Just Creepy: Scary Stories - 4 DISTURBING Deep Woods Horror Stories
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a month ago, my friend asked if anyone had ever had strange experiences in southern Tennessee,
and a few other nearby places, particularly in the mountains. I had too much going on to
respond at the time, but my husband and I did have an experience there that I think is worth
telling, although most of our family doesn't know because we understand how they'd react,
so we've never told them. While I realize this post describes many over-the-top experiences,
my husband and I both went through the following exactly as I'll describe.
I understand that not everyone will believe me,
but since this post contains deeply personal moments in my life,
I ask that everyone please keep comments respectful,
whatever opinions you express on the subject matter.
Thank you so much.
This story needs background to convey some factors that were potentially involved.
I suspect the events leading up to the trip to Tennessee
may have had a direct relation to the severity of what we accomplish.
experienced while there. I had never wanted to marry, neither had my now husband. Then we met each
other. We got engaged at ages 30 and 28 and had a two-year engagement. We wanted our wedding to
symbolize our true soul bond and decided to go completely non-traditional. His giant family
wanted a white-dress Catholic wedding, so we were at major odds with them from day one. My fiancé
and I began suffering a long run of exceptionally bad luck, along with some odd poltergeist activity at home.
It was nothing too major, so we mostly brushed it off, except for one instance when we left the
house and came back to find a red clown nose sitting front and center on our bathroom sink.
No one had keys to our place, and we definitely didn't own a clown nose. That one freaked us out.
When I told a friend something weird was going on to the point I almost felt the wedding was cursed,
He tried to explain it away.
I said, watch, something's going to happen today while he's getting his tucks, I'm telling you.
I got one flabbergasted look from my friend before my fiancé immediately called to say there'd been a freak accident in the parking lot while he was getting fitted,
and someone had totaled the back end of his truck.
That shut my friend right up.
Another glitch was my refusal to have my father walk me down the aisle.
I also refused a random stand-in just for tradition's sake.
I asked my younger brother, and he said he would be so honored.
We'd had some problems in the past, but he'd been clean for seven years, and we'd finally reconciled.
Losing our middle brother to a drunk driver had driven us apart for a while, but later on,
it brought us back closer.
Then, 40 days before the wedding, my younger brother, unintentionally, passed away in his mid-20s.
My fiancé and I drove over 16 hours, close to Point Pleasant West Virginia, to say good
I knew my brother, and I knew he wouldn't cross over easily after what he'd done,
especially with my wedding around the corner and me counting on him.
It bothered me deeply.
His viewing was closed to immediate family only.
He wasn't embalmed due to the complete autopsy required.
He was covered in a handmade quilt up to his chin.
We were instructed not to touch him, although we ignored that.
After saying our goodbyes, I walked to the end of his gurney and laid my hands on his feet.
like a supplicant. I told him I understood it was an accident and that I forgave him.
I told him that if he still felt he needed to make amends to me, he could do so by calling
forth my loved ones and those of my fiancé to come witness the wedding from the other side.
I asked him to bring our other brother, my fiancé's sister, grandparents, aunts, friends,
calling them by name, all the beloved souls who had already passed. Do this,
I told him, and there will be no debt between us. You can rest in peace. The looks on my family's
faces were priceless, but it felt like something I needed to offer. When I returned to New Orleans,
I had a pendant made featuring my favorite picture of my two brothers. I wrapped it around my
bouquet, and, although to the guests it seemed I walked the aisle alone, I knew both my sweet
brothers were right beside me in spirit. They would never miss their sister's wedding, especially
with Hector, the passing, actively dragging them across the veil to fulfill what he must have
felt was his final obligation to the living. My new husband, Eli, and I went to a rental cabin
on Bluff Mountain for our honeymoon week. I don't want to name the specific cabin in case I'm not
supposed to, but I will say it was very rocky with a raccoon theme. Bluff Mountain is in Pigeon
forge outside of Gatlinburg in the Smoky Mountains. I was living in New Orleans and had brought a
double handful of fresh-picked gardenia blossoms with me. It was a symbolic offering to the mountain
for hosting us on such a special occasion, no rituals or anything. I simply arranged them on a wooden box
with a fake bird and nest that sat on top of the cabin's porch railing, and I sent up feelings of
gratitude and joy. We went out to eat and grab groceries. Upon arriving back at the cabin,
the wooden bird box was smashed into a million pieces all over the porch.
It must have hit the ground hard to shatter so thoroughly.
We figured maybe a raccoon or bear had gotten to it.
Then I noticed there were no flowers.
I thought it could have been the wind,
but the leaves scattered around the porch were still exactly how we'd left them.
Gardinias aren't super light flowers, heavier than leaves.
So it was weird they were gone while the leaves stayed.
I searched around the porch, stairs, and walkway.
but found nothing. The next morning, I went a little way down the driveway to pick some honeysuckle.
About 20 feet from the porch, I glanced down and did a double take. There were all my
gardenias, piled up and flattened as thin as crapes. There were no shoe prints, but it looked like
more than one stomp was needed to squash them that flat. Feeling unnerved, I walked away,
wondering if the mountain didn't like my offering after all, then laughing at myself for the thought.
Night 1. Eli woke suddenly to what sounded like something big banging on the support beams under the cabin.
The front half of the cabin was supported about 15 feet off the forest floor by giant wooden posts
because it hung off the side of a hill. He said the impact was so strong that the mirror on the wall
vibrated, which shouldn't be physically possible for anyone to do. Each time he started to drift back
off, there was another bang. Finally he got up.
After one more cabin-shaking thud, he decided to wake me.
Apparently, he'd been waiting to see if I would wake up on my own so he'd know he wasn't imagining it.
But now, he was completely alert.
Right as he reached for me, he heard the loudest bang slap from the area between the sitting area and the kitchen, right at the foot of the bed.
It was a one-room cabin.
He said it sounded like a giant book being dropped from high up, but there was nothing there.
This bang was definitely inside the cabin.
He tried frantically to wake me,
but he said I was in such a deep sleep he actually thought something was wrong,
that he could barely tell I was breathing.
Then this strange metallic jangling noise started up behind the TV,
directly across the cabin from our bed.
He said it went on forever, but he was too scared to go check,
especially since it was right by the huge windows
and near where he'd heard the noise inside.
It was this insistent buzzing, jangling,
that finally woke me. I remember it being so hard to come back to consciousness, like swimming
through blackness to get back to myself. I kept asking, what the hell is that noise?
Thinking it was an alarm someone left set. When I finally managed to get up to smash the offending
noisemaker, the trilling stopped. Exhausted I fell back onto my pillow. Eli told me about
the banging. He was obviously terrified. And while I believed him, I was so,
numb and out of it that I had no emotional response. I was overwhelmed with a debilitating fatigue
and just zonked out until morning. Normally I'm a very light sleeper, especially in new places,
but almost every night during this trip was like that. The second my head hit the pillow,
it was as if I fell into a coma. It was extremely deep but not restful. Waking up was worse.
It literally felt like I had to claw my way out of unconsciousness, and it left me exhausted.
Day and Night 2.
While doing my makeup in the infamous shaking mirror the next morning,
I finally heard the full story from Eli.
I tried to talk it out logically.
Maybe a bear was rubbing against the post.
But he insisted it was solid bangs.
Like a giant fist, no way it was a bear.
And there was also that bang from the center of the floor on the inside of the cabin.
That reminded me of the alarm.
I was all set to disable it.
At the exact second I mentioned it, that horrible buzzing noise started up again behind the TV.
We both jumped.
I joked, that's some interesting timing.
Looking behind the TV, I realized it wasn't an alarm clock but an old landline phone with a bell buzzer,
which explained the horrid noise.
Of course, I had to answer it.
There was a minute of silence and then bursts of static.
It sounded like someone was talking, but it was so garbled by static I couldn't make out any words.
I told them to move around to get better reception.
Was it cabin management?
Still silence and occasional static bursts.
I hung up.
I was more amused than anything, especially seeing Eli's face.
As soon as I set the phone down, he unplugged it.
He said management had both our cell numbers,
so it was probably a prank call from someone who'd stayed before,
but we weren't playing along and ending up in a deliverance scenario.
Smart man.
The phone stayed.
unplugged. That night we were in the hot tub on the deck. It was around the back, enclosed on three
sides by a kind of gazebo, with no bright lights nearby, to avoid bug swarms. As we relaxed,
I was facing the wooden slats of the enclosure, and Eli was facing me in the forest. I kept
admiring this large blue light behind the enclosed end. It was about the size of a cantaloupe
and looked bright, but the glow over us in the hot tub was pretty muted.
I assumed it must be some kind of LED, though I'd never seen a blue that shade.
All the other cabin lights were bright and orange.
I distinctly remember commenting on how nice it was for mood lighting.
Eli also looked at it and agreed.
We stayed out there about two hours.
When we decided to get out, the light blinked on and off in a seemingly deliberate pattern
before shining a few more seconds and going dark.
We both remarked how strange it was that the light burned out like the light.
that. I planned to call the next morning to request a new bulb. When I woke up, I walked around
back to see what kind of fixture needed replacing. There was nothing there, no pole, no wiring,
nothing that could produce a light. The management confirmed they'd never installed one in that
spot because of unstable soil. Whatever the light was, it was definitely there for the two hours
we were soaking. It didn't turn off. It flat out disappeared. From this second night on, after coming
inside, I started getting goosebumps, and the hair on my neck stood on end every time I passed
the open bathroom. The bathroom was next to the bed area. Lying in bed, you could see the bathroom
sink and a small window above it that opened onto the woods behind the hot tub. It had no
curtain. I still thought the blue light was man-made at this point, but I could swear something was
looking in through that window. I'd been leaving the bathroom door open because I liked seeing the
forest from the bed, but now I tried to keep it shut without Eli noticing I was creeped out.
The next morning, Eli told me that any time he began to drift off, a resounding bang on the
posts under the cabin would jolt him awake. He swore it was like something new exactly when he was
closing his eyes. He never got up, so how could it tell? Once again, I was no help, sleeping like
the dead. Night three. After scrubbing ourselves in the
the cabin's heavily sulfuric water, we got ready for bed. Walking from the bathroom to the bed,
I remembered I'd forgotten to shut the bathroom door. Since Eli was already in bed watching me,
I just kept going, telling myself to stop being ridiculous, although I was sure I felt eyes at that
window. I had checked before and saw nothing unusual, but that feeling persisted. Then Eli
quietly asked if I could shut the door. Why? I asked. Because that window
gives me the creeps, he replied. It was eerie validation. That night, I had some disturbing
dreams I can't really recall. Eli, however, experienced a severe bout of sleep paralysis, SP,
though he initially swore it wasn't SP because he said he sat up, kicked, and yelled at the
figure. Now, he agrees it was probably SP. Either way, he woke to eerie laughter, and saw what
he described as a grudge-type woman standing at the end of the bed, laughing at it.
him. I wouldn't wake up. He said she wore a white dress, had pale skin, black eyes and a horrible
mouth, and long black hair partially obscuring her face, surrounded by swirling black mist.
She reached for him, and he sat up, yanking his legs to his chest. He said he started yelling at her
to GTFO and kicked at her. She faded out, laughing. He said he woke several times to her
grabbing his ankles and giggling throughout the night. I still wouldn't wake up. Night four.
It was more of the same. Eli had repeat SP experiences with the same lady in white, even more intense.
Also, I realized a small trinket I'd brought for luck, left on the shelf next to my side of the bed,
was missing. The cabin was tiny, and we tore it apart over the next two days, but it never turned
up. It was worthless monetarily, so I don't think it was stolen. Night five. Whenever I sat up on the
edge of the hot tub to cool off, I felt that same sense of being watched I'd gotten from the bathroom
window. I'd literally break out in goosebumps. It was a Friday, and we could hear a group of
guessing college kids partying some distance away, close enough to catch their screaming,
whoops, and cheers. Not wanting some creepy, wood-savvy lurker to watch me, we went in
inside. Not much else happened that night beyond troubled sleep. At one point, Eli woke to frantic
banging on a support post, but it didn't last long or repeat. Night 6. Final. This was an extra
night we received due to the terrible sulfuric water. The filters needed replacing, so they
comped us a night. The water wasn't dangerous, just really, really stinky, like odalatur d'a
a rotten egg. It was bad. Despite our weird nights, we'd been having a blast during the day.
Riding rides, eating great food, trying good wine. Gatlinburg is amazing to visit. So, on our last
night in the hot tub, everything was great until I started feeling that intense, hostile gaze
from the tree line for the second night in a row. This time it felt worse. Every time I sat up
to cool off, I'd unconsciously hug myself and sink back into the water.
I reminded my husband that in all the years he'd known me, I'd never been the paranoid or scared type.
But there was absolutely something aggressive out there watching me, and it wasn't one of the college kids.
We could hear them again.
Eli pulled me over to the covered side.
Within five minutes of my moving, we heard a tremendous crash in the brush behind us,
then something big stomping directly below us.
A few seconds later, there was more crashing, and a second set of stomping footsteps.
They sounded human in rhythm, but no one on packed earth should be that loud.
We both bolted inside, still dripping.
Eli says that night was the worst for banging on the posts.
He said there was banging on at least three widely separated posts,
and it went on most of the night.
Whenever the banging stopped, he'd doze off, and the white-dressed woman would appear.
Again, I slept like the dead.
Morning of Day 7, Leaving Day.
Something demanded my attention, pulling me toward consciousness.
At first, it sounded like a parade of horses clip-clopping down a paved street.
Then I remembered where I was.
The sound was coming from the roof.
I checked my phone.
Just after 8 a.m. on a Sunday.
I groaned, thinking roofers must be working on the cabin.
But why wouldn't they know the cabin was still booked until 11 a.m.?
I glanced at Eli.
He looked pale and was breathing very slowly,
obviously exhausted. I gave him a half-hearted poke, but he was out cold. He'd been dealing with so much,
I let him sleep. At least it was morning, sunny, and not something going bump at 4 a.m.
Then I wondered what roofers worked on Sundays. I listened more carefully. It wasn't exactly a
hammering. It really sounded like hooves pounding the roof. I decided I'd have to ask them to hold
off until we checked out. I pulled back the covers and swung my legs off the bed.
The second my feet touched the floor, the pounding on the roof stopped instantly,
and the door handle to the main entrance, three or four steps in front of me, started rattling, violently.
There were two things I noticed.
There was no pause between the sound on the roof and the door handle.
It moved from above me to right in front of me with no delay.
The top half of the door was glass with a sheer curtain,
and the sun was shining directly through it.
I could plainly see that no one was near the door,
yet the handle was shaking uncontrollably.
I yanked my feet back onto the bed and ducked under the covers like a terrified kid.
The moment my feet left the floor, the doorknob stopped rattling,
and the pounding on the roof resumed in the exact same spot.
Again, no pause.
I stared at Eli, torn over weather to wake him.
I was scared he'd wake up and hear nothing at all.
But then his eyelids fluttered open on their own.
Do you hear that? I whispered.
He said yes.
I felt so relieved I hadn't imagined it.
We stayed there whispering.
He also thought it sounded like a horse, or multiple hooves, but not quite metal.
The pounding was so strong we could see the mirror shaking, glasses rattling, and cabinets quaking.
Whatever was on the roof was huge.
The pounding continued for about 35 minutes, from around 802 a.m. until 8.36 a.m.
Though I don't know how long it had been going on before it woke me, it was deafening,
and absolutely terrifying. We lay there whispering about whether it was trying to break through the
roof, though the glass doors would have been easier to smash. Eli decided he would get up and look.
I told him about the doorknob shaking when I tried. After a moment's hesitation, he threw back his
covers and stood. The pounding stopped. We both froze. Then came a horrible grating noise
sliding across the roof, our eyes went huge. Was that claws? I hissed in the softest voice I could
manage. Eli jumped back onto the bed and the banging resumed. We had the quietest conversation ever
about whether we'd actually just heard giant claws on the roof. It sure sounded like it.
Eli finally grabbed his legally owned firearm from his bedside drawer and made a sudden dash for the
door. The pounding instantly stopped and everything went side.
silent, no running footsteps, or anything. The roof was completely empty. Given the cabin's
location perched on the hill with no close trees, there was nowhere something that big could hide
or escape to without being seen. We packed at lightning speed, but we did have one last quick
smoke in the driveway. It felt safer in open space. While we were out there, we heard the group
of partiers from the previous nights yelling for a missing friend. We could hear the panic in their
voices. Where is he? He was with us last night. They shouted his name over and over. Eli and I tried to
find them to help, or at least to ask if they'd seen or heard anything weird, but the winding
one-way dirt roads were confusing. We think they might have been locals, and we were on rental cabin
roads that didn't connect to local ones. We couldn't reach them. I really hope they found him
passed out drunk in a bush somewhere. I have no idea what we encountered on that. I have no idea what we encountered
on that trip. It showed elements of so many paranormal experiences,
orbs, strange phone calls, poltergeist activity, cryptid-like behavior, and a lady in white.
Yet it really felt like one entity wearing different outfits, so to speak.
After we got home, everything went back to normal.
Though I'd asked my departed loved ones to bear witness to our wedding, specifically the
blessed dead, and specifically only for the ceremony, none of this activity seemed like
protective ancestors to me. I lean toward some kind of nature or elemental spirit, but that's just a guess.
Eli, on the other hand, says he thinks it was a big foot, even though he said otherwise at the time.
Anyway, that was our oh, so memorable honeymoon. If you made it this far, thank you for reading.
I'd love to hear any ideas on what we might have encountered. Thank you and best wishes.
I've been working at this Michigan Nature Preserve for a while now, and usually, the biggest surprise I
get is the occasional lost hiker or an unexpected downpour. That all changed one night when the
storm clouds rolled in like a warning. Rain hammered the roof of the tiny entrance booth I was
stationed in, and the wind rattled the windows so hard I thought they might crack. Every flash of lightning
lit up the forest in these stark white bursts, and each time I swore the trees were shifting,
like they were alive in ways they shouldn't be. I was supposed to clock out soon, but my supervisor
radioed me. Roads were flooding, and I needed to pack up before they got any worse. I'd done this
routine in bad weather before. Heck, I've practically lived at this park on rough nights,
but something in the air this time felt genuinely off. The booth light gave me just enough
illumination to see the sheets of rain pounding the dirt road. Beyond that, shadows ran together
like ink on wet paper. I double-checked the lock on the money box, then shoved my gear into my
backpack. The second I stepped outside, the downpour smacked me so hard I almost dove back in.
Water was pooling around my boots, and visibility was down to a few yards at best.
My flashlight created a jittery beam that kept bouncing off raindrops, making it hard to tell
what was just a swaying branch and what might be something else.
Thunder cracked again, and I nearly dropped my keys. It was so loud I felt the rumble in
my chest. As I fumbled to secure the booth door,
A flicker of movement caught my attention.
It wasn't just a gust of wind or a trick of the light.
There was a silhouette, tall and gangly, standing deeper in the darkness.
The way it shifted reminded me of an animal trying to walk upright, like it wasn't designed for two legs.
Rain soaked my jacket in seconds, but I couldn't tear my eyes away, because that shape was definitely looking back.
I tried to pretend it was just a deer or something harmless, but my gut told me otherwise.
I snapped out of my days long enough to break into a run for my car.
Water splashed up my shins with every step.
My hands were shaking so badly I almost couldn't fit the key in the door.
By the time I got inside, my clothes were plastered to my skin,
and my heart hammered like it was trying to punch its way out.
Turning the key in the ignition, I heard the dreaded click of a dead engine.
I muttered a few choice words, praying it was just a hiccup.
On my second try, the engine coughed into life.
Lightning flared again, and for a split second, I glimpsed that figure closer than before.
Its elongated limbs bent at eerie angles.
I jammed the car into drive and peeled out faster than I'd ever done in park property.
The radio, which should have been blasting my supervisor's voice, hissed with static.
Normally these things are built tough.
They've worked through hail and snow without a glitch,
but now it was nothing but white noise.
Rain hammered the windshield the entire ride back.
My tires slipped more than once on the muddy road,
and it felt like the storm was trying to keep me from reaching the main lodge.
The headlights lit up the drizzle in a frantic swirl,
and even with the wipers going at full speed, I could barely see.
Every so often I thought I spotted something on the edge of my vision,
darting between the trees.
When I finally rolled into the lot, relief flooded me.
The office lights got.
glowed faintly through the storm, promising some scrap of normalcy. I slowed to park,
thinking maybe I'd imagined it all, but a lean shape, impossibly quick, zipped across the beams
of my headlights. It was thinner than anything I'd seen before, limbs too long, posture almost
predatory. I killed the engine and sat there in stunned silence, soaked and on edge.
Rain hammered the roof, and thunder rumbled, but my focus was on the darkness beyond the lights,
nothing else moved yet the hair on the back of my neck refused to settle i needed to get inside let them know the night had taken a strange turn but for a moment i just stayed put listening to the storm and trying to convince myself i hadn't witnessed something that defied reason
eventually i mustered up the courage to hurry from my car to the office door i went in dripping water all over the floor not really sure how i'd explain that i saw something that looked nothing like a normal animal
Maybe it was stress.
Maybe it was just the storm making me see shapes.
I told myself that once the rain passed, everything would be fine.
But deep down, I knew the park was different now,
and I had a bad feeling the night's events were only the beginning.
I've always thought of myself as pretty resilient.
After that stormy night, though, I noticed my senses were on high alert.
Every time a branch snapped or a leaf rustled,
I'd spin around, expecting to see something lurking.
My co-workers teased me about being jumpy, but they didn't experience what I did.
It was like the forest had changed overnight, and I couldn't pretend otherwise.
That evening, I was assigned to do the final trail check before closing,
a standard duty where we make sure no one's stuck or lost.
I headed out around nine, with a headlamp and my usual gear.
The place officially shuts down at 11.
But we start clearing people early in case someone has an emergency,
or the path is too dark to navigate.
Normally, the routine is simple enough.
Walk the main loop, call out a few,
Hey, anybody still out here, lines, and move on.
This time the walk felt different from the very start.
The first half mile passed in silence.
The quiet was unsettling.
No owls.
No nighttime insects humming.
My footsteps echoed in a way they never had before,
crunching leaves and twigs underfoot.
After a while I thought maybe this was me overreacting again.
But as I reached a bend in the trail,
something drifting on the breeze made my stomach turn,
a rancid smell, like soggy fur mixed with rotting vegetation.
It was strong enough to make me pause and cover my nose.
I swung my headlamp toward the trees,
trying to pinpoint the source.
Yet all I saw were dense trunks and shrubs shifting slightly in the breeze.
Further in, the odor grew more pungent, practically clinging to the air.
Just as I considered turning back early, a noise ripped through the silence.
A sound so distorted it was hard to believe it came from a living creature.
It was low-pitched, drawn out, almost like several voices melding into a single, agonized howl.
I froze for a second, scanning the darkness.
My heart hammered.
A second cry echoed from behind me, as if something else was calling out.
in response. The layering made it impossible to determine distance or direction. It was like the whole
forest throbbed with these eerie sounds. Fear jolted through me. I'd never encountered animals like this in the
preserve. Coyotes have their distinct yips, and owls have hoots, but nothing I knew matched that alien
cacophony. Normally I'd power through the full loop. We're not supposed to leave until we're certain
nobody's still on the trail, but my instincts were screaming that this was bigger than a normal wildlife
risk. Another roar burst through the air, closer this time, vibrating in my chest. My legs started
moving before I even realized it. I turned around and headed back the way I came, shining my headlamp
left and right to make sure I wasn't about to run into anything. Leaves crackled behind me at an
alarming pace, like something was mimicking my speed. It's hard to keep calm when every step you take
is matched by another set of footsteps. The path twisted in a serpentine pattern, forcing me to slow at
corners. Each time, I felt completely exposed. My breath came in ragged gasps, and sweat dripped down
my temples even though the evening was chilly. Eventually, I spotted a faint glow from the small
lantern near the trailhead. I pushed myself to move faster.
My ankles wobbled on the uneven ground a few times, but adrenaline forced me onward.
The bizarre chorus still echoed, shifting in tone until it felt almost metallic.
I could sense something pacing me from the shadows, hidden just beyond the beam of my headlamp.
When I reached the trailhead at last, I was breathing hard, scanning the forest behind me.
Only then did I realize how quiet it had become.
Whatever was chasing me had gone silent, or maybe it was just waiting.
My hands trembled as I texted my supervisor, saying the sweep was done, leaving out the details.
I wasn't ready to explain what had happened.
Clambering into my car, I locked the doors and stared at the black silhouettes of the trees.
They stood there, unresponsive, revealing nothing.
Even with the engine running, my nerves felt shot.
I can handle animals, but I've never confronted anything like that.
Part of me wanted to turn around, go back in, and prove I wasn't just being parent.
paranoid. Another part insisted that was a terrible idea. I managed to drive to the lodge and give
a half-hearted report. Nobody asked many questions. They were just relieved I'd done the sweep.
But in the back of my mind, I kept picturing those twisting shapes, hearing those blended cries.
Something was out there, something I couldn't classify, and the worst part was knowing I'd probably
have to head back into the trails again soon. The thought clung to me the rest of the night,
like a warning I couldn't ignore.
I started noticing everything that shouldn't be there.
Strange tracks in the mud,
ominous scratch marks on the fence near the lodge,
and a lingering odor nobody could explain.
My colleagues wrote it off as scavengers,
or maybe just my imagination.
But I was done brushing it aside.
Something was definitely lurking among these old trails,
and I was determined to figure out what.
I rummaged through my grandparents' old trunk at home,
where I keep the protective charms my family swears by.
I picked one I hadn't worn in years,
a small carved symbol that always struck me as both comforting and menacing.
It felt right for what I was up against.
After all, the strange sightings weren't letting up,
and I was convinced that the preserve held some presents
not found in any field guide.
That night, I decided to return to the deepest part of the trail network alone.
Maybe it was a mistake,
but I needed answers. My flashlight was upgraded with fresh batteries, and I stowed a flare gun in my
backpack just in case. Most people would say that was overkill, but I'd experienced enough to know better.
The moment I stepped onto the path, the forest greeted me with a suffocating stillness. Each step sank
into damp leaves, as if the ground itself was trying to pull me in. Close to a clearing, the foul stench
appeared again, stronger this time, clinging to my nostrils and triggering a wave of nausea.
My pulse thudded against my eardrums. Keeping the flashlight beam steady, I scanned the trees.
A flash of movement flitted between thick trunks. It was so tall and unnaturally lean,
disappearing before I could focus. Unearthly howls rose in the distance, more jarring than
before, like a chorus of distorted voices echoing through a massive tunnel. With each new
call, I felt cornered, and my mind reeled at the thought of multiple creatures roaming out there.
Branches rustled overhead despite no wind. Dim yellowish reflections, like eyes, winked in and out
beyond the reach of my light. One was directly to my left, another behind me, and a third deeper
in the darkness. My breath turned ragged. I fumbled for the flare gun, half thinking I might
scare them off with a blinding flash. A loud snap erupted from a few yards away.
and I accidentally fired the flare.
Crimson light seared the night,
revealing shapes crouched within the gloom.
Their limbs bent in ways that made my skin crawl.
The stench grew overpowering.
Instinct took over.
I sprinted down the path,
feeling brush snagging my clothes
and leaving scratches on my arms.
The echoes of those howls followed me,
accompanied by thrashing movements
that never seemed far enough behind.
I stumbled more than once,
struggling to keep my balance on the uneven trail,
but the surge of fear propelled me forward.
When I finally broke free into a small open area near the main trailhead,
I whirled around, expecting to see them closing in.
The forest had gone eerily still again.
My flashlight trembled in my grasp,
casting shaky beams on bare ground and twisted tree roots.
No sign of those silhouettes.
Yet the odor lingered,
as if the air itself had absorbed it.
I made it back to the parking lot in record time,
slammed my gear into my car,
and dropped into the driver's seat,
trying to catch my breath.
For a moment, I sat there in total disbelief,
replaying the scene in my mind.
Although I managed to escape,
I realized I'd just confirmed my worst suspicions.
There was more than one of those things,
and they wanted me off their territory.
After returning,
I considered warning,
the rest of the staff, but fear and pride clashed in my mind. Who would believe me? And yet,
the truth pressed down on me. Ignoring it was no longer an option. I might not have discovered
what these entities truly are, or how far their domain stretches, but one fact burned itself
into my thoughts. The preserve belongs to them once the sun goes down, and I doubt they're
leaving any time soon. I remember the sun beating down on our station wagon as we bumped along
the winding dirt road. My grandfather, Marshall, was at the wheel, determined to find some
perfect spot for the picnic he'd been talking about all week. My grandmother, Lucille,
sat stiffly in the passenger seat, pretending to be calm. In the back, I was crammed between
my two aunts, Sherry and Marcia, who were bickering about who was hogging the most space.
Mom was trying to referee, but her voice was nearly drowned out by the rumble of gravel
under the tires. Marshall finally spotted a clearing and pulled over. I was thrilled to escape the
cramped car, but it didn't take long for my eagerness to turn sour. The air itself seemed oddly stagnant,
too still, like the woods were keeping a secret. Normally I would have been running around
collecting wildflowers or climbing on old stumps, but something tugged at me to stay close to everyone
else. We started unloading the trunk. Lucille spread a blanket on a patch of grass, while mom fussed over a
basket of sandwiches. Marshall, who never explained himself, announced he was going to look for
something out past the tree line. The rest of us huddled in the clearing, trying not to wonder
why he'd stalk off without another word. My aunts usually loved exploring, but this time,
they stayed put, fiddling with the cups and plates like they were afraid to wander too far.
As I helped lay out the plates, Sherry nudged me, eyes wide.
She jerked her chin toward a mound of dirt that looked freshly tossed.
It sat just outside the ring of sunlight, partly in the shade of an old oak.
Stones were half buried on top, making it look like a little grave, too big for a rabbit or a stray raccoon.
My stomach felt heavy.
I glanced at Lucille, hoping for reassurance, but she avoided my gaze.
she told us very firmly to leave that mound alone.
The shake in her voice made it clear she didn't have a good explanation.
Sherry and Marcia tried to shrug it off, saying we'd seen weird things in the forest before,
but I knew they were scared.
The chatter we usually had on outings had vanished.
Even Mom was uncharacteristically quiet.
Lucille busied herself laying out napkins,
though her hands trembled whenever she thought nobody was looking,
hoping to distract ourselves.
We set out the rest of the food.
For a minute, it felt almost normal again,
like we could still turn this day around.
But as we settled down, Marcia stiffened.
She pointed toward a thick branch overhead.
A rope hung from it, a loop tied at the end,
gently rocking in the breeze that had finally stirred.
We all froze.
I tried to tell myself it was some weird hunting setup,
maybe a leftover snare or something.
But a slow dread inched through me as I realized
this wasn't the kind of thing people just leave behind. Lucille glanced at it, face drained of
color and mumbled about, nothing to worry about, but it was obvious she wasn't convinced. All of us just
sat there, rigid and uneasy, scanning the trees, waiting for Marshall to come back, and wishing
we hadn't driven so far from home. The quiet started to feel suffocating. Each little
crunch of leaves in the distance made us tense. The picnic we'd planned so happily was devolving
into a silent watch over that mound and that rope. With every passing moment, I became more
certain that something was deeply wrong, and we were stuck in the middle of it, waiting for a man
who never showed fear to return from somewhere deeper in the woods. I remember all of us
huddling together after noticing that rope. We were on edge, debating if we should pack up
and leave or wait for Marshall to come back. Nobody wanted to say it out loud, but we all had
the same unspoken question. What if something was
really wrong. Lucille kept whispering,
It's just an old rope, that's all. But it felt more like she was trying to convince herself.
Aunt Sherry and Marcia stayed close by mom, glancing around as if the forest itself might lash out.
Even the breeze rustling through the leaves felt off. Every flutter of motion had me scanning
the edges of the clearing, wondering if I'd see a figure behind a tree or some shadow darting away.
Suddenly, a low rhythmic thud came from deep in the woods.
It was so faint at first that I wondered if I'd imagined it.
Then it grew more distinct.
Three sharp beats.
Then a pause.
Three more.
A pause.
Over and over.
Mom's face tightened.
Nobody spoke.
The beats rattled me more than any crashing noise could have.
It felt deliberate, like someone, or several people, wanted to send a message.
Marcia dared to say,
Maybe it's just hunters,
but Sherry cut her off, shaking her head.
We all knew this didn't sound like any hunting ritual we'd heard about.
The drum-like pulsing kept going,
and the tension around us climbed.
Lucille knelt and tried to gather the cups and left over food,
like maybe if we tidied up, the odd chanting would vanish.
The clink of plastic felt absurdly loud against the hushed clearing.
Then the voices joined in.
It was a strange hum, layered in a way that made it impossible to tell how many people were out there.
Each echo merged with the drumbeats until it felt like the air was vibrating.
I felt it in my chest, like a pulse that wouldn't quit.
Lucille shot me a look.
Her eyes were wide, and she opened her mouth as if to say something, but stayed silent instead.
No one wanted to admit we might be surrounded.
With Marshall gone, we were stuck.
Leaving him behind wasn't an option.
But staying in that clearing felt more dangerous by the second.
The rhythmic chanting crept closer, swelling and volume.
It wasn't random noise.
It had a pattern, almost like a ceremony.
A few times I thought I glimpsed movement among the trees,
but whenever I tried to focus it was gone, replaced by shifting shadows.
Sherry clutched my arm and pointed to the mound.
Nothing had changed about it, yet somehow it seemed more sinister,
like it was connected to that drumbeat.
I kept imagining something, or someone, buried there.
The chanting reverberated in my ears.
My own breathing felt shallow.
I didn't want to show how spooked I was, but it was too strong a feeling to hide.
We bunched together on the picnic blanket, hardly aware of the food we'd scattered around earlier.
The only thing anyone cared about was spotting Marshall's return.
The weight was excruciating.
I glanced at Mom.
She attempted to steady her breathing, though her hands.
hand trembled on the basket's handle. Lucille scanned the tree line, her fingers curled into fists at
her sides. The voices rose again, this time deeper, more urgent. The three beats of the drum
hammered away, punctuated by those guttural chants. The forest seemed to close in, a wall of thick
trunks and branches that trapped us. I kept wishing we'd never left home, or that we'd settled
on a different patch of woods, anywhere else. The strain on my nerves was overwhelming.
and I knew everyone else felt it too.
Then Marshall burst into view, practically tearing through the undergrowth.
He yelled at the top of his lungs, eyes wild and complexion pale.
For a split second, none of us moved.
We were so stunned to see him look that distraught.
Lucille jolted into action first, grabbing whatever she could.
Mom hustled the rest of us to our feet, and we bolted for the car.
All of us spurred on by the fear in Marshall's voice.
I kept glancing over my shoulder as we ran.
The chanting seemed impossibly loud,
echoing between the trees and pounding in my ears.
Although I couldn't see anyone out there,
the drumbeats and voices gave the impression
we were being watched from all sides.
If we'd stayed, I'm not sure we'd have made it out.
By the time we scrambled into the car,
I was so unnerved that I could barely focus on shutting the door behind me.
Marshall slammed the driver's door,
started the engine and tore away.
As we lurched forward, I peeked out the back window.
The clearing vanished behind swaying branches,
but the noise still followed us,
lingering in the distance like an evil echo.
Whatever was out there, we had no desire to face it again.
Marshall's foot slammed on the gas,
and we jolted forward so fast that I nearly pitched into the back of the front seat.
None of us said a word.
Everyone stared at him,
trying to understand what had shaken him up so badly.
He gripped the wheel with knuckles turning white,
eyes flicking to the rearview mirror like he expected something,
or someone, to burst out onto the dirt road behind us.
I caught a glimpse of Lucille, my grandmother, trembling.
Her usual calm was gone, replaced by raw, visible fear.
Sherry and Marcia sat on either side of me,
heads whipping back to check if we were being followed.
Mom was curled up front, pressing a trembling hand to her mouth.
The chanting and drumming might have faded in the distance, but it felt like it was still pounding
in my ears. The road was bumpy and riddled with potholes. Every jerk of the car sent our
leftover picnic stuff rattling around in the trunk. Part of me expected the engine to stall or a tire to
blow, leaving us stranded. But Marshall just kept going, weaving around branches and debris, as though
he'd driven this path a million times before. Every so often he'd glance over at Lucille, who looked like she was
bracing for an impact that never came. After what felt like an hour, though it might have only
been minutes, we finally reached the main road. The forest thinned out, replaced by sprawling fields.
I'd never felt such relief seeing open sky. The silence in the car was thick. None of us wanted to
break it by asking questions we knew he wouldn't answer. And yet a thousand questions swirled
in my mind, like what he'd witnessed out there, whether he saw the source of the chanting,
and why he looked so spooked. Once we got home, Marshall threw the car into park and marched
inside. Lucille and Mom began unloading whatever they could, but everything was such a mess that we
barely knew where to start. There were smashed sandwiches, soaked blankets and plastic cups
covered in dirt. My aunts hovered in the driveway, exchanging uneasy looks. The warmth of the sun
didn't help. We were all chilled in our own way. I headed inside, following the dull thud of
Marshall's boots down the hallway. He was in the kitchen, leaning against the counter, staring at the
floor. I asked him if he was okay, voice shaking despite my best efforts to sound calm. He looked at me
with a stare that almost stopped my breath, then snapped. Don't ever ask me about this again.
It was like a door slamming shut. Mom and Lucille came in behind me, both of them looking just as
stunned. None of us tried to get any more words out of him. We knew by now that once he drew a line,
there was no crossing it. In the days that followed, we tiptoed around him, hoping maybe he'd open up
on his own. He never did. I remember lying in bed that night, barely sleeping, replaying the day's
events. The drumbeats echoed in my head. Every time I closed my eyes, I pictured the rope hanging from
that gnarled branch. I tried telling myself it was just a bad dream, but the image wouldn't leave
me. Mom mentioned the mound a few times, wondering if there was something buried or if it was some
bizarre prank, but no one had a real answer. A hush fell over our house, thick with the weight of
Marshall's unspoken terror. As the weeks passed, it became clear no one was going to the police.
Marshall wouldn't have tolerated it, and none of us could even articulate what we'd report.
some chanting in the woods, a mound that looked too big to be an animal, and a rope swaying in the breeze.
It all sounded unreal the moment you tried putting it into words.
So we let it fester.
The rest of the family eventually filed it away under weird things that happened,
but I never managed to lock it away so easily.
To this day, the entire ordeal lingers in my mind,
especially the image of Marshall, unshakable, stone-faced Marshall,
running for his life through the trees.
Whenever I think back,
it's impossible not to wonder
what he saw in that forest.
Whatever it was,
he carried that fear to the end of his days.
And if he never slept peacefully after that outing,
I can't say I'd be surprised.
I still catch myself listening for drumbeats sometimes,
half expecting that dark chanting
to roll over the horizon and find me again.
We started out just before sunrise,
backpack stuffed,
and shoulders already aching from all the gear we'd crammed in.
Stepping onto the trail at Redwood Gap,
I felt a twist of excitement and unease.
The path hugged a steep hillside,
the ground cold and damp beneath my boots.
Devin walked up front, whistling a tune off-key,
and Chris brought up the rear,
constantly fiddling with the straps on his pack.
I took the middle spot, my senses sharper than usual.
The trees overhead formed a canopy so thick
that even the early light struggled to reach us.
Each breath tasted like wet leaves and morning fog.
I kept craning my neck,
trying to pick out any sign of wildlife or other hikers,
but the place felt deserted.
Not silent, though.
Somewhere in the distance, water flowed,
and every so often a branch snapped,
echoing across the valley.
We made good progress for the first few miles,
passing stunted shrubs and weaving through narrow switchbacks.
At one point, I nearly lost my footing on loose gravel, and Devin had to yank me upright.
He laughed, cracking a joke about me needing better balance.
I gave him a half-hearted grin, but I couldn't help scanning the tree line,
waiting for some unknown presence to reveal itself.
By midday, the sun pierced through in patches, lighting up sections of the trail.
We paused on a rocky overlook to catch our breath,
and I stared down into a valley filled with evergreens.
Everything looked peaceful from up there.
Chris said something about wanting to eat lunch,
but Devin insisted on pushing another hour before breaking.
We'd heard that Lake Vesper, our target for the night,
wasn't too far away, and he wanted a longer rest at camp.
The last stretch toward the lake turned into a slog.
My shoulders ached, sweat stuck to every inch of my skin,
and the trail took on this claustrophobic feeling.
The trees pressed in, and the air seemed heavier.
Chris tried to lighten the mood by telling dumb jokes about some local legend he'd read online,
stuff about hermits who lived off the land.
Devin rolled his eyes, but I found myself looking over my shoulder more often.
When we finally reached Lake Vesper, the sight was mesmerizing.
Crystal clear water lapped at a pebble-strewn shore, tall rocks framing it like giant sentries.
We dropped our packs and collapsed onto the nearest boulders, relief washing over us.
Devin started setting up the tents while Chris gathered fallen branches for the campfire.
I looked out at the lake, noticing how still it was, like a sheet of glass reflecting the sky.
After we'd settled in, we lit a small fire. The crackling flames offered a reassuring light in the growing darkness.
We passed around a canteen, sharing swigs of water that felt unbelievably refreshing, and for a moment we relaxed.
The world beyond our camp dissolved into black shadows.
and the occasional rustle of branches made me tense.
Chris and Devin laughed at me for jumping at the slightest sound,
but I knew I wasn't just being paranoid.
I busied myself with reorganizing gear,
anything to keep my hands occupied.
Eventually, we all huddled around the fire,
exchanging stories of past trips,
bragging about who carried the heaviest pack,
and guessing how tough the next day's terrain might be.
The crackle of the flames and the rhythm of Devin's teasing banter
almost lulled me into a false sense of comfort.
Almost.
It was that first night in the wilderness.
Our guard down, our minds eager for rest,
when a subtle awareness began to creep in.
Something felt off.
I couldn't name it.
Maybe it was the way the wind died abruptly,
leaving the night thick with a hush.
Maybe it was the way the trees blocked out the moon,
creating walls of darkness beyond the glow of the fire.
Regardless, a prickling, unlawed.
unease settled over me as we finally crawled into our tents. And so began our journey,
a supposed five-day trek that felt like a calling one moment and a dire warning the next.
With Redwood Gap now behind us, we prepared to face the challenges and the strange suspicions
looming ahead. I woke up to the sound of Devon unzipping his tent, groaning softly about
sore legs and a stiff back. My own shoulders felt like someone had kicked them all night.
and Chris looked like he hadn't slept much either.
None of us admitted it, but the night's eerie quiet had put us on edge.
We ate a quick breakfast, oatmeal that tasted like cardboard, and tore down camp, eager to move on.
The trail led us deeper into the wilderness.
The trees and brush pressed in from both sides, making the path feel almost claustrophobic.
Every once in a while, the wind would stir the branches overhead, creating this low whisper that faded too quickly.
We trudged through the morning in near silence,
stepping over gnarled roots and skirting around muddy sections of trail.
After a few miles, we reached a small sign pointing toward mossy fork.
Devon had read about mossy fork online,
supposedly a wide, shallow stream, perfect for refilling canteens,
but none of us were prepared for just how densely overgrown the area was.
Thick moss blanketed every trunk and rock, adding a soggy hush to the place.
We paused by the water, took a small.
off our packs and filtered enough to last us until we got to our next camp. That's when I noticed
footprints on the damp bank, spaced wide and deep, like someone heavy had been pacing there.
Chris shrugged, saying it was probably an old hikers footprints. Devin and I weren't so sure. The
edges looked fresh. Still, we had miles to cover, so we pressed on. By mid-afternoon,
we broke out into a sunlit clearing near Lake Camilla. It felt like still.
stumbling onto an oasis after hours of gloom.
The lakes sparkled, framed by rough boulders and tall grass.
We decided to call it home for the night, hoping for a more peaceful evening.
We pitched our tents quickly, then took turns washing off the sweat and dirt near the shoreline.
It wasn't exactly a spa bath, but it helped.
Night descended faster than expected, and the air grew cold.
We lit a small fire, cooking freeze-dried meals and joking about a hot.
how good a burger would taste. Devin claimed he kept catching glimpses of movement across the water.
Chris tried shining his flashlight, but we saw nothing except our warped reflections on the surface.
I realized how edgy we all were. Every time a twig snapped or a gust rattled the bushes,
our conversation ground to a halt. Later, as we were dozing in front of the fire,
Devin cleared his throat and pulled out a small plastic pouch. He said he'd brought mushrooms,
for fun. I stared at him, stunned. Chris just grinned like he'd been waiting for this moment.
My gut said it was a terrible idea, but I was outvoted. They insisted we only had enough for a light,
experience, nothing wild. I reluctantly agreed, figuring half a dose wouldn't kill me.
We swallowed them, and at first nothing happened, aside from giggles at our own stupidity.
But after about half an hour, the forest seemed to breathe with us.
Colors sharpened. Shadows grew more defined.
An odd sense of curiosity bubbled up in my chest, like I wanted to wander off and see everything around me in a new light.
I meandered a short distance from the fire, watching the tree branches sway overhead.
Something in the corner of my vision darted behind a trunk.
I froze, calling out to Devin and Chris to see if they were messing with me, but they were still by the fire, laughing about some inside joke.
my eyes strained to adjust but the shape whatever it was slipped deeper into the darkness we chalked it up to our altered state though my skin kept tingling as if someone stood behind me devon insisted we all stay close to camp we eventually crawled into our tents but sleep was out of reach half the time i felt like i could hear movements circling our little campsite twigs crunched leaves rustled chris grunted in frustration shining his flashing his flashing his flashed
out of his tent every ten minutes. By dawn we were exhausted, dreading the next day's climb to Bekwith Pass.
The mushrooms had worn off, but our nerves remained rattled. We packed up in a hurry,
quietly agreeing there was no point in hanging around Lake Camilla any longer. Something about that
night. Those footprints, the unknown figure, sank a lingering anxiety into our bones.
We headed toward Bekwith Pass with heavy steps, each of us lost in our own.
own worried thoughts. The trail started to rise, twisting over rocky ledges and offering occasional
glimpses of steep valleys below. A gust kicked up gravel at one point, nearly blinding me.
Chris cursed under his breath, and Devin kept muttering about how we'd better not see any more
weird shapes in the dark. We had no idea just how unsettling the next night would become.
We woke at dawn, the last of our energy reserves running on fumes. My cat was a little bit of our energy reserves
running on fumes. My calves cramped as soon as I tried to stand, and Devin looked like he'd been
wrestling invisible enemies all night. His eyes were bloodshot, and he gripped his trekking poles with
white knuckles. Chris was muttering to himself, something about how we should have broken this route
into six days instead of five. None of us had it in us to argue. We had 19 miles to cover if we
wanted to reach Cedar Notch trailhead before dark, 19 miles of rocks, switchbacks, and unsteady ground.
I forced some trail mix down, tasting mostly salt and dust, then filled up my water from the last
stream we passed. The climbing wasn't as steep now, but our feet dragged, every step jarring our joints.
Nobody cracked jokes anymore. Even Devon's usual chatter dried up. By midday the sun pounded down
mercilessly. The trees thinned out, leaving us on an exposed ridge. Every time a gust whipped through,
bits of gravel stung our cheeks. My thoughts drifted back to that strange shape I saw near Lake
Camilla and the footprints at Mossy Fork. I kept glancing over my shoulder, half expecting to see
someone trailing behind us with a crazed grin, but the trail snaked on, empty in both directions.
It was well into the evening when we finally spotted a wooden sign that indicated the
Cedar Notch trailhead was near. Relief washed over me. Maybe we'd outrun our paranoia.
We found a small clearing tucked off to the side, far enough from the main path that we felt we'd
get some privacy. The area was flatter than anything else we'd seen all day, so we wasted no time
pitching our tents. Chris gathered what little dry wood he could find, and we scraped together a weak
fire. The flames flickered feebly, but it was enough to cook our last rations. Devin and I
I split a bag of dehydrated chili, bland but warm. Despite our exhaustion, we stayed awake
a while, staring into those flames as if they were our last barrier against whatever might
lurk in the dark. I remember the conversation turning sentimental, something about how we never
have time like this anymore, how life gets too busy, and how much this trip reminded us of why we
became friends. It was a bittersweet moment, all the more precious because deep down, none of us
felt totally safe. Then I heard footsteps. A steady crunch, crunch of someone approaching through dry
underbrush. I tensed, my heart thudding, and motioned for Devin and Chris to stay quiet.
Out of the corner of the firelight, a man limped into view. He looked short and stocky,
wearing a heavy coat that had definitely seen better days. The faint orange glow revealed a sunken
portion on the left side of his jaw, like part of his bone was missing.
His cheek dipped inward, giving his face a lopsided, eerie appearance.
He said something in a warped mumble I couldn't quite catch.
Evening, he repeated, louder this time, and I realized he was asking to share our fire for a moment.
Devin swallowed hard, and Chris didn't say a word.
We had no idea if he was armed or if he'd been following us, but we all instinctively shifted over to make room,
probably more out of fear than hospitality.
He settled in, staring into the flames with cold, dark eyes.
Up close, he smelled like sour sweat and damp earth,
as if he'd been living out in the woods for weeks, maybe months.
After an awkward silence, he started talking about the trail,
asking if we'd come far.
His voice had a low, shaky quality,
like his jaw made it difficult to enunciate.
Chris tried to keep his tone casual.
Yeah, we just finished a five-day route,
heading home tomorrow.
The man nodded slowly, lips curling and a crooked smile.
You got the look of folks who've been out here a while, he said.
Then he asked if we were armed.
The question hung in the air.
Devin cleared his throat.
We have something small, he replied.
He didn't say it was a handgun, but the man seemed to understand anyway.
He leaned forward, gaze flicking between us.
Good, he grunted.
You never know who you'll run into.
That line set my nerves on edge.
Was it a threat or just an observation?
A few beats of tense silence followed, the campfire crackling between us.
That's when he started telling a story, one that paralleled our journey way too closely.
He described three hikers, lost in the hills, making noise at night, poking their noses where they didn't belong.
He mentioned how they whooped and hollered near a lake,
disturbing the peace of the locals.
And I realized he was talking about us.
My pulse pounded as he recounted details only someone spying on us could know,
and almost fall off a ridge, the chatter by the water, our nighttime struggles.
He spat insults at these arrogant city boys who didn't respect the land,
and I felt my stomach not.
Chris looked furious, about to speak up,
but I gave him a slight shake of the head.
The stranger's eyes narrowed like a predator's, and I couldn't shake the sense that we weren't alone.
He went on about how the forest had families, old families, who didn't take kindly to intruders,
and he described how one particular stranger approached the hikers on their final night.
My blood turned icy.
It was him, and here he was practically confessing he'd been following us, possibly not by himself.
Devin tried to stand up, but the stranger stayed put,
a smug look on his battered face.
He ended his story by saying the hikers finally got wise to who really owned these hills.
The unspoken threat made my skin crawl.
Then, with a slow, deliberate motion, he rose to his feet and limped backward,
letting the firelight dance across his disfigured jaw.
Be on your way soon, he told us.
If you know what's good for you, he turned and walked off into the dark.
but I heard more than one set of footsteps fading away,
like someone else was out there, hidden from view.
Neither Chris nor Devon spoke for a long moment.
The night pressed in on us,
and the realization that we'd been shadowed all this time
ripped away any sense of safety we had.
In a flurry of panicked motion, we packed up.
We barely bothered with neatness,
just shoved our tents and gear into our bags.
Chris clutched the handgun, ready to fight.
fire at the slightest movement. I swung my flashlight left and right, half expecting to see a dozen
shapes lurking in the brush. We left that campsite behind, stumbling through the dark, guided by
trembling beams of light. Every so often, I caught a flicker of movement in my peripheral vision,
but I couldn't be sure if it was the wind or some figure stalking us. We must have pushed ourselves
another few miles, bodies aching, teeth chattering in fear, before we felt even remotely comfortable
stopping to breathe. When we finally dropped to the ground, our hands shaking, we looked at one
another in silent understanding. We might have escaped the immediate danger, but the memory of that
stranger and his mocking, knowing gaze would follow us for a long time. Exhaustion crashed over me,
but I couldn't sleep. All I could do was listen, every nerve primed for the slightest snap of a
twig or rustle of leaves, my mind stuck in a loop replaying that stranger's grin and the
eerie certainty that he hadn't been alone. In the morning, if we even made it that long, we'd get
out of these woods. But I suspected that part of me would always stay behind, haunted by the
knowledge that dark corners of the wilderness are occupied by people who fiercely guard their domain,
silently watching every unsuspecting passerby.
