:07 You know that feeling when you've just dodged something really awful, like maybe a car that almost ran you off the road, and your body's buzzing with adrenaline, not quite sure if you're safe yet. That's what it felt like, only it didn't go away. Even after I managed to get myself into the car, I couldn't stop looking over my shoulder, half expecting that tall figure to emerge from the dark,
Starting point is 05:51:32 standing right there at the edge of the trees. The thing is, the fear didn't feel, normal. I mean, I'd been scared before. I'm not a stranger to that kind of adrenaline rush, especially camping solo out here in the wilderness. But this was different. It was as if the fear was sticking to me, like a cold sweat that wouldn't dry. It made me feel exposed, even sitting inside my car with the doors locked. I knew I had to get out of there. I turned the key in the ignition, and the engine sputtered to life, the sound echoing way too loud in the silence of the forest. I glanced up at the rearview mirror, half expecting to see that tall, swaying figure behind me, but there was nothing,
Starting point is 05:52:16 just shadows, the kind that seemed to shift and move if you look too long. I drove for what felt like hours, even though I knew it couldn't have been more than 20 minutes, just winding down those narrow, tree-lined roads, trying to put as much distance between myself and that campsite as I could. The sky was starting to lighten just a bit, that kind of early dawn glow that turns everything a pale gray, but it didn't make me feel any safer. If anything, the half-light made things look even stranger, like the world was stuck somewhere between night and day, not quite either one. Eventually, I pulled over on the side of the road. I was shaking too much to keep driving, and I needed a moment to think, to breathe, to figure out what the hell I was supposed to do
Starting point is 05:53:03 next. I leaned back in the seat, closed my eyes, and tried to steady my breath. The car was silent. The kind of silence that made the ringing in my ears seem even louder. I felt like I was waiting for something, anything to happen, and I hated it. I don't know how long I sat there, but eventually I decided I had to go back, not to stay, of course, but I couldn't just leave everything behind. my gear, my tent, it was all still there, and even though I knew it was stupid, the thought of leaving it felt wrong. Maybe it was pride, or maybe I just needed some kind of closure, but I knew I had to go back, at least for a little while. The drive back to the campsite felt surreal. The sun was starting to come up, filtering through the trees, and everything looked so normal. It made me
Starting point is 05:53:56 doubt myself, honestly. The rational part of my brain kept trying to tell me that I'd imagined it all, that it had been some weird dream, a trick of the dark and my own fears. But deep down, I knew that wasn't true. The memory of that humming, that twisted version of my own voice, was too vivid, too wrong to just brush aside. When I pulled up to where I'd left the trail, I hesitated. The car idled, and I just sat there, staring at the spot where I disappeared into the the day before. Everything was still, too still. I could feel that cold fear creeping back in, telling me that I should just leave, that nothing was worth going back for. But I couldn't do it. I had to see for myself. I grabbed my flashlight, even though the sun was up, and I started walking.
Starting point is 05:54:48 My heart was pounding, and every step felt like it was taking me deeper into something I didn't understand. The woods were quiet and not in a peaceful way. It was like everything was waiting, holding its breath. I kept glancing over my shoulder, my ears straining for any sound, but there was nothing, just my own footsteps crunching through the underbrush. When I reached the clearing, I stopped. The tent was still there, just like I'd left it. The fire pit was cold, the ashes scattered. It looked like any other. campsite, and for a second I almost believed that I'd imagined it all, that the figure, the voice, the fear, it had all been some bizarre, waking nightmare. But then I saw the footprints. They were faint,
Starting point is 05:55:37 but they were there. Large, deep impressions in the dirt, leading from the edge of the clearing right up to my tent, and they weren't mine. The sight of them sent a shiver down my spine, and I felt that cold sweat again, the fear that clung and wouldn't let go. I moved quickly grabbing my pack, stuffing whatever I could into it. I didn't want to be there any longer than I had to. As I was about to leave, I heard it again, that humming, faint, distant, but unmistakable. It was coming from deeper in the woods, from somewhere beyond the clearing. My blood turned to ice. I didn't wait to see if it was getting closer. I turned and ran. My pack back. bouncing against my back, my heart pounding in my chest.
Starting point is 05:56:24 By the time I reached the car I was out of breath, my hands shaking so badly that I fumbled with the keys. I got in, slammed the door, and locked it, my eyes scanning the tree line. I couldn't see anything, but that didn't mean it wasn't there, watching, waiting. I drove away, and I didn't look back. The backseat of my car wasn't exactly the safest place in the world,
Starting point is 05:56:48 but right then it was the only spot where I felt like I had any chance of keeping it together. I'd parked on a small deserted lane, surrounded by fields, and I tried to remind myself that there was no way anything from those woods could find me here. I even cracked a joke in my head, like whatever that was had a map of all the backroads in Wales. But honestly, even my attempts at humor sounded hollow. I curled up on the seat, the car keys clutched tight in my hand, ready to go at the slightest sound. My breath was coming in short gasps, and no matter how many times I told myself to relax, it didn't help.
Starting point is 05:57:26 I tried to close my eyes, but every time I did, I'd see it again. That figure, standing there, swaying like it was just waiting for me to do something stupid. My mind kept playing tricks on me, making me think I could hear that humming, faint and distant. I kept telling myself it wasn't real, but there was no shaking that chill, like the thing had left a mark somewhere inside me. The hours crawled by. I watched the sky turn from a dark, inky blue to a pale morning gray, and with the light, I finally started to feel a little bit of that fear lifting.
Starting point is 05:58:03 Funny how daylight makes things seem better, even when they aren't. It was just easier to breathe, easier to think when the sun was finally up. I straightened myself up in the seat, stretched my legs, and let out a shaky breath I didn't realize I'd been holding. Maybe it was time to go back and grab the rest of my gear, then get as far away from this place as I could. When I drove back to the campsite, there was a part of me that hoped maybe someone else had wandered through,
Starting point is 05:58:31 that maybe I'd see some other poor campers car parked near mine. I don't know why that would have helped, but it would have made me feel a little less alone in all this. But of course there was nothing. Just my car, right where I'd left it, and the forest, looking as quiet and ordinary as ever. I parked, took a deep breath, and got out. The air was cold, the kind that cuts through you even after the sun's come up. I shoved my hands in my pockets and made my way back to the clearing. Every step felt like it was taking me closer to
Starting point is 05:59:05 something I shouldn't be facing, but I pushed that thought down. I'd just grab my stuff and leave. Simple as that. The tent was still there, exactly like I'd left. it. Everything was in place, like it was all mocking me. I started packing up, my eyes darting around the clearing, half expecting to see a tall shadow in the distance. Every creek of branches made me flinch, every rustle of leaves sent a shiver through me. I couldn't shake the feeling that I was being watched, and it made my skin crawl. I stuffed the last of my gear into my bag, zipped it up, and threw it over my shoulder. And that's when I heard it, my name. clear as day, coming from somewhere in the trees.
Starting point is 05:59:49 My stomach dropped, and my heart felt like it stopped altogether. I stood there, frozen, listening. It came again, a whisper this time, almost like it was daring me to follow it. There was no mistaking it. It was my voice. The exact same tone, the same inflection, like it had been pulled straight from my own mouth. No, I whispered to myself, backing up. shaking my head. No, no, no, no. I turned, my feet moving before my brain had even made the decision,
Starting point is 06:00:24 and I bolted. I didn't care about making noise or watching where I stepped. I just had to get out of there. Branches snapped under my feet, and I could hear my name again, calling out from somewhere behind me, distorted and wrong, like a recording played backward. My chest felt tight, panic taking over, and I ran harder, my legs burning. the pack on my back bouncing and pulling me down, but I didn't stop. I broke through the tree line, nearly stumbling as I ran to my car. I yanked the door open, tossed my bag inside and jumped in, slamming the door behind me. My hands were shaking so badly that it took three tries to get the key into the ignition.
Starting point is 06:01:05 When the engine finally roared to life, I tore out of there, gravel flying as I sped down the road, my eyes darting to the rearview mirror. Nothing followed me. Nothing stepped out of the trees. But that didn't matter. The humming was still in my ears, even over the growl of the engine, and my name still echoed in my head. It felt like whatever it was it wasn't bound by those woods. It wasn't something I could just drive away from. I drove until I couldn't anymore, until I found myself at some roadside diner, exhausted and shaking. I parked, rested my head on the steering wheel and tried to catch my breath, but that feeling of being watched,
Starting point is 06:01:46 of something lurking just out of sight, wouldn't leave me. Even in that crowded diner parking lot, I felt it, like a shadow I couldn't escape. I never did go back for the rest of my gear. It wasn't worth it. I know it might sound cowardly, but some things aren't meant to be understood, let alone faced.
Starting point is 06:02:06 And whatever that thing was, I wanted no part of it. Not then, not ever again. For a long time I tried to convince myself it was all in my head, that maybe I'd just lost it out there in the woods, that fear and isolation had twisted everything until I couldn't tell what was real. But deep down, I knew better. The fear I felt, the way my own voice called out to me,
Starting point is 06:02:30 it was real. And sometimes, late at night, when the world goes quiet, I swear I can still hear it. The air was crisp when we pulled up to Todd Lake Recrector, Creation Center, and I remember thinking it was just about the perfect kind of evening for a campfire. The sky was starting to turn that beautiful golden color, and everything felt peaceful. I glanced over at my partner, James, and he gave me a little smile, like he knew exactly what I was thinking. We were both excited to relax, meet our new friends John and Mary,
Starting point is 06:03:12 and maybe even make a few memories worth talking about later. Little did I know that evening would turn out to be one I'd rather forget. John and Mary were already at their campsite when we got there. They waved us over, and I noticed right away how cheerful John seemed. He had this big, welcoming smile, and he kept talking about all the fun things they had planned, snacks, drinks, and of course, a walk to see the lake. Mary was quieter, sort of hanging back and fiddling with her sweater. I figured she was just a little shy or cold, but there was something in the way she could, kept glancing into the woods that made me feel, well, a bit off, like she was looking for something, or maybe even some one. I pushed the thought aside, telling myself I was just being
Starting point is 06:04:00 paranoid. We all settled around the campfire, and it was honestly a lot of fun for a while. We roasted marshmallows, and their dog splashed around in the lake for a bit, shaking water everywhere when he came back. John kept joking that we should all get in for a swim, even though it was way too cold. Mary just smiled, but it didn't quite reach her eyes. I could tell something was bothering her, but I didn't want to be rude by asking. Then, around 8.30, John clapped his hands together and said, All right, who's ready for that walk? He sounded really enthusiastic, like it was the highlight of his evening or something.
Starting point is 06:04:40 James and I exchanged a look, and he shrugged. It seemed harmless enough, just a quick walk to the lake and back before the sun disappeared completely. So we agreed. The path to the lake was narrow, with tall trees lining both sides, and it was already getting pretty dark. I remember thinking it was strange how quiet everything had gotten. The usual forest sounds, the birds, the insects, all seemed to just, stop. I laughed it off at first, trying to keep the mood light. Guess they're scared of us, I joked, but no one really responded. Mary was walking just ahead of us, and I could see her shoulders were tense. She kept glancing over her shoulder like she expected something to jump out of the woods. The fog started rolling
Starting point is 06:05:27 in as we got closer to the lake. It wasn't much at first, just a little mist, but soon it was thick enough that I couldn't see more than a few feet ahead. I reached out to grab James's hand, just to feel a bit more grounded, but my fingers brushed against nothing but air. I looked around, and suddenly it felt like everyone had disappeared. The trees, the path, even the fog. It all seemed to swirl around me, and my head started to feel heavy like I couldn't keep my eyes open. I tried to call out to James to marry to anyone,
Starting point is 06:06:00 but the words caught in my throat, and everything went black. When I woke up, I was lying on the ground, and it was pitch dark. For a second I didn't know where I was. The forest loomed around us, shadows twisting in the dim moonlight that managed to break through the fog. I realized I was half on top of James, who was still out cold, and panic hit me like a punch in the chest. I shook him, my hands trembling, and finally he groaned and opened his eyes. He looked just as confused as I felt.
Starting point is 06:06:32 What? Where are we? He mumbled. His voice barely above a whisper. I didn't have an answer. My head was pounding, and my stomach twisted painfully. Before I could even think, I was on my hands and knees retching into the dirt. James wasn't much better off. He staggered to his feet only to double over again. We had no idea where the campsite was. We didn't even know how far we'd gone. But the worst part, the part that still makes my skin crawl,
Starting point is 06:07:02 was the feeling that we weren't alone. It felt like a hundred eyes were on us, watching from the shadows, just out of sight. Every time I turned my head, I could have sworn I saw something move, a flash of pale skin, or a pair of eyes glinting in the dark. James must have felt it too, because he grabbed my arm, his grip tight, and said, We need to get out of here, now. The walk back was a blur.
Starting point is 06:07:29 We stumbled over roots and rocks, our breaths coming out in ragged gasps. I don't even know how long it took, but it felt like hours before we saw the faint glow of the campfire in the distance. When we finally stumbled into the campsite, I checked my phone. 2.30 a.m. 6 hours had passed since we left for that walk, but it felt like only minutes. John came out of the tent when we called, his face half lit by the dying fire. He looked at us with this weird, almost amused expression. When we asked about Mary, he just shrugged and said, She was with you, wasn't she? And that's when I knew, whatever had had happened to us out there. It wasn't over. When I came to, the first thing I felt was the cold.
Starting point is 06:08:15 It was seeping through my clothes, chilling me right down to the bone. I blinked, trying to make sense of what I was seeing, dark shapes, twisted branches above, and fog swirling all around me. I was lying on the ground, and for a second, I couldn't even remember why I was there. Everything felt wrong. James, I croaked, my voice barely a whisper. I tried to make. I tried to make. I was, move, but something heavy was pressing down on me. That's when I realized it was James. He was half lying on top of me completely still. Panic flared in my chest. James, I shook him, and after a moment he groaned and rolled off me. Relief washed over me, but only for a second. We were in the middle of the woods, and I had no idea how we'd gotten there. James rubbed his
Starting point is 06:09:03 head, his face scrunched up in confusion. Where? Where are we? He muttered. like he was trying to remember a dream that kept slipping away. I didn't have an answer. I could barely think straight myself. My head was pounding and my stomach felt like it was twisted in knots. Before I knew it, I was on my hands and knees retching into the dirt. It was awful. James wasn't much better.
Starting point is 06:09:27 He stumbled to his feet, only to double over again, groaning. The forest was dark, darker than it should have been. I mean, we hadn't planned to stay out that long. We were supposed to just take a quick walk, see the lake, and come right back. I glanced at my wrist, hoping my watch would tell me something that made sense, but the glass was cracked and the hands were stuck. It was like time itself had stopped. I fumbled for my phone, but it was dead too, even though I'd charged it before we left.
Starting point is 06:10:00 James finally straightened up, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. He looked around, his eyes wide and scared. We have to get back, he said his voice shaking. Where's the campsite? I didn't know. I tried to think, tried to remember which direction we'd come from, but everything was a blur. It felt like my thoughts were slipping away, like sand running through my fingers. The fog was thick, and it moved strangely, almost like it was alive, wrapping around the trees
Starting point is 06:10:32 and hiding everything else from view. And then there was that feeling, that's a little. awful, creeping feeling that we weren't alone. It felt like a hundred eyes were on us, watching from the shadows. Every time I turned my head, I thought I saw something move, just a flicker, something pale darting behind a tree. I grabbed James's arm, my heart pounding. We need to go, I said, trying to keep my voice steady. We can't stay here. We started walking, and honestly, it felt like we were just stumbling around. in circles. The forest seemed endless, every tree looking exactly the same, and the fog only got
Starting point is 06:11:14 thicker. The quiet was the worst part. There weren't any sounds, no birds, no rustling leaves, just our own footsteps and the crunch of twigs underfoot. It was like the whole forest was holding its breath, waiting for something. Suddenly, James stopped, his grip on my arm tightening. Did you hear that? he whispered. I froze, straining to listen. For a second, I thought it was just my imagination, but then I heard it too, a low hum, almost like a buzzing, coming from somewhere deep in the fog. It sent a shiver down my spine. It wasn't natural. It wasn't right. Let's go, James said, his voice barely more than a breath. We turned and started moving faster, almost running now. I didn't care if we were going the wrong
Starting point is 06:12:03 way. I just wanted to get away from that sound, away from whatever was out there. Finally, after what felt like hours, we saw it, a faint glow in the distance. The campsite. I could have cried from relief. We stumbled into the clearing, the fire nothing more than a few glowing embers now. I checked my phone again, and somehow it had restarted. 2.30 a.m. I stared at the screen, my brain struggling to make sense of it.
Starting point is 06:12:33 Six hours had passed since we left the campsite. Six hours. but it felt like no time at all. John? James called out, his voice cracking. John, are you here? A rustling sound came from the tent, and a moment later, John stepped out, rubbing his eyes.
Starting point is 06:12:54 He looked at us like we'd just woken him from a nap. What's going on? he asked, his tone almost annoyed. Why are you yelling? I couldn't believe it. We were shaking, covered in dirt, and John just stood there like nothing was wrong. Where's Mary? I asked, looking around. She wasn't there, and that awful feeling in my stomach just got worse.
Starting point is 06:13:17 John frowned, scratching his head. She was with you, he said, like it was obvious. His eyes looked past us, into the fog, and for just a second I saw something, something cold and empty in his gaze. She was supposed to be with you. my heart felt like it stopped i looked at james and he looked back at me his face pale something terrible had happened something we couldn't understand and it wasn't over not yet john's words hung in the air like a bad joke she was supposed to be with you he said his voice too calm too casual for what was happening i felt my heart skip a beat and i swear the world just stopped mary wasn't with us she was supposed to be with us She hadn't been with us since we left for that walk.
Starting point is 06:14:07 Where could she be? James and I looked at each other, and I could see the same fear in his eyes that I felt in my own. Something was really, really wrong. John, I said, trying to keep my voice from shaking. We have to find her. She could be lost out there. I pointed towards the dark woods, but John just stood there,
Starting point is 06:14:29 looking like he didn't quite understand what the big deal was. Yeah, sure, he finally. said, shrugging like we were talking about a missing flashlight or something. He didn't seem scared at all, which made me even more scared. How could he be so calm? I tried to push the thought away, but a small voice in my head kept asking, did John know more than he was letting on? We grabbed our flashlights, mine flickered, barely holding a charge, and we headed back down the trail. The fog had only gotten thicker, wrapping around the trees like a blanket. The air felt heavy. and every time I took a step, I felt like I was being watched. It was that same feeling from before,
Starting point is 06:15:11 that eerie sense that there were eyes on us, hidden just beyond the edge of the light. Mary? I called, my voice echoing in the silence. There was no answer. Nothing, just the crunch of leaves under our feet and the distant hum of something I still couldn't quite place. James was beside me, and I could tell he was trying to keep it together. but I knew him well enough to see how scared he was. His eyes kept darting around, and his grip on the flashlight was so tight his knuckles were turning white. John walked a little ahead of us, his pace steady,
Starting point is 06:15:49 like he wasn't worried at all. He didn't even call out for Mary. He just walked, swinging his flashlight from side to side, and every so often he'd glance back at us with that strange smile. It made my skin crawl. After what felt like forever, we finally saw her. Mary was lying on the ground, half covered in leaves, her clothes damp and her hair a mess. For a second I thought she was, well, I thought the worst.
Starting point is 06:16:19 My heart dropped into my stomach and I rushed over, kneeling beside her. Mary? I shook her gently and her eyes fluttered open. She looked at me, her face pale and her eyes unfocused like she didn't know where she was. Are you okay? I asked, my voice barely a whisper. She blinked, then looked around, confusion written all over her face. I... I don't remember, she mumbled, her voice weak. She tried to sit up, but she winced, holding her arm. That's when I noticed it, a small, dark bruise with a strange puncture mark in the center. I didn't say anything, but I felt a chill run down my spine. What could have done that?
Starting point is 06:17:00 And why didn't she remember anything? John finally walked over, and when he saw her, he just nodded, like it was no big deal. Guess you got lost, huh? He said, his voice light, almost amused. Mary looked at him, then at me, and I could see the fear in her eyes. She didn't remember, and she didn't know why she was out here. But John, he was acting like it was all some kind of joke. James helped Mary to her feet, and we started making our way back to the campsite.
Starting point is 06:17:33 She leaned on him, her steps shaky, and I stayed close, glancing back at John every few seconds. I couldn't shake the feeling that he was watching us, not like a friend, but like, something else, something I couldn't put into words. When we got back, Mary sat by the fire staring at the flames. She didn't say much, just kept rubbing her arm, her eyes distant. I wanted to ask her more, to try and figure out. out what had happened, but I was scared, scared of what she might say, scared of what I might find out. John, meanwhile, went back to his tent without another word. He zipped it up, and that was it.
Starting point is 06:18:15 No concern, no questions. Just, nothing. I looked at James, and he shook his head, his mouth set in a thin line. We both knew something wasn't right, but we didn't know what to do. All we knew was that we couldn't stay here, not after everything that had happened. We should leave, James whispered to me, his voice barely audible over the crackling of the fire. I nodded. It was the only thing that made sense. Whatever was going on, whatever had happened to us, to marry. It wasn't over, and I didn't want to stick around to find out what was next. That night, as we packed up our things, I couldn't shake the feeling that the forest was watching us, that whatever had been out there, whatever had taken those hours from us, was still out there.
Starting point is 06:19:03 hiding in the fog, waiting. And as we drove away, the headlights cutting through the mist. I couldn't help but glance back, half expecting to see something staring back at me from the shadows. But there was nothing, just the dark, endless woods. We didn't waste any time. As soon as the sun started to peek over the horizon, we packed our things. I could barely think straight.
Starting point is 06:19:28 The whole night felt like a twisted dream, but the cold ache in my bones and the bruises on Mary's, his arm were real enough to remind me it wasn't just in my head. Whatever had happened to us out there, I just knew we had to get away. James and I didn't even talk about it. We just moved in sync, packing up the sleeping bags, tossing stuff into the trunk of the car. John watched us from a distance, his eyes following our every move. He didn't offer to help.
Starting point is 06:19:57 He didn't say a word. He just stood there, that strange, almost amused smile still on his feet. face. It gave me the creeps, and every time I looked at him, a shiver went down my spine. I kept thinking, why isn't he worried? Why doesn't he care? Mary was quiet, sitting on the edge of the campsite, her knees pulled up to her chest. She looked like she was still in shock, her eyes fixed on some spot in the distance, like she was seeing something none of us could. I wanted to comfort her, to tell her that everything was going to be all right, but I couldn't bring myself to say the words, because honestly, I didn't know if they were true. As we finally got
Starting point is 06:20:38 everything into the car, I looked over at James, and he gave me a nod. It was time to go. I walked over to Mary and put a hand on her shoulder. Mary, we're leaving, I said gently. She blinked like she was coming back from somewhere far away, and slowly got up. She didn't even look at John. She just climbed into the back seat without a word. James started the car, and we pulled away from the campsite. I watched as the fog seemed to close in behind us, swallowing the sight and John with it. He didn't wave. He didn't try to stop us. He just stood there, watching us leave, until he was nothing more than a shadow in the distance. The drive back home was silent. None of us knew what to say, and honestly, I don't think we even had the energy to try.
Starting point is 06:21:28 My head was spinning, trying to make sense of everything that had happened. The missing hours, the strange sounds in the woods, the way John had acted. It all felt like pieces of a puzzle that didn't quite fit together. And the worst part was, I had this awful feeling that we'd only just scratched the surface. When we finally got home, I felt this wave of relief, like a weight had been lifted off my shoulders. But it didn't last long. The moment we stepped inside, the fear came rushing. back. The walls of our home, which had always felt safe, suddenly felt thin, like they couldn't
Starting point is 06:22:04 keep out whatever was lurking out there. James tried to make us some tea, something warm to calm our nerves, but his hands were shaking so badly that he spilled the water all over the counter. He cursed under his breath, and I could see how scared he really was. It made my heart ache. I walked over, took the kettle from him, and set it down. It's okay, I whispered. We're okay now. But even as I said it, I didn't really believe it. I could still feel that awful sense of being watched, like eyes were on me, even here, even now. I tried to shake it off, but it clung to me like the fog from the woods. Later that day, James got a call. It was from John. He didn't answer, and I was glad. I didn't want to hear John's voice. I didn't want to hear whatever excuse he had
Starting point is 06:22:53 for what had happened. But then the voicemail came through, and curiosity got the better of me. I played it on speaker, and John's voice filled the room. He sounded, different, almost like he was laughing. Hey, you guys, he said, his tone light and casual, like nothing had happened. You should really just forget about last night, okay? It was just a little too much fun, that's all. No need to make a big deal out of it. There was a pause.
Starting point is 06:23:24 And then, almost like he was talking to someone else, he added, They won't remember. They never do. I felt the blood drained from my face. James looked at me, his eyes wide, and I knew we were both thinking the same thing. What did he mean by that? They never do. Who were they? And what exactly had we forgotten?
Starting point is 06:23:45 The worst part came a few days later. We were still trying to put everything behind us, trying to move on when James' phone rang again. This time, it wasn't a call. It was a message from an unknown number. It was a picture of his phone, shattered, lying in the dirt, between two campsites, campsites five and six, far from where we'd been staying. We hadn't even realized his phone was missing. We both stared at the photo, and I felt that cold, creeping fear all over again.
Starting point is 06:24:16 I couldn't help but wonder what had been recorded on that phone. What had we seen? What had we forgotten? That was the last straw. James and I decided we couldn't stay. in that town, not anywhere near John or Mary or those woods. We packed up everything, and by the time spring came around, we were gone. But even now, miles away, I still can't shake the feeling, the sense that we barely escaped something far worse than we can understand. I see it in my dreams
Starting point is 06:24:47 sometimes, shadows in the fog, whispers that I can't quite hear, and John's face, smiling that cold, empty smile. And I know deep down that whatever happened that night isn't over, not really. We were already running late by the time we finally reached the beach house. The roads leading here had been confusing, and the rain didn't help at all. The directions on the map felt like a joke, and honestly, I was starting to wonder if this getaway was worth all the hassle. But as soon as we pulled into the gravel driveway, I took a deep breath. It looked quaint, I guess, and kind of what you'd expect from an isolated vacation spot by the beach, white paint chipping off the wood,
Starting point is 06:25:41 acute front porch, and lots of seagrass swaying in the wind. See, we made it, Maddie said, her smile trying to lift the mood. I smiled back even though something didn't feel right. I chalked it up to exhaustion. Ethan was already asleep in the back seat, hugging his stuffed dinosaur, and I hated to wake him. But we were here. Might as well try to enjoy it.
Starting point is 06:26:03 it, right? Inside, the house was mostly cozy, but something about it just felt. Off. There were all these old glass bottles lined up on shelves, each filled with different colors of sand. There must have been dozens of them, and everyone was labeled in this neat, handwritten script. I didn't pay much attention to them at first, though. I was more focused on getting our bags inside before the rain picked up again. We set Ethan down in the bedroom that had been set up for kids, brightly painted walls, a small dresser, and a rocking chair in the corner. It had a kind of worn-out charm to it.
Starting point is 06:26:44 That's when Ethan spotted it, a large rag doll sitting right on the bed. Its red yarn hair and stitched smile gave it this weirdly cheerful look, but there was something about its button eyes that made me pause. Look, Daddy. Ethan grinned, grabbing the doll. She's going to be my friend. Her name's Miss Molly. Maddie gave me a shrug and a smile.
Starting point is 06:27:08 Guess Miss Molly's coming along for the vacation. I forced a chuckle. Sure, buddy. Miss Molly's great. Still, as we unpacked and got settled, I couldn't shake the feeling that something was a little strange. The house had that salty, damp smell like most places near the ocean, but there was also something metallic in the air,
Starting point is 06:27:29 like rust or old nail. Every time I glanced at those sand bottles on the shelves, I felt like they were almost watching us. I know that sounds silly, but they just seemed out of place. Later we decided to make dinner. Maddie took charge of the kitchen, and I helped where I could, mostly keeping Ethan busy. We laughed, we ate, and things started to feel normal again. Maybe I'd been overthinking it. Maybe I was just tired. But right after dinner, while we were cleaning up, Ethan said something that made me freeze.
Starting point is 06:28:03 Miss Molly says we shouldn't go near the lighthouse, he mumbled, staring at the doll with wide eyes. I exchanged a glance with Maddie, who raised an eyebrow. What lighthouse? she asked. We hadn't even mentioned it to Ethan. The one outside, she says it's bad. Well, that's just your imagination, buddy, I said, my voice sounding more confident than I felt. but inside something was twisting. How did he know there was a lighthouse?
Starting point is 06:28:32 We hadn't even left the house since we arrived. Maddie brushed it off, telling Ethan it was just a game, and soon we put him to bed. He insisted on keeping Miss Molly with him, and I figured it wasn't worth the argument. I tucked him in, gave him a kiss on the forehead, and turned off the light. He looked so peaceful, clutching that doll,
Starting point is 06:28:53 but for some reason it left a nod in my stile. After Ethan fell asleep, Maddie and I sat on the couch, trying to unwind. The wind was picking up outside, and the house seemed to creak with every gust. We tried to watch something on TV, but the signal was bad out here. Eventually we just let the sound of the rain fill the room. I don't know when I fell asleep, but I remember waking up with a start. The room was dark, and everything was quiet. Too quiet.
Starting point is 06:29:24 It took me a second to realize what had woken me. There was a noise, something soft and rhythmic, a tapping sound. I blinked, trying to shake off the sleep. Tap, tap, tap. It was coming from the window. I turned to Maddie, but she was still asleep, her head resting on the arm of the couch. Carefully, I stood up moving towards the window.
Starting point is 06:29:48 My heart pounded in my ears as I peered through the glass. There, just beyond the port, was a figure, a man standing in the rain, staring right at me. He didn't move, didn't say anything, just stood there, his face shadowed under the brim of a hat. I swallowed hard, feeling a chill run down my spine. Who was he? What did he want? For a second I thought I saw his mouth move, like he was trying to say something. I reached for the latch, my hand trembling, but then the figure turned and walked away, disappearing into the dark. I stood there, frozen, my breath catching in my throat.
Starting point is 06:30:34 I wanted to wake Maddie, to tell her what I'd seen, but something stopped me. Maybe it was fear, maybe it was disbelief, maybe I just wanted to pretend it hadn't happened. But as I stood there, staring out into the rain, I knew one thing for sure. something wasn't right here and whatever it was it had just begun the rest of the evening went by without much excitement but i couldn't shake the image of that man standing outside in the rain who was he why was he just staring at us like that every time i thought about it i got this weird feeling in my chest like something was pressing down on me but mattie seemed calm so i tried to be too i mean maybe he was just some local guy who got lost in the storm At least, that's what I told myself. After we put Ethan to bed, I made sure to lock all the doors and double-check the windows. I even peaked out the front window one last time, but there was no one out there, just the rain falling on the empty porch, and the shadows cast by the swaying trees.
Starting point is 06:31:40 Everything was still, but in a way that made me feel uneasy, like the quiet was holding its breath. Maddie had already drifted off on the couch, so I decided to join her. The wind was picking up again, making the house creak, and honestly, I was tired. I wrapped a blanket around my shoulders, but sleep wouldn't come. My eyes kept flicking over to the windows, half expecting to see that man again. But after a while, I guess exhaustion won, and I finally dozed off. I don't know how much time passed before I woke up. It was one of those moments where you're not sure if you really heard something or if you dreamed it.
Starting point is 06:32:21 But there it was again, this soft, rhythmic tapping sound. Tap, tap, tap. It was coming from the front door this time. I sat up slowly, my heart thudding in my chest. The room was dark, and the only light was from the moon filtering through the curtains. Maddie was still asleep, curled up on the couch. For a second, I thought about waking her, but something stopped me. I didn't want to scare her if it was nothing.
Starting point is 06:32:48 I got up and moved towards the door, trying to be as quiet as I could. The tapping continued, steady and patient. Tap, tap, tap, tap. My stomach was in knots, and I felt like I could hear every beat of my heart in my ears. I took a deep breath and peeked through the peephole. It was him, the man from the beach. He was standing there, his face half hidden under his hat, his clothes soaked from the rain.
Starting point is 06:33:16 I couldn't make out his expression, but his eyes. seemed wide, almost frantic. I felt a chill run down my spine. What did he want? Slowly, I unlocked the door, just enough to crack it open. The air was cold and wet, and I could hear the rain more clearly now. What do you want? I whispered, my voice barely audible. The man leaned in closer, his eyes locking onto mine. He opened his mouth, and I had to strain to hear him over the wind. She's listening to your son through the doll, he said, his voice hoarse and urgent. I blinked, not sure I'd heard him right. What, I asked, but before I could say anything else, he turned and ran, just like that. He bolted down the porch steps and disappeared into the darkness, leaving me standing there with the
Starting point is 06:34:07 door half open and my heart racing. I slammed the door shut, my hands shaking as I locked it again. I took a step back, trying to make sense of what just happened. She's listening. She's listening. to your son through the doll. What did that even mean? I turned around, my eyes immediately landing on the hallway that led to Ethan's room. I felt this sudden rush of panic, like I needed to check on him right away. I hurried down the hallway, my footsteps barely making a sound on the old wooden floor. When I opened the door to Ethan's room, everything looked normal. He was asleep, his small chest rising and falling gently. Miss Molly was there, tucked under his arm, her button eyes staring up the ceiling. I felt my stomach twist. There was something about those eyes that made my skin crawl.
Starting point is 06:34:55 I walked over to the bed, trying not to wake Ethan. I reached out and carefully pulled the doll away from him. He stirred a little, but didn't wake up. I held Miss Molly in my hands, turning her over, trying to see if there was anything unusual about her. She just looked like an old rag doll, worn fabric, stitched smile, nothing strange. But I couldn't ignore what the man had said. I carried the doll back into the living room and set her down on the coffee table. Then I went to the kitchen and grabbed a pair of scissors. I hesitated for a second, my hand hovering over the doll.
Starting point is 06:35:32 I felt ridiculous, like I was overreacting to some weird guy's ramblings. But then I thought about Ethan, and that was enough to push me forward. I cut into the fabric, the stitches coming apart easily, stuffing spilled out onto the table, soft and white. I kept going, my hands trembling as I opened the doll completely. There was nothing inside, just more stuffing, no hidden devices, no strange notes, nothing. I let out a shaky breath, feeling both relieved and frustrated. Maybe the guy was just crazy, maybe this whole thing was just some bizarre misunderstanding. I gathered up the stuffing and the torn fabric and stuffed it all into a plastic bag,
Starting point is 06:36:17 shoving it into the cupboard under the sink. I didn't want Ethan to see Miss Molly like that in the morning. I went back to the living room, collapsing onto the couch next to Maddie. She stirred a little, mumbling something in her sleep, and I pulled the blanket over both of us. I tried to relax, to let the sound of the rain lull me back to sleep, but I couldn't stop thinking about that man. His eyes, the way he'd looked at me,
Starting point is 06:36:43 It was like he was trying to warn me, like he was scared for us. I didn't know what to believe, but one thing was for sure. I wasn't going to let my guard down, not now, not until I knew we were safe. The next morning, everything seemed a little less scary in the daylight. You know how it is. Sometimes when the sun's up, all the things that kept you up at night start to feel a bit silly. I was almost starting to convince myself that maybe I'd imagined half of what happened last night. Almost. But then Ethan's cough started up again, and Maddie and I realized we'd left his
Starting point is 06:37:19 inhaler back at the house after we went to the beach. The weather had turned nasty again, rain slamming down, wind whipping around, and there was no way I could let Ethan go without his inhaler, especially since it looked like his breathing was getting worse. So I offered to drive back alone and grab it. Are you sure you'll be okay? Maddie asked, her eyes searching mine. I could see she was worried, but I forced a smile, trying to keep things calm. I'll be fine. It's just a quick drive there and back, I won't take long, I said, giving her hand a squeeze. Honestly, though, I wasn't sure if I was saying it to reassure her, or myself.
Starting point is 06:37:58 The drive back felt different. The road was more like a maze of muddy puddles, and every so often, the rain would lash against the windshield so hard I could barely see. The wipers were working overtime, and even though I kept telling myself I was being ridiculous, I couldn't shake the feeling that I was being watched. It was that same prickling sensation, like someone's eyes were on me, just beyond where I could see. When I finally pulled up in front of the house, I let out a shaky breath.
Starting point is 06:38:29 It looked just like we'd left it, quiet, empty. But the air felt heavy, like it was holding some secret I wasn't in on. I stepped out of the car, the rain instantly soaking through my jacket, and jogged to the front door. That's when I saw it. The door wasn't closed all the way. It was cracked open, just a little. My stomach did a nervous flip. I was sure I'd locked it last night.
Starting point is 06:38:55 I remembered checking it, double-checking it even. I swallowed, trying to steady myself. Maybe the wind had pushed it open. Yeah, that had to be it, right? I pushed the door open the rest of the way stepping inside. The house was cold, colder than it should have been, and the air felt damp. I glanced around, everything looking mostly the same, except there were muddy footprints. They started right by the door, leading down the hallway towards the stairs.
Starting point is 06:39:25 I felt my heart start to pound. Someone had been here. Someone had walked right into our house. I had this urge to run, to get out of there and call the police from the car, but I had to get Ethan's inhaler first. I couldn't leave without it. I moved as quietly as I could, my ears straining for any sound.
Starting point is 06:39:43 I could hear the rain outside, the wind rattling the windows, but inside. Silence. I followed the footprints down the hallway, my eyes fixed on the stairs ahead. They led right up to the second floor towards the bedrooms. I reached the base of the stairs and hesitated.
Starting point is 06:40:01 Every part of me was screaming that I shouldn't go up there, that I should just turn around and get out. But I needed that inhaler, and I needed to know what, if anything, was still upstairs. Slowly I started up the stairs, each creaky step sounding way too loud in the silence. When I reached the top, I could see the hallway stretched out in front of me,
Starting point is 06:40:22 leading to Ethan's room. The door was open, just like we'd left it, but something felt wrong. The air felt thick, like I was waiting through it. I took a deep breath and stepped towards the room, room. When I looked inside, I almost thought I was imagining it. Miss Molly, the rag doll we'd ripped apart last night, was gone. I'd put the pieces in a bag, stuffed it under the kitchen sink. But the bed was empty. There was no bag, no stuffing, no doll. My heart started pounding faster,
Starting point is 06:40:55 my throat tightening. Someone had been here, and they'd taken the doll. I turned and hurried back down the stairs, my hands shaking as I pulled out my phone. I needed to call the police, tell them someone had broken in, that they were still out there. I stumbled out of the house, slamming the door behind me, and practically ran to the car. I locked the doors and dialed 911, my fingers trembling. 9-1-1, what's your emergency? The operator's voice crackled through, calm and professional. I tried to steady my voice, but it still came out shaking. shaky. Someone broke into our house. I think they're still here. I... I don't know what they want, but they took something. I need help. The operator asked me to stay on the line, and I could hear
Starting point is 06:41:44 my own breathing, fast and uneven. I kept my eyes on the house, half expecting to see someone come out, but no one did. The rain kept falling, and the house stood there, dark and empty. It felt like forever before the police finally arrived. Their blue and red lights cutting through the rain. Two officers got out of their car, and I waved to get their attention. They nodded, one of them gesturing for me to stay put while they went inside. I watched them go in, disappearing behind the door. My fingers tapped nervously against the steering wheel. I wanted to believe that they'd find nothing, that it had all been in my head, but deep down, I knew that wasn't true. After what felt like ages, the officers came back out. They didn't look alarmed or worried, just confused.
Starting point is 06:42:35 One of them walked over to my window, and I rolled it down. We didn't find anyone inside, sir, he said. His expression almost sympathetic. Nothing seems to be disturbed. I opened my mouth to argue, to tell him about the footprints and the missing doll, but the words got stuck in my throat. They wouldn't understand, and maybe they wouldn't believe me anyway. I nodded slowly, feeling a mix of relief and dread. Thanks, I managed to say. We're leaving today. I don't think we'll be staying here any longer.
Starting point is 06:43:09 The officer gave me a nod, and they both headed back to their car. I watched them drive away, the house still standing there behind me, its secrets hidden inside. I took a deep breath and started the car. It was time to go. to get Maddie and Ethan and leave this place far behind. Whatever was happening here, I wasn't sticking around to find out. After the police left, I just sat there in the car for a minute, trying to calm myself down. I knew one thing for sure.
Starting point is 06:43:41 We had to get out of this place. Whatever was happening here, it wasn't safe for us, and I wasn't about to take any more chances with my family. I took a deep breath and turned the key, the engine roaring to life. Time to go back and get Maddie and Ethan. The drive back to the other house felt longer than it should have, my nerves on edge the whole time. Every rustle of the wind, every flicker of a shadow,
Starting point is 06:44:06 made me grip the steering wheel tighter. I kept telling myself that it would be okay once we got out of here, once we were far away from this place, but it was hard to believe it. When I finally pulled into the driveway, Maddie was already at the door, holding Ethan close. She looked relieved when she saw me. me, and I couldn't blame her. I waved to let her know everything was okay, or at least as okay as it could be, and I quickly got out of the car. We need to pack up and go now, I said, trying to keep my voice
Starting point is 06:44:38 steady. The police didn't find anything, but I'm not taking any chances. Let's get out of here before the storm gets worse. Maddie nodded, and we both went inside. Ethan was tired and confused, clinging to Maddie as we packed our things. I tried to move quickly, throwing clothes into bags and gathering everything we needed. I wanted to be out of that house as fast as possible. Every minute we stayed felt like a minute too long. I headed upstairs to grab Ethan's toys from his room. The air felt even colder up there, like the house was trying to keep us in. I shook off the thought and went straight to his room, my eyes scanning the shelves and the floor. That's when I noticed something that made my stomach drop. One of the sand bottles was missing. There had been a line
Starting point is 06:45:26 of them on the mantelpiece, each bottle a different shape, filled with sand in different colors. But now, the one shaped like a lighthouse, was gone. I stood there, staring at the empty space, my mind racing. Who would take it, and why? A chill ran down my spine, and I felt my heart start pounding again. I couldn't ignore it. Something was wrong here, something that went beyond just an old doll and a strange man in the rain. I had no idea who had been in this house or what they wanted, but it was clear now that we were being watched, and they'd left with something of ours. I grabbed Ethan's toys, shoving them into a bag, and hurried back downstairs. I could feel the weight of the empty space on the mantelpiece, like it was calling after me,
Starting point is 06:46:12 but I ignored it. I had to focus on getting my family out of here. Nothing else mattered. When I reached the living room, Maddie was zipping up her suitcase, her eyes wide with worry. What's wrong? she asked, her voice soft, but I could hear the fear underneath. I hesitated for a moment. Should I tell her about the missing bottle? Would it make things worse knowing that someone had been inside again? But then I realized that she needed to know. She deserved to know why I was so scared. One of the sand bottles is gone, I said. My voice was. barely above a whisper. The one shaped like a lighthouse. I don't know who took it or why, but someone's been in here. We need to leave now. Maddie's face went pale and she nodded,
Starting point is 06:47:00 pulling Ethan closer. Okay, let's go. We carried our bags out to the car, the wind whipping around us as we loaded everything in. I kept looking over my shoulder, half expecting to see that man again, standing in the distance, watching us. But there was no one there, just the empty house and the rain-soaked landscape. Once everything was packed, we all got into the car, and I started the engine. I glanced back at Ethan, who was sitting in his car seat, holding his stuffed dinosaur. He looked up at me with sleepy eyes, and I forced a smile. We're going home, buddy, I said, trying to sound cheerful. No more spooky beach house, just us, okay? Ethan nodded, but he didn't say anything. I could tell he was still confused, but he
Starting point is 06:47:47 trusted us, and that was all I needed. I turned back to the road, my hands gripping the wheel as I pulled out of the driveway. The house grew smaller in the rearview mirror, but the unease didn't leave me. As we drove away, I couldn't help but glance back one last time. I knew it was just a house, four walls, and a roof, nothing more, but it felt like it was watching us leave, its secrets hidden behind those peeling walls. The missing sand bottle, the man in the rain, the eerie warnings, they all weighed on me, like a puzzle I couldn't solve. I wanted to believe that we were safe now, that whatever had been there couldn't reach us anymore. But deep down, I knew that wasn't true. The missing bottle was out there somewhere, and whoever had taken it, whoever had been watching
Starting point is 06:48:40 us, was still out there too. I looked over at Maddie, who was staring out the window, her face lined with worry. I reached over, taking her hand in mine, and she looked at me, giving me a small, tired smile. I tried to smile back, but it felt forced. Everything's going to be okay, I said, though I wasn't sure if I believed it, we're going to be fine. Maddie nodded, but I could see the doubt in her eyes. I squeezed her. I squeezed her, hand, focusing on the road ahead. The rain kept falling and the wind howled, but we were moving forward, and that was all that mattered, for now at least. I wasn't sure what I'd expected of Hollow Woods, but this wasn't it. You know how some places just feel wrong, like they weren't meant
Starting point is 06:49:37 for you? That's what I felt the moment we parked the car and stepped into the thick, dense forest. It was something in the way the shadows seemed to stretch further than they should, like they wanted to pull us in. But Mike, well, he didn't seem to notice. He was grinning ear to ear, like he was born to be out here, surrounded by nothing but trees and the promise of something unknown. Come on, Lucy, Mike called, hoisting his pack higher on his shoulders. It's not that far. Lucy rolled her eyes, tugging at her backpack straps. I could tell she wasn't thrilled. Her eyes had that look that said, I'd rather be anywhere else but here, though she wasn't quite ready to say it out loud. I gave her a smile, trying to ease her nerves, but it felt thin.
Starting point is 06:50:24 Something about the place had my own anxiety brewing too. I just wasn't ready to admit it either. The others, Brian, always relaxed, and Sam, practical to a fault, were already chatting ahead, their voices cutting through the otherwise dead silence of the woods. Even the birds seemed to be holding their breath, but maybe that was just my imagination. About half an hour in, we see, stumbled across this old well, set back a bit from the path. It looked ancient, the stone covered in green moss, vines tangled around it like nature was trying to hide it from view, and the water, well, it was the oddest thing, clear enough that you could see the bottom, but with this weird, greenish glow, like it was reflecting light from somewhere that shouldn't exist. Wow, Mike said,
Starting point is 06:51:11 leaning in a little too close for my liking. This is kind of cool, isn't it? Lucy didn't think so? Lucy didn't her feet were aching. I could see her wintzing with every step. So when she plopped herself down beside the well and dipped her feet in the water, I couldn't say I blamed her. But I didn't like it, not one bit. Something about that well made my skin crawl. Lucy, I said, trying to keep my voice light. Maybe don't. She just looked at me, tired and done with it all. It's fine, Kate. Honestly, it's just water. But it wasn't. I couldn't put my finger on why. but every part of me screamed that there was something wrong with it. The way it glowed, the way the air seemed colder the closer you got.
Starting point is 06:51:55 But I kept my mouth shut because, well, what do you say when everyone else thinks it's just your imagination? After a while we moved on, though Lucy seemed different, quieter, like something had drained the life out of her. The others didn't notice. They were too busy laughing at Mike's ridiculous stories. But I noticed. And the further we went, the heavier the feeling. got, like the woods were pressing in on us, watching. By the time we reached Raven Hollow, the light was fading. We set up camp, and for a little while, things felt almost normal.
Starting point is 06:52:30 The creek nearby was beautiful, sparkling in the sunset, and the tension that had been nodding up my stomach seemed to ease. We even laughed, really laughed, like we'd done a hundred times before. And for a moment, I almost forgot about the well, about that strange, cold dread. Almost. That night, after the fire had burned down and we'd all settled in our tents, I lay awake, staring at the ceiling of fabric above me. Lucy was next to me, but she hadn't said a word since she'd gone to bed. Just lay there, still and silent, her breathing shallow. I turned over, trying to sleep, but that feeling wouldn't leave me. Something was off. Something was wrong. And then I heard it. The faintest whisper, like a voice carried on the wind, coming from somewhere deep in the woods.
Starting point is 06:53:22 I held my breath, listening. It sounded almost like Lucy, but it wasn't her. I knew that with a certainty that made my blood run cold. The whisper stopped, and all I could hear was the rustle of leaves outside and the pounding of my own heart. I wanted to wake the others, to say something, anything, but I didn't. Instead, I closed my eyes tight, praying for morning, praying that it was all just my imagination. But deep down, I knew it wasn't. I'd hoped a good night's sleep would make everything feel normal again. Funny how hope can feel so misplaced when you're staring at a nightmare.
Starting point is 06:54:01 I woke up to Mike's face, pale as a ghost, hovering over me, his eyes wide with something I'd only ever seen on people who've stared death in the face. Pure, unfiltered fear. Kate, he whispered, shaking my shoulder. You need to come with me. It's Brian. It's bad. I blinked at him, not quite awake, but the look in his eyes pulled me upright like a fish on a line. I didn't even put on my shoes. I just followed him out of the tent, heart pounding, every instinct telling me that whatever was waiting was going to change everything.
Starting point is 06:54:37 We crossed the clearing in a rush, the early morning mist clinging to our legs, damp and heavy. I could hear the creek before I saw it, the soft murmur of water over stones, usually so peaceful, now felt sinister like it was hiding something from me. And it was. When I saw Brian, everything inside me went cold. He was face down, half in the water, his body lying there like a discarded rag doll. His skin was covered in dark bruises, and there, just beside him, was a jagged rock, its edge smeared with blood. It wasn't supposed to be like this. This was supposed to be a fun trip, a break from the city.
Starting point is 06:55:20 But there he was, and I knew that whatever fun we thought we'd have was over. God, I whispered, stepping closer, though every part of me wanted to run the other way. What happened, Mike? He didn't answer, just shook his head, his eyes glued to Brian. I could feel the panic rising in my chest, like a scream that wouldn't come out. I turned and ran back to the campsite, hoping to find Sam and Lucy, praying this was some kind of sick, horrible accident. But when I got there, the scene was worse than I could have imagined. The tent was torn, like something had ripped it apart from the inside. There was no sign of Sam, only.
Starting point is 06:56:02 Only the remnants of our gear scattered around and drag marks, marks that led away from the campsite deeper into the woods. I stood there frozen. My mind raced, trying to piece it together. Where was Sam? And Lucy? Where was she? I turned to Mike, who'd followed me back, his face as white as mine felt. We both knew we had to do something, but neither of us could seem to move.
Starting point is 06:56:26 We have to find them, I said, my voice sounding small, even to me. We can't just, I know, Mike interrupted, and there was a quiver in his voice I'd never heard before. He looked around, then grabbed a flashlight from the ground. Come on, we can't stay here. We followed the trail, my heart pounding louder with each step. I couldn't shake the feeling that we were being watched. Every rustle, every snap of a twig made me jump, my eyes darting from shadow to shadow.
Starting point is 06:56:55 The trees felt alive, like they were closing in on us, whispering secrets I didn't want to to hear. When we reached the clearing, I almost couldn't believe what I saw. Lucy was standing there, but she wasn't Lucy, not really. Her skin was an awful, sickly green, her eyes empty of anything I recognized. She was hunched over something, her hand stained with red. It took me a second to realize it was Sam, lying at her feet. Lucy, I called out, my voice breaking, but she didn't even flinch. She turned to us. Her face twisted into something I couldn't understand, and I knew right then that whatever was left of my friend wasn't really her anymore. Mike grabbed my arm, pulling me back, and we ran. I don't remember much about that moment, just the sheer terror, the feeling that if I turned around,
Starting point is 06:57:47 I'd see her right behind us. And maybe I did hear her, those same whispers from the night before, chasing us through the dark. We reached the car, panting, my hands. hands shaking as I fumbled for the keys. But it was too late. Lucy, or whatever she'd become, was there, and before I knew it, she had Mike, dragging him into the underbrush. His scream echoed through the trees, a sound that'll never leave me. I knew I should have helped him, but I didn't. I turned the key, the engine roared to life, and I drove, tears blurring my vision, my heart breaking with every mile that took me further from him. I was like, alone. It's funny how that word doesn't quite hit until you're really, truly by yourself,
Starting point is 06:58:35 surrounded by nothing but dark woods, and silence so thick it feels alive. The car sped down the dirt road, tires kicking up dust behind me, but I couldn't hear a thing over my own heartbeat. It echoed in my ears, pounding out a rhythm of guilt and fear. Mike was gone, and it was my fault. I kept driving, my hands white-knuckled on the steering wheel. The forest felt endless, the trees blurring together like they were all conspiring to keep me there, to swallow me whole. I didn't even know where I was going,
Starting point is 06:59:11 just that I needed to get away, away from Lucy, or whatever she was now. I thought about stopping, about turning around, but the memory of Mike's scream stopped me cold. It was like I could still hear it, echoing in the back of my mind,
Starting point is 06:59:27 mixing with those whispers I'd heard the night before. They were still there, buried under everything else, and it made me sick to my stomach. After what felt like hours, the road finally opened up, the trees thinning out until I could see the early morning sky again. I pulled over, my hands shaking so badly I could barely put the car in park. I had to catch my breath, had to think. I leaned back in my seat, closing my eyes.
Starting point is 06:59:54 Maybe if I just stayed here for a minute, I could figure out what to do. I wasn't ready to go to the police, not yet. How could I explain any of this? My friends were dead, and Lucy. How could I even begin to describe what she'd become? I opened my eyes and looked out the window, my gaze drifting to the tree line. And that's when I saw it, a movement, just at the edge of the woods, a flicker of green like the moss on that old well. My chest tightened, and I felt that familiar dread creeping up my spine. fine. It was Lucy, or at least it looked like her. She was standing there half hidden in the shadows, her eyes fixed on me. They were empty, hollow, like they were seeing right through me. My breath caught in my throat, and I fumbled with the keys. My finger's suddenly too clumsy
Starting point is 07:00:46 to do anything right. Come on, come on, I muttered, my voice barely a whisper. The engine roared to life and I slammed my foot on the gas, the car lurching forward. In the rearview mirror I saw her, standing there watching me go. Her eyes glowed faintly in the dim light, and even though I was getting farther away, I could still feel them on me, like a weight pressing down on my chest. I drove until I hit the nearest town, my hands still shaking, my mind spinning with everything that had happened. I pulled into the parking lot of a diner, the neon sign flickering above me, and finally let myself breathe. I needed help.
Starting point is 07:01:29 I needed someone to tell me that I wasn't losing my mind. The door to the diner jingled as I stepped inside, the warmth and the smell of coffee hitting me all at once. A waitress looked up, giving me a polite smile, but it faded when she saw my face. I must have looked like hell, pale, wild-eyed, like I'd just seen a ghost, and maybe I had. Are you okay, hun? she asked, her voice gentle, and I wanted to tell her everything, about Brian, Sam, Mike, about Lucy and the well. But all that came out was, I need to call the police. She nodded, reaching behind the counter to grab the phone, and I sank down onto a stool,
Starting point is 07:02:09 my head in my hands. The whispers were still there, just under the surface, and I couldn't shake the feeling that it wasn't over, not by a long shot. The police arrived a few minutes later, two officers, both of them looking more confused than concerned. I tried to explain, but the words felt wrong, too strange to make sense. They nodded, took notes, but I could see it in their eyes. They didn't believe me, and honestly, I couldn't blame them. After they left, I sat there, staring out the window at the empty street. The sky was getting lighter, the dawn breaking over the town.
Starting point is 07:02:49 but it didn't bring me any comfort. I knew she was still out there, Lucy, or whatever had taken her place. And as I sat there, the whispers grew louder, until they were all I could hear. I never thought I'd be so happy to see the inside of a police station. But there I was,
Starting point is 07:03:07 hands trembling as I gripped the edge of the counter. The officer behind the desk looked at me like he couldn't quite figure out what I was doing there, like I was some ghost that had wandered in from the cold. and honestly I felt like one. I'd barely slept, barely eaten. My clothes were still damp from the woods, and my face. I hadn't even looked in a mirror, but I knew it wasn't a pretty sight.
Starting point is 07:03:31 Ma'am, you need to slow down, he said, holding up a hand. His voice was calm, like he was used to dealing with people on the edge, and I realized that's exactly what I was. You're saying there's bodies? Yes, I croaked, nodding, my throat raw. My friends, they're dead. Brian, Sam, and Mike. The names felt heavy on my tongue, like saying them out loud made it all more real.
Starting point is 07:03:59 And it did. They were gone. And Lucy. I couldn't even bring myself to say her name. The officer's eyes flick to his partner standing a few feet away. They shared a look, one I knew well. It was the kind of look that said, This lady's lost it.
Starting point is 07:04:14 but I wasn't crazy. I knew what I'd seen. Please, you have to go out there. There's something. Someone's still out there. It's not safe. He sighed, picking up the phone, and I heard him call for a team to check out Hollow Woods. It felt like an eternity before he hung up, giving me a slow nod. Okay, we'll take a look. Why don't you sit down? Get some water. I nodded, but I couldn't sit. I paced the small waiting area, the walls feeling like they were closing in. Every noise, the clink of a coffee mug, the shuffle of papers, felt too loud, too sharp. My head was spinning, and that's when I realized.
Starting point is 07:04:55 The whispers hadn't stopped. They were quieter, muffled, but they were still there, just beneath the surface of everything else. I turned, staring at the window. The sky was bright now, the morning sun cutting through the blinds, and for a second I almost believed it was over. Almost. Hours passed. The police had gone to the woods, and I just waited. I don't know what I expected, maybe some kind of relief, a sign that they'd found her, or at least put an end to whatever nightmare had started at that well. But when the door opened and the officers walked back in,
Starting point is 07:05:34 I could see it in their faces. They hadn't found her. They'd found Brian and Sam, sure. But Lucy, she was gone. One of the officers, a woman with kind eyes, came over to me. She knelt down, her voice soft. We'll keep looking, all right? We'll figure out what happened. But I could tell she didn't believe it, and neither did I. They let me go later that afternoon, and I ended up in a cheap motel on the edge of town, the kind with flickering lights, and a bed that felt like it was stuffed with rocks. I didn't care. I just wanted to be somewhere with walls, somewhere that wasn't surrounded by trees and the echoes of those whispers. Night fell, and I tried to sleep, but every time I closed my eyes, I saw Lucy. Her face, twisted and green,
Starting point is 07:06:24 her eyes empty. I kept telling myself it wasn't her anymore, that she was gone, and whatever I'd seen was something else entirely. But it didn't help. Not really. Around midnight, I heard it, a sound that made my blood run cold, a whisper right outside my window. I sat up, heart pounding, my eyes fixed on the curtain. It was just the wind. It had to be. But as the whisper grew louder, more distinct, I knew. It wasn't over. Slowly I got up, my feet moving without me telling them to. I reached for the curtain, my fingers trembling, and pulled it back. There was nothing there. just the empty parking lot, the neon motel sign casting a sickly glow over the asphalt,
Starting point is 07:07:13 but I couldn't shake the feeling that she was still out there, watching, waiting. And deep down, I knew she'd never stop. I let the curtain fall back into place, sinking down onto the bed, my hands shaking. I was alone again, but it didn't feel like it. It felt like the woods had followed me, like they'd wrapped themselves around me, whispering secrets I'd never understand. And as I lay there, staring at the ceiling, I realized I'd never really left Hollow Woods. Not entirely.
Starting point is 07:07:45 Part of me was still there, with Lucy, and it always would be. I was so excited I could barely stand it. This was my first real camping trip alone with Dad, just the two of us and Kodak, our dog. We'd been planning it for weeks, and I felt like I was finally old enough to handle everything. You know, just me and Dad in the wild. wild. It wasn't a family trip like usual, and I liked that. It was supposed to be special.
Starting point is 07:08:19 We'd been hiking through the forest for hours, and honestly, it was beautiful. The air was fresh, full of that piney smell that makes you think of Christmas and winter, even though it was summer. The sun peaked through the branches above, and I could hear Kodak running up ahead, his tail wagging so fast it was like a blur. He was in his element, jumping over logs and sniffing everything. Dad was in a good mood, too. He kept pointing out different things like birds and plants, telling me what they were. I didn't always know if he was making it up or not, but it didn't matter. It felt like an adventure. I even tried to remember some of what he said, just in case I needed it, like how to tell poison ivy from regular ivy. That seemed like important information.
Starting point is 07:09:07 After a while, we found the perfect spot to set up camp. There was this small clearing surrounded by thick trees, and you could still see a bit of the sky. It felt like we were the only people for miles, which was awesome, but also kind of, I don't know, quiet, like the world had paused just for us. Anyway, we set up the tent and Dad let me help with the fire. He showed me how to get the kindling just right so it caught, and I was pretty proud when the flame started to crackle. As the sun began to set, the fire turned into this warm, glowing thing, and I had to be. felt safe. The flames flickered and shadows danced along the trees and everything felt right.
Starting point is 07:09:49 Dad roasted some marshmallows and we made s'mores. He told me some stories about when he was a kid coming out here with grandpa and I could tell he was happy. That made me happy too. Eventually it got late and dad said it was time to turn in. I didn't want to. I wanted to stay by the fire all night, but I was tired and my eyelids felt heavy. The tent was cozy, with our sleeping bags all set up, and Kodak curled up next to me, warm and breathing in that slow, relaxed way dogs do when they're totally comfortable. I could hear Dad's soft snores from his corner of the tent, and it made me smile. I closed my eyes, listening to the crickets outside and the wind in the trees.
Starting point is 07:10:33 It was like a lullaby almost. But then... I don't know. I woke up and something was different. It was too quiet. I couldn't hear the crickets anymore. It was like the whole forest had just stopped. I lay there trying to tell myself it was nothing
Starting point is 07:10:49 that maybe I'd just imagined the quiet. But then I noticed Kodak. He was awake, his ears standing straight up, staring at the tent flap. His body was stiff, and I could hear this low growl rumbling in his throat. I felt my heart skip a beat. Kodak?
Starting point is 07:11:07 I whispered, barely loud enough to hear myself. He didn't look at it. me. He was focused on something outside. I tried to wake Dad up, gently shaking his shoulder. Dad, I whispered, something's out there. He just mumbled and turned over, still half asleep. Then I heard it, a sound that made my skin crawl. Footsteps, heavy, deliberate footsteps, crunching on the leaves just outside the tent. It wasn't an animal, I could tell. It was too slow, too careful. My heart started pounding, and I reached for the flashlight next to my sleeping bag, my hand shaking a little. I switched it on, and the beam of light seemed so small against the
Starting point is 07:11:50 darkness. Kodak was standing now, his growl louder, almost a snarl. The footsteps kept going, circling the tent. I wanted to scream, but I felt frozen, like if I made a noise, whatever was out there would know exactly where I was. I had to see. I had to know what it was. I crawled slowly toward the tent flap, my hands trembling as I reached for the zipper. I opened it just a crack, enough to peek out. The campfire was out, and everything was dark, too dark. The moonlight barely lit up the clearing, and the trees looked like shadows, towering and unmoving. I could feel sweat trickling down the back of my neck. Nothing. There was nothing there. But then, just as I started to think,
Starting point is 07:12:37 maybe I'd imagined it, I heard the footsteps again. This time, they were moving faster, circling us like they knew I was watching. My breath caught, and I jerked the flashlight toward the sound, the light slicing through the darkness, but there was nothing. Just more shadows, more trees. I backed away, crawling toward Dad, shaking him harder this time. Dad! I hissed louder, my voice cracking. He finally woke up, blinking at me. confused. What's going on? he asked. His voice groggy. There's someone out there, I said, my voice barely a whisper. Or, something. He sat up quickly, his face changing all the sleepiness gone. He grabbed the hatchet we'd brought for chopping wood and he looked at me, his eyes serious.
Starting point is 07:13:28 Stay behind me, he said. I nodded, my heart pounding in my ears. The wind started to pick up again, rustling the trees, but the footsteps were gone. Whatever it was, it had stopped. But I knew one thing for sure. I didn't feel alone anymore, and I didn't feel safe. The air inside the tent felt too tight, like I couldn't get a good breath. Dad was right next to me, clutching the hatchet, and Kodak was standing at the tent flap, still growling, his hackles up. I tried to steady my breathing, but it was hard. My heart felt like it was pounding out of my chest. I wanted to believe Dad that it was just an animal, but I knew in my gut it wasn't. Stay close, Dad said, his voice low.
Starting point is 07:14:14 He zipped the tent flap open all the way, and we stepped outside. The air was cold, colder than I thought it would be. The fire had gone out completely, and everything was dark. The moon was up there somewhere, but it wasn't doing much good. The forest seemed to swallow all the light. Kodak ran out first, sniffing around his evening. ears still perked. I kept my flashlight on, the small beam shaking as my hand trembled. Dad stepped out with the hatchet raised looking around, and I just stuck right behind him,
Starting point is 07:14:45 trying not to make a sound. We listened. The wind rustled the branches, and for a second, I almost felt relieved. But then, nothing else. No crickets. No rustling of leaves like before. Just silence. I felt like we were the only people left in the whole world, and the forest was closing in on us. Dad let out a long breath. Probably just an animal, kiddo, he said, though his voice was tight. He knelt down by the fire pit and started to gather some of the kindling we'd left nearby. Let's get this fire going again, okay? It'll keep anything away. I nodded, even though I still felt like something was wrong, really wrong. I helped him with the fire, though my hands were shaky, and every little sound made me jump. I kept glanced at the
Starting point is 07:15:34 dancing out at the tree line, expecting to see something, or someone, watching us from the shadows. But there was nothing, just the dark shapes of the trees, standing there like they were waiting for something too. After what felt like forever, we got the fire going again. The flames flickered and popped, and I felt a tiny bit of that warmth return. Dad smiled at me, trying to make me feel better. See? he said, nothing we can't handle. safe here. I tried to smile back, but I could tell he didn't really believe it either. He kept
Starting point is 07:16:10 looking out at the trees, his eyes narrowed, like he was expecting something to come rushing out at any second. Kodak finally relaxed a little, lying down next to me, though his eyes still followed every little movement outside the light of the fire. We sat by the fire for a while, not saying much. Dad tried to make some jokes, talking about how we'd tell Mom about our big adventure when we got home, but his voice had this edge to it, like he was forcing it. I just nodded, not really laughing. The firelight made the shadows dance across the trees, and every time I looked, I thought I saw something moving out there,
Starting point is 07:16:49 but when I turned my head, it was always nothing. Eventually, Dad said we should try to get some sleep. I didn't want to, not really. I didn't want to close my eyes, not with whatever was out there. But he promised he'd keep watch for a while, and I was so tired. My body felt heavy, like I could barely keep myself upright anymore. So I crawled back into the tent with Kodak following me in. He lay down close, his body warm against mine, and I tried to tell myself that Dad was right.
Starting point is 07:17:19 We'd be fine. We'd get some sleep, and in the morning, everything would be better. I must have dozed off at some point, but it wasn't a good sleep. I kept waking up, hearing little noises, branches snapping, the wind howling. It felt like every time I closed my eyes, something got closer. And then, suddenly, I woke up to a sound that made my stomach drop, heavy breathing. It was right there, just outside the tent, like someone, or something, was standing right at the entrance. I sat up, my heart pounding so hard at hurt, and I looked around.
Starting point is 07:17:58 The tent was empty, Dad was gone. Dad? I whispered, my voice shaking. No answer. Just that breathing, slow and heavy, like it was waiting for me to come out. I grabbed the flashlight, my hands trembling as I switched it on. The beam of light cut through the darkness, and I crawled to the tent flap, unzipping it just enough to peek out. outside. My breath caught in my throat. The fire was out again. The clearing was dark,
Starting point is 07:18:29 even darker than before, like the night had gotten thicker. I couldn't see anything, but I knew, knew something was out there. I could feel it, watching me, waiting. Dad? I called again, a little louder this time, still nothing. And then, out of the corner of my eye, I saw it. Movement in the trees. A figure, tall and shadowy, just barely visible in the moonlight. It wasn't dad. It was too far away, too still, just standing there watching me. My stomach twisted, and I felt like I was going to be sick. I shined the flashlight toward it, but the light didn't do anything. It was like the darkness swallowed it up, bending around the figure. I couldn't see its face, but I knew it was looking at me. I could feel its eyes on me, cold and
Starting point is 07:19:24 angry. My breath hitched and I backed away, almost tripping over Kodak. He was up now, growling again, his hackles raised. I couldn't think. I just turned and ran, the flashlight beam bouncing wildly as I stumbled out of the tent, Kodak right behind me. I didn't know where I was going. I just had to get away from it. The forest was dark, and I couldn't see. I was but I kept running, my legs burning and my heart pounding. I didn't stop until I reached a clearing, panting and terrified. I looked back, but the figure was gone. The forest was still again, but that didn't make me feel any safer. And then, just when I thought it couldn't get worse, I heard it, a whisper. It was soft, almost like the wind, but I knew it wasn't. It was saying
Starting point is 07:20:14 my name, and it wasn't my dad's voice. I could hardly bring it. I could hardly bring it. It was soft, almost like the wind, but I knew it wasn't. It was saying my name. and it wasn't my dad's voice. I could hardly breathe as I stood there in the clearing, the whisper of my name still echoing in my ears. Kodak stayed close, his growl low and steady. I felt like my heart was going to pound its way right out of my chest. The forest around us was so dark, darker than it had any right to be.
Starting point is 07:20:37 It was like the trees were sucking up all the light, leaving us alone in the thickest shadows I'd ever seen. Dad? I called out again, my voice cracking. The only answer was the wind rustling the branches overhead, and that whisper, I swear I heard it again, so faint, like it was drifting on the breeze. I couldn't just stand there. I had to find him. I had to know where he went. Taking a deep breath, I shined the flashlight around, the beam flickering as my hand trembled. Come on, Kodak, I whispered. Let's go find Dad. We moved forward, back toward the campsite, but every step felt like I was walking deeper into something terrible. The clearing where our tent was supposed to be was only a few minutes away, but it felt like it took forever to get there. I kept hearing noises, branches snapping, leaves rustling, but nothing that
Starting point is 07:21:33 made sense, and always that feeling that I was being watched, like something just out of sight was keeping its eyes on me. Finally, the tent came into view, but it was dark and empty, the flap hanging open. The fire was nothing but a pile of ashes now, the cold embers barely visible. I swallowed hard, my throat dry. Dad? I tried again, stepping closer to the tent. No answer.
Starting point is 07:22:00 Kodak sniffed at the ground, his nose moving quickly, his body tense. He let out a short, sharp bark, and I jumped, my heart skipping a beat. I turned the flashlight in the direction he was facing, but there was nothing there. Just more trees, more darkness. Where are you? I whispered to myself, feeling my stomach twist in knots. It didn't make any sense. He wouldn't just leave me here, not in the middle of the night, not without saying anything.
Starting point is 07:22:29 Something had happened. I knew it, deep down, even though I didn't want to admit it. Suddenly, Kodak's head snapped up, his ears perked, and he let him. out another growl, deeper this time. I felt a chill run down my spine. He was staring at the edge of the clearing, where the trees were thickest, like he could see something I couldn't. I shined the flashlight over there, my hand shaking so bad that the beam wobbled. For a second, I thought I saw something, a shape, just barely visible between the trees. It was tall, too tall, and it didn't move like a person. It just stood there, watching.
Starting point is 07:23:09 My breath caught and I froze, my eyes locked on that spot. But then, just as quickly as it had appeared, it was gone. I blinked, trying to make sense of it, but there was nothing there anymore, just darkness and shadows. No way, I whispered, shaking my head. I didn't know if I'd really seen it, or if my mind was playing tricks on me. Either way, I knew I had to get out of there. I turned back to the tent, my hands fumbling as I grabbed the sleeping, bags and stuffed them into my backpack. I wasn't about to stay here, not after everything that had
Starting point is 07:23:45 happened. I needed to find Dad, and if he wasn't here, then I was going to go looking for him. I didn't care if it was the middle of the night. I couldn't just sit around and wait. Kodak stayed close, his eyes darting around, his ears twitching at every little noise. I could tell he was just as scared as I was, but he wasn't leaving my side. good boy, I whispered, trying to keep my voice steady. We're going to be okay. We just have to find Dad. I slung the backpack over my shoulder, gripping the flashlight tight. We started walking, moving away from the clearing and deeper into the forest.
Starting point is 07:24:23 I didn't know exactly where I was going. I just kept moving, hoping I'd find some sign of Dad, something that would tell me he was okay. But the further we went, the worse that feeling got. The darkness seemed thicker, the trees closer together like they were trying to trap us. And the noises, they were getting louder, branches cracking, footsteps, heavy, deliberate footsteps, just like before. I stopped, my heart racing and turned the flashlight around, shining it in every direction. Who's there? I shouted, my voice echoing through the trees. Nothing, just silence, thick and heavy pressing in on me.
Starting point is 07:25:02 I could feel the sweat on my forehead, the chill of the chill of the trees. of the night air making it feel cold. And then, just when I thought I couldn't take it anymore, I heard it again. That whisper. My name, drifting on the wind, so soft I almost missed it. But it was there, and it was close. Too close. Please, I whispered, tears stinging my eyes.
Starting point is 07:25:27 Where are you? My voice broke and I felt that fear, deep and sharp, cutting through me like a knife. Kodak barked, loud and fierce, and I spun around, the flashlight beam catching something, a glint of movement, a shadow slipping between the trees. I didn't wait to see what it was. I grabbed Kodak's collar and we ran. I didn't care where we were going. I just needed to get away from whatever was out there.
Starting point is 07:25:54 Branches whipped at my face, the ground uneven beneath my feet, but I kept running, my legs burning, my lungs aching. Kodak stayed with me, his growls mixing with the sound of my own panicked breathing. I didn't stop until I couldn't hear the footsteps anymore, until the forest around me seemed still again. I stumbled into another clearing, falling to my knees, gasping for breath. Kodak stayed beside me, his body pressed against mine, warm and solid. I looked around my eyes wide searching the shadows, but there was nothing. Nothing but the wind.
Starting point is 07:26:29 And that feeling. that awful feeling that something was still out there waiting watching and i knew deep down that this wasn't over i don't know how long i sat there in that clearing just trying to catch my breath everything was so still so quiet the kind of quiet that makes you want to scream just to break it Kodak pressed against me, his warm body the only thing that made me feel like I wasn't completely alone, but I was terrified. I kept thinking about Dad, where he could be, what could have happened to him. I stood up slowly, my leg shaky, and looked around. I had no idea where I was any more. Everything looked the same. Trees, shadows, darkness. The flashlight wasn't much help, and it felt like the batteries were starting to die. The light was dimmer now, flickering just a bit,
Starting point is 07:27:27 and I couldn't shake the feeling that the shadows were closing in on us. Dad, I called again, even though I knew it wouldn't do any good. My voice sounded small and lost in the vastness of the forest. I tried to think, tried to figure out what I should do next. I knew I couldn't just stay here. I had to keep moving. I had to find Dad. I started walking again.
Starting point is 07:27:49 one hand gripping Kodak's collar, the other holding the flashlight out in front of me. Every step felt like it was taking me deeper into something I couldn't escape. The trees were thick, their branches reaching out like they were trying to grab me, and the darkness was so heavy I felt like I could hardly breathe. Then I saw it again, movement, just out of the corner of my eye. I whipped the flashlight around, the beam shaking, and there it was. A figure, tall and shadowy, standing between the trees. It wasn't moving, just watching.
Starting point is 07:28:25 I could feel my stomach twist, my whole body going cold. Who are you? I shouted, my voice cracking. What do you want? The figure didn't answer. It just stood there, almost blending into the darkness, like it was part of the forest. I took a step back, and Kodak growled, his teeth bared. My heart was pounding so hard I thought I'd. might pass out. And then, just like before, it was gone. One second it was there, and the next it had
Starting point is 07:28:55 vanished, swallowed by the shadows. I felt my knees go weak, and I stumbled backward, almost falling. I didn't know what to do. I didn't even know if I was awake anymore. Maybe this was all some horrible nightmare, and I'd wake up in the tent with Dad beside me, snoring away. But it wasn't a dream. I could feel the cold air on my face, hear the rustle of the wind in the branches. This was real, and whatever that thing was, it was real too. I turned and ran. I didn't know where I was going, but I couldn't stay there. The flashlight beam bounced wildly, the dim light barely lighting the way, but I just kept running.
Starting point is 07:29:37 I could hear Kodak right behind me, his paws thudding against the ground, and that was the only thing that kept me from completely losing it. I stumbled through the trees, branches scratching at my arms, the cold air burning my lungs. I couldn't hear the footsteps anymore, but I could still feel it, that awful sense of being watched, like eyes were on me, following me through the darkness. I wanted to scream, but I didn't dare make a sound. I just ran, hoping that somehow, some way, I'd find dad, or maybe even just a way out of this nightmare. Suddenly, I burst into another clearing, and I stopped, gasping for breath.
Starting point is 07:30:19 My flashlight flickered, the beam growing even dimmer, and I looked around, my eyes wide. There was nothing here, just more trees, more darkness. But then I saw something, a glint of light just for a second, reflecting off something on the ground. I stepped closer, my heart in my throat, and knelt down. It was Dad's Hatchet. I picked it up, my hands were. shaking. Dad? I whispered. My voice barely audible. He had to be close. He had to be. But then I heard it
Starting point is 07:30:52 again, that whisper. My name, drifting through the air, so soft it almost felt like it was inside my head. I looked up, my eyes darting around, and there it was. The figure, standing at the edge of the clearing closer this time. I could see it more clearly now, tall, with long, thin limbs. almost like it wasn't human. The way it stood so still, so silent, made my skin crawl. I felt tears sting my eyes, and I took a step back, clutching the hatchet.
Starting point is 07:31:25 Leave me alone, I shouted, my voice breaking. Kodak barked, loud and fierce, but the figure didn't move. It just watched, and I could feel its eyes on me, cold and empty. The flashlight flickered again, then went out completely, plunging us into darkness. I gasped, my breath catching in my throat, and I could feel the panic rising inside me like a wave that was about to crash over me. I couldn't see anything, just blackness, thick and heavy, pressing in on me from all sides.
Starting point is 07:32:00 Kodak barked again, and I felt him press against my leg, his body warm and solid. I gripped the hatchet tighter, my knuckles white, and tried to keep my breathing steady. I could still hear that whisper, my name, repeating over and over, like it was trying to pull me toward it. I didn't know what to do. I felt like I was trapped, like there was no way out, but I couldn't give up. I had to find Dad. I had to get us out of here. I took a deep breath, my heart pounding and started moving again, one step at a time, into the darkness. I didn't know where I was going, or if I'd ever find my way out. But I knew one thing for sure, whatever was out there, whatever had taken Dad, I wasn't going to let it take me too. And as I walked, the whisper followed, my name echoing through the trees, a reminder that I wasn't alone, not really, not in the way that mattered.
Starting point is 07:33:07 I have always loved walking in the woods. There was something about the quiet, the way the trees seemed to close in around you, blocking out the rest of the world. It felt like my own little secret place. Jacks, my German shepherd, felt the same way. He'd always pull on his leash, eager to explore every smell and rustle. It was just our routine. Every evening we'd head out to those trails, and it always felt so peaceful. But something was different that Monday night. I couldn't quite put my finger on it at first, but you know, it's like that gut feeling you get when something just feels wrong.
Starting point is 07:33:46 It was too quiet. Usually I could hear crickets chirping or leaves rustling, but tonight there was nothing. Just the sound of my own footsteps crunching on the path and Jacks's paws patting beside me. What's up, buddy? I asked, glancing down at Jacks. He was walking slower, his ears perked up, and his nose sniffing the air like he caught a scent of something that didn't belong. Jacks never acted like this. He was usually excited, darting from one tree to another. but now he was stiff, his tail lowered.
Starting point is 07:34:18 It made me uneasy, and I found myself slowing down too, my eyes scanning the woods around us. Then I saw it, or I think I did, just a shadow at first, a shape that seemed out of place among the trees. It was standing maybe 50 feet away, just beyond the edge of my vision. I squinted, trying to make it out. Was it a deer? The shape was all wrong, though.
Starting point is 07:34:43 Its legs were too long, and the legs were too long, The way it stood there, so still. Something about it made my stomach twist. Jack saw it too. He stopped dead in his tracks, his lips pulling back in a low growl. I'd never heard him growl like that before, not even at the stray cats that sometimes wandered onto the porch. I felt my heart start to beat faster.
Starting point is 07:35:05 I told myself it was just a deer, maybe it was sick or hurt, but there was this heavy feeling in my chest that said it was something else. I took a step backward, pulling gently on Jack's leash. Come on, boy, let's go home, I whispered, trying to keep my voice steady. I didn't want to turn my back on whatever it was, so I started walking backward. My eyes locked on that strange shape. Jacks kept growling, his eyes never leaving it. The figure moved.
Starting point is 07:35:36 Not much, just a little twitch, like it had suddenly noticed us noticing it. That was enough for me. I turned and started walking faster, almost dragging Jacks along. My heart was pounding, and I could feel the sweats starting to beat on my forehead. I didn't want to run. I didn't want whatever it was to think we were prey, but I couldn't help it. I broke into a jog, Jack's keeping pace beside me, his growl turning into a series of short, anxious barks. We finally made it back to the cabin, and I slammed the door shut behind us.
Starting point is 07:36:11 I locked it, my hands trembling a bit, and leaned against it for a moment, just trying to catch my breath. Jax was still at my feet, staring at the door, his ears flat against his head. What was that? I muttered to myself, trying to laugh it off, but it came out shaky. I walked over to the window and peeked out, but there was nothing there, just the dark shapes of the trees, the forest looking as normal as it always did. I wanted to believe that it was just my imagination, that maybe I'd love to be that maybe I'd let the shadows and the quiet get to me. But Jacks wouldn't leave the door, and that feeling in my gut hadn't gone away. That night I tried to sleep, but every time I closed my eyes, I saw that
Starting point is 07:36:53 figure standing there, just beyond the trees. I couldn't shake the image of how still it was, how wrong it looked. I woke up in a sweat more than once, my ears straining for any noise outside, half expecting to hear something scratching at the door. Jacks stayed by my bed all night, his ears perked, and every so often he'd let out a low growl, even though there was nothing I could see or hear. By morning, I'd convinced myself that it had to be some trick of the light, maybe a tree that had looked like a figure in the dark,
Starting point is 07:37:26 or maybe even just my tired mind playing tricks on me. But Jack's reaction was what kept bothering me. Dogs don't imagine things like that. I decided we'd stay away from the woods for a few days just to be safe. Maybe it really was just a deer, and maybe it was gone now, but I couldn't shake the feeling that something had been watching us, something that wasn't supposed to be there. Honestly, I didn't want to think about it anymore.
Starting point is 07:37:53 I just wanted things to go back to normal. After the other night, I told myself I'd stay away from the woods for a while. I mean, it just seemed smart, right? But Jacks had other ideas. He was restless, pacing back and, forth in front of the door like he was waiting for someone to knock. He wouldn't settle down, no matter what I tried. Treats, his favorite toy, even letting him out in the yard. He just kept scratching at the door and whining. I sighed, rubbing the back of my neck. All right, all right,
Starting point is 07:38:24 I muttered. I didn't really want to go back out there, but Jacks wasn't giving me much of a choice. I figured maybe just a short walk, you know, just to calm him down. I'd stay right near the edge of the woods, no going deep into those dark trails this time. It was just before sunset when I finally grabbed his leash, and we stepped outside. The air was cooler, and the sky had that orange-pink glow that normally made everything look so beautiful. But today, I couldn't really enjoy it. I couldn't shake that feeling, like someone was watching us. I tried to tell myself it was just in my head. But you know how sometimes you just know something's wrong? Yeah, that's how. That's how how it felt. We stuck close to the edge of the woods, the cabin still visible behind us. Jack seemed
Starting point is 07:39:12 calmer, which made me relax a little too, at least for a moment. He trotted along, his ears up, sniffing here and there like nothing had ever happened. I almost started to convince myself that maybe I'd overreacted before, that whatever I saw had just been a weird trick of the light. But then I smelled it. This horrible stench, like something rotting, came out of no one. It made my stomach turn, and I had to cover my nose with my sleeve. Jack stopped, too, his hackles rising, a low growl rumbling in his throat. That's when I knew we weren't alone. I turned slowly, my eyes scanning the trees.
Starting point is 07:39:52 The shadows seemed thicker now, like they were hiding something. And then I saw it again. That same figure, only this time it was closer. I could see more of it. tall, too tall, with limbs that seemed stretched out, like it was trying to be something it wasn't. My heart started to pound in my chest. Who's there? I called, my voice sounding a lot braver than I felt. The figure didn't move. It just stood there, staring, and then it spoke.
Starting point is 07:40:26 Jacks, jacks, it said in my voice, I swear I felt my blood turned to ice. It wasn't just that it was my voice. It was the way it said it. Flat, empty, like it had heard me say it before and was trying to copy it, but couldn't quite get it right. Jacks barked loud and angry, and I didn't need any more convincing. I yanked on his leash and started backing away, my eyes never leaving that thing. The figure took a step forward, and that's when I saw its face. It was pale, almost like skin stretched too tight over a skull, and its eyes. They were hollow, just dark holes that that seemed to swallow the light.
Starting point is 07:41:05 My heart felt like it was going to explode out of my chest. I turned, pulling Jacks along, and we ran. I could hear it behind us, the sound of twigs snapping, those long legs moving too fast. I didn't dare look back. The cabin wasn't far, but it felt like it took forever to get there. My feet pounded against the ground,
Starting point is 07:41:27 my breath coming in ragged gasps. Jacks was barking nonstop, and I could hear it, That thing still calling out, Jacks, Jacks, in that awful hollow voice. We finally reached the cabin and I threw the door open, practically shoving Jacks inside before slamming it shut behind us. I locked it, my hands shaking so badly I could barely get the bolt in place. Jacks was still barking, his eyes fixed on the door, and I could hear it outside, the soft scraping sound of something,
Starting point is 07:41:57 no, someone, dragging their fingers across the wood. Let me in, Tom. It whispered, and I felt my stomach drop. It knew my name. I backed away from the door, my heart hammering in my ears. Jacks growled, his teeth bared, and I stood there frozen, listening as the thing outside kept whispering. It was using my voice again, but now it was pleading,
Starting point is 07:42:21 like it thought I'd actually opened the door. Let me in, let me in. I didn't sleep that night. I sat in the living room, the shotgun I kept in the closet resting across my lap, even though I wasn't sure it would do any good. Jack stayed by the door, growling every so often when the whispering started up again. It circled the cabin, tapping at the windows, the walls, trying every door, like it was testing for a weak spot. It wasn't until dawn, when the first light started to break through the trees, that everything went quiet. The whispers stopped,
Starting point is 07:42:57 and the scratching faded away. Jacks finally relaxed, his ears purged. His ears purged. up, and I let out a breath I hadn't realized I'd been holding. I got up, my legs feeling like jelly, and peeked through the curtains. Nothing. Just the forest, looking as normal as ever. But I knew better now. I knew that thing was out there, waiting, watching. I wasn't sure what it was, but I knew one thing for certain. I couldn't stay here. Not anymore. I had to leave, and soon. Whatever was out there, it wasn't going to stop. And honestly, I didn't want to be around to find out what would happen if it got in. After what happened that night, I knew I should have packed up and left right away. But you know, life doesn't always work out as planned. There were a lot of things to think about.
Starting point is 07:43:50 Where would I go? How fast could I pack everything up? Plus, Jacks had barely settled down. He'd been on edge since that night, and honestly, so had I. Every little creek in the house had me jumping out of my skin. By the next day, Jacks had become impossible to handle. He kept whining at the door, scratching at it like there was something out there that he needed to get to. I tried everything to distract him, but nothing worked. He was fixated on getting out, and it broke my heart to see him so worked up. Eventually, I gave in. Maybe a quick walk right by the edge of the woods would calm him down. I grabbed the leash, my heart already pounding just at the thought of stepping outside again. Jacks barked, excited, his tail wagging like we were going on the best adventure ever. I couldn't help
Starting point is 07:44:40 but force a smile. At least one of us was still having fun. It was getting dark, but there was still enough light to see by. The sky was that deep blue, just before the stars come out, and the trees cast long, stretching shadows across the ground. I kept close to the cabin. I kept close to the cabin, promising myself we'd stay with inside of it. Jacks seemed a little better now that we were outside, sniffing the ground and moving with purpose. But I couldn't shake the feeling that something was waiting just beyond the trees. We hadn't been out for more than ten minutes when I heard it, a bark, somewhere deeper in the woods. My heart skipped a beat, and I turned to look at Jacks. He was right there beside me, his ears perked up, staring into the dark. The barked again in my
Starting point is 07:45:27 stomach twisted into a knot. It sounded just like Jacks. Who's there? I called, my voice shaky. I knew it was a stupid question. Nobody would answer, and I wasn't sure I even wanted them to. The forest stayed silent, but then I heard it. A rustle, the crunch of leaves underfoot, like something was moving closer. My hands tightened around Jacks's leash, and I could feel my pulse racing. I had to get us out of there. Then I heard my own voice calling out, clear as day. Jacks, come here. It was coming from deeper in the woods, the words floating through the trees like they were being carried by the wind. The tone was all wrong, flat and hollow like someone had taken my voice and drained all the emotion out of it. Jacks started barking and I nearly jumped out of my
Starting point is 07:46:15 skin. I turned, ready to drag him back to the cabin. But before I could take a step, something moved between the trees. It stepped out from behind a thick trunk, and I felt my breath catch in my throat. It was tall, taller than any person should be, and its skin was pale, almost glowing in the dim light. Its face—well, it looked like it was trying to be my face, but it wasn't right. The features were stretched, like someone had taken a mask of my face and pulled at the edges. Its eyes were empty, just dark holes that seemed to swallow the light. My entire body went cold. I didn't think, I just moved. I yanked on Jack's leash, turning and running as fast as I could. Jacks followed, barking like mad, and I could hear the thing behind us. The sound of branches snapping,
Starting point is 07:47:09 its heavy footsteps thudding against the ground, getting closer and closer. My lungs burned, and my legs felt like they could give out at any moment, but I could. I couldn't stop. I had to get us back to the cabin. The door was in sight, just a few more steps. I practically threw myself against it, fumbling with the handle, and shoved it open, Jacks darting inside ahead of me. I slammed the door shut and locked it, my hands shaking so badly I could barely get the latch to click in place. Outside I could hear it, the soft scraping of something against the wood, followed by that awful voice again, whispering my name. Tom, Let me in.
Starting point is 07:47:50 It was so quiet, like it was trying to be gentle, but there was something underneath it, something that made my skin crawl. Jacks was barking at the door, his teeth bared, but I could tell he was scared too. I backed away, my heart pounding in my ears, and grabbed the shotgun from the corner of the room. I didn't know if it would do anything, but I had to have something, anything between us and that thing. I sat there, the shotgun in my lap, listening as the thing outside moved around the cabin. It tapped at the windows, scraped its fingers against the walls, all the while whispering, Let me in, Tom, let me in.
Starting point is 07:48:30 I felt like I was losing my mind. It knew my name. It knew my voice. The whispers didn't stop until the first light of dawn peaked through the curtains. It was like a switch had been flipped. Everything went quiet, and Jacks finally. stopped barking, his ears still perked up but no longer growling. I took a shaky breath and got up peeking through the window. There was nothing there, just the woods, quiet and still, like nothing
Starting point is 07:48:57 had ever happened. But I knew better now. I wasn't safe here, not anymore. Whatever that thing was, it wasn't going to leave me alone. I had to get out and soon, before it found a way inside. I knew I couldn't stay in that cabin any longer. It was crazy, actually, that I even stayed one more night after what had happened. Jacks and I were both wrecked. Neither of us slept much at all, and every time the wind made the house creak, I'd jump like I was expecting that thing to break down the door. When morning finally came, I didn't waste time. I started packing right away. I grabbed some clothes, my phone charger, whatever food I had left, and anything I thought I might need. I was trying not to panic, but honestly, I could feel my hands shaking the entire time.
Starting point is 07:49:48 Jax was sticking close to me, his tail down, and his ears twitching at every little sound. It was like he knew what was coming too, like he knew we had to get out before it got dark again. I had almost everything ready, but of course, nothing's ever that easy, right? I couldn't find my truck keys. I searched everywhere, every drawer, every pocket, even the cushions on the can. couch, but they were just gone. My heart was racing, and I could feel the sweat on the back of my neck. I had to get out of here. The sun was already getting higher, and I knew I didn't have much time before it started to set. That's when I heard it, a faint tapping coming from one of the
Starting point is 07:50:29 windows. I froze, my breath catching in my throat. Jack started growling low, and I felt a chill run down my spine. Slowly, I turned toward the sound. There, standing just outside the window, was the figure. Its face was pressed up against the glass, and even though the window was dirty and cracked, I could still see those hollow eyes staring in at me. It didn't move. It just stood there, tapping one long bony finger against the glass over and over again. I backed away, my mind racing. where were my keys? I had to find them. I had to get us out before that thing tried to come inside. Jacks was barking now. His hackles raised, but the figure didn't react. It just kept tapping, its head tilting slightly like it was curious. And then I heard it speak, and my heart nearly
Starting point is 07:51:23 stopped. Tom, let me in. It was my voice again, but slower, stretched out, like it was trying to learn how to sound real. Let me in, Tom. I felt my stomach twist, and I knew I couldn't waste any more time. I ran to the kitchen and there, sitting on the counter, were the keys. I grabbed them, almost dropping them because my hands were shaking so badly, and then I turned to Jacks. Come on, boy, we're getting out of here. I didn't look back at the window.
Starting point is 07:51:55 I didn't want to see if it was still there. I just opened the door and ran for the truck, Jack's right beside me. The woods were quiet, but it was that, too quiet kind of feeling, like everything was holding its breath, waiting to see what would happen. I got to the truck, fumbled with the keys, and finally got the door open. Jacks jumped in, and I slammed the door behind him, running around to the driver's side. I could feel it, like eyes watching me, something moving just out of sight. I tried to keep my focus, to not let the panic take over.
Starting point is 07:52:31 As I got in and started the engine, I caught a glit. glimpse of movement in the rearview mirror. The figure was there, at the edge of the trees, just standing and watching. Its head was tilted to the side, and even though it had no real eyes, I could feel its gaze, like it was trying to burn a hole right through me. I threw the truck into drive, and we tore out of there, the tires kicking up gravel as I sped down the dirt road. Jacks was panting, his eyes wide, and I reached over to pat him, trying to calm both of us down. It's okay, boy, I whispered, even though I wasn't sure if that was true. We're getting out, we're not going back.
Starting point is 07:53:12 I didn't look in the mirror again until we were miles away, the cabin far behind us. When I finally glanced back, all I could see was the road stretching out, empty and quiet, like nothing had ever happened. But I knew better. I knew that whatever that thing was, it was still there, waiting. We drove until we reached town, and I pulled over it. in a parking lot, my hands still shaking on the wheel. I took a deep breath trying to steady myself and looked at Jacks. He seemed calmer now, his ears perked up, but not in that scared way.
Starting point is 07:53:46 I reached over and scratched behind his ears. We made it, buddy, I said, and I tried to smile, though it felt shaky. We're not going back there, not ever. As I sat there, the sun finally breaking through the morning fog, I knew I'd made the right choice. Whatever was in those woods, it wasn't something I could understand. It wasn't something I could fight. The only thing I could do was get away and never look back. And so that's what I did. I started the truck again and drove away, leaving the cabin, the woods, and all those terrifying memories behind. But even as the miles stretched on, I couldn't shake the feeling that it wasn't over, that somewhere out there, that thing was still watching, still waiting.
Starting point is 07:54:34 And I knew, deep down, that no matter how far I went, I'd always feel those hollow eyes on me, just out of sight, hiding in the shadows. I wasn't sure what I expected when I suggested we all meet up at Aunt Margaret's old lodge, but I wanted it to be nice, you know, maybe even a little nostalgic. It had been years since anyone set foot in that place, and even longer since I'd seen my cousin Amelia and our friend Sarah. Plus, Marcus, Amelia's fiancé, seemed excited about a weekend away. It sounded perfect.
Starting point is 07:55:17 Or at least, that's what I kept telling myself. The road up to the lodge was long and winding, a narrow path that snaked through tall, shadowy pines. The sun was already slipping behind the mountains by the time we got there, turning the sky a dull gray. I remember how Amelia's eyes lit up when she saw the place. Wow, it's just like I remember, she said, smiling as she climbed out of the car. It was one of those smiles that looked forced, though, like she was trying a little too hard to be happy about it.
Starting point is 07:55:48 Yeah, well, I hope you remember the inside being a little warmer, I joked, fumbling for the keys. The wind had picked up, and it was biting cold. The lodge looked even more run down than I'd imagined, with vines creeping up the stone walls and the windows clouded over with dust. I tried not to think about how Aunt Margaret used to sit by those very windows, staring out at the woods. The inside wasn't much better, dust covered almost everything, and the air smelled musty, like old wood and forgotten memories. Still, there was something comforting about the place. Maybe it was just the thought that we were all here together, like old times.
Starting point is 07:56:28 I wanted to believe that this weekend could bring us closer, that maybe we could forget all the things that had pushed us apart. Sarah wasn't as convinced. She wrinkled her nose as she stepped inside, brushing her blonde hair out of her face. Are we sure we want to stay here? It's kind of creepy, she said, her voice echoing in the empty space. Oh, come on, Marcus said, dropping their bags on the floor with a thud. That's what makes it fun. It's like our own little adventure. He flashed a grin, the kind that Amelia always fell for, and I could see her relax a bit. We spent the first night getting settled in, cooking a simple dinner over the old stove, and laughing about the awkward drive-up. It felt good for a while. We even found an old radio,
Starting point is 07:57:17 and Marcus managed to get it working, filling the lodge with crackly tunes that made the place feel less empty. But as the night wore on, I started feeling uneasy. It wasn't anything obvious, just little things, like the way the shadows seemed to shift in the corners, or how the wind outside sounded almost like a voice, whispering through the cracks in the walls. I told myself I was just being paranoid, that the lodge was old and my mind was playing tricks on me. After everyone else went to bed, I stayed up a little longer, wandering through the rooms, just to make sure everything was all right. That's when I found the attic door. It was at the end of the hallway, slightly ajar, like someone had just been there. I don't know why, but something about it made me stop. The door hadn't been
Starting point is 07:58:04 open earlier. I was sure of it. I hesitated, then pushed it open, the hinges groaning loudly in the silence. A narrow staircase led up into darkness. I should have just closed the door and gone to bed, but instead I grabbed a flashlight from the kitchen and made my way up. The air grew colder with every step, and the smell of dust and mildew made me cough. The attic was cluttered with old furniture, boxes, and a lot of things that looked like they hadn't been touched in years. And then I saw it, an old journal, sitting on top of a wooden chest, half covered in cobwebs. It had Aunt Margaret's name on it. My heart started pounding as I picked it up, brushing away the dust. I flipped through the pages and what I read made my stomach drop. The end of the end of
Starting point is 07:58:53 Entries were scattered, written in a shaky hand. At first they were just about the lodge, how she loved the quiet, how she enjoyed the solitude. But then the tone shifted. She wrote about feeling watched, about strange noises in the woods at night, and a figure she called The Watcher. One of the last entries was almost unreadable. The word scrawled in a hurry. The mist is back. I saw it moving through the trees.
Starting point is 07:59:20 I think it's getting closer. I shut the journal, my hands trembling. I wanted to believe it was just the ramblings of an old woman who'd been alone for too long. But something about it felt real, too real, and the uneasiness that had been gnawing at me all night suddenly felt like fear. I shoved the journal into my bag and headed back downstairs,
Starting point is 07:59:43 trying to shake off the feeling that I wasn't alone. I forced myself to laugh at how ridiculous I was being. It was just an old journal. just a bunch of stories. But as I passed by the window in the hallway, I could have sworn I saw something move out there in the dark, a flash of white like someone slipping between the trees. I stopped, my breath catching in my throat,
Starting point is 08:00:06 and stared out into the night. Nothing. Just the wind, just the shadows. I turned away, telling myself it was nothing. But deep down, I knew that something was wrong, and whatever it was, it had only just begun. I woke up to a sound I couldn't quite place, like a long, low howl drifting through the air. I rubbed my eyes, trying to convince myself it was just the wind, but something about it made my
Starting point is 08:00:33 skin crawl, like it was coming from deep in the forest, from something that wasn't supposed to be there. Marcus and Amelia were already up, their faces lit by the glow of the fireplace in the living room. Marcus was pacing, looking uneasy. Did you hear that? he asked as soon as as he saw me. His voice was tight, like he was trying not to let the fear show. I nodded, still half asleep, but the chill in the room made me shiver. Probably just some animal, I said, though I didn't quite believe it myself. I wanted to keep everyone calm, even if I couldn't shake this weird feeling that something was watching us. Amelia sat curled up on the couch, her arms wrapped around herself. It didn't sound like an animal, she muttered.
Starting point is 08:01:21 Her eyes were fixed on the window, where the night outside seemed impossibly dark. I could tell she was scared, but she was trying not to show it. That's Amelia, always the strong one, even when she shouldn't have to be. Marcus finally stopped pacing and sat down, running his hands through his hair. Whatever it was, we're not going out there. We stay put until morning. He said it like he was trying to convince himself more than any of us. Honestly, I was fine with that.
Starting point is 08:01:53 The idea of stepping into that darkness made my stomach turn. The wind picked up again, and then I saw it, the mist. It started slow, like a thin white fog rolling in from the woods. But it grew thicker, like it was alive, creeping towards the lodge, swallowing up everything in its path. My heart started pounding as I watched it move closer, almost like it knew we were here. "'Ah, guys?' I said, pointing to the window. Amelia and Marcus turned to look, and their faces went pale.
Starting point is 08:02:26 The mist had reached the porch now, swirling around the steps, pushing at the edges of the door. It wasn't just fog. It had a weight to it, something that made it feel wrong. Sarah came down the stairs, rubbing her eyes. "'What's going on?' she asked, sounding half annoyed, half groggy. She stopped short when she saw the mist. What? What is that?
Starting point is 08:02:49 I didn't know how to answer her. None of us did. It wasn't normal. That was for sure. Marcus tried to keep calm, but I could hear the edge of panic in his voice. We stay inside, all right? We don't go out there. It'll clear up. We huddled in the living room, the fire crackling as the mist pressed against the windows, like it was trying to find a way in. The feeling of dread was so thick I could barely breathe. I didn't know what was happening, but I didn't know what was happening, but I was,
Starting point is 08:03:17 I knew we weren't safe. I could hear something else, too. A faint whisper, like a voice carried on the wind. It was so soft I almost thought I imagined it. But when I looked at Marcus, I knew he heard it too. He kept glancing at the door, his eyes wide, like he was listening for something. I wanted to tell him to stop, to snap out of it, but I didn't know how. It felt like hours passed, just sitting there, waiting. Every time I looked out the window, the mist was still there, thicker now, swirling in slow, eerie patterns. And then, just when I thought things couldn't get worse, Marcus stood up, I hear her, he whispered, his face blank, like he was in some kind of trance. It's my mom. She's out there. Marcus, no, Amelia said, her voice cracking. She grabbed his arm,
Starting point is 08:04:11 but he shook her off. You don't understand, he said, his eyes feel. He said, his eyes fixed on the door. She's calling for me. I have to go. Panic flared in my chest. Marcus, there's nothing out there. It's just the mist, man. You're not thinking straight. But he wouldn't listen. He was already moving to the door, his hands fumbling with the lock. I rushed to stop him, but it was too late. He flung the door open, and the mist poured in, cold and thick, wrapping around us. I could barely see Marcus as he stepped outside, his figure fading into the white. Marcus! Amelia screamed, but he was gone. The mist swallowed him up, and then there was just silence. The door banged shut, and the room felt empty, like all the warmth had been sucked
Starting point is 08:04:56 out. Amelia collapsed to the floor sobbing, and I didn't know what to do. I wanted to help, but I couldn't even think straight. My heart was pounding, and my head was spinning. I kept staring at the door, half expecting Marcus to come back, but deep down, I knew he wouldn't. Sarah stood there, her face pale, her eyes wide with fear. What's happening? she whispered, her voice barely audible. I didn't have an answer for her. I didn't have an answer for any of us. All I knew was that the mist was still out there, and whatever had taken Marcus was far from done with us. The next morning felt hollow without Marcus.
Starting point is 08:05:40 It was just me, Amelia, and Sarah now, and none of us knew what to do. Amelia hadn't slept. She'd just sat by the window all night, staring out into that endless mist, her eyes puffy from crying. I could tell she still believed Marcus would just walk back through the door, like none of this had ever happened. I wanted to tell her he wouldn't, but I couldn't bring myself to say it. I mean, how could I?
Starting point is 08:06:04 I wasn't even sure what I believed. Everything that had happened felt like a nightmare. Like any moment I'd wake up and we'd all be laughing by the fire again, talking about dumb memories from when we were kids. Hey, I said softly, stepping over to her. You need to eat something, Amelia. We've got to keep up our strength. She didn't respond, just kept staring,
Starting point is 08:06:28 her fingers clutching the journal we'd found in the attic. The same one that had somehow convinced her Marcus was still out there. I glanced over at Sarah, who was sitting at the table, her head resting in her hands. She looked up at me, her eyes tired. We have to get out of here, she said. We can't just sit here and wait. That mist isn't natural. There's something wrong with this place.
Starting point is 08:06:51 I nodded. She wasn't wrong. The mist had started to feel like it was alive, like it was waiting for us to make a mistake. I could almost feel it pressing against the walls of the lodge, and every now and then I swore I heard whispers, just on the edge of my hearing. I knew we needed to do something, but I didn't know what. We need to figure out what this thing is, I said, sitting down next to Sarah. The journal, Aunt Margaret wrote about this mist.
Starting point is 08:07:20 She called it the watcher, and there's something about a ritual. Maybe it's our only way out. I didn't even know if I believed it myself, but we were running out of options. Sarah frowned, looking over at Amelia. Do you think, maybe we could try it? She asked, her voice hesitant. I mean, I don't want to mess with anything we don't understand, but if it's our only chance,
Starting point is 08:07:43 Amelia finally turned her head, her eyes bloodshot. The watcher took Marcus, she said, her voice cracking. If there's a way to get him back, I'll do it. I'll do whatever it takes. Her fingers tightened around the journal, and there was a look in her eyes that made me uneasy, determined, but also desperate. like she was holding on to the only bit of hope she had left.
Starting point is 08:08:07 I understood how she felt, but something about the idea of this ritual didn't sit right with me. I didn't like messing with things we didn't understand. Aunt Margaret's entries had been scattered, panicked, and whatever she'd found clearly hadn't helped her. I wanted to help Amelia, but I didn't want to lose her too. Let me take a look at the journal again, I said, trying to keep my voice calm. We need to make sure we need to make sure we need.
Starting point is 08:08:33 know what we're getting into before we try anything. Amelia handed it over reluctantly, her eyes never leaving the window. I opened the journal, flipping through the pages. The writing was messy, rushed, like Aunt Margaret had been scared while she wrote it. She'd mentioned the watcher several times, always with this sense of dread, like she knew it was coming for her. And then there were the instructions, a list of things she'd gathered, symbols she'd drawn, It all seemed like some sort of protection spell, but there was one thing that caught my eye. The price must be paid. The watcher takes what it is owed. What does that mean? I muttered, more to myself than anyone else.
Starting point is 08:09:18 What? Sarah asked, leaning over to look at the page. I pointed at the line and she frowned. The price. What kind of price? I don't know, I admitted. But it doesn't sound good. if we try this, we need to be ready for whatever happens. Amelia stood up suddenly, her chair scraping loudly against the floor. I don't care what the price is, she said her voice fierce. I'm getting Marcus back. I'll go into the mist myself if I have to.
Starting point is 08:09:49 Amelia, no, I said quickly, standing too. We can't lose you too. We need to be smart about this. But she shook her head, her expression set. You don't understand, she said. her voice breaking. He's out there, and he's alone. I can't just sit here and do nothing. She turned and grabbed her coat, throwing it over her shoulders. Amelia, I tried again, panic rising in my chest, but she was already at the door, and before I could reach her, she was gone, swallowed by the mist, just like Marcus. Sarah and I stood there, stunned,
Starting point is 08:10:24 the door still swinging on its hinges. I felt like all the air had been sucked out of the room like I was suffocating. Amelia was gone. Marcus was gone. It was just me and Sarah now, and the walls of the lodge felt like they were closing in. I shut the door, my hands trembling, and turned to Sarah. We have to figure this out, I said, my voice barely a whisper,
Starting point is 08:10:48 before it takes us to. Sarah nodded, but I could see the fear in her eyes. We will, she said, her voice shaky. We have to. But even as she said it, I could feel the weight of the mist pressing in, and I wasn't sure if we'd ever make it out of this place alive. I can't explain how empty the lodge felt after Amelia left. It was just me and Sarah now, and I could tell we were both
Starting point is 08:11:10 struggling to hold it together. Every creek of the old wood, every gust of wind against the windows made me jump, and I could see Sarah glancing at me for some kind of reassurance. I wanted to tell her everything would be okay, but I couldn't bring myself to lie. We spent the next few hours sitting in silence, the journal spread out between us. I kept reading and rereading Aunt Margaret's entries, hoping I'd find something we missed, some clue that would explain what we were dealing with, but it was all so vague, and the more I read, the more desperate it sounded. The entry that really scared me talked about the watcher taking people who ventured into the mist. Aunt Margaret had written, The mist claims what it wants. Once you're in, you belong to it. I didn't know if it was
Starting point is 08:11:57 true, but the idea of Marcus and Amelia out there, claimed by this thing, made my stomach twist. Sarah broke the silence, her voice barely above a whisper. Do you think, do you think there's any chance Amelia's still okay? She looked at me, her eyes filled with hope, and I wished I could say yes. I don't know, I said honestly. But if there's any chance we can help her, we've got to try. I hated how hollow my words sounded. I didn't know what I was doing. I was just a guy who'd wanted a nice weekend with his family. Now everything was falling apart, and I felt completely helpless.
Starting point is 08:12:37 Sarah nodded, but I could see her lip quivering. She looked down at the journal, then back at me. What about that ritual? Do you think it could work? I hesitated. The ritual was risky. Something about it just didn't feel right. Aunt Margaret had tried it,
Starting point is 08:12:55 and from what I could tell, it hadn't ended well for her. but we didn't have many options left. I think we need to at least try, I said finally. If it doesn't work, then I don't know what else we can do. We gathered what we could. The supplies listed in the journal were things we found around the lodge, candles, matches, an old mirror, and some herbs that Aunt Margaret had left in the kitchen.
Starting point is 08:13:20 I tried to ignore how my hands shook as I set everything up in the middle of the living room. The mist was still outside, pressing against the wood. windows like it wanted in. I tried not to look at it, but it was hard not to feel like it was staring back at me, waiting for us to make a mistake. I glanced at Sarah, who was holding one of the candles, her face pale but determined. Okay, I said, trying to steady my voice. We're going to do this, and whatever happens, we stick together. No matter what we see or hear, we don't leave this room, all right? Sarah nodded, but I could see the fear in her eyes. Okay, she whispered.
Starting point is 08:14:00 I lit the candles, the flames flickering as the cold air seemed to press in on us. The journal said we had to chant something. Words I didn't recognize, but I tried my best to pronounce them. My voice sounded strange in the quiet room, echoing off the walls. At first, nothing happened. The candles flickered, the mist stayed outside, and for a moment I thought maybe this was all just a waste of time. But then, the room seemed to change. The air grew thicker, colder, and I felt a shiver run down my spine.
Starting point is 08:14:33 Do you feel that? Sarah asked, her voice trembling. I nodded, my mouth dry. It felt like the walls were closing in, like the room itself was shrinking. The shadows cast by the candles seemed to grow, stretching across the floor and walls, twisting into shapes that looked almost like people. I tried to keep my focus on the room. ritual, but the whispers started, soft at first, then growing louder, like a chorus of voices all around us. I looked up and saw Sarah staring at something behind me, her eyes wide with fear.
Starting point is 08:15:09 What is that? she whispered, her voice barely audible. I turned and my heart nearly stopped. There, standing just beyond the edge of the candlelight, was a figure. It looked like Amelia, but there was something off. Her eyes were blank. Her face. face expressionless. She just stood there, staring at us, and I felt my blood run cold. Amelia? I called out, my voice cracking, but she didn't respond. She just stood there, like a statue, her eyes fixed on me. Sarah grabbed my arm, her fingers digging into my skin. That's not her, she whispered. That's not Amelia. I didn't know what to do. I wanted to reach out, to pull her back to us, but deep down, I knew Sarah was right. This wasn't Amelia, it was something
Starting point is 08:16:00 else, something that had taken her form. The whispers grew louder, echoing in my head, and I felt like I was going to lose it. Suddenly, the candles went out, plunging us into darkness. I heard Sarah gasp, her grip tightening on my arm. I reached out, fumbling for the matches, but I couldn't see anything. The mist had to be. found its way inside, wrapping around us cold and suffocating. I could hear Sarah's breathing, fast and panicked, and I tried to stay calm. We've got to stay together, I said, but my voice felt weak, lost in the noise. The whispers were everywhere now, and I could barely hear myself think. And then, just as suddenly as it started, everything stopped. The whispers faded,
Starting point is 08:16:50 the mist pulled back and the candles flickered back to life. I blinked, my eyes adjusting to the light and realized we were alone. The figure, Amelia, or whatever it had been, was gone. I looked at Sarah, who was shaking, tears streaming down her face. I wanted to tell her it was going to be okay, that we were safe now, but I couldn't. Because I knew, deep down, that this wasn't over. The watcher wasn't done with us yet. I've always liked the kind of quiet that falls over a forest.
Starting point is 08:17:33 Not the peaceful kind, mind you, but the kind that settles over everything, like the woods themselves are holding their breath, waiting. That's what I felt as Ryan and I pulled into the clearing at White Claw Forest, our tires crunching over fallen leaves and gravel, the only sound around for miles. The locals back in town had looked at us funny when we mentioned our hunting trip. One old-timer, leaning against the country, counter at the general store shook his head and muttered,
Starting point is 08:18:02 You boys don't know what's out there. Ryan just laughed, brushing it off as superstition. He's always been like that. Cool, dismissive of anything he can't see or shoot. But as we unloaded our gear, I couldn't shake what the old man said. I know, I know I shouldn't let it get to me, but there was something about his tone. It wasn't a warning meant to scare us. It was more like he already knew how this story might end,
Starting point is 08:18:26 and he wasn't sure he wanted to hear about it later. well Ethan, you gonna help set up, or are you just gonna stare at the trees all day? Ryan's voice snapped me out of it. I forced a grin, shaking off the chill that had settled into my bones and grabbed my share of the tent poles. The sun was already hanging low in the sky by the time we had everything set up. Ryan and I took a moment to stand back and admire our work. The tents were pitched, a fire pit was made,
Starting point is 08:18:55 and our rifles were leaning against a nearby stump. It all felt right. There was a certain satisfaction to setting up camp, a small claim on the vast wilderness. But as the shadows stretched longer, I couldn't help but notice how fast the light was fading. Whiteclaw was a deep forest, the kind that swallowed the sun whole, and soon the sky above was nothing but a thin strip of purple between the towering pines. We sat by the fire, cooking up a couple of hot dogs on sticks, listening to the crackling flames.
Starting point is 08:19:30 Ryan was telling a story about some trophy elk he bagged last fall. But honestly, I wasn't paying much attention. My ears were tuned to the forest, to the way it had gotten so damn quiet. No wind rustling the leaves, no chirping crickets, just that heavy, unnatural silence. I could tell Ryan noticed it too, even if he was pretending not to. His eyes kept darting into the dark, his laughter a bit too forced. that's when we heard it. A howl, long and gutteral, somewhere off in the distance.
Starting point is 08:20:02 It wasn't a wolf or a coyote. It was deeper, almost like it was caught halfway between a growl and a human scream. I looked at Ryan, and he gave me that shrug, the one that said, You're being paranoid. But I knew he heard it too. Probably just a coyote, he said, jabbing at the fire with his stick. You get enough of them together, and they make all. sorts of weird noises. Yeah, maybe, I replied, trying to convince myself as much as him.
Starting point is 08:20:33 But the sound had settled in my chest, like a cold fist squeezing around my heart. It wasn't just the noise. It was the way it moved, shifting through the trees, closer and then farther, circling us. It felt deliberate, like whatever was out there wanted us to know it was watching. I grabbed the flashlight and stood up, sweeping the beam across the tree line. Nothing but shadows, a sea of black between the trunks. Then, just for a second, I saw them, two eyes reflecting the light, glowing faintly before disappearing into the dark. I sucked in a breath, my hand tightening around the flashlight. What is it? Ryan asked, his voice low now, the bravado slipping. Thought I saw something, I muttered, not taking my eyes
Starting point is 08:21:22 off the trees. I tried to steady my breathing, but the feeling was. was there again, that same quiet I'd felt when we first arrived, only now it was louder, more pressing, like the forest itself was trying to warn me. Ryan scoffed, though there was an edge to it, probably just a deer, you're jumpier than a rabbit, Ethan. He tossed another log onto the fire, and the flames shot up, illuminating the clearing, pushing the shadows back a bit. Come on, let's get some sleep. We got an early start tomorrow. I nodded, but I couldn't shake that feeling, even as I crawled into my tent and zipped it shut. I lay there, listening, straining to hear anything beyond the crackling fire, and Ryan's steady breathing in the next tent over.
Starting point is 08:22:08 The wind had picked up, rustling the leaves, but underneath it, I thought I could still hear that howl, faint and distant, echoing through the trees. Sleep came in fits and starts. Every time I drifted off, I dream of twisted figures moving through the woods, their limbs bending in ways they shouldn't, faces obscured by shadows. I'd wake up in a sweat, heart pounding, sure that something was standing just outside the tent, waiting, but every time I looked, there was nothing, just the darkness, deep and endless. By the time dawn finally broke, I felt like I hadn't slept at all. I crawled out of the tent, the morning air biting at my skin, and found Ryan already up.
Starting point is 08:22:54 packing his gear with that same easy grin. See, told you, nothing to worry about, he said, clapping me on the shoulder. Today's going to be a good day, Ethan. Let's get us a deer. I forced a smile, but deep down, I knew something was wrong. The forest hadn't let go of that silence. It had just stepped back, waiting, watching. And somehow, I knew we weren't alone out here, not by a long shot. The morning started out all right, clear skies, crisp air, and the kind of chill that wakes you up better than a pot of coffee.
Starting point is 08:23:31 Ryan was his usual upbeat self, cracking jokes and talking about all the deer we were going to see today. I tried to match his energy, but I couldn't shake the feeling from the night before. The silence of the forest still weighed heavy, and those glowing eyes were burned into my memory. We packed up our rifles and headed deeper into the woods, following a trail that we were, ran parallel to the creek. It was slow going, the kind of pace where you've got time to notice every twig snapping underfoot, every shift of a branch in the breeze. Ryan was ahead of me, his eyes fixed on the ground, tracking. I couldn't help but let my gaze wander to the tree line, looking for any sign of movement, anything that might explain what we heard. You know, sometimes
Starting point is 08:24:16 when you're hunting, the world feels like it's holding its breath, waiting for you to make a move. That's how it felt that morning. I could hear my own heartbeat, feel the weight of the rifle in my hands, but everything else seemed too still, too expectant. Ryan didn't seem to notice. He just kept moving, scanning the forest for signs of deer. Then, out of nowhere, we heard it, a voice calling out from somewhere up ahead. It was faint, almost drowned out by the wind, but there was no mistaking it.
Starting point is 08:24:49 A woman's voice, calling for help. Ryan stopped dead turning back to look at me, his eyebrows raised. Did you hear that? He asked, though I could see by his face that he already knew I had. Yeah, I replied, my stomach dropping. It didn't make sense. We were miles from anywhere, deep in a forest that hardly anyone ventured into. Who could be out here?
Starting point is 08:25:12 And why? It sounded like it came from over there. Ryan pointed off the trail, into the thickest part of the woods. I didn't like it. The voice seemed off. There was a desperation to it, sure, but something about the tone made my skin crawl. It almost felt too deliberate. Like whoever was calling for help wanted us to come to them, and not the other way around. We should check it out, Ryan said, already starting to head in that direction. Ryan, hang on, I said, grabbing his arm. Something's not right about this. There shouldn't be anyone out here. He shrugged me off, shaking his head. head. What if someone's hurt, Ethan? We can't just ignore it. And with that, he turned and started moving through the underbrush, the branches cracking underfoot as he went. I didn't have much choice but to follow. The farther we went, the more the feeling of unease grew. The trees were thicker here, their branches like skeletal fingers clawing at the sky. The ground was uneven, roots twisting
Starting point is 08:26:14 underfoot, and the air seemed colder too, like the sun wasn't reaching this far in. Ryan called out a couple of times, his voice ringing through the forest, but we got no answer, just that same silence pressing in, heavy and unnatural. Then we saw it. In a small clearing up ahead, there was a deer, standing stock still. At first, I felt a rush of relief. Maybe this was just a normal hunt after all. But as we got closer, I noticed something was wrong.
Starting point is 08:26:47 The deer's limbs were all wrong. too long, bending at strange angles. Its eyes locked onto us, and there was something there, something that wasn't animal. It felt like it was staring through me, not at me. I stopped in my tracks, my mouth going dry. Ryan, I whispered, but he was already raising his rifle, his eyes narrowing as he took aim. Before he could pull the trigger, the deer stood up, I mean fully stood up, on two legs like a man. Ryan froze, his rifle half raised, his eyes wide with shock.
Starting point is 08:27:23 We both just stared as the thing turned, moving in this jerky, unnatural way, and then it bolted into the woods, disappearing into the trees. What the hell was that? Ryan muttered, his voice barely a breath. He looked back at me and for the first time I saw the fear in his eyes. I don't know, I said, my heart pounding in my chest, but we need to get back to camp. We turned, moving as quickly as we could without breaking into a run. The forest seemed to close in around us. Every shadow suddenly deeper, every noise amplified.
Starting point is 08:27:57 It felt like we were being watched. Like whatever that thing was, it was still out there, just out of sight, waiting for us to make a mistake. When we finally stumbled back into camp, it was like stepping into a different world. The fire pit was overturned. Our supplies scattered everywhere. One of the tents had been ripped open. the fabric hanging in tatters, and deep claw marks scored the ground around it. Ryan looked at me, his face pale.
Starting point is 08:28:24 This isn't a bear, he said, his voice cracking. This, this is something else. I nodded, my throat too tight to speak. I knew he was right. Whatever was out there, it wasn't an animal, it was something else, something that knew we were here and wanted us to know it too. We need to leave. I finally managed. My voice barely a whisper. First thing in the morning. Ryan didn't argue. He just nodded. His eyes scanning the tree line, searching for any sign of movement.
Starting point is 08:29:00 We both knew it wasn't over. Whatever had brought us out into those woods wasn't done with us yet. And as the sun dipped below the horizon, plunging the forest into darkness, I felt the dreads settle in, deeper than before. We weren't alone out here. Morning couldn't come soon enough, and when it finally did, I felt like I'd aged a decade. The whole night, I was on edge, jumping at every creek, every rustle of leaves outside the tent. It was as if the darkness was alive, breathing down our necks. I could barely sleep. Every time I managed to close my eyes, I'd see that deer thing standing up, those eyes staring right through me.
Starting point is 08:29:41 Ryan was already up by the time I dragged myself out of the tent. He looked like hell, and honestly, I probably looked worse. He gave me a quick nod, and we got to packing up camp. There wasn't much to say. We both knew we needed to get out of these woods. The sooner, the better. We set off along the trail, moving at a quick pace. The sky was overcast, the sunlight dim and cold,
Starting point is 08:30:07 and the forest around us seemed even more unfamiliar than it had before. I kept looking over my shoulder, scanning the shadows for any sign of movement. I could tell Ryan was on edge, too. He wasn't cracking jokes or talking like he usually did. He was focused, his eyes darting from tree to tree, his shoulders tense. And then it happened. Ryan, over here I found something. The voice was unmistakable.
Starting point is 08:30:35 It was my own. I stopped in my tracks, the color draining from my face. I hadn't said a word. Ryan turned to me, his eyes wide, and I could see the confusion, the fear, flickering in his expression. What the hell? Ryan whispered. His voice barely audible. He looked at me, then back in the direction the voice had come from. The forest was still, almost too still, and the air felt thick with anticipation. I opened my mouth to say something, but before I could, we saw it. A figure stepped out from the trees, someone who looked just like me. It moved awkwardly, like it was struggling
Starting point is 08:31:14 to control its own body, its head jerking from side to side as if it was sniffing the air. My own face stared back at me, but there was something horribly wrong with it. The eyes were empty, hollow, and the smile that spread across its lips was twisted like it was mocking me. Ryan! It called again, the voice a warped echo of my own. Over here, I found something. Ryan raised his rifle, his hands shaking, and for a second I thought he might pull the trigger. But the thing, whatever it was, moved back, slipping into the shadows before he could even line up a shot. My heart pounded in my chest, and I realized I'd been holding my breath. Did you see that? Ryan gasped, his face as pale as a ghost. Ethan, what the hell was that?
Starting point is 08:32:04 I shook my head trying to make sense of what I'd just seen. My mouth was dry and my thoughts were racing, but one thing was clear. We had to get out of here. Whatever was out there, it wasn't going to let us go easily. Come on, I said, my voice barely steady. We need to move. Now. We started back down the trail, moving faster now, practically running.
Starting point is 08:32:29 Every step felt like a gamble, like the ground beneath our feet might give way. or the trees around us might reach out and drag us into the dark. My legs were burning, my breath coming in short gasps, but I didn't dare slow down. I could hear Ryan behind me, his footsteps crunching through the underbrush, and I prayed that he'd keep up, but the forest, it wasn't the same anymore.
Starting point is 08:32:54 The path twisted and turned in ways that it hadn't before, like the woods were shifting around us, trying to confuse us, to trap us. The GPS I had clipped to my belt was useless. It kept spinning, unable to get a signal. Panic was clawing at the edge of my mind, and I could feel my grip on reality slipping bit by bit. We're going in circles, Ryan shouted.
Starting point is 08:33:18 His voice tinged with desperation. He was right. I recognized a fallen log we'd passed at least twice already. It felt like we were being herded, like the forest itself was conspiring against us, pushing us deeper into its heart. Suddenly, we heard it, a low, guttural growl closer than ever. My blood ran cold, and I knew, without a doubt, that whatever was out there was closing in.
Starting point is 08:33:45 I looked at Ryan, and I could see the terror in his eyes. We were running out of time. We have to keep moving, I said, my voice cracking. We can't stay here. Night was falling, the shadows growing longer, and I knew we couldn't spend another night in these words. woods, we needed to find a way out, any way out. The howling started again, echoing through the trees, and I could hear the snapping of branches, the rustle of leaves. It was coming for us, whatever it was,
Starting point is 08:34:16 and it wasn't going to stop. Then, as if by some miracle, we broke through the tree line and stumbled onto an old logging road. It was overgrown, barely more than a dirt path, but it was something. It was a way out. And then, almost like a gift from above, I saw headlights in the distance. A truck, rumbling slowly down the road. Run! I shouted, grabbing Ryan's arm and we sprinted towards the light. The creature's howl echoed behind us, closer now, and I could hear it crashing through the underbrush chasing us. My heart felt like it might explode, my lungs screaming for air, but I didn't stop. I couldn't stop. The truck slowed as it reached us. The driver's face a mix of shock and confusion. We didn't give him much of a choice. We clambered into
Starting point is 08:35:06 the bed of the truck, shouting for him to go, to get us out of there. The truck lurched forward, and I looked back just for a second. At the edge of the woods, I saw it. The creature, standing there, watching us, its form shifting in the fading light, melting into the shadows. As the truck sped away, I turned to Ryan. He was breathing hard, his eyes were. wide, and I knew we both felt the same thing. Relief, yes, but also a gnawing fear. Whatever that thing was, it had let us go. But I couldn't shake the feeling that it wasn't over, that we'd only just escaped by the skin of our teeth. And as the forest disappeared behind us, I made a silent vow. I was never coming back to White Claw, not ever. We didn't speak much during the ride back to
Starting point is 08:35:58 town. The truck rattled over the old dirt road, the tires kicking up dust, and Ryan and I just sat in the back, huddled against the cold metal. Our eyes glued to the fading tree line. I kept expecting to see it again, whatever that thing was, lurking just beyond the reach of the headlights. But there was nothing, just the dark wall of the forest, silent and empty. It should have felt like a relief, but honestly, it didn't. Ryan's face was pale. his eyes hollow. I knew he was thinking the same thing I was, that we'd come within a hair's breadth of not making it out. I didn't have any words to make it better. What could I say? It's over? I didn't believe that, not for a second. Whatever was out there, it had let us go,
Starting point is 08:36:49 but not because we'd beaten it, more like it had gotten bored, or maybe it was just playing with us. Either way, we'd been lucky, and I knew it was. wouldn't last if we made the mistake of coming back. The driver, a middle-aged guy in a flannel shirt and a ball cap, pulled up to the edge of town and let us off near the gas station. He didn't ask any questions, and I was grateful for that. Maybe he'd seen the look on our faces and decided he didn't want to know. Either way, I thanked him, and he gave a quick nod before driving off, leaving us standing there, bathed in the yellow glow of the streetlights. Well, Ryan said after a long silence,
Starting point is 08:37:30 what do we tell people? I looked at him, and for a moment I didn't have an answer. My head was pounding, my body aching from exhaustion, and all I wanted was to put as much distance as I could between myself and White Claw. But we couldn't just say nothing, could we?
Starting point is 08:37:47 People were bound to ask, our friends, our families. We couldn't exactly tell them the truth. They'd think we were crazy. Bear, I finally said, my voice rough. We tell them it was a bear, big one, got into our camp, tore the place up. We were lucky to get out. It sounded weak, even to my ears, but it was the best I could come up with. Ryan seemed to consider it for a moment, then nodded slowly.
Starting point is 08:38:16 Yeah, a bear, he repeated, like he was trying to convince himself. It's better than the truth, I guess. We headed into the gas station, the bright fluorescent lights making my eyes hurt. The clerk behind the counter glanced at us, her eyes widening slightly at our disheveled state. I must have looked like I'd crawled out of a grave. Ryan asked to use the phone, and I watched him from the corner of my eye as he called his brother for a ride. My hands were shaking, and I shoved them into my pockets, trying to steady myself. I couldn't get the image of that thing out of my mind.
Starting point is 08:38:54 my own face, twisted into something wrong, something that shouldn't exist. I kept hearing the way it had called out to Ryan, the way it had used my voice, like it was wearing my skin. The thought made me shudder. I'd never felt so vulnerable, so completely exposed. Ryan's brother showed up about 20 minutes later, and we climbed into the back of his truck without a word. Ryan must have told him about the bear, because he didn't ask any questions, just drove us back to Ryan's place. I stared out the window the whole way, watching the landscape blur by, feeling like I was caught in some kind of waking nightmare. It was hard to believe we were finally out of those woods, harder still to believe that whatever had happened out there was real.
Starting point is 08:39:40 When we got to Ryan's house, his brother helped him inside, and I stood there for a moment, feeling lost. Ryan turned back to me, his eyes meeting mine, and there was a look there, A shared understanding, I guess. We didn't need to say it out loud. We both knew we were never going back. Not to Whiteclaw. Not ever. Take care, Ethan, Ryan said, his voice hoarse.
Starting point is 08:40:06 I nodded, giving him a small smile that I didn't really feel. You too. And Ryan, don't talk about it, to anyone. He didn't hesitate. I won't. I watched him disappear into the house, the door closing behind him, and then I turned and started walking home. It wasn't far, just a few blocks, but every shadow seemed deeper, every sound sharper.
Starting point is 08:40:31 I couldn't shake the feeling that I was still being watched, that whatever was out there had followed me, hiding just beyond the glow of the streetlights. When I finally reached my house, I fumbled with the key, my hand still trembling. I stepped inside, locking the door behind me, and leaned against it, taking a deep breath. The house was quiet, empty, but it didn't feel like a refuge, not anymore. I couldn't shake the feeling that the darkness outside was pressing in, that any second I'd hear that voice again, my own voice, calling out from somewhere it shouldn't be. I walked to the kitchen, poured myself a drink, and downed it in one go.
Starting point is 08:41:13 The burn of the whiskey did little to calm my nerves. I knew that sleep wouldn't come easily tonight, if at all. I knew that every creek of the house, every whisper of wind, would have me on edge wondering if I'd really left it all behind. As I stood there, staring out the kitchen window into the darkened yard, I made myself a promise. I'd never set foot in White Claw Forest again. I didn't care if it meant giving up hunting for good. Whatever was out there, it wasn't done with us. And I wasn't about to give it another chance.
Starting point is 08:41:45 Ryan and I had been lucky, but luck runs out. and some places, some places are just meant to be left alone. It all seemed like a good idea at the time. Getting away from it all, the city noise, the crowds, the responsibilities, just us, the forest, and the crackle of a campfire to keep us company. Dale was the one who suggested the Idaho wilderness. He said he knew a spot way off the beaten path, a place no one else would think to go. Honestly, it sounded perfect.
Starting point is 08:42:27 A bit too perfect maybe, but at that moment, I wasn't thinking about anything but getting away. The road wound on for miles, nothing but a narrow ribbon of dirt cutting through the thick woods. Pine trees stretched up so high, you could barely see the sky, their branches arching overhead to block out what little sun managed to filter through. The deeper we went, the quieter it got. No birds, no wind. just the low hum of the truck's engine and the crunch of gravel under the tires. It wasn't exactly the postcard picture of tranquility I'd imagined,
Starting point is 08:43:03 but there was something about it that drew me in, like stepping into another world. Tom leaned forward from the back seat, staring out the window. Think we're going to find Bigfoot out here, or what? he asked with a grin. Dale just laughed, his hands steady on the wheel. More like we'll find out how fast we can run. if we do, he said, his eyes focused on the road ahead. I tried to laugh too, but it came out more like a cough. I don't know why I felt uneasy already. Maybe it was the fact that my phone lost service an hour back, or maybe it was just the way the trees seemed to press in on us,
Starting point is 08:43:41 like they were closing off any way out. Whatever it was, I kept it to myself. We finally made it to the clearing by late afternoon, a small patch of open ground next to a calm lake. The water was so still it looked like glass, reflecting the treetops perfectly, like a portal to another world beneath the surface. We all got out, stretched our legs, and set to work on packing. Dale and Tom started on the tents while Emily and Sarah gathered firewood. I took a walk around the edge of the clearing, just trying to shake off the feeling that had settled in my chest. There wasn't much to see, just trees, more trees, and a few deer tracks leading down to the water. I watched the lake for a while, feeling the quiet settle over me.
Starting point is 08:44:29 It wasn't peaceful quiet, though. It was the kind that makes your skin crawl, like you're being watched, but you can't quite tell from where. You all right, Matt? Sarah called from behind me, her arms full of branches. I turned and forced a smile. Yeah, just taking it all in, I said. And she nodded, though her eyes stayed on me a little longer than I liked.
Starting point is 08:44:52 That night we sat around the fire, flames flickering against the darkness that pressed in from all sides. Dale told stories. Mostly the kind meant to make us laugh, but then he moved on to something else, something Sarah had mentioned earlier, a legend she'd heard from her grandmother, a skinwalker, he called it, a witch that could take on the shape of anything, even people. He made it sound like a joke, but his eyes kept flicking to the shadows between the trees. Come on, Dale. Quit trying to freak us out, Emily said, tossing a pine cone into the fire. But her voice had a nervous edge to it, and she kept glancing over her shoulder. Dale raised his hands in surrender.
Starting point is 08:45:35 All right, all right. I'm just saying, if you see me wandering around out there, don't follow. We all laughed, but it wasn't real laughter. It was the kind that came out too quick, too loud, the kind that was my kind that was meant to cover up the silence. I found myself watching the edge of the clearing, half expecting to see something move just beyond the reach of the firelight. That night, I lay in my tent, staring up at the thin fabric ceiling, listening. The wind had picked up, making the trees creak and sway, but there was something else too. A rustling, just outside. I held my breath trying to convince myself it was just an animal, maybe a deer or a raccoon, but the sound was
Starting point is 08:46:21 slow, deliberate, moving closer until it was right beside my tent. My heart pounded, and I forced myself to look. Slowly I unzipped the flap just enough to see out. Nothing, just darkness and the faint glow of the dying campfire. I let out a breath, feeling foolish, and zipped the tent back up. But even after I closed my eyes, I couldn't shake the feeling that something had been there, watching. Morning came too soon, the light pale and cold as it filtered through the trees. Dale was already up poking at the fire. He looked over at me and gave a nod. Sleep all right?
Starting point is 08:47:01 He asked, but I could see the same unease in his eyes that I felt in my chest. Yeah, I lied, like a baby. We both knew it wasn't true, but neither of us said anything more. more. The morning started off uneasy. You ever have one of those moments where you wake up, and it feels like the world has shifted just a little while you slept. Like something's out of place, but you can't put your finger on it. That's exactly how I felt as I crawled out of the tent, the cool morning air wrapping around me. Dale was already by the fire, coaxing what was left of the coals into a weak flame. He gave me a nod and a half smile, but it didn't reach his eyes.
Starting point is 08:47:42 Coffee? he asked, holding up the pot. Sure, I could use some, I said, rubbing at my eyes. The unease from last night hadn't gone away, not entirely. It just kind of sat there, under the surface, like a splinter you can't quite get to. Emily and Tom were still in their tents, but Sarah was wandering near the edge of the clearing, staring up at the trees. She had that look, like she was searching for something but wasn't sure what she'd find. I wandered over coffee in hand and stood beside her.
Starting point is 08:48:16 You all right? I asked. She didn't answer right away, just kept looking at the trees, her eyes following something invisible. Do you see those? She finally said, pointing at a nearby trunk. I squinted and stepped closer. There were marks in the bark, deep, jagged lines, almost like letters, but nothing I recognized.
Starting point is 08:48:39 The cuts looked fresh. the wood beneath still bright and raw. Probably just kids messing around, I said. But even as I said it, I knew that didn't make sense. We were miles from anywhere, way off any trail, and the marks didn't look random. They felt deliberate, like someone had put real thought into them. Sarah frowned, her fingers tracing the edges of the marks without touching them.
Starting point is 08:49:05 My grandma used to talk about stuff like this. She said, her voice low. She'd say these kinds of symbols are a warning. I tried to brush it off with a smile. Well, that's comforting. She looked at me, her eyes serious. I'm not joking, Matt, I don't like this. I didn't either, but I didn't want to admit it.
Starting point is 08:49:27 Let's just keep an eye out, okay? I said, trying to sound confident. I'm sure it's nothing. The rest of the morning passed slowly. The others eventually woke up, and we decided to go for a hike. Dale led the way, his backpack slung over one shoulder, acting like nothing was wrong. But I could see it in the way he kept glancing over his shoulder, the way his jokes fell flat. We were all on edge, even if no one wanted to say it out loud.
Starting point is 08:49:56 The deeper we went into the woods, the quieter it got. I know it sounds cliche, but it was true. No birds, no rustling leaves, just the sound of our footsteps crunching on the forest floor. Every now and then I thought I heard something, a rustling off to the side, a snap of a twig. But every time I looked, there was nothing there, just trees and shadows. At one point Tom stopped dead in his tracks, staring at something ahead of us. What is that? he asked, his voice barely a whisper. We all gathered around, looking where he was pointing.
Starting point is 08:50:32 At first, I didn't see anything, but then I spotted it, a deer carcass, half hidden in the underbrush. It had been torn apart, its ribs exposed, the flesh ripped away like something had gotten to it in a hurry. Flies buzzed around the remains, and the air smelled sour, like blood and rot. Cougar maybe, Dale said, but he didn't sound convinced. Doesn't look right, Sarah muttered. She was right. It didn't. The body wasn't just torn up.
Starting point is 08:51:04 It was arranged almost. The legs bent at strange angles. the head twisted to the side. It looked, placed, like someone had meant for us to find it. A shiver ran down my spine and I turned away. Let's keep moving, I said, my voice tighter than I wanted it to be. No one argued. That night, back at camp, the tension was thick enough to cut with a knife.
Starting point is 08:51:31 We sat around the fire, the flames casting long, flickering shadows across the clearing. No one was in the mood for ghost stories. Even Dale was quiet, staring into the fire like he was trying to find answers there. It was just after midnight when the whispers started. At first I thought I was imagining it. A faint sound like wind through the branches. But it had a rhythm to it, a pattern. I strained to listen.
Starting point is 08:51:57 My heart pounding. It was saying something. My name. I swear I heard my name, whispered from somewhere out there in the dark. Did you hear that? Emily's voice was barely a breath. She was sitting across from me, her eyes wide, her face pale in the firelight. I nodded, my mouth dry. Yeah, I heard it. Dale stood up, turning in a slow circle, his flashlight sweeping across the trees. The beam flickered, the batteries dying, and for just a second, I thought I saw something.
Starting point is 08:52:29 A shape, tall and thin, standing just beyond the firelight. Then the beam came back, and it was gone. Who's out there? Dale called his voice cracking. No answer, just the whispers getting louder circling us like something was moving just out of sight. Let's go check it out, Tom said. But no one moved. We all knew better. Whatever was out there, we didn't want to find it. The whispers kept going, and I could feel the fear rising in my chest, my pulse pounding in my ears. It felt like the darkness was closing in, pressing against the edge of the firelight, and I knew, deep down, that we weren't alone. Something was out there, and it was watching us,
Starting point is 08:53:13 and it knew our names. The morning came with a chill that settled deep in my bones. The sun barely pierced the heavy blanket of mist that hung over the clearing. It felt like the light itself was hesitant to enter the woods, like it knew better. I crawled out of the tent and found Sarah sitting by the cold fire pit staring at the ashes. You sleep at all? I asked, my voice sounding too loud in the stillness. She shook her head, her eyes still fixed on the ashes. Not really, she said. I kept hearing things. Yeah, me too. I sat down beside her. I wanted to tell her that everything was going to be fine, that we were just scaring ourselves. But I couldn't make myself say it. Not after last night. The others were stirring too. Emily emerged from her tent,
Starting point is 08:54:05 her face pale, eyes shadowed with exhaustion. Dale looked like he hadn't slept at all, his hair sticking up in all directions, his eyes bloodshot. Tom tried to keep the mood light, cracking a joke about needing coffee stronger than what we had, but no one laughed. We all felt it. Something had changed. We weren't just out here camping anymore. We were being hunted. We decided to stay close to camp that day. No one said it, but we all knew we didn't want to stray too far from whatever small comfort the fire could bring us. Dale and Tom went to gather more wood while I stayed with Sarah and Emily.
Starting point is 08:54:44 I kept my eyes on the tree line, scanning the shadows for movement. But the woods were as still as they'd been since we got there, too still. Do you really think it could be what I said? Sarah asked after a while. her voice barely more than a whisper. A skin walker? I paused, not wanting to dismiss her, but not wanting to give it power either. I don't know.
Starting point is 08:55:08 But whatever it is, it's messing with us. Sarah looked at me, her eyes wide and filled with fear. They say it feeds on fear. The more scared you are, the stronger it gets. Well, that's just great, I muttered, trying to sound braver than I felt. guess we'd better try not to be scared then. Easier said than done. Especially when, a few hours later,
Starting point is 08:55:34 Dale and Tom came back with faces as pale as ghosts. Dale was holding something in his hand, and as he got closer, I saw what it was. A piece of cloth, torn and stained dark red. He didn't say anything, just held it out for us to see. Where'd you find that? Emily asked, her voice trembling. By the lake, Tom.
Starting point is 08:55:56 said there were more pieces like someone he trailed off and I knew what he meant like someone hadn't made it out of the woods we all just stared at each other the silence thick and heavy I could see it in their eyes the realization that we were in real danger now this wasn't just some creepy noises in the dark whatever was out there it had already taken someone maybe more than one all right I said standing up trying to keep my voice steady We're leaving. Tonight. I don't care if it's dark. We're getting out of here. No one argued. We spent the rest of the day packing up camp, moving in a daze. Every little sound made us jump,
Starting point is 08:56:38 branches creaking, leaves rustling. It all felt wrong, like the forest was watching us, waiting for us to make a mistake. By the time the sun started to dip below the horizon, we were ready to go. We just had to get to the trucks. It wasn't that far, maybe a moment. mile, but with every step the air seemed to get heavier, like something was pushing back against us. I couldn't shake the feeling that we were being followed, that if I turned around, I'd see something standing there, just out of sight. The first whispers started just as the last light faded. My name, soft and mocking, drifting through the trees. I glanced at Sarah. Her face was white as a sheet, her eyes wide. She heard it too.
Starting point is 08:57:25 Keep moving, I said, my voice barely holding together. Don't look back. The whispers grew louder, circling us. Emily let out a sob, and I reached back, grabbing her hand, pulling her along. Dale was ahead of us, his flashlight flickering, the beam cutting through the darkness like a knife. And then, just for a moment, I saw it, something tall, impossibly thin, standing between the trees. Its face looked like Dale's, twisted in a grin that wasn't here. human. I stumbled, nearly falling, my heart hammering in my chest. Go, I shouted. Just keep going.
Starting point is 08:58:03 We broke into a run, the woods blurring around us. The whispers turned into laughter, echoing from every direction, and I swear I could hear it breathing behind me, could feel its eyes on my back. The trail seemed to stretch on forever, the darkness closing in tighter with every step. And then, finally, I saw the trucks. I almost couldn't believe. it, like they were a mirage, shimmering in the dim light of the moon. We burst out of the trees panting, and I didn't stop until I reached the door, my hands shaking as I fumbled for the keys. Get in, get in!
Starting point is 08:58:39 I shouted, the panic in my voice undeniable now. The others piled in, slamming the door shut, and I turned the key. The engine roared to life, and I hit the gas, gravel spraying as we tore out of there, the trees falling away behind us. I didn't look back. I couldn't. But as we sped down the dirt road, I saw something in the side mirror, a shape, standing at the edge of the clearing, watching us leave. It looked like me. I don't know how long I drove. The road blurred together in the darkness, nothing but a narrow line cutting through the endless trees. I just kept my foot on the gas,
Starting point is 08:59:18 my eyes darting to the side mirror, expecting to see that shape following us. It was quiet in the truck, except for our breathing, sharp and panicked. No one said a word. We were all too afraid that if we spoke, it might make whatever had happened real. The headlights carved a path through the woods, the beam bouncing as we hit every dip and rut in the road. I glanced at Sarah in the passenger seat. She was staring straight ahead, her face pale, her hands gripping the dashboard. Behind us, I could hear Emily crying softly, and Dale mumbling under his breath, like he was trying to convince himself it was all over. I wanted to believe it too. Finally, the trees started to thin, and the dirt road gave way to pavement. I took a deep breath, my shoulders sagging with
Starting point is 09:00:05 relief. We made it. We were out. I pulled over onto the shoulder, my hands shaking as I put the truck in park. We're okay, I said, though my voice cracked. We're out. Sarah nodded. Her eyes still wide. She let out a shaky breath and looked back at the others. Everyone all right?" Emily sniffled, wiping her eyes. Yeah. Yeah. I think so.
Starting point is 09:00:31 Dale just nodded. His jaw clenched tight. Tom, who had been silent the whole time, finally spoke up. What? What the hell was that? His voice was barely more than a whisper. I shook my head. I don't know.
Starting point is 09:00:46 I don't think I want to know. And that was the truth. Whatever it was, it wasn't something that fit into our world. that fit into our world. It belonged out there, in the dark, in the places people weren't supposed to go. I took a deep breath and turned the key, ready to get us far away from that place. But just as I reached for the gear shift, I saw something. A piece of paper fluttering under the windshield wiper. My stomach dropped. Hang on, I said, my voice tight. I opened the door, stepping out into the cold night air. The road was empty, nothing but darkness stretching out in both directions.
Starting point is 09:01:25 I reached for the paper, my fingers trembling as I pulled it free. It was old, yellowed, like it had been left out in the weather for too long. The handwriting was shaky, almost childlike, scrawled in dark ink. Don't come back. My heart skipped a beat, and I felt a chill run down my spine. I turned, looking back at the woods. There was a little. There was a little bit of was nothing there, just shadows and trees. But I could feel it, that same presence, that same weight, like eyes on the back of my neck. I got back in the truck slamming the door shut. What is it? Sarah asked, her voice trembling. I showed her the note. She read it, her eyes widening, and then handed it back without a word. I crumpled it in my hand, my knuckles white. We're leaving,
Starting point is 09:02:13 now. No one argued. I put the truck in drive, and we sped up. off, the tires kicking up gravel as we pulled away from that place. The road stretched out in front of us, and I kept my eyes on it, refusing to look back. I didn't need to. I knew it was still there, somewhere in the dark watching us leave. We drove for hours, not stopping until we reached a small town, the first sign of civilization we'd seen since we left the woods. I pulled into a gas station, the neon lights buzzing overhead, and turned off the engine. We all just, just, and we all just sat there for a moment, the silence pressing in on us. Dale finally spoke, his voice barely more than a whisper. What do we do now? I looked at him, then at the others. Emily was staring
Starting point is 09:03:01 out the window, her eyes red from crying. Tom was slumped in his seat, his face pale. Sarah was still clutching the dashboard, her knuckles white. We go home, I said. We forget this ever happened. But I knew it wouldn't be that easy. Even now, with the bright, lights of the gas station around us, I could still feel it, that sense of dread, that feeling that we weren't alone. It was like a shadow, clinging to me, refusing to let go. We got out, stretching our legs, the cold night air biting at our skin. I watched as Dale filled the tank, his eyes darting around, never staying still for long. Sarah stood beside me, her arms wrapped around herself, her breath coming out in shaky puffs. You think it's over?
Starting point is 09:03:48 She asked, her voice barely audible. I wanted to tell her yes, that we were safe now, that whatever it was couldn't follow us here. But I couldn't make myself say it. Instead, I just shrugged. I hope so. She nodded, her eyes distant. Me too. We got back in the truck and I drove us the rest of the way home. No one spoke. The radio was off and the only sound was the hum of the engine and the tires on the pavement. The farther we got from the woods, the lighter I felt, like a weight was slowly lifting off my chest. But it never went away completely. Not really. By the time we reached the city, the sky was starting to lighten, the first hints of dawn breaking over the horizon. I dropped everyone off, one by one, each of them giving me a silent nod before disappearing into their homes. When I finally pulled into my driveway, I just sat there for a moment, the engine ticking as it cooled. I looked at the note, still crumpled in my hand, and felt a chill run through me. Don't come back. I wasn't planning on it. It all started out like any other thrill-seeking adventure.
Starting point is 09:05:09 Me, Brian, and Jerry had run out of places to explore in our small town. We'd hit every abandoned church, mall, and run-down house we could find. You know, the kind of places where the roof is caving in, and the air smells like mildew and broken dreams. But honestly, we were getting bored. We wanted something bigger, scarier. So when Jerry mentioned Forest Haven Asylum, well, it felt like the next logical step. Or at least, that's what we told ourselves. Come on, it's supposed to be haunted, Jerry said.
Starting point is 09:05:43 Eyes lit up like a kid on Christmas morning. I remember the way he said it, like he was daring us to say no. And of course we didn't. We just laughed and nodded. pretending the idea didn't freak us out even a little bit. The place had a reputation. Everyone knew that.
Starting point is 09:06:00 It was way out in the woods, and the stories about it were not exactly bedtime material. People said there were experiments done there, inhumane ones, that it was haunted by the ghosts of the patients who'd suffered. And yeah, some people had even gone missing. But that was all just urban legend, right? At least, that's what we kept saying to ourselves,
Starting point is 09:06:22 over and over. as we packed up our flashlights and snacks and hopped into Brian's beat-up car. The rain started on the drive over, just a light drizzle at first. But by the time we were deep into the forest, it was coming down in sheets. The road was barely visible, just a narrow strip of dirt that twisted and turned between the trees. Jerry was in the back seat, leaning forward between the seats, talking a mile a minute about the asylum's history, how it had been shut down in the 60s,
Starting point is 09:06:54 how people said you could still hear screams if you listened hard enough. Dude, you're not helping, I said, half joking, trying to keep my voice steady. But honestly, the way the wind howled through the trees and the rain hammered against the car, it felt like the forest itself didn't want us there. Brian just grinned, his knuckles white on the steering wheel. You scared, man? he asked. And I laughed it off, even though, yeah, I was. When we finally saw the building, it looked even worse than I'd imagined.
Starting point is 09:07:27 It was huge, way bigger than it had looked in the pictures. The windows were all shattered, and the walls were covered in dark creeping vines. The rain made everything look shiny and slick, like the place was sweating. I shivered, but it wasn't just from the cold. There was something off about it, like the air itself was thicker here. We parked the car a little ways off. just in case anyone drove by. Not that anyone would this far out.
Starting point is 09:07:58 We grabbed our flashlights, and I remember hesitating for just a second before I opened my door. I almost suggested we just turn around and go home. But then I saw the look on Jerry's face, excited, almost giddy, and I couldn't say it. I didn't want to be the one to chicken out.
Starting point is 09:08:16 As we made our way to the asylum, we heard it, a voice, faint, make us all stop in our tracks. Come join us, it said. Just like that, like someone was standing right there, whispering in our ears. I looked around, my heart pounding, but there was no one, just trees and shadows and the
Starting point is 09:08:38 sound of rain. Probably just another group messing with us, Brian said, but his voice sounded tight, like he was trying to convince himself. Jerry just laughed. Yeah, or maybe the ghost wants some coming. He said, waggling his eyebrows. I tried to laugh too, but it came out sounding more like a cough. We found a broken window around the side of the building and climbed in one by one.
Starting point is 09:09:04 The second I dropped into the basement, the smell hit me, like something had died down there and never been found. I gagged, pulling my shirt up over my nose. Oh, gross, I muttered, my voice echoing off the concrete walls. Welcome to Forest Haven, Jerry said. his voice a mock announcer tone, and Brian snickered. But there was an edge to it, like we were all trying a little too hard to act normal. The basement was pitch black, our flashlights barely cutting through the darkness. The walls were covered in graffiti, some of it just names and dates, but other parts, I don't know, symbols maybe, weird shapes that seemed to twist and move when I looked at them
Starting point is 09:09:47 too long. I shook my head, trying to clear it. We started moving through the basement, our footsteps echoing. Everything was wet, the floor slick beneath our feet. The deeper we went, the more I felt it, that heaviness. Like the air was pressing down on me. I kept telling myself it was just my imagination, just the stories getting to me. But then we heard it again, a voice. This time it was a laugh, soft, almost playful, but there was something wrong about it.
Starting point is 09:10:19 It echoed down the hallway, and I felt the hair on my arms stand up. Jerry turned to us, his grin a little shaky now. Guess we're not alone after all, he said, and I forced myself to smile back. But deep down, I knew this was a bad idea, a really, really bad idea. And we were just getting started. We'd only been in the asylum for a few minutes, but already I could feel that something was off. The air was heavy, like it was weighing down. down on me, and that awful, rotting smell seemed to be getting worse the deeper we went.
Starting point is 09:10:55 I mean, I knew it was going to be creepy. This was an abandoned asylum after all, but there was something else, something I couldn't quite put my finger on. Do you guys hear that? Brian asked, his voice low. He'd stopped walking, his flashlight shining ahead of him. I strained to listen, and yeah, there was something. It sounded like whispering, real soft, coming from somewhere up head. My heart started to pound, and I glanced over at Jerry. He just shrugged, a grin still plastered on his face. It's probably just the wind, Jerry said, like he was trying to brush it off. But I could tell he was just as nervous as I was. He kept looking around, his eyes darting from shadow to shadow. Or maybe the ghosts are welcoming us. Not funny, I muttered, but I forced myself
Starting point is 09:11:46 to move forward. We couldn't just stand there, right? We had to keep going. The walls were covered in graffiti, some of it just nonsense, but some of it... I don't know, it almost looked like it was written in a different language or something. Weird symbols that made my head hurt if I looked at them for too long. We kept walking, our footsteps echoing off the concrete. It felt like we were making way too much noise, like we were waking something up. I could feel my nerves getting worse, like I was waiting for something to jump out at us.
Starting point is 09:12:18 Every time my flashlight flickered, I found myself holding my breath. Jerry, of course, was still talking a mile a minute, mostly about the experiment room. Apparently, some people thought they'd done all sorts of awful things there, stuff they never wrote down, things they tried to cover up. We should split up, he said suddenly, turning around to look at me and Brian. His eyes were wide, excited. Cover more ground, you know? I froze.
Starting point is 09:12:48 I mean, I'd seen enough horror movies to know that splitting up was never a good idea. But Jerry was already talking, pointing out different directions we could go, and Brian was nodding along like he thought it made sense. I don't know, guys, I started. But then Jerry gave me this look, like I was being a coward. Come on, we're not going to find anything if we just stick together, he said. Besides, we've got flashlights, we'll be fine. I didn't feel fine, not at all, but I didn't want to be the one to back out either, so I swallowed my
Starting point is 09:13:23 fear and nodded. Okay, but let's meet back here in ten minutes, all right? I said. My voice sounded shaky, even to me. Deal, Jerry said, clapping me on the shoulder. Then he turned and walked off, his flashlight bobbing up and down as he disappeared into the dark. Brian gave me a small smile, like he was trying to be reassuring, before heading off. in the opposite direction. Suddenly, I was alone. The silence was deafening, and I could hear my own breathing, loud and uneven. I tried to focus, shining my flashlight down the hallway in front of me.
Starting point is 09:14:02 The walls were cracked, the paint peeling away in long curling strips. There were old rusted gurneys pushed up against the walls, and I couldn't help but wonder what they'd been used for. I walked slowly, my shoes slipping a little on the wet floor. Every creek and groan of the building made me jump, and that whispering sound was still there, always just out of reach, like it was following me. I kept telling myself it was just the wind, just the rain finding its way through the broken windows,
Starting point is 09:14:33 but deep down I knew it wasn't. Then I heard it, footsteps, slow, deliberate footsteps coming from somewhere behind me. I stopped, my heart pounding in my chest. Jerry? I called out. My voice echoing. Brian? No answer. Just those footsteps. Getting closer. I turned around, my flashlight shaking as I tried to see who or what was there. But there was no one, just shadows, stretching down the hallway. I felt a chill run down my spine, and I took a step back.
Starting point is 09:15:08 Something was wrong. I could feel it in my bones. I needed to find the other. now. I turned and started walking faster, my flashlight flickering again. Come on, come on, I muttered, shaking it. The beam steadied and I let out a breath I didn't realize I'd been holding, but then I saw it, up ahead at the end of the hallway, a figure standing perfectly still. It was Jerry, or at least, it looked like Jerry. He was just standing there, facing away from me, not moving. Jerry? I called out, my voice trembling. He didn't answer. He didn't even turn around. I felt my stomach drop, a cold sweat breaking out on the back of my neck. Something was really, really wrong. I took a step closer, and that's when I noticed it, his clothes. They were the same as mine, exactly the same. And his hair,
Starting point is 09:16:04 his hair was the same too. My heart was in my throat as the figure slowly started to turn around, and I knew, even before I saw its face that it wasn't Jerry. It was me. Its eyes were black, empty, and its mouth twisted into a grin that made my skin crawl. Hello, it said in my voice, but wrong, distorted, like it was coming from a broken radio. I felt my legs start to shake, and I turned and ran. I didn't care where I was going. I just needed to get away. The footsteps followed me, echoing down the hallway, faster and faster. And all I could think was that I needed to find Brian, I needed to find Jerry, and I needed to get out of this place before it was too late. I didn't look back as I ran. My heart was pounding so loud I could barely hear anything else.
Starting point is 09:16:57 But I knew that thing was following me. I could hear its footsteps, getting faster, echoing down the hallway. My own footsteps felt like they were slipping, sliding. on the wet floor, but I forced myself to keep moving. I had to find Brian and Jerry. I had to get us all out of here. I turned a corner and sprinted down another hallway, my flashlight flickering like it was on its last legs. Come on, come on, I muttered, shaking it. The light steadied, but I knew it wouldn't last much longer. My breath was coming in gasps, and every shadow felt like it was reaching for me. The asylum felt like it was alive, shifting around me. and I couldn't shake the feeling that it didn't want me to leave.
Starting point is 09:17:41 I burst through a door at the end of the hallway, slamming it shut behind me. I leaned against it, trying to catch my breath, trying to listen for those footsteps. Everything was quiet now, except for the sound of rain pounding against the walls. I wanted to believe that I'd lost it, that whatever that thing was, it wasn't following me anymore.
Starting point is 09:18:02 But deep down I knew that wasn't true. It was just waiting. The room I'd run into was dark, the walls covered in peeling paint and old rusty hooks. It looked like some kind of storage room, maybe for medical supplies or something. There were shelves, but most of them were empty, and the ones that weren't had old dusty jars that I didn't even want to think about. I shivered, wiping the sweat off my forehead, and tried to figure out what to do next. Brian, Jerry? I called out, my voice barely a whisper.
Starting point is 09:18:35 I didn't want to be loud. I didn't want that thing to find me again, but I had to find them. I couldn't leave without them. My voice echoed in the empty room, but there was no answer. Just silence. I turned back to the door, listening,
Starting point is 09:18:51 and then, I heard it. A scream, faint, distant, but definitely real. It was Brian. I knew it was him. I felt a jolt of fear and adrenaline, and I yanked the door open,
Starting point is 09:19:04 running back into the hallway. Brian, I shouted, my voice cracking. The scream had come from somewhere upstairs. I had to find the stairs. I had to get to him. I stumbled through the hallways, the flashlight beam jumping around, and finally found a staircase.
Starting point is 09:19:22 It was old, and the metal railing was rusted, but I didn't care. I took the steps two at a time, my legs burning, the air growing colder the higher I went. I could hear Brian. Brian screaming again, louder now, like he was in pain, and my heart felt like it was going to explode. I yelled, my voice shaking.
Starting point is 09:19:44 Hang on! When I reached the top of the stairs, I saw him. Brian was at the far end of the hallway, standing there, his back to me. I felt a wave of relief. Like maybe everything was going to be okay after all. Brian, I called out, running toward him. We have to get out of here. But he didn't move. He just stood there, staring at the wall, like he didn't even hear me.
Starting point is 09:20:09 I slowed down, something in my gut telling me that something was wrong. Brian? I said again. My voice softer now. I reached out, my hand trembling and touched his shoulder. He turned around and I stumbled back, gasping. His eyes, they were empty. Just black hollow pits, and his mouth was twisted into a grin that looked all wrong. It wasn't Brian. It couldn't be. but it looked just like him. Join us, he said, his voice echoing in the hallway. And I felt a chill run down my spine. I turned and ran.
Starting point is 09:20:43 I didn't know where I was going. I just knew I had to get away. I could hear him laughing behind me, that awful echoing laugh, and I felt tears streaming down my face. This wasn't real. It couldn't be real. I ran through the halls, my legs aching, my lungs burning, and I finally found a door that led outside.
Starting point is 09:21:02 I shoved it open, the cold air hitting me like a slap in the face. I stumbled out into the rain, slipping in the mud, but I didn't stop. I couldn't. I could still hear that laughter, faint now, coming from somewhere inside the building. I made it to the car, my hands shaking so bad I could barely get the keys out of my pocket. I fumbled with them, dropping them in the mud, and I let out a sob, grabbing them and finally getting the door open. I jumped inside, slamming the door shut and locked it. My heart was racing, my whole body trembling, and I turned the key, the engine sputtering before finally roaring to life.
Starting point is 09:21:44 I looked back at the asylum, my headlights cutting through the rain, and I swear, for just a second, I saw them. Brian and Jerry, standing in the doorway, their eyes black, their faces twisted into those awful grins. I closed my eyes. tears streaming down my face and slammed my foot on the gas. I didn't stop driving until I reached a gas station miles away. I stumbled out of the car, barely able to stand, and the guy behind the counter gave me a weird look as I walked in, dripping wet and shaking. You okay, man? he asked. And I opened my mouth to answer, but no words came out. How could I even begin to explain what had happened. I pulled out my phone, my hands still trembling, and called the police. I didn't know
Starting point is 09:22:34 what else to do. I just knew that Brian and Jerry were still back there, and I couldn't go back, not after what I'd seen. I hung up the phone, my whole body numb, and sank down onto the floor, my head and my hands. I didn't know if the police would find them. I didn't know if they'd even believe me. All I knew was that I had to get as far away from that place as possible, because whatever was in that asylum, it wasn't going to let them go. And I wasn't about to let it take me, too. I didn't sleep that night. I couldn't. Every time I closed my eyes, I saw them, Brian and Jerry, standing there in the rain, their faces twisted, those empty black eyes staring right through me. I kept replaying it over and over in my head, trying to convince myself it wasn't real,
Starting point is 09:23:27 but it felt real, too real, and I couldn't shake the feeling that something was still watching me, even now, sitting in that gas station parking lot. The cops showed up after a while, their lights flashing, bright and blinding in the darkness. I stumbled over to them, trying to explain what it happened, but the words got all jumbled up. They're still there, I kept saying. You have to find them. The officer looked at me like I was crazy, but I didn't care. I just needed them to understand. I needed them to help. They took me back to the asylum, and even just seeing it again made my stomach twist. It looked even worse now, the rain coming down in sheets, the windows like dark, empty eyes staring out at us. I didn't want to go back inside, not ever, but I had to point out
Starting point is 09:24:19 where I'd last seen Brian and Jerry. So I led them up the crumbling steps, through the broken door, the flashlight beams flickering in the dark. The place felt different now, still and silent, like it was holding its breath. I tried to ignore the chill that crept up my spine, tried to focus on the officer's voices, on the way their boots echoed on the floor. We searched for what felt like hours, going room to room, hallway to hallway, but there was no sign of them, no sign of Brian or Jerry. It was like they'd never been there at all. Eventually we found Jerry. He was lying in one of the hallways, unconscious, his face pale, his clothes soaked.
Starting point is 09:25:02 He was missing a foot, just gone, like it had never been there. I felt my stomach turn and I had to look away, swallowing down the fear. The officers called for an ambulance, and they tried to ask me what had happened, but I couldn't answer. I didn't know. I didn't understand any of it. They never found Brian. They searched the whole building, every room, every hallway, but he was just gone. I tried to explain what I'd seen, that there'd been something else, something that looked like him.
Starting point is 09:25:36 But I could tell they didn't believe me. They kept giving me these looks, like they thought I'd seen. was losing it, and maybe I was. Maybe this place had finally gotten to me. Jerry was taken to the hospital, and I followed in another car, the whole ride a blur. I kept looking out the window, watching the trees rush by, feeling like something was going to jump out at any moment, like those black eyes were still watching me, waiting for me to slip up. The rain was still coming down, tapping against the glass, and every little sound made me jump. When we got to the hospital, they let me see Jerry for a minute. He was awake, his eyes wide, scared. He didn't
Starting point is 09:26:20 remember anything, not the asylum, not the voices, nothing. He just kept asking where Brian was, and I didn't know how to answer him. I could see the fear in his eyes, and I knew he could see it in mind too. We both knew that whatever had happened back there, it wasn't over. Days passed, and I couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. I tried to go back to my normal life, but it was like the asylum had followed me home. Every time I closed my eyes, I saw it, the dark hallways, the peeling paint, those twisted grins. I could still hear the laughter, echoing in my head, and sometimes, late at night, I swore I could hear footsteps. in the hallway outside my room.
Starting point is 09:27:06 I started having dreams, nightmares really. I was back in the asylum, running through those endless hallways, the walls closing in on me. I could hear Brian and Jerry calling out to me, their voices twisted, desperate. But I could never find them. I'd turn a corner, and there they'd be, standing there with those black eyes, those awful grins,
Starting point is 09:27:28 and every time they'd say the same thing, join us. I don't think I'll ever forget those words. They haunt me, even when I'm awake. I tried to talk to Jerry about it once, but he just shook his head, his eyes wide, terrified. He didn't want to remember. He didn't want to think about it. And honestly, I couldn't blame him.
Starting point is 09:27:51 It was easier to pretend it hadn't happened, to pretend that Brian was just gone. But I knew the truth. I knew that the asylum had taken him, and it wasn't going to. stop there. I can't go back to that place. I won't. But I know there are others out there, people like us, who think it's just a game, who think it's all just stories, just legends, and I wish I could make them understand. I wish I could tell them what I've seen, what I've heard,
Starting point is 09:28:20 because the asylum, it's not just a building, it's alive, and once you step inside, it doesn't let you go. So if you're ever out on that dirt road and you see the gate, of Forest Haven, do yourself a favor, turn around, don't go in, don't listen to the whispers, don't follow the laughter, because once you're inside, once they have you, you're never getting out, not really. And I wouldn't wish that on anyone, not even my worst enemy. I can't remember the last time I felt this eager to get away from everything. Work has been one big stress ball lately, and well, life itself just felt overwhelming. I guess that's why I'm I decided to pack up and head to the shadow woods. I know, the name sounds spooky, but I wasn't
Starting point is 09:29:17 really thinking about that when I planned this trip. I just wanted some peace and quiet. I'd been there once as a kid with my parents, and all I remembered was the cool, fresh air, and how the trees seemed to go on forever. So here I was, driving my beat-up old truck down the narrow dirt road, my gear rattling in the back, and feeling something I hadn't felt in a while, hopeful. I guess I thought maybe being out here, with just the birds and the breeze, would help me feel a little less like I was suffocating. I had no idea what was waiting for me. It was late afternoon by the time I found the perfect spot.
Starting point is 09:29:55 There was this little clearing by a stream, surrounded by huge twisted trees. The branches above were so thick that only a few rays of sunlight made it through, but it was enough. I parked the truck and started setting up my tent, trying to ignore that nagging feeling that the place felt different than I remembered. More isolated, maybe. But I just told myself that's what I wanted, right?
Starting point is 09:30:19 To be alone. I worked on my tent, humming a little tune to keep myself company, and that's when I heard it. A laugh. It was soft, like it was far away, but it was definitely a laugh. The kind of giggle you'd hear from a little kid playing hide-and-seek. I stopped what I was doing,
Starting point is 09:30:37 my hand frozen on the tent. tent pole and just listened. Nothing. Just the rustling of the leaves and the distant chirp of some bird. I shook my head, laughing at myself. You're already hearing things, Sarah, I muttered, trying to shake off the weird feeling that settled in my stomach. The sun dipped lower, and soon it was time to start a fire. I got the flames going and sat there, staring into them, feeling a little better. There's something about a campfire that just, It just makes everything feel safer, you know? Like nothing bad can happen as long as you stay close to the light.
Starting point is 09:31:16 But even the fire couldn't quite shake that strange feeling. Every now and then, I'd glance into the woods, thinking I saw something move. Just shadows, I told myself, just my imagination. After dinner, I decided to call it a night. I crawled into my tent and zipped it up tight, settling into my sleeping bag. It was quiet, almost too quiet. No crickets, no owls, just the wind in the branches. I closed my eyes trying to relax when I heard it again.
Starting point is 09:31:47 That laugh. Only this time it was closer. It was like someone was standing just outside my tent giggling. My heart started pounding and I held my breath listening. The laugh faded and for a second I wondered if I was dreaming. But then there was a rustling, a sound like something being dragged through the leaves. Slowly, I unzip the tent just enough to peek out, my flashlight in my hand. I shined the light around, the beam cutting through the darkness.
Starting point is 09:32:16 Nothing, just trees and shadows. I let out a shaky breath and crawled out of the tent, feeling the cold air bite at my skin. I needed to prove to myself that it was nothing, that I was just being paranoid. I walked around the clearing, the flashlight sweeping back and forth. And that's when I saw it. lying there half buried in the leaves was a small rusted bell it looked old like it had been out here for years but it was shiny in places like someone had been holding it recently i picked it up turning it over in my hand and a shiver ran down my spine why was there a bell out here i tried to tell myself it was just trash something a hiker had dropped but deep down i knew it felt out of place I tossed it aside, trying to ignore the uneasy feeling creeping up my neck and headed back to my tent.
Starting point is 09:33:12 It took me a long time to fall asleep after that. Every time I closed my eyes, I could almost hear that laugh again, echoing in the back of my mind. When I finally drifted off, I dreamed of twisted trees and shadows that moved when they shouldn't. Morning came, and I woke up feeling groggy, like I hadn't really slept at all. The fire was out and the clearing was filled with that kind of heavy silence that made me feel like I was the only person left in the world. I tried to shake it off, telling myself that today would be better, that I'd hike, take some pictures, and everything would feel normal again. But even as I packed my bag and set off into the woods, I couldn't help but glance over my shoulder, half expecting to see someone or something standing there, watching me. and I couldn't shake the feeling that whatever it was it was just getting started.
Starting point is 09:34:06 Morning in the woods was supposed to be peaceful, you know. Birds chirping, the sun warming the earth, everything waking up together. But that morning felt wrong. I stepped out of my tent, the ground still damp with dew, and there was this heavy silence hanging over everything, like the forest was holding its breath, waiting for something to happen. I tried to shake off the unease that.
Starting point is 09:34:31 had settled over me, telling myself I was just tired. I mean I barely slept with all those weird noises last night. Honestly, maybe it was just my imagination playing tricks on me. Still, it wasn't exactly easy to ignore that creeping feeling, the one that told me I wasn't alone out here. I tried to focus on something normal. Let's explore, I said to myself, as if saying it out loud could make it feel more real. So, I packed a small bag. grabbed my camera and decided to head deeper into the woods. The air was chilly, and I could hear my footsteps crunching over the fallen leaves. It should have been relaxing, but every few minutes I found myself glancing over my shoulder. No matter where I looked, the woods seemed to
Starting point is 09:35:18 stretch on forever, dark and tangled. I kept trying to take deep breaths and stay calm, but I couldn't shake the feeling that something was out there, watching me. After about an hour of hiking, I stumbled on to something I wasn't expecting. Tucked between a cluster of thick trees was an old campsite. The tents were torn and faded, barely held together by their poles, and there were scattered belongings all over the place, like someone had left in a hurry. My stomach twisted as I took in the scene. The tents looked like they had been there for a long time, maybe even years, but the strangest thing was that some of the stuff looked new. There was a backpack, half-zipped, with its content spilled out, a journal, some clothes, and a few snack wrappers that didn't look old at all.
Starting point is 09:36:08 I bent down to pick up the journal, flipping it open, but the pages were soaked through, and the writing was mostly smudged. Still, I could make out a few words here and there. Night, laughing, and gone. I didn't like the sound of that. Then I saw it, a doll lying in the dirt, partly buried under some leaves. It was a carved wooden figure, crude and ugly, with wild hair made of twine, and a twisted smile painted on its face. There was a note tied to its neck with a piece of string. It read, play with me. A chill ran down my spine. I dropped the doll like it burned me and stepped back, my heart racing. Who would leave something like that out here? Was this someone's idea of a joke? If it was.
Starting point is 09:36:58 was it wasn't funny, not even a little bit. I could feel panic bubbling up, and I had to force myself to take a few deep breaths. I needed to stay calm. Maybe someone else had camped here before me and just left their stuff behind. Yeah, that had to be it. I turned and hurried back towards my camp, my eyes scanning the forest for any sign of movement. Every rustle of leaves made me jump, and I couldn't shake the feeling that someone, or something, was following me. When I finally made it back to my clearing, I felt a little better seeing my tent still standing, my truck parked nearby. The sun was higher now, and I tried to let its warmth chase away the chill that had settled in my bones. But as the day wore on, that feeling of being watched
Starting point is 09:37:46 only got worse. I tried to distract myself, cooked some lunch, took pictures of the stream, but I kept hearing things. Branches snapping, whispers that seemed to come from nowhere. I kept telling myself it was just the wind, just the forest settling. But by late afternoon I was on edge. I couldn't ignore it anymore. I decided I needed to leave. It was stupid to stay here if I felt like this. I started packing up my gear, moving fast, my hands shaking. That's when I heard it again, the laugh. It was soft, almost playful, but it sent a shiver down my spine. I froze, listening. The laughter was. coming from the trees closer this time. I grabbed my flashlight, even though it wasn't dark yet,
Starting point is 09:38:34 and pointed it towards the sound. The beam cut through the shadows, but there was nothing there. I swallowed hard, my mouth suddenly dry. Who's there? I called out, trying to sound brave, but my voice came out shaky. No answer, just the rustle of leaves and that awful echoing giggle. My heart was pounding now, and I knew I had to get out of there. I bolted for my truck, my bell. My belled. For my truck. My bag half-packed and gear scattered everywhere. When I reached the truck, I felt a rush of relief, until I realized I didn't have my keys. They were still in the tent. My stomach dropped, and I felt a wave of panic wash over me. I turned back to the clearing, and that's when I saw it.
Starting point is 09:39:17 There, standing at the edge of the woods, was a figure, tall and thin, with long arms and a crooked hat. Its face was pale, almost white, and it had no eye. eyes, just empty sockets that seemed to stare right at me. The twisted smile on its face was just like the one on the doll. I didn't think. I just ran. Back into the forest, away from that thing, my feet pounding against the ground. I didn't know where I was going. I just knew I had to get away. The laughter followed me, echoing through the trees and I ran faster, branches whipping against my face, my breath coming in ragged gasps. And then, nothing. My foot caught on a root, and I went down hard, my head slamming into something solid. Everything went black, and the last thing I heard was that
Starting point is 09:40:10 awful, mocking laughter, echoing in the darkness. I woke up with my head pounding and a dull ache spreading across my body. Everything was blurry at first, just shapes and shadows moving above me. I tried to sit up, but something tugged hard at my neck, holding me down. Panic flared up as I blinked and tried to focus. Where was I? Slowly things came into view. I was sitting on the ground, my back pressed up against something rough, a tree. I looked down and my heart sank.
Starting point is 09:40:42 There was a thick metal collar around my neck, chained to the tree trunk. My wrists were tied, and my hands felt numb from the tightness of the ropes. The cloak I was wearing was strange too, old, patched, and bright red, like something out of a fairy tale. It definitely wasn't mine. I could feel my chest tightening with fear, and I had to force myself to take a breath. Okay, Sarah, I thought, try to stay calm. Panicking wouldn't help me. I took in my surroundings, a strange campsite, unlike anything I'd seen before.
Starting point is 09:41:18 Tents were set up haphazardly, stitched together from all sorts of mismatched fabric. Some of them looked like they'd been there for years, sagging and torn, while others seemed newer, like they'd been added recently. My eyes darted around and I realized there were piles of belongings scattered all over,
Starting point is 09:41:38 backpacks, shoes, even a few stuffed animals, things people had left behind. I swallowed hard, trying to ignore the growing sense of dread in my stomach. This wasn't just an old camp, It was like a graveyard of people who had been here before me. Then I heard it, the sound of slow, shuffling footsteps. My heart skipped a beat, and I strained my neck to look in the direction of the noise.
Starting point is 09:42:05 The figure was coming closer, moving between the trees, its shadow long and twisted. When it stepped into the light, I finally got a clear look at it, and I wished I hadn't. It was the same creature from before, the one I'd seen. on my truck. It was tall, taller than I remembered, with a body that looked almost human, but wrong. Its arms were too long and its face. Its face was pale, almost like porcelain, with empty hollow eyes. And that smile, that awful, twisted smile that looked like it had been carved into its face. The creature stopped a few feet away from me, and for a moment, we just stared at each other. I wanted to scream, to yell at it to leave me a
Starting point is 09:42:50 alone, but the words got stuck in my throat. Instead, it just tilted its head as if it were curious, and then it raised one of its long, bony fingers, and pointed at something near my feet. I looked down, and there it was, the doll. The same one I'd found at the old campsite, the twisted wooden figure with that awful smile. There was a piece of string tied around its neck, and the words, play with me, were still scrawled on the tag. The creature made a noise then, a low guttural sound that almost sounded like a laugh. I shivered trying to pull away, but the chain kept me pinned to the tree. The creature moved closer, bending down to pick up the doll.
Starting point is 09:43:35 It held it out to me, almost like it wanted me to take it. I shook my head, my whole body trembling. No, I whispered, barely able to get the word out, but the creature just kept holding the doll, its empty eyes staring right at me unblinking. Slowly, with shaking hands, I took the doll. The wood was cold, and I could feel the rough edges digging into my skin. The creature stepped back, and I thought for just a second that it might leave me alone. But then it gestured towards the doll again, and I realized what it wanted.
Starting point is 09:44:10 I had to play the tune. My fingers were stiff and sore, but I managed to turn the small crank on the doll's back. The melody started, a warped, distorted version of that familiar nursery rhyme. The sound was grating, and every note seemed to echo through the woods, bouncing off the trees until it felt like the whole forest was filled with that awful, haunting music. The creature's smile widened, and it took a few steps back, disappearing into the shadows. The music continued, the twisted tune playing on and on until I thought I might lose my mind. days passed, though it was hard to tell exactly how many.
Starting point is 09:44:52 The creature never left me alone for long. It would appear from the shadows, watching me, always making me play that same song. The sun would rise, and I'd see it, standing just beyond the edge of the clearing, its hollow eyes fixed on me, and at night it would come closer, its twisted grin glowing in the moonlight. I was hungry, cold, and terrified, but I refused to give up. I knew I had to get out of there. I started using the little time I had alone to work on my ropes.
Starting point is 09:45:24 I found a sharp rock hidden under the leaves, and I used it to fray the ropes binding my wrists. Every chance I got I worked at it, little by little, until I started to see the fibers breaking. I was careful not to let the creature see. Whenever it came close, I'd hide the rock, forcing myself to look defeated, to pretend I had given up.
Starting point is 09:45:46 It was exhausting. and I was terrified it would figure out what I was doing, but I kept going. I had to. One morning, just as the mist was starting to roll in, I felt the last thread snap. The rope fell away, and I almost cried with relief. I didn't have time to celebrate, though. I had to move fast. I unhooked the collar, trying to be as quiet as possible. My heart pounding so hard I thought it might burst. I took one last look around the camp, the abandoned tents, the doll lying in the dirt, and then, I ran. I ran as fast as I could, my feet barely touching the ground. I didn't know where I was going, but I knew I had to get away from that place. I had to get away from it.
Starting point is 09:46:31 When I broke free from that camp, I thought I was finally going to be safe. I can't tell you how fast my heart was beating as I ran, branches scratching my arms and legs, my feet slipping on the damp forest floor. All I could think about was getting away from that thing. the creature with the hollow eyes and that awful carved smile. I ran until my legs felt like they might give out. My breaths came in ragged gasps, and my head spun, but I just kept pushing forward. I didn't have a plan.
Starting point is 09:47:03 I only knew I had to put as much distance as possible between me and that twisted campsite. I stumbled over roots and ducked under branches, barely thinking, just reacting, until, finally, I saw something that made me stop dead in my tracks, a light. It was faint, just a small glow through the trees, but it was enough. I could feel a wave of relief crash over me, almost making my knees buckle. A light meant people. It meant help.
Starting point is 09:47:35 I forced myself to keep moving, stumbling toward that glow like it was the only thing keeping me alive. When I broke through the tree line, I found myself standing at the edge of a yard. There was a small cabin there, its porch light flickering, and I could see someone moving inside, a shadow passing behind the window. I didn't even hesitate. I ran up to the door and pounded on it. My knuckles soar from the force. Help, please help me, I shouted my voice cracking.
Starting point is 09:48:04 A moment later, the door opened, and an elderly man stood there, his face lined with confusion and concern. What on earth, he said, his voice trailing off as he looked. at me. At my torn clothes, the red cloak, the scratches on my arms. I must have looked like a complete mess, but he didn't ask questions. He just pulled the door open wider and stepped aside. Come in, come in, he said. I practically fell through the doorway, my legs finally giving out under me. The man helped me over to a chair, and I sank into it, my whole body shaking. Please, I whispered, there's something out there, it's following me. The man's eyes widened.
Starting point is 09:48:46 and he gave me a quick nod. He grabbed a phone from the table and called the authorities, his voice calm and steady, even though I could see the worry in his eyes. I leaned back in the chair, trying to catch my breath, my eyes darting to the windows. I half expected to see that thing standing out there, watching me, its smile glowing in the darkness.
Starting point is 09:49:08 It felt like forever before the authorities showed up. They took me to a clinic, where they checked me over and asked me questions I barely had the energy to answer. I tried to explain about the creature, about the campsite, but I could tell from their faces that they didn't really believe me. They kept giving me these sympathetic looks, like they thought I was just some lost hiker who'd gotten too scared.
Starting point is 09:49:32 Eventually they told me to rest, and I ended up at a small mental health facility. The doctors there were nice enough, but they didn't understand. They kept telling me I was safe now, that whatever I thought I saw wasn't real. They said there was no record of a place called Shadow Woods National Forest that maybe I was confused. But I knew what I'd seen.
Starting point is 09:49:55 I knew it was real. Days turned into weeks, and I tried to settle into some kind of routine. I'd talk to my counselor, tell her about the dreams I kept having, the ones where I was still chained to that tree, where the creature was standing over me, grinning. She told me I was processing my trauma, that it would take time for the nightmares to fade. I nodded, trying to believe her, but deep down, I knew the truth.
Starting point is 09:50:21 It wasn't over. I guess that's why I wasn't completely surprised when the package showed up. It was a small box, wrapped in brown paper, with no return address. The nurse brought it to me one morning, setting it on the table in front of me with a curious look. Looks like you got a gift, she said with a smile. my stomach twisted as I stared at the box. I knew, even before I opened it, that something was wrong. My hands were shaking as I tore off the paper, my heart pounding in my chest.
Starting point is 09:50:53 Inside was a small black bell, rusted and old but unmistakable. There was a tiny handle on the side, and I knew if I turned it, it would play that same warped, haunting tune. I dropped the bell, my breath catching in my throat. The nurse looked at me, her smile fading. Are you okay? she asked. Her voice soft, concerned. But I couldn't answer. I couldn't even look at her. All I could hear was that laugh, echoing in my mind, that awful, mocking giggle that seemed to follow me everywhere. I knew, without a doubt, that it was still out there. The creature had found me, and it wasn't going to let me go. That night, as I lay in bed, I could feel the weight of the
Starting point is 09:51:37 red cloak hanging in the closet. The doctors had let me keep it, thinking it was just a piece of clothing, but to me, it was more than that. It was a reminder, a warning. The nightmare wasn't over. The creature was still out there, waiting for me, watching, and I knew, deep down, that sooner or later, I'd have to face it again. The drive up to the mountains was supposed to be exciting, I guess. But honestly, I was just trying not to look out the window too much. My sister Addy, on the other hand, couldn't stop talking about how amazing it was going to be to camp in the middle of nowhere. I wish I felt the same way, but all I could think about were those deer from the movie at Tristan's house. They seemed to be everywhere, hiding behind trees, lurking in the dark, just waiting.
Starting point is 09:52:38 I didn't tell anyone, though. It's not like they'd understand. How much longer? Addy asked from the back seat, practically bouncing. She was so excited, and I didn't want to ruin it for her. Almost there, Dad said, smiling at her in the rearview mirror. You're going to love it, Addy. This is the real wilderness. No phones, no distractions. Just us and nature.
Starting point is 09:53:03 Great. Just us and all the deer out there, I thought. But I didn't say anything. I just forced to smile and nodded. Addie grinned at me, her eyes sparkling with excitement. She could tell I was nervous, but she was always the the type to look for the bright side of everything. When we finally pulled up to the campsite, it felt almost too quiet. The forest was dense. The trees so tall they blocked out a lot of the
Starting point is 09:53:28 sunlight. The air smelled fresh and earthy, and I could hear birds somewhere in the distance, but it still felt off. Maybe it was just me. We started setting up our tents, mom and dad's big one in the middle, and then Addies and mine a little ways away, each on opposite sides of the the clearing. It was supposed to give us a sense of independence, or so Dad said, but it mostly just made me feel more alone. I looked at my tent, a small, flimsy thing that didn't feel like much of a shield against anything, especially not a killer deer. Hey Marlin, help me with this, Addy called out, struggling with one of her tent poles. I walked over trying to shake off the creepy feeling. Sure, I said, grabbing the pole and pushing it into place.
Starting point is 09:54:16 You know, I think you're supposed to read the instructions first. Addie rolled her eyes. Instructions are for people who don't know what they're doing. We got this. Once we finished setting up, Dad gathered us around. He had the bear mace out and the rifle next to him, looking serious. All right, everyone, listen up. We're deep in the forest here, so we've got to be careful.
Starting point is 09:54:39 Stay together. Don't wander too far. and always be aware of what's around you. Got it? Addie and I nodded. I knew he meant well, but the sight of the rifle just made me more nervous. What if there was something out there that even a rifle couldn't stop? The next morning, Addy wanted to explore, so we went down to the lake nearby. It was pretty, I had to admit, shimmering water surrounded by thick woods. Addy was fascinated by everything, the birds, the wildflowers, even the bugs.
Starting point is 09:55:11 I was just trying to keep my eyes peeled for any sign of movement. Look at these tracks, Addy called out, kneeling by the edge of the water. I walked over, and my stomach did a little flip. They were deer tracks, but something was off. The prince looked almost like the deer had been walking on its hind legs. I tried to brush it off, but a chill ran down my spine. Cool, right? Addy said, not noticing my reaction. It's probably just weird terrain or something.
Starting point is 09:55:41 something. Yeah, probably, I said, but I couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. I glanced across the lake and froze. There, just beyond the trees, I saw it, a deer watching us. Its eyes were wide, too wide, and they looked almost human. I blinked, and it moved, slipping behind a tree. Addie, we should go, I said, my voice a little shaky. She looked up at me, confused. What? Why? Why? Why? We just got here. Please, I insisted. I... I don't feel good about this place. She frowned, but shrugged. Okay, fine. Let's head back.
Starting point is 09:56:22 We made our way back to camp, and I kept glancing over my shoulder, half expecting to see those eyes again. When we got back, I told Mom and Dad what I saw. They just exchanged a look, then smiled. It's probably just a dear, Marlon, Mom said. They're more scared of you than you are of them. Yeah, I wished that were true, but I couldn't help feeling that whatever was out there wasn't scared at all. It was watching, waiting, just like in the movie. That night, I was exhausted, but sleep wouldn't come easy.
Starting point is 09:56:56 I kept replaying what I saw at the lake, those weird tracks, the deer's creepy eyes. Addie was snoring softly in her tent, just a few feet away, and I wished I could sleep as peacefully as she could. But no matter how much I tried, I couldn't shake the feeling that something was out there, watching us. My tent felt so small, like it wouldn't be able to protect me from anything. I turned on my electric lamp to make the shadows go away, but after a few minutes the light flickered and died. Just my luck, right?
Starting point is 09:57:28 Now I was stuck in the dark, and every little sound seemed to get louder. The rustling leaves, the snap of a twig. My imagination was working overtime, making it. me think of that awful movie of deer with human-like eyes creeping up to the tent. I don't even remember when I fell asleep, but I must have eventually, because the next thing I knew, I was having this horrible, vivid dream. I was back at the lake, only it was dead silent, and the sky looked darker, almost like a storm was coming. I turned around, and there it was, the deer. Except it wasn't just any deer. It looked wrong. It's
Starting point is 09:58:08 face was all twisted, the snout crooked, and the jaw looked like it was barely hanging on. I wanted to run, but my feet wouldn't move. The deer stepped closer, its legs bending in a weird, jerky way. It raised one of its front legs, and that's when I saw its fingers, long and human-like, with these sharp claws at the tips. It started tapping them against a tree slowly, like it was counting down. Tap, tap, tap. Tap. I could hear my heartbeat pounding in my ears, and then it looked right at me with those empty, lifeless eyes. I will get you, it said in this deep, gravely voice that made my skin crawl.
Starting point is 09:58:51 It didn't sound like any animal I'd ever heard. It sounded, human. I tried to scream, but no sound came out. The deer moved closer and closer, until I could feel its breath on my face. I woke up with a start, my heart racing. For a second, I didn't know where I was, but then I realized I was in my tent. It was dark, pitch black, and I was drenched and sweat. I took a deep breath trying to calm down. But then, I heard it. Footsteps.
Starting point is 09:59:22 Slow, deliberate footsteps. Right outside my tent. I froze, every muscle in my body tensing up. Maybe it was Dad, I thought, or Addie. But something about the way the footsteps sounded. It wasn't right. They were too heavy, too slow. I reached for my lamp, but remembered it was dead.
Starting point is 09:59:43 I had nothing but the thin tent fabric between me and whatever was out there. I peeked through a small gap in the tent flap, and what I saw made my blood run cold. There, by the campfire, was the deer, or whatever it was. It wasn't just a deer. I knew that now. Its limbs were bent at weird angles. Its eyes were glowing in the firelight, and it was staring right at my tent. I could see its jaw, still crooked, and saliva dripping from its mouth.
Starting point is 10:00:14 I wanted to scream, but I couldn't move. My chest felt heavy, like something was pressing down on me. Then I heard another sound, a grunt, like a real deer. It was coming from the other side of the tent. It felt like there were two things out there, one real and one, not. The deer by the fire opened its mouth, and I heard that awful voice again. I will get you. I felt my whole body go numb. This couldn't be real. It had to be another nightmare. I squeezed my eyes shut, hoping that if I just wished hard enough, it would all go away.
Starting point is 10:00:52 But then there was a loud rustling, and the tent shook. The next thing I knew, I was being dragged out, my fingers clawing at the dirt as I tried to hold on. The creature's grip was strong, and I could feel its claws digging into my skin. I finally found my voice. I finally found my voice and screamed, loud enough that I hoped someone, anyone would hear me. Suddenly I heard Addy's voice calling my name, and then the creature let go. I scrambled backward, my heart pounding so hard I thought it might burst. The thing by the fire, it was gone. The forest was silent again, but I knew it was still out there, somewhere in the dark, waiting. I couldn't breathe. I was being dragged out of my tent, and everything felt like a blur. My hands were grabbing at anything they could find,
Starting point is 10:01:41 the dirt, the grass, but nothing was helping. I felt the claws of that creature, sharp and relentless, pulling me away from safety. My chest was tight, and I couldn't even scream anymore. It was like the fear had just swallowed my voice. Marlin! I heard Addie's voice, shaky and terrified, calling out my name. I wanted to answer her, to let her know I was still here, but I couldn't. I could barely think. All I knew was that I had to get away from whatever was dragging me. Suddenly, I felt something snap inside me. It was like my survival instinct just kicked in, and I started struggling as hard as I could. I twisted my body, kicking at the creature, and somehow managed to grab hold of its jaw. It was grotesque, almost rubbery, and the next
Starting point is 10:02:30 thing I knew, I was pulling, tearing. The creature let out this awful, bone-chilling howl, like a mix between a human scream and an animal's cry, and its grip loosened just enough for me to break free. I scrambled backward, my hands and knees scraping against the ground, and finally found my voice. Help! Mom! Dad! I screamed, my throat burning. I heard Addy yelling too, and then I saw my parents stumbling out of their tent, my dad holding the rifle, his face pale with shock. Get away from him, Dad shouted, Amity. the gun at the creature. I looked back, and in the dim light of the campfire, I saw it. Its face was twisted, the jaw hanging by a thread, and its eyes. Those eyes were still locked on me, full of hatred.
Starting point is 10:03:19 It was like it didn't care about anyone else, just me. It wanted me. The creature let out another scream, this one even more twisted, like it was in pain, and then it turned and disappeared into the darkness. It moved so fast, almost like it was gliding, and within seconds, it was gone. The forest went silent, like nothing had even happened, but I could still hear the ringing in my ears from my own screams. Mom was beside me in an instant, her hands shaking as she tried to check me over. Oh my God, Marlon, are you okay? She asked, her voice cracking. I could barely nod, everything hurt. My leg felt like it was on fire, and when I looked down, I saw the blood. It was everywhere. My hands were covered in it. Dad, we need to go. Addy's voice was frantic,
Starting point is 10:04:13 and she was right. We couldn't stay here, not with that thing still out there. Dad helped me up, his eyes darting around like he expected the creature to come back any second. We're getting out of here right now, he said, his voice firm. But I could tell he was. was scared too. I'd never seen him like that before. It made everything feel even more real, more terrifying. We stumbled around, trying to pack up as fast as we could. I could hear Mom and Addie whispering, their voices full of panic. Addy kept saying how she felt something too, like she couldn't move when the creature appeared. I wanted to tell her I understood that I felt it too, but I couldn't find the words. Everything just felt so unreal.
Starting point is 10:04:59 As Dad carried me to the car, I looked back at the campsite. The fire was still flickering, casting these long dark shadows over the trees. And for just a second, I thought I saw it again, those eyes, watching us from the edge of the woods. I blinked, and they were gone, but the feeling stayed. That heavy, awful feeling that told me this wasn't over. Not even close. When we finally got to the car, Dad floored it, and we sped down the dark, winding road. leaving the campsite far behind.
Starting point is 10:05:32 But no matter how far we went, I couldn't shake that feeling. It was like the creature had left a part of itself with me, a part that was never going to let me go. Mom kept saying everything was going to be okay, that we were safe now, but I didn't believe her. I could still feel the creature's claws on my skin, could still hear its voice in my head, whispering that terrible promise.
Starting point is 10:05:56 I will get you. waking up in the hospital was strange. At first I didn't know where I was. All I knew was that everything hurt, and the bright lights above me made my head pound. When I finally opened my eyes all the way, I saw my parents sitting beside me, their faces tired and worried.
Starting point is 10:06:16 Mom was holding my hand, and when she noticed I was awake, she started crying. Marlin? She whispered, squeezing my hand. You're okay, honey. You're safe. Safe. I wanted to believe her, but I couldn't forget what had happened.
Starting point is 10:06:32 I could still feel the claws of that creature on my leg, and when I looked down, I realized why I was feeling so different. My leg, one of them, was gone. I could feel my heart sink, and I looked back at my mom. She tried to give me a comforting smile, but I could tell she was scared too. It was a deer attack, dad said quietly, a terrible freak accident. but you're going to be okay, Marlon. I wanted to argue, to tell them it wasn't just a deer,
Starting point is 10:07:03 it was something else, something evil. But looking at their faces, I knew they wouldn't understand. They wanted so badly for this to be something normal, something they could explain, and maybe they were right. Maybe I'd just imagine the whole thing. Maybe it was just the trauma making my memory all twisted. But then I looked over at Addie.
Starting point is 10:07:25 She was standing in the corner, her face pale and her eyes wide. She hadn't said anything, not since I woke up. When our eyes met, she gave me this tiny nod, like she knew what I was thinking. She'd seen it too. Whatever that thing was, it wasn't just in my head. Days turned into weeks, and I tried to move on to pretend like everything was fine. I got used to the crutches, to the missing leg. I told myself over and over that it was just an accident, that nothing else had been out there in the woods.
Starting point is 10:07:59 But the truth was, I never really believed it. And I knew Addie didn't either. We didn't talk about it, though. It felt like if we did, we'd be inviting that thing back into our lives. Now, years later, I've tried to leave it all behind. I'm in college, trying to live my life like a normal person, even though I know I'm anything but normal. My friends asked me to go camping with them for spring break, and I couldn't say yes fast enough. No way was I going back into the woods.
Starting point is 10:08:31 Not after everything that happened. We decided on a lakehouse instead, which seemed a lot safer. No deep, dark forests, no deer hiding behind the trees. And it was nice, you know. For the first time in a while, I felt like I could actually relax. We spent our days fishing, swimming, and just hanging out by the water. but on our last night I was sitting by the lake watching the sun set and I felt that old feeling again, that creeping dread like I was being watched.
Starting point is 10:09:02 I looked across the lake, my heart pounding, and there it was, a figure, just standing at the edge of the trees. It was too far away to see clearly, but I knew. I knew it was the same creature. Its silhouette was all wrong, its limbs too long, its posture. twisted. It lifted one of its hands, and I saw those long fingers tap, tap, tap, tapping against a tree. I heard my friends calling for me from the house, and I turned my head for just a second. When I looked back, the figure was gone, but the fear wasn't. I could feel it in my chest, tightening like a vice. I knew right then that it wasn't over. That thing was still out there,
Starting point is 10:09:46 waiting, watching. I don't think it'll ever stop. The town of Bayhorses, Idaho always had this way of swallowing time. Like, it wasn't just a place where nothing happened, it was a place where it seemed like nothing could happen. And honestly, most days I liked it that way. I could drift along without much trouble, just me, the woods, and memories of Max. But that day, something was different. I headed out toward the mining camp like I always did when I needed to clear my head. The road there wound through the forest, a thin strip of cracked asphalt that led you deeper and deeper into isolation. It was almost comforting, you know. The quiet, the way the wind made the leaves tremble, the crunch of gravel under my boots. But today, I felt something else.
Starting point is 10:10:43 A weight I couldn't quite shake. Maybe it was because of the stories going around about the girls who'd gone missing. No one said it out loud, but you could tell everyone was scared. Not me, though. I didn't think it could touch me. I guess that's what being young. young and dumb gets you. When I reached the old mining camp, the place looked as deserted as ever. Rusted out trailers and equipment sat forgotten, like relics of a time no one cared to remember. I found the spot near the fence, where we'd buried Max, a simple mound of earth, marked by a small, smooth stone I'd brought back from the river. I knelt down and traced the edge of the rock with my fingers. Max had been the best dog I could have asked for, and I hated
Starting point is 10:11:29 that I couldn't save him when he ran out into the road. That memory sat like a stone in my gut, heavy and unmovable. I don't know how long I knelt there, but after a while, the air shifted. You ever have one of those moments where the world feels like it's just paused. Like all the birds, the wind, everything stops just for a heartbeat. That's what happened. I stood up brushing the dirt off my jeans and that's when I heard it. A scream.
Starting point is 10:11:57 It wasn't a normal scream. scream either. It was high-pitched, almost unnatural, echoing through the trees like it had no real direction. I froze, my pulse hammering in my ears. It was the kind of sound that dug straight into your bones. I told myself someone might be in trouble, even though my gut said otherwise. The right thing to do was check it out, right? So I started walking, cautious but curious. I stepped off the path and into the woods pushing past branches and ducking under low-hanging limbs. The scream came again, this time closer, and my stomach twisted. The forest that had always felt like a second home suddenly felt foreign, like I didn't belong.
Starting point is 10:12:43 I kept going, though, because something in me needed to know. The light filtered through the trees in these odd patterns, casting long, thin shadows that seemed to shift whenever I looked away. I must have walked for ten minutes when I saw it. The trees up ahead weren't just moving in the wind. They were thrashing, like something big was pushing them aside. My first thought was that it might be a deer, or maybe an elk, though I'd never seen one act like that. And then I saw it. The creature stepped into the clearing, and I swear my brain just stopped for a second.
Starting point is 10:13:18 It looked like an elk, sure, but wrong. The fur was matted and dark, almost rotting in places. and its eyes. They were this glowing yellow, like headlights cutting through a fog, but the worst part was what it held in its mouth. There was a human head trapped between those huge jaws, and the face on it was contorted in an endless silent scream. I couldn't breathe. I wanted to move to run, but my feet were glued to the ground. The thing, whatever it was, looked right at me, and I knew then that this wasn't just some animal. There was something in its eyes, something that understood far too much.
Starting point is 10:13:57 A branch snapped behind me, and that was enough to break the spell. I turned and bolted, the forest a blur around me. I didn't know where I was going, just that I had to get away. My heart pounded, my lungs burned, but I couldn't stop. I caught sight of an old van, abandoned and rusting away, and I dove behind it, pressing myself flat against the cold metal. For a second I thought maybe I'd lost it. I could hear my own breath, harsh and roused.
Starting point is 10:14:25 and I tried to quiet it, to make myself invisible. I reached into my pocket and pulled out a granola bar. Don't ask me why I thought it would help, but I threw it as far as I could, hoping the noise would draw the creature away. There was a pause, and I dared to peek around the edge of the van. The creature had moved off, sniffing the air where the granola bar had landed. Relief washed over me just for a second, until its head snapped back around. those yellow eyes locking onto me again.
Starting point is 10:14:57 Panic surged through me, and I scrambled to my feet, running again. I heard the crash of branches as it followed, gaining ground. I thought that was it, that I was done for when I heard something else, the distant roar of dirt bikes. I pushed myself harder, my legs screaming in protest, until I broke through the tree line and saw them. Bikers, maybe four of them, tearing up the trail. I tried to wave them down,
Starting point is 10:15:24 But before I could shout, the creature was there, crashing into them like a nightmare made real. One biker was swatted aside, his bike crumpling beneath him. Another tried to speed away, but the creature was too fast. I didn't stick around to watch. I turned and ran, my only thought now to survive. And that's when she showed up. A girl on a motorbike, her face half hidden behind goggles. She skidded to a stop, yelling at me to get on.
Starting point is 10:15:51 I didn't think twice. I jumped on the back, and we tore away, the wind whipping against my face. I could still hear the screams behind us, but they were fading, replaced by the roar of the engine and the pounding of my heart. For a moment, as the trees blurred past, I almost believed we'd made it. I should have turned back. I mean anyone with half a brain would have done just that after seeing what I did. But there was something in me, a stubbornness, maybe, that kept me moving forward.
Starting point is 10:16:21 You know, like that that. feeling you get when you're watching a horror movie, and you just want to shout at the screen, don't go in there. Well, I was that guy, only no one was there to tell me to stop. The scream had left me shaken, and the sight of that creature, a rotting elk with a human head in its jaws, had done even worse. It was the stuff of nightmares, but I couldn't let it go. I had to know what I'd seen. And honestly, part of me hoped I'd imagined the whole thing. The clearing where I'd first spotted the creature was empty now, just a mess of broken branches and torn up earth. It didn't feel right, like the air itself was tainted, thick and heavy, pressing down on me. I scanned the tree line,
Starting point is 10:17:07 every shadow seeming a little too dark, every rustle of leaves making my pulse quicken. It felt like the forest was holding its breath, wading. I crouched beside one of the tracks the creature had left behind. The indent in the earth was deep, the size of my hand, but twisted in a way that made my skin crawl. I could almost picture the weight of the thing, its unnatural gait. The sight of it made me shiver, and I had to look away. Then I heard it again, a rustling, but not from the wind. It was too deliberate for that. I stood, heart pounding in my ears, and squinted into the trees. For a second, I thought I saw movement, a shadow slipping between the trunks, there one moment, and gone the next.
Starting point is 10:17:55 My mouth went dry. Hello, I called out, though I wasn't sure I wanted an answer. My voice sounded small, swallowed up by the forest. I took a step back, then another, and that's when I saw them, eyes, glowing yellow, peering at me from the underbrush. My stomach dropped. The creature stepped out from between the trees, moving. slow like it knew I had nowhere to go. Its eyes locked on mine, and I could see the head still
Starting point is 10:18:23 clamped in its jaws, the face slack and lifeless. The scream was gone, replaced by a silence that felt even worse. I couldn't move, couldn't breathe. It was like my body had forgotten how. Then something snapped inside me, instinct maybe, and I turned and ran. I crashed through the trees, branches tearing at my clothes, my feet barely finding purchase on the uneven ground. I didn't dare look back. I could hear it behind me, the heavy thud of its steps, the sound of branches snapping like twigs. My lungs burned, and I stumbled, catching myself just before I hit the ground. There was an old van up ahead, something left behind when the mining camp shut down. I lunged for it, pressing myself
Starting point is 10:19:09 against the side, trying to make myself as small as possible. I could hear my own breath, ragged and too loud, and I clamped a hand over my mouth, willing myself to be quiet. The woods had gone silent again, but I knew it was out there. I could feel it. Slowly, I peaked around the edge of the van, my heart pounding so hard I thought it might give me away. And there it was, standing in the clearing, its head low, sniffing the air. I watched as it turned, moving toward the spot where I'd thrown the granola bar early. For a second, hope flared in my chest. Maybe it hadn't seen me, maybe I'd get out of this. But then its head snapped around, those yellow eyes locking onto me like it knew exactly where I was.
Starting point is 10:19:58 Panic surged through me, and I pushed off the van, running again, my legs screaming in protest. I didn't have a plan, just the need to get away, to put as much distance between me and that thing as I could. The forest blurred around me, the world narrowing down to the sound of my own breath, the pounding of my feet, and the crash of the creature behind me. And then, through the trees, I saw them, dirt bikers, their engines roaring, tearing up the trail ahead. My heart leapt. I waved my arms, shouting, but my voice was lost in the noise. Before I could reach them, the creature burst from the trees, slamming into the bikers like a force of nature. One was thrown to the side, his bike crumpling beneath him. Another tried to
Starting point is 10:20:48 speed away, but the creature was faster. I didn't wait to see what happened. I turned and ran, the screams echoing in my ears, my only thought now to survive. Just when I thought I couldn't go any farther, I heard the rumble of another bike, closer this time. I turned, and there she was. A girl on a motorbike, her face hidden behind goggles, her hair whipping in the wind. She skidded to a stop yelling at me to get on. I didn't think, I just did it. I jumped on to the back, my hands gripping the sides of her jacket, and we sped away. The wind tearing at my face, the world blurring past us.
Starting point is 10:21:29 I could still hear the creature behind us, the crash of branches as it followed. But slowly, the sound began to fade. I didn't know who she was, didn't know where we were going, but for the first time since I'd seen that thing, I felt a flicker of hope. Maybe, just maybe, we'd make it out of this alive. I hung on tight to the back of the bike, my fingers digging into the leather of her jacket. Honestly, I was just trying to keep from falling off. The wind whipped at my face, stung my eyes, and the forest blurred into nothing but streaks of brown and green. My heart was still pounding from the chase, and every time the bike swerved, I felt like I might just go flying off into the trees.
Starting point is 10:22:13 But anything was better than being back there, facing that thing. The girl didn't say a word, and I couldn't really blame her. We were both too focused on getting away. Still, I couldn't help noticing odd little things, like the way her jacket smelled of charcoal and mint, a weirdly calming mix in the middle of all this chaos. It's funny what your brain latches onto when it's trying not to panic. I guess I was just looking for anything that felt normal, even if it was just the smell of someone's jacket.
Starting point is 10:22:45 We hit a rough patch in the trail, the bike bouncing and skidding over the rocks, and I had to bite down on a yelp. The creature was somewhere behind us, and I wasn't about to give it any more reason to follow. I glanced over my shoulder, but all I could see was the empty trail, the dust kicked up by the bike.
Starting point is 10:23:02 Maybe we'd lost it, maybe. The roar of the engine drowned out everything else, my thoughts, the fear, the pounding of my heart. But then, through the noise, I heard something else, a scream. Not the high-pitched, unnatural one from before. No, this was different, human, terrified, and all too real. I looked back again, and that's when I saw them. The dirt bikers, the ones I'd thought might save me. The scene was chaos.
Starting point is 10:23:31 one of them was already down, his bike crumpled beneath him, and the creature was on top of him. I couldn't see much, just a blur of antlers and fur and the awful jerking motion of the creature's head. Another biker tried to swerve around, but the creature was too fast. It lashed out, and he went flying, his body hitting the ground with a sickening thud. I wanted to look away. I should have looked away, but I couldn't. It was like my brain couldn't quite process what was happening. Like if I just kept watching, maybe it would start to make sense.
Starting point is 10:24:08 But it didn't. It just got worse. The creature turned, its yellow eyes locking onto us, and for a second I thought it might come after us again. I could see the head still hanging from its jaws. The face twisted in that awful, frozen scream. My stomach turned, and I had to force myself to look forward. to focus on the trail ahead.
Starting point is 10:24:31 The girl must have seen it too because she gunned the engine and we shot forward, the bike skidding and swerving as we hit another rough patch. I leaned into her, trying to make myself as small as possible, trying to disappear. I could still hear the screams behind us,
Starting point is 10:24:48 but they were fading, replaced by the roar of the engine and the rush of the wind. I don't know how long we rode like that. It felt like hours, but it was probably only minutes. The forest eventually began to thin out, the trees giving way to open fields, and the sun was starting to dip below the horizon, painting the sky in shades of orange and red.
Starting point is 10:25:10 It should have been beautiful, but all I could think about was getting as far away from those woods as possible. Finally, she slowed the bike, pulling off the trail and coming to a stop near an old, rusted out fence. I stumbled off, my legs shaky, and took a few steps away trying to catch my breath. My whole body felt like it was buzzing, the adrenaline still surging through my veins. The girl killed the engine, and for a moment everything was quiet, too quiet. I turned to look at her, finally getting a good look at her face. She was younger than I'd expected, maybe just a year or two older than me, with dark eyes that seemed to take everything in.
Starting point is 10:25:51 She pulled off her goggles, her expression unreadable, and for a second we just stared at each other. Thanks, I managed to say, though it felt like such a small word for what she'd done. She'd saved my life, and all I had was thanks, but she just nodded, like she understood. Do you know what that thing is? I asked, my voice barely more than a whisper. I wasn't sure I wanted to know the answer, but I had to ask. I had to know if I was losing my mind, or if this was really happening. She looked back toward the woods, her gaze distant.
Starting point is 10:26:27 No, she said finally, but it's not the first time I've seen it. A chill ran down my spine. Not the first time. That meant it was still out there, somewhere, and it could come back. I wanted to ask more, to press her for answers, but the look on her face stopped me. She was scared too, maybe even more than I was. Come on, she said her voice tight. We need to keep moving.
Starting point is 10:26:54 It might still be following us. I nodded, swallowing hard. She was right. We couldn't stay here. I climbed back onto the bike, my hands gripping the sides of her jacket once more, and she started the engine. The roar filled the silence, and we took off again, leaving the woods and whatever horrors they held behind us.
Starting point is 10:27:15 As we rode, I couldn't shake the feeling that this wasn't over, not by a long shot. The creature was still out there, and now I knew. I'd seen too much to ever feel safe again. When I finally made it home that night, everything felt wrong. The front door was slightly ajar, and the light in the hallway flickered as I stepped inside. My parents were in the living room, faces tense, waiting for me. I don't know what I expected, a hug maybe, relief. But the second my mom saw me, she was on her feet, her voice sharp.
Starting point is 10:27:49 Where have you been, Aaron? Do you have any idea what time it is? I opened my mouth, but no words came out. What could I say? That I'd just been chased by a monster out of some twisted nightmare. That I'd seen people die and barely escaped myself. It all sounded ridiculous, even in my head. I swallowed hard, trying to find the right words, but nothing felt right.
Starting point is 10:28:12 I... I got lost, I said finally. My voice barely a whisper. It was the only thing I could come up with that might make sense. My dad sighed, shaking his head. and I could see the disappointment in his eyes. You've got to stop this, Aaron, he said, his voice low and tired. All these stories, it's too much, you're scaring your mother. I wanted to argue, to tell them that it wasn't just a story,
Starting point is 10:28:40 that what I'd seen was real, and that thing was still out there somewhere. But the look on their faces stopped me. They weren't going to believe me. No one would. I was on my own. That night I lay in bed staring at the ceiling, the events of the day playing over and over in my mind. I could still see the creature's eyes, glowing yellow in the darkness, and that awful, lifeless face hanging from its jaws. I tried to push the images away, to think of something else, but it was like they were burned into my brain.
Starting point is 10:29:14 No matter how hard I tried, I couldn't shake them. The worst part was knowing it wasn't over. The girl who'd saved me, she'd said, it wasn't the first time she'd seen that thing, which meant it was still out there, and it could come back. I didn't know why it was here, or what it wanted, but I knew one thing for sure, it wasn't finished, and neither was I. Years later, I found myself back in Bayhorse, standing at the edge of the forest. I'd left this place behind as soon as I could, but something had always pulled me back. It was like a loose thread I couldn't stop picking at, a question that refused to be
Starting point is 10:29:51 answered, and today I was finally ready to face it. The air was cool, the autumn leaves rustling in the breeze, and for a moment everything felt almost peaceful, but the memory of that day still lingered, just beneath the surface, like a shadow that refused to fade. I took a deep breath, trying to steady myself, and stepped into the woods. The path to the old mining camp was overgrown now, the trees crowding in on either side, their branches twisted and gnarled. It was hard to believe I used to come here all the time, that this place had once felt like a refuge. Now it was just a reminder of everything I'd lost. I made my way to Max's grave, the small mound of earth almost hidden beneath the fallen leaves. I knelt down, brushing the leaves aside, and that's when I saw it,
Starting point is 10:30:42 a young birch tree, its slender trunk reaching toward the sky. It wasn't much, but it was a little much, just a sapling, but it was something, a sign that life could still find a way, even here, in a place that had seen so much death. I sat there for a while, just watching the leaves sway in the breeze, and for the first time in a long time, I felt a sense of peace. Maybe it was the tree, or maybe it was just knowing that I'd come back, that I hadn't let the fear keep me away. Whatever it was, it felt like a weight had been lifted. like I could finally breathe again. But as the sun dipped below the horizon,
Starting point is 10:31:23 the shadows began to lengthen, and the familiar feeling of unease crept back in. The forest around me seemed to shift, the light fading, and I couldn't shake the feeling that I was being watched. I stood up, my eyes scanning the trees, but there was nothing there, just the wind, the rustling leaves,
Starting point is 10:31:44 and the distant call of a bird. Still, I couldn't ignore the chill that ran down my spine, the way my instincts screamed at me to leave. I took a step back, then another, my heart beginning to race. I knew it was probably nothing, just my imagination playing tricks on me, but after everything I'd seen, I wasn't about to take any chances. I turned and walked away, my pace quickening as I made my way back to the edge of the woods. I could feel the weight of the forest behind me, the darkness pressing. in, and I didn't dare look back. Not until I was out in the open. The town lights just visible
Starting point is 10:32:22 in the distance. Did I finally let out the breath I'd been holding? I knew I'd be back, maybe not tomorrow, or even next year, but someday. There were still too many questions, too many things I didn't understand. But for now, it was enough to know that I'd faced it, that I hadn't let the fear win, and as I walked away the breeze carrying the scent of the autumn leaves, I felt a strange sense of hope. Maybe, just maybe, I could finally start to let go. But as I reached the edge of town, I couldn't help but glance back, just once, at the dark line of the trees.
Starting point is 10:33:04 And for a second, I thought I saw something, something moving, just out of sight. I blinked, and it was gone, probably just the wind I told myself, turning away, but deep down I knew better. Some things never really leave. They just wait, biting their time, hiding in the shadows. And one day, I knew I'd have to face it again. But until then, I'd hold on to the hope that maybe, just maybe, there was still a way to find peace. It was a perfect autumn evening as we packed up Ben's truck and headed out of the city. Honestly, it was one of those rare moments where everything just felt right. The air had that crisp bite to it,
Starting point is 10:33:54 and the leaves were all shades of orange and red, exactly the kind of scenery you'd want for a camping trip. Ben was driving as usual, and Phil was in the back seat, fiddling with a map. We didn't actually need the map, but he liked to pretend we did. Phil was that kind of guy,
Starting point is 10:34:11 always double-checking and worrying, like he didn't totally trust GPS. Are you sure we're going the right way? Phil asked for the tenth time. Ben just smirked, keeping his eyes on the road. Relax, Phil, Ben said, rolling his eyes. I know these woods better than my own apartment. He said it with so much confidence that even I started to feel a little more at ease. I wanted to believe him, and for a while, I did. But as we drove deeper into the woods, I couldn't help but notice how the trees seemed to close in around us. The further we went,
Starting point is 10:34:46 the narrower the road got, until it was just a dirt path barely wide enough for the truck. It wasn't long before we finally reached a clearing. Ben parked, and we all hopped out to start setting up camp. I took a deep breath, trying to shake off the uneasy feeling that had settled in my chest. The air smelled like pine needles and damp earth, comforting at first, but then there was something else, a faint, sour smell I couldn't quite place. I tried to ignore it as we unpacked. our gear, but I kept glancing over my shoulder, half expecting to see something lurking behind the trees. It was silly, I told myself. We were miles from civilization. Just us and the forest. What could possibly be out here? We set up our tents as the sun dipped below the horizon. The sky was still a
Starting point is 10:35:38 soft orange, but shadows were already creeping through the woods, and I found myself working faster, trying to beat the dark. I wasn't the only one. Phil fumbled with the poles of his tent, muttering under his breath, while Ben kept looking around like he was making sure we weren't being watched. That should have reassured me, but instead, it just made the tension grow. By the time we got a fire going, it was almost completely dark. The flames flickered and danced, casting weird shadows across the clearing. Ben plopped down on a log, grinning at us. All right, who's got a good ghost story? He asked, rubbing his hands together like this was what he'd been waiting for all day. I tried to smile, but it felt forced. Still, I settled down next to Phil and listened as Ben launched
Starting point is 10:36:27 into a story about a ghost that supposedly haunted these woods. He used a spooky voice, drawing out every detail. And Phil laughed nervously, even though I could see he was getting a little freaked out. I didn't want to admit it, but I was too. There was something about the way the firelight flickered, how the darkness seemed to press in from all sides. It felt like the forest was watching us, holding its breath.
Starting point is 10:36:54 Every time a branch snapped in the distance, I found myself tensing up, expecting, well, I didn't know what I was expecting. But it was enough to keep my eyes darting around the clearing, searching the shadows. Ben's story ended with a jump scare. He lunged at us suddenly, making Phil yelp and almost fall off his log. Ben laughed, a big, booming laugh that echoed through the woods, but it died down pretty quickly. I think we all realized just how quiet it had gotten.
Starting point is 10:37:25 The kind of quiet that makes you feel like you're not alone. All right, enough of that, Phil said, trying to sound casual as he stood up. I'm heading to bed. He glanced at me, and I nodded, relieved for the excuse to call it a night. The sooner I could get inside the tent, away from the dark, the better. I wasn't scared.
Starting point is 10:37:45 I told myself that. But there was something about the woods tonight that felt... Off. Just as we were about to head to our tents, a rustling sound came from the bushes. It was soft, but loud enough to make us all freeze.
Starting point is 10:38:00 I turned to look at Ben, expecting him to say something, maybe crack a joke about rabbits or raccoons, but for once, he didn't. He just stared at the bush, his expression unreadable. My heart started to pound, a cold nod of fear tightening in my stomach. Probably just a rabbit, Ben finally said, but his voice didn't sound as confident as before. He flicked his flashlight on and aimed it towards the noise. The beam cut through the darkness, but all it showed were branches swaying gently in the wind. I tried to laugh, but it came out as more of a nervous cough. Yeah, a rabbit, I echoed, though I didn't quite believe it. I forced myself to turn away,
Starting point is 10:38:44 to head towards my tent, but that uneasy feeling wouldn't let go. It felt like we were being watched, like there was something out there, just beyond the firelight, waiting. As I zipped up my tent, I heard it again, a rustling, closer this time. My hands went still, my breath catching in my throat. I listened, straining to hear over the pounding of my heart, but then, nothing, just the wind, or maybe the crackle of the dying fire. I closed my eyes, trying to convince myself it was all in my head. But deep down, I knew something was out there, and I had a feeling that whatever it was, it wasn't going away any time soon. It was probably around midnight when I first heard it. I was lying in my tent, trying to convince myself that everything was
Starting point is 10:39:34 fine, that the woods were just, well, the woods. I mean, they're supposed to be full of weird noises, right? But then I heard that sound, soft at first, almost like a whisper, but enough to make my skin prickle. It was a rustling coming from the bushes near our campfire. I held my breath, listening. My heart was pounding so loud I was sure it would wake Phil, who was in the tent beside mine. I wanted to tell myself it was just the wind or maybe a small animal, like Ben said earlier,
Starting point is 10:40:07 but there was something about it, something too deliberate. I peeked through the small mesh window of my tent, trying to see out into the darkness. The fire had mostly died down, just a few embers glowing red, casting faint, flickering light across the campus. sight. The shadows looked like they were moving, and I couldn't tell if it was just the wind, or something else. I heard Phil shifting in his tent. Did you hear that? he whispered, his voice
Starting point is 10:40:36 barely audible. It made me feel a tiny bit better knowing I wasn't the only one who was on edge. Yeah, I whispered back. It's probably nothing, right? I wanted him to agree, to tell me I was just imagining things. But there was a pause, and that silence said everything. Suddenly there was a growl, low and deep, like it came from right outside. My heart stopped, and I felt my entire body freeze. It wasn't like any animal I'd ever heard before. It sounded almost like it came from something bigger, something that shouldn't be out there. I heard Ben's tent unzip, and then I saw him stepping out, flashlight in hand. He looked annoyed, but I could tell by the way his hands shook that he was scared too. What the heck is that? Ben muttered, aiming his flashlight into the woods. The beam cut through the
Starting point is 10:41:27 darkness, illuminating the trees, but all I could see were branches and leaves swaying. Ben took a step forward, and then another. I wanted to call out to tell him to get back in his tent, but the words just wouldn't come out. I was too scared to even breathe. Then we saw them. Two yellow eyes, glowing in the beam of Ben's flashlight. They were staring right at us, unblinking. My stomach twisted into a knot, and I felt a cold sweat break out on my forehead. Whatever it was, it was watching us, and it wasn't afraid. The eyes were too high up, like they belonged to something standing on its hind legs,
Starting point is 10:42:07 something tall, way taller than any animal that should be in these woods. Ben took a step back, his flashlight shaking. Get in the tense, he whispered, but I could hear the fear in his voice. I couldn't move. I was just staring at those eyes, unable to look away. They were so bright like they were glowing from within, and I swear I saw something move behind them, a shadow, a shape. Then it stepped forward and I saw it clearly.
Starting point is 10:42:36 It looked like a deer, but wrong. It was huge, towering over. Ben, standing on its back legs like a person. Its antlers were twisted, almost like they were reaching out towards us, and its mouth was open, showing rows of sharp, glistening teeth. I felt my legs go weak, and I dropped to the ground, scrambling back into my tent. I could hear Phil breathing heavily, and I knew he was seeing it too. Ben shouted, and I heard the unmistakable sound of his rifle, a deafening crack that echoed through the woods. ears were ringing, but I could still hear the growl, louder now, almost like a roar. I peaked out
Starting point is 10:43:17 again, and what I saw made my blood run cold. The creature hadn't moved. It was still standing there, staring at us, like the bullets hadn't even touched it. Its eyes were locked on Ben, and then it let out a howl, a sound so loud and so full of rage that it made me clap my hands over my ears. Run, Ben yelled, and that was enough to snap me out of it. I didn't think. I just moved. I tore out of my tent, my feet barely touching the ground as I sprinted towards the truck.
Starting point is 10:43:50 I could hear Phil behind me, and Ben's heavy footsteps as he ran too. The ground was uneven, roots and rocks everywhere, and I stumbled, almost falling. But I couldn't stop. I knew if I stopped, that thing would be on me. Phil was right behind me, and when I tripped over a route, he grabbed my arm, pulling me back up. Come on, we have to go, he shouted. His voice almost drowned out by the pounding of my own heart. We were almost at the trucks. I could see them just a few yards away, and for a second, I thought we might actually make it. Then I felt it, sharp claws raking across my back.
Starting point is 10:44:30 The pain was blinding, and I cried out, stumbling forward. Phil was still holding on to me, and he dragged me the last few feet to the truck. Ben was already there, fumbling with the keys, his face pale in the moonlight. I could hear the creature behind us, its footsteps heavy, each one making the ground shake. We scrambled into the truck, and Ben slammed the door just as the creature lunged at us. It hit the side of the truck with a force that made the whole thing rock, its claws scraping against the metal. I looked out the window, and its eyes were right there, staring in at me. They were filled with something I couldn't quite describe.
Starting point is 10:45:11 Anger. Hunger. Something that made me feel like we were nothing more than prey. Ben started the truck, and we sped off, the tires kicking up dirt and leaves. I looked back, and in the rearview mirror, I saw it standing there, watching us. It's glowing eyes following us, until we disappeared down the road. Even as we left it behind, I knew one thing for sure. This wasn't over. Not by a long shot. I don't know how we made it to the trucks honestly.
Starting point is 10:45:43 It was all a blur of branches, shadows, and that awful sound. The heavy crashing footsteps of the creature getting closer. I could barely breathe, my chest burning as I ran, my legs feeling like they could give out at any moment. Phil was right next to me, his face pale in the moonlight, his eyes wide with the same fear that was clawing at my insides. The trucks were right there, maybe 20 feet away, and it felt like they were miles. I could hear Ben just ahead, already fumbling with his keys, and I knew we didn't have much time.
Starting point is 10:46:19 That thing, it wasn't just going to let us go. It felt like it was playing with us, like a cat with a mouse, just waiting for the right moment to pounce. I tripped over something, a route, I think, and for a second I thought that was it. I went down hard, the ground knocking the wind out of me, and all I could think was that I was done for. Phil, though, he didn't even hesitate. He turned back and grabbed me, pulling me to my feet. Come on! he yelled, his voice almost breaking. I could hear the terror in it, and somehow it got me moving again. We stumbled the last few feet to the top. trucks, and I saw Ben finally get the door open. He practically dove inside, and I could hear him
Starting point is 10:47:04 yelling at us, but it was like my brain couldn't make sense of the words. I could feel the creature behind us, could feel its eyes on me, and it felt like I was moving through a nightmare. Everything was too slow, and I knew that if I looked back, I'd see it, those glowing yellow eyes, the twisted antlers, the teeth. Phil shoved me towards the truck, and I was a little bit. Phil shoved me towards the truck, and I grabbed the handle, yanking the door open and scrambling inside just as something crashed into the back of the truck. The whole vehicle rocked, and I heard the metal crunch. Ben was shouting, and Phil was pulling himself into the back seat, slamming the door shut. My hands were shaking so bad I could barely get the lock down before the creature lunged again. It was on the hood now,
Starting point is 10:47:51 its claws raking against the windshield, and for a second, I was sure it was going to come right through the glass. Its eyes were locked on mine, and they were filled with this, this anger, this hunger that made my stomach twist. I felt like I couldn't breathe, like the air had been sucked right out of the truck. It was huge, and the way it moved, the way it stared. It wasn't just an animal. It knew exactly what it was doing. Ben slammed his foot on the gas, and the truck lurched forward, throwing me back against the seat. The creature slipped, its claws leaving long, deep scratches in the hood as it fell away, and for a split second I thought we'd gotten away. But then I heard it, a howl, so loud it made my ears ring, filled with this terrible, almost human rage. I glanced in the side mirror,
Starting point is 10:48:44 and there it was, standing in the middle of the road, watching us as we sped away. I couldn't look away from it. Even as the truck bounced over the rough dirt road, road, even as the trees blurred past us, those eyes stayed with me. They were burned into my mind, and I couldn't shake the feeling that it wasn't over. That thing, whatever it was, it wasn't just going to let us leave. It was like it was memorizing us, like it was making sure it knew who we were. Phil was breathing heavily in the back seat, and Ben's knuckles were white as he gripped the steering wheel. None of us said anything for what felt like forever. The only sound was the roar of the engine and the pounding of my own heart.
Starting point is 10:49:29 I wanted to say something, anything, but I didn't know what. There weren't any words that could make sense of what just happened. Eventually, Ben spoke, his voice shaky. We're not stopping until we're out of these woods. No one argued. I think we all felt the same way, that if we stopped, if we even slowed down, it would be there, waiting. The road seemed to go on forever. winding through the dark woods, and every time we hit a bump, I flinched, half expecting to see those eyes again.
Starting point is 10:50:02 I kept looking in the mirror, my eyes searching the darkness, but there was nothing, just shadows, and the occasional glimpse of moonlight through the trees, but I knew it was still out there. I could feel it, like an itch at the back of my mind that wouldn't go away. Finally the trees started to thin, and I saw the lights of a house in the distance. It felt like a weight lifted off my chest, and I let out a breath I didn't even realize I'd been holding. We were almost out, almost safe. Ben didn't slow down until we hit the main road, the pavement smooth under the tires. He finally pulled over, and for a second, none of us moved.
Starting point is 10:50:41 The silence was deafening after all the chaos, and I could still hear that howl echoing in my head. Phil was the first to speak, his voice barely a whisper. What? What was that? None of us had an answer. I wasn't even sure I wanted one. Part of me just wanted to forget it, to pretend it never happened.
Starting point is 10:51:02 But I knew, deep down, that I couldn't. Those eyes, that howl. It was all still there, just under the surface, waiting. And I knew somehow that it wasn't over. Not really. We drove the rest of the way home in silence. The memory of those glowing eyes following us all the way back. We didn't talk much after that night in the woods.
Starting point is 10:51:26 I think we all just wanted to forget what happened and pretend like it was just some horrible dream. But honestly, that was impossible. Every time I closed my eyes, I saw those glowing yellow eyes staring back at me and I heard that howl, so full of rage and hunger that it made my skin crawl. It was like the creature had etched itself into my mind, and no matter how hard I tried, I couldn't shake it. Phil and Ben were the same. We avoided each other for a while, like seeing each other would remind us too much of what happened. It was easier, I guess, to just stay apart, but it didn't really work.
Starting point is 10:52:02 The fear didn't go away. It just grew. And the more I thought about it, the more I needed to know what that thing was. I couldn't just leave it alone. I had to understand, even if it scared me half to death. So I started doing some research. It was slow at first. I didn't really know where to start. I mean, what do you even look up?
Starting point is 10:52:24 Scary monster in the woods? I tried to think about everything we saw that night, the way it looked, the way it moved, and eventually I found something. It was an old legend, a story people used to tell around these parts. It was called the Wendigo. The more I read about it, the more my heart sank. The Wendigo was supposed to be a creature of hunger,
Starting point is 10:52:46 something that used to be human but had become a monster, driven by an insatiable need to eat. It was said to live in the woods, to watch and wait for people who wandered too far into its territory. Everything about the legend matched what we saw. The height, the antlers, the glowing eyes, and that horrible awful hunger. It all fit.
Starting point is 10:53:09 I remember sitting at my computer staring at the screen, feeling a chill run down my spine. I'd wanted answers, but now that I had them, I almost wished I didn't. The Wendigo wasn't just some animal. It was something far worse. It was a monster, a spirit of the woods, and we'd wandered right into its territory.
Starting point is 10:53:32 We were lucky to be alive. But the worst part was, as I read more, I realized that the Wendigo didn't forget. It remembered its prey, and it never stopped hunting. I knew I had to tell Ben and Phil, even if they didn't want to hear it. I called them. And we met up at Phil's apartment.
Starting point is 10:53:50 It felt weird being back together after everything. We sat in Phil's living room, and I could tell from the look on their faces that they were just as scared as I was. Ben tried to act tough, like he always did, but I could see his hands shaking. Phil just looked tired, like he hadn't slept in days. I guess none of us really had.
Starting point is 10:54:13 I told them about the Wendigo, about everything I'd found. The room was quiet as I talked, and I could feel the tension growing, like a knot tightening in my chest. When I finished, no one said anything for a long time. Finally, Ben let out a long breath and shook his head. So what do we do? he asked. His voice was low, almost a whisper. We can't go back there.
Starting point is 10:54:38 We can't ever go back. Phil nodded, and I could see the fear in his eyes. We just... We just forget about it, he said. said, we don't talk about it. Maybe if we ignore it, it'll leave us alone. I wanted to believe him. I wanted to think that if we just stayed away, if we never spoke of it again, we'd be safe. But deep down, I knew it wasn't that simple. That thing. It wasn't just an animal. It was smart, and it was angry, and it knew us. It had looked right at me, and I knew it wasn't going to just
Starting point is 10:55:12 forget. Still, we agreed. We made a part of it. We made a part of it. It was a person. We made a part of packed, right there in Phil's living room, that we wouldn't talk about it again. We wouldn't tell anyone what happened, and we'd stay as far away from those woods as we could. It seemed like the only thing we could do, even if it didn't feel like enough. After that, we tried to move on. We went back to our lives, back to work, back to pretending everything was normal, but it wasn't. Every time I heard a strange noise at night, I'd jump, my heart pounding, expecting to see, see those yellow eyes staring back at me. I couldn't help it. The fear was always there, lurking just beneath the surface. One night, a few weeks later, I was sitting in my apartment,
Starting point is 10:55:58 trying to watch TV, when I heard it, a noise outside my window. It was soft, just a rustle, but it made my blood run cold. I got up slowly, my heart pounding, and peeked through the curtain. The street was empty, just the wind blowing leaves across the pavement. But for a moment, just a split second, I thought I saw something, a shadow moving between the trees, something tall and thin with glowing eyes. I closed the curtain quickly, my hands trembling. Maybe it was just my imagination, maybe it was nothing, but I couldn't shake the feeling that it was still out there, watching, waiting. The Wendigo didn't forget, and neither could I. We'd made a pact to stay silent, but I knew that silence wouldn't protect us.
Starting point is 10:56:46 It was still out there, somewhere in the dark, and no matter how far we ran, it would always remember us. And that, honestly, was the scariest part of all. It was just supposed to be a routine patrol, nothing special, nothing out of the ordinary. I've done this a hundred times, maybe more, but something about tonight felt off. Maybe it was the silence. Usually you'd hear the rustling of leaves or the distant call of an owl. But tonight, nothing.
Starting point is 10:57:23 It was like the whole forest was holding its breath. I grabbed my flashlight from the passenger seat of the truck and stepped out. The air was damp, like it had just rained, but everything was dry. Weird. The familiar smell of pine and moss was still there, though, which gave me some comfort. I took a deep breath, trying to shake off the unease that had been creeping up on me all evening. Just another night, I muttered to myself. I flicked on the flashlight, its beam-cuttinged.
Starting point is 10:57:53 through the thickening twilight as I headed down the trail. I was out here to check on a few campsites and trails. Nothing major. The radio was quiet as usual. It almost felt too quiet. You know that kind of quiet where your own footsteps sound way louder than they should? Yeah, that. As I walked deeper into the woods, I started noticing little things. Things I'd normally shrug off, but, tonight, couldn't ignore. Like this patch of underbrush I passed, all flattened out like, like something heavy had been lying there. Maybe a bear. Could have been. But then I saw the tracks. At first they looked like deer tracks. No big deal, right? Except after a few steps they changed. The neat hoof prints turned, strange. They were still kind of hoof-shaped but longer,
Starting point is 10:58:45 more stretched out, like something was trying to look like a deer, but didn't quite get it right. I frowned and knelt down to get a better look, but after a moment I stood up, brushing it off. It's probably nothing, I said, even though I didn't really believe it. The deeper I went, the worse the feeling got. There was this weird hum in the air, like a low buzz, but I couldn't figure out where it was coming from. I stopped for a second, thinking it was maybe a bee or something, but no. The hum wasn't moving, and it wasn't loud enough to be anything mechanical. like a generator. It just was. I kept walking, trying to ignore how my heart was starting to beat a
Starting point is 10:59:27 little faster for no good reason. The flashlight flickered for a second and I almost jumped. Really? I muttered shaking it. Not tonight, please. By now it was getting darker. The sun pretty much gone, leaving me with just the dim glow of the moon in my flickering flashlight. I felt a chill creep up my spine. I wasn't scared. At least that's what I kept telling myself. but that uneasy feeling I had at the start. Yeah, it was growing stronger by the minute. It felt like someone or something was watching me. I'd glance behind me every now and then, but there was nothing.
Starting point is 11:00:04 The trees stood tall and still like they were waiting for something too. A loud crack, like a branch snapping, made me freeze. I swung the flashlight around, shining it through the trees, but all I saw were shadows. The light flickered again, and my hand shook as I tightened my grip. Get a grip, Jack, I whispered, even though talking to myself wasn't helping. But the thing is, that feeling, the one that says, turn back. It was there, and it was getting harder to ignore.
Starting point is 11:00:37 I knew I should have turned around, but I couldn't. I had to finish the patrol. Besides, it was probably just my imagination, right? I'd been out in the woods at night plenty of times. This was no different. Or at least, that's what I kept telling myself. Still, as I continued walking, every little sound, the rustle of a leaf, the snap of a twig, set my nerves on edge.
Starting point is 11:01:02 My instincts were screaming at me now, but I shoved them aside and kept going. The hum grew louder, the air felt heavier, like it was pressing down on me. That's when the flashlight flickered one more time and went out completely. I was plunged into total darkness. My flashlight was dead. Of course it was. I stood there, blinking into the pitch black, trying to calm my racing heart. The moonlight filtering through the trees was faint, barely enough to see the path in front of me. I dug around in my pocket for my spare flashlight. There's always a backup. That's Ranger 101. I switched it on, half expecting it to flicker out like the other one, but it held steady and the pale beam pushed back the darkness a bit.
Starting point is 11:01:50 I let out a shaky breath and started walking again, trying to shake off the feeling of being watched. But, you know, it wasn't going anywhere. If anything, it was getting worse. I kept looking over my shoulder, expecting to see something lurking just beyond the trees. But there was nothing, always nothing. The further I went, the stranger everything seemed. The hum, from before? Yeah, it was still there, but it wasn't just a background noise anymore. It felt like it was in the air, buzzing through my bones. I couldn't tell if it was coming from the trees, the ground, or maybe even inside my own head. That's when I saw it, a campsite. Now, I didn't remember this site being on my patrol route. It wasn't on any of the maps I'd checked earlier
Starting point is 11:02:39 either. But there it was, a torn-up tent, a dead campfire, and the smell of something rotten hanging in the air. It looked like it had been abandoned for a while, but there was something off about it, like it didn't belong here. I stepped closer, my flashlight sweeping across the torn fabric of the tent. The campfire had been cold for a long time, but something about it still felt fresh. I couldn't explain it, but the air was thick with that disgusting stench, almost like rotting meat mixed with something sour. My stomach turned. The ground near the fire was strange, too. There were symbols, scratched into the dirt, surrounding what looked like bones, small ones, animal bones, I think. They were arranged in a circle, like some kind of weird
Starting point is 11:03:30 ritual or offering. I swallowed hard, suddenly feeling like I shouldn't be here at all. That's when the first whisper hit me. At first I thought it was the wind. But no, there wasn't a single breeze tonight. The air was still, heavy. I froze, straining to listen. The whisper was soft, almost too quiet to hear, but it was definitely there. And it wasn't just one voice.
Starting point is 11:03:55 It was like, many, whispering from all directions. I spun around, shining my light into the trees, trying to catch a glimpse of who or what was out. out there. Nothing. Just shadows. But the whispers kept going, growing louder. I couldn't understand the words, but they were close, way too close. I grabbed my radio and pressed the button. Ranger Station, this is Jack, I said, my voice shaking more than I wanted it to. I need backup. Something's not right out here. The only response I got was static. I swore under my breath, clicking the button again. Station, do you copy?
Starting point is 11:04:35 Static. No answer. I tried again, but it was like the radio wasn't even reaching anyone. The hum in the air seemed louder now, almost drowning out everything else. I don't know why, but I couldn't bring myself to leave just yet. I felt this pull, like something was keeping me there, holding me in place. I stepped closer to the symbols in the dirt, my flashlight flickering over the bones. The whispers were all around me now, like they were coming from the trees, the ground, the darkness itself. I spun in a circle, but there was still no one there. The forest seemed to press in on me, the trees creaking and groaning like they were alive, like they were watching too. That's when I heard it. A loud snap, like a
Starting point is 11:05:23 branch breaking underfoot. My breath caught in my throat. I spun toward the sound, my heart racing, but again, nothing, just more shadows, more dark, empty forest. And yet, you're not. And you, yet, I knew something was there, something big. It was close, too close. The whispers were louder now, almost frantic. They seemed to swirl around me, mixing with the hum that was vibrating through my chest. My legs felt frozen, like I couldn't move even if I wanted to. Then out of the corner of my eye I caught the briefest glimpse of something, a figure, tall and thin, just beyond the trees. It was there for a second, maybe less, and then it was gone, swallowed by the shadows. I didn't wait to see if it would come back. I turned and ran. I ran. My legs were burning and my lungs felt
Starting point is 11:06:12 like they were going to explode, but I didn't stop. I couldn't. Whatever I saw back there, it wasn't human, at least not anymore. My mind was racing, trying to make sense of it. But honestly, there wasn't any sense to be made. The forest was a blur around me, shadows stretching and twisting in the pale moonlight. My flashlight bounced wildly in my hand, but I didn't dare turn it off. Not after seeing that thing. I kept running, dodging branches, nearly tripping over roots, just trying to get as far away as I could. But no matter how fast I moved, I couldn't shake the feeling that something was right behind me. That's when I heard it again, a loud crack, like a tree branch snapping under something heavy, too heavy to be a deer or any normal animal
Starting point is 11:07:01 out here. I glanced over my shoulder, heart pounding in my ears, and for just a second, I saw it. A tall, gaunt figure moving between the trees, fast, way too fast. Its limbs were all wrong, too long, too twisted, and its eyes. Its eyes reflected the moonlight, like in animals, but there was something human about them too, something that made my stomach drop. I stumbled over a rock, nearly falling face-first into the dirt. I caught myself just in time, but my flashlight slipped out of my hand and rolled away, its beam flickering against the trees. Panic surged through me, and I scrambled to grab it, my fingers shaking. I could hear the thing moving, closer now, and I didn't have time to think. I grabbed the flashlight and bolted. I don't know how long I ran for. It felt like forever,
Starting point is 11:07:54 but the trees all looked the same. I couldn't even tell if I was still on the trail. It was like the forest had swallowed me up, and I was just running in circles. That hum, that low, constant buzz was back, louder now, like it was inside my head. And the whispers? Still there. Only now they sounded almost like laughter. Like something was toying with me. My legs were screaming for me to stop, but I knew I couldn't.
Starting point is 11:08:23 Stopping wasn't an option. Not with that thing out there. Not when I had no idea what it was capable of. but the worst part? The part that really sent a shiver down my spine. It was the stories I'd heard, the ones I'd always laughed off, the old legends the locals talked about, stories of skin walkers, creatures that could mimic both man and beast.
Starting point is 11:08:46 I didn't believe in that kind of stuff. At least I didn't, not until now. I pushed those thoughts away. I had to focus. I had to get back to my truck. If I could just make it there, I'd be safe. I'd radio for help, get out of the woods, and never come back. I just had to get to the truck, but the forest wasn't making it easy.
Starting point is 11:09:08 The trail, if I was even still on it, was nearly impossible to follow in the dark. And every time I thought I was getting closer to safety, I'd hear that crack again, that sound of something big moving through the trees, just out of sight. I skidded to a stop, my chest heaving, and shined my flashlight into the woods. The beam flickered for a second, and I nearly lost it. Come on, not now, I whispered, shaking the flashlight. It steadied, and I swept it across the trees. Nothing, just shadows.
Starting point is 11:09:40 But I knew it was there. I could feel it, watching me, waiting. I had to keep moving. My truck couldn't be far. I just had to push through a little longer. But then I heard it again, closer this time. That snap of a branch, followed by the unmistakable sound of footsteps, not the soft, cautious steps of a deer or a bear. No, these were deliberate, like
Starting point is 11:10:03 something was stalking me. I turned, my heart hammering in my chest, and for a split second, I saw it again, the same tall, twisted figure. Its eyes gleamed in the dark, locking onto me. It wasn't running. It didn't have to. It knew I couldn't outrun it forever. I don't know where the strength came from, but I forced myself to move, faster than that. than before, if that was even possible. My legs felt like they were going to give out, but I didn't care. I just needed to get out. I had to get out. And then, finally, I saw it. The edge of the trees opened up, and there it was. My truck. Relief flooded through me, and I sprinted toward it, my fingers already fumbling for my keys. I didn't stop to look back. I didn't want to know how
Starting point is 11:10:54 close it was. I just threw myself into the driver's seat, slammed the door shut, and locked it. For a moment, I just sat there, gasping for breath, my heart pounding so loud it felt like it was going to burst out of my chest. I gripped the steering wheel, trying to calm down, but the fear wouldn't let go. I glanced in the rearview mirror, and that's when I saw it. standing at the edge of the trees, just barely visible in the shadows, was the figure. Its eyes gleamed, reflecting the light from my truck's headlights. It didn't move. It just stood there, watching.
Starting point is 11:11:34 And for the first time, I realized something terrifying. It wasn't just hunting me. It was waiting. I sat there in my truck, my hands shaking as I gripped the steering wheel, staring out into the dark. My chest was still heaving, my breath shallow and ragged. I'd made it. I was out of the woods.
Starting point is 11:11:55 But somehow, that didn't feel like a victory. The headlights cast long shadows across the trees, and just beyond the reach of the light, I could still see it. That figure. It hadn't moved. It stood there, tall and twisted, its eyes gleaming in the dark, watching me, waiting. I couldn't tear my game.
Starting point is 11:12:16 away. My mind was screaming at me to just drive, but something inside me couldn't let go of that thing out there. It was like I was in a trance, frozen. What was it? Why hadn't it attacked? What did it want? Finally, I snapped myself out of it and fumbled for my keys. I shoved them into the ignition and cranked the engine to life. The sound of the truck roaring to life should have been comforting, but it wasn't. I couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. Something big, deeper than just that thing in the woods. I threw the truck into gear and peeled out, gravel spraying behind me as I sped down the dirt road. I glanced in the rearview mirror, but the figure was gone, just shadows now. But I knew it wasn't over. I could feel it.
Starting point is 11:13:03 The road was bumpy, my headlights bouncing wildly over the trees, but I didn't slow down. I couldn't. I needed to get back to the station, call for help, and figure out what in the world was happening. But the further I drove, the heavier that feeling became, that sense that I wasn't alone. I tried the radio again, but it was still just static. Of course it was. Nothing had been working right since the moment I'd stepped into those woods. I slammed the radio back into the holder, frustration bubbling up inside me. Come on, come on, I muttered, like somehow yelling at the radio would magically make it work. The station lights finally came into view. Relief washed over me, but it didn't last long. I parked the truck and stumbled out,
Starting point is 11:13:52 still glancing over my shoulder like I expected to see that figure lurking just beyond the tree line. I hurried inside, locking the door behind me, my heart still pounding. The station was quiet, too quiet. I made my way to the desk and grabbed the landline, hoping it had worked better than the radio. As I dialed, my eyes caught something in the window's reflection, something that made my blood run cold. It was me, or at least, it should have been, but the face staring back at me. It wasn't quite right, my eyes. They looked too bright, too sharp, like something was behind them. For a second, I couldn't move. My breath hitched in my throat, and my hand shook as I dropped the phone. I blinked, thinking maybe it was just the adrenaline, just my nerves
Starting point is 11:14:42 playing tricks on me. I wiped my eyes and looked again, but it was still there. My reflection wasn't my own. My face shifted, just a little, almost like someone was wearing it like a mask. That's when I felt it, that presence. It was here, not outside, not in the trees, but with me. The hairs on the back of my neck stood up. I slowly turned away from the window, scanning the station. The hum was back, louder now, buzzing in my ears. and the whispers they were inside. I couldn't understand the words, but they were all around me,
Starting point is 11:15:18 circling like they were closing in. My heart pounded in my chest faster and faster, but my legs felt like they were glued to the floor. Suddenly, I remembered the stories. The ones I never believed. The ones about the skin walker, the creature that could mimic anything, man or beast,
Starting point is 11:15:39 the thing that could steal your face, your voice, Your soul. It hadn't just followed me. It was in me. I stumbled back from the desk, my mind racing, but there was nowhere to go. I could feel it crawling under my skin, like it was shifting, taking over. I was losing control.
Starting point is 11:15:59 My hand twitched, not because I moved it, but because it did. My reflection in the window was grinning now, a twisted, distorted version of me. I opened my mouth to scream, but the sound that came out wasn't mine. It was a low, guttural growl, something that didn't belong in a human throat, and that's when I knew. It wasn't just following me. It had me. I sank to the floor, my back against the door, staring out at the dark woods.
Starting point is 11:16:25 The last bit of me, the part that was still Jack, whispered into the silence. It followed me. But I knew the truth. It wasn't going to let me go. Even though I work as a park ranger, I have never really believed in monsters or creepy creatures. It just never made sense to me. Ever since I started working, I have heard stories from other park rangers about creepy, inhumane creatures living in the woods, waiting for humans, creatures that were neither animals nor humans,
Starting point is 11:17:04 something monstrous, pure evil, terrifying. My seniors used to tell me about their experiences and how they believed in a mythical creature called the Wendigo that lurks in the forests among the darkness. But of course, I was never really convinced that they were. were real. They were just made up imaginary creatures or animals. But the recent report we received might prove me wrong. I work as a senior park ranger, the leader of my group. We had been getting common reports from campers and tourists about weird experiences in the park. Most of them said that they often heard disorienting sounds, like whispers or someone calling
Starting point is 11:17:42 for help. But when they followed the voice, they would end up in the middle of nowhere. Many He reported that late at night they heard branches snapping or footsteps crunching leaves, as if someone were following them. Not only that, but some even reported a rotting meat smell that filled the whole forest late at night, causing them to abandon their plans to camp. Most of these reports were ignored by the senior teams, but then we received a report from a group of campers sharing what they had seen. Apparently, while camping in the woods one night, they noticed a shadowy figure in the distance.
Starting point is 11:18:18 just for a brief moment before it disappeared into the trees. It was just a glimpse, but they were so sure it was something abnormal, something they had never seen before. Some of my seniors were convinced that the park needed to be investigated at night. Soon after, a group of park rangers was sent to investigate the woods more deeply. It was a six-member group, led by Eddie, a good friend of mine at work. We often laughed and joked about how neither of us believed in so-called mysterious monsters that weren't human.
Starting point is 11:18:52 The initial plan was for the group to start investigating early in the morning and stay the night. All of us were waiting for them at the station near the park. I still remember the next morning, waiting for the group to return and tell us it was just an animal or something, so we could go back to focusing on other reports. I'll never forget what happened next. The group came back without Eddie. Apparently, they had split up in the middle of the night and gone their own way, ways to search, but they soon realized that something was really wrong. Eddie was missing.
Starting point is 11:19:24 No matter how much they screamed his name or ventured deeper into the forest, they couldn't find him, no trace of him. They had no choice but to return without him. The situation was far more serious now. The leader of the group was missing. What was even more confusing were the experiences of the other members. They were puzzled by the sudden drop in temperature and the air growing colder. Their GPS devices stopped working, and they noticed the night falling unnaturally fast. Nothing was making sense, and everyone soon realized that something was not right. We decided to conduct another investigation at night. I stepped up as leader. I knew I had to bring Eddie back. There was no way I was going to give up on him. The next morning, my team began preparing.
Starting point is 11:20:13 The group had a total of 12 members, with me as a the leader, and Ryan, another good friend of mine, as the navigator. We planned everything, taking GPS and compasses, flare guns, first aid kits, body cameras, and emergency equipment. I had to make sure nothing would go wrong. We set out, planning to report to headquarters every two hours to ensure we were safe. If we couldn't reach them, a backup Ranger group would be sent. I took a deep breath and began the journey. We didn't only have to find out what was wrong with this park, we also had to find Eddie. It started off easy. We set up our camps toward the west of the park and then slowly made our way deeper into the woods as a group,
Starting point is 11:20:57 not leaving each other. We began looking for clues, traces, anything that could lead us to Eddie. We didn't even realize how quickly the day ended. It was already dark. Time went by very fast, but all of us wanted to search a little more before camping for the night. We informed headquarters of this and pressed on. Something about being in this forest late at night made me uneasy. It wasn't that I had never investigated a park before, but I just felt that something was off. We were all looking around, scanning all sides, flashing our flashlight beams. I was very cautious about any sound, any noise that might help us find Eddie. It had already been more than a few hours, and we were all getting tired, but I couldn't just give up. My group members started
Starting point is 11:21:46 complaining about how long it was taking, and some suggested that we split up. I knew that would be very dangerous, but the night was growing darker, and we were hoping to find Eddie before sunrise. I reluctantly agreed, and we split into pairs. I took Ryan with me, while the other pairs went their own ways. We searched deeper, confronting the unknown in the darkness. I could feel the winds growing colder, sharp breezes hitting my face. The leaves crunched underfoot as we walked, and we heard animal or bird noises here and there. The sound of crickets rose like a chorus behind us, but then we heard something from a distance.
Starting point is 11:22:24 Wait, can you hear that? Ryan whispered to me as I gripped my flashlight tightly. It started as a faint whisper, but then it grew louder and closer. We couldn't make out the words, but it felt like someone was in danger, screaming for help. We both sensed it was important.
Starting point is 11:22:43 Let's go look, I told Ryan. and we took hesitant steps toward where the voice was coming from. It led us deeper into the park, but I didn't care. What if one of my members was hurt? Or what if it was Eddie? My heart was pounding in my chest. Deep down, I knew something was wrong, really wrong. I don't know what I was expecting,
Starting point is 11:23:06 but I was mentally preparing myself to encounter something abnormal. We looked in every direction as the voice grew closer and closer, the deep trees engulfing us. I could feel we were very close to where the voice was coming from. It was clearly someone screaming for help, but then it stopped. We could hear nothing. Absolute silence spread over the entire forest. Not a single bird, no crickets, nothing, barely even a breeze.
Starting point is 11:23:35 The voice was gone, and Ryan and I both looked at each other terrified. It seemed as if we had lost our ability to hear. It felt oddly silent. We didn't know what to do now. The voice was gone. But then, out of the corner of my eye, I caught something on the ground. It was like a footprint, except it was very large and didn't look like it belonged to a human. It was dug deep into the ground.
Starting point is 11:24:01 I pointed my flashlight at it and stared at it for a while. I asked Ryan if it was some animal's footprint, even though I already knew the answer. Ryan knew a lot about wildlife and could easily. identify animal tracks. Ryan examined it closely, and it was obvious that it didn't belong to any known animal. If this wasn't from an animal, then what did it mean? My head was consumed with racing thoughts. Nothing was making sense. I could feel goosebumps forming all over my body as the winds grew brisk. Out of nowhere, the echoing thud of footsteps reached my ears. I looked in all directions. I couldn't figure out where they were coming from. My eyes scanned
Starting point is 11:24:42 the area for anything, just anything, that could help us. The sound of the footsteps continued, but then I noticed something in the woods, just a glance, behind the trees, just for a split second. Then it hit me. My eyes widened in fear as I realized what it could be. It was a dark figure, a giant figure that couldn't be an animal or a human. It was only for a moment. I blinked, and it seemed as if the figure had quickly blended back into the trees. I gulped hard as sweat dripped down my forehead, my hands shaking as I gathered all the courage I had, and pointed my flashlight toward the trees where I saw the shadowy figure.
Starting point is 11:25:24 It was gone. There was nothing. I looked at Ryan and could tell he understood what was going on. No words were needed. Ryan held my arm, and we took small steps backward. Our eyes remained fixed on the direction of this. trees in front of us as we crawled backward, trying to be quiet, very subtle, as if the figure would discover we were there. We didn't know what to do, should we run and look for the other members, or stay quiet and hide. Something told me the figure was still there, present near us.
Starting point is 11:25:57 I can't describe it, but I could feel its existence. I could feel someone watching us, someone's sharp gaze on us. I knew it was time to inform headquarters about what was going on. We needed help. I didn't even know where the rest of the members were. I picked up my satellite phone, but the screen showed no signal. My heart dropped. We had lost all source of communication. Ryan pulled out the GPS device. It showed us that we were at the location where we set up our camps, on the west side of the forest, but we were nowhere near our camps. It didn't take us more than a minute to figure out that the GPS was showing us the wrong directions. It wasn't working properly. Ryan then took out the compass, but it started spinning in all directions, not stopping.
Starting point is 11:26:46 What was happening? How was this not working? We had no idea where we were, just stuck in the middle of a forest with nothing but darkness. I didn't have much time to think about everything before I saw it again, behind the trees. It was bright, yellow, and unsettling, two eyes watching us. I grabbed on to Ryan. We both knew we weren't safe. We started smelling a strong, pungent odor. It smelled like rotten meat, like a human corpse. It wasn't long before I started feeling nauseous. I knew it was coming from somewhere nearby. We were near the figure. I could feel it, very close to us. I didn't know what to do. I covered my nose with my hand and without thinking twice flashed my flashlight toward the trees
Starting point is 11:27:34 where I could still see the yellow eyes. That was the biggest mistake of my life. I could see it. It was in front of me. That's it. There it was, the monstrous skeletal figure. It wasn't an animal or a human. It was giant, unnaturally tall,
Starting point is 11:27:52 the largest dark figure I had ever seen in my life. Decayed, with a thin layer of skin stretched over its body. Its bones were visible, with pieces of gray fur clinging to it. covered in frost. I could see its ribcage, just open. Its large claws and long limbs hung down, touching the ground, with blood dripping from its mouth. Its sharp teeth were ready to grab and tear. The stench of death was overwhelming. I felt my knees go weak. It looked directly at me, and for a moment it felt like its hollow eyes burned with sinister hunger. A predator looking at its prey, its gaze piercing through my soul. Suddenly,
Starting point is 11:28:34 Suddenly, everything reminded me of Eddie. We used to laugh at the jokes about unknown creatures in the forest, creatures we thought weren't real. He had been attacked, lost, and gone. The leader of the group was missing. I knew it. I was the next target. For a moment it just stood there still. Then, before I knew it, it lunged toward me, growling, its claws ready to attack. Its speed was faster than any animal I had ever seen. Ryan grabbed my arm and we started running. I didn't know where we were going, probably deeper into the forest, no direction, but I didn't stop. I couldn't afford to. It was after us. I could feel its heavy body pounding behind me, its footsteps making the ground shake. It was growling. We were in danger. My bag dropped from my back, but I didn't pick it up. I didn't need it anymore.
Starting point is 11:29:29 I could feel my feet burning and my heart racing, but I didn't dare stop for a second. I kept running, praying deep down for any help, anything. It was right behind me. It felt like it was closing in. I could almost feel its claws reaching for me, my body chilling from its freezing presence. I didn't even know where I was going or where I would end up, but it didn't matter as long as I was far away from that monster. I could feel it gaining speed.
Starting point is 11:29:58 My legs were about to give out, but I wasn't. Suddenly, I tripped over something, probably a tree branch, and in an instant I was on the ground, my face covered with mud. It's over, it's all over. I'm dead. I could hear Ryan stop running as he looked back at me, but there was no time to get back up. That's it. It got me.
Starting point is 11:30:22 I was ready to be torn to pieces. I didn't even try to move my body lying flat on the ground. But out of nowhere, I heard a loud gunshot echo among the trees. I glanced back and saw all my members far behind me, near the creature. It looked like they had shot it. It hissed in pain as it stopped, just for a brief moment. But that was enough for me. I took my chance.
Starting point is 11:30:47 I managed to get up and sprinted until I felt far away and safer. We were all now a good distance from the creature, circling it, watching its every move. Everyone had their guns out, ready to shoot as soon as it moved again. We watched as it continued to roar, the decayed scent growing stronger around us. It felt like I was seeing a dead body, all rotten inside but alive on the outside. It slowly regained energy, as if coming back to life and started moving again, slowly but surely, toward me. My members shot it again a couple of times, but this time it didn't stop. I started taking small steps backward
Starting point is 11:31:26 until I noticed our backup had arrived. They approached the Wendigo, still maintaining a distance, and started spreading gasoline all around it. I understood the plan. They passed some of the gasoline to Ryan, and he passed it to me, signaling me to spill some on the other front side of the creature.
Starting point is 11:31:46 After we were done, one of the backup rangers pulled out a flare. At this point, Ryan and I ran further away, and the park ranger threw the flare from a d'clock. distance. It landed within the gasoline range, and gradually the flames began spreading around the deadly creature. Now it was trapped in the middle of a ring of fire. The fire expanded, covering the entire area, and soon it made its way toward the creature. We watched it burn as it howled in pain. Its voice sounded demonic. Soon its growls became fainter, and eventually
Starting point is 11:32:19 they stopped. We watched it turn to ash as the smoke consumed it. Done. It was dead. We were all safe. It was finally over. That's what I thought. But wait, we still hadn't found Eddie. The backup rangers told us to leave and that they would handle the rest, but I wasn't leaving until I found Eddie. I ran toward my members, asking if anyone had found any clues regarding him. Apparently, Eddie's bag was discovered by one of my members. It was near the area where we set up our camps. Despite headquarters telling us to leave, I kept searching. I wasn't going to abandon him. Even though I was sure the creature was dead,
Starting point is 11:32:59 I was still scared that more creatures like it were lurking in the forest. I wanted to go deeper, but I knew I couldn't. My team continued searching for hours more until one of them found Eddie's body lying among the trees. I was informed about it, and when I went over to see him, he looked like he had already died, barely clinging to life. Luckily, he was alive, but in very severe condition.
Starting point is 11:33:25 He was taken to the hospital immediately and had to stay for weeks until he was fine again. His body was dehydrated and weak. He told me how he had also noticed the figure of the Wendigo lurking in the trees and tried to run away to find a safe place, but without any survival equipment he had fainted. Finally, it was all over. We were all safe. Now it all made sense, campers feeling like they were being watched. seeing shadowy figures in the trees, hearing whispers and footsteps from afar. It was all real.
Starting point is 11:33:57 I still don't know where that noise came from, the call for help that led us deeper into the forest. The thought still lingers in my mind, but one thing is for sure. Whether you believe it or not, creatures like Wendigos are real. I learned my lesson the hard way, to never laugh at the experiences of others ever again. I did more research on this topic, and according to some sources, Wendigows can control the temperature and atmosphere around them. That explains why the temperature suddenly dropped in the middle of the night.
Starting point is 11:34:31 You will never believe it's real until you see it yourself, until it's chasing after you, until you're close to death. That night has haunted me ever since. I can never go on another park investigation without the face of that creature still vivid in my mind. as if it's there, watching me, planning its revenge. They say the wilderness is supposed to be peaceful, and for the most part I've always believed that.
Starting point is 11:35:06 But this morning, the air felt heavy, like it was pressing down on me. I couldn't shake it off. I've worked these woods for ten years, know them better than the back of my hand. Every inch of this place is logged into my memory, like an old map. But today, something was different. Even as I tried to push those nagging thoughts out of my head, there was a pit forming in my gut. Matt was with me, solid, quiet Matt.
Starting point is 11:35:37 We were heading into an uncharted section of the park, deeper than we'd ever gone before. It's not like we hadn't been in sketchy areas before, but this was off. The usual sounds, the wind rustling through the pines, the birds chattering above, had gone dead, not even a squirrel scurrying up a tree, just silence. Matt must have noticed it too, because he glanced at me a few times, like he wanted to say something but couldn't find the words. He's always been the type to play it cool,
Starting point is 11:36:06 but even he seemed a little uneasy. You hear that? he asked after a while. I stopped, listened. Hear what? Exactly. He grunted, eyes scanning the tree line like he was expecting something to jump out. I shrugged it off.
Starting point is 11:36:22 Maybe the bird's dissoning. decided to take a break. I was trying to sound casual, but deep down it was creeping me out. The forest doesn't go quiet for no reason. We pushed on. The trail we were following wasn't really a trail, more like a deer path, barely visible beneath the brush. My boots crunched on the dry leaves, the sound unnaturally loud in the quiet. I couldn't help but glance over my shoulder, feeling like someone, something was watching. Of course, there was not. There was nothing there, just trees. You heard the stories, right? Matt broke the silence after a while. His voice was low, almost hesitant. The ones the other guys have been telling? I snorted.
Starting point is 11:37:07 Stories. You mean the ones about the monster in the woods? Come on, Matt. You don't believe that stuff, do you? He didn't answer right away. Instead, he stopped and crouched down near a patch of dirt. What the hell's this? His voice had dropped. and that caught my attention. I stepped over and saw what he was looking at, tracks, but not the kind you'd expect to see. They were too big to be human, but not shaped right to belong to any animal I knew of.
Starting point is 11:37:36 Four toes, long, deep impressions like claws, had sunk into the earth. But that wasn't the weirdest part. Each step was spaced out too far, like whatever it was had a stride longer than any man or beast. I felt my skin prickle. Bear? I offered, though I knew damn well bears don't leave tracks like that. Matt shook his head. No bear I've ever seen. We both stood up, neither of us wanting to admit what was on our minds. Instead, we kept walking, but now there was this unspoken tension hanging between us. The farther we
Starting point is 11:38:11 went, the heavier it got. About an hour in, the smell hit us. Faint at first, then stronger. It was metallic, like blood, but mixed with something rotting. Matt stopped again, sniffing the air, his brow furrowed. You smell that? I nodded, my stomach twisting. It was wrong, unnatural. I didn't want to say anything out loud, but I knew we weren't alone out here. That feeling, that gnawing sensation in the pit of my stomach, was growing stronger.
Starting point is 11:38:43 Something was watching us. I couldn't explain it, but I knew. We kept walking, though every step felt like we were being pulled deeper into something we couldn't get out of. My mind kept circling back to those stories, ones I'd laughed off in the ranger station, the weird tracks people had seen, the flickers of movement at the edges of the trees, the strange lights at night, none of it made sense, but now, out here, with the silence pressing in, I wasn't laughing. We hit a small clearing, and that's when Matt stopped dead in his tracks, staring off to the left.
Starting point is 11:39:20 Did you see that? I froze. See what? He pointed, his hand trembling ever so slightly. Over there by the trees, something moved. I looked, but all I saw were shadows, the long, dark shapes of the pine trees swaying slightly in the breeze. I don't see anything. Matt didn't move.
Starting point is 11:39:41 It's there, I swear it. We stood there for what felt like hours, just staring, waiting. But nothing came. The forest, quiet as ever, seemed to be holding its breath, like it was waiting for something, too. Finally, I cleared my throat. Let's keep moving. Matt nodded, but the look in his eyes told me he wasn't convinced. Neither was I.
Starting point is 11:40:07 As we moved deeper into the woods, that heavy silence followed us, clinging to our backs. and as much as I tried to shake it off, I couldn't. Something was out there. And whatever it was, it was watching. I tried to tell myself it was all in our heads. I mean, it had to be right. A quiet patch in the woods. Some funky-looking tracks.
Starting point is 11:40:29 None of that adds up to anything more than a weird day in the wilderness. But no matter how many times I repeated that to myself, it didn't stick. It was like trying to shake off a bad dream that kept pulling you back in. Matt hadn't said much since he spotted whatever he thought he saw by the trees. Normally he's the type to crack a joke or lighten the mood when things get tense. But today? Nothing. He was keeping his eyes straight ahead, lips pressed tight, not a good sign. We kept moving, deeper into the uncharted section of the park.
Starting point is 11:41:03 The trees were thicker here, and the air had that heavy stillness to it, like even the forest didn't want to move. It was unsettling. The silence had a way of crawling. under your skin, you know, like the woods were holding their breath, waiting. I'm not going to lie. Part of me wanted to turn back, but I wasn't about to admit that, not to Matt, not to myself even. So we kept going, our boots crunching over the undergrowth, the only sound in what felt like a suffocating void. You hear that? Matt asked again, his voice just above a whisper. I stopped.
Starting point is 11:41:38 This time, I listened. Real close. But there was. was nothing. No birds, no wind, not even the faint scurrying of animals in the brush. Just dead air. Nope, I said trying to keep my voice casual, not a thing. Matt didn't answer. He was scanning the tree line, eyes narrowed like he was trying to catch something just out of sight. I couldn't help but follow his gaze, even though I knew there was nothing out there, at least nothing I wanted to see. We pressed on. The deeper we went, the more. wrong everything felt. That metallic scent hit us again, faint at first, like blood, but mixed with something, rotting. I felt the hairs on the back of my neck stand up, but I kept my mouth
Starting point is 11:42:25 shut. It was probably some dead animal nearby, right? Happens all the time out here. Except it didn't smell like any dead animal I'd ever come across. You smell that? Matt asked, his voice tighter now, more clipped. Yeah, I admitted. It's weird, but maybe there's a carcass nearby. Could be a bear got to something. He nodded, but I could tell he wasn't buying it. Honestly, neither was I. We kept going until we hit this small clearing,
Starting point is 11:42:55 just big enough to give us a break from the thick trees. And that's when we saw the markings. There, carved into the bark of several trees around the edge of the clearing, were these strange symbols. They weren't anything I recognized. No initials. No signs of some camper marking their spot. No, these were jagged, like someone had scratched them in with a blade.
Starting point is 11:43:18 They twisted and curved in a way that made me uneasy just looking at them. What the hell is this? I muttered, stepping closer to one of the trees. Matt didn't answer. He was staring at the symbols like they were some kind of puzzle he was trying to piece together. His face had gone pale, and I could see his breath coming out in short bursts, even though it wasn't that cold. Probably some kids messing around, I said, even though I knew that wasn't it. The cuts were too deep, too deliberate. There was something off about them.
Starting point is 11:43:54 But I needed to say something, anything, to keep the growing sense of dread from settling in. Matt finally spoke. You think kids did this? I shrugged, trying to sound nonchalant. Maybe. Who else would? He didn't answer. Instead, he knelt down, squinting at something on the ground just in front of one of the trees. I moved closer, and that's when I saw it. The dirt around the base of the tree wasn't just disturbed.
Starting point is 11:44:23 It looked like it had been clawed at. Deep furrows, like something with sharp nails had been digging there. Matt, I don't like this, I said, my voice lower now. Let's head back. We've seen enough for one day. He didn't move. It's watching. My blood ran cold. What? He didn't look up, just kept staring at the claw marks. Whatever it is, it's been watching us since we got here. I opened my mouth to tell him he was being paranoid,
Starting point is 11:44:52 but the words stuck in my throat. Deep down I felt it too. That gnawing feeling that we weren't alone, that something or someone was keeping tabs on us, waiting for the right moment. We should go, I said again, this time with more urgency. Matt finally stood, but his eyes, kept darting around the clearing, like he expected something to jump out at any second.
Starting point is 11:45:14 As we turned to leave, I heard it, the faintest snap of a twig somewhere off in the trees. We both froze. My heart pounded in my chest and I strained my ears waiting. But nothing followed. Just that suffocating silence. Let's go, I said, barely above a whisper. And this time, Matt didn't argue. As we hurried back through the trees, the symbol. the tracks, and that strange rotten smell followed us, lingering in the back of my mind. I couldn't shake the feeling that something had seen us, and whatever it was, it wasn't done yet. I woke up to nothing, no wind, no birds, just the absolute stillness that had settled over the forest since we got here. It took me a second to realize what was really wrong, though.
Starting point is 11:46:05 Matt was gone. Matt? I called out. but my voice came out a little too sharp in the silence. Nothing. I sat up and looked around the camp, just our gear scattered around, the fire we let die overnight, and Matt's empty sleeping bag. His pack was still there too, which made no damn sense. Matt, I shouted, louder this time, and stood up, scanning the trees. I strained my ears waiting for him to call back,
Starting point is 11:46:35 maybe some wisecrack about needing to take a leak, or how I'm always the last one up. but there was nothing. That uneasy feeling I'd been trying to push down for the last day or so crept back up, clawing its way into my chest. Matt wouldn't just wander off without saying something. He wasn't that kind of guy. And leaving without his pack?
Starting point is 11:46:56 No way. I grabbed my jacket, shoved my boots on, and started walking in the direction I thought he might have gone. He couldn't be far, right? Matt, I yelled again. Still nothing. Just that damn silence. I don't know if you've ever been out in the wilderness, truly alone, but it does something to your senses.
Starting point is 11:47:16 Every little sound, every shadow feels sharper, like it's pushing in on you from all sides. I couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. Really wrong. I checked the trees for any sign of where he might have gone, but there were no tracks, no footprints. It's like he just vanished. My heart started pounding a little harder, and I had to force myself to take a deep breath. Keep it together. I've been in the woods my whole life.
Starting point is 11:47:43 I know how to track a guy. This shouldn't have been that hard, but it was. After a while, I stopped walking and just listened. The forest felt heavier, the deeper I went. The air almost thick, like I was walking through water. Then I heard it. A faint snap, like a twig breaking off to my left. Matt?
Starting point is 11:48:04 I called, my voice sounding too loud, too hopeful. That's when I heard it. Matt's voice, faint but unmistakable, coming from deeper in the woods. Over here, relief flooded through me. Of course, I thought, he's fine. Maybe he went to check something out and just didn't bother waking me. I shook off the tension that had been crawling up my back and headed toward the sound. But as I got closer, something didn't feel right. I can't explain it, but you know when your gut just tells you something's off? That feeling was gnawing at me again. more persistent now.
Starting point is 11:48:42 Matt! I called again, stepping through the thick underbrush. His voice came again, but this time it was different, too flat, too slow. Over here. I stopped dead in my tracks. The forest around me seemed to stretch out in all directions, dark and endless, with no clear path. My breath quickened, and for the first time in a long time I felt scared, not just uneasy, but truly scared. That's when I saw the clearing up ahead, a wide open patch of land surrounded by tall pines, and standing right in the middle of it, facing away from me, was Matt, or at least something that looked like him. Matt? I whispered, more to myself than anything. He didn't turn around, didn't move, just stood there,
Starting point is 11:49:31 stalk still, with his back to me. His shoulders slouched in that same slack way. He didn't, he always stood when he was thinking too hard. I swallowed, my throat tight, and took a few hesitant steps forward. Something wasn't right. His stance, the way he was so still, it made my skin crawl. Then in one smooth, unnatural movement, his head turned toward me, but his body didn't, just his head twisting slowly around until his eyes, no not his eyes, not really, locked on mine. They were glowing, a dull yellow, not human at all. My legs locked up. My body screamed at me to move, to run, but I was frozen in place, unable to process what I was seeing.
Starting point is 11:50:15 Then, just as suddenly, he moved. His entire body jerked twisting like something out of a nightmare, and before I could even think, he broke into a sprint, straight toward me. I didn't wait to see what would happen. Every instinct I had took over, and I turned and ran. crashing through the underbrush, my breath coming in ragged bursts. I could hear him behind me, crashing through the trees, his footsteps heavy and unnatural, too fast, too close. I ran blindly, not caring where I was headed,
Starting point is 11:50:48 just knowing I had to get away. I could feel him gaining on me, feel the weight of whatever it was bearing down. The forest around me twisted into a blur, and my lungs burned as I pushed harder, faster, and then nothing. I burst through the trees and into another clearing, stumbling to a stop, gasping for breath. When I turned around, there was nothing behind me, no mat, no glowing eyes, just the empty woods, as silent and still as they'd been all morning. But I knew what I'd seen, and it wasn't over,
Starting point is 11:51:21 not yet. Every muscle in my body screamed, but the adrenaline was pumping too hard for me to care. The forest around me blurred, trees whipping past like shadows. their branches reaching out like claws, snatching at my sleeves, trying to slow me down. My mind was on one thing. Keep moving. Don't look back. If you stop, you're dead. I could hear it behind me, crashing through the underbrush, snapping branches,
Starting point is 11:51:50 heavy footfalls way too fast for something so big. It wasn't human, but it sure as hell had Matt's face. My lungs burned, each breath tearing through my chest, but I didn't dare slow down. The ground beneath my boots was uneven, the dense layer of pine needles slipping underfoot. I nearly tripped twice, catching myself on a low-hanging branch the first time
Starting point is 11:52:13 and just barely managing to stay upright the second. But that thing, it was gaining on me. I could feel it. You ever have that sensation. When you just know someone's right behind you, it's like the air shifts, and suddenly you're hyper-aware of everything, every step, every noise. That's what it felt like. The creature wasn't just chasing me, it was playing
Starting point is 11:52:36 with me. I could hear it mimicking my breaths now, that rasping, ragged sound just close enough to make my skin crawl. It was messing with me, and it was working. My heart pounded so loud I could hear it in my ears. The trees felt closer now, like they were closing in on me, making the forest tighter, narrower. I thought I was following had disappeared somewhere behind me, and now I was just running. Running and hoping to God I was heading in the right direction. I stole a glance over my shoulder. Mistake. It was there, right there. Its twisted body moving unnaturally fast, arms too long, legs bending at angles that made my stomach turn, and those eyes. They weren't Matt's eyes. They were yellow, glowing, like something straight out of a nightmare. Whatever was
Starting point is 11:53:29 was chasing me. It had taken his face, his voice, but it sure as hell wasn't him. My foot caught on something, a root maybe, and I went down hard slamming into the dirt. Pain shot up my leg, but there was no time to feel it. I scrambled up, half crawling, half running as I pushed forward, my pulse racing out of control. The creature's breath was on me now, hot and sour, and I swore I could hear it laughing. Not in a way you or I would laugh. It was distorted, twisted, like it was trying to remember what a laugh was supposed to sound like, like it was practicing. I tore through the brush, my hands ripping through branches, brambles scraping across my face.
Starting point is 11:54:12 My jacket snagged on a thorny bush, and I yanked it free, leaving a shred of fabric behind. I had no idea how far I'd run, how long I'd been going. Time felt slippery, warped. Was it minutes? hours? All I knew was that I had to keep moving, had to outrun it, even though I knew deep down it was faster than me. A clearing appeared ahead, a small break in the trees. I ran toward it, my legs threatening to give out, my chest heaving like I was on the verge of collapse. The forest opened up just enough to give me a chance to get my bearings, to figure out where I was.
Starting point is 11:54:50 I could see the faintest trace of light breaking through the canopy, the promise of morning creeping in, if I could just make it to the Ranger station, if I could just hold on. I made it to the clearing and collapsed against a tree, gasping for breath. My vision blurred, my head spinning as I leaned against the rough bark. I was so close.
Starting point is 11:55:13 I just needed a second, just one second, to catch my breath, to figure out what the hell to do next. That's when I heard it, my voice. From deep in the woods, where the thing had been chasing me, I heard my own voice, calling out, over here. Soft at first, but unmistakable. It was like listening to a recording of myself, just slightly off, a little too slow, a little too deliberate.
Starting point is 11:55:39 I froze. Then it called again, louder this time, over here. My mind reeled. It was taunting me, using me. Somehow, it had my voice now, just like it had mats. I looked into the woods, squinting into the shadows, but I didn't see anything. Just that suffocating silence again, the kind that makes your heart pound in your ears. But it was there. I knew it was, watching me, waiting. I pushed myself up, my legs barely holding me, and forced myself to keep moving. I had to get to the station. The woods weren't safe anymore, not even in the daylight. As I stumbled forward, one thought kept running through my mind. It wasn't just after me anymore. It was me now.
Starting point is 11:56:27 I stumbled into the ranger station just as the first slivers of dawn broke through the trees. The soft light should have been comforting. A reminder that I'd made it through the night, but all it did was cast long, jagged shadows across the floor. Every creek of the old wood made my nerves spike. I slammed the door shut behind me, locking it without thinking. Not that a thin piece of wood would stop whatever was out there, but I needed the barrier. needed to feel like I was safe for even a second. My breath was ragged, chest heaving from the sprint. I could still hear the snapping twigs, the echo of my own voice calling from the woods,
Starting point is 11:57:06 and those eyes, those glowing, yellow eyes. My stomach twisted at the thought of them. Whatever that thing was, it had taken Matt's face, and now, somehow, it had mine too. I collapsed into the chair by the old desk, my whole body shaking, and stared out the window. The sun was inching higher, slowly lighting up the tree line. It should have felt like a victory. Daylight usually means safety, right? But all I could think about was how the forest hadn't let up, even when I thought I was in the clear. It was like it had been playing with me, letting me believe I had a chance.
Starting point is 11:57:44 I tried to focus on the basics. Water, rest. That's what I needed. but my mind kept circling back to Matt, or whatever was left of him. I couldn't stop thinking about his voice echoing through the trees, how it wasn't just calling out for help. It was mimicking me, and now it had my voice too. I rubbed my face, my hands still trembling. This can't be real, I muttered to myself, but it didn't feel right.
Starting point is 11:58:13 None of it felt right. Then I heard it again. At first I thought my mind was playing tricks on me. Maybe it was the exhaustion, maybe it was the leftover panic, but no, there it was. Faint, from outside. Over here. I froze, my entire body went cold. It was my voice, clear as day, calling out from the edge of the woods.
Starting point is 11:58:36 Not far, just beyond the tree line. The same slow-measured tone I'd heard before, back when Matt had disappeared. Only now, it was me. I shot up from the chair and backed away from the window, my heart pounding again. No, no, no, I whispered. I didn't want to believe it. I didn't want to admit that whatever was out there had somehow learned my voice, had taken something from me, just like it had taken Matt.
Starting point is 11:59:03 The voice came again, louder. Over here. This time, I couldn't help it. I looked. My eyes darted to the window, scanning the tree line for any sign of movement. and then I saw them. Two glowing yellow eyes staring back at me from the edge of the woods. My blood turned to ice.
Starting point is 11:59:23 It was standing there just out of reach half hidden in the shadows. But I could make out enough. The face was mine, my face, but the eyes, they were wrong, too bright, too unnatural. And the way it stood there watching me, completely still except for its eyes, it sent a wave of nausea rolling through my gut. I backed away from the window, my pulse thundering in my ears. What do you want? I muttered, though I knew it wouldn't answer. I didn't even know if it could.
Starting point is 11:59:54 But then again, it had my voice now, didn't it? What was stopping it from using it however it wanted? I couldn't stay there, not with that thing standing out there, watching, waiting. I grabbed my jacket, my keys, and headed for the door, my mind racing with thoughts of getting out of here. I had to get to the main ranger station. Find help. Find anyone who could explain what the hell was happening. But as I reached for the handle, the voice came again, this time, from just outside the door. Over here, I froze, my hand inches from the doorknob. How had it moved that fast? My heart pounded harder, my breath catching in my throat. It was messing with me again,
Starting point is 12:00:39 toying with me like a cat with a mouse. It knew I was trapped, knew I had nowhere to run. I backed away from the door, shaking my head, my mind reeling. No, I whispered my voice barely audible. No, this isn't happening. Then from outside, I heard it again. Only this time, it was worse. Much worse.
Starting point is 12:01:01 It called my name, not just over here anymore. It was me, calling out for myself with my own voice. The exact cadence, the same inflection I used when I was shouting through the woods for Matt. Only now, it was calling me. I couldn't move, couldn't breathe. The reality of it sank in like a lead weight in my chest. Whatever this thing was, it had taken something from me, my voice, my name. It knew me now, in a way I couldn't explain.

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