Just Creepy: Scary Stories - Best Scary Stories of January 2025 | Deep Woods, Camping, Middle of Nowhere, Forest
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Okay, so I have no idea what we saw that night.
I've searched everywhere for sightings or even myths around the area where we saw it,
and I've found nothing.
If anyone has any idea what we saw, or if anyone else has seen it, please let me know.
My husband and I think it could be a Wendigo, but I'm not sure.
I haven't heard anyone else say they've seen anything like it in Red River Gorge.
I guess I want help figuring out what we saw and what to do.
After the night I'm about to describe, I think we've had to have.
a few close encounters with it since. My friends and I go camping a lot, and my favorite place
is Red River Gorge, Kentucky. We go there often, and I've been going ever since I was an infant.
I'm 28 now, married with a kid, and I still go. It's the closest place to where I live where
you can see the Milky Way on almost every clear night. It's perfect for stargazing, and I see a
shooting star nearly every time I'm there. When we go without our kid, we'll night hike to a good
lookout point and stargays for hours. Our first experiences night hiking were on trails we knew
well and that were used frequently during the day, ones with log fences and gazebo resting places.
The most used trail is in Natural Bridge State Park and leads up to the Natural Bridge.
It's around two miles uphill, depending on where you start. I've done this trail every
summer of my life and could do it blindfolded. It has wooden steps, carved rock steps,
steps, log handrails, and multiple sitting areas under a roof, plus trash cans.
But after you reach the main trailhead, there are no lights at all. While it is uphill, the
difficulty level is low. As long as you have good shoes and water, you'll be fine. My friends
have done it with me multiple times and are confident with it too. Technically, hiking this trail
at night isn't allowed, but I've never really cared about closing times for the outdoors. When we use
this main trail to hike to the top, we would park in the lot designated for the pool and
Ho Down Island. You walk across the road leading to the pool, and you're at the first trail
marker. You go up gravel for a while, past the Natural Bridge State Park Lodge, and there's
a waterfall and some lights, so it's best to walk quickly and watch out for rangers who might tell
you to leave. Then you cross another road, and there's a small shelter or a rock wall to rest on.
That's where the trail to the top really begins.
The night started off strange.
As soon as we began hiking, the clouds rolled in, and it looked like stargazing might be a bust.
We went anyway, hoping it would clear by the time we got to the top.
At first, we were just dealing with the usual paranoia that comes with night hiking.
It kept us stressed and quiet.
You know you've reached the bottom of the bridge when you see a giant wall of limestone.
At that time, there was a gazebo to the road.
right of this wall, and the trail continued alongside it. We had just come up a fairly steep
part of the trail, so the gazebo was a welcome spot to rest. My husband, my best friend at the time,
and I all sat on the gazebo steps. The bench under the roof was even darker, so we stayed
on the steps, facing down the trail that runs along the limestone wall. Each of us had a bright
LED headlamp and a handheld flashlight. We didn't look at each other much, because the lights
were so bright. We sat in a line like the last supper, and would walk in a line, or staggered to
avoid blinding each other. It was after hours by then. No ski lift rides had gone on for hours,
and the Rangers had already done their final sweep and left right before we got out of the car.
The ski lift takes you to the top, but the workers there do a head count, and only leave after
everything is clear. I'm mentioning this because that's what I was thinking about when, out of nowhere,
A girl with a headlamp started walking down the trail in front of us.
She was wearing a sundress and flip-flops.
This hike is uphill and might be considered easy,
but not in flip-flops, with no water, and at night.
She would have had to hike up and then back down alone
without being seen by any ranger.
Her light was bright, and when she reached the spot
where the trail curves from in front of the gazebo
down to where we came from, she stopped.
She stood there straight, like an anatomical.
drawing facing us. We had six LED lights aimed at her face, but she didn't turn away or
seemed bothered at all. I said, hello. She replied very slowly, pausing between words, something like,
hello, how are you? I said something like, good, how are you? And she took even longer pauses
before saying, oh, I'm fine. Then she just stood there, hands at her sides, stare,
Her light was so bright I had to shield my eyes.
Then she turned and walked slowly down the trail we had just come up.
She reached a bend, stayed there for a minute, and then the light vanished.
We waited a while before continuing.
I kept saying how weird that was, but everyone else brushed it off as me being jumpy.
The fact remained, though, no one came after her.
She'd done this alone, at night, and wasn't caught by any ranger.
We got up and started again to the top.
It felt like it took way longer than usual, but we eventually made it.
There are stone steps called Fat Man's Squeeze that take you to the top of the bridge,
and you can walk across it.
While up there, we heard twigs snapping, almost alternating from left to right.
We lay down, trying to stargaze, but the clouds had only gotten thicker.
It was miserably hot.
Every so often, we heard voices, and my husband kept checking,
but he never saw anyone.
We saw a quick flash of light with no person attached to it,
and we heard a bird call,
that sounded more like a human imitating a bird,
very rhythmic, not natural.
I was convinced we weren't alone and hadn't been alone for a while,
but I'm the most easily spooked of the group.
I asked if we could leave,
and the others immediately agreed,
which scared me because it meant they were also afraid.
We headed back down the way we came,
and it felt like it took forever.
We were moving quickly, but it seemed like we weren't making any progress. I even said,
This feels much longer, and they agreed. I kept shining my flashlight behind me. My husband
kept looking off to the sides, and my friend mostly pointed hers forward. I felt like
something was watching us. I couldn't tell which footsteps were ours, and which weren't.
If I heard a noise, I'd shine my light that way, but never saw anything. My husband's
My husband said he kept catching eyes in his flashlight.
It could have been a raccoon or something else, but he worried it might be a bear or a big dog.
He couldn't keep his light on them long enough to identify whatever it was.
Eventually we were on a flatter section of the trail.
A log fence, or handrail, was on our right, and we were walking in a row close to it.
Suddenly my husband stopped and said, What's that, in more of an alarmed tone?
I pointed my headlamp but didn't see anything at first.
Then my husband's lights caught a shape, and so did mine, and then my friends.
All six lights illuminated a light gray creature.
It was crouched, kneeling on its right leg, and began turning toward us.
It slowly stood up.
My mind was racing.
It looked human, but was way too big, skinny and tall, almost white, but actually a pale gray.
Its skin looked kind of like a dolphin's.
a bit shiny, reflecting our lights. It rose to its full height. Its head was long, and its eyes were
set like a human's, forward-facing, not on the sides. But I couldn't make out any other features,
just big, empty pits where eyes should be. It looked right at us and our lights. The way it
stood was intimidating, almost like a snake rearing up to show its strength. It had been crouching
and then slowly faced us, as if challenging us. Its arms hung low.
and its hands looked long, possibly reaching near its knees.
I'd guess it stood around nine feet tall.
It had no hair at all, and its head was large.
I couldn't process what I was seeing and froze.
Then I felt my husband hitting my back, yelling, run, run, run.
I realized we had to get out of there,
and I saw it pivot to the right,
heading back up the trail so it could circle around the barrier and get behind us.
We sprinted the rest of the way down, knowing it was faster than us.
and could catch up once it was past the fence.
None of us spoke.
It felt like if we did, we'd get caught.
We just ran, struggling with the steep sections.
It never felt like we were out of its sight.
By the time we reached the first gravel part of the trail,
we heard something crashing through the forest to one side.
We ran until we got to our car,
then drove off as fast as we could.
As soon as we hit the main road,
the sky was clear, and the stars were visible.
When it looked at us, I knew it was smarter and faster than we were. If we hadn't seen it first,
it could have easily taken one of us. I think it only hesitated because all of us saw it at the same
time, and we stayed together. Once we got back to where we were staying, we each took out our
phones and wrote down what we'd seen. We didn't talk about it until after we compared our notes,
and they all matched. Without a doubt, we had all seen something real. I pulled up to my
my parents' old place just as the sun dipped behind the orchard. The house looked smaller than I remembered,
like time had pressed in on its walls, warping the roof and giving the windows a tired stare.
A crooked fence half hid what used to be my childhood playground, the tangled grove of fruit
trees that felt more like a wild forest. On the drive over, I tried telling myself it was all kid
stuff, the strange shapes I used to imagine darting between the trunks, the nervous rush in my veins
whenever I stepped on to the property. But creeping back onto this land, memories came flooding in
whether I wanted them or not. I stood in the driveway, bag in hand, trying to keep my breathing steady.
The orchard was silent. No rustling leaves, no distant snapping of twigs, just a weird hush,
like the place was sizing me up. I'd barely set foot inside when my sister, Nicole, nearly tackled me
with a hug. She got here before me, which made sense. She was always the early bird of the family.
She forced a smile, though her eyes gave her away. She was on edge too, probably remembering those
same unexplainable things we never talked about once we moved away. Mom offered to make us both
tea, which was basically her polite way of giving Nicole and me space to catch up privately.
The house smelled like old floorboards and dust, stirring that sense of being a kid again.
freaking out over every bump in the night.
Later, when Mom and Dad turned in early,
Nicole and I ended up in the living room.
Yellow light from an antique lamp
cast long shadows across the walls.
She asked me what I'd seen so far.
I shrugged and pretended everything was fine.
The orchard was the last thing I wanted to discuss,
but somehow we circled right back to it.
We both kept glancing out the window,
half expecting something to loom near the fence.
Eventually, we went upstairs to check out our old rooms.
Mine felt frozen in time.
Same faded posters, same creaky bed, same curtains fluttering in the draft.
I dropped my suitcase on the floor and looked out the window at the thick cluster of fruit trees.
Rain clouds had rolled in, so the orchard was just a dark blur.
Instinct told me not to stare too long, but I couldn't help it.
My chest felt tight, like I'd swallowed a stone.
something about that place always set me on edge.
When I finally peeled myself from the window,
I heard Nicole in the hallway.
She asked if I remembered how we used to sneak out there during the afternoons,
leaving behind random trinkets, books, leftovers,
even shiny rocks we thought looked cool.
We used to laugh about forest friends.
I kind of froze.
It wasn't so funny now,
not after the things that happened in that orchard.
Our parents always changed.
chalked it up to overactive imaginations. But deep down, we knew we'd seen too much to dismiss.
I gestured for Nicole to come into my room, and we shut the door quietly. She looked nervous,
chewing her lip the way she does when she's stressed. I asked her if she truly remembered seeing
those, shapes, and she nodded before I even finished the question. She explained she still
got nightmares from time to time, always involving tall silhouettes lurking behind warped trees.
Hearing it in her voice made my stomach clench.
We'd never actually admitted this stuff to each other, not this directly.
It was late, so we decided to call it a night, but sleep didn't come easy.
I kept thinking I might hear something outside or notice a figure gliding past the window.
My mind spun with possibilities.
Maybe I'd step out in the morning and discover footprints in the wet grass.
Or perhaps something else entirely was waiting, hidden just beyond my line of sight.
I tried to stay rational, tell you.
telling myself it was just the heaviness of the past playing tricks, but that unease kept
gnawing at me, and I couldn't relax. Before I crawled under the sheets, I took one last
glance at the orchard. The clouds had cleared a bit, and the moonlight gave the trees a ghostly
shine. I didn't see anything move, but I sure as hell felt watched. It was as if that entire
stretch of land had been anticipating my return. I shut the curtains, flipped off the light, and
slipped into bed, heart thudding hard enough to keep me awake.
Somewhere beyond these walls, the orchard loomed, silent, brooding, and too full of
memories neither Nicole nor I wanted to face again.
I woke up feeling like I'd barely slept at all, but morning light was filtering through the
curtains.
After the restless night, I felt a weird determination settle over me.
I needed to face that orchard.
The plan was simple.
Nicole and I would walk past the broken fence, scope out the tree,
in broad daylight and put our minds at ease. Except deep down, I suspected, we'd only confirm our
worst fears. Nicole was already up, pacing by the back door with a flashlight in her hand.
It wasn't even that dark out, but we both clung to the idea of extra light as if it might shield us.
We didn't talk much. Maybe we didn't want to voice what we were really thinking,
that we were about to step onto ground we should have left alone. I nudged the old
fence, testing its stability. Rotten planks gave under my hand, so we crawled through a gap in the
boards instead. The orchard greeted us with this damp, overgrown stillness. Weed sprouted
near the trunks and gnarled branches twisted overhead, blocking out patches of sun.
The deeper we went, the quieter everything seemed, like the air itself had thickened. After a few
minutes, Nicole called my name softly. She pointed to the ground where a strange print marked the
soil. It looked like a large hand with elongated fingers, pressed into the mud. And there were more,
staggered as if two or three creatures had passed through. Some impressions were bigger,
others thinner, but all of them had that unsettling, almost human shape. My stomach churned at how
fresh they looked. No leaves, no debris filled them in yet. We kept going, stepping carefully
between the gnarled roots. Broken branches littered the ground, some arranged in. Some arranged
in odd patterns, like a scatter of bones around a sacrifice site. The hair on my arms
prickled when Nicole led me to a half-collapsed lean-to, hidden behind a tangle of branches. At first,
I thought maybe homeless folks had taken shelter here, until I caught the smell. It was a mix of
wet animal fur and something rotting. Around the lean-to lay a scattering of smaller bones,
maybe raccoon or possum, lined up in an almost ceremonial pattern. I tried to steady my breathing
as we walked farther in.
The orchard felt massive, more like a twisted forest than the neat rose I remembered from
childhood.
My ears started picking up on faint rustlings, though I couldn't pinpoint where they came from.
Nicole raised the flashlight, even though the afternoon sun was still filtering through the leaves.
That pale beam swept across tree trunks marred by scratches, long, deliberate streaks that spiraled
around the bark.
It reminded me of some kind of cryptic writing.
Then, out of the corner of my eye, I saw something move.
I froze. A tall, gangly figure stepped out from behind a trunk, just enough for me to make out its
silhouette. It had blotchy patches of hair on its shoulders, and its arms bent in an unnatural
angle against its chest. The face was hidden by shadow, but I could sense it watching.
I felt an overwhelming tension ripple through me, as if my body was warning me not to get
any closer. Suddenly, it fled, only, fled, is too tame a word for how it moved. It darted away
in a burst of blurred speed, limbs contorting as though it wasn't fully bound by joints or bones.
Leaves and twigs crunched in its wake. Nicole cursed under her breath, and I stumbled
backward, eyes scanning the orchard for any sign of it. That's when she pointed out another
shape lurking a few yards deeper, a broader figure standing completely still. It's eyes. It's
eyes, dull and whitish, stared our way like a pair of dead orbs. We both stood there,
hearts pounding, not sure whether to run or speak or simply stand our ground. In the end,
our instincts chose for us. We backed away, one step at a time, refusing to look away from those
glowing eyes. The creature stayed rooted, as if it was letting us leave on our own. Once we turned
and began speeding up, the orchard broke into a frenzy of noise, branches snapping, leaves rustling.
couldn't tell if it was behind us or somewhere off to the side. All I knew was that we had to get out.
By the time we reached the yard, my chest felt tight, and Nicole's face had lost all color.
We slammed the back door, locked it, and stared at each other, breaths ragged. I realized I still
had the flashlight death gripped in my hand. She leaned against the wall, trying to calm down,
and finally looked at me with an expression that said it all. This wasn't just our imagination,
those prints that leaned to, those things, they were very real. We dragged ourselves to the living
room where the sun shining through the windows felt almost surreal after what we'd just seen.
Neither of us spoke for a good few minutes. Then Nicole whispered that she couldn't shake the feeling
they knew we were coming, like we'd walked into their domain uninvited. And I had to agree.
It was as though the orchard had been anticipating our return, waiting to reveal how it had
changed, and to show us that we weren't the only ones prowling those twisted rows of trees.
That evening, Nicole and I huddled in the living room, the only light coming from a single
lamp that cast jittery shadows on the walls. Outside the orchard loomed, all dark trunks and
twisted branches. A storm was brewing. Gusts rattled the windows, making us flinch at every sudden
noise. Neither of us wanted to head upstairs, so we made a silent pact to stay up and keep an eye on the
backyard. Part of me hated the idea, like if I looked hard enough, I might invite something to
stare back, but ignoring it felt worse. Midnight approached, and the wind kicked up, whipping
leaves around the yard. In the faint glow of the porch light, I noticed a shape dart between the trees.
I nudged Nicole, and she killed the lamp, plunging us into near darkness.
through the window i could make out what seemed to be one of those long-limbed figures head tilted as if listening for us i found myself gripping the window-sill with tense fingers
we stood there for what felt like forever until the figure drifted out of sight behind the orchard line nicole whispered that we needed to follow it that maybe this was a chance to learn something i didn't like it but a weird sense of determination forced my hand
We grabbed our flashlights, pulled on jackets, and slipped out the back door.
The cold night air practically stung my face.
I inched forward, scanning the darkness.
A glimpse of milky white eyes flickered behind a gnarled trunk, then vanished.
The orchard was drawing us in.
We crossed the fence again, stepping onto the path where the ground turned spongy from all the recent rain.
My pulse hammered as we move deeper, the flashlight beams picking up nothing
but branches and scattered debris.
Soon, though, we found ourselves in a small clearing.
Moonlight seeped through a gap in the canopy,
illuminating an arrangement of sticks and bones piled around an old tree stump.
The sight made my stomach churn, clumps of fur, rotting fruit,
and bits of cloth were woven into a strange pattern.
It almost looked like a shrine, or maybe a warning.
A rustle broke the tense silence.
something tall crouched behind a cluster of shrubs at the clearing's edge.
At first, it watched us with that blank lifeless stare.
Then, it pulled back, like it was waiting for our next move.
Nicole gently set an apple near the stump, mimicking the offerings we left as children.
Her hand shook, but she managed to keep steady long enough to place it down.
Another shape crept through the trees, a creature with broader shoulders, half hidden in the gloom.
its presence felt more assertive, like it was the one in charge.
Everything happened in a blur.
There was a snapping noise from the shadows,
and we caught sight of a third figure,
smaller but disturbingly quick, crawling on all fours.
Nicole and I backed away.
A surge of terror roiled in my chest,
and my flashlight trembled,
the beam dancing across twisted roots.
We heard heavy breathing, ours, maybe theirs,
and the orchard seemed charged with a restless,
energy. We bolted. Branches tore at my jacket, tripping me up as Nicole and I sprinted toward the
fence, adrenaline pounding in our ears. Behind us, we caught fleeting movements in the darkness.
Part of me thought they were chasing us, but when we reached the fence line, everything went
eerily calm, like the orchard exhaled once we crossed out of its domain. We stumbled into the
house, locked the door, and collapsed onto the living room floor. My heart hammered so hard,
I felt dizzy. Nicole looked just as rattled, tears threatening at the corners of her eyes.
We sat there, both of us struggling to process that clearing, those silent watching figures,
and the feeling that we'd intruded on something ancient and territorial.
By morning, neither of us could pretend this was just an overblown childhood fantasy anymore.
We packed our bags, quietly deciding to leave Redwood Falls.
A weight of dread clung to me, though, like we were only post-uponelieu.
postponing the inevitable. Those things in the orchard had seen us, recognized us, and somehow,
I couldn't shake the idea that we'd been allowed to leave, this time. I'd been burying myself
in work for weeks, churning through endless shifts and coming home with barely any time to eat
or crash. My head felt like it was in a vice from all the stress, so the idea of a midnight
walk on the wooded trail behind my neighborhood started sounding pretty good. It used to be my favorite
place to clear my thoughts, a straightforward path, usually quiet except for the hum of crickets and
the soft crackle of leaves underfoot. I stepped onto the trail, taking in the surprisingly still air.
I expected the usual nighttime chorus, but everything felt muted. My flashlight beam cut through
the darkness in a narrow arc, revealing only the next few feet of dirt and tangled roots.
The hush unsettled me, so I kept moving, hoping the rhythmic motion of walking would calm my nerves.
With each step, I tried to convince myself I was just being jumpy after a long shift.
About a mile into the forest, a noise caught my attention.
A rustle in the leaves to my left, like someone stepping off trail.
My first thought was that it might be another late-night walker,
but whoever it was didn't say anything or respond when I paused and took a quick look around.
I shouted a casual greeting, hoping to ease the tension.
Nothing.
The silence weighed heavier after that.
I flicked off my flashlight standing dead still in the dark, straining to pick up any sign of movement.
Not a single branch swayed.
The night felt thick, as if the air itself was holding back a secret.
I took a breath and turned the light back on, deciding to head back.
My steps were faster this time.
Only a minute later there was a distinct crunch of foliage behind me.
Instead of sounding like a person strolling, it reminded me of something moving in a way humans don't.
I whipped around, shining my flashlight at the trees, but spotted nothing besides a few crooked
trunks and the dull glow of their bark.
I barked a warning, telling whoever might be out there to knock it off and that I wasn't
in the mood for games.
No voice answered.
There was just a long stretch of wading, like the woods were testing how long I'd stand my
ground.
I caught the flash of something pale between the trees, just for a split second, but it stood
out starkly in the blackness. My throat tightened in a wave of panic I'd never quite experienced before.
Whatever I glimpsed was hairless, a shape that seemed all arms and legs, like it was built to be
on all fours. It moved in an almost fluid way, vanishing before I could focus on its exact form.
I felt pinned in place by an awful sense that it was still near. Suddenly, a burst of motion stirred
behind me again, and I spun, fists clenched around my flash-lash.
light. This time, a laugh, I can only call it that, reverberated through the trees. The sound was
unlike any normal laughter, higher pitched with an unnatural rasp that made every instinct in me
screamed to run. I did. I sprinted until I hit the familiar edge of the trail, stumbling onto
the streetlights. At my door I fumbled with my keys, half expecting to find that thing right
behind me, wearing that distorted grin I'd imagined in the darkness. Once I got inside,
my entire body was shaking. I locked every door and window, peering out into the shadows, as if it could
slip under the porch light at any second. Later, I told the cops I'd run into a suspicious person.
I couldn't bring myself to describe the tall, pale figure on all fours, or the spine-tingling laugh.
Saying it out loud felt absurd, like admitting I'd crossed into some twisted,
nightmare. But the sight of that form in my flashlight's beam refused to leave my mind,
and in my gut I knew I'd have to go back. If I didn't, that nameless, mocking presence would
haunt me forever. I spent the next day stuck in a restless fog. My nerves were still
raw from that freakish encounter, and even though I tried explaining it to my closest friends
over text, I could tell they were skeptical, like they figured I was overtired or half delirited,
But I wasn't about to let it go.
I invited three of them over, pretty much pleading for backup.
I told them every detail, right down to the bizarre laugh that echoed through the darkness.
They kept exchanging glances, torn between curiosity and thinking I'd completely lost it.
After a solid hour of me pacing around my living room and rehashing the events,
they finally agreed to come with me.
Two of them brought pistols, one slung a shotgun over his shoulder,
shoulder, and I triple-checked the batteries for our flashlights. Jokes flowed while we prepped.
It was their way of dealing with the tension. My own anxiety didn't budge, though. I kept flashing
back to that hairless shape I'd seen vanish behind the trees. A big part of me wondered if we'd be
safe. Another part knew it wouldn't let me rest unless I had backup. We set off at around 9.30 p.m.,
stepping onto the same trail that had haunted my dreams the past few nights. The initial stretch,
felt like any typical night hike. A slight breeze, leaves overhead forming ghostly patterns
in our flashlight beams. My friends kept up the banter, aiming to lighten the mood.
I tried to join in, but my mind kept drifting to the possibility of seeing that thing again,
this time with others around to confirm I wasn't imagining it. Deeper along the path, we slowed our
pace, the trees pressed in closer and the ground turned uneven. An unsettling hush replaced our earlier
chatter. Even my buddy's confident jokes fizzled out. We all felt it, like the forest itself was
sizing us up. I started scanning every bit of shadow, gripping my flashlight so hard my hand
hurt. Out of nowhere, heavy footfalls broke the silence. They seemed distant, but headed in our
direction, slow and deliberate at first. We aimed our flashlight beams toward the noise,
but caught only glimpses of movement in the undergrowth. I shouted a warning, announcing
we were armed, that we'd fire if necessary. No response. Instead, those steps morphed into
a frenzied scramble, sounding more like an animal charging than a person walking. One friend
triggered his flashlight and pointed his pistol, voice shaking as he threatened whoever might
be lurking out there. The sound stopped. Everything fell silent for a stretched moment.
Then we caught a flash of something pale sliding behind a wide trunk, too fast for comfort.
Another friend swore under his breath, while the shotgun-wielder pulled his weapon forward.
The tension in the air felt thick enough to slice.
Suddenly, a shrill cry rang out.
Part scream, part laughter.
That chilling echo bounced through the branches.
The friend with the shotgun fired, his blast lighting up the trees in a harsh burst.
Splinters erupted from a trunk, but all we saw was a twisted silhouette streak to the side,
vanishing into deeper darkness.
My pulse thudded in my ears as the reality hit.
This was real.
We were out here with something that shouldn't exist,
and it didn't seem afraid of our firepower.
Everyone started talking at once.
Another round went off into the spot we'd last seen movement,
but only the echo of gunfire answered.
The rest of the forest swallowed our flashlight beams.
When the smoke cleared, the hush returned,
broken only by our ragged breathing.
The sudden quiet may have been worse.
than the chaos. I could almost sense an intelligence lurking out there, waiting for our guard to drop.
We regrouped, rifles and pistols still raised, and began a slow retreat back to the trailhead.
Nobody tried to act brave anymore. We stuck close, scanning all angles, hearts pounding.
Nothing else came charging at us, but I got the impression we were being followed the whole way.
Once we neared the opening of the path, we practically jog to my car,
arms still ready in case that thing decided to pounce.
At home, we collapsed around the kitchen table.
Nobody had any appetite.
One buddy said he'd caught a clearer glimpse,
a long-limbed figure hugging the ground,
its eyes non-existent or hidden in shadow.
Another kept insisting he'd nailed it with the shotgun,
but no trace of blood or any sign of injury showed up afterward.
By the end of the night, our skepticism was gone.
We could hardly speak.
Each of us looked like we'd seen a nightmare step off the page and walk among us.
Lying in bed hours later, I stared at my ceiling, questions raging in my brain.
We'd gone in expecting to corner some weirdo messing around in the dark, maybe find a half-baked prankster.
Instead, we ended up with a glimpse of something we couldn't easily define,
and the worst part was knowing we'd barely scratch the surface.
I spent the next few days in a weird limbo.
Between haunting memories and frantic web searches, I tried piecing together any clue that might explain what lurked in those woods.
Every free moment, I'd be scrolling through forums where people wrote about unexplained sightings,
reading posts from folks who claimed they stumbled across pale creatures or heard voices that didn't belong to anything human.
Some sounded far-fetched, but a handful lined up disturbingly well with what my friends and I witnessed.
All of us had agreed to try again.
We were dead set on capturing solid evidence this time,
photos, video, or at least something beyond shaky memories and bullet casings.
I met up with the crew at my place,
the same living room where we'd gathered in panic after our last run-in.
Instead of going in blind, we laid out a plan,
bring more robust cameras, a few motion sensors,
and better lights with extended range.
We even rigged up a cheap night vision set up that one friend had thrown together
using old security camera parts.
It looked clunky, but we were desperate enough to give it a shot.
The evening we picked was grim, which fit our mood perfectly.
Clouds choked out the moonlight, and the temperature dropped low enough to make the air feel
heavy against my skin.
We joked half-heartedly about forming a paranormal SWAT team, but the tension was impossible
to ignore.
Nobody wanted to say it, but we were all thinking, what if this time it doesn't back off?
We parked near the trailhead.
The headlights swept across the looming trees as we climbed out.
Instead of cracking jokes, we got right to work unloading gear.
A hush settled over us, like an unwelcome tension that wouldn't quit.
I could tell my friends were on edge just from the way they moved, quick, efficient, no wasted gestures.
We entered the woods at a slow pace.
I kept glancing over my shoulder, half expecting to see that pale shape lurking behind us
right from the start, but for a while we only heard the crunch of leaves beneath our boots.
Eventually the dense canopy swallowed what little light we had,
forcing us to rely on our flashlights and the faint glow from the night vision rig.
Every so often, a branch would snap, and we'd all stop in unison scanning the darkness.
We settled near the spot where we'd confronted the creature before.
The plan was to set up a camera pointing into the deeper brush while the rest of us crouched in a
semicircle, ready to flip on the biggest spotlight if we sensed any movement.
One friend positioned motion sensors around the perimeter,
carefully masking them behind fallen logs or thick bushes.
Another was in charge of the night vision feed,
squinting at the small monitor we'd rigged up in a backpack.
Time seemed to crawl.
We whispered back and forth,
trying to stay alert without giving ourselves away.
For long stretches, the only sound was our own breathing.
Then something shifted to our left.
The faint noise of leaves rustling, too rhythmic to be the breeze.
We glanced in that direction, barely able to see beyond a few feet.
My heart thudded like a war drum.
The sensors didn't go off, but the night vision guy muttered that he saw a flicker of movement on his monitor.
We aimed the light in that direction, but the undergrowth was so thick it felt like we were illuminating nothing.
A minute crawled by, then another.
Just as we were starting to think it might have been an animal, a loud scrape echoed from our right,
the complete opposite side.
It was the kind of sound you'd hear if something dragged across the forest floor.
We all whipped around.
My friend with the shotgun dropped into a firing stance, muzzle aiming into the shadows.
I panned my flashlight over the area, but it reflected off something pale for barely an instant.
The next second, a sudden cackle tore through the silence, as if mocking our attempt at vigilance.
My nerves had felt raw before, but that sound magnified everything.
The friend with the shotgun took the shot without hesitation.
The flash lit up a grotesque outline, elongated limbs, skin that looked ghostly white under the bright light.
It recoiled, letting out a guttural shriek that rattled the branches overhead.
Another friend fired as well, and I saw a flurry of movement as whatever it was lunged sideways out of view.
The cameras captured flickers of it darting behind a mass of it.
tangled brush before the night vision feed cut to static. We heard the thrashing of branches as it
sped deeper into the woods. One friend swung the spotlight that way, revealing nothing but
swaying leaves. For a moment, I wondered if we'd actually heard it or just made it furious.
There was no real time to think, though. A mocking laugh echoed again, this time more distant.
It sounded bizarrely giddy, like it was toying with us. We debated chasing it.
Part of us wanted to finish what we started, but a colder, more rational side pointed out that we were outmatched in its territory.
We'd lost our night vision feed, and stumbling around in the dark while it crept through the trees seemed like a death wish.
I shouted for everyone to regroup.
The plan went out the window the moment we realized it had vanished beyond our reach.
We scooped up the equipment we could grab quickly.
Some of the motion sensors stayed behind, and made our way back, picking a direct path rather than following the trail's
winding route. As we pushed through undergrowth, our arms and faces got scratched up,
but we didn't care. We wanted out of those trees. Once we burst onto the main path, we hustled
toward the car. The whole time, I was positive that thing might come barreling at us from the side.
I kept my flashlight aimed behind us, half expecting to see those contorted limbs close enough to
touch. But we reached the safety of the open lot without another attack. When we finally slam
the car doors shut, the relief was almost dizzying. We drove back to my place, none of us speaking
until we were inside with the lights on. I felt like I was stuck in a nightmare that refused to end.
We checked the cameras, found brief shots of that lanky shape twisting away from the second gunshot,
then a flash of white as it tore the night vision lens from its perch. Most of the recordings after that
were static or wild swings as the cameras hit the ground. We talked in low voices about what we'd do
next. Another visit felt like tempting fate, but leaving it alone meant living with a terrifying
unknown at our doorstep. For all our preparations, we barely managed a few seconds of footage
and more questions than answers. I felt hollow. That night I sat alone in my living room after everyone
headed home. My windows were locked, the curtains drawn, the memory of that pale form burned
into my mind. We might have proof, but we also had proof of how unprepared we really were.
And if it was still out there, laughing and unhurt, what would stop it from following us back or
worse? Part of me wanted to pretend none of this ever happened, to bury it and return to a normal
routine. Another part knew there was no going back. We'd looked behind a curtain we never should
have touched, and now it felt like the forest itself was awake, waiting. I was barely old
enough to speak when the strangest memory stamped itself on my mind. Imagine this, a wide sky
with no horizon, like someone had wiped away land and sea, leaving only clouds drifting in every direction.
There I stood, if that's even the right word for floating weightlessly, with nothing beneath my feet.
Right beside me was an older man who seemed both familiar and alien at once. His face was kind,
his eyes carrying a wisdom i couldn't possibly understand as a toddler he wore a robe the color of worn linen and he asked are you prepared the question didn't frighten me in fact it felt more like a gentle invitation something that promised a journey i was meant to take
a flicker of images flashed before me moments from what i'd later recognize as my own life then everything rushed downward the only way i can describe it is as though i tumbled from that place above the place above the way i can describe it is as though i tumbled from that place above the place above the world of the way i could describe it as though i tumbled from that place above the place above the life
the clouds right into my birth. It's absurd, right? A kid that young shouldn't have any concept of
birth, much less of meeting an indigenous man on a plain of thin air. But that memory never went away.
And as I grew older, I tried to wave it off like a dream or an overactive fantasy, yet it clung to
my subconscious with relentless persistence. My parents never talked much about our ancestry.
Dad mentioned once that we had a bit of indigenous blood in the family line, centuries old,
but no one kept track of specifics.
We lived in coastal Maine for a while when I was very small, cold winters, fierce winds.
My grandparents would recount local stories about the harsh realities of living in such climates.
Nothing supernatural, mostly pioneer struggles and survival tales.
They all seem normal enough for our region, but something always caught my attention,
whenever talk turned to lonely woods or hidden corners of the shoreline where eerie things supposedly happened.
As I got older, I fell into a typical kid routine, cartoons in the morning, elementary school in the afternoon, homework at night.
Life seemed boringly ordinary, except for these faint glimpses I'd catch sometimes at night.
Whenever the clouds block the moonlight, I'd sense a silhouette near my bedroom window, like a presence
standing just beyond the glass. It never lasted more than a second or two, so I'd bury my head
under the blankets and blame it on my wild imagination. That logic stopped comforting me around the time
I turned seven. One evening, while lying awake, a mental image seeped into my consciousness,
a face so thin it looked more skeleton than human. The skin stretched.
taught as if starved, the lips drawn back to reveal teeth that almost glowed white. An expression twisted
into a grin too wide, too unnatural. My nerves instantly went haywire. I couldn't grasp
where this face came from or why it popped into my head. I never saw a real corpse at that age,
so conjuring such a graphic sight out of nowhere made no sense. I tried to explain it to mom the
next morning. She gave me a sympathetic smile and told me I probably,
had a bad dream. Though I wanted to believe her, that explanation felt hollow. This mental image
wasn't confined to sleep. It lingered during broad daylight, flashing in my thoughts if I let my
mind wander. At recess, while other kids laughed on the swings, I'd stand off to the side
imagining that awful grin hovering right behind me. More than once, I spun around,
expecting to find a real creature there. Mom's concern grew whenever she noticed.
I refused to sleep with my curtains open.
I'd practically beg her to shut them tight,
or better yet, let me keep a small lamp on through the night.
She asked if I was afraid of burglars or big dogs outside,
anything tangible she could fix.
I couldn't tell her the truth in a way that didn't sound insane.
I keep picturing a leathery, half-dead face that stares through the window.
That's not exactly an easy topic for a kid to bring up,
so I stayed quiet.
The only person I tiptoed around the subject with was Grandpa,
during one of our rare, quiet talks.
He leaned back in his creaking chair,
reminiscing about old folk tales.
He spoke of travelers who wandered too far in the snow
and never came back the same,
of strange shapes glimpsed at dusk among the spruce trees.
He joked that these were just local ghost stories meant to scare children,
but he never completely dismissed them, either.
He'd shrug and say,
Some folks claimed they've seen things we can't explain.
Then he'd pat my shoulder, like that was all the advice he could offer.
All this built into a constant edge in my life.
By day, I was just another kid dealing with spelling tests
and trading snack packs with classmates.
By night, my thoughts circled back to that haunting face.
Skin pulled so tight, eyes too far back in their sockets,
grin that didn't belong on anything alive.
Clouds became my silent enemies.
Whenever the sky darkened, my stomach twisted in anticipation.
I'd force myself to blink,
hoping each time I opened my eyes that maybe this terror would vanish.
It didn't vanish.
In fact, it settled in deeper,
as if waiting for the right moment to reveal its full, monstrous self.
And that's what had me on edge,
the nagging hunch that I was seeing only a fragment of something bigger,
a presence that was content to lurk in the corners of my mind
until the day it decided to show itself completely. So there I was, living a double life in a
sense. One side was your average childhood, fighting with my younger sister over the TV remote,
rolling my eyes when mom asked me to clean my room, looking forward to an ice cream cone after school.
The other side was an ever-looming suspicion that I was being watched by something beyond my
understanding, something that had latched on to me from my earliest breath. The memory of
that robed man in the sky tied oddly into these nightmarish visions, but I couldn't connect the dots.
All I knew was that this fear refused to leave, and each year that went by, it felt a little more real.
I told myself it was nothing. I pushed it down, but some shadows aren't satisfied with being ignored,
and I was starting to suspect that no amount of daylight could truly protect me from the thing waiting just behind the clouds.
I was ten when I stumbled across a library book that changed everything.
It was an old volume in the back corner of the local branch, pages yellowed from age and handling.
The book chronicled an ill-fated Arctic expedition.
Men trapped in endless ice.
Some vanishing without explanation, others found decades later preserved in the unforgiving cold.
Their photographs were printed in grainy black and white, but the images still came off the page with startling clarity.
I flipped through, a picture of a recovered body made me freeze. Its features, drawn skin,
slightly parted lips, vacant eyes, mirrored the twisted face that had plagued my dreams for years.
It was as if those nightmares had been plucked out of my head and captured by a camera
long before I was born. The coincidence might have been chalked up to a child's imagination
meshing with grim pictures, except my nights got worse from that point on. Whenever clouds
passed over the moon, I sensed something just beyond the bedroom door. The hallway, usually
harmless, turned into a stretch of shadows. Ordinary sounds, the settling of the house, the refrigerator
humming, suddenly felt sinister, as though something in the darkness was drawing closer. Sleep didn't
come easily. When it did, my dreams were restless, teeming with images of tall silhouettes
backlit by muted light. A few years later in my teens, I met Melissa. She was vibrant,
full of laughter, yet she also came with a subtle intensity that drew me in. She admitted once,
quietly, that she'd picked up on a shadow around me the first week we hung out, though she didn't
spell out what that meant. Curious, I pressed her, and little by little, she revealed she
often had odd intuitions about people. Sometimes she knew who was feeling low before they
a word, or she'd sense a presence in an empty house, only to discover a tragic backstory tied
to the place. Normally, I would have called it nonsense, but she kept reading me too accurately
to ignore. As we grew closer, I worked up the courage to describe the face I'd been seeing.
Melissa didn't laugh or roll her eyes. She listened carefully, her expression grim. She confessed
that on more than one occasion, while standing in my kitchen or passing the open window in my living
room, she had felt watched by something. Neither of us knew what to call it, only that it radiated
a hostility that made the air feel heavier. My curiosity turned into obsession. I began reading
about various legends, especially those involving winter spirits, or creatures born of starvation
and cold. That's when I learned about something referred to as Ghanuska in a few sources. A
A being that was said to appear as a gaunt, ice-kissed monstrosity,
devouring anyone foolhardy enough to wander alone in a frigid forest.
Every article I found described it as eternally hungry,
with skin pulled tight over its bones,
a near-perfect match for what I've been envisioning since childhood.
Accounts varied, but they all shared a common thread,
a relentless predator that thrives on human fear and desperation.
Sleep became even more elusive.
Melissa noticed dark circles under my eyes and worried that I was barely eating.
I'd lie awake into the early hours, convinced the temperature dropped whenever my thoughts drifted to that hideous figure.
At times I felt almost feverish, sweating under thick blankets, only to feel a sudden chill that made my stomach twist.
My faith as a Methodist had always taught me to question unearthly claims, so I attempted to reason it away.
Yet my nerves weren't fooled. The more I researched,
the more I sensed an unseen force pressing closer.
One detail about these winter spirits struck me harder than the rest,
the belief that speaking or thinking of them too deeply might feed their presence.
I wasn't sure I believed it,
but a creeping suspicion told me that this dark obsession of mine was giving it room to grow.
I spent long nights hovering over my computer,
jumping at every minor noise,
searching for any explanation or antidote to the fear that now filled my waking hour.
Every piece of folklore I uncovered seemed to strengthen the parallels between my experiences and these old, unsettling tales.
Melissa tried to support me, even offered to talk to a friend of hers, who supposedly had experience dealing with malevolent entities.
I hesitated, torn between my reluctance to dive into rituals I didn't comprehend, and the dread that ignoring this thing would only make it bolder.
By the time winter rolled around, I felt constantly on edge.
scanning corners and windows as if expecting a glimpse of that long-limbed shape.
Logic told me to back off, but curiosity and desperation had me pressing forward.
The more I dug, the heavier the air felt around me, like the weight of an ancient presence
was settling in for the long haul.
And deep down, I wondered if I'd passed the point of no return, if shining a light on this
horror had only made it that much more real in my life.
I wish I could say moving to Northern Alabama offered a clean slate
that the milder winters would smother any remnants of that bleak presence.
But it didn't take long for me to realize I'd brought the darkness with me
like some unwelcome stow away.
At first, Melissa and I focused on settling into our new place,
unpacking boxes, and exploring the friendly little town.
Days were usually full of sunshine and friendly neighbors dropping by with homemade pies.
Nights, though, came with a different kind of hush, and I couldn't shake the sense that something out there watched each step we took.
When the first cold snap hit in mid-December, the house felt different.
Drafty, maybe, or simply uneasy.
I'd walk down the hallway and catch faint scratching noises that could have been tree branches against the siding,
except there were no branches near that section of wall.
Melissa asked if I thought raccoons were nesting somewhere, but neither of us really.
believed it. Truth was, any time I heard that sound, a wave of dread tensed every muscle.
It felt as if a visitor paced just outside the house, searching for a way in. A couple of days
later, the power flickered during a gray afternoon. Melissa had gone to work, leaving me alone,
so I grabbed a flashlight and rummaged through drawers looking for fresh batteries.
While doing that, I became aware of how silent everything had gone, like the entire house was
braced for something. Then, through the kitchen window, I noticed the silhouette of a figure in the yard.
It stood perfectly still, taller than any person I'd ever seen in real life. The moment I tried to focus
on it, the power surged back to life, and all the lights blinked on, flooding the window with glare.
By the time I managed to squint into the yard, the shape was gone. My heart hammered so hard it felt
audible in my ears. Melissa came home that evening, and I finally blurted out what had happened.
She didn't doubt me, which felt both comforting and terrifying. There was no maybe you imagined it
from her. Instead, she said, I think we have to try something about this. She'd already reached out
to one of her longtime friends, an amateur practitioner who claimed expertise in warding off
malevolent entities. My gut twisted at the idea of turning to rituals I knew
nothing about, but I couldn't deny that common sense had gotten me nowhere. We arranged to meet
her friend Sam at our place. As soon as Sam stepped inside, she frowned like she'd walked into a
frigid draft. She carried a small bag that clanked with who knew what. I hovered awkwardly in the
corner, watching her set candles on our coffee table and sprinkle a powdery mix in the corners of the
living room. She explained it was a blend of sage, salt, and other herbs meant to purify the space.
I wasn't sure what I expected, but the ritual she performed was calm, almost methodical.
She lit the candles, murmured prayers, or incantations under her breath,
then walked from room to room, drawing symbols on scraps of paper and tucking them above door frames.
The walls felt like they were vibrating with tension, as if the house held its breath while she worked.
At one point, Sam paused in the hallway and whispered,
It's in here somewhere, waiting.
She never raised her voice, but the finality of her tone made my skin crawl.
When she finished, she gathered her materials and tried to reassure us.
I've set up protections, she said.
But you two need to stay strong in your conviction that it can't rule your life.
If you keep dwelling on it, you're inviting it to stick around.
She left soon after, closing the door behind her with a solemn nod.
That night, Melissa and I said,
down in the living room, both of us exhausted, but hopeful that the measures Sam took might help.
We tried distracting ourselves with a movie, something lighthearted to break the tension.
We were about halfway in, when the lights flickered again. I swallowed hard and forced myself to
stay calm. I told myself it was just the local power grid acting up. Then I caught a glimpse of
something in the reflection of the TV screen, towering, gaunt, hovering behind us. I
spun, expecting to find the room empty, and sure enough, there was nothing there. But the moment
left me shaken, and Melissa looked equally unnerved. Sleep was no better. I drift off only to wake
from a half-dream of wind howling against the house, that tall shape lurking outside the window.
At one point I nearly convinced myself I heard slow, deliberate footsteps on the porch. By morning,
I was drained, and Melissa suggested a short walk outside to clear our hands.
heads. We bundled up against the chill and wandered a path near the woods behind our property.
The skeletal branches overhead filtered the pale winter sun, creating patches of shadow that made
me uneasy. Every now and then, I'd swear I saw motion in my peripheral vision, but looking
directly in that direction revealed only empty woods. Religious guilt gnawed at me. My Methodist
upbringing had taught me to be wary of dwelling on spirits or unseen forces. Yet here I
was tiptoeing through what felt like a spiritual battleground. I actually visited a nearby church that
week, sitting in a pew to pray for clarity. The pastor, a well-meaning older gentleman, offered comforting
words but didn't have much practical advice. Evil feeds on our fear, he said. Remain strong.
Trust in your faith. Good advice may be, but not exactly a step-by-step manual for banishing a winter
wraith. Days passed, and the tension at home seemed to lessen, at least marginally, as though
Sam's rituals had thrown up a wall around us. Melissa noticed fewer cold spots and fewer moments of
inexplicable dread. I started to hope that maybe we'd turned a corner, but I'd known from
the start this wouldn't resolve so easily. The real test came one cloudy evening, with the
temperature dropping fast and the wind picking up outside. A loud thud rattled the back door.
My heart leaped into overdrive. Melissa and I glanced at each other, then ran to see what caused it.
We found nothing but swirling leaves on the porch. My nerves were still jangled by the time I
tried to return to the living room, and that's when every hair on my arms rose.
Standing outside the window was a shape so large it filled the frame. Shoulders jutted at
impossible angles, skin that appeared stretched and weathered, like it had been exposed to
centuries of freezing temperatures. For a heartbeat, I couldn't move. It didn't lunge, didn't roar,
just stared through the glass with that hideous grin carved across its face. My breath came
in ragged gasps, but I managed to break eye contact and reach for the nearest lamp.
The second I flicked it on, the window glare hid whatever stood out there.
By the time Melissa dashed in and we flung the curtains open, there was only the empty yard,
the darkness beyond the porch light unbroken.
That's when it dawned on me.
I was out of easy options.
This thing, whether a literal ancient spirit or a haunting manifestation of something deeper,
had followed me from childhood, ignoring time and distance.
I was left with a choice between diving into a lore and tradition I barely understood
or continuing to suffer these attacks of terror, possibly letting them consume me.
Melissa tried to calm me down, reminding me that Sam's protections had helped once,
and could be reinforced, maybe with additional guidance from others who understood these rituals
more thoroughly.
I stared out into the night, imagining that towering figure still standing in the shadows.
Even if I took the next steps, contacted tribal elders, tried more protective rights,
I wasn't sure how that clashed with my faith or my sense of reality.
But at this point, I realized I'd do almost anything to make this thing go away.
The final image burned in my mind was that grin against the window,
like it was silently daring me to act, like it was certain I'd never escape its reach.
I don't know exactly which path I'll choose yet, but ignoring it isn't an option.
If there's one thing I've learned, it's that darkness that,
like this doesn't just fade. It waits, hungry and patient, for the next cold wind, or the next
moment of doubt to slip back in. And if I stand by, doing nothing, it may eventually devour everything
I hold dear. So now, I'm standing at a threshold, uncertain but determined to confront
whatever this is, because letting it rule my life any longer simply isn't an option. It was the fall of
2009, and I was 16 years old at the time. I lived in the central part of North Carolina.
Nowadays, the cities are loaded with things to do for the Halloween season, but back then,
the best form of entertainment I could come up with was visiting the devil's tramping ground
with a few friends. The devil's tramping ground is a local legend. It sits right outside
Seiler City in North Carolina, about an hour away from where I lived, and I had just gotten
my license, so why not?
For those unfamiliar with the locale or its legend, the devil's tramping ground is a perfectly circular patch of dead soil in the middle of the woods.
Despite the surrounding greenery, nothing grows in that circle.
Legend says that if you drop or leave anything in the circle, it's moved, or disappears, by morning,
as the devil supposedly comes here late at night to plot his evil doings against humanity, pacing in a circle as he thinks.
That's the gist, but feel free to research it.
It's a decent read.
Siler City is a Sticks in Barnstown with long barren roads that practically scream,
Don't Stop Until You Get the Hell Out of Here.
It was on one of those roads that I began to feel uneasy.
Rural areas always have that heavy twilight zone energy,
and the road we were on, conveniently named Devil's Tramping Ground Ardy,
was entirely unlit.
The only illumination for the cracked asphalt was the fading yellow headlights of my 2002 Mercury Cougar.
and the faint glow of a crescent moon.
In those dim lights, we started to see graffiti splattered on the road leading up to the place.
Creepy warnings I didn't expect, and never realized the impact of, until I saw them.
In white paint the road was marked with crude messages, the one I remember most said,
The devil lives here, and a huge white cross stood in front of an opening in the forest.
I parked on the side of the road.
The grounds itself wasn't as creepy as I'd expected.
It wasn't very deep into the woods.
In fact, the clearing was visible from the road.
It wasn't as menacing as I'd imagined.
Maybe it was the empty beer cans and red solo cups scattered around.
Obviously people partied there.
Or maybe it was the jokes my friends and I started cracking almost immediately.
But at around 2 a.m., we wanted to catch Lucifer at his hour.
I felt less on edge than I had on the road.
My flashlight beam seemed to vanish if I aimed it upward, so I kept it pointed at the soil,
genuinely more interested in finding something paranormal than my friends were.
There were four of us total.
After a while, two of my friends went back to the car.
It was cold, and not much was happening.
I stayed behind with one friend.
I had brought a Ziploc bag, along with a pocket Bible, a rosary in my pocket, just in case,
and a stuffed rabbit given to me by one of my best friends.
Before leaving, I scooped some of the dead soil into the Ziploc,
curious to see if studying it later might provide a clue.
Alien radiation, climate change, sulfur.
Maybe the devil was just busy that night.
Between joking and complaining about the cold,
we suddenly heard someone walking in the depths of the woods.
This wasn't a vague noise.
This was a definite, heavy step.
The sound came from behind the brush, among the trees,
and it was unashamed of being heard.
that was the first time I noticed there were no crickets or any other sounds at all.
It was just us and these footsteps.
I was even more reluctant to lift my small flashlight,
which was tucked under my arm and pointed at my soil sample.
My eyes had already adjusted to the dark, so we stood there,
and I could make out the shape of something in the woods.
It was dark, but I could see it.
Tall but not freakishly tall, human-shaped, walking on two feet.
It would walk, then stop, then walk again, moving in our direction, I think.
We were petrified, not moving or breathing.
I was so afraid I felt numb, though I trembled a little.
We just stared.
Later, we'd talk about how we both wondered if it saw us and how we didn't want to move in case it hadn't.
We'd also talk about the smell, an awful putrid stench of burning feces, rotting eggs, and decaying meat.
I grew up Catholic, hence the Bible and Rosary, and was taught that smell meant the devil was nearby, which only made things worse.
Even now, typing this, I'm trembling a bit.
This thing lingered among the skeletal branches, seemingly toying with us.
I say skeletal because not much greenery was alive at the time.
At some point, I was sure it saw me.
I got that six-sense feeling of being watched, and then an overwhelming despair washed over me.
That's when I realized my friend had been clutching the back of my collar.
I think I was so paralyzed with fear that I felt nothing but numbness.
Wasn't even cold anymore.
But once I felt my friend's hand, I dropped everything in my arms, stood up, and quickly
headed back to the car.
I didn't run outright, but it was a very hurried walk.
I just assumed my friend was right behind me.
To be honest, I didn't think much about it at the time.
I was too ready to leave.
I took off into the trees instead of following the clear path,
heading toward the yellow glow of the headlights.
Although the road was close by, it felt like an agonizingly long distance,
enough for the small branches to scrape and cut my hands, cheeks, and neck.
This whole ordeal couldn't have lasted very long.
When I got back to my car, the keys were already in the ignition.
The other two had turned on the heat, and they asked what had happened.
My friend who stayed behind with me got in the passenger seat,
soon after, and we took off. The two in the car pointed out that our eyes were swollen and bright
red. I think we had been crying without realizing it, or at least it looked that way. In the rearview
mirror, I saw my pupils were abnormally large, and my eyelids were puffy, tender, and red. Maybe it was
just fear combined with the darkness, but it was still unsettling. I realized later I'd left my
Bible, my stuffed rabbit, and my Ziploc bag of dirt in the circle. I thought about going back
the next day when it was light out, but I never did. I still wonder and worry about who might
have my things now. Rock Island is a state park located at the tip of Door County, Wisconsin,
on Lake Michigan. It's a difficult place to get to. To reach the island, you have to take a car
ferry, from Ellison Bay to Washington Island, drive across Washington Island to Jackson Harbor,
then take a pedestrian-only ferry to Rock Island. No vehicles or bikes are allowed on Rock Island.
Even though the island is relatively small, about 975 acres, it has an interesting history.
In the early 1600s, it was inhabited by a tribe of Potawatomi Native Americans, as well as a small
fishing village of European settlers. The two groups did not trust each other and had a few bad
encounters that almost led to violence, but for the most part they lived peacefully together. By the
1640s, the Potawatomi had migrated to other parts of Wisconsin. Shortly after the Potawatomi
left the island, some settlers from the fishing village reported seeing a new group of people there.
They seemed to be more white settlers, but they wore strange clothes and kept to themselves.
No one from the fishing village was ever able to speak with these newcomers,
or even find where they were living.
It was around this time that strange things started happening in the village.
Several animals, possibly pigs or chickens kept by the settlers,
were found slaughtered,
and it seemed their blood had been used to make markings on some of the buildings.
On a different night, a building used for preserving meat burned down.
The villagers believed these acts were done by the new people on the island,
and searched thoroughly, including the wooded inland area, but never found a single person.
These strange occurrences seemed to stop soon after the search, and none of the other newcomers
were ever seen again.
In 1836, the Potawatomi Lighthouse was built on the northern part of the island.
After construction was finished, the lighthouse was inspected, and it was reported that,
the material of which the lighthouse and dwelling are made, are of the best quality,
and that the work is done in a substantive and workman-like manner.
On December 19, 1837, David E. Corbin was appointed the first keeper of the light.
Only three years later, in 1840, despite the apparent quality of the lighthouse,
Corbyn complained that plaster was beginning to fall off,
and some sort of liquid oozed through cracks, leaving the house constantly damp.
Corbin was alone most of the time at the lighthouse,
and some visitors said he would stare at a certain wall,
and sometimes spoke vaguely of other visitors.
In 1845, after eight years of relative solitude,
an inspector visited Corbyn at the lighthouse.
While Corbyn was fulfilling his duties,
the inspector noted he was acting strangely.
The official report says the inspector ordered Corbyn
to take a 25-day leave of absence to find a wife, to live with him.
However, some believe the inspector was startled by Corbyn's mental
state, brought on by years of solitude, and thought it best for him to spend some time away from the
island. In 1852, Corbin reportedly fell ill and died that December in the lighthouse. He was buried in a
small cemetery just south of the lighthouse. The next lighthouse keeper also reported a
surprisingly quick deterioration of the lighthouse. Friends who visited him said he spoke of seeing
strange things in the house at night, but he wouldn't elaborate. In 1858,
After only 22 years of service, the original lighthouse was torn down and a new one was built.
From that point on, lighthouse keepers were required to have an assistant keeper or a family living with them.
No further strange occurrences were noted in the lighthouse logbook,
outside of strong storms and occasional shipwrecks, except on January 20, 1876.
The keeper at the time, named Betts, reported seeing two men attempting to run.
row to the mainland from Washington Island. A terrible storm came up shortly after their departure,
and they never reached their destination. Over three months later, on May 3, 1876, Betts wrote,
The two men who were lost last January have been seen several times, once from Cainey Lighthouse
and once from Jacksonport. The men were apparently frozen stiff and sitting upright in the boat
among a mass of ice. At last account they were still adrift. There is not much hope that they will be
found and buried. By 1900, most of Rock Island's inhabitants left for better fishing areas on Lake
Michigan. In 1910, a successful business owner and inventor, Chester Thorterson,
purchased all of the island except for the land occupied by the lighthouse in the north.
He used the island as a private summer retreat from his business in Chicago. Thorterson is
responsible for the unique and mystifying buildings and structures that are still on the island today.
On the south end, he built a giant stone hall with a boathouse on the lower level.
A stone water tower was built on the east side of the island, and an imposing wooden gate was
constructed on the west end. The great hall was used to store Thorterson's immense book collection.
He had over 11,000 books, and it's rumored he possessed some very rare books on the occult.
Thorterson died of heart failure on January 6th, 1945, though some have speculated he saw something that scared him to death.
I couldn't find any writings from Thorterson that mentioned him experiencing anything strange on the island.
After his death, multiple churches and universities were interested in his book collection,
but he had willed it to the University of Wisconsin-Madison, providing that they purchase it for $300,000, which they did.
Some of this history is hard to find online, but there are a couple of binders in the Great Hall that document much of it.
Thorterson's personal papers are housed in the archives of the State Historical Society of Wisconsin.
All of this history is meant to provide some context for experiences I've had, directly or indirectly, on Rock Island.
In August of 2021, I took my first and last trip there.
After taking two ferry rides, I arrived on the island at about 2 p.m.
I had booked the remote campsite E, a backpacking site a little over a mile from the dock.
I took my time hiking out to the site to enjoy the scenery and took a couple of breaks because of my heavy pack.
I was definitely packed more for camping than for hiking.
I reached my site, set up my tent, got everything situated, and started gathering sticks and driftwood from the beach for a fire.
On my third trip back from the beach, before I returned to my site, I heard a single high-pitched
squeal coming from the forest.
It didn't sound close, but it was such an unusual noise that I stopped in my tracks and waited
a good 30 seconds to see if it would happen again.
It didn't, so I went back to my site and began getting a fire started.
The remote sites on Rock Island are well spaced out.
Sites C, D, and E are grouped together, but there's probably a lot of.
hundred yards between each. There isn't a real trail connecting the three sites directly,
but enough people have walked along the ridge that there's an obvious path. As I was arranging
sticks in my fire ring, something caught my eye. Fairly far away, maybe near Site D or a bit farther,
a person was running in my direction. My first thought was, that's odd, because there isn't really
a proper trail there. Then I assumed something must be wrong and this person needed help.
As they got a bit closer, I thought it might be a woman in loose gray clothes, maybe a hoodie,
but the person was still too far away to see details.
I quickly stood up from my crouching position, and just then, I heard that high-pitched squeal again.
It was behind me, much closer this time.
Startled, I turned around and scanned the trees for a few seconds but didn't see or hear anything.
I turned back around, knowing the runner must be getting close, but now they were gone.
I stood there, scanning the trees but saw no one.
I was confused and froze for a few seconds.
It was very strange, but I reasoned that it was just a fellow camper from site C or D,
maybe running to the pit toilet that was a couple hundred yards west of the sites.
I tried to forget about it, but it bothered me.
I really did not like that squeal, and it gave me a strange feeling.
I forced myself to let it go and started my fire.
I had a quick meal and a couple of a day.
adult beverages, then decided to take a short walk. I hadn't seen site C or D yet, so I thought
I would check them out and see if anyone was camping nearby. Site D was empty. I saw the path that
led from that site to the main trail and pit toilet, which made me less uneasy about the runner.
I figured it was someone from Site C who took a weird path. It still didn't make perfect
sense, since I should have seen them, but it made me feel better. I continued to Site C and saw
there was a tent set up. I didn't want to bother anyone, but I decided to introduce myself as a
neighbor from Site E to see if anyone looked like the person I'd seen running. I walked up,
and there was a couple sitting at the picnic table. Neither looked like the runner. I introduced myself.
They introduced themselves. They were probably in their mid-thirties, very nice, and both seemed
to be quietly drunk. I didn't ask about the runner or the squealing noise, thought it
might be weird, so I just wished them a good night and headed back to my tent. When I got back,
I had a cigar and a few more drinks. It got dark, and it started as a perfect night. The sky was
clear, and the stars were brilliant. I felt better about the day and decided to get some sleep.
It had been a long day, so I fell asleep almost immediately. Around 2.30 a.m., I was woken by a huge
boom of thunder. It started pouring. The wind picked up and the temperature dropped. I love camping
in the rain but not in a lightning storm. A pretty big storm rolled in and I started to worry.
The wind whipped at my tent and the ground shook from thunder and lightning. I felt very exposed out
there in a tent. The storm lasted about an hour before becoming a light, steady drizzle.
I was just starting to fall back asleep when I heard the squeal again. I opened my eyes wide in the
dark and lay there silently. There was another squeal, louder, and it was pretty close. I knew there
were no truly dangerous animals on Rock Island, deer and porcupines, but no bears or wolves. But that
knowledge didn't help. Something about that squeal unsettled me. I call it a squeal, because that's
the best I can describe it. It sounded like a pig squeal, an injured or angry pig. I kept lying there
and then heard footsteps outside my tent.
It was still raining, so the sound was partially masked,
but it definitely sounded like something somewhat large,
an animal or a human, walking around.
I sat up and pulled out a knife, just to feel better.
In my head, I kept telling myself,
It's just an animal.
There's nothing here that can hurt you.
I listened as the footsteps moved away from my tent.
I sat there, still holding the knife,
for maybe ten minutes without hearing anything else.
I started to think,
It's fine. It was just an animal.
You're being silly and you need to sleep.
I was about to lie back down when there was a very loud squeal right outside my tent.
It felt like my heart stopped.
A shiver went down my spine.
My heart started pounding so hard that my entire body pulsed,
and I felt it in my ears.
It took all my courage, but I managed to force out,
get out of here.
I didn't shout, but I tried to sound as stern and threatening as I could.
I heard no more squeals or footsteps that night, but I couldn't sleep.
I sat there for about an hour, then lay down.
Eventually the rain stopped, and I stayed there until the sun came up.
I kept reassuring myself that I was being ridiculous, and it had to be an animal.
It was probably 7 a.m. when I decided I had to step outside my tent.
As soon as I did, I saw that my picnic table had been flipped upside down.
Surprisingly, I felt calm and thought,
Okay, that's enough. I'm leaving the island today.
I checked around and nothing else seemed out of place.
I eventually reasoned that maybe the wind had blown the table over during the storm.
It still seemed odd, given how heavy the table was, and that I didn't hear it flip.
But that explanation made some sense.
I made some cold instant coffee.
had a bite to eat, and started to feel better about everything.
Then I decided to go for a hike.
I admit, I get easily scared when I'm camping alone in the woods.
Maybe that's natural.
But after having coffee and food and seeing the sun,
I realized that nothing I'd seen or heard was outright unexplainable.
Other than losing some sleep, I was still enjoying myself.
The main reason I came to Rock Island was to hike the 7-mile Thorterson's Loop Trail,
which has a lot of interesting sights.
Close to my site is the water tower.
I have no idea how it originally worked
or why it had to be a tower,
but it's an impressive building with a fireplace
that looked like someone had recently used it.
A little farther down the trail was a cemetery
where two sisters and a few others are buried.
It's believed there are more unmarked graves there,
likely from the old fishing village.
The island has three cemeteries,
one by the beach where Chester Thorterson is buried.
one on the eastern part of the island where the two sisters rest,
and one on the northern part where the original lighthouse keeper, David E. Corbin, is buried.
There is also at least one Potawatomi burial area on the island,
though no one knows exactly where it is.
I continued on the trail until I came to a scenic overlook with a bench.
I sat down and drank some water.
I started hearing voices on the trail ahead, though I couldn't see anyone yet.
The trail bent, and the trees were thick.
so I waited to see who would appear.
As the voices got closer,
I realized they weren't speaking English,
but I couldn't place the language.
Both voices were very deep and guttural.
Then, deeper in the woods,
I heard a loud, quick, rumble sound.
Immediately, both of the voices responded with a higher-pitched rumble.
I smiled a bit, thinking maybe they heard whatever it was
and were playfully mocking it.
I stood up, put on my backpack,
and walked in their direction, but I never came across them.
The rest of the hike was fine.
I visited the cemetery where David E. Corbin is buried,
took a self-guided tour of the Potawatomi Lighthouse,
past the wooden gate,
apparently once part of a larger structure,
walked by the Great Hall and the dock,
visited some of the other structures,
and saw Thorterson Cemetery.
Then I finished the loop by returning to my campsite.
It was a pleasant hike, with plenty to see,
and not very difficult, though I was tired.
I walked to sight sea to ask the couple how they'd fared in the storm,
but they had already left.
I was disappointed because I really wanted to ask them
if they'd heard the squealing noise.
The rest of the evening was uneventful.
I built a fire, made some meals, had a cigar and some drinks.
As soon as it got dark, I was ready for bed
after the previous night's lack of sleep.
I got in my tent and fell asleep quickly.
Maybe three hours later, I woke up suddenly, fully alert.
Nothing seemed to have caused me to wake up, but I felt something was wrong.
I sat up, and it's hard to explain, but a feeling of complete dread washed over me.
It was unlike anything I've ever felt.
It felt like there was something in the tent with me, and I could sense it was enraged,
filled with anger and hatred for me.
It felt like something terrible was about to happen, and I was powerless to stop it.
I started shivering uncontrollably.
There was a strong smell of garbage or rotten meat,
growing so intense I thought I might vomit,
but I was too frozen in fear to move.
I had never felt so vulnerable.
My mind seemed to accept that whatever was coming,
even death, would at least be a relief.
Then I blacked out.
I assumed I passed out,
because the next thing I remember is waking up around 8 a.m.
When I woke up, I was lying on top of my sleeping bag,
not in it, and my legs were in an awkward position, my left leg straight, my right leg bent so my
foot was against my left knee. My heart started pounding, but I kept telling myself,
it was just a dream, I'm leaving right now. I packed everything quickly and made my way toward
the dock to catch the first boat off the island. Since the first boat from Washington Island doesn't
arrive until about 10.30 a.m., I had some time to kill near the Great Hall and Dock. I wanted off
the island badly, but felt a bit calmer being out of the woods and seeing other people. I sat on a bench
east of the dock and lit a cigar, just to occupy my mind and keep from thinking about the night before.
After a few minutes I was startled by someone behind me saying,
Hi. I jumped, embarrassed, and the person came around saying,
Sorry, sorry, sorry, I didn't mean to scare you. I saw you smoking and came over to ask if you had a lighter.
I felt dumb and told him I was just tired from not sleeping well.
I handed him my lighter.
He thanked me, lit a cigarette, and gave the lighter back.
We started chatting about normal things.
He said he was from the Madison area, talked about the storms,
and mentioned he was an outdoorsy guy with plans to move to Washington Island.
It was a nice, normal conversation that took my mind off the night I'd had.
He seemed like a decent person.
Then naturally, he asked which sight I'd been.
staying at. I told him Site E for the last two nights. He said he usually books Site E, but I must
have reserved it before him, so he had booked Site D instead. I was surprised because I'd seen
no tent or anything at Site D the two times I passed by. He explained that he comes to the island
a few times a year, and while you have to reserve a site, he actually camps in different areas on the
island. I asked where he camps, and he said he usually camps in the East Cemetery, but all
also likes to camp in the woods south of the lighthouse. He told me he hikes about halfway down
the Fernwood Trail, then heads north into the woods and finds a spot to camp. He said that once he
found the ruins of a small log house in those woods, and he wants to camp inside it someday. At this point,
I started to reconsider him and wanted to change the subject, but then he asked if I had heard the
screeches in the woods. I paused, knowing he meant the squealing I'd heard.
I said yes, and asked if he knew what it was.
He took a second to answer, and I saw his expression change,
like he was deciding whether to share a secret.
With no emotion in his voice, he said matter-of-factly,
A demon lives on this island.
Under other circumstances I would have laughed it off,
but not after my experience.
He must have seen the anxiety and fear on my face
because he let out a quick laugh.
He asked if I'd seen anything that night.
I told him I hadn't,
and he stared at me like he was trying to figure something out.
I felt he knew I had experienced something.
I wanted the conversation to end,
but then he told me he saw something in the cemetery that night.
His face and mood changed like he was going to confide in me.
I really didn't want to ask what he'd seen,
but I knew he wanted me to.
So I asked, my voice shaky.
I could tell he changed his mind about telling me.
He looked at me with empathy and said what he saw was hard to explain,
but if I was already afraid of the screeching,
I shouldn't go near the cemetery.
I didn't respond right away.
Then he said four words, with no context.
Keepers of the flame, I looked at my cigar and saw the ash was long.
I put it out, told him I was going to wait by the dock, and he nodded.
As I walked away, he called, hey, and when I turned around, he just said,
Don't come back here.
I don't know if that was a warning or a friendly suggestion,
but I certainly wasn't planning to return to Rock Island.
When I got home, I looked up Keepers of the Flame in connection with Rock Island.
I found three possible references.
The name Potawatomi can be translated to Keepers of the Flame.
The lighthouse keepers were sometimes called Keepers of the Flame.
And there was also a 19th-century cult said to visit the island,
calling themselves the same.
I know hundreds of people visit Rock Island every year
and have a great time camping, hiking, and exploring Thorterson's buildings.
My humble suggestion is this.
Do not go to Rock Island.
I wake up before sunrise, same as always, and slip on my boots.
There's a strange heaviness in the farmhouse air,
but I chalk it up to early morning groginess and push the feeling aside.
Outside, fog settles over the fields,
blurring the boundary between our pastures and the foothills.
Normally that view calms me, the hush before chores begin.
But today, I can't shake the prickling sense that something is off.
I head toward the barn to check the feed and water troughs.
At first glance, everything looks normal.
The cattle huddled together in the early morning chill,
a light breeze stirring stray pieces of hay around my ankles.
Still, my nerves are on edge.
It's been months since the night.
the first cow disappeared with no explanation. You'd think time would soothe my anxiety,
but the lack of answers only stirs it up more. I remember that awful morning when we searched
every hollow and ridge, hoping to find tracks or any sign of a struggle. Instead, all we discovered
were those flattened circles in the grass, as if something massive had pressed down from above,
and two vehicles, both inexplicably drained of gas, parked right by those eerie patterns.
We told ourselves it had to be some kind of prank or a freak coincidence,
but the memory still makes my teeth clench.
I shake off the thoughts and get back to my chores,
counting heads, checking fence lines, making sure there haven't been any breakouts.
The herd seems fine, and as the sun climbs, the fog rolls back to reveal the entire farm.
I know every inch of this land by heart.
I grew up on it, but lately, walking these fields unsettles me.
me. Some nights, I circle the property three or four times to ensure everything's locked up. I tell
myself it's just caution, but deep down, I recognize it as dread. After a brief talk with my husband,
we decide to keep a close watch around the spot where the first cow vanished. It's near the
property line, where a few ragged cedar posts and rusty wire mark our boundary. No recent
vehicle troubles have cropped up, but I still find myself scanning the ground, half expecting
to see those flattened impressions again. Nothing shows up, which somehow feels even more ominous,
like the farm is holding back some vital clue. By midday, the sun is brutal, and the cows
lays in the shade. I linger by the fence, scanning for anything, any sign that might explain what
happened, but it's quiet, too quiet. Normally I'd savor a day free from truce. I'd savor a day free from
trouble, but right now I'd give anything for a simple issue like a sick calf or a broken fence.
At least those make sense and can be fixed. My husband waves me over from the far side of the field.
The anxiety on his face mirrors my own, and neither of us needs words to say we're still haunted by
all this. We finish chores in silence, each wondering how something so impossible could happen here,
on land that was always our haven. Evening arrives, painting the sky with orange and pink
streaks. I lug a bale of hay to the feeding area, mentally reviewing every theory I've heard,
rustlers, sinkholes, mountain lions, none of it adds up. We never found footprints,
tire tracks, or any trace of a culprit. It's as if that cow simply blinked out of existence.
After dinner, I linger on the porch. The yard light casts a weak glow that fades into the dark
fields beyond. My gaze drifts to the tree line. Normally the rustle of leaves at night. Normally the rustle of leaves at
is soothing, but tonight it sets my nerves on high alert. I can't shake the feeling something
out there doesn't belong. Refusing to let fear win, I walk down the steps and stand in the driveway,
peering into the dimness. My rational mind insists there's nothing out there, that it's just my
imagination. Still, tension squeezes my chest, compelling me to check the horizon again and again.
Finally, I force myself back inside, fighting the earth.
to stand guard till dawn. In the farmhouse, I try to unwind, but my thoughts spin in circles.
How did that cow vanish so completely, and is whatever took it still around? When I climb into
bed, I promise myself to stay vigilant, no matter how paranoid it makes me. Sometimes not knowing
is its own special torment, and right now, I'm drowning in it. I'd been convincing myself we
were fine, that the tension on the farm was just a leftover reaction from the
the first disappearance. But the moment my husband told me my favorite cow was missing, I felt a
deeper dread sink in. I'd raised her from a calf, and she never strayed far, especially not from
her own baby. Yet there was her calf, bleeding in helpless circles, no sign of its mother.
My sister showed up soon after. She's the family's fearless one, always ready for a late-night
drive or trekking through a thorny hollow to find a lost calf. Even she looks shaken when
she arrived. We grabbed flashlights, piled into the truck with my husband, and spent hours
scouring every corner of the property, waiting through muddy creeks, climbing steep ridges,
crawling under fences. Nothing. It was as though the cow had been lifted straight off the pasture.
By evening, we were exhausted. My husband headed back toward the barn, thinking we might have
overlooked something closer to home. My sister and I tackled the strip of woods between two fields,
The in-between, we call it, because it's technically someone else's land jutting into hours like a mismatched puzzle piece.
Rusted barbed wire runs along the boundary, but our cows sometimes push through weak spots if they're determined.
We parked at the fence line as the sun dipped low, shadows stretching across the grass.
My sister hesitated before climbing over, which is unusual for her.
I tried to joke that she was getting squeamish, but my own voice sounded shaky.
Eventually, she hauled herself over, and we pressed into the trees. The deeper we went,
the more wrong everything felt. Birds and leaves that should have been rustling were silent.
An oppressive hush weighed on us. I called out my cow's name, half laughing at the notion she'd answer.
My sister tried to speak, but her voice sounded muffled, like the air itself was resisting her words.
She looked pale, struggling just to breathe. A few yards later we were.
stopped cold. It felt like my nerves were humming with electricity. My sister gripped my arm,
whispering that she couldn't even hear me clearly, though we were only inches apart. At the same
time, I picked up on a low vibration, more pressure than sound. The shadows around us seemed to
shift whenever I focused on them. Without really discussing it, we both knew we had to leave.
My sister turned first, and I stumbled after her, slipping on damp leaves and tripping over
hidden roots. The fence seemed miles away, as if the woods were stretching out to keep us there.
By the time we finally saw the barbed wire, I was shaking, and my sister looked as white as a sheet.
Crossing back onto our own field felt like gulping fresh air after nearly drowning.
We stood there, catching our breath, neither of us willing to speak about what we'd just experience,
It was too bizarre, too heavy.
All we knew was that these woods didn't want us inside, and we had two missing cows to prove it.
Still no real explanation, only the horrible certainty that it was worse than we'd ever imagined.
When we rejoined my husband, we skipped details about the suffocating atmosphere.
We just told him we'd found no broken branches, no footprints, nothing.
He looked grim.
The sun was almost gone, and we knew,
better than to hang around those trees after dark. My sister decided to head home. I lingered in the
yard letting the dim light play tricks on my eyes while I stared at the distant tree line. Another cow was
missing, and now we had firsthand evidence of something lurking in those woods, something that could
still the forest itself. I promised myself I wouldn't stop digging until I found a real answer.
If I didn't, we might lose more than just cattle. Even after I went inside, I'd
couldn't settle. My mind kept circling back to the way those woods felt alive, as if the trees
themselves had pushed us away. By the time I crawled into bed, the house was eerily silent.
The usual nighttime murmurs of the farm, cows shifting, wind rattling the barn, only made me
more uneasy. Every creek sounded menacing, every shadow threatening. I rose before dawn,
not that I'd slept. I poured coffee and stared out the window at the dark fields.
The orphaned calf was pacing near the fence, letting out sorrowful cries that tore at my heart.
It looked weaker, and no matter how many times I looked away, I kept glancing back,
praying for a mother that would never return.
That morning, my husband and I gathered family, parents, siblings, cousins from down the road,
hoping to devise a plan.
They arrived shortly after sunrise, and though it felt strange to meet so formally,
it reminded us how serious things had become.
Two cows missing, no leads, and a sense of dread clinging to our land.
Everyone offered theories, thieves, predators, old folklore about lights dancing in the hollers,
or people vanishing into the woods.
Normally our family avoids ghost stories, but desperation was making us consider anything.
By evening, I stood on the back porch, scanning the horizon for movement.
It felt like the farm itself was holding its breath, waiting.
I wanted to march straight to the fence again, but my legs refused. Whether it was fear or common sense,
I don't know. I pretended I'd try to sleep. Inside I checked every door and window, again and again,
peering into the yard lights glow. The darkness beyond seemed endless, and my heart hammered,
half expecting to catch sight of something slipping across the pasture. I hated feeling so
powerless in a place I once loved.
Eventually, I forced myself to sit in the dark living room, letting my eyes adjust.
Was it foolish to keep poking around, knowing something dangerous might be out there?
But I couldn't just let it be.
Two missing cows and the stifling menace in the woods were reason enough to keep searching.
I resolved that in the morning, I'd rope in more help if I had to, no more tiptoeing around.
Even if it meant heading back into those trees with nothing but
flashlights and a good dose of fear, I needed real answers. I must have dozed off at some point,
only to jerk awake at a distant rumble, thunder maybe, or something else. I never heard any
storm. My pulse thundered as I scanned the living room shadows. Eventually, I whispered a few
calming words to myself and curled tighter under a blanket. Dawn felt impossibly far away.
yet by sunrise the farm looked almost serene the calf lay still its energy draining by the hour i gathered supplies for another search a mixture of determination and dread boiling in my stomach this land once a place of comfort now felt like a battlefield and i was tired of waiting for the next strike i tried to imagine what might solve the mystery maybe we'd find a hidden ravine or a gap in the fence or maybe the truth was darker than any of us did
dared guess. Either way, I was ready to face it, for the farm's sake, and for hours. Never did I expect
I'd walk away from this property. It's been in my family for generations, a site of summer
picnics and lively cattle auctions, a piece of land I believed would always be mine. But these
last few days changed everything. It started that morning, right after we agreed on one final
search of the woods. My sister, my husband and I, prepared like we were heading into
hostile territory, flashlights, boots, walking sticks. We didn't talk much. We knew it was risky,
maybe foolish, but we also knew we needed closure. We crossed the fields at first light,
dew soaking our pants. The missing cow's calf followed us to the fence, bleeding mournfully.
It was losing weight and stumbling, and I wished I could do more than leave extra feed.
Yet we had to see if anything in those woods could explain how two cows had vanished.
Stepping over the barbed wire felt like entering another world.
The air was thick, the trees unnaturally tall, and the forest floor strangely quiet.
My sister led with her flashlight, cutting a path through brambles.
My instincts screamed this was a terrible idea, but none of us wanted to be the first to back out.
The farther we went, the more we noticed faint pops, like distant static echoing through the trees.
At first, we saw no one.
real clues, no animal remains, no footprints, no sign of disturbance, but the sense of
being watched wouldn't let up. Then we stumbled on a small clearing where the leaves were scorched
in a neat circle, as though blasted by intense heat. My sister felt a charge in the air and backed
away. My husband and I stepped closer, but we found only charred leaves and a suffocating
heaviness that made it hard to breathe. We stayed longer than we should have, flashlights moving in
jittery arcs, our hearts thudding in our ears. The silence grew crushing, not a single bird or breeze
to break it. We shared a look that said we had to leave immediately. Turning to go, we realized the trees
seem to have shifted, as if blocking our way out. My husband moved first, flashlight trembling in his
grip, until a sharp crack of a branch froze us in place. The shadows seemed to pulse. My sister urged us
onward, so we pushed through the brush, trying not to panic with each step. I've heard stories
about people seeing horrifying shapes or floating lights in the wilderness, but we never glimpsed
anything solid. Instead, it was the pervasive sense of something closing in. Branches snapped,
leaves rustled, but there was nothing to see. It felt like we were being guided, or herded,
out. I kept checking over my shoulder, terrified one of us would vanish if I looked away too long.
Stumbling back out onto our own land was a shock, like bursting through the surface after being
underwater. We gasped for air, and the sunlight felt unnaturally bright. My sister almost
collapsed, and my husband steadied her. We all stared at the tree line, expecting to see a figure lurking,
but there was only the still wall of trees. We made our decision right then. We made our decision right
then. No debate, no argument. We hurried to the house, hearts hammering and legs weak. Even in broad
daylight, everything seemed ghostly. After a rushed talk, we agreed we couldn't stay, waiting for the
next disappearance, or the next moment of sheer terror. The farm had become a place of dread.
The rest of the day was a blur, packing our essentials, calling family, arranging for the
remaining cattle. Nobody opposed our plan. Most admitted they, they,
too felt the looming threat. A few relatives stayed behind long enough to sell or move the herd.
Walking away from generations of family history cut deep, but not as deeply as facing whatever was in those
woods. By sunset, my sister, my husband, and I were in our vehicles, driving off in a small
convoy. We didn't dare look back at the house or fields we had once cherished. My hands shook
on the steering wheel, and a voice in my head warned me not to glance in the rearview mirror,
I'd see something I could never forget.
We barely spoke on that drive,
but our unspoken promise was clear.
We weren't coming back.
Fear, survival instinct,
whatever you want to call it,
we had reached our limit.
That old farm could keep its secrets.
Whatever lurked there had claimed the land for itself,
and we were done fighting.
I don't know if anyone else will ever set foot on that property,
or if future owners will discover what lies hidden in those trees.
all i know is that we left alive but shaken searching for any peace we could find maybe these memories will fade some day but right now i still feel the echo of that oppressive silence and i have no intention of letting it drag me back
i know i'm just a random person on reddit so there isn't any reason for you to take my word at face value none the less i swear on the life of my family that every word is true this is going to be a long post but i want to be a long post but i want to be a long post but i want to take my word at face value none the last i swear to my family that every word is true
This is going to be a long post, but I want to be as detailed as possible about this event.
I'm a 32-year-old man from, and currently living in, Cumberland County, New Jersey.
This location puts me about 45 minutes away from Philadelphia and about 45 minutes away from the Atlantic Ocean,
while being only about 15 minutes away from the Delaware Bay.
After high school, I joined the Army as an intelligence analyst for a while.
When I got out, I moved to New York City and worked as a project manager for a construction company until I met my wife.
We decided to move back to New Jersey to be closer to our families, especially since she was pregnant with our daughter.
That's just some background on me.
This happened in October of 2018.
It was about 1145 at night, and I decided to sit on my front steps to smoke a couple of cigarettes before trying to fall asleep.
Everyone else in the house was already sleeping.
It was a pretty clear night, with not many clouds in the sky, but there was some fog on the ground.
As I was smoking, I was looking at the fog, and to me, it seemed like there was movement in it,
almost as if there were invisible or camouflaged things out there that I wouldn't have seen if not for the fog.
While watching the fog, I noticed a white truck that had driven by twice already.
I could hear a man and a woman yelling at each other.
The truck stopped at the stop sign in front of my house,
and the woman got out, screaming at the man, then slammed the door.
He drove off fast, and she proceeded to walk into the woods across the street from me,
which was strange because there's nothing back there except for blue holes until you reach the bay.
If I walk straight out my front door, there are no houses or civilization.
Only trees in those artificial lakes, blue holes,
left over from sandplants until you hit the Delaware Bay.
About five minutes after the woman walked into the woods,
things went from weird to absolutely, unbelievably scary and strange,
the most reality-shattering event that has ever happened to me.
I was still looking at the movement I'd been seeing in the fog
when I heard a very loud noise coming from the woods.
It sounded like metal being ripped apart.
There isn't a good comparison for this sound because it was so unearthly.
I'm sure it wasn't natural.
That sound lasted about 10 to 15 seconds, then abruptly stopped and was replaced by another noise,
which I felt more than I heard.
Imagine being aware of a huge sound happening near you, but it's at a frequency your ears can't quite pick up.
That's the best way I can describe it.
This sound remained constant through the rest of the experience.
At this point, I'll probably lose some people, and I know how crazy this sounds.
but as I was getting used to the sound,
it felt like something reached out to me mentally,
without words,
conveying a feeling of calm and a heads-up
or warning about what was about to happen.
It felt as if it was checking my reaction
to what I was currently experiencing,
like a security check.
While I felt this sense of calm,
I noticed a light in the sky
that seemed to have risen out of the woods,
maybe five or six miles away.
It was just a ball of light in the distance,
but somehow I knew it was coming toward me, even though it wasn't moving very fast.
Right after noticing the light in the sky, I got more freaked out than I have ever been in my life.
In the woods across the street from me, no more than 50 yards away, these orbs of light started to appear.
I could see some flicker into existence.
They were all white lights, which didn't illuminate the area around them as you would expect from flashlights.
There were probably 12 to 16 of these orbs, and they moved in a totally smooth manner.
Besides the trail to get into the woods, the area is dense and filled with thorn bushes,
so it just wouldn't be possible for people to move where these lights were moving,
let alone do it so smoothly.
I'm positive they weren't people with flashlights because of the terrain
and the characteristics of the orbs themselves.
I watched the orbs move around for about a minute, trying to make sense of what I was seeing,
Then I looked back up at the sky and saw a craft coming practically right toward me, only about
1,000 yards away by that point.
I was going back and forth between watching the orbs on the ground and the craft, which I could
see more clearly now.
It was flying very low, maybe only three and a half to four stories off the ground.
I could see the path it was taking, and it was going to pass in front of me at an angle where
I'd see both underneath and the side at the same time.
The craft was a single-story dull black rectangle.
From underneath, I could see that it was made of three smaller rectangular panels that fit together to form a larger rectangle.
I very clearly saw these three panels.
Estimating size is harder, but I'd say it was about 35 yards long and 20 yards across.
Underneath, there were lights flashing in a pattern, cycling one way and then back the other way.
In the moment I thought the craft was signaling to the orbs on the ground.
It made no sound at all.
I only heard that same buzzing and humming noise that I felt more than I heard.
While it was in front of me, it moved really slowly.
At a speed I don't think a plane with normal propulsion could manage while staying airborne.
I took my eyes off the craft for just a moment to look at the orbs again.
And when I looked back up, the craft was gone.
For whatever reason, seeing it van deranged,
like that made the reality of what I was witnessing hit home.
I got really scared, especially since my daughter, wife, and mom were all inside,
no more than 50 feet from this craziness.
So I went in and locked the doors.
I felt I might have investigated further if it were just my life at risk,
but I wasn't willing to take that chance with my family.
I might have been paranoid at this point,
but I felt like I was being watched for the next two hours.
I didn't experience any lost time.
The entire event happened over 20 to 30 minutes.
Looking back on this event, I questioned what was going on with the white truck
and the woman who walked into the woods at the beginning.
I've also done some research and found that there are quite a few reports of people seeing a glimmer man in the woods,
which makes me think of the movement I saw in the fog.
Where I live is a very active area for UFO phenomena,
which makes sense if something wanted access to major cities like Philadelphia,
New York City, Baltimore, and D.C. What could be a better place to hide than almost inaccessible
1,000-foot deep lakes in the middle of the woods? I know this was a very long post, but I wanted to be
thorough. I'd really like to hear what you all think about this, and if anyone has had a similar
experience or knows somebody who has. The following is a story that happened to me about two years ago.
I couldn't explain it then, and I can't explain it now. I live in Oregon City, Oregon.
a short drive south of portland i'm on the outskirts somewhere between suburban and rural housing i have neighbors but they're not exactly next door i was nineteen at the time of this story
i used to have a problem with sleep i don't know what it was but i'd get mentally crippling anxiety and i'd go for a walk to calm my mind i live on a single lane road that follows a stream through the woods so the scenery mixed with the quiet trickle of water was always quite calming
It was summertime, and it was a particularly rough night for me.
I remember telling my dad I was going for a walk as I slipped on my shoes and hurried out.
I still recall the worried look on his face as I tried to escape my own mental panic.
My late-night walks were becoming more frequent, and I knew it concerned him.
Nevertheless, I shut the door behind me and proceeded into the dark.
I remember it being a clear night, but I don't recall seeing stars.
The moon must have been full, because I could see the road without a light, but I don't remember
actually seeing the moon either.
I just started walking, talking to myself about everything that had my anxiety spiked.
I'm sure I looked insane, rambling out loud, but it sometimes helped me process my issues.
From my home to the main road is about a mile.
I was about two-thirds of the way there when I heard something rustle in the bushes to my right.
This wasn't uncommon.
I'd encounter deer, raccoons, a bobcat, and even a few coyotes on my walks.
Still, I like to know what was around, so I pulled out my phone and switched on the light.
For context, there's a hill to my right that slopes upward. That's where I heard the noise.
To my left is about a ten-foot drop down to the creek. I shined my light into the bushes to see what I was
dealing with. Usually, animals either freeze or run off, which helps me figure out,
what they are. But there was nothing, no movement at all. Suddenly my hair stood on end. I felt scared,
tense, and realized I should have been able to hear the creek trickling over the rocks, but I couldn't.
Something was clearly wrong. I heard a branch snap in the bushes again. I moved my light back
and saw two small red lights, like eyes, looking right at me. I shifted my phone to see if it was
a reflection, but it wasn't. Then it started to get closer.
I ran. I freaking ran. I ran in near silence. I don't know if I screamed. Maybe it didn't matter.
I couldn't hear my shoes hitting the road, my breathing, or even my heartbeat. All I heard was what
sounded like an animal with human bare feet chasing me. Some primal survival instinct told me to
find light, something bigger than my phone's light. My first thought was home, where there's a
large barn light out front that illuminates the whole driveway. I ran like hell was on my heels,
because for all I knew it was, I just remember hearing it get closer. It felt like it was toying with me,
because its footstep pattern didn't sound like an all-out sprint, more like a light gallop.
It wasn't until I rounded the last corner and could see the light that it suddenly picked up
speed and started closing in. I sprinted toward the light pole as fast as I could. I heard its
furious steps come to an abrupt stop, but I didn't turn around. I practically tackled that tar-covered
wooden post, clinging to it as I waited for the end, waiting for whatever it was to tear me apart.
It never did. I stayed there for about an hour in silence until my phone rang. I had three messages
and two missed calls, all from my dad asking where I was. I lied and said I fell asleep in a field
up the road. Then I noticed I could hear the world around me again, so I assumed it was gone. I ran inside
the house and locked the doors. To this day, I don't walk alone on my road, day or night. I know what
you're probably thinking. It was just your mind playing tricks, or it was just an animal. But I've
seen animals. I know what lives around here. Whatever this was, it's not something I've ever
encountered before. This whole experience made me reflect on other strange incidents out here.
Things I couldn't explain. A fully grown deer burned from the inside out, for instance.
The only visible clue was a single spot in its ribs where the flesh and bone had burned through,
yet the rest of it looked perfectly preserved. There have also been moments where I seemed to
slip through time. I'd set my alarm for 6 a.m. and wait outside for my ride for three hours,
only to come back inside and find it was still just turning 5 a.m.
I've seen shadow figures by the side of the road.
There have been a couple of unexplained deaths.
The list goes on.
I'm telling you, something strange and terrifying is out here.
Some nights I wonder, do my doors and windows really keep whatever it is out,
or is it still just toying with me?
Edit.
If anyone has any ideas what the hell I'm dealing with, please let me know.
Before I start retelling this particular experience, I want to preface it with my reason for posting.
This happened some years back, and I've always been quick to push it aside and try to forget about it,
but a conversation I had recently inspired me to write my story out,
so that people with more experience in paranormal or supernatural phenomena might tell me what I witnessed, if anything.
This all takes place in northwestern Montana during late autumn of 2009.
Apologies for any spelling and grammatical errors.
I wrote it all down in one sitting.
When I was 17, I moved out of my parents' house and in with a co-worker,
who I'll call John, in his trailer.
We got along well at work.
It was actually one of the better roommate situations I've ever had in terms of compatibility,
and we became close friends during that time.
We were roommates until shortly after I turned 18,
and some personal stuff happened with my family.
I ended up moving back in with my parents for a while to help them cover some bills.
It took about three months for that situation to stabilize,
and I called this friend up about moving back out there.
This was the first time I remember feeling something was off,
though it's been so long that I can't recall the details of the conversation.
There was just a sense of wrongness that lingered for a while after I'd hung up the phone.
The end result was that I was welcome to move back in, which I expected.
I waited for a day off, and another friend, who I'll call Dave, came to help me move.
Dave was another Dungeons and Dragons pal from a different group,
and we were figuring we'd show up and talk John into a one-shot session or something,
so we loaded up all my stuff and drove out there, and it was a nightmare.
From the moment John opened the door, everything was wrong.
I won't say John was a clean freak, but he tried to maintain his space,
and he'd always insisted we clean up for company when I was living with him.
I stood there, open-mouthed, at the thick layer of dust coating nearly everything.
The longer I looked around, the worse it got.
There was a half-eaten plate of food turned to mold sitting on the table.
Both sinks in the kitchen were similarly moldy,
and the air in the trailer stank, even beyond what I'd expect from moldy dishes.
I was extremely taken aback by the state of the trailer,
But the state of my friend was even more shocking.
He worked at a bank and had always kept himself clean, but now he looked like a wreck.
He'd lost weight, his skin had an unhealthy, waxy look to it.
His hair was overgrown and greasy, and his body odor was terrible.
His smell was the first thing that made me think something was really off about the situation.
I've been playing Dungeons and Dragons and doing other nerd stuff for a long time,
and I'm sorry to say a lot of nerds don't have the best hygiene practices.
So I've encountered plenty of pungent body odor, but this was not the same.
It was almost the sickly sweet smell of something dead, but not quite.
I've never smelled anything exactly like it, before or since.
At this point in the encounter, I was at a general level of unease,
and I didn't want to go into the trailer, but John invited us in.
And not wanting to be rude, I went.
I figured something crazy had happened while I was away.
John wasn't dating anyone, so I didn't think heartbreak was the cause, and we'd stayed in touch
after I first moved out.
Even when that fell off a bit, I still heard from mutual friends about the Dungeons and Dragons
sessions he was attending.
Regardless, something had obviously happened.
So standing there in his dusty living room with Dave, who kept shooting me sideways looks,
I asked John if everything was all right.
After a full three seconds of silence, he assured me everything was fine.
That was it. He didn't explain the state of his house or anything else. And what was even
weirder was when he said, You guys can crash out here, and then just headed off to the back of the
house. I'd always known him to be a diligent host. So this was odd, to say the least, though
basically nothing was going as I expected or remembered. So him ditching us in the living room of his
nasty house was maybe the least weird thing so far. This is the part where I'm pretty glad Dave was there.
To me, this nasty trailer was still my home.
I'd lived there for over a year before my three-month return to my parents,
and I had a sense of belonging that I think made me oblivious to things obvious to Dave.
Despite the condition of the place and being left alone by John,
I still hadn't changed my plan of living there.
I set my stuff down and started preparing to clean,
but Dave stopped me and began pointing out things I hadn't noticed.
The layer of dust was completely undisturbed,
across the entire living room and kitchen area, except for a thin track from the front door to the
hallway leading to the back of the trailer.
Whispering to me, Dave said,
Nothing in here has been used for a long time.
And once I really looked around, I realized he was right.
The TV, the computer, the couch, the chairs, the dining table with its rotten food.
He hadn't laid a hand on any of it for at least a month, maybe longer.
Dave, moving almost as if he were sneaking,
walked quietly into the kitchen to inspect the fridge.
He pointed out a few thick patches of dust on the flatter surfaces of the fridge,
but it was harder to tell on the handle.
The metal handle had some dust, but not as much collected.
Stepping past Dave, I reached out with one finger and popped the fridge open.
I was gagging before I'd even opened the door enough for the interior light to come on.
Throwing my arm across my face and burying my nose in the crook of my elbow,
I opened the fridge about halfway.
It was top-to-bottom rotten food.
After a second, I stepped back, turning away, trying not to vomit.
Once I'd collected myself, Dave showed me a half gallon of milk he'd pulled out of the fridge,
indicating that it had expired three weeks prior.
Personally, I just wanted him to put everything back and close the door.
I was more or less done playing dust detective.
I basically shrugged off everything up to that point.
Cleared some dust from the couch, got my laptop out,
and connected to the Wi-Fi we'd always paid for.
After a while, Dave joined me, and we played World of Warcraft for a bit.
Eventually, he told me he'd hang out for the night because he was my ride,
and taking him back to his place and then driving back again was a 90-minute round trip.
To be clear, I would have taken him home anyway.
I wouldn't blame anyone for not wanting to stay in a room with a giant stack of moldy dishes in the sink
and a fridge full of rotten food.
We played games for the next few hours,
and John never made a sound.
At one point, Dave asked me where the bathroom was,
and I told him it was at the far end of the hallway
next to John's bedroom.
A low level of unease had been building
since John first answered the door
and was getting worse the longer we stayed.
Normally, I wouldn't walk with a friend to the bathroom,
but it felt like the right thing to do this time.
So I led Dave down the hallway,
flipping on the hallway light as we went,
and ended up with dust on my fingers from the switch.
By this point I was actually getting annoyed.
I don't normally have bad seasonal allergies.
But all the dust we'd been stirring up had my nose itchy and half-plugged.
So on the way down, I figured I'd point Dave to the bathroom
and then knock on John's bedroom door to confront him about the condition of the house.
But halfway down the hallway, I noticed a hole in the floor outside the bathroom door,
a jagged-ed-edged hole through which I could see the dirt, cobwebs,
and shredded black plastic that had once covered the insulation.
I sighed, exasperated by the weirdness.
I directed Dave into the bathroom and walked to the end of the hallway, where John's room was.
I briefly wondered if he was asleep, as no light was coming from under his door.
The sun was setting, but it gets dark pretty early that time of year.
Annoyed, I knocked loudly, and after a few seconds I heard a grunt from inside.
I popped the door open and flipped on the light.
This was when it really started to sink in how wrong this whole thing.
experience felt. I glanced around the room, and it was in much the same condition as the rest of the
house. Dust everywhere, except for a small track from the door to the nearest side of the bed. The bed
itself was terrible. Blankets and pillows stained a deep yellow, almost black in places, and John just
lay there with a thousand-yard stare fixed on the ceiling. I completely forgot why I had come to
talk to him, because looking directly at him filled me with a profound fear. It seemed odd to
feel so afraid in that situation, my sickly-looking, clearly depressed friend lying on a disgusting
bed paying no attention to me at all. John was not an intimidating guy. He was short, a bit chubby,
and baby-faced. Yet in my gut I was afraid of him. I mumbled something about coming to say good-night,
turned off the light, and shut the door. I turned around to see Dave kneeling by the hole in the
floor, which as I write this makes me wonder how long I stood there in the doorway. If I had to
Estimate, maybe only 15 seconds passed from when I left Dave to when I said goodnight to John,
yet he was already out of the bathroom.
As I approached, Dave pointed at the edge of the hole and told me the wood along the edge
was twisted upward, as if the hole had been made from below.
I wish I could confirm that.
I'm including it here because Dave did say it, but I didn't take the time to inspect it myself.
Right then, I was at war with my own sense of fear sparked by being a row.
around John. I just nodded to Dave and said, we should get back to the living room.
Fast forward a bit. I kind of came to my senses once we were back in the living room and I had
reopened my laptop. My sudden, intense fear of John eased off, and we played games for a few
more hours before Dave said he wanted to rest his eyes. We shut everything down. I settled into
a recliner and Dave lay on the couch, positioned so he could keep an eye.
on the hallway. I was too uneasy to sleep. After seeing John's room, I knew I wouldn't be living there
after all. As much as I disliked living with my parents, it was preferable to whatever was going on with
John. Quietly, I told Dave that everything was all wrong and explained how, from what I knew of John,
he would never have let things reach this point. We weighed the possibilities. A psychotic break,
maybe drugs, or, as I later thought, he might have been seen.
seriously ill. All of those remain possible explanations for his strange behavior, but my gut still
tells me none of them fully explain it. After a while, we lapsed into silence. I was just waiting
for the sun to come up, starting to wonder why we hadn't already left, when Dave motioned with
his hand to get my attention. He pointed toward the hallway, and I turned my head slowly in the
recliner. After maybe 15 seconds of staring into the dark hallway, I heard a slight creed.
A little while and a few more creeks later, I saw John's darkened silhouette standing just
inside the hallway at the edge of the kitchen.
That deep sense of fear started building in me again.
The only thing I can compare it to is the time I went hiking alone and ran head on into
a bear going the opposite way on the trail.
I had bear spray, which I didn't end up using, but it was terrifying, and honestly,
I've never really enjoyed hiking since.
Looking across from that massive bear with nothing but a can of spray was a terror so deep it
still gives me goosebumps.
By contrast, I've been face to face with plenty of threatening or crazy people without feeling
that same dread.
It's a human threat, if that makes sense.
Seeing John lurking in that hallway inspired a level of fear so intense that I have no choice
but to consider unconventional answers for what happened to him.
Because the only comparable gut feeling of dread I've ever experienced came from facing
one of the largest terrestrial predators on the planet, by myself, on its home turf, armed with
basically nothing. There was something deeply wrong and dangerous going on that I can't explain
analytically, but my instincts told me I was in danger in a way I'd never prepared for.
To fast forward to the end, we lay there in silence while he lurked in the hallway for hours.
When I asked Dave about it recently, he said it was at least two hours that John stood there.
Eventually, he crept back down the hallway to his bedroom.
Then, quietly and quickly, we gathered our things,
snuck out to my car, and left.
I followed up a bit with our mutual friends afterward,
but got the same story from all of them.
One day he just stopped coming around.
Later, I heard from someone who spoke to his parents
that he had called them and said he was leaving town.
As far as I know, no one has seen or heard from him since.
I've mostly tried to forget the whole thing ever happened,
although for a while I had panic attacks whenever I thought about it.
I realize nothing overtly paranormal took place,
so I'm sorry if this is posted in the wrong place,
but my gut tells me that something well out of the ordinary was going on.
If anyone has any insight, I'd be happy to hear it.
If you need more details, I'll answer questions as best I can,
and if you don't believe me, I don't blame you.
These events took place in a rural part of North Dakota in the summer of 2012.
Anyone who spent time in the Midwest of the U.S. won't take long to tell you there's not a lot to do in your free time.
In places like North Dakota, this is doubly true. It's either hot or frozen.
It can be ugly, dusty, and it's as if someone left the wind on for the last 30,000 years.
Almost no one wants to live there, and even the bushes evolved into tumbleweeds to try to escape.
That said, in 2020,
12, North Dakota had some of the best wages in the world due to its oil boom, and I, like so many other
people, just sort of ended up there. Now when I say there wasn't much to do, it's not hyperbole.
You've got restaurants, bars, and strip clubs, none of which were built for the influx of people
flooding in from other states, many of whom you wouldn't want to be around even when they were sober.
Still, you find ways to pass the time between shifts, and one of our favorites for a while was
driving the back roads at night, listening to music and smoking weed. I didn't personally smoke,
but everyone else did, so there it is. It was a time and place where a lot of people were
constantly on edge. Everyone was a stranger. We worked all the time, and we slept in whatever
houses our jobs could find for us. Every week brought another story about someone being killed
or a business being robbed at gunpoint. The local police were overwhelmed by the skyrocketing crime
rates. I like to think of it as a brief resurgence of the West's more lawless era. So, at night,
we'd cruise down endless dirt roads in the dark, blasting whatever music we had on hand and trying
to laugh off the stress of being there. Sometimes, we'd stop in the darkness, kill the lights,
and listen to the wind howl around the vehicle. The sound could even be kind of soothing sometimes,
but not that night. And it was the last time I ever took a recreational night
drive through the countryside. I think we all felt the difference right away. We pulled off to the side of
the road, killed the lights, and turned the radio down. When clouds cover the moon and stars and your many
miles from the nearest street lamp, it's hard to describe how complete the darkness can be. You turn off
the lights, and suddenly, it's not just an intangible absence of light. The dark becomes more solid,
like it has a certain weight you can feel against your skin. This,
This part of the experience can actually be fun in a scary way, but we'd done it many times,
and I was fairly used to it.
The wind howled differently around us this time.
If you live there long enough, you'll experience all kinds of winds at various volumes and pitches.
By that point, I had lived there for quite a while, and I'd never heard this particular
shriek before, or since.
It was menacing, and I felt my hair rise at the sound.
A girl who rode with us was the first to speak up, after maybe only a few seconds of being pulled off the road.
I remember hearing her voice in the dark.
Damn, that's creepy.
I nodded silently.
My head turned as if to look out the window on my side, though I couldn't see beyond it in the darkness.
With every passing moment, it seemed like the unnatural shriek on the wind rose higher.
It was an entirely inhuman sound that, as it climbed, gave the impression of something approaching.
I was convinced, as I sat there in the dark, that something was descending on us while we were parked off that road.
While my fight or flight response was still catching up, my friend next to me in the back seat beat me to the punch.
Go, he snapped from the darkness, and instantly the car lights clicked back on.
The engine started, and I felt it more as a vibration through my seat than a sound.
I remember vividly being unable to hear anything over the shriek.
I felt the tires spin for a second in the dirt and grass before catching.
We lurched forward and shot off down the dirt road.
From the moment we stopped to the moment we floored it out of there,
I'd estimate no more than ten seconds elapsed.
I think if it had ended here, we might have kept driving around at night,
laughing it off as jumping at our own shadows.
If that had been all, I wouldn't even bother to write it down.
But it wasn't, so here we are.
As we shot off, I experienced a revelation that chills my blood to this day.
While we were parked in the darkness, the wind blew consistently across the car from right to left,
and the shrieking sound also moved in that direction.
As we tore down the road, I was acutely aware of the sound,
and the direction it emanated from shifted from my right to behind me, even as we sped away.
I knew instinctively that this was wrong.
The road was more or less a straight run for a few miles.
and every sense told me that shriek was not the wind as i had first believed my hearing told me it was something else and as we fled that something gave chase though it seemed unable to keep up because after a few miles the shrieking faded away entirely
we drove on in silence except for the car rattling down the uneven road and jostling me in my seat my muscles were tense and my heart pounded like mad i remember vividly leaning toward the middle of the back seat so i could look out the front windshield trying to calm down and confirm we were in the clear
from my angle i saw movement in the headlights and a pair of eyes reflecting back at us far too near to miss hitting whatever it was but the driver slammed on the brakes anyway and we were to the driver slammed on the brakes anyway and we were
We skidded along the dirt road.
I watched as we slid straight into the eyes shining in the headlights,
bracing for an impact that never came.
We slid right past them and came to a stop somewhere near the middle of an intersection of dirt roads.
After a moment of stunned silence and around of,
Is everyone all right?
We opened the car doors and got out,
looking around for signs of whatever we'd hit,
though I never felt any impact.
There was nothing.
No damage to the car and no noise.
in the immediate area. A cold chill crept along my skin as I turned in place, taking in the narrow
crossroads poorly illuminated by the headlights. I repressed the urge to shiver and gave up the
search, calling out that I'd found nothing and heading back to my open car door. I'd taken only a few
steps before I found myself rooted to the spot, an icy fear rippling across my skin and seizing my
chest. Even as the wind gusted over us, I heard the edges of that awful shrieking begin to creep
in. We all stood there for a moment, equal parts terrified and fascinated, and just like before,
the volume steadily climbed as if to signal an approach. Almost as one, we scrambled back into the
car, slamming the doors and getting ready to take off. I still remember a certain mad curiosity
lingering in the back of my mind. A part of me even then, wanted to know
what the source was, because I'm fully certain it wasn't the wind. As before, the sound quickly
faded behind us as we sped down the dirt road. No more shining eyes appeared to impede our escape.
After perhaps 40 minutes of driving, we turned on to a paved highway and headed back into town.
After that, night driving became a much less popular pastime. We rarely discussed what happened
that night, and though I've moved far away from that wind-blown dust bowl,
I can't deny that I still stop and listen whenever the wind picks up, hoping against hope I never hear that cold shriek again.
As I was writing out this encounter with the unknown, I did some follow-up research on paranormal phenomena or mythological accounts that might be consistent with what happened.
I'm sorry to say I didn't find much to corroborate my experience.
There's some lore about crossroads at midnight, which isn't super helpful since it was considerably later than midnight.
I'd appreciate any information or insight if there is any to be had.
And of course, if you don't believe me, I don't blame you.
I've been searching for some semblance of similarity to someone else's encounter for three years now,
hoping another's experience might align, even a bit, with my own, to validate it.
Until last night I'd found details that kind of aligned with my encounter,
but nothing I felt was concrete enough to keep my story from sounding absolutely insane.
It still does sound insane, I know, and I have no way to further explain any of it.
All I have is what I witnessed.
I found a post on here from 18 days ago that sounds eerily similar to my own.
The key difference is the familiarity of the voices it mimicked,
which leads me to wonder if this thing had been watching us for a while.
To get both of our voices down, it would have had to have heard us,
at the most recent ten hours earlier, before we left for work.
All right, to preface this,
I typed all of this up as a DM to send to someone else after reading the other guy's story,
so the syntax might be awful.
Sorry if this reads like a trashy DM,
but I honestly get terrified of this thing whenever I spend too much time talking about it,
so I'd rather not type it all out again.
I've been wanting to write this since it happened in 2018 and 2019,
but I legit get really uncomfortable the moment I start.
I'm sure the thing isn't actually watching or whatever,
but I don't know.
I just hate retelling it.
I do think it's important to share, though,
because finding someone else's story led me to several others
that seemed to align with whatever I saw,
and it was honestly so cathartic.
I figured maybe somebody else might be in the same boat
and need some sort of validation that they aren't insane.
So, I was living down in West Texas in this national park,
where the restaurant I was working at rests at the top of a 15-minute hike
up a mountain trail from the housing they provided us.
I closed up the restaurant after everyone left each night, so I was always an hour or two later coming down the hill than everyone else.
It was usually pretty empty, really quiet, and uncommon to encounter anyone else, as the only thing at the top of the mountain is the closed restaurant, gift shop, store, and some trailheads.
There isn't much reason for anyone else to be on the trail at that hour.
One night, I'm coming down. No moon, so it was pitch black. The trail was,
trail was empty, and it was characteristically quiet. I round the last bend to get to my house,
and right before I get off the trail to take a shortcut through the thicket of cactus and brush,
there were maybe 15-20 trees, even though it's a desert, the top of the mountain has a high
Sierra microclimate. I hear my best friend roommate call my name, clear as day, in the other direction.
He said my name, and when I turned, he said it again. In retrospect, it's a little bit of a
sounded funny. It was close, maybe 15 yards away, but also sounded far off at the same time,
like if someone recorded his voice from far away but played it very nearby. It just sounded off,
but not enough to flip a switch immediately. Maybe I'm remembering it differently than it
actually sounded. I'm facing my house, maybe 50 yards away, and the voice comes from directly to my
left, on this foothill of the mountain we'd hike around sometimes. It has a little bit of the mountain we'd hike around
sometimes. It has much more tree coverage than the trail I was on, and considerably more than the
thickets separating me from the clearing around my house. If you walked five feet in the direction
the voice came from, you'd completely disappear from the view of anyone on the trail, or on the back
porch of the house, immediately. So hearing my friend's voice calling me over, I thought,
oh, cool, we're night hiking, and I turned to follow it, but right before I take my first step into
the tree line, I hear his actual voice down on our porch saying,
Hey, who are you talking to? That stops me. I turn back to face my house,
confused as hell, just in time to see this thing. Burst out of the thicket I was
about to shortcut through in the first place before I got distracted by the voice.
From the exact spot I would have walked through, this thing bolts. It was humanoid,
technically, but the thing is tall as hell and way too skinny for a human.
at least eight feet tall, but slim, inhumanly slender.
It was hunched over and running like it had just taken off from a track mark, you know.
But it kept that same hunched form the whole time and never stood fully upright.
Okay, so, about the color.
That part has always messed with me because, for one, I'm colorblind, and it was a greenish-yellow.
I get greens and yellows mixed up a lot, especially that particular hue.
And two, it looked like it was giving off its own glow, which has always sounded so absolutely
ludicrous that I never tell anyone, unless I trust them not to think I'm completely joking,
because if I heard this story, I might think someone was at least a little bit joking.
Our back porch light was on, though, and the thing lined up with where it would have been shining,
so if this thing was translucent, it could have taken on that sheen by reflecting the porch light.
The colors do kind of line up, I guess.
If it reflected the light, it may have looked like that color, but it certainly wasn't identical.
Honestly, I swear it had its own shine, like looking at a dying glow stick.
More than enough to see, but kind of faint.
Regardless, it was a light that definitely wasn't there a second before when I'd gotten to the shortcut.
It would have stood out for the last 50 yards of the walk, at least.
It should be noted that, had I followed that thing's voice, two things would have happened.
1. I would have completely disappeared from anyone's view, and two, I would have turned my back on whatever that thing was, and entered a thicket of trees, weeds, and cactus, far too dense to turn around, run, or fight back in.
And that trail it led me toward goes directly to the edge of a cliff that drops into a massive break in the mountain, the window in Big Bend National Park, that cleanly drops all 6,000 feet to the wide-open desert below.
That could have been its purpose, leading me in that direction.
If I were going to do something nefarious, that would be the perfect place to catch someone alone
and lead them somewhere no one else would come across them.
Legit, in the middle of the day, you could probably make someone disappear there if you wanted.
Anyway, how this thing was running, it immediately felt like I'd spooked it,
like how a deer runs off at a noise.
But this was different in that it seemed a lot more determined.
It seemed intelligent, aware of its own movement, not just acting on instinct.
It was like spooking a person if they'd been watching you from the bushes, spooked, but sentient,
and definitely acting like I'd just foiled some nefarious plan.
So naturally I also bolt, exposing my back to this thing, but taking the opposite, slightly
longer way to my back porch.
My buddy, God bless his soul, is still there when I make it, and he asks again,
who are you with?
His face is just confused as hell, and he keeps looking past me.
I'm like, you heard it too, right?
And he says, yeah, where are they?
I was like, what, what?
There was multiple?
Apparently, from his perspective,
he had heard multiple voices alongside my own,
all carrying on and joking around,
talking back and forth pretty loudly.
He said there were at least three other voices talking with mine,
but it sounded like a whole crowd coming down the trail.
He heard us getting closer and closer for the past few minutes,
and just assumed I'd run into a hiking group and was talking with them as we headed down.
That's not unheard of in the daytime, but very uncommon for the hour of night.
It took me a minute to show him I wasn't messing with him,
that I was completely alone and hadn't vocalized a single word until he called up to ask,
Who are you with?
It took a second to even express my side of what was going on.
I was so out of whack I couldn't find the words to explain,
so I just kept shouting something like,
I swear to God I just heard your voice.
And then this thing.
Dude, this thing.
Eventually, it registered with him that there had been no other lights on the trail.
I wasn't using a flashlight that night, so maybe there was actually a moon out,
and that I had just heard his voice calling me off trail and into the dark.
We both started trying to figure out what the hell we'd just witnessed.
Okay.
This part might be a little crazy, but I'm not implying anything.
I'm just saying, this is what I had been doing on the walk down before this happened.
Obviously, walking home solo, I hadn't actually said a word.
Whoever he heard was certainly not me, and I certainly didn't come with a crowd.
But I had been praying like crazy on the hike down.
There had just been this super dark, negative energy in the same.
the house lately, and I was trying to surround myself with light and positivity, asking God to give
me strength before I walked back in. Out of nowhere, midway through the trail, I got this absolutely
overwhelming joy, like an absolute ecstasy. I was screaming inside, feeling happier than I could
describe, like I could take on the whole damn world. Maybe I am implying something because,
call me crazy. I've always felt that had something to do with how the night turned out, as opposed to how it might have.
I know that part makes me sound insane, but so does the rest of it. So, whatever. I certainly don't think it was a
coincidence. I'm just not sure what to make of it. Every detail means every detail. That's just what
was going on with me as the walk was happening. It would have been a noteworthy, memorable night,
even if the thing hadn't shown up. It was that powerful of an energy.
Anyway, that's pretty much it.
The only other thing is our memories of it.
Out of nowhere, I just sort of stopped thinking about it,
not like I forgot, but it was hidden behind some thick fog in my head.
The next morning I told the story to a friend,
and she uncharacteristically shut me down, saying something like,
y'all are just crazy and getting scared of these mountains,
and then walked away.
It really wasn't like her to dismiss someone, especially a friend.
especially a friend without hearing them out she was a very empathetic person it was like she'd heard something that triggered a memory she refused to touch and shut it down before it got too close i don't know maybe i'm reading into it but that's happened a couple of times with this story
anyway we'd been living on that mountain off and on for a few years at that point and had never once heard or seen anything remotely similar to that thing until that night we'd never even heard a story vaguely resembling it
we weren't just randomly spooked by our own house or the trail we took twice a day every day and we weren't seeing or hearing things based on stories we'd projected into the darkness but the weirdest thing happened the moment she walked away it was like that we'd looked away it was like to seeing or hearing things based on stories we'd projected into the darkness but the weirdest thing happened the moment she walked away it was like
like a fog just slowly poured over the memory, and the last time I remember thinking about it was that
moment, then it just disappeared for months. How in the world does something that massive, that
frightening, happen in your life, and then you just stop thinking about it? Then one day, it just
popped back up. I was honestly so surprised and unsure of how I hadn't thought of it in so long.
That was almost more baffling than what we actually witnessed. I asked my friend,
the one who was there, just before I sent this if he'd felt the same fog thing, and he said
absolutely. He doesn't really like talking about that night, and he's told me so, but I can't
help bringing it up whenever possible, hoping that by talking it through, we'd find some sort
of explanation for what happened. Even as I typed the message, I felt like I'd asked him about
this a million times and just kept forgetting his answer. Maybe I have. That's not super uncommon,
I guess. Anyway, that's pretty much everything. I'm really sorry if you read all this and found it
underwhelming, but I really felt like I needed to convey as many details as I could possibly remember,
just in case someone reading this has had any sort of experience with any part of it. A mimic, a humanoid,
the memory loss, anything. I don't know. I really don't know what to make of all this.
All I have are the details of that night and my memory doing something bizarre afterward.
I have never known what to make of it, but the other guys post from a few weeks back honestly helped me after three years of grappling with the experience.
Just seeing something that might be similar makes me feel like I've learned as much about it as I honestly feel comfortable knowing.
I figured maybe somebody else might be in the same boat and need some sort of validation.
Just validation, I guess.
Anyway, thanks for reading.
I'm a 28-year-old male living right outside Chicago, over the border in northwest Indiana.
I'm currently pursuing a Bachelor of Arts and Sciences at Purdue.
I'm not exactly what you would call scientifically illiterate,
and I consider myself fairly mentally sound.
I've never had any problems on that front.
I have only ever openly discussed this once before
in a random Quora question I answered anonymously.
So I'm still not very good at discussing it openly,
and only two people who know me personally are aware of what happened.
I avoided talking about it for a long time because I feared the stigma associated with the topic,
especially in professional and scientific communities.
I was immensely relieved when the people I did open up to believed me without question,
which is why I'm typing this here today.
Please go easy on me.
All that being said, I've been trying for a few years to come to terms with something that happened to me.
It was almost five years ago, shortly after my 23rd birthday.
My father is very sick, so I was staying with my parents at the time to help take care of him and the house.
I woke up in the middle of the night.
It was warm, but I could hear and feel the breeze from the fans I need to sleep.
I reached over, grabbed my phone, and checked the time.
3.31.
I put the phone back down and tried to settle back into a comfortable position.
After a moment, I realized I could hear and feel a humming.
I knew right away it wasn't from my fans.
It was very deep, and I could actually feel it in my body.
Our house is near train tracks, so at first I thought it might be a train, but I quickly realized it wasn't.
While I was lying in bed wondering what it was, I noticed for the first time that my door was open.
My door is never open during the night, or even during the day.
Never, ever.
And I could see a light shining down the hallway into my room.
At first I thought maybe my dad was going to the bathroom and had his flashlight out,
but then I realized the light was wrong.
It wasn't the right color.
As I watched, it started to get brighter,
as though someone had set up a white-blue LED array at the end of the hall in the kitchen.
As the light got brighter, so did the humming.
I tried to jump up to investigate, fearing an intruder,
when I realized I couldn't move.
Let me clarify.
I could move my hands, my neck,
my feet, but it felt like someone had strapped down my limbs and torso. After a brief moment of utter
terror and confusion, I thought, okay, maybe this is sleep paralysis. I'd read about it before,
but never experienced anything like this. Right after that thought, I realized I could no longer
feel the bed under me. I started rising into the air and gently, floating, for lack of a better word,
to my doorway, and toward the light. I know how this sounds, but I'm one of a one of the air. I'm one
110% serious. Please stay with me. As I levitated through the doorway and into the hall,
I had a clear view into my parents' room. Their door is right next to mine on the left side of the
hall. If you step out of my room, turn 90 degrees, and take another step, you're in their room.
I could see them lying on the bed, and I started screaming, begging for help. They didn't move.
In fact, I couldn't even see them breathing, and at that moment I was convinced they were dead,
and I was next.
That moment of pure, unadulterated panic caused something to snap.
In the blink of an eye, I found I could move my arms again, and I flailed helplessly in the air.
I eventually got my hands on the doorframe and clung on for dear life,
because in that moment I truly believed it was a matter of life and death.
To my dismay, my fingers slowly started to slip as I continued to be pulled inexorably down the hall toward the kitchen.
I dug my nails in as hard as I could to stop it.
Then, in a quick burst of pain and terror,
I lost my grip and continued to float.
A few more seconds of terrifying levitation,
and I was in the kitchen,
floating with the top of my head facing our back door.
It's a large sliding glass door,
and I could see that the light was coming from just outside it.
Something as bright as the sun was hovering right above our pool.
We have a large in-ground pool almost.
in the middle of the backyard, which is surrounded by a 10-foot privacy fence.
Whatever this was had to be directly over the water, maybe a couple of feet off the ground.
I took this in within a heartbeat and was still in a state of terror I'll never adequately
explained when I felt a breeze. My back door was wide open, but I can't tell you if it had
been open all along, or if it had just opened. At that moment, I slowly began to settle back onto the
floor. I felt the cold surface against my back as my shirt lifted slightly. Right as I touched the ground,
I saw them. If I thought I was afraid before, it was nothing compared to this. One stepped in and
stood over me on my left side. Even from my perspective on the floor, I could tell this thing was
huge. If I had to guess, I'd say at least seven foot ten to eight feet tall. We have nine foot
ceilings in the kitchen, and its head was surprisingly close to the ceiling. The light was so painfully
bright at this point that I didn't get to see a lot of detail because it was silhouetted by the light behind us.
Two more entered and stood on either side of my shoulders, near the door, almost like guards.
Keep in mind all of this happened quickly, and at that moment I began to realize what might be going on.
The terror was unspeakable. I remember thinking they looked nothing like the movie portrayals.
They were skeletal, and their skin seemed, well, I don't know what it was.
but it wasn't like ours.
The one standing to my left
held something in its hand.
As I turned my neck to get a better view,
I could see a little more of its form.
Its fingers, Christ, I can't describe
what seeing those fingers did to me.
They were almost spider-like,
way too long, with too many joints.
To this day, that's probably the most haunting image.
It was clutching something black,
maybe gunmetal or dark silver.
It reminded me of an iPhone that was turned off, but it was thinner, shaped more like a remote
or a short rod with a squareish shape and rounded edges, a smooth, glassy thing.
As its fingers moved over it, every muscle in my body tensed up.
My lungs filled as if they'd been forcefully expanded, and every limb shot straight out like
I was a plank of wood.
My jaw clenched so tightly I thought my teeth might shatter.
I lost all control.
the only thing I could move were my eyes, and even that was limited.
It was like the signals from my nervous system were completely hijacked,
and some other signal was overriding them.
The two behind me, above me, I was still on my back, moved closer,
and I started to rise off the floor again.
I felt fingers on my shoulders as I began to hover out the door.
The second I got outside, the light became overwhelmingly bright,
and then, nothing.
I woke up in my bed at 5.45 a.m., sweating profusely. My stomach hurt.
I got up and started my morning routine, trying to dismiss the experience as just a dream,
and it worked, until I was about to get in the shower and noticed a sharp pain.
I looked in the mirror and saw bruises everywhere, arms, ankles, thighs, but the worst were
on my shoulders and back. They clearly looked like handprints, albeit elongated ones.
I threw up almost instantly.
I pulled myself together and went back to my room.
I saw the doorframe and I saw the scratches.
They lined up with my fingers.
There was wood and blood under my fingernails.
I've never come to terms with it.
My fiancé has encouraged me to share,
but it still feels deeply uncomfortable and jarring to walk through it.
As I type this, my hands feel like they're sub-zero,
and my whole body is shaking.
I'm sure if I asked my fiancé, she'd say I'm excited.
extremely pale, even more than usual. This happens every time I think about it. Many nights spent
doing research, watching YouTube videos of uphologists, reading reports. It's always the same
physiological response. After a lot of reading and watching, I realized I'd had another experience
when I was five. It's my clearest childhood memory and my earliest. Most of my childhood is
hazy. I have only snapshots. But this memory is exponentially clearer,
than anything else. Until recently, I shrugged it off as a quirk of being young. I was never the
imaginative child who claims to see what they imagine. I always had a firm grasp of reality
versus imagination, which is why this earlier memory stands out. I was five. It was Easter
morning, and I woke up excited to see my Easter basket. My mom always went overboard,
and it was essentially Christmas in spring, only child perks. I jumped up and snuck out of my
room. It was just before dawn, still dark, but the horizon was starting to glow with dawn light.
I crept down the hallway, aware my parents were still asleep, hoping they'd wake soon so I could
dive into a giant basket of candy and toys. As I neared the end of the hallway and peeked into the
living room, I saw it. At first, I thought my parents were up, but as I got a better look,
I realized this thing was big, tall, and gray, and something about its skin.
made me think of short fur. Naturally, I assumed it was the Easter Bunny, or my dad dressed as the
Easter Bunny. The exact form alludes me. It was just tall and gray. The weird thing is that when I
picture it in my mind, the rest of the scene is crystal clear. Everything except this being. It's like
someone put a blur filter over it, the kind they used to obscure faces on TV. Maybe that's where I got the
impression of fur, or maybe it was genuinely blurry like active camouflage, or it was obscured
afterward, assuming this memory is what I believe it to be. As I said, that experience can't be
proven physically, so I used to shrug it off. But it still pops into my thoughts sometimes,
like when I go to the dentist. Everything is fine until they lay me back with the light in my eyes
and the drills and suction going, and suddenly I feel a primal terror. Since the main encounter, the
Easter Bunny memory is less frequent, but it still happens. All these tiny and not-so-tiny
details I never really thought about before now make a scary kind of sense in light of the experience
I wrote about. I don't know for sure what happened to me. I'm not going to pretend I do. All I know
is it wasn't a dream, it wasn't sleep paralysis, and I've never slept walked. There was physical
evidence of something happening. I'm angry at myself for trying to suppress it and not documenting
everything, although the scratches are still visible on my parents' doorframe. I can definitively
rule out what it wasn't. And after eliminating other possibilities, well, you know how that saying
goes. I apologize for any spelling or grammatical mistakes. As I mentioned, I'm on an iPhone,
and at this point my hands are shaking like I'm in a freezer. If anyone has questions, I'd be happy
to try answering them. But what I really want is to hear from people who've had similar experiences.
is, how it compares, what's the same, what's different. I contacted the mutual UFO network,
and they did a phone interview for two or three hours, then gave me the name of a hypnotherapist
in Chicago. But the whole thing left a bad taste in my mouth, because they kept trying to spin it
as a positive experience, saying the beings were benevolent. I can conclusively say there was
nothing benevolent about them. They may not have been overtly malevolent, but they were utterly
unconcerned with my well-being. I looked into one's eyes. Most of its face was shadowed,
but I could see its eyes, and there was nothing kind or benevolent there. In that moment,
I was simply a thing, not a sentient being to it. It didn't necessarily feel robotic,
more like aloof. I could be mistaken, but I'm not mistaken that it was in no way, shape,
or form a positive experience. Since then, I've been diagnosed with severe abnormal hormonal
imbalances. I already had nerve damage and an implanted neurostimulator in my spine, so I've had a lot
of scans done. It was put in when I was 16 after an electrocution injury that fried most of the
nerves in my left leg. They've examined my brain many times, but now I can't have an MRI
because of the spinal implant. The CT scan revealed an abnormal mass in my brain that wasn't there
in previous scans. They say it's benign, but they can't see it in high enough resolution.
to make a definite diagnosis.
I also have a strange black object under the skin of my left kneecap,
exactly where the nerve damage is,
like a piece of lead or something.
I tried having it removed once,
but the doctor couldn't get it out
and said it wasn't bothering me or causing problems,
so I should leave it.
Aside from the nerve damage,
everything else arose soon after the experience.
I have another strange side effect,
although I'm not 100% sure if it's,
caused by the neurostimulator changing my body's EM field or something else entirely.
I blow out light bulbs. I can document it. Friends, family, professors, and even strangers have
witnessed it. It happened so reliably that based on my proximity to certain types of bulbs,
I can almost predict when it'll happen. I used to keep a lamp next to my bed, and the bulbs kept
burning out or exploding. I tried different sockets, tested everything with a multimeter. Nothing was
abnormal. But moving them away from me fixed the issue. A professor in the engineering department
even took an interest, thinking I was joking him until he witnessed it himself. I once walked down
a hallway with a low ceiling, and four fluorescent bulbs burned out in sequence as I passed under them.
It happens all the time, but it's more of an odd quirk than a true problem. If we ever figure
out the exact cause, I'll definitely post it. I'm sure I left some things out.
and I've rambled on quite a bit.
I'm sorry, it's the anxiety.
If you've had a similar experience,
I'd really appreciate your insight,
what was similar and what was different.
I've thought about doing the hypnotherapy,
but a bigger part of me doesn't want to know.
I'm convinced that whatever happened
after my memory stops was horrific.
I can't explain it.
It's just a feeling.
Absolutely nothing about the experience was pleasant,
and I can't imagine anything good about being taken.
to those who've had similar experiences.
Does it get better?
Does it go away?
Or will I always have these subconscious triggers?
I suspect it won't just disappear.
If I try to watch a movie about abduction,
like fire in the sky or the fourth kind,
I have an overwhelming physical reaction.
I watch a ton of horror movies,
my favorite genre,
and I've never had a reaction like that to anything else.
I lose all color.
start shaking uncontrollably, my jaw chatters as if I'm freezing, and my hands become clammy and cold.
I've even blacked out once.
Those two movies are by far the worst, but I have lesser reactions to others or to situations
that vaguely remind me of it.
Sometimes, when I'm lying in bed at night and everything is quiet, I get absolutely
terrified that I'll feel that vibration or see that light again.
I guess I just want someone who's gone through something similar to tell me
gets better, but I don't know if it ever will.
I remember the exact moment I first pulled up to Redwood Glen Mill.
Even in that early light, the whole place looked worn and tired, like it had seen too many
storms and never quite recovered.
I hopped out of my old pickup and felt the ground crunch under my boots, a reminder of
how remote this spot really was.
No paved roads or fancy signage, just gravel, timber, and the low hum of machinery starting
to wake up. The mill itself loomed ahead, this hulking mass of corrugated metal that dominated the
clearing. They called the main saw Big Ripper, and you could tell right away why. Even from a distance,
it stood out like some mechanical beast, cables and blades jutting everywhere. I'd heard stories
about saws that could rip clean through a three-foot trunk in seconds, but actually seeing it
up close, sent a jolt of nervous energy through my gut. I tried not to focus.
too much on those rough edges. At that hour, our little crew usually gathered by the office trailer,
sipping coffee that tasted more like bitter water and swapping small talk to wake ourselves up.
We had Leroy, our supervisor, scanning the daily logs on a clipboard. We had Jeff, who cracked
corny jokes that nobody really laughed at, and me, leaning against the trailer wall, taking it
all in. Once we drained our cups, we spread out to our station.
The bunkhouses weren't far off.
Some old trailers scattered behind the main yard.
It amazed me that a few thin walls were all that separated me
from the noise of logs rolling in at all hours.
When I did manage to sleep, it was usually a restless doze.
The nights here weren't exactly quiet.
Machinery word, tree branches tapped on tin roofs,
and occasionally there was this weird echo,
like something was moving around by the fences.
People said it was nothing, raccoons, maybe a stray dog.
But I overheard whispers.
A veteran named Gus claimed he spotted footprints near the log pile that didn't belong to any of us.
He tried laughing it off at dinner, but his eyes told a different story.
Nobody likes entertaining the idea of intruders,
especially when there are rumors floating around about sabotage at other mills.
We brushed it aside, but it still nagged at me later that night.
The next morning, I joined a group clearing debris near the log deck.
As we hauled broken branches and stray bark off to the burn pile, I started picking up on tension in the air.
People were glancing around more, double-checking the fence line.
A few days before, there had been reports on the radio about tree spiking in northern counties.
Something about metal spikes hammered into trunks to wreck cutting equipment.
It sounded like a grim urban legend, but we all knew it had happened in real life to other crews.
There wasn't much talk of it, though, didn't want to jinx ourselves.
Thing is, Redwood Glen wasn't exactly the pinnacle of security.
We were far from any town, practically in the middle of nowhere, with miles of forest around us.
The idea that someone could sneak in without us noticing felt too easy to dismiss.
But every so often, Leroy would hover by Big Ripper, scanning the yard, as if waiting to catch someone out of place.
By the time we finished our shift that day, I was bone-tired and more jumpy than usual.
Back at the bunkhouse, I lay on my bunk listening to the wind scraped branches against the thin metal walls.
My co-worker on the top bunk dozed off, but I just stared at the flickering overhead bulb,
wondering if those strange footprints were more than just rumor.
Some of the others tried to lighten the mood over a few beers, telling jokes about Bigfoot or local legends.
But under the forced laughter, you could tell we weren't entirely convinced it was just silly talk.
We'd all heard enough to know that sometimes, people do crazy things to make a statement.
And if a spike was out there, hidden in any one of those massive logs, that spelled danger for
everyone in the mill.
I tried to shrug it off.
We had a job to do, right?
Show up before dawn, cut wood, ship it out, get paid.
but I found myself craning my neck at dinner, peering out the window into the darkness beyond the yard
lights. I swore I saw movement just past the tree line, but when I blinked, it vanished. That's the thing
about Redwood Glen. Your mind is never quite at ease. Every shadow feels a little too long,
every bump in the night a little too close, and I had no clue how quickly that tension would
explode into something far worse. I woke up feeling like the air itself was taunting me.
Heavy, claustrophobic, just plain wrong.
Over in the bunk my roommate was already gone,
leaving behind a half-empty mug of cheap coffee on the rickety table.
I gave myself a pep talk, telling myself it was just another day at Redwood Glen Mill,
just another round of logs, saws, and the steady hum of machinery.
When I got to my station, Leroy was pacing, clipboard in one hand,
and a deep scowl etched into his face.
He kept mumbling about how we were behind.
on orders and telling me I'd need to hustle. I remember shrugging, trying to hide my nerves.
In the back of my mind, a question simmered. Were those whispers of sabotage just rumors, or
something worse? The morning began like any other. We examined Big Ripper, made sure the belts
were secure, and tested the blade with a low spin. Everything sounded smooth, no rattle, no squeal.
It was oddly reassuring, so I let that tension seep out of my mind.
shoulders. As the first log arrived, I motioned for the loader operator to roll it onto the feed
track. That log looked normal at first glance. Long, rugged bark, a few knot holes, nothing we hadn't
seen a thousand times before. I threw a lever guiding it forward. The saw roared to life,
that familiar shriek of steel against wood. But a couple seconds in, the pitch shifted,
like the machine was biting into something denser than usual. A high-pitched,
whale tore through the mill louder than I'd ever heard. My hand shot to the lever desperate to stop the feed, but it was too late. In a flash, something inside Big Ripper gave way. I saw sparks. Someone screamed. It might have been me, or it might have been the loader guy, I couldn't tell. The blade blew apart with a thunderous bang. Shrapnel whirled through the air, shards glinting under the fluorescent lights. I was knocked backward, ears ringing so fiercely I could barely think straight.
The world seemed to spin. My knees hit the ground, and the pain that sliced up my arm told me a chunk of metal must have found its mark.
The taste of iron filled my mouth, and when I spat, there was blood on the floor. My brain struggled to register the chaos.
Co-workers yelling, alarms screaming, the heavy thud of something crashing onto the concrete.
Smoke or dust swirled, making it tough to see who was hurt or how bad. I forced my self.
up, adrenaline pumping. My arm stung like fire. I pressed a shaky hand to it, and my fingers
came away smeared red. Somebody lunged toward the shut-off switch for the mill's conveyor system,
while Leroy barked frantic orders. People were stumbling, trying to dodge the scraps of wood and
twisted metal scattered everywhere. Then I spotted the log. It had split open,
revealing a vicious rust-flect spike driven straight into its core. The thing glimmered in a
sickening way, like it was proud of what it had done. For a second, I couldn't wrap my head
around it. This was no random accident. Someone had hammered that spike in there. Terror turned to
anger as the reality sank in. Sabotage. Those rumors we'd heard about activists spiking logs to
sabotage mills weren't just tall tails. This was it, right in front of me, lying amid the
wreckage of Big Ripper and the blood on the floor. A co-worker grabbed my shoulder trying to steady me.
My vision swam, and the pain in my arm pulsed harder than any throbbing I'd felt in my life.
I gritted my teeth, stumbling forward as Leroy yelled for someone to call an ambulance.
But we were hours away from any decent hospital,
so another guy hollered about using a pickup to get me,
and whoever else was hurt, to the clinic.
I let them drag me away from the saw's shattered remains,
every step jarring the torn flesh in my arm.
A small part of me still wanted to check on the others.
see how badly they were injured, but my body was on the verge of shutting down.
My mind kept latching onto the image of that spike.
I pictured the person who had driven it in, hammering away with no care for the carnage it might cause.
Someone got me onto a makeshift stretcher.
I leaned my head back, refusing to pass out.
My breath sounded ragged and weasy in my own ears.
It took everything I had not to black out, but I knew if I did,
I might never get another chance to see the sunlight glinting.
off the mill roof again. As they hoisted me into the pickup bed, I caught a final glance of the shop
floor, twisted metal scattered everywhere, co-workers trembling, bloodstains trailing across the concrete.
The entire mill seemed frozen in shock. Leroy climbed in beside me, shaking so hard he could
barely dial his phone. His voice cracked as he spoke to the dispatcher, trying to explain the disaster.
I closed my eyes, clutching my arm, my thoughts bouncing between.
between pain and outrage, between fear and the gut-wrenching truth that someone had targeted us.
Before the truck peeled off, I heard new voices echoing in the yard, a wild mixture of terror
and disbelief. A spike in one log was all it took to turn Redwood Glen into a nightmare zone,
and now, we were going to find out just how bad one act of sabotage could hurt us all.
I remember waking up to a piercing white glare overhead, my head buzzing like a broken radio.
It took me a few seconds to recognize I was in a hospital room.
My arm, battered from the explosion at the mill, throbbed dully beneath layers of gauze.
The entire space smelled of disinfectant and stale coffee, and I could hear the rhythmic beep of monitoring machines nearby.
A nurse appeared at my side, her eyes sympathetic.
She leaned in and told me they'd managed to remove the biggest fragments of shrapnel.
I was lucky, she said.
No main artery had been severed, though I'd lost.
lost a sickening amount of blood. That was a tough pill to swallow, knowing how close I'd come
to something even worse. I noticed the stiff bandaging on two of my fingers and felt a pang of dread.
She explained gently that the damage was severe, and I'd need additional surgeries.
The rest of her words blurred, but the message sank in. I would never regain full use of my
right hand. That would have been tough to handle under any circumstances.
but the knowledge that this was no random accident, this was sabotage, gnawed at my insides.
As I stared at the bandages, my mind began looping through questions.
Who hammered that spike into the log?
Did they realize how much pain they'd cause?
And if they did, did they even care?
I drifted in and out of sleep for the next couple of days.
The staff checked my vitals and changed dressings while doctors murmured in the hall about follow-up surgeries.
When Leroy finally showed up, he had a haunted look.
There were dark circles under his eyes, like he hadn't rested in days.
He told me the authorities had swarmed Redwood Glen after the incident.
News crews, cameras, the whole circus.
Our story had become a headline.
Eco terror at local sawmill was plastered across every channel.
It made me feel exposed, like the entire world was gawking at my mangled arm.
I asked about my co-workers, and Leroy's voice lowered.
Three others had been heard in the blast, none as badly as me, but one guy took a flying chunk of metal to the leg.
A few folks had minor wounds, cuts on their faces or arms.
Some watchers on shift had dodged most of the debris, but the shock did a number on everybody's psyche.
And then there was the log, that single sabotaged trunk that nearly took my life.
A couple of days later, I was propped up in the same.
bed, mindlessly flipping through stale daytime TV, when a local reporter somehow snuck past
the nurses. She poked her head into my room, microphone in hand, asking if I had any statement
to make for the news. The frustration boiled inside me. I was half-medicated, confused, terrified
for my future, and she wanted a sensational sound bite. I told her to leave. She flashed an
apologetic smile and mumbled something about the public's right to know.
But the heaviness in my stare must have convinced her she'd gone too far.
That night, sleep was impossible.
My dreams turned into chaotic flashes,
the shriek of the blade, shards of metal spinning,
me clutching my arm.
Even in that hospital bed, I felt like I was still at Redwood Glen,
bracing for the next disaster.
Whenever I managed to doze off, I'd jerk awake,
half expecting to see the silhouette of someone hammering a spike into my IV pole.
Leroy came by again just before I was discharged.
He said Redwood Glen had shut down temporarily.
The company had rushed to install metal detectors and new safety protocols,
but production had ground to a halt.
Word was the entire operation might be sold if they couldn't guarantee worker safety.
He looked devastated, like the place he'd dedicated years to had been gutted from the inside.
I finally got to go home, though home didn't feel much like a company.
My family tried to help me settle in, cooking meals, fluffing pillows, making sure I took my meds on time.
But I couldn't silence the anger pumping through my veins.
This was supposed to be a steady job, a place where the biggest dangers were the ones we were trained for.
Mechanical failures, missteps around heavy logs, not sabotage, not some hidden piece of metal waiting to turn my life upside down.
My phone buzzed nonstop with calls from coworkers, some sounding enraged, some just plain scared.
One close friend confessed he was so rattled he hadn't been able to sleep for more than a couple hours a night.
He was paranoid someone else might have set spikes.
Another told me he was quitting, said he couldn't face the daily tension anymore,
always glancing over his shoulder for hidden threats in the logs.
It felt like Redwood Glen was disintegrating piece by piece, torn up.
apart by the memory of that single morning. A local radio station invited me to share my story on the air.
I refused. Dealing with the press didn't appeal to me. My arm still stung every time I shifted in
my makeshift recliner, and I couldn't hold a cup of coffee without trembling. My mind raced back to
the battered log, each time conjuring up that savage spike. Would they catch whoever did it?
Would the saboteur be proud to see me like this, half crippled, struggling to button my shirt?
The physical therapy was grueling.
The therapist tried to mask her pity by cheering my baby steps forward,
wiggling a few digits on my right hand,
fighting through scar tissue.
But I saw the look in her eyes whenever I flinched.
She knew I was battling more than just torn muscles.
I was grappling with sleepless nights, nasty daydreams,
a constant hum of anxiety that never let up.
Not long afterward, Leroy called to tell me Redwood Glen was limping back to life.
Metal detectors beeped over every log.
New security guards patrolled the perimeter,
and the main saw had been replaced with a slower, supposedly safer model.
But morale was shot.
Half the crew wanted out, afraid of another spiking incident.
Some openly talked about revenge or teaching those activists a lesson,
which scared me more than I wanted to admit.
Anger was swirling around like a storm,
and I couldn't see a clear path forward.
Eventually, the time came.
for me to decide whether I'd ever go back. I'd always prided myself on being a dedicated worker,
the sort who showed up early and stayed late. But now, I couldn't imagine stepping onto that concrete
floor again, hearing the saw roar, and wondering if a hidden spike might rip the blade apart again.
My heart pounded at the mere thought of walking past Big Ripper's replacement. So I made the call.
I quit Redwood Glen for good.
The decision felt like a betrayal of everything I'd known,
my livelihood, my routine, my identity.
But every new ache in my wounded arm reminded me
that I had to protect what little peace I had left.
My family needed me alive, not living in perpetual fear.
Some nights I still flash back to the moment the blade shattered,
the air thick with metal shards and choking dust.
I see that spike lodged in the log,
mocking our idea of safety with its cold glint.
But at least now I don't have to stand in front of another saw,
waiting for history to repeat itself.
I wish I could say I found closure.
Maybe I never will.
Part of me hopes they catch whoever's responsible,
make them see the devastation they caused,
and another part of me just wants to forget it all,
to stop picturing that sabotage every time I hear heavy equipment.
In any case, Redwood Glen is behind,
me now, the scars are permanent reminders that no paycheck is worth risking life and limb against
an invisible enemy, someone willing to use nails and metal rods to prove a point. And whether they
cared or not about who got hurt, I still have to deal with the damage they left behind.
About a month ago, my friend asked if anyone had ever had strange experiences in southern Tennessee,
and a few other nearby places, particularly in the mountains. I had too much going on to respond
at the time, but my husband and I did have an experience there that I think is worth telling,
although most of our family doesn't know because we understand how they'd react, so we've never
told them. While I realize this post describes many over-the-top experiences, my husband and I both
went through the following exactly as I'll describe. I understand that not everyone will believe me,
but since this post contains deeply personal moments in my life, I ask that everyone please
keep comments respectful, whatever opinions you express on the subject matter. Thank you so much.
This story needs background to convey some factors that were potentially involved. I suspect the
events leading up to the trip to Tennessee may have had a direct relation to the severity of what we
experienced while there. I had never wanted to marry, neither had my now husband. Then we met each other.
We got engaged at ages 30 and 28 and had a two-year engagement.
We wanted our wedding to symbolize our true soul bond and decided to go completely non-traditional.
His giant family wanted a white-dress Catholic wedding, so we were at major odds with them from day one.
My fiancé and I began suffering a long run of exceptionally bad luck, along with some odd poltergeist activity at home.
It was nothing too major, so we mostly brushed it off,
except for one instance when we left the house and came back to find a red clown nose sitting front and center.
on our bathroom sink.
No one had keys to our place,
and we definitely didn't own a clown nose.
That one freaked us out.
When I told a friend something weird was going on
to the point I almost felt the wedding was cursed,
he tried to explain it away.
I said, watch,
something's going to happen today while he's getting his tucks,
I'm telling you.
I got one flabbergasted look for my friend
before my fiancé immediately called to say
there'd been a freak accident in the parking lot
while he was getting fitted,
and someone had totaled the back end of his truck.
That shut my friend right up.
Another glitch was my refusal to have my father walk me down the aisle.
I also refused a random stand-in just for tradition's sake.
I asked my younger brother, and he said he would be so honored.
We'd had some problems in the past, but he'd been clean for seven years, and we'd finally reconciled.
Losing our middle brother to a drunk driver had driven us apart for a while,
but later on, it brought us back closer.
Then, 40 days before the wedding, my younger brother, unintentionally, passed away in his mid-20s.
My fiancé and I drove over 16 hours, close to Point Pleasant West Virginia, to say goodbye.
I knew my brother, and I knew he wouldn't cross over easily after what he'd done, especially with my wedding around the corner and me counting on him.
It bothered me deeply. His viewing was closed to immediate family only.
He wasn't embalmed due to the complete auction.
autopsy required, he was covered in a handmade quilt up to his chin. We were instructed not to touch
him, although we ignored that. After saying our goodbyes, I walked to the end of his gurney and laid
my hands on his feet, like a supplicant. I told him I understood it was an accident and that I
forgave him. I told him that if he still felt he needed to make amends to me, he could do so by
calling forth my loved ones and those of my fiancé to come witness the wedding from the other side.
I asked him to bring our other brother, my fiancé's sister, grandparents, aunts, friends, calling them by name,
all the beloved souls who had already passed. Do this, I told him, and there will be no debt between us.
You can rest in peace. The looks on my family's faces were priceless, but it felt like something I needed to offer.
when i returned to new orleans i had a pendant made featuring my favorite picture of my two brothers i wrapped it around my bouquet and although to the guests it seemed i walked the aisle alone i knew both my sweet brothers were right beside me in spirit
they would never miss their sister's wedding especially with hector the passing actively dragging them across the veil to fulfil what he must have felt was his final obligation to the living
My new husband, Eli, and I, went to a rental cabin on Bluff Mountain for our honeymoon week.
I don't want to name the specific cabin in case I'm not supposed to, but I will say it was
very rocky with a raccoon theme.
Bluff Mountain is in Pigeon Forge, outside of Gatlinburg, in the Smoky Mountains.
I was living in New Orleans and had brought a double handful of fresh-picked gardenia blossoms
with me.
It was a symbolic offering to the mountain for hosting us on such a special occasion, no rituals
or anything. I simply arranged them on a wooden box with a fake bird and nest that sat on top of
the cabin's porch railing, and I sent up feelings of gratitude and joy. We went out to eat and
grab groceries. Upon arriving back at the cabin, the wooden bird box was smashed into a million
pieces all over the porch. It must have hit the ground hard to shatter so thoroughly. We figured maybe
a raccoon or bear had gotten to it. Then I noticed there were no flowers. I thought it could have
in the wind, but the leaves scattered around the porch were still exactly how we'd left them.
Gardignas aren't super light flowers, heavier than leaves, so it was weird they were gone while the
leaves stayed. I searched around the porch, stairs, and walkway, but found nothing. The next morning,
I went a little way down the driveway to pick some honeysuckle. About 20 feet from the porch,
I glanced down and did a double take. There were all my gardenias, piled up and flattened as
thin as crapes. There were no shoe prints, but it looked like more than one stomp was needed to
squash them that flat. Feeling unnerved, I walked away, wondering if the mountain didn't like my
offering after all, then laughing at myself for the thought. Night 1. Eli woke suddenly to what
sounded like something big banging on the support beams under the cabin. The front half of the cabin
was supported about 15 feet off the forest floor by giant wooden posts because it hung off the side of a hill.
He said the impact was so strong that the mirror on the wall vibrated, which shouldn't be physically
possible for anyone to do. Each time he started to drift back off, there was another bang.
Finally he got up. After one more cabin-shaking thud, he decided to wake me. Apparently, he'd been
waiting to see if I would wake up on my own so he'd know he wasn't imagining it.
But now he was completely alert.
Right as he reached for me, he heard the loudest bang slap
from the area between the sitting area and the kitchen,
right at the foot of the bed.
It was a one-room cabin.
He said it sounded like a giant book being dropped from high up,
but there was nothing there.
This bang was definitely inside the cabin.
He tried frantically to wake me,
but he said I was in such a deep sleep he actually thought something was wrong,
that he could barely tell I was breathing.
Then this strange metallic jangling noise started up behind the TV, directly across the cabin from our bed.
He said it went on forever, but he was too scared to go check, especially since it was right by the huge windows and near where he'd heard the noise inside.
It was this insistent buzzing, jangling, that finally woke me.
I remember it being so hard to come back to consciousness, like swimming through blackness to get back to myself.
I kept asking,
what the hell is that noise, thinking it was an alarm someone left set.
When I finally managed to get up to smash the offending noise maker, the trilling stopped.
Exhausted, I fell back onto my pillow.
Eli told me about the banging.
He was obviously terrified, and while I believed him, I was so numb and out of it that I had no emotional response.
I was overwhelmed with a debilitating fatigue and just zonked out until morning.
Normally I'm a very light sleeper, especially in new places, but almost every night during this trip was like that.
The second my head hit the pillow, it was as if I fell into a coma.
It was extremely deep but not restful.
Waking up was worse.
It literally felt like I had to claw my way out of unconsciousness, and it left me exhausted.
Day and night, too.
While doing my makeup in the infamous shaking mirror the next morning, I finally heard the full story from Eli.
I tried to talk it out logically.
Maybe a bear was rubbing against the post.
But he insisted it was solid bangs.
Like a giant fist, no way it was a bear.
And there was also that bang from the center of the floor on the inside of the cabin.
That reminded me of the alarm.
I was all set to disable it.
At the exact second I mentioned it, that horrible buzzing noise started up again behind the TV.
We both jumped.
I joked,
that's some interesting timing.
Looking behind the TV,
I realized it wasn't an alarm clock
but an old landline phone with a bell buzzer,
which explained the horrid noise.
Of course, I had to answer it.
There was a minute of silence
and then bursts of static.
It sounded like someone was talking,
but it was so garbled by static
I couldn't make out any words.
I told them to move around to get better reception.
Was it cabin management?
Still silence and occasional static bursts.
I hung up. I was more amused than anything, especially seeing Eli's face.
As soon as I set the phone down, he unplugged it.
He said management had both our cell numbers, so it was probably a prank call from someone who'd stayed before,
but we weren't playing along and ending up in a deliverance scenario.
Smart man. The phone stayed unplugged.
That night we were in the hot tub on the deck.
It was around the back, enclosed on three sides by a kind of gazebo,
with no bright lights nearby to avoid bug swarms.
As we relaxed, I was facing the wooden slats of the enclosure,
and Eli was facing me in the forest.
I kept admiring this large blue light behind the enclosed end.
It was about the size of a cantaloupe and looked bright,
but the glow over us in the hot tub was pretty muted.
I assumed it must be some kind of LED, though I'd never seen a blue that shade.
All the other cabin lights were bright and orange.
I distinctly remember commenting on how nice it was for mood lighting.
Eli also looked at it and agreed.
We stayed out there about two hours.
When we decided to get out, the light blinked on and off in a seemingly deliberate pattern,
before shining a few more seconds and going dark.
We both remarked how strange it was that the light burned out like that.
I planned to call the next morning to request a new bulb.
When I woke up, I walked around back to see what kind of fixture needed replacing.
There was nothing there, no pole, no wiring, nothing that could produce a light.
The management confirmed they'd never installed one in that spot because of unstable soil.
Whatever the light was, it was definitely there for the two hours we were soaking.
It didn't turn off. It flat out disappeared.
From this second night on, after coming inside, I started getting goosebumps,
and the hair on my neck stood on end every time I passed the open bathroom.
The bathroom was next to the bed area.
Lying in bed, you could see the bathroom sink and a small window above it that opened onto the woods behind the hot tub.
It had no curtain.
I still thought the blue light was man-made at this point, but I could swear something was looking in through that window.
I'd been leaving the bathroom door open because I liked seeing the forest from the bed,
but now I tried to keep it shut without Eli noticing I was creeped out.
The next morning, Eli told me that any time he began,
to drift off, a resounding bang on the posts under the cabin would jolt him awake. He swore it was
like something new exactly when he was closing his eyes. He never got up, so how could it tell?
Once again, I was no help, sleeping like the dead.
Night 3. After scrubbing ourselves in the cabin's heavily sulfuric water, we got ready for
bed. Walking from the bathroom to the bed, I remembered I'd forgotten to shut the bathroom door.
Since Eli was already in bed watching me, I just kept going, telling myself to stop being ridiculous,
although I was sure I felt eyes at that window.
I had checked before and saw nothing unusual, but that feeling persisted.
Then Eli quietly asked if I could shut the door.
Why? I asked.
Because that window gives me the creeps, he replied.
It was eerie validation.
That night, I had some disturbing dreams I can't really recall.
Eli, however, experienced a severe bout of sleep paralysis, SP,
though he initially swore it wasn't SP because he said he sat up, kicked, and yelled at the figure.
Now, he agrees it was probably SP.
Either way, he woke to eerie laughter and saw what he described as a grudge-type woman
standing at the end of the bed, laughing at him.
I wouldn't wake up.
He said she wore a white dress, had pale skin, black eyes, and a horrible mouth,
and long black hair partially obscuring her face, surrounded by swirling black mist.
She reached for him, and he sat up, yanking his legs to his chest.
He said he started yelling at her to GTFO and kicked at her.
She faded out, laughing.
He said he woke several times to her grabbing his ankles and giggling throughout the night.
I still wouldn't wake up.
Night four.
It was more of the same.
Eli had repeat SP experiences with the same lady in white, even more intense.
Also, I realized a small trinket I'd brought for luck, left on the shelf next to my side of the bed, was missing.
The cabin was tiny, and we tore it apart over the next two days, but it never turned up.
It was worthless monetarily, so I don't think it was stolen.
Night 5
Whenever I sat up on the edge of the hot tub to cool off, I felt that same sense of being watched I'd gotten from the back.
window. I'd literally break out in goosebumps. It was a Friday, and we could hear a group of
guessing college kids partying some distance away, close enough to catch their screaming, whoops,
and cheers. Not wanting some creepy, wood-savvy lurker to watch me, we went inside.
Not much else happened that night beyond troubled sleep. At one point, Eli woke to frantic banging
on a support post, but it didn't last long or repeat. Night six, final.
This was an extra night we received due to the terrible sulfuric water.
The filters needed replacing, so they comped us a night.
The water wasn't dangerous, just really, really stinky, like odalaturd a rotten egg.
It was bad.
Despite our weird nights, we'd been having a blast during the day.
Riding rides, eating great food, trying good wine.
Gatlinburg is amazing to visit.
So, on our last night in the hot tub, everything was great, until I started to start.
started feeling that intense, hostile gaze from the tree line for the second night in a row.
This time it felt worse.
Every time I sat up to cool off, I'd unconsciously hug myself and sink back into the water.
I reminded my husband that in all the years he'd known me, I'd never been the paranoid or scared type.
But there was absolutely something aggressive out there watching me, and it wasn't one of the college kids.
We could hear them again.
Eli pulled me over to the covered side.
Within five minutes of my moving, we heard a tremendous crash in the brush behind us,
then something big stomping directly below us.
A few seconds later there was more crashing, and a second set of stomping footsteps.
They sounded human in rhythm, but no one on packed earth should be that loud.
We both bolted inside, still dripping.
Eli says that night was the worst for banging on the posts.
He said there was banging on at least three widely separated posts,
and it went on most of the night.
Whenever the banging stopped, he'd doze off,
and the white-dressed woman would appear.
Again, I slept like the dead.
Morning of day seven, leaving day.
Something demanded my attention, pulling me toward consciousness.
At first, it sounded like a parade of horses
clip-clopping down a paved street.
Then I remembered where I was.
The sound was coming from the roof.
I checked my phone.
Just after 8 a.m. on a side.
I groaned, thinking roofers must be working on the cabin, but why wouldn't they know the cabin
was still booked until 11 a.m.? I glanced at Eli. He looked pale and was breathing very
slowly, obviously exhausted. I gave him a half-hearted poke, but he was out cold. He'd been
dealing with so much, I let him sleep. At least it was morning, sunny, and not something going
bump at 4 a.m. Then I wondered what roofers worked on Sundays. I listened more carefully.
It wasn't exactly a hammering.
It really sounded like hooves pounding the roof.
I decided I'd have to ask them to hold off until we checked out.
I pulled back the covers and swung my legs off the bed.
The second my feet touched the floor, the pounding on the roof stopped instantly,
and the door handle to the main entrance, three or four steps in front of me,
started rattling, violently.
There were two things I noticed.
There was no pause between the sound on the roof and the door handle.
It moved from above me to right in front of me with no delay.
The top half of the door was glass with a sheer curtain, and the sun was shining directly through it.
I could plainly see that no one was near the door, yet the handle was shaking uncontrollably.
I yanked my feet back onto the bed and ducked under the covers like a terrified kid.
The moment my feet left the floor, the doorknob stopped rattling,
and the pounding on the roof resumed in the exact same spot, again, no pause.
I stared at Eli, torn over weather to wake him.
I was scared he'd wake up and hear nothing at all.
But then his eyelids fluttered open on their own.
Do you hear that? I whispered.
He said yes.
I felt so relieved I hadn't imagined it.
We stayed there whispering.
He also thought it sounded like a horse, or multiple hooves, but not quite metal.
The pounding was so strong we could see the mirror shaking,
glasses rattling, and cabinets quaking.
Whatever was on the roof was huge.
The pounding continued for about 35 minutes, from around 802 a.m. until 8.36 a.m.
Though I don't know how long it had been going on before it woke me, it was deafening and absolutely terrifying.
We lay there whispering about whether it was trying to break through the roof, though the glass doors would have been easier to smash.
Eli decided he would get up and look. I told him about the doorknob shaking when I tried.
After a moment's hesitation, he threw back his covers and stood.
The pounding stopped.
We both froze.
Then came a horrible grating noise sliding across the roof.
Our eyes went huge.
Was that claws?
I hissed in the softest voice I could manage.
Eli jumped back onto the bed and the banging resumed.
We had the quietest conversation ever
about whether we'd actually just heard giant claws on the roof.
It sure sounded like.
it. Eli finally grabbed his legally owned firearm from his bedside drawer and made a sudden
dash for the door. The pounding instantly stopped, and everything went silent, no running
footsteps or anything. The roof was completely empty. Given the cabin's location perched on the hill
with no close trees, there was nowhere something that big could hide or escape to without being seen.
We packed at lightning speed, but we did have one last quick smoke in the driveway.
it felt safer in open space.
While we were out there, we heard the group of partiers from the previous nights yelling for a missing friend.
We could hear the panic in their voices.
Where is he? He was with us last night.
They shouted his name over and over.
Eli and I tried to find them to help, or at least to ask if they'd seen or heard anything weird,
but the winding one-way dirt roads were confusing.
We think they might have been locals, and we were on rental cabin road.
that didn't connect to local ones.
We couldn't reach them.
I really hope they found him passed out drunk in a bush somewhere.
I have no idea what we encountered on that trip.
It showed elements of so many paranormal experiences,
orbs, strange phone calls, poltergeist activity,
cryptid-like behavior, and a lady in white.
Yet it really felt like one entity wearing different outfits, so to speak.
After we got home, everything went back to normal.
Though I'd asked my departed loved ones to bear witness to our wedding, specifically the blessed dead, and specifically only for the ceremony, none of this activity seemed like protective ancestors to me.
I leaned toward some kind of nature or elemental spirit, but that's just a guess.
Eli, on the other hand, says he thinks it was a bigfoot, even though he said otherwise at the time.
Anyway, that was our oh, so memorable honeymoon. If you made it this far, thank you for reading.
I'd love to hear any ideas on what we might have encountered.
Thank you and best wishes.
I've been working at this Michigan Nature Preserve for a while now,
and usually the biggest surprise I get is the occasional lost hiker
or an unexpected downpour.
That all changed one night when the storm clouds rolled in like a warning.
Rain hammered the roof of the tiny entrance booth I was stationed in,
and the wind rattled the windows so hard I thought they might crack.
Every flash of lightning lit up the forest in these stark white bursts, and each time I swore the
trees were shifting, like they were alive in ways they shouldn't be. I was supposed to clock out soon,
but my supervisor radioed me. Roads were flooding, and I needed to pack up before they got any worse.
I'd done this routine in bad weather before. Heck, I've practically lived at this park on rough
nights, but something in the air this time felt genuinely off. The booth light gave me just enough
illumination to see the sheets of rain pounding the dirt road. Beyond that, shadows ran together
like ink on wet paper. I double-checked the lock on the money box, then shoved my gear into my backpack.
The second I stepped outside, the downpour smacked me so hard I almost dove back in. Water was
pooling around my boots, and visibility was down to a few yards at best. My flashlight created
a jittery beam that kept bouncing off raindrops, making it hard to tell what was just a swaying
branch and what might be something else. Thunder cracked again, and I nearly dropped my keys.
It was so loud I felt the rumble in my chest. As I fumbled to secure the booth door,
a flicker of movement caught my attention. It wasn't just a gust of wind or a trick of the light.
there was a silhouette, tall and gangly, standing deeper in the darkness.
The way it shifted reminded me of an animal trying to walk upright, like it wasn't designed for two legs.
Rain soaked my jacket in seconds, but I couldn't tear my eyes away, because that shape was definitely looking back.
I tried to pretend it was just a deer or something harmless, but my gut told me otherwise.
I snapped out of my days long enough to break into a run for my car.
water splashed up my shins with every step.
My hands were shaking so badly I almost couldn't fit the key in the door.
By the time I got inside, my clothes were plastered to my skin,
and my heart hammered like it was trying to punch its way out.
Turning the key in the ignition, I heard the dreaded click of a dead engine.
I muttered a few choice words, praying it was just a hiccup.
On my second try, the engine coughed into life.
Lightning flared again.
And for a split second, I glimpsed that figure closer than before.
It's elongated limbs bent at eerie angles.
I jammed the car into drive and peeled out faster than I'd ever done in park property.
The radio, which should have been blasting my supervisor's voice, hissed with static.
Normally these things are built tough.
They've worked through hail and snow without a glitch, but now it was nothing but white noise.
Rain hammered the windshield the entire ride back.
My tires slipped more than once on the muddy road,
and it felt like the storm was trying to keep me from reaching the main lodge.
The headlights lit up the drizzle in a frantic swirl,
and even with the wipers going at full speed, I could barely see.
Every so often I thought I spotted something on the edge of my vision,
darting between the trees.
When I finally rolled into the lot, relief flooded me.
The office lights glowed faintly through the storm,
promising some scrap of normalcy.
I slowed to park, thinking maybe I'd imagined it all,
but a lean shape, impossibly quick,
zipped across the beams of my headlights.
It was thinner than anything I'd seen before,
limbs too long, posture almost predatory.
I killed the engine and sat there in stunned silence,
soaked and on edge.
Rain hammered the roof, and thunder rumbled,
but my focus was on the darkness beyond the lights.
Nothing else moved,
yet the hair on the back of my neck refused to settle.
I needed to get inside.
Let them know the night had taken a strange turn.
But for a moment, I just stayed put.
Listening to the storm and trying to convince myself,
I hadn't witnessed something that defied reason.
Eventually I mustered up the courage to hurry from my car to the office door.
I went in, dripping water all over the floor,
not really sure how I'd explain that I saw something
that looked nothing like a normal animal.
maybe it was stress
maybe it was just the storm
making me see shapes
I told myself that once the rain passed
everything would be fine
but deep down
I knew the park was different now
and I had a bad feeling
the night's events were only the beginning
I've always thought of myself
as pretty resilient
after that stormy night though
I noticed my senses were on high alert
every time a branch snapped or a leaf rustled
I'd spin around, expecting to see something lurking.
My co-workers teased me about being jumpy, but they didn't experience what I did.
It was like the forest had changed overnight, and I couldn't pretend otherwise.
That evening, I was assigned to do the final trail check before closing,
a standard duty where we make sure no one's stuck or lost.
I headed out around nine, with a headlamp and my usual gear.
The place officially shuts down at 11.
But we start clearing people early in case someone has an emergency, or the path is too dark to navigate.
Normally, the routine is simple enough.
Walk the main loop, call out a few, hey, anybody still out here, lines, and move on.
This time the walk felt different from the very start.
The first half mile passed in silence.
The quiet was unsettling.
No owls.
No nighttime insects humming.
My footsteps echoed in a way they never had before,
crunching leaves and twigs underfoot.
After a while I thought maybe this was me overreacting again.
But as I reached a bend in the trail,
something drifting on the breeze made my stomach turn,
a rancid smell, like soggy fur mixed with rotting vegetation.
It was strong enough to make me pause and cover my nose.
I swung my headlamp toward the trees,
trying to pinpoint the source.
Yet all I saw were dense trunks and shrubs shifting slightly in the breeze.
Further in, the odor grew more pungent, practically clinging to the air.
Just as I considered turning back early, a noise ripped through the silence.
A sound so distorted it was hard to believe it came from a living creature.
It was low-pitched, drawn out, almost like several voices melding into a single, agonized howl.
I froze for a second, scanning the darkness.
My heart hammered.
A second cry echoed from behind me, as if something else was calling out.
in response. The layering made it impossible to determine distance or direction. It was like the
whole forest throbbed with these eerie sounds. Fear jolted through me. I'd never encountered animals
like this in the preserve. Coyotes have their distinct yips, and owls have hoots, but nothing I knew
matched that alien cacophony. Normally I'd power through the full loop. We're not supposed to leave
until we're certain nobody's still on the trail, but my instincts were screaming.
that this was bigger than a normal wildlife risk.
Another roar burst through the air, closer this time, vibrating in my chest.
My legs started moving before I even realized it.
I turned around and headed back the way I came,
shining my headlamp left and right to make sure I wasn't about to run into anything.
Leaves crackled behind me at an alarming pace,
like something was mimicking my speed.
It's hard to keep calm when every step you take is matched by another set of footsteps.
steps. The path twisted in a serpentine pattern, forcing me to slow at corners. Each time,
I felt completely exposed. My breath came in ragged gasps, and sweat dripped down my temples
even though the evening was chilly. Eventually, I spotted a faint glow from the small lantern
near the trailhead. I pushed myself to move faster. My ankles wobbled on the uneven ground
a few times, but adrenaline forced me onward. The bizarre chorus still echoed.
shifting in tone until it felt almost metallic.
I could sense something pacing me from the shadows,
hidden just beyond the beam of my headlamp.
When I reached the trailhead at last, I was breathing hard,
scanning the forest behind me.
Only then did I realize how quiet it had become.
Whatever was chasing me had gone silent,
or maybe it was just waiting.
My hands trembled as I texted my supervisor,
saying the sweep was done, leaving out the details.
I wasn't ready to explain what it happened.
Clambering into my car, I locked the doors and stared at the black silhouettes of the trees.
They stood there, unresponsive, revealing nothing.
Even with the engine running, my nerves felt shot.
I can handle animals, but I've never confronted anything like that.
Part of me wanted to turn around, go back in, and prove I wasn't just being paranoid.
Another part insisted that was a terrible idea.
I managed to drive to the lodge and give a half-hearted report.
nobody asked many questions.
They were just relieved I'd done the sweep.
But in the back of my mind, I kept picturing those twisting shapes,
hearing those blended cries.
Something was out there, something I couldn't classify,
and the worst part was knowing I'd probably have to head back into the trails again soon.
The thought clung to me the rest of the night,
like a warning I couldn't ignore.
I started noticing everything that shouldn't be there,
strange tracks in the mud,
ominous scratch marks on the fence near the lodge, and a lingering odor nobody could explain.
My colleagues wrote it off as scavengers, or maybe just my imagination.
But I was done brushing it aside.
Something was definitely lurking among these old trails, and I was determined to figure out what.
I rummaged through my grandparents' old trunk at home, where I keep the protective charms my
family swears by.
I picked one I hadn't worn in years, a small carved symbol that always
struck me as both comforting and menacing. It felt right for what I was up against. After all,
the strange sightings weren't letting up, and I was convinced that the preserve held some presence
not found in any field guide. That night, I decided to return to the deepest part of the trail
network alone. Maybe it was a mistake, but I needed answers. My flashlight was upgraded with
fresh batteries, and I stowed a flare gun in my backpack just in case. Most people would say that
was overkill, but I'd experienced enough to know better. The moment I stepped onto the path,
the forest greeted me with a suffocating stillness. Each step sank into damp leaves,
as if the ground itself was trying to pull me in. Close to a clearing, the foul stench appeared
again, stronger this time, clinging to my nostrils and triggering a wave of nausea. My pulse thuddered,
against my eardrumbs. Keeping the flashlight beam steady, I scanned the trees. A flash of movement
flitted between thick trunks. It was so tall and unnaturally lean, disappearing before I could focus.
Unearthly howls rose in the distance, more jarring than before, like a chorus of distorted voices
echoing through a massive tunnel. With each new call I felt cornered, and my mind reeled at the thought
of multiple creatures roaming out there. Branches rustled overhead despite no wind. Dim yellowish
reflections, like eyes, winked in and out beyond the reach of my light. One was directly to my left,
another behind me, and a third deeper in the darkness. My breath turned ragged. I fumbled for the flare
gun, half thinking I might scare them off with a blinding flash. A loud snap erupted from a few
yards away, and I accidentally fired the flare. Crimson light seared the night, revealing shapes
crouched within the gloom. Their limbs bent in ways that made my skin crawl. The stench grew overpowering.
Instinct took over. I sprinted down the path, feeling brush snagging my clothes and leaving
scratches on my arms. The echoes of those howls followed me, accompanied by thrashing movements
that never seemed far enough behind.
I stumbled more than once,
struggling to keep my balance on the uneven trail,
but the surge of fear propelled me forward.
When I finally broke free into a small open area
near the main trailhead,
I whirled around, expecting to see them closing in.
The forest had gone eerily still again.
My flashlight trembled in my grasp,
casting shaky beams on bare ground and twisted tree roots.
No sign of those silhouettes.
Yet the odor lingered, as if the air itself had absorbed it.
I made it back to the parking lot in record time,
slammed my gear into my car, and dropped into the driver's seat, trying to catch my breath.
For a moment, I sat there in total disbelief, replaying the scene in my mind.
Although I managed to escape, I realized I'd just confirmed my worst suspicions.
There was more than one of those things, and they wanted me off their territory.
After returning, I considered warning the rest of the staff, but fear and pride clashed in my mind.
Who would believe me?
And yet, the truth pressed down on me.
Ignoring it was no longer an option.
I might not have discovered what these entities truly are, or how far their domain stretches,
but one fact burned itself into my thoughts.
The preserve belongs to them once the sun goes down, and I doubt they're leaving any time soon.
I remember the sun beating down on our station wagon as we bumped along the winding dirt road.
My grandfather, Marshall, was at the wheel, determined to find some perfect spot for the picnic
he'd been talking about all week.
My grandmother, Lucille, sat stiffly in the passenger seat, pretending to be calm.
In the back, I was crammed between my two aunts, Sherry and Marcia, who were bickering about who
was hogging the most space.
Mom was trying to referee, but her voice was nearly drowned out by the rumble of
gravel under the tires. Marshall finally spotted a clearing and pulled over. I was thrilled to escape
the cramped car, but it didn't take long for my eagerness to turn sour. The air itself seemed oddly
stagnant, too still, like the woods were keeping a secret. Normally I would have been running
around collecting wildflowers or climbing on old stumps, but something tugged at me to stay close to
everyone else. We started unloading the trunk. Lucille spread a blanket on a patch of grass, while
mom fussed over a basket of sandwiches. Marshall, who never explained himself, announced he was going
to look for something out past the tree line. The rest of us huddled in the clearing, trying not to
wonder why he'd stalk off without another word. My aunts usually loved exploring, but this time
they stayed put, fiddling with the cups and plates like they were afraid to wander too far.
As I helped lay out the plates, Sherry nudged me, eyes wide. She jerked her chin toward a
mound of dirt that looked freshly tossed. It sat just outside the ring of sunlight,
partly in the shade of an old oak. Stones were half buried on top, making it look like a little
grave, too big for a rabbit or a stray raccoon. My stomach felt heavy. I glanced at Lucille,
hoping for reassurance, but she avoided my gaze. She told us very firmly to leave that mound
alone. The shake in her voice made it clear she didn't have a good explanation.
Sherry and Marcia tried to shrug it off, saying we'd seen weird things in the forest before,
but I knew they were scared. The chatter we usually had on outings had vanished.
Even Mom was uncharacteristically quiet. Lucille busied herself laying out napkins,
though her hands trembled whenever she thought nobody was looking.
Hoping to distract ourselves, we set out the rest of the food. For a minute, it felt almost
normal again, like we could still turn this day around. But as we settled down,
Marcia stiffened. She pointed toward a thick branch overhead. A rope hung from it, a loop tied at the end,
gently rocking in the breeze that had finally stirred. We all froze. I tried to tell myself it was
some weird hunting setup, maybe a leftover snare or something. But a slow dread inched through me
as I realized this wasn't the kind of thing people just leave behind. Lucille glanced at it,
face drained of color and mumbled about, nothing to worry about, but it was a
obvious she wasn't convinced. All of us just sat there, rigid and uneasy, scanning the trees,
waiting for Marshall to come back, and wishing we hadn't driven so far from home. The quiet
started to feel suffocating. Each little crunch of leaves in the distance made us tense.
The picnic we'd planned so happily was devolving into a silent watch over that mound and that
rope. With every passing moment, I became more certain that something was deeply wrong,
and we were stuck in the middle of it,
waiting for a man who never showed fear
to return from somewhere deeper in the woods.
I remember all of us huddling together
after noticing that rope.
We were on edge,
debating if we should pack up and leave
or wait for Marshall to come back.
Nobody wanted to say it out loud,
but we all had the same unspoken question.
What if something was really wrong?
Lucille kept whispering,
It's just an old rope, that's all.
But it felt more like she was trying
to convince herself. Ants Sherry and Marcia stayed close by mom, glancing around as if the forest
itself might lash out. Even the breeze rustling through the leaves felt off. Every flutter of motion
had me scanning the edges of the clearing, wondering if I'd see a figure behind a tree or some shadow
darting away. Suddenly, a low rhythmic thud came from deep in the woods. It was so faint at first
that I wondered if I'd imagined it.
Then it grew more distinct.
Three sharp beats.
Then a pause.
Three more.
A pause.
Over and over.
Mom's face tightened.
Nobody spoke.
The beats rattled me more than any crashing noise could have.
It felt deliberate, like someone, or several people, wanted to send a message.
Marcia dared to say, maybe it's just hunters, but Sherry cut her off, shaking her head.
We all knew this didn't sound like any hunting ritual we'd heard about.
The drum-like pulsing kept going, and the tension around us climbed.
Lucille knelt and tried to gather the cups and left over food.
Like maybe if we tidied up, the odd chanting would vanish.
The clink of plastic felt absurdly loud against the hushed clearing.
Then the voices joined in.
It was a strange hum, layered in a way that made it impossible to tell how many people were out there.
Each echo merged with the drumbeats until it felt like the air was vibrating.
I felt it in my chest, like a pulse that wouldn't quit.
Lucille shot me a look.
Her eyes were wide, and she opened her mouth as if to say something, but stayed silent instead.
No one wanted to admit we might be surrounded.
With Marshall gone, we were stuck.
Leaving him behind wasn't an option, but staying in that clearing felt more dangerous by the second.
The rhythmic chanting crept closer.
swelling and volume. It wasn't random noise. It had a pattern, almost like a ceremony. A few times I thought
I glimpsed movement among the trees, but whenever I tried to focus it was gone, replaced by shifting
shadows. Sherry clutched my arm and pointed to the mound. Nothing had changed about it, yet somehow it
seemed more sinister, like it was connected to that drumbeat. I kept imagining something,
or someone, buried there. The chanting reverberated in my ear.
My own breathing felt shallow. I didn't want to show how spooked I was, but it was too strong a feeling to hide.
We bunched together on the picnic blanket, hardly aware of the food we'd scattered around earlier.
The only thing anyone cared about was spotting Marshall's return. The weight was excruciating.
I glanced at Mom. She attempted to steady her breathing, though her hand trembled on the basket's handle.
Lucille scanned the tree line, her fingers curled into fists at her sides.
The voices rose again, this time deeper, more urgent.
The three beats of the drum hammered away, punctuated by those guttural chants.
The forest seemed to close in, a wall of thick trunks and branches that trapped us.
I kept wishing we'd never left home, or that we'd settled on a different patch of woods, anywhere else.
The strain on my nerves was overwhelming, and I knew everyone else felt it too.
Then Marshall burst into view, practically tearing through the undergrowth.
He yelled at the top of his lungs, eyes wild and complexion pale.
For a split second, none of us moved.
We were so stunned to see him look that distraught.
Lucille jolted into action first, grabbing whatever she could.
Mom hustled the rest of us to our feet, and we bolted for the car.
All of us spurred on by the fear in Marshall's voice.
I kept glancing over my shoulder as we ran.
The chanting seemed impossibly loud, echoing between the trees and pounding in my ear.
Although I couldn't see anyone out there, the drumbeats and voices gave the impression we were
being watched from all sides. If we'd stayed, I'm not sure we'd have made it out. By the time we
scrambled into the car, I was so unnerved that I could barely focus on shutting the door behind me.
Marshall slammed the driver's door, started the engine, and tore away. As we lurched forward,
I peeked out the back window. The clearing vanished behind swaying branches, but the noise still
followed us, lingering in the distance like an evil echo. Whatever was out there, we had no desire
to face it again. Marshall's foot slammed on the gas, and we jolted forward so fast that I nearly
pitched into the back of the front seat. None of us said a word. Everyone stared at him, trying to
understand what had shaken him up so badly. He gripped the wheel with knuckles turning white, eyes
flicking to the rearview mirror like he expected something, or someone, to burst out onto the dirt
road behind us. I caught a glimpse of Lucille, my grandmother, trembling. Her usual calm was gone,
replaced by raw, visible fear. Sherry and Marcia sat on either side of me, heads whipping back to
check if we were being followed. Mom was curled up front, pressing a trembling hand to her mouth.
The chanting and drumming might have faded in the distance, but it felt like it was still
pounding in my ears. The road was bumpy and riddled with potholes.
Every jerk of the car sent our leftover picnic stuff rattling around in the trunk.
Part of me expected the engine to stall or a tire to blow, leaving us stranded.
But Marshall just kept going, weaving around branches and debris, as though he'd driven this path a million times before.
Every so often he'd glance over at Lucille, who looked like she was bracing for an impact that never came.
After what felt like an hour, though it might have only been minutes, we finally reached the main road.
The forest thinned out, replaced by sprawling fields.
I'd never felt such relief seeing open sky.
The silence in the car was thick.
None of us wanted to break it by asking questions we knew he wouldn't answer.
And yet a thousand questions swirled in my mind.
Like what he'd witnessed out there,
whether he saw the source of the chanting,
and why he looked so spooked.
Once we got home, Marshall threw the car into park and marched inside.
Lucille and Mom began unloading whatever they could, but everything was such a mess that we barely knew where to start.
There were smashed sandwiches, soaked blankets and plastic cups covered in dirt.
My aunts hovered in the driveway, exchanging uneasy looks.
The warmth of the sun didn't help.
We were all chilled in our own way.
I headed inside, following the dull thud of Marshall's boots down the hallway.
He was in the kitchen, leaning against the counter, staring at the floor.
I asked him if he was okay, voice shaking despite my best efforts to sound calm.
He looked at me with a stare that almost stopped my breath, then snapped.
Don't ever ask me about this again.
It was like a door slamming shut.
Mom and Lucille came in behind me, both of them looking just as stunned.
None of us tried to get any more words out of him.
We knew by now that once he drew a line, there was no crossing it.
In the days that followed, we tiptoed around him.
hoping maybe he'd open up on his own. He never did. I remember lying in bed that night,
barely sleeping, replaying the day's events. The drumbeats echoed in my head. Every time I closed my
eyes I pictured the rope hanging from that gnarled branch. I tried telling myself it was just a
bad dream, but the image wouldn't leave me. Mom mentioned the mound a few times,
wondering if there was something buried or if it was some bizarre prank, but no one
had a real answer. A hush fell over our house, thick with the weight of Marshall's unspoken terror.
As the weeks passed, it became clear no one was going to the police.
Marshall wouldn't have tolerated it, and none of us could even articulate what we'd report.
Some chanting in the woods, a mound that looked too big to be an animal, and a rope swaying
in the breeze. It all sounded unreal the moment you tried putting it into words.
So we let it fester. The rest of the family eventually
filed it away under weird things that happened, but I never managed to lock it away so easily.
To this day, the entire ordeal lingers in my mind, especially the image of Marshall, unshakable,
stone-faced Marshall, running for his life through the trees. Whenever I think back, it's impossible
not to wonder what he saw in that forest. Whatever it was, he carried that fear to the end of his
days. And if he never slept peacefully after that outing, I can't say I'd be surprised. I still catch
myself listening for drumbeats sometimes, half expecting that dark chanting to roll over the horizon
and find me again. We started out just before sunrise, backpack stuffed, and shoulders already
aching from all the gear we'd crammed in. Stepping onto the trail at Redwood Gap, I felt a twist
of excitement and unease. The path hugged a steep hillside, the road. The path hugged a steep hillside, the
the ground cold and damp beneath my boots.
Devon walked up front, whistling a tune off-key, and Chris brought up the rear, constantly
fiddling with the straps on his pack.
I took the middle spot, my senses sharper than usual.
The trees overhead formed a canopy so thick that even the early light struggled to reach
us.
Each breath tasted like wet leaves and morning fog.
I kept craning my neck, trying to pick out any sign of wildlife or other hikers, but the
place felt deserted.
silent, though. Somewhere in the distance, water flowed, and every so often a branch snapped,
echoing across the valley. We made good progress for the first few miles, passing stunted shrubs and
weaving through narrow switchbacks. At one point, I nearly lost my footing on loose gravel,
and Devin had to yank me upright. He laughed, cracking a joke about me needing better balance.
I gave him a half-hearted grin, but I couldn't help scanning the tree line,
waiting for some unknown presence to reveal itself.
By midday, the sun pierced through in patches, lighting up sections of the trail.
We paused on a rocky overlook to catch our breath, and I stared down into a valley filled with
evergreens.
Everything looked peaceful from up there.
Chris said something about wanting to eat lunch, but Devin insisted on pushing another hour before
breaking.
We'd heard that Lake Vesper, our target for the night, wasn't too far away, and he wanted a longer
rest at camp. The last stretch toward the lake turned into a slog. My shoulders ached, sweat stuck to
every inch of my skin, and the trail took on this claustrophobic feeling. The trees pressed in,
and the air seemed heavier. Chris tried to lighten the mood by telling dumb jokes about some
local legend he'd read online, stuff about hermits who lived off the land. Devin rolled his eyes,
but I found myself looking over my shoulder more often. When we finally reached Lake Vesper,
The sight was mesmerizing.
Crystal clear water lapped at a pebble-strewn shore,
tall rocks framing it like giant sentries.
We dropped our packs and collapsed onto the nearest boulders,
relief washing over us.
Devin started setting up the tents while Chris gathered fallen branches for the campfire.
I looked out at the lake,
noticing how still it was,
like a sheet of glass reflecting the sky.
After we'd settled in, we lit a small fire.
The crackling flames off.
a reassuring light in the growing darkness.
We passed around a canteen,
sharing swigs of water that felt unbelievably refreshing,
and for a moment we relaxed.
The world beyond our camp dissolved into black shadows,
and the occasional rustle of branches made me tense.
Chris and Devon laughed at me for jumping at the slightest sound,
but I knew I wasn't just being paranoid.
I busied myself with reorganizing gear,
anything to keep my hands occupied.
Eventually, we all huddled around the fire, exchanging stories of past trips, bragging about
who carried the heaviest pack, and guessing how tough the next day's terrain might be.
The crackle of the flames and the rhythm of Devon's teasing banter almost lulled me into a false
sense of comfort.
Almost.
It was that first night in the wilderness.
Our guard down, our minds eager for rest, when a subtle awareness began to creep in.
Something felt, off.
I couldn't name it.
Maybe it was the way the wind died abruptly,
leaving the night thick with a hush.
Maybe it was the way the trees blocked out the moon,
creating walls of darkness beyond the glow of the fire.
Regardless, a prickling unease settled over me
as we finally crawled into our tents.
And so began our journey,
a supposed five-day trek that felt like a calling one moment
and a dire warning the next.
With Redwood Gap now behind us,
We prepared to face the challenges and the strange suspicions looming ahead.
I woke up to the sound of Devon unzipping his tent, groaning softly about sore legs and a stiff back.
My own shoulders felt like someone had kicked them all night, and Chris looked like he hadn't slept much either.
None of us admitted it, but the night's eerie quiet had put us on edge.
We ate a quick breakfast, oatmeal that tasted like cardboard, and tore down camp, eager to move on.
The trail led us deeper into the wilderness.
The trees and brush pressed in from both sides,
making the path feel almost claustrophobic.
Every once in a while, the wind would stir the branches overhead,
creating this low whisper that faded too quickly.
We trudged through the morning in near silence,
stepping over gnarled roots and skirting around muddy sections of trail.
After a few miles we reached a small sign pointing toward mossy fork.
Devin had read about mossy fork online.
supposedly a wide shallow stream perfect for refilling canteens but none of us were prepared for just how densely overgrown the area was thick moss blanketed every trunk and rock adding a soggy hush to the place
we paused by the water took off our packs and filtered enough to last us until we got to our next camp that's when i noticed footprints on the damp bank spaced wide and deep like someone heavy had been pacing there chris shrugged saying it was probably an old
hikers footprints. Devin and I weren't so sure. The edges looked fresh. Still, we had miles to cover,
so we pressed on. By mid-afternoon, we broke out into a sunlit clearing near Lake Camilla.
It felt like stumbling onto an oasis after hours of gloom. The lake sparkled, framed by
rough boulders and tall grass. We decided to call it home for the night, hoping for a more
peaceful evening. We pitched our tents quickly, then took turns washing off the sweat and dirt
near the shoreline. It wasn't exactly a spa bath, but it helped. Night descended faster than
expected, and the air grew cold. We lit a small fire, cooking freeze-dried meals and joking about how
good a burger would taste. Devin claimed he kept catching glimpses of movement across the water.
Chris tried shining his flashlight, but we saw nothing except our warped reflections
on the surface.
I realized how edgy we all were.
Every time a twig snapped or a gust rattled the bushes,
our conversation ground to a halt.
Later, as we were dozing in front of the fire,
Devin cleared his throat and pulled out a small plastic pouch.
He said he'd brought mushrooms, for fun.
I stared at him, stunned.
Chris just grinned like he'd been waiting for this moment.
My gut said it was a terrible idea, but I was outvoted.
They insisted we only did.
had enough for a light, experience, nothing wild. I reluctantly agreed, figuring half a dose wouldn't
kill me. We swallowed them, and at first nothing happened, aside from giggles at our own stupidity,
but after about half an hour, the forest seemed to breathe with us. Colors sharpened, shadows grew more
defined. An odd sense of curiosity bubbled up in my chest, like I wanted to wander off and see
everything around me in a new light. I meandered a short distance from the fire, watching the tree
branches sway overhead. Something in the corner of my vision darted behind a trunk. I froze,
calling out to Devin and Chris to see if they were messing with me, but they were still by the fire,
laughing about some inside joke. My eyes strained to adjust, but the shape, whatever it was,
slipped deeper into the darkness. We chalked it up to our altered state, though my skin kept tingling,
as if someone stood behind me.
Devin insisted we all stay close to camp.
We eventually crawled into our tents, but sleep was out of reach.
Half the time, I felt like I could hear movements circling our little campsite.
Twigs crunched, leaves rustled.
Chris grunted in frustration, shining his flashlight out of his tent every ten minutes.
By dawn we were exhausted, dreading the next day's climb to Beckwith Pass.
The mushrooms had worn off, but our nerves remained rattled.
we packed up in a hurry quietly agreeing there was no point in hanging around lake camilla any longer something about that night those footprints the unknown figure sank a lingering anxiety into our bones
we headed toward beckwith pass with heavy steps each of us lost in our own worried thoughts the trail started to rise twisting over rocky ledges and offering occasional glimpses of steep valleys below a gust kicked up gravel at one point
nearly blinding me. Chris cursed under his breath, and Devin kept muttering about how we'd better not
see any more weird shapes in the dark. We had no idea just how unsettling the next night would become.
We woke at dawn, the last of our energy reserves running on fumes. My calves cramped as soon as I
tried to stand, and Devin looked like he'd been wrestling invisible enemies all night. His eyes were
bloodshot, and he gripped his trekking poles with white knuckles. Chris was muttering to himself,
something about how we should have broken this route into six days instead of five. None of us had it in
us to argue. We had 19 miles to cover if we wanted to reach Cedar Notch Trailhead before dark,
19 miles of rocks, switchbacks, and unsteady ground. I forced some trail mix down,
tasting mostly salt and dust, then filled up my water from the last stream.
we passed. The climbing wasn't as steep now, but our feet dragged, every step jarring our joints.
Nobody cracked jokes anymore. Even Devin's usual chatter dried up. By midday the sun pounded down
mercilessly. The trees thinned out, leaving us on an exposed ridge. Every time a gust whipped through,
bits of gravel stung our cheeks. My thoughts drifted back to that strange shape I saw near Lake
Camilla and the footprints at Mossy Fork. I kept glancing over my shoulder, half expecting to
see someone trailing behind us with a crazed grin, but the trail snaked on, empty in both directions.
It was well into the evening when we finally spotted a wooden sign that indicated the cedar-notch trailhead
was near. Relief washed over me. Maybe we'd outrun our paranoia. We found a small clearing
tucked off to the side, far enough from the main path that we felt we'd get some privacy.
The area was flatter than anything else we'd seen all day, so we wasted no time pitching our tents.
Chris gathered what little dry wood he could find, and we scraped together a weak fire.
The flames flickered feebly, but it was enough to cook our last rations.
Devin and I split a bag of dehydrated chili, bland but warm.
Despite our exhaustion, we stayed awake a while, staring into those flames as if they were our last barrier against whatever might lurk in the dark.
i remember the conversation turning sentimental something about how we never have time like this any more how life gets too busy and how much this trip reminded us of why we became friends it was a bittersweet moment all the more precious because deep down none of us felt totally safe
Then I heard footsteps.
A steady crunch, crunch of someone approaching through dry underbrush.
I tensed, my heart thudding, and motioned for Devin and Chris to stay quiet.
Out of the corner of the firelight, a man limped into view.
He looked short and stocky, wearing a heavy coat that had definitely seen better days.
The faint orange glow revealed a sunken portion on the left side of his jaw,
like part of his bone was missing.
his cheek dipped inward, giving his face a lopsided, eerie appearance.
He said something in a warped mumble I couldn't quite catch.
Evening, he repeated, louder this time, and I realized he was asking to share our fire for a moment.
Devon swallowed hard, and Chris didn't say a word.
We had no idea if he was armed or if he'd been following us,
but we all instinctively shifted over to make room, probably more out of fear than hospitality.
He settled in, staring into the flames with cold, dark eyes.
Up close, he smelled like sour sweat and damp earth, as if he'd been living out in the woods
for weeks, maybe months.
After an awkward silence, he started talking about the trail, asking if we'd come far.
His voice had a low, shaky quality, like his jaw made it difficult to enunciate.
Chris tried to keep his tone casual.
Yeah, we just finished a five-day route, heading home to.
tomorrow. The man nodded slowly, lips curling and a crooked smile. You got the look of folks who've
been out here a while, he said. Then he asked if we were armed. The question hung in the air.
Devin cleared his throat. We have something small, he replied. He didn't say it was a handgun,
but the man seemed to understand anyway. He leaned forward, gaze flicking between us. Good,
he grunted. You never know who you'll run into. That line set my nerves on edge. Was it a threat or just an
observation? A few beats of tense silence followed, the campfire crackling between us. That's when he started
telling a story, one that paralleled our journey way too closely. He described three hikers,
lost in the hills, making noise at night, poking their noses where they didn't belong. He mentioned how
they whooped and hollered near a lake,
disturbing the peace of the locals.
And I realized he was talking about us.
My pulse pounded as he recounted details
only someone spying on us could know,
and almost fall off a ridge,
the chatter by the water,
our nighttime struggles.
He spat insults at these arrogant city boys
who didn't respect the land,
and I felt my stomach not.
Chris looked furious, about to speak up,
but I gave him a slight shake of the head.
The stranger's eyes narrowed like a predator's, and I couldn't shake the sense that we weren't alone.
He went on about how the forest had families, old families, who didn't take kindly to intruders,
and he described how one particular stranger approached the hikers on their final night.
My blood turned icy. It was him, and here he was, practically confessing he'd been following us,
possibly not by himself. Devon tried to stand up, but the stranger stayed put,
a smug look on his battered face.
He ended his story by saying the hikers finally got wise to who really owned these hills.
The unspoken threat made my skin crawl.
Then, with a slow, deliberate motion, he rose to his feet and limped backward,
letting the firelight dance across his disfigured jaw.
Be on your way soon, he told us.
If you know what's good for you, he turned and walked off into the dark.
But I heard more than one set of fire.
footsteps fading away, like someone else was out there, hidden from view.
Neither Chris nor Devon spoke for a long moment.
The night pressed in on us, and the realization that we'd been shadowed all this time
ripped away any sense of safety we had.
In a flurry of panicked motion, we packed up.
We barely bothered with neatness, just shoved our tents and gear into our bags.
Chris clutched the handgun, ready to fire at the slightest movement.
I swung my flashlight left and right, half expecting to see a dozen shapes lurking in the brush.
We left that campsite behind, stumbling through the dark, guided by trembling beams of light.
Every so often, I caught a flicker of movement in my peripheral vision, but I couldn't be sure if it was the wind or some figure stalking us.
We must have pushed ourselves another few miles, bodies aching, teeth chattering in fear,
before we felt even remotely comfortable stopping to breathe.
When we finally dropped to the ground, our hands shaking,
we looked at one another in silent understanding.
We might have escaped the immediate danger,
but the memory of that stranger and his mocking, knowing gaze
would follow us for a long time.
Exhaustion crashed over me, but I couldn't sleep.
All I could do was listen,
every nerve primed for the slightest snap of a twig or rustle of leaves.
My mind stuck in a loop, replaying that.
stranger's grin and the eerie certainty that he hadn't been alone. In the morning, if we even
made it that long, we'd get out of these woods. But I suspected that part of me would always stay
behind, haunted by the knowledge that dark corners of the wilderness are occupied by people
who fiercely guard their domain, silently watching every unsuspecting passer by. This event took
place around 1992. I was just a young man in the military stationed at Fort Hood, Texas. Those of you
who are familiar with Fort Hood will know what I'm talking about when I say North Fort Hood.
For those who aren't familiar, let me try to explain so you'll better understand why we were where we
were when this happened. Fort Hood is a very large military base, probably one of the largest
by land area in the United States. The main base, where you find all the buildings and motor pools
full of vehicles and so forth, is simply called Fort Hood. It is on the south end of the overall
land that comprises Fort Hood, and just outside its gates is the town of Killeen. Most of Fort Hood
is wilderness, training areas for soldiers, and a large impact area for the artillery units that have
to train with their cannons. At the far northern end of the base, there is a small complex called
North Fort Hood. It takes about 30 or 40 minutes to drive from the main base up to North Fort Hood.
In the early 90s, there was not much in the way of buildings or infrastructure at North Fort Hood.
The unit I was assigned to had to calibrate a piece of equipment,
which required it to be set up and left in place for about a week while the calibration took place.
I'm not going to get into the details about this equipment, as it's not vital to the story.
What's important is that we had to set this equipment up at North Fort Hood during the process.
During the day, some soldiers were there working on calibrations,
but at night we obviously weren't just going to leave this expensive equipment unguarded,
so every night we would leave two soldiers with the equipment to keep an eye on things
and make sure nothing happened to it.
It was very easy duty by every measure.
There was a tent to stay in and plenty of food.
Soldiers who stayed the night got the next day off.
Basically, we would sit in the tent, play cards or some other game,
and just keep an eye on things.
It was basically camping.
I volunteered to take a Thursday,
night as my turn at guard duty because I had vacation, leave time, starting the following Monday.
My rationale was simple. Take guard duty on Thursday night, get Friday off, and start my leave time early.
It was myself and another young soldier who was a friend of mine. We were both just kids. I had just
turned 21, and I believe he was 19 or so. Keep in mind that this was 1992, so while cell phones did exist,
they were by no means as prolific as they are now.
It was pretty rare to see someone with a cell phone,
and if you did, it was usually in a big leather carrying bag.
We called them bag phones, and they were very expensive.
Needless to say, neither of us had a cell phone.
Why is that important?
Because we were dropped off for guard duty around 5 p.m., everyone else left,
and we had no vehicle or way to communicate with anyone.
We were entirely alone if anything happened.
And of course, we weren't expecting anything to happen.
It was, after all, very easy duty.
Watch the equipment, play some cards, eat some chow, no problem.
We were sitting in the tent when the first winds started to pick up,
and I noticed storm clouds moving in from the west.
Whoever had set up that hex tent apparently had no interest in doing it properly,
because as the winds got worse,
worse, the tent leaned as though it might fold at any moment. Clearly, we were about to get hit
with a pretty severe thunderstorm. Anyone who has ever lived in central Texas can tell you that
storms there can blow up quickly and be pretty violent. Fortunately for us, there was a deuce
and a half truck there with a shelter on the back. For those who don't know, a deuce and a half is a
large six-wheel drive truck. If you want an idea of what they look like, you can Google M35
A-2 truck. This particular truck had a shelter on the back, and that is where we retreated to
in order to get out of the path of the approaching storm. Before anyone asks, I should note that
we couldn't drive the truck away from the campsite because it was needed for the calibration,
and we wouldn't abandon our post anyway. This falls under the first general order, and anyone
who has ever been in the army knows what I mean. We secured ourselves in the shelter while the storm
passed, and it was a typical Texas frog strangler, to be sure. Miraculously, the tent did not blow over,
and I was surprised by that. Still, we decided to stay in the back of the truck until dawn,
as we had already moved one of our cots inside. We finally lay down at about 10 p.m. and it was
very quiet. This is a very remote area, and while we were in a clearing next to a runway,
There were no buildings nearby.
All around this airstrip was just woods.
Today there are buildings there.
I've looked at the location on Google Maps,
but back then, there was nothing.
We had left the door of the shelter slightly open for two reasons.
The shelter had no power running to it,
so there was no airflow.
Shutting the door would have left us susceptible to carbon monoxide.
We needed to be able to hear what was going on outside.
We decided to take turns getting some rest,
although we'd been told we were allowed to sleep if we wanted to.
We were still on base, and there was absolutely no reason to expect that anything would happen.
My friend was on the cot by the shelter door, and I was on the floor at the other end.
I felt like I had just dozed off when I was shaken violently awake.
It was my friend, and as I sat up, he was pulling the shelter door closed
and trying to put a lock on it by using the light from his wristwatch.
He was obviously very upset and scared.
it was the kind of fear that cannot be faked this was primal fear i kept asking him what was wrong and he finally managed to tell me that something had grabbed him by the foot and tried to pull him from the shelter
my first thought was that he had dozed off and had a nightmare he insisted that he had not and even stated that whatever grabbed him had said to him we'll be back for you then let him go as he was shaking me awake i wasn't sure if it was a prank or not but my gut instinct was that he was petrified
his hands were shaking as he tried to lock the shelter door, so there had to be some truth to it.
I told him we couldn't leave the door closed because of carbon monoxide.
I was the higher-ranking soldier, so technically I was in charge.
He refused to stay by the door if it was going to be open even a little bit, so I agreed to
switch places with him.
I opened the door just a couple of inches and lay down on the cot, still believing he had just
had a really bad nightmare.
He was on the floor at the other end of the shelter.
Within a few minutes, some pretty strange things began to happen.
We heard scratching sounds on the shelter, on the sides, on the top,
and on the front where the cab of the truck was.
A few times the door moved ever so slightly but never opened.
Needless to say, by this time, I was convinced that something or someone was definitely outside,
and both of us were pretty scared.
I reached to the end of the cot I was on and pulled out the metal cross member that gives attention.
Then I felt around under the cot and found a wooden handle to a pickaxe.
In the army we call these pioneering tools,
but most people would know it as a pickax handle without the metal pick on the end.
I handed this to my friend and instructed him that if anyone opened the door to the shelter,
we would start swinging and wouldn't stop until whoever it was went down and wasn't moving.
The scratching on the exterior of the shelter continued intermittently throughout the night.
We made no effort to call out to whoever or whatever it was.
I think we were both just in fight mode.
If anyone had pulled the shelter door fully open,
I had every intention of fighting for all I was worth,
and I'm certain my friend felt the same way.
Eventually, it began to get light outside,
and as the sky brightened, the scratching stopped.
We stayed in the shelter for a little.
another 40 or 50 minutes until the sun was fully up. At that point, I said I was going to push the
door all the way open, jump off the back of the truck, and if he saw anyone, he should just start swinging.
So I counted to three, flung the door open, and jumped off the truck. When you're 21, you can jump
off a deuce and a half, and it doesn't hurt. Now I would be far more cautious. At any rate,
there was nothing, no one at all. We looked around the truck and the camp. We looked around the truck and the
nothing. What I noticed immediately was that while we were leaving boot tracks in the still wet ground,
there were no other tracks around the truck. I began to look for loose items on the shelter that
might account for the scratching sound, but there were none. I didn't know whether to feel relieved
or still be on edge. We packed up our gear, and about 30 minutes later, the relief NCO arrived in a
Humvee. He wasn't even fully out of the truck before we were putting our stuff in it to leave. He laughed,
and remarked that we seemed really ready to go. We never told him a thing. In fact, we never said
anything to anyone in our unit about what happened. We probably should have, but I think we were
afraid we would be laughed at. At any rate, I got behind the wheel of the Humvee, and my friend got in the
back on the passenger side. I drove down the road away and came to a stop at the main highway that
we would take to get back down to Fort Hood. At that moment, there came a clear, loud, and
distinct clap of thunder. I leaned out the window and looked up. Then I looked back at my friend in the
back of the truck, and he said something I'll never forget. There ain't a damn cloud in the sky,
man. I believe I probably set a record for the fastest drive back to Fort Hood in a Humvee that morning.
I'm not one to believe in this stuff. I think a lot of paranormal stories are just active imaginations
or people making things up. But something happened to us that night, and I will never forget it.
It scared the hell out of me, and I don't ever want to experience it again.
That's my story, and it is 100% true.
It started in the late winter of 1978.
The three of us, myself, Ronnie, and Tom, were working at an outdoor education program high in the San Bernardino Mountains.
The outdoor school had taken over a summer camp for the winter semester.
This camp was located in a saddle in the mountains, where they narrowed and bent from the tectonic forces.
that created them. The camp was reached by the rim of the World Highway, which formed the western
edge of the camp's property. The rim road ran right along the edge of the mountains, with the camp on one
side and a steep drop-off on the other. The road crossed one of the many rockfalls, narrow rock-filled
canyons that begin at the top of the mountain and plunge thousands of feet down toward the Los Angeles basin.
We had snuck out to the rockfall that night because we knew the view of the city lights below would be spectacular.
The Santa Ana, or Devil winds, had been blowing from the desert, up over the mountains, and down into the Los Angeles Basin for the previous three days.
These winds had scrubbed every molecule of smog out of the basin, offering a crystal-clear, unobstructed view from 7,000 feet all the way down the canyon to the lights below.
When we arrived at our spot just before midnight, the scene could not have been more spectacular.
Standing on the other side of the highway in a small paved pullout,
we gazed at the city lights spread out in front of us like a giant,
multicolored carpet of glowing geometric shapes.
Major thoroughfares were lit up in different hues,
depending on each jurisdiction's choice of streetlights.
Even at that hour, red and white snakes of traffic could be seen thousands of feet below,
We could see all the way down to where the lights ended, and the Pacific Ocean lay in darkness.
We stood in a loose circle, me, Tom, and Ronnie, huddled together, excited about the amazing sight below us.
Ronnie was the one who got down to business, pulling out one of his famous hand-rolled joints.
He lit it, as per tradition, took one hit and waved it in the air while telling a story.
Following the red cherry arc through the air as Ronnie gesticulated is how I first noticed a bright,
orangeish white light coming over the top of the mountain behind us.
It backlit the peak, then quickly appeared over it, traveling down our side of the mountain,
following the canyon toward the basin.
We all noticed the change in brightness and turned toward its origin.
At first I heard no sound, but as it grew closer, coming down the mountain in the next canyon over,
I heard a noise that sounded like what I'd imagine an object creating its own vacuum in the atmosphere would produce.
It was as though the air itself was being ripped apart.
There was no typical aircraft noise, just a sudden vacuum and an emptiness in the air.
The UFO was vaguely pumpkin seed-shaped, with a very bright reddish-orange glow at the thicker head of the seed,
and an orangeish-white vapor trailing behind it.
It came over the mountain and down the canyon at a constant height of about 100 feet.
above the peaks, lighting the ground beneath it. It followed the canyon's contour, until it reached
approximately 2,000 feet above the basin below, where it leveled out and traveled west toward the ocean.
It dropped 4,000 to 5,000 feet down the canyon in less than 10 seconds, passing a couple of miles to
the west of us. The craft was clearly visible, vibrantly glowing as it sped west, also visible
were the running lights of a small plane flying in the same direction, slightly ahead of the UFO.
As we watched the blinking lights of the plane, we saw the UFO rapidly decelerate from its
incredible speed down the mountain, and then stop right next to the plane. From our vantage point,
it looked to be at the same altitude, extremely close, and to the plane's left. After matching the plane's
speed and vector for about three seconds, the UFO suddenly accelerated forward, turned left,
and disappeared over the Pacific toward Mexico.
It went from the easternmost part of the Los Angeles Basin,
down toward Long Beach, and out of sight in less than a few seconds,
leaving behind only a faint orange plasma trail,
and a pilot who probably had a sudden need to change his underwear.
We stood there, transfixed,
staring at the empty space where the UFO had been,
then looking at each other with a mix of awe and panic in our eyes.
Ronnie very slowly and deliberately crushed out the joint,
on the heel of his boot and tucked it into his pocket.
Then we all started talking at once.
What the hell was that?
Where did it go?
Did you see it stop next to that plane?
What can do that?
Nothing, that's what.
That was when the panic set in.
We looked at each other and then took off running at full speed back toward our cabins.
We didn't speak of it again until we could be together with no one else around.
How do you explain something that sounds so crazy?
We had all seen a lot of strange things in our collective lifetimes,
but none of us could explain what we saw that night.
We tried to figure out how to get more information,
but we were stuck in the mountains five days a week,
without TV, newspapers, or radio.
This was long before the internet.
That sighting became a pivot point between the three of us,
something we would often discuss and try to figure out but never could.
After the semester ended, we went our seven-year-old.
separate ways for the summer. Ronnie joined the California Department of Forestry as a wildland
firefighter. Tom traveled to Hawaii to work at a YMCA summer camp, and I headed back to Big Bear
to work at a YMCA camp there. And this is where the story gets really weird. Neither Ronnie nor Tom
lived to see the end of that summer. Ronnie was killed in the Spanish ranch fire near San Luis Obispo.
Less than two weeks after learning of Ronnie's death, I heard that Tom had disappeared off the coast
of Hawaii. The story was that he had been on the beach, got swept out to sea by a rogue wave,
then was eaten by sharks, and his body was never found. To say that I was mentally shaken would
be an understatement. Having two of your friends, who had witnessed an unearthly UFO encounter,
die in such unusual ways within six months of that siding, one by fire and one by water,
really freaked me out. I kept thinking, fire, water, earth, air. For years after that, I have
avoided any situation where one of those elements could kill me. That's my UFO story. I still do
know what happened that night. All I know is that it was completely mind-boggling and changed my life
irrevocably. I know what happened to Ronnie and have visited the site where he died. Tom, on the other
hand, may still be alive. I have a strong feeling he might have faked his own death. But that's a story
for another time. This happened to me in July this year, and I've been thinking about it constantly
ever since. I'll try to sum up the experience as best I can. So I'm kind of a mentally ill weirdo.
I have BPD and CPTSD, and I'm a 24-year-old girl who lives alone in the city, just minding my
own business. I have a few friends, but I'm not close with my family. It's not unusual for me to go a few
weeks or months without really seeing anyone besides coworkers, especially during a global pandemic.
So I've just been doing my own thing. This encounter happened during one of the
of those few weak stretches of isolation. I'm only giving this bit of exposition so people can understand
my psych history, as well as my mental state, etc. At the start of July, I got this uncontrollable
impulse to go camping and stargays. I never go camping alone. I haven't been in around four years,
and had no camping gear whatsoever. But I wanted to go for some reason, so I researched some good
dark sky spots in Utah, found a cute little campground about four hours into the desert, and
reserved the last spot available for a week from that day. I bought all my stuff the day before,
and I'm horrible at planning and time management, so by the time I arrived at the campground,
the sun was already going down. I had also forgotten my charger, and realized I had to make my
60% battery last until I could make it back to the city the next day. There was no service out there,
so that seemed easy enough. My entire goal was
to chill in my hammock chair all night and stargaze anyway, so all I needed was some music for
that. I specifically chose the night of a new moon for this, so I knew I had to get my tent set up
and situated ASAP before the sun went down. There were a lot of other people there, but most
were families with kids getting ready for bed. I could hear parents reading scripture to their
kids before bed, Mormons, and could see others reading on Kindles and stuff before sleeping.
By the time everything was set up, it was about 10 p.m.
Almost at once, everyone turned their lights off and went to sleep.
This really weirded me out at first because it was the perfect night for stargazing.
I didn't see a single other person setting up a chair to stargaze, any telescopes, or even just someone outside their tent looking up.
Everyone was either already asleep or going to sleep.
I gave it some more thought and figured they all probably just wanted to wake up before.
or with the sunrise because we were in the desert.
Sleeping in wouldn't exactly be a pleasant experience when you're getting cooked alive, I imagine.
I work night shift, so staying up was not an issue in the slightest.
At this point, the only people I could see who were awake were myself.
A family at the campground vaguely near me reading scripture
and a whole mess of people at the bathroom.
My tent is located at the far side of the campground,
so to my left is nothing but desert and cliff.
In front of me is the bathroom, about 100 feet or so away, two other campgrounds, about 300 feet away, and more desert and sky.
To my right and behind me is the rest of the campground.
There's another bathroom on the far side of the campground behind me to the right, which is probably around 700 and 900 feet away.
These two bathrooms are the only source of any light in the campground, aside from a few people who are using their flashlights to come to and from the bathroom.
Like I said earlier, I'm a weirdo.
I won't deny that, which honestly makes telling this story to others hard.
My goal out here was to grieve and move on from a lot of loss I experienced a year ago.
A lot of bad stuff happened in my life, and I lost a lot of loved ones as a result.
Sometimes a good mushroom trip can really help someone find a lot of closure when it comes to grief.
So that was my only goal for this trip.
I ate around 2 grams and was coming up around 11 p.m.
Now hear me out.
You might be asking,
what kind of close encounter story can be believed
when the person telling it was under the influence of a psychedelic?
That's a good question,
and I'd say being skeptical of a person's experience
under the influence of such drugs is common sense.
That being said, I want to point out
that I have a gross amount of experience with psychedelics,
including trips in even weirder and more isolated places than this.
I've tripped on mushrooms easily dozens of times in my life,
and on acid probably over a hundred times.
I have kept tons of trip journals,
have recordings from trips, etc.
Never once has anything like this happened to me before or since.
I have never seen things while tripping,
have never interacted with entities,
have never had thoughts or paranoia about something being there that's not.
I always have the same trips.
Some textures get wavy.
My emotions become full and bright,
and I feel at peace in my mind for those few hours.
That's it.
I'm convinced that what happened to me in the desert
was not a product of the drugs,
but merely happened to me while I was tripping.
It would have been the same had I not been on psychedelics.
But that's just my opinion.
I definitely do invite skepticism otherwise.
So yeah, I'm coming up and ready to stargaze.
I have to pee, though,
and all these people hanging out around the bathroom are making me nervous.
No one else is awake that I can see now.
No lights are on or tents open anywhere around me.
The only people still awake are all over by the bathroom.
I eventually cave and just head over there and do my thing.
No one bothers me or says anything, luckily.
I start walking back to my chair.
My spot is pretty close to the bathroom.
If I walk from the front of it in a straight line in the dark,
I will, without fail, hit my chair.
tent after about 25 seconds of walking. Because it's that easy, I don't bother using my flashlight.
Plus, saving my phone battery for the drive out is still my priority. I'm walking through
the dark when I see the outline of my hammock chair, and a person standing right next to it
staring at it. I freeze and stare at them. I'm super confused as to why this person is in
my campsite, standing alone in the dark, just staring at my chair. Maybe they're curious
about it. I don't know. It's weird as hell. I wave at them, but they don't notice, so I move a little
closer, and I guess the sound of my footsteps alerted them to my presence, because they shot their
head up toward me, took around three steps in my direction, backed up about six steps,
flashed a bluish flashlight in my eyes, and fast walked away from me toward another person I hadn't
noticed, someone else standing in the dark about 15 feet away. The two, the two, the two of the
Two of them stood next to each other, shining their blue flashlights at their feet.
Then they both moved around me toward the bathroom and disappeared into the women's restroom.
Weird, right?
I thought so, standing there all terrified like a dumb idiot.
I rationalized that maybe the first person was waiting for their friend to catch up or something.
I sat down and finally put on some good music in my headphones,
and just melted into the beautiful show playing in the sky above.
It's now around 11.30 p.m.
to midnight and there are still people messing around near the women's restroom.
It's really distracting at this point and bugging me a lot because it's right in my line of sight.
They just keep waving their flashlights around and coming in and out, but they never seem to go anywhere.
They'll walk out of the restroom, turn their lights off, and just walk into the dark without their lights to guide them.
Usually they either walk behind the bathroom where I can't see them, or off to the left side, into the dark where there are no.
dark where there are no campsites. I notice someone is standing next to me. I tear my headphones out
and jerk my head to the right. There is a silhouette of a person standing about seven feet from my chair.
I am frozen and spooked pretty bad. They take around two or three steps toward me, then back up
again around six, and walk around me and away into the dark with no flashlight, away from me
in the bathroom. Now I'm freaking spooked. I don't think it's anything supernatural right now.
but I definitely think it's some people up to no good.
The nearest city is hundreds of miles away,
and we are far from any civilization out here.
If these were people trying to hurt me,
they could do it rather easily.
I stay in the chair for now,
but I keep my headphones off
so I can hear the environment around me.
My head is now on a swivel,
but I'm still trying my best to enjoy the night.
Around midnight, no one else is awake.
No flashlights anywhere, no voices, nothing.
All the bathroom people finally vanished, and it seemed like I was the only one awake.
With my headphones off, I started to notice sounds now.
The sound of a jet somewhere nearby would come and go, flying around somewhere in the desert.
I kept looking for its aircraft lights but could never find them.
This deep, almost physics-defying boom would occasionally shake the desert, but in a weird way.
When I heard and felt it, I would feel my body tense and shake with it, and the air too.
but never the ground. It's weird because it sounded as if it was coming from the ground itself,
not the air. I would also hear what sounded like laughter coming from the desert to my left,
the part with no campsites or people. I was still, at this point, just chilling. I was obviously
starting to suspect some weird crap, but for the most part I was just chilling and enjoying the
night. Then, orbs in the sky.
I practically crapped myself when I saw this.
Above one of the cliffs far out on the horizon,
a little swarm of glowing orbs appeared,
and they were almost dancing around one another.
I remember this moment very clearly.
I remember seeing them and thinking,
I can't explain that.
What the hell is that?
There is nothing I could imagine that could move like that,
not even drones.
I won't record this, I promise.
It would ruin it, and I want to see it through.
I remember thinking that last part very clearly, out of nowhere, and it was weird how specific
it was in my mind.
I hadn't even thought to record it in the first place, but here I was making a promise to
myself that I wouldn't even try no matter what happened.
Another cluster of orbs appears in the sky to my right, and almost simultaneously, the
orbs to my left instantly shoot across the sky to join the other orbs.
I start smiling like a damn idiot.
This is it, the thing I have been staring at the sky looking at.
for my whole damn life.
The thing I stopped believing in for decades, because I never saw it.
I had let the world convince me that it was just as boring as it appeared,
and never once allowed myself to think it could actually be more than that.
And the proof was finally staring me in the face.
I had to keep checking in with myself, being like,
this isn't the shrooms, right?
No, it's definitely not.
I see that, and I know I'm not hallucinating it.
I probably went through that.
little personal questioning close to a dozen times over the course of the next few minutes.
The jet sound comes back and it's much louder now. I can actually see the aircraft lights now too,
flying directly overhead, but they aren't blinking like usual. They fly into this dark cloud in
the sky I hadn't noticed before and vanish along with the jet sound. The orbs continue playing
around each other until they vanish too. All in all, I'd say this lasted for about an hour.
It's now around 1 a.m. and I really have to pee.
I obviously hold it as long as I can because I'm witnessing the single most special thing I'll ever get to see right in front of my eyes.
But eventually, I break and just want to get it over with.
So, I'm a trans woman.
I wouldn't even bring that up if it didn't have some sort of relevance to the story, to be honest.
I look and sound exactly like a girl.
It's pretty much impossible for people to tell, and I haven't been clocked in a long time.
I'm out here in the desert on shrooms witnessing some high strangeness,
but I still got to be careful about which bathroom I use.
Normally I would just use the women's,
but those people I encountered earlier were still making me paranoid,
so I figured if worse comes to worst,
I'd rather be caught in the men's in case there are some weirdos out here.
I head in there and am doing my thing at the urinal as fast as possible.
The moment I start, the door to the restroom shoots open,
and this guy with short brown hair, around 5'6,
and a half-sunken droopy face runs in, eyes glued to the ground, and barges into the stall next to me,
shutting the door and doing his business. The only word I could use to describe him was that he looked sick.
This obviously scares the crap out of me. It's 1 a.m. and I haven't seen another human being in a few
hours. Plus, I just saw the light show in the sky, and I'm a cis-looking girl peeing standing up at a
urinal, and I'm alone with this dude. He pees for, no joke.
Three seconds.
That's it.
All that rush, all that urgency for three seconds of tinkle time.
Who does that?
He spent the rest of his time in there slowly pulling out toilet paper from the roller for some reason.
I'm a dumb idiot and just held my bladder for way too long,
so I'm trying my best to get it all out so I can leave,
but it's taking forever.
I finally finish, and for some reason I go to wash my hands.
I don't know why.
It just felt like the right thing to do in the moment.
The guy shoots out of the stall again way too hard and fast,
comes right next to me at the sink,
washes his hands for a total of two seconds,
and leaves the bathroom as fast as he entered.
I'm just kind of shook,
but again I'm trying to rationalize this.
I just think he's probably tripping too,
and the sight of some girl peeing at the urinal at 1 a.m.
probably made him think I was an alien as well,
so I head out and back to my chair.
The moment I sit down, the lights in the bathroom I was just in, shut off all at once.
The lights in the women's bathroom and the men's.
No one enters or leaves either.
And now just a single tiny yellow bulb can be seen glowing above a park ranger's bulletin board on the side of the building.
I sit down and almost kind of invite more weird stuff to happen around me.
The jets are back now and louder than before.
There are orbs forming a huge ring around the campground, pulsating, growing, and then dimmed.
swimming, slowly drifting around. I'm terrified, but also I can't move. It's too cool to be honest.
That's really the whole reason I didn't hide in my tent. Who the hell in their right mind would
listen to their instinct to run when you could see how far it could go? I hear stranger sounds
coming from the desert, what sounds like shouting and a baby crying far, far away. The orbs
reappear in the sky, and behind the trees next to my tent, it looks like the moon is shining
through, but it's a new moon. It's now 2 a.m. The bathroom lights come back on, but only in the
men's restroom. The women's remains off, and I see no one come or go. At this point,
the only thing I've been muttering to myself for a while is, I'm a dumb idiot. Why am I doing this?
This is terrifying, and I'm dumb for just letting it happen. I'm very aware of my desire to run
and give in to the fear, but that is highly outweighed by my curiosity. At least it was.
A person comes from seemingly nowhere, with no flashlight on and no clear direction,
and walks in front of the bathroom, and it's terrifying.
Normally that wouldn't be scary.
It's just some person.
But this person was easily 10-13 feet tall.
The bathroom itself was around 13 feet tall,
and this person's head was at mid-level with the top ventilation window.
The crown of their head was taller than the building itself.
They walked in front of the restroom, and into the dark.
and I shot out of my chair.
The only thing I said was,
Nope, nope, nope, nope, freaking nope, that's terrifying.
Or something like that.
As fast as I could, I ran into my tent and quickly zipped it up.
There was no not running at this point.
My sympathetic nervous system just took over
and was very adamant that I needed to hide.
It's hard to describe what I felt,
but it was the most primal fear I've ever felt.
I have BPD and CPDSD,
so I'm used to feeling a staggering amount
of terror in my mind on a daily basis when my symptoms show up. But this was on a whole other level.
It was like some deep, animal part of me understood the moment I saw them that I was no longer at the
top of the food chain. Another ultra predator, much smarter than me, had just made itself known,
and my body was tensing up like a wild animal at the sight of it. I felt truly humbled and
small in that moment, and knew I was outmatched. They were now outside of my tent,
scurrying in circles around it. The sound of their footsteps gave way to the feeling of their
voice playing alongside my own inner voice. This is where it gets hard to explain. We talked, but talking
is not the right word for it. They communicate in pure concept and feeling, and it's so subtle and
instantaneous. It's hard to describe how obvious it is, while at the same time being so subtle as to almost
be indistinguishable from your own thoughts or feelings. The things we talked about were rather personal,
so I won't go into too much detail.
I asked them about the Jets,
whether that was us,
and if we're trying to find them.
They said yes, I thought,
we aren't smart enough to find you guys.
They said, no, you are smart,
you just aren't creative.
They said they are scared of us too,
but are much more aware of us
than we are of them.
They want to know us more,
but it's hard, too much complication.
They cited me running and hiding as proof.
I said, that's natural.
I'm still an animal with a nervous system hardwired for survival.
Something new and unknown is going to do that to people,
no matter how rational they try to stay.
They said they liked me because I was honest about the fear.
They were scared too.
They want freedom, and they want that for us as well,
but they aren't quite sure what to do,
or at least they wouldn't tell me.
Whenever I asked their name or why they were here,
they deliberately ignored me.
They also seemed to get a kick out of messing with me, citing that as a reason for this encounter.
They did one thing that I really liked. They showed me that they have always cared, and always will.
It's hard to describe the feeling they gave me, but it really was unconditional love.
They called me family, and kept expressing their love for me, telling me that I chose this.
I didn't fully get that part. When they said it, a bunch of memories from my childhood flooded in,
but I'm still struggling to draw any connections.
After a while, of course, I had to pee again.
I did, and nothing happened.
I went back into my tent to eat some trail mix
and record an audio note of what we'd just talked about
so I could remember as much as possible.
I noticed the time on my phone said something like 11 a.m.
My phone has never messed up like that before
or changed the time on me.
It was a little validating to see, to be honest.
It was very clearly the middle of the night,
not 11 a.m. I left the tent and they messed with me some more, more orbs in the trees, lights going off
in the bathroom. Eventually, 5 a.m. came and they were gone. The sun came up and I headed home.
There are a lot of details I skipped over, as this post is already way too long, but there you have it.
Like I said, I don't expect anyone to believe me. I invite the skepticism, honestly, because I was
under the influence of a psychedelic substance. I do have to say, out of the hundreds of trips I've
had, I've never experienced something like this before or since. I truly believe that these
events happened, and that the drugs were not responsible for their inception whatsoever. What to take
away from it, I'm not sure. It was amazing, and I want to meet them again. I am extremely humbled
now. I believe in other beings again, and I have this sense of family and home in myself I've
never quite had before. Has anyone out there met them too? I'd love to hear your story if so,
and to let you know you aren't alone in your experience. They are out there, and they do exist.
It didn't feel right from the moment we stepped off the trailhead and into the forest. Don't get me
wrong. I've hiked before, nothing crazy, just a few weekend trips.
But something about Blackwood Reserve didn't feel right.
The air was dense, heavy in a way that made it hard to breathe,
even before we'd started the climb.
The trees were unnaturally tall,
their bare branches tangled like veins against the overcast sky,
and the wind carried a faint, metallic tang that clung to the back of my throat.
I told myself it was nothing, just nerves,
but that gnawing unease wouldn't go away.
The others didn't seem to notice.
Mike, my roommate, was up ahead, joking with Rachel and Zoe about how much he'd overpacked.
Tom and Clara, the guides, led the group, their calm, practiced demeanor a stark contrast to the rest of us fumbling with our gear.
I hung back, my pack heavier than it should have been, my eyes darting to the shadows between the trees.
We'd been hiking for hours when the path opened into a clearing.
Here we are, Tom announced, dropping his pack and gesturing around.
The campsite wasn't much, a patch of uneven ground surrounded by trees, with just enough space for us to pitch our tents.
The forest pressed in close, a solid wall of black trunks and tangled undergrowth, making the clearing feel smaller than it was.
We spread out to set up camp, each claiming a spot.
I picked a patch of ground at the edge of the clearing, close to the tree line.
Big mistake.
The forest was quieter here.
the usual buzz of insects and birds replaced by an oppressive silence.
Even the wind barely stirred the trees.
I focused on pitching my tent, trying to ignore the prickling sensation crawling up my neck.
Hey Jonah, you good? Mike called, his voice cutting through the stillness.
Yeah, I lied, not looking up, just tired.
The truth was, I knew we were being watched.
Every time I glanced at the tree line, I swore I saw.
something move, a flicker of shadow, the quick dart of something too fast to track. I kept telling
myself it was my imagination that my eyes were playing tricks in the fading light. By the time the
sun dipped below the horizon, the temperature had plummeted. We huddled around the fire,
eating dehydrated meals and swapping stories, but even the flickering flames couldn't chase away
the cold. The fog rolled in thick and fast, curling around the trees like skeletal fingers.
It muffled everything, the crackle of the fire, our voices, even the distant rustle of the forest.
Ever hear the stories about this place? Clara asked, breaking the uneasy silence.
Tom shot her a look, but she shrugged. What? They're just stories.
What stories? Rachel asked, leaning closer. People say the forest is strange, Clara said her voice low.
Things go missing out here, people, animals. They say the forest takes.
them. Okay, creepy, Zoe muttered, laughing nervously.
Relax, Clara said, waving it off. It's just local folklore. Every place like this has its ghost
stories. But the words lingered, planting a seed of fear that grew as the night wore on.
I retreated to my tent early, unable to get rid of the unease. The fire cast long shadows
across the clearing, and as I zipped myself inside, I tried to convince myself that everything was
fine. It was just another hike. The stories were just stories. I fell asleep to the sound
of the wind whispering through the trees. When I woke up, the whispering was gone. It took me a moment
to realize what had startled me. The forest was silent. Not the peaceful kind of quiet you
get in the wilderness, but the kind of silence that makes your skin crawl. No wind, no crickets,
nothing, just an oppressive suffocating stillness.
I heard something, leaves crunching, slow footsteps circling the edge of the clearing.
I froze, every muscle in my body tensing.
My heart hammered against my ribs as I strained to listen.
The steps were heavy and wrong.
Not an animal, too slow, too calculated.
They stopped just outside my tent.
I held my breath, every nerve screaming at me to stay still.
Something was out there.
I couldn't see it, but I could feel it.
Something large.
Just beyond the thin layer of fabric separating me from the forest.
The steps started again, moving around the perimeter of the tent unhurried.
Then the sound shifted.
It wasn't just footsteps any more.
It was dragging.
Something sharp, like claws, scraping against the ground.
My breath hitched as a shadow passed across my tent, faint but unmistakable.
It lingered, motionless.
before moving on. The air was so cold now, I could see my breath misting in the dim light of the moon
filtering through the fog. I wanted to unzip the tent, to look, but my body refused to move.
Then came the breathing. It was shallow, labored, almost human, but with a wet, gurgling edge
that made my stomach churn. The sound came from just behind me, close enough that I could feel
the vibrations in the air. I don't know how long it lasted. Minutes.
hours. Time stretched and warped, and the only thing I could focus on was the sound of that thing
outside my tent. And then it was gone. I didn't sleep. I lay there, staring at the fabric of my tent,
waiting for the sound to return. But the forest stayed silent, and eventually exhaustion pulled me
under. Morning came too quickly. Sunlight filtered through the fog, casting long, pale shadows
across the campsite. The others were already up, packing their gear, laughing and joking like
nothing had happened, but I wasn't the only one who'd heard it. Clara caught my eye as I stepped
out of my tent. She didn't say anything, but her expression said enough. She'd heard it too.
I didn't say anything at first. Honestly, I thought maybe I'd dreamed it, chocked it up to exhaustion
and my brain playing tricks on me. But when I stepped out of my tent that morning, the look on
Clara's face said otherwise. Her smile was forced. Her usual confident demeanor cracked at the edges.
I wanted to ask her if she'd heard it, the breathing, the footsteps, the dragging claws. But part of
me was terrified of her answer. What if she had? Worse? What if she hadn't? And I was just
losing my mind? Rough night? She asked casually her voice low enough that the others couldn't hear.
I nodded, swallowing hard.
Did you, uh, hear anything?
Her eyes flicked toward the forest and for a moment I thought she was going to brush it off.
But then she nodded, almost imperceptibly.
Footsteps, she whispered.
It's probably just wildlife.
Let's pack up and keep moving.
Wildlife, sure.
That didn't explain the breathing or the shadow circling my tent.
The others didn't seem to notice anything off as we broke camp,
but I couldn't stop scanning the tree line.
The fog still clung to the forest like a veil, and every shifting shadow felt like a pair of eyes watching me.
I kept my head down and focused on putting one foot in front of the other as we hiked deeper into the woods.
It wasn't until we stopped for lunch at a small creek that the tension in my chest loosened, just a bit.
The sound of running water felt like a balm after the suffocating silence of the campsite.
But even then, I knew that we weren't alone.
As I filled my water bottle, Rachel crouched next to me, her voice low.
Hey, did you see anything weird last night?
My stomach dropped.
What do you mean?
She glanced over her shoulder, making sure the others weren't listening.
There was this light outside my tent, like someone was walking around with a lantern.
But when I looked out, there was no one there.
I froze.
You're sure it wasn't someone in the group?
Rachel shook her head.
No one else was moving. I checked.
I didn't know what to say, so I didn't say anything.
The rest of the group was laughing and talking like this was just another hike,
but Rachel's words hung heavy between us.
We packed up and started hiking again, and that's when things got worse.
The forest felt alive in the worst way.
The fog seemed thicker now, clinging to our clothes and muffling our voices.
The trees loomed closer, their gnarled branches twisting together overhead, blocking out the sky.
And the silence, that awful, oppressive silence, was back.
About an hour into the hike I saw it.
At first I thought it was just a trick of the light.
A shadow moving between the trees, too quick to track.
But then it happened again, a lot closer.
A figure, tall, thin, and hunched, darted from one tree to the next, its movements jerky and unnatural.
I stopped dead in my tracks.
Jonah, you okay?
Mike asked.
his voice breaking through the haze.
I...
I thought I saw something, I said, my throat dry.
Probably just a deer, he said, clapping me on the shoulder.
It wasn't a deer.
By the time we reached the next campsite,
the sun was already dipping below the horizon.
The guides tried to keep everyone calm,
cracking jokes and telling stories as we set up our tents,
but the tension was palpable.
Even Mike was quieter than usual.
His usual bravado replaced with a nervous
energy that made him fidget constantly. I pitched my tent as close to the fire as I could,
but it didn't help. The second night was worse. It started the same way, footsteps crunching in
the leaves, slowly circling the camp. But this time, they didn't stop at the edge of the clearing.
They came closer, the sound growing louder, heavier, until it felt like whatever was out there
was standing right next to my tent. The breathing came next. Wet.
gurgling and so close I could feel the vibrations in the air.
My skin prickled, and my heart hammered against my ribs as the shadow passed across the fabric of my tent.
And then it scratched.
The sound was unbearable, sharp claws dragging across the nylon, slow and methodical,
like it was testing the strength of the material.
I bit down on my lip to keep from screaming.
Every muscle in my body locked in place.
The light returned, brighter this time.
casting a cold blue glow through the tent. I could see the silhouette of something just outside,
twisted and hunched, its limbs too long, its movements erratic. It lingered, the claws
raking across the tent one last time before the light suddenly disappeared, plunging me back
into darkness. I couldn't take it anymore. I unzipped the tent just enough to peer outside,
my breath caught in my throat. The fire had burned low, casting faint shadows across,
across the clearing. But just beyond the edge of the light, I saw it, a figure, tall, impossibly
thin, with elongated limbs that twitched and jerked as it moved. Its head was cocked at an unnatural
angle, and though its face was obscured, I could feel its gaze on me, cold and piercing.
I didn't scream, I couldn't. The thing turned its head further as if studying me
before disappearing into the shadows with a sudden unnatural speed. I zip,
the tent shut and sat there shaking, until dawn. When morning came, I found Rachel standing at the
edge of the clearing, staring into the forest. She turned to me, her face pale. Did you see it?
She whispered. I nodded. We didn't speak again after that. There was nothing left to say. I don't
remember much about how it started that morning, just the raw, gnawing fear that had eaten at me
through the night. None of us said much as we packed up. Rachel and I exchanged a glance,
but it wasn't the kind of look that needed words. She'd seen it too, whatever it was.
Even Mike, who always had something sarcastic to say, stayed quiet. His usual cocky grin was gone,
replaced by a pale, tight-lipped expression. Tom and Clara tried to keep things light,
but their voices sounded forced, brittle. The unspoken agreement was clear. We needed to get out
of Blackwood Reserve, fast. The trail back to the cars felt different, like the forest itself,
was shifting around us. The fog had lifted slightly, but the shadows were longer, darker,
and they seemed to move when you weren't looking. The trees, tall and skeletal, bent inward,
their branches clawing at the sky. Every crunch of our boots on the dirt trail felt deafening
in the silence. Then about halfway back the footsteps returned. At first they were distant,
just the faintest crunch of leaves far behind us. I tried to tell myself it was nothing.
maybe a deer or a stray hiker taking the same trail, but the sound didn't fade.
It followed us, slow and deliberate, matching our pace but never getting closer.
Tom stopped abruptly and turned, scanning the path behind us.
Anyone see anything? he asked, trying to sound calm.
No one answered. We all just stood there frozen, listening.
The footsteps stopped too.
And that's when I realized something worse.
The forest was dead silent, not just quiet, but wrong. No birds, no wind, no rustling leaves,
just that awful, suffocating stillness. Let's keep moving, Clara said quickly, her voice tight.
We picked up the pace, our boots crunching faster against the dirt. The footsteps started again,
louder this time, and closer. My heart pounded as I glanced over my shoulder,
half expecting to see that twisted figure from the night before, but there was nothing, just the
trees and the endless shifting shadows. Then it started running. The sound of heavy, uneven footfalls
thundered through the forest, crashing through the underbrush like something enormous and unhinged.
It was coming straight for us. Go, Tom shouted, his voice breaking as he took off down the trail.
We ran, branches whipped at my face, roots snagged my boots.
But I didn't dare stop.
The sound of it was everywhere, like the forest itself was alive and chasing us.
I didn't look back.
I couldn't.
Rachel screamed behind me, and I skidded to a stop, turning just in time to see her fall.
Her ankle had caught on a route, and she was struggling to get up, tears streaming down her face.
Help her! Mike shouted, but his voice was drowned out by the deafening roar.
Yes, roar of whatever was behind us.
I didn't think. I just grabbed Rachel under the arm and hauled her to her feet,
dragging her forward as fast as I could. The thing was close now,
close enough that I could feel its breath, hot and rancid, on the back of my neck.
We broke into a clearing, the trees finally giving way to a patch of rocky terrain.
In the distance, I could see the trailhead. Our cars parked like lifeboats waiting to save us.
Almost there, Clara shouted, her voice hoarse.
I didn't believe we'd make it. The thing was too fast, too relentless. But then, for the first time,
I dared to look back. I wish I hadn't. It was massive, taller than any man, its limbs too long and thin,
its body twisted in ways that didn't make sense. Its face, or what passed for a face,
was a mess of shadows and glowing, faintly blue eyes that seared into me,
and its hands, tipped with claws, reached for us with an unnatural hunger.
Run, I screamed, pushing Rachel ahead of me as the thing lunged.
I don't know how we made it, but we did.
The trailhead appeared like a mirage, and we stumbled out of the forest,
collapsing onto the gravel parking lot.
The thing stopped just at the edge of the trees,
its glowing eyes burning into me as it let out a low, guttural sound that vibrated through my chest.
Then it disappeared, melting back into the shadows like it had never been there.
For a long time, none of us spoke.
We just sat there, gasping for air, staring at the tree line.
I half expected it to come back, to drag us screaming into the forest, but the woods stayed still.
Eventually Tom broke the silence.
Everyone okay?
His voice was shaky, and his hands were trembling as he tried to light a cigarette.
No one answered.
What could we say?
We piled into the cars and drove in silence, the weight of what had happened pressing down on all of us.
I stared out the window, watching the trees blur past, my heart still hammering in my chest.
As we pulled into the nearest town, I finally spoke.
I'm never going back there, I said, my voice barely above a whisper.
Never again.
No one argued.
No one even looked at me.
But I meant it.
Whatever was out there in Blackwood Reserve wasn't just dangerous.
It was wrong, and I wasn't going to stick around to see what it wanted.
I'd always thought I was tough enough for any wilderness challenge.
That's what brought me to Blackwater Hollow in the dead of winter.
I craved the kind of isolation that could strip you down to your bones
and remind you what it meant to be alive.
But as I stood at the trailhead, staring into the dense forest draped in snow,
I felt the first prickle of unease.
The road to get here had been brutal.
Two hours of skidding on icy, narrow logging roads
where one wrong move would have sent me into a ravine.
My truck was now parked crookedly, half frozen to the ground,
its tires clinging to the last patch of solid earth before the wilderness swallowed me whole.
The silence was the first thing that hit me,
not the peaceful kind that makes you breathe a little easier.
This was heavy, like the woods themselves were holding their breath.
No wind, no rustling branches, no distant animal calls.
Just me, the crunch of snow under my boots,
and the faint hum of my own breath freezing in the air.
I adjusted my pack, double-checked my hatchet,
and started walking. The trail was barely a suggestion of a path, overgrown and obscured by a thick
layer of snow. My boots sank deep with each step, and I had to push through dense frozen underbrush.
There were no tracks, no signs of anyone having passed this way in weeks, maybe months,
just endless trees standing like silent sentinels on either side.
About an hour in, I started noticing things. The claw marks on the trees were the first,
long parallel grooves dug deep into the bark, too high for any animal I could think of.
A bear maybe, but they should have been hibernating.
I stopped to study one of the marks, running my gloved fingers over the rough edges,
and they looked deliberate, almost like someone had dragged something sharp down the trunk on purpose.
Then there was the trench.
It wasn't part of the trail, it ran perpendicular to it, cutting through the snow in a shallow groove.
My first thought was that someone had dragged a sled, but there were no footprints alongside it,
just the trench, like something heavy had been pulled along by something, or someone, that left no trace of themselves.
I stood there for a moment, staring down the faint line as it disappeared into the trees,
and told myself I didn't have time to investigate, not with the sun already dipping lower in the sky.
The deeper I went, the stranger it got.
Every so often I'd come across trees with the bark stripped completely clean, the pale wood
beneath standing out starkly against the dark trunks around it.
It wasn't weather or wrought.
It was as if something had peeled it away, leaving jagged edges that seemed too violent to be
natural.
I kept moving, telling myself it was just my imagination, but the silence around me felt heavier
with every step.
By the time I reached the clearing near the frozen pond, I was exhausted.
The spot seemed perfect, flat ground, a good view of the area, and close enough to the pond that I could collect water once I broke through the ice.
But as I set down my pack and started clearing a space for my tent, I had the sensation that I was being watched.
I turned, scanning the tree line, but there was nothing there.
Just shadows stretching long in the fading light.
I shrugged it off and started gathering wood for a fire.
That's when I saw the strange marks again.
this time on the ground. A loose circle of broken branches scattered haphazardly, but too concentrated to be
random. It wasn't like a fallen tree or the remnants of a storm. It was deliberate, and at the center
of the circle, the snow was packed down as if something heavy had been sitting there for a long time
before being dragged away. My mind raced through possibilities, none of them comforting. I forced
myself to keep moving, to finish setting up camp.
the fire helped a little its flickering light chasing back the worst of the shadows i made dinner sat by the flames and tried to convince myself i was just being paranoid but the woods around me stayed silent too silent even the crackle of the fire felt intrusive like it didn't belong here
as the night deepened i retreated to my tent zipping myself inside and keeping my hatchet within arm's reach i tried to sleep but every time i closed my eye to my eye and i tried to sleep but every time i closed my eye
eyes, I heard it. The faintest sound of snow crunching outside. Not constant, not even regular,
just an occasional, deliberate step. I held my breath, heart pounding, straining to listen.
Maybe it was an animal. Maybe it was nothing. But then it circled. Whatever it was,
it moved slowly around my camp, pausing every so often before taking another step. My throat
tightened as I gripped the hatchet, praying it would go away. Eventually, the sound faded,
and I told myself I'd imagined it, but I didn't sleep.
When the first light of dawn crept through the fabric of my tent,
I packed up as quickly as I could.
The clearing that had seemed so perfect the evening before,
now felt suffocating, the trees around it pressing in too close.
As I hoisted my pack and glanced back at the circle of broken branches,
I felt that I'd made a mistake coming here, a big one.
The morning light didn't bring the relief I'd hoped for,
If anything, it only made the clearing feel stranger, more sinister.
The pale sunlight filtered through the trees in weak beams,
casting long, sharp shadows that stretched across the snow.
I couldn't stop my eyes from darting to the edges of the clearing,
scanning the tree line for movement.
There was nothing, but that didn't ease the gnawing unease in my gut.
I was ready to leave, every instinct screaming at me
to put as much distance as I could between myself and whatever had circled
my tent during the night. But then I remembered the trench, that shallow groove in the snow,
the one that had veered off the trail and disappeared into the trees. I should have ignored it,
should have just turned around and gone home. But curiosity got the better of me. That and the
nagging feeling that if I didn't see where it led, it would follow me. I followed the trench,
each step slow and deliberate, my boots crunching in the snow. The forest felt different now,
closer, darker, the trees pressing in like silent onlookers.
The trench twisted and curved, leading me deeper into the woods,
where the snow was undisturbed except for the strange, deliberate path carved into it.
I tried not to think about what could have made it or why it didn't leave any other tracks.
The clearing was small, almost hidden, and the first thing that caught my eye was the framework.
It stood in the center like a macabre centerpiece.
Rough wooden beams lashed together.
with strips of cloth and rope forming a crude angular structure.
It reminded me of a hunting blind, but there was no purpose to it, no logic.
The angles were all wrong, as if whoever built it didn't know, or didn't care, what they were making.
Around the framework the ground was littered with debris.
Broken shards of glass glittered in the snow, reflecting the weak sunlight like jagged teeth.
There were bones, too, small ones, likely animal, but gnawed clean.
in a way that made my stomach churn. And then there was the boot, just one lying on its side,
half buried in the snow. It was old, the leather cracked and stiff, but it didn't look like it had
been there long enough to freeze solid. I moved closer, my breath clouding the air in short, shallow bursts.
The snow beneath the framework was packed down, as if something had been dragged or stomped there
repeatedly. I felt that it wasn't just the framework itself that was wrong. This whole clearing
felt off, like I was standing in a place that didn't belong to me, or anyone. The trees around the
clearing weren't any better. Their bark was scarred with strange carvings, spirals, jagged lines,
crude stick figures. Some were small and faint, others deep and violent, gouged into the wood as if
in a frenzy. I snapped a few pictures with my phone, my hands trembling as I tried to focus. My pulse was
hammering in my ears, drowning out the eerie silence. I didn't stay long. The air in the clearing
felt heavy, like it was pressing against me, urging me to leave. I turned and followed the trench back to
my camp, my legs moving faster with each step. By the time I saw my tent again, I was practically
jogging, but what greeted me stopped me cold. My camp was destroyed. My tent lay on its side,
the fabric slashed open and half buried in the snow. My food bag had to be. My food bag had
been torn apart, its contents scattered and mangled. My water bottles were punctured, their
icy remains pooled in the snow like small frozen lakes. Tracks surrounded the site, big ones, larger
than any humans, but strangely uneven, as if whatever had made them alternated between walking
upright and crawling on all fours. The final blow was the tree. The one I'd camped closest to,
bore a fresh carving, larger and more detailed than the ones I'd seen in the clearing.
It was a spiral, jagged and deep, the lines overlapping and crossing in a way that made my
headache just to look at it.
It hadn't been there the night before.
My throat went dry as I realized what that meant.
Whoever or whatever had been circling my tent wasn't just passing by.
It had been here, watching.
I didn't even bother packing properly.
I grabbed what I could, shoving it into my pack with shaking hands.
My knife stayed in my other hand, clenched so tightly that my fingers started to cramp.
Every snap of a branch, every gust of wind sent my heart racing as I started the trek back to my truck.
The trail felt longer this time, the forest darker, the air colder.
The silence was no longer just heavy.
It was suffocating, pressing in on all sides like a living thing.
And then the noises started.
faint at first, like the crunch of snow far behind me, but they grew louder, closer, and less like
footsteps. It wasn't steady, it was erratic, uneven, punctuated by low, guttural sounds that sent
terror through me. I kept walking, refusing to look back, but the noises didn't stop. A cold sweat
soaked through my layers as I pushed myself faster, each step feeling heavier than the last.
At one point, I caught movement out of the corner of my eye.
a tall hunched shape weaving between the trees.
When I turned my head, it was gone.
By the time I reached my truck, I was running.
My breath came in ragged gasps as I fumbled with the keys,
my numb fingers struggling to unlock the door.
As I threw myself into the driver's seat and started the engine, I heard it.
A loud, crashing sound, like something big barreling through the trees behind me.
I didn't wait to see what it was.
I tore down the icy road, the tires skidding, and my headless.
lights barely cutting through the gloom. In the rearview mirror just for a second I saw it.
A figure standing at the edge of the forest, too tall, too thin, with glowing eyes that burned like
embers. I didn't stop driving until I was miles away. The trees thinning and the sky brightening.
Be careful out there. There's a stillness to the Idaho wilderness that feels like stepping into
another world. No cars, no chatter, no deadlines, just trees, stretching endlessly in every
direction, their towering forms bending slightly under the breeze. This is what I needed. An escape,
a reset. I parked my car at the trailhead, threw on my pack, and tightened my boots. The air was
crisp, biting at my cheeks in a way that made me feel alive. I checked my map, folded it back
into my pocket, and started down the trail. The crunch of my boots against the dirt echoed faintly
through the trees, a comforting sound against the overwhelming quiet. The first of the first
forest was different out here. No sounds of distant hikers or dogs barking, no signs marking every
fork in the trail, just raw, untouched wilderness. I reveled in the isolation, feeling that rare
freedom city life can never provide. The first couple of miles were uneventful. A squirrel darted
across the trail, a hawk circled lazily above. I stopped once to adjust my pack and sip some water,
letting the sheer quiet of the forest seep into my bones.
That's when I noticed something, off to my right, just beyond the tree line.
At first, I thought it was a trick of the light.
The way the sun filtered through the branches can create strange illusions,
turning shadows into shapes that aren't really there.
But as I squinted, I realized this wasn't a shadow.
It was a person, a man, standing perfectly still between the trees.
Something about him was wrong.
His proportion seemed stretched, his arms hanging a little too long at his sides.
He was facing me, or at least I thought he was.
The details were hard to make out in the dappled light, but it looked like his face was
blank, just smooth skin, where eyes, a nose, and a mouth should have been.
I froze.
My mind scrambled for an explanation.
Maybe he was wearing some kind of mask, a hunter maybe, but who hunts without moving,
without blinking.
Hey, I called out, my voice sounding too loud in the silence.
No response, no movement.
Just that blank, faceless stare.
My heart hammered as I took a step back,
my fingers tightening around the straps of my pack.
I blinked and he was gone, not walked away gone, just gone.
Like he'd never been there at all.
I stood there staring at the empty space between the trees where he'd been.
My rational brain kicked in, offering up excuses.
You're tired. Your eyes are playing tricks on you. This is what happens when you spend too much time
staring at shadows. Shaking it off, I kept moving. My steps felt heavier now, the forest around me
a little darker, a little quieter. I told myself it was fine, just a weird moment,
nothing more. Still, when it came time to set up camp, I made sure to go a little off trail,
far from where I'd seen him, just in case.
By the time I pitched my tent, the sun was sinking low,
painting the sky in hues of orange and purple.
I ate a quick dinner, a freeze-dried something or other,
that tasted like cardboard, but filled the void in my stomach.
Exhaustion crept in as the first stars appeared overhead,
and I crawled into my tent, zipping it up tight.
The forest at night is a different beast.
The silence is so complete, it's almost loud.
Every rustle of leaves, every distant crack of a branch feels amplified.
I lay there, listening to the rhythm of my own breathing,
trying to convince myself that I was safe, that I was alone.
At some point, I drifted off.
I don't know how long I slept, but when I woke up,
the first thing I noticed was the cold.
The air inside the tent was icy, brushing against my face like a breath from the outside.
That's when I realized.
The door was open.
not just unzipped a little, completely open.
The flap hung loosely, swaying slightly in the breeze.
I shot up, my heart pounding so hard it felt like it might burst through my chest.
My mind raced.
Did I forget to close it?
Did I hear something earlier and ignore it?
I fumbled for my flashlight and shone it outside.
The beam of light cut through the dark,
illuminating only the thick trees surrounding my camp.
Nothing moved.
No sign of anyone, or anything.
I sat there for what felt like hours. Flashlight clutched in one hand, knife in the other.
Eventually I convinced myself it was a mistake. Maybe I'd been so tired I hadn't zipped it all the way.
It had to be that, right? I zipped the tent back up, this time triple checking it, and laid down again,
though sleep didn't come easily. Outside, the forest creaked and groaned, and every sound felt like a
footstep. I didn't know it then, but the worst was still ahead. Much, much worse. I couldn't shake
the feeling from the night before. That open tent door haunted me. I'd spent the morning convincing
myself it was nothing, a slip of my tired mind. But deep down, the unease lingered. As I packed up camp,
the forest seemed heavier somehow, like the trees themselves were leaning in, listening.
I forced myself back onto the trail, trying to focus on the rhythmic crunch of my boots against the dirt.
The sky was overcast now, the sun only peeking through in small bursts, casting fleeting shadows that danced unnervingly across the path.
Every so often I'd catch myself glancing back over my shoulder, expecting, I don't know what, but the trail behind me was always empty.
That's when I noticed it. A bundle of sticks bound tightly with rope, lying dead dead.
center on the trail. It wasn't large, maybe the size of my forearm, but it was intricately tied,
with the sticks twisted and bent into a shape that vaguely resembled a human figure. I stared at it,
heart thudding in my chest. Someone had to have made this, and recently too. It hadn't been there
the day before. I nudged it with my boot, half expecting it to crumble, but it held firm,
the bindings taught. Some kind of prank, I muttered. My
voice sounding hollow in the stillness. But who would be out here in the middle of nowhere
pulling stunts like this? And why? I kicked the bundle into the underbrush and kept moving.
The air felt colder now, and the once soothing silence of the forest was starting to feel oppressive.
Every snap of a twig made me flinch. Every rustle of leaves had me scanning the trees,
searching for movement. I couldn't shake the feeling I was being watched. By late afternoon,
the unease had grown unbearable.
I decided to camp in an even more secluded spot that night, far from the trail.
I found a small clearing surrounded by thick trees and set up my tent quickly,
my hands trembling slightly as I drove the stakes into the ground.
The sun was sinking fast, and I didn't want to be caught fumbling in the dark.
As night fell, I lit a small fire, hoping its warmth would settle my nerves.
It didn't.
Every crackle of the flame seemed to echo too loudly, and the shadows they cast seemed to shift in ways that didn't make sense.
I tried to focus on my meal, but my appetite had vanished.
Movement, just at the edge of the firelight.
A shadow slipping between the trees.
My breath caught, and I froze, my eyes locked on the spot where I'd seen it.
Hello?
I called out, my voice shaking.
Nothing.
no response.
Just the faint whisper of the wind through the branches.
I grabbed my flashlight and swept it across the trees,
the beam slicing through the darkness.
It caught nothing but bark and leaves.
Still, I couldn't shake the feeling that something,
someone, was out there, watching.
I doused the fire and retreated into my tent,
zipping it up tightly and double-checking every seam.
The knife I'd packed for emergencies felt inadequate as I clutched
in my hand, but it was better than nothing.
Hours passed.
My heart refused to slow, every noise outside amplified by the thin walls of the tent.
Then I saw them.
Two faint glowing points of light, high in the branches of a tree directly ahead of me.
Eyes.
They didn't blink, didn't move, they just stared down at me, unflinching.
I wanted to tell myself it was a reflection, a trick of the light, but there was no mistaking it.
Those were eyes.
I gripped the knife tighter, my palms slick with sweat, and stayed perfectly still, barely breathing.
Minutes stretched into hours, and the eyes never wavered.
I felt trapped, like an animal caught in a snare, unable to run, unable to fight.
When the first faint light of dawn began to creep into the tent, the eyes vanished as silently as they'd appeared.
I didn't move until the sun was fully up, the golden light spilling over the clearing.
When I finally unzipped the tent and stepped outside, I stopped cold.
An X made of sticks and rope was lying just in front of the tent flap.
It wasn't like the figure I'd seen before.
This was deliberate, precise, like a warning.
I stared at it, my mind racing.
Someone, or something had been here while I was inside, too paralyzed with fear to notice.
This wasn't a prank.
This wasn't my imagination.
I didn't bother eating breakfast.
I packed up my gear as fast as I could.
my hands trembling and hit the trail again my eyes darting to every shadow every tree i'd decided this trip was over whatever i'd come here to escape was nothing compared to what i might be running toward
the forest was suffocating me every step i took felt heavier like the ground itself was trying to pull me down keep me here my pack bounced against my back as i trudged toward the trailhead every muscle in my body aching from the tension i'd carried all night
I couldn't stop thinking about the X outside my tent.
Someone had been there.
Close enough to touch the fabric.
Close enough to take me if they wanted.
I kept my knife in my hand as I walked, my knuckles white around the handle.
The trail was empty, as it had been since I started this trip.
No hikers, no animals, just me and the endless forest.
But I knew I wasn't alone.
I could feel it like an itch just beneath the skin.
An hour passed, maybe two. I wasn't sure anymore. Time felt warped out here, every shadow stretching
longer than it should, every sound echoing too long. Then I heard it, the faint crunch of leaves behind me.
I stopped dead in my tracks, the sound of my heartbeat loud in my ears. Slowly, I turned,
scanning the trail. There was nothing there. Just trees and underbrush, the path winding back into
the distance.
I waited, straining to hear, to catch a glimpse of movement.
Silence. I shook my head and started walking again,
forcing myself to focus on the dirt path ahead.
My car wasn't far. I could make it.
I just had to keep moving.
Then came the rocks.
The first one was small, barely larger than a pebble,
and it landed on the path a few feet behind me with a soft thunk.
I spun around, my breath catching in my throat.
again nothing. I stared into the woods, the trees twisting together like dark veins.
Who's there? I called out, my voice cracking. No response. I backed away slowly. My knife held out
in front of me like it could actually protect me from whatever was out there. Another rock landed,
closer this time, than another. It wasn't random. It was deliberate, like something was hurting
me, forcing me to keep moving. The path opened up slightly, giving me a sliver of hope as I caught
sight of the parking lot in the distance. My car was there, a beacon of safety in the oppressive
wilderness. Relief surged through me, and I broke into a run, my boots pounding against the dirt.
I didn't care about the weight of my pack or the pain in my legs. I just had to get out.
As I reached the edge of the parking lot, I stumbled to a stop. The sight of my car, my safe haven,
nearly made me collapse in relief.
But then I saw it.
Through the driver's window, something was lying on the seat.
I hesitated, every instinct screaming at me to turn around,
to run back into the woods even if that meant certain death.
But I couldn't leave.
I had to see.
Slowly, I approached the car, my hands shaking so badly,
I nearly dropped my knife.
Pressed against the window was one of my shirts,
ripped and shredded,
with dark stains along the fabric.
And next to it, perfectly centered on the seat,
was another X made of sticks and rope.
I reached for the door handle, praying it was still locked.
It was.
My knees almost buckled.
Whatever had left that thing in my car had the keys at some point.
They'd been close enough to take them,
close enough to lock the door again,
close enough to have been inside my tent too.
My fingers fumbled for the key in my pocket.
I unlocked the door, threw my pack into the back seat, and climbed in, slamming the door shut
behind me. My chest was heaving, my breath coming in short, ragged gasps. I started the car
and threw it into reverse, my eyes darting to the rearview mirror as I backed out of the lot.
I was so focused on getting out of there that I almost didn't see him. Standing at the edge of the
lot, just where the trees began, was the faceless man. He didn't move, didn't step forward or retreat.
He just stood there, his long arms hanging at his sides, his featureless face tilted ever so slightly
as if he were watching me. I couldn't look away, even as the car lurched backward onto the road.
My hands gripped the steering wheel so tightly they hurt. The man didn't chase me. He didn't make a
sound. He just stood there, unmoving, as I sped away down the winding road. My heart didn't
slow until I reached the outskirts of the nearest town. Even then,
I kept glancing in the rearview mirror, half expecting to see him standing in the middle of the road, waiting for me.
I don't know what he was, what he wanted, or why he let me go.
All I know is that I'll never go back to those woods.
I don't think I could survive another encounter.
And the worst part, as I sit here now, writing this, I can't get rid of the feeling that I'm still not alone.
It was Eric's idea, of course. It always was.
One last adventure before school starts, he'd said, grinning like the woods were calling him personally.
I didn't have the heart or the guts to say no.
That's how we ended up on Dagger Ridge Trail, two backpacks full of gear, and me, dragging my feet behind him like I knew something he didn't.
The day was perfect, cloudless skies, warm sun, the kind of summer day that makes you think nothing bad could ever happen.
But the closer we got to the trailhead, the quieter everything became.
Even the cicadas, which had been screaming earlier, faded into silence as we stepped under the cover of trees.
Come on, Ryan, keep up, Eric called, already a few paces ahead.
His backpack swung with every step, his excitement almost tangible.
I adjusted the straps on mine, wishing I hadn't packed so much, and followed.
The trail started wide, an easy climb over loose gravel and heavy.
roots, but it quickly narrowed, hemmed in by trees so thick their branches tangled overhead.
The sunlight filtered through in broken patches, casting long, fractured shadows on the ground.
I kept my eyes on Eric's back, trying to ignore how the air had cooled, how the faint breeze
smelled faintly sour like rotting leaves. Why does it smell like that? I asked, my voice too
loud in the silence. Eric shrugged. Wildlife maybe. Relax, relax man. It's just a trail. But it
wasn't. Not really. Dagger Ridge wasn't on any map I'd ever seen. The stories about it were vague,
half-remembered tales from older kids who swore they'd seen shadows move or heard voices calling
their names. I hadn't believed them, at least not until now. As we climbed higher, I noticed strange
marks on the trees. At first I thought they were scratches, maybe from a bear, but the closer I looked,
the less they made sense. Long, jagged lines that crossed and sped.
spiraled, as if someone had carved them deliberately.
You see these? I asked, stopping to trace one with my fingers.
Eric didn't even glance back.
Probably some hiker messing around.
Let's keep moving. We'll lose the light if we don't hurry.
I wanted to turn around right then.
Every instinct I had screamed to go back, but Eric's confidence was infectious.
Always had been.
He'd charge ahead, laughing at the danger, and I'd follow, too stubborn to be the one who
chickened out. By the time we reached Silver Basin, the sun was low, the sky streaked with bruised
purples and fiery reds. The basin was a wide clearing, surrounded by jagged cliffs that seemed to
lean in, as if they were listening. Eric dumped his pack and stretched, grinning. This is perfect,
he said. Look at that view. I dropped my pack, sitting heavily on a flat rock. The air was still,
unnaturally so. I tried to focus on the beauty of the cliffs, the way the last rays of sunlight
painted them gold, but I couldn't drop the sensation that we weren't alone. Eric, as usual, was oblivious.
He grabbed his flashlight and slung his backpack over one shoulder. I'm going to check out the ridge,
he said. Be back in ten. Wait, what? I stood up, already reaching for my own flashlight.
You're just going to wander off? It's getting dark. He laughed.
That cocky, carefree laugh that always made me feel like a little kid.
Relax, Ryan. I'll be fine. Just stay here and get the fire going. I'll be back before you know it.
I watched him disappear into the trees, his flashlight beam bouncing ahead of him.
For a moment, I considered following, but the thought of being alone in the dark woods was worse than staying put.
The fire took longer to start than I'd expected. My hands wouldn't stop shaking, and the dry kinness
handling Eric had packed wasn't cooperating. By the time I had a small flame going, the sun was gone,
leaving only the flickering light of the fire and the encroaching darkness beyond it. Ten minutes passed,
then twenty, the fire crackled, and the shadows it cast danced on the trees, making them look
alive. I glanced at my watch, the knot in my stomach tightening.
Eric? I called, my voice too small, swallowed by the vast silence. Nothing. The
shadows seemed to stretch longer, deeper, their edges sharp and wrong. I stood gripping my flashlight
and turned toward the path Eric had taken. The darkness beyond the firelight felt alive,
pulsing with a weight I couldn't explain. Eric! I shouted again louder this time. A faint sound,
like a branch snapping, came from the woods. Relief surged through me. About time, I muttered,
stepping toward the noise, but no one answered. The firelight behind me,
felt impossibly far away as I stared into the woods. My flashlight flickered, its beam weak
against the thick shadows. For a second, I thought I saw movement, a figure darting between the
trees, but when I focused it was gone. Something wasn't right. I could feel it in my chest,
in the way the hair on my arms stood on end. The shadows weren't just moving. They were watching.
I took a shaky step back toward the fire, my flashlight trembling in my
grip. A whisper, faint, just barely audible. Ryan, it came from the woods, soft and drawn out
like a breath. My heart slammed in my chest. Eric, I whispered my voice trembling, but deep down I
already knew it wasn't him. I don't know how long I stood there staring into the trees.
The fire crackled behind me, but it felt miles away. My grip on the flashlight was so tight
my fingers ached, but I didn't dare let go. The whisper, my name soft and stretched,
like it didn't belong in this world, still hung in the air. Eric, I called again, though my voice
was barely a croak. The silence that followed felt heavier than before, like the forest was tense.
I stepped forward, flashlight shaking in my hands, the weak beam cutting through the shadows.
The trees loom taller now, their branches twisted into shapes that didn't look natural.
My foot crunched on something and I froze, heart pounding.
Slowly I looked down.
It was Eric's backpack.
It sat upright in the middle of the trail, like someone had placed it there on purpose.
The straps were torn, one hanging by a thread, and dirt streaked the fabric.
I crouched down, my hand trembling as I reached for it.
Eric?
I whispered, as if he might jump out from behind a tree, laughing at the scare.
But there was no sound, no movement.
I unzipped the pack slowly, each rasp of the zipper too loud in the suffocating silence.
Inside everything was untouched, a flashlight, an unopened water bottle,
Eric's old compass, and a crumpled map.
My stomach turned as I realized he wouldn't have left this behind unless he had no choice.
Where are you? I muttered, my voice cracking.
Then I heard it again, the whisper.
Ryan.
It was closer this time, deeper, as if the...
forest itself was saying my name. My head snapped up, and my flashlight caught something,
a flicker of movement just beyond the beam, a shadow, too large to be Eric, slipping between the trees.
Who's there? I shouted, my voice breaking. The forest didn't answer, but I swore I heard a faint
chuckle, dry and rasping, like leaves crumbling underfoot. Panic bubbled in my chest,
and I stumbled back, the flashlight darting wildly across the woods.
The shadows seemed alive now, stretching and shifting, moving when they shouldn't.
That's when I noticed the footprints.
They led away from the backpack, deeper into the forest.
At first, I thought they were Erick's, deep impressions in the soft dirt.
But as I followed them with the beam, my stomach dropped.
They were wrong, too long, too wide and space too far apart,
like whatever made them wasn't human.
Eric, I whispered, my throat dry.
I didn't want to follow the trail.
Every instinct screamed at me to turn around,
to run back to the camp and wait for daylight.
But if Eric was out there, if he needed help.
I swallowed hard and took a step forward.
Then another.
The forest seemed darker now, the trees closer together.
The air was thick, heavy, like I was breathing through a wet cloth.
My flashlight flickered again,
the beam weakening as if the forest was sucking the life out of it.
Ahead, the footprints ended abruptly in a small clearing dominated by a massive tree.
Its trunk was gnarled and twisted, its bark covered in deep spiraling grooves that glowed faintly in the dark.
The symbols made my skin crawl, their patterns too perfect, too deliberate, as if they were alive.
The earth around the base of the tree was disturbed, churned up like something had been buried, or dug out.
My stomach churned.
The sour smell stronger now.
stinging the back of my throat.
Eric? I called, my voice barely above a whisper.
The tree didn't answer, but the shadows around it seemed to shift, converging toward the base.
I stepped closer, my feet feeling like they weighed a ton.
My flashlight caught something near the roots, a piece of fabric, torn and dirty.
Eric's shirt. My breath hitched.
The whisper came again, loud and clear, wrapping around me like cold hands.
Ryan! I spun around the flashlight's beam slicing through the darkness. There was nothing,
no one. But the whisper didn't stop. It grew louder, joined by others, overlapping voices that
came from everywhere and nowhere. Ryan, Ryan, Ryan. They weren't just calling my name,
they were laughing. I backed away, my heart hammering in my chest and tripped over a root.
The flashlight flew out of my hand, clattering to the ground, its beam flickering with.
wildly. I scrambled for it, my fingers brushing cold earth when I saw it. A figure, tall and
impossibly thin, stepped out from behind the tree. Its face, or what should have been its face,
was nothing but a void, a black emptiness that seemed to swallow the light. Its limbs were too
long, its movements jerky, like a marionette controlled by invisible strings. I froze,
unable to breathe, unable to move. The thing tilted its head as if studying me,
before taking a slow, deliberate step forward.
My body finally obeyed.
I grabbed the flashlight and bolted,
tearing through the forest as the whispers turned into a deafening roar.
The trees seemed to close in,
their branches clawing at me,
their roots grabbing at my feet.
When I finally stumbled into the clearing where our camp had been,
the fire was out.
The tent was gone,
and scratched into the dirt,
glowing faintly in the moonlight,
where the same spiraling symbol
I'd seen on the tree. I fell to my knees, gasping for breath, the whispers fading into silence.
But the feeling of being watched didn't leave. It would never leave. I don't remember much about
how I got back to town. The trees seemed to stretch on forever, their shadows clinging to me like
they didn't want to let go. By the time I stumbled out of the woods, my legs were shaking so
badly I could barely stay upright. I collapsed onto the dirt road, clutching Eric's shredded backpack,
the straps still frayed and damp with something I didn't want to think about.
When I reached town, it was already morning.
The sunlight didn't feel warm, though.
It felt harsh, too bright, like it was trying to erase the nightmare of the night before.
But it couldn't.
That cold, heavy feeling followed me, clinging to my skin like the forest itself had seeped into my veins.
The words tumbled out of me when I saw Eric's parents.
He's gone, I croaked.
barely able to meet their eyes.
Something.
Something took him.
The search party was organized faster than I expected.
Maybe it was the look on my face.
Maybe it was the way I couldn't stop shaking,
or how I gripped Eric's backpack like a lifeline.
I told them about Dagger Ridge, about the symbols, about the whispers,
but no one believed me, not really.
It's just the woods, Sheriff Greer said,
adjusting his hat like this was any other missing person case.
Kids get lost all the time. We'll find him.
But as the search teams disappeared into the forest, I saw the doubt in their eyes.
They'd heard the stories too.
Everyone had.
I stayed at the edge of the woods, pacing, biting my nails, waiting for someone to come back with good news.
Hours passed.
Then days.
They found nothing, not Eric, not even footprints, just his backpack.
abandoned in the middle of the trail, and near Silver Basin, the massive tree with its spiraling
carvings, the search dogs refused to go near it. One of them, a big German shepherd, yelped and
bolted when its handler tugged too close. The handler turned back, pale, muttering something about the
air feeling wrong. Eventually, the search was called off. We'll keep looking, the sheriff told
Eric's parents, but the look in his eyes said otherwise. They all thought he was gone for good,
dead probably. But I knew better. The nightmares started a week later. At first they were just
flashes, Eric's pale face, his lips moving like he was trying to tell me something. But no sound came out.
Then the dreams grew worse. I was back in the forest, running through the trees, the whispers
all around me. The shadows were alive, reaching for me with love.
long, spindly fingers. Eric was always ahead of me, just out of reach, his figure flickering like
an old TV about to lose its signal. Wait, I screamed, but he never did. When I woke up, my body felt
heavy, my chest tight like the forest was still there, pressing down on me. The whispers followed me
into my waking life, faint at first, just on the edge of hearing, but over time they grew louder.
Ryan
Always my name
Always the same tone
Mocking
Laughing like the forest itself
Was calling me back
I tried to ignore it
I buried myself in school
In chores
In anything that kept me out of my own head
But no matter where I went
The forest was there
Lurking at the edge of my mind
Years passed
I never went back to Dagger Ridge
I didn't need to
The forest had come with me
following me like a shadow I couldn't drop.
The whispers were worse at night.
I'd wake up drenched and sweat, my heart racing,
convinced I wasn't alone in my room.
Once I swear I saw a figure standing in the corner,
tall, thin, its limbs too long,
its face nothing but darkness.
When I turned on the light, it was gone.
By the time I was 25, I'd stopped sleeping entirely.
The nightmares blurred into reality,
and I couldn't tell where one ended,
and the other began. That's when I knew I had to go back. I returned to the Rockies in the
dead of winter. The forest was different now, quieter, colder, more menacing. The trailhead to
Dagger Ridge was overgrown, nearly hidden beneath snow and underbrush. But I found it. Of course I
did. The symbols were still there, carved into the bark of the trees, their jagged lines
glowing faintly even in daylight. The air felt thicker with every step, the whispers louder.
They weren't faint anymore. They were a chorus, overlapping voices calling my name laughing,
taunting. Ryan. Ryan. At Silver Basin I saw it again, the tree, its bark twisted with
the same spiraling patterns, its roots clawing into the earth like they were alive.
And at the base, a patch of disturbed ground. The snow didn't stand.
stick there, like the earth itself was rejecting it. My flashlight flickered as I stepped closer.
Eric? I whispered my voice breaking. The whispers stopped. For a moment the silence was deafening.
Then from behind the tree, a figure stepped out. It was him, Eric. Or at least it looked like him.
His face was pale, his eyes wide and empty, his mouth moving silently. He raised one hand,
pointing toward me, his movements slow and jerky, like a puppet on strings.
Eric, I croaked, taking a step back. He stopped, tilting his head, his mouth twisting into something
that wasn't a smile. And then, all at once, the whispers came back. They weren't voices anymore.
They were screams. The shadows around the tree erupted, long and clawed, reaching for me.
I turned and ran, the ground shifting beneath my feet.
The trees closing in.
The last thing I heard before I broke free of the forest was Eric's voice faint and broken.
Don't come back.
To this day, I don't know what happened to him.
I don't know if that thing was really Eric, or if it was something else wearing his face.
But I do know this.
I'm never going into the woods again.
The Pacific Northwest had always called to me,
its dense forests and misty mountains feeling more like home than my cramped apartment back east.
This trip was supposed to be my escape.
a reset after years of grinding through work and life.
It started perfectly, the crisp mountain air, winding roads that felt endless,
and the kind of solitude that lets you think clearly for the first time in months.
When Rick joined me in Bend, though, things shifted.
He stepped off the bus looking pale, like he hadn't slept in weeks.
I chalked it up to the long journey or his usual complaints about too much nature,
but there was something else, a jitteriness I couldn't quite place.
This place is weird. He muttered as we loaded his bag into the car. He glanced around like someone
might be watching us, though the parking lot was empty, except for a rusted pickup.
Yeah, weirdly beautiful, I teased, hoping to lighten his mood. You'll love it once we get out there.
He didn't. The whole drive to the cabin, Rick barely spoke, staring out the window like the trees
were pressing in on us. And honestly, the woods did feel thicker than usual, almost alive.
I told myself it was just the overcast sky or the early dusk, but by the time we arrived,
even I was feeling unsettled. The cabin wasn't much, an old structure that smelled faintly of
mildew, with creaky floorboards and a sagging roof that looked like it had survived one too many
storms. Quaint, I said, trying to sound cheerful as I unlocked the door. Quaint is code for
for haunted, Rick muttered, tossing his bag on the couch. He didn't mean it as a joke, though,
and the look he gave me made my stomach twist. Inside, the cabin was even smaller than the pictures
made it seem. A single light bulb buzzed faintly in the living room, and the kitchen was barely
more than a counter with a sink and an ancient stovetop. The windows were small,
and when I peaked out, all I could see was forest, a wall of dark green stretching endlessly
in every direction.
We unpacked in silence.
Rick kept checking his phone even though we both knew there wouldn't be service out here.
He had this habit of pacing when he was anxious,
and by the time I'd set my bag down, he was already wearing a path into the cabin's thin carpet.
What's wrong? I finally asked, trying to sound casual.
Nothing, he said too quickly. It's just, this place feels off, you know?
Off how, I pressed. He shrugged.
I don't know. It's like, like, like.
like we're being watched or something.
I rolled my eyes, but his words hit a nerve.
I hadn't admitted it to myself yet,
but the cabin did feel strange.
The air inside was heavy,
almost stifling,
and the silence wasn't peaceful.
It was an odd energy,
like the woods were tense.
That night, we sat by the fireplace
eating canned soup.
I'd planned a whole itinerary of hikes and scenic drives
for the next day,
but Rick barely acknowledged me when I laid it out.
He just,
stared at the flames, his jaw tight. Maybe we should head back tomorrow, he said suddenly.
What? No, we just got here. I tried to laugh, but it came out forced. Come on, it's not that bad.
You'll feel better after a good night's sleep. He didn't argue, which wasn't like him.
Usually Rick was the type to dig his heels in, even over little things. But tonight,
he just nodded, staring into the fire like he was afraid to look away. As we were getting ready
for bed, he broke the silence again. Hey, what's that thing you mentioned earlier? The legend or whatever.
I froze. You mean the forest watchers? Yeah, that. What's the deal with that? It's just a local story,
I said quickly. People say the woods are protected, I guess. You're not supposed to disrespect
the land or, you know, call attention to yourself. He raised an eyebrow. Call attention how?
There's a name you're not supposed to say.
They say if you do, they'll notice you.
Rick smirked, and I knew immediately what he was about to do.
Don't, I started, but it was too late.
He said the name, loud and clear, his voice almost taunting.
The room felt colder immediately, like a draft had swept through, but the windows were shut tight.
Rick, I snapped, my voice sharper than I intended.
That's not funny.
Oh, come on, it's just a story, he said, but his smirk was gone.
He glanced at the window, his shoulders stiff.
The rest of the night passed in tense silence.
I fell asleep easily enough, exhausted from the long day, but Rick stayed up.
I woke once, around midnight, to the sound of him pacing again.
But when I asked if he was okay, he just muttered, go back to sleep.
I did, but not before noticing how he kept glancing at the windows, his face pale in the dim light.
When Rick shook me awake, I thought it was time.
time to leave for our hike. My brain was groggy, still tethered to whatever half-formed dream I'd been
in, but his voice cut through the fog like a blade. Get up, he hissed, his words trembling.
We have to go. What time is it? I mumbled, reaching for my phone, but his hand grabbed mine,
stopping me. No, now, Claire, get up, he said, his voice sharp and urgent. It took me a moment
to register his face. In the dim glow from the bedside lamp, I could see his wide eyes. I could see his
wide eyes the way his jaw was clenched so tight it looked painful. Rick was tough, sarcastic,
sometimes annoyingly skeptical, but never scared. Yet here he was, pale and shaking like he'd seen
something no one should ever see. Rick, I whispered, my throat dry. What's going on? I can't explain
it. Not here, just pack your stuff. We're leaving. I started to argue, but something in his
expression shut me up. My pulse quickened, and a cold knot formed in my stomach. And a cold knot formed
in my stomach. He grabbed his bag from the corner, tossing clothes into it haphazardly while glancing over
his shoulder like he expected someone, or something, to burst through the door at any second.
I threw on a hoodie and started stuffing my things into my backpack. Is it an animal? Did you hear
something outside? Rick froze mid-step, his back to me. Yes, he whispered, almost too softly to hear,
but it wasn't normal. My heart skipped. What do you mean?
Not now, he snapped, his voice cracking.
Just move faster.
We hurriedly packed and I followed him outside to the car.
The cold hit me first, sharp and biting, though it wasn't that cold earlier.
My breath clouded the air as I stuffed my bag into the trunk.
Rick was already in the driver's seat, fidgeting with the keys.
His hands shaking so badly it took him three tries to get them into the ignition.
When the engine roared to life, I felt a brief surge of relief.
The headlights cast a pale yellow glow over the dirt road ahead, but beyond that was only blackness.
The kind of darkness you don't realize exists until you're in the middle of nowhere.
What happened back there? I asked as we pulled onto the road.
My voice sounded thin, brittle. Rick didn't answer right away.
He kept his eyes locked on the road, his knuckles white against the steering wheel.
Finally, after what felt like an eternity, he exhaled shakily.
I was trying to fall asleep, he began, his voice low and uneven.
But I kept hearing this, sound, like tapping.
At first, I thought it was just the wind or something, but it kept moving,
from the window to the wall, to the door.
I shivered and pulled my hoodie tighter around me.
Could it have been an animal?
He shook his head, his gaze darting to the rearview mirror.
No, it was too deliberate.
And then, I heard whispers.
I froze. Whispers. Yeah, he said. His voice barely above a whisper now. At first they were faint, like,
like wind through the trees. But they got louder, like, like they were circling the cabin. Then came the
footsteps. My chest tightened. Footsteps? Rick's jaw clenched and he nodded, heavy ones.
They were outside at first, moving around the porch. Then they started climbing. I heard them on the roof,
Claire. The car swerved slightly as his grip on the wheel tightened. I gripped the door handle,
my pulse pounding in my ears. You didn't see anything? No, he admitted, but I felt it,
like they were right there, watching, waiting. A chill crawled up my back, but I forced myself to
stay calm. It was probably just animals, I said, though the words felt hollow even as I said them.
Raccoons or something. Rick laughed bitterly, shaking his head. Raccoons don't whisper, Claire.
The road stretched ahead of us, winding through the endless forest.
The further we drove, the darker it seemed to get, as though the trees were swallowing the light.
The hum of the engine was the only sound, but it didn't feel peaceful.
It felt like we were being hunted.
After about thirty minutes, Rick tensed.
Do you see that? he asked, his voice sharp.
I squinted into the darkness.
At first I thought it was nothing, but then I saw them.
two headlights in the rearview mirror growing brighter and closer.
Someone's behind us, I said, more to myself than to him.
They weren't there a second ago, Rick muttered, his voice tight.
I've been watching.
The car behind us gained speed, closing the gap unnervingly fast.
I braced myself as Rick sped up, the tires skidding slightly on the loose gravel.
The headlights loomed closer, and for a moment I thought they were going to ram us.
But just as suddenly as they'd appeared, they vanished.
What the hell? I whispered, twisting around to look behind us.
The road was empty. Rick didn't answer.
His grip on the wheel was ironclad, his knuckles pale in the dim glow of the dashboard.
It's not over, he muttered under his breath.
The road curved sharply ahead, and as we rounded the bend,
the car's headlights illuminated something that made my blood run cold.
A massive stag stood in the middle of the road,
its antlers stretching impossibly high, its eyes reflecting the light in an unnatural way.
Rick, stop! I screamed. He slammed the brakes and the car skidded to a halt just feet from the animal.
The stag didn't flinch. It just stood there, its dark eyes fixed on us.
Its sheer size was otherworldly, like it didn't belong here or anywhere.
Rick and I sat frozen, too afraid to move, and then I heard it again. The whispers,
Soft, faint, but unmistakable carried on the cold night air.
They were back.
And they were closer now.
The stag didn't move.
It just stood there.
A dark silhouette against the faint beam of our headlights.
Its massive antlers like twisted branches reaching into the sky.
My breath caught in my throat.
The whispers were back.
Low, faint murmurs that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once.
I gripped Rick's arm, my nails digging into his skin.
Drive, I whispered, barely able to form the word.
Rick didn't respond.
His hands were glued to the steering wheel, his knuckles white, his whole body rigid.
He was staring at the stag, his chest rising and falling in short, shallow breaths.
I shook him.
Rick, we have to go.
The stag turned its head slightly, its eyes glinting like black mirrors.
And then, it stepped aside.
Not hurriedly, not startled, but deliberately.
like it was allowing us to pass.
Rick slammed on the gas, the car lurching forward as we sped past the animal.
I couldn't help but glance back, and for one horrifying moment I thought I saw it watching us.
Its head turned unnaturally far to follow our escape.
We didn't speak for a long time after that.
The road ahead was shrouded in darkness, the trees crowding closer with every mile.
The whispers ebbed and flowed, sometimes so faint I thought I imagined them.
Other times growing louder, almost insistent.
I kept checking the rearview mirror, half expecting those headlights to reappear,
or worse, something else.
The gas gauge dipped closer to empty.
I swore under my breath, my voice breaking the fragile silence.
We're not going to make it to the airport if we don't find a station soon.
Rick didn't respond, just pressed his foot harder on the accelerator.
His eyes stayed fixed on the road, but I could see.
see the tension in his jaw, the way his fingers twitched against the steering wheel.
The whispers were louder now, and I realized they weren't just murmurs. They were words.
I couldn't understand them, but they were there, layered and overlapping, coming from the trees,
the road, the air itself. Finally, a faint glow appeared ahead, a gas station, its flickering neon
sign like a beacon in the oppressive night. Relief washed over me, but it was short-lived.
As we pulled into the lot, I noticed how deserted it was.
No cars, no noise, just the hum of the old lights, and the wind rustling the trees.
Rick jumped out to pump the gas while I headed inside to grab coffee.
The moment I stepped through the door, the atmosphere hit me like a wall.
It was warm and still, but not in a comforting way.
The air felt too heavy, too quiet, like the whole place was holding its breath.
The woman behind the counter didn't greet me.
She didn't even look up.
Her hands shook slightly as she rearranged a display of gum, her eyes darting to the windows every few seconds.
I moved to the coffee station, fumbling with the lid as I tried to shake the unease that had settled over me.
That's when I noticed her watching me, not openly, but from the corner of her eye.
Every time I moved, her gaze shifted, her body tensing as though I might do something unpredictable.
I tried to ignore it, but her discomfort was contagious, and I couldn't help but glance out the window behind me.
The trees seemed closer than before, their dark silhouettes pressing against the glass.
When I turned back, she was gone.
I blinked, scanning the store, but she had disappeared into the back.
My pulse quickened, and I grabbed my coffee, moving to the counter.
Rick entered, just as I reached it, his face pale and drawn.
Pay and let's go, he muttered, his voice low.
He placed a pack of gum on the counter, not meeting my eyes.
The woman reappeared.
her movements jerky and nervous.
She rang us up quickly, her hands trembling so badly she dropped the change.
As I bent to pick it up, I saw him.
A man stood near the back of the store, leaning casually against a shelf.
His face was mostly hidden under the brim of a wide hat,
but his eyes, his eyes were fixed on Rick.
I froze.
Something about him was wrong.
He wasn't threatening exactly, but his presence felt heavy, oppressive.
like he belonged to a different time, or maybe a different world.
His gaze didn't waver, didn't blink, just stayed locked on Rick like he was studying him, measuring him.
I stood, clutching the change in my hand.
Rick, I whispered, but when I turned to look at him, his face told me he'd already seen the man.
He grabbed my arm, pulling me toward the door.
As we stepped outside, the whispers surged, louder now, almost deafening.
The wind had picked up, whipping through the trees, carrying those voices with it.
I felt a prickling at the back of my neck, like we were being watched,
not just by the man in the store, but by something much bigger, something unseen.
Rick shoved the gas cap back on and climbed into the driver's seat.
I barely had time to shut my door before he floored it,
the tires screeching as we sped out of the lot.
I looked back, expecting to see the man standing in the doorway, but there was nothing.
Just the gas station, shrinking into the distance, its neon sign flickering like a dying flame.
We drove in silence for what felt like hours.
The whispers faded as the first light of dawn crept over the horizon, turning the sky a muted gray.
The oppressive weight that had followed us all night began to lift, but the fear lingered.
Rick broke the silence first, his voice barely audible.
Did you see him?
I nodded.
Who was he?
Rick shook his head gripping the wheel tighter.
I don't know, but I don't think he was human.
We reached the airport just as the sun rose,
its golden light washing over the landscape like a blessing.
As soon as we boarded the plane, the tension finally broke,
leaving us exhausted and hollow.
I leaned my head against the window,
staring out at the mountains below,
but my thoughts were elsewhere.
I didn't know what had followed us that night,
whether it was something ancient,
something angry, or simply the consequences of Rick's careless words.
But I knew one thing.
The forest had been watching us, and it had let us leave.
This time, I didn't plan this trip well.
I'll admit that right off the bat.
My idea was simple.
Escape the grind, spend a weekend in nature, and clear my head.
Vermont's backwoods sounded perfect.
I didn't even bother booking a hotel,
just threw my gear in the trunk and hit the road.
By the time I reached the trailhead,
it was pushing 5 p.m., way later than I'd planned.
The place was deserted, not a single car in sight.
The sign at the trailhead said it was a five-hour hike to the nearest shelter.
Five hours.
I figured if I hustled, I'd make it by 10, maybe 10.30.
I had a flashlight and plenty of adrenaline, so I wasn't too worried.
Still, something about the empty parking lot made my skin prickle.
The first stretch of the trail wasn't bad.
The air was crisp and smelled like deep woods.
The trees loomed overhead, their branches knitting together in dense canopies.
I kept a good pace, the crunch of my boots on the dirt trail echoing in the silence.
Too silent now that I think about it.
No birds, no rustling leaves, just me.
Two hours in, the sun started to dip below the trees, and everything turned this muted gray.
I stopped for a quick break, leaning against a mossy boulder to catch my breath and sip some water.
I heard something. A soft crunch, like a footstep. My stomach dropped. I froze, the water bottle
halfway to my lips and strained to listen. Nothing. Just the quiet hum of insects and the faint
rustle of leaves. Probably a deer, I told myself. Maybe a small animal. But when I swung my flashlight
around the beam cut through the trees like a knife, illuminating absolutely nothing.
Get a grip, I muttered under my breath, trying to laugh off the tension. It was probably just my
imagination. I pushed off the boulder and kept moving, quickening my pace as the trail grew
darker. By the third hour, it was pitch black. My flashlight was my only lifeline,
casting a narrow beam of light that felt painfully inadequate. The trees were thicker now.
Their gnarled trunks twisted and blackened in the shadows.
Every few minutes I thought I heard something, a faint rustling behind me, the crack of a twig.
But every time I stopped and swung the light around, there was nothing.
The isolation was suffocating.
I kept telling myself it was just the woods playing tricks on me,
that my mind was conjuring noises out of the silence.
But the feeling that I wasn't alone wouldn't go away.
It was this nagging, crawling sensation on the back of my neck.
like I was being watched.
Then, at the four-hour mark, I heard it again.
This time, it wasn't subtle.
A branch snapped, loud and deliberate, somewhere to my left.
My heart shot into my throat as I spun around,
the flashlight trembling in my hand.
The beam landed on a cluster of trees,
their shadows stretching and twisting like skeletal hands.
Hello?
My voice sounded small, ridiculous even.
The woods didn't answer, but then,
Out of the corner of my eye, I caught a flicker of movement, something darting behind a tree.
Hey, I shouted, more out of instinct than anything else.
My voice cracked, and the forest swallowed it whole.
My pulse was hammering in my ears, drowning out everything else.
I held the flashlight steady, the beam fixed on the tree where I'd seen, something, but nothing moved.
Nothing came out.
I backed away slowly, my footsteps crunching against the dirt trail.
The beam of my flashlight swung wildly back and forth, but the shadows were too thick, too deep.
My breath came in short, panicked gasps, the kind you try to control but can't.
Then it happened, a scream, high-pitched, distorted, and impossibly loud.
It tore through the forest like a blade, echoing in every direction.
I froze, every muscle in my body locking up.
It didn't sound human.
It didn't sound like any animal I'd ever heard either.
It sounded wrong. I don't remember deciding to run. One second I was standing there, and the next
I was sprinting, my legs burning as I tore down the trail. The flashlight bounced wildly in my
hand, illuminating glimpses of roots and rocks that I barely managed to avoid. Behind me, I heard
footsteps, heavy, deliberate, and fast. Something was following me. I didn't dare look back.
The trail blurred as I ran, my lungs screaming for air.
My mind raced with questions I didn't want answers to.
What the hell was out there?
What did it want?
The footsteps stopped suddenly, but I didn't.
I kept running, desperate to put as much distance as I could between me and whatever was in those woods.
When I finally couldn't run anymore, I stumbled off the trail, collapsing behind a massive fallen tree.
My chest heaved, my throat raw from sucking in cold air.
I switched off the flashlight and crouched low, clutching it like a weapon.
darkness was absolute. My hands were shaking, my ears straining for any sound. I waited and waited,
and then I heard it again, soft, deliberate footsteps, this time circling the tree I was hiding behind.
I clenched my jaw, holding my breath. The footsteps stopped just on the other side of the trunk.
Something heavy scraped against the bark. I closed my eyes, praying that whatever it was
couldn't see me, couldn't hear the pounding of my heart. And then,
Then, silence. Nothing but the faint hum of insects. I stayed there for what felt like hours,
too terrified to move. Whatever was out there was waiting, watching. I knew it wasn't over,
not yet. I don't know how long I stayed curled beneath that fallen tree, but every second
felt like an eternity. My muscles ached from crouching. My breaths came shallow and uneven,
and my flashlight sat dark and cold in my trembling hands. I couldn't bring my
to turn it back on, not yet. Whatever was out there would see me first. The footsteps had stopped,
but the forest wasn't quiet. Far off, the crickets chirped steadily, their drone oddly soothing.
Closer though, the sounds were sharper, small snaps of twigs, the rustling of leaves.
Sometimes they were near, other times farther off. Whatever it was, it hadn't left. It was
circling me. I thought about running, but where would I go? The trail was barely visible
even with the flashlight, and I had no idea how far I'd wandered off it. And then there was that
scream. The memory of it froze me in place. I didn't want to hear it again, and I definitely
didn't want to find out what had made it. Hours passed, or maybe minutes. It was impossible to tell.
The forest felt like it had swallowed time. My mind kept jumping to the worst possibilities.
What if this thing was leading me somewhere?
What if there were more of them?
What if it didn't need to see me to know where I was?
Then, from the silence, came the first whisper,
low, guttural, and just barely audible.
My heart stopped.
I couldn't make out the words, if they were even words at all,
but the sound was unmistakably human.
It rose and fell like someone muttering to themselves,
each syllable jagged and harsh, like it hurt to say them.
The whisper came again, closer this time.
My breath hitched, and I pressed myself tighter against the tree trunk.
I couldn't see anything in the darkness, but I could feel it.
Something was there, just on the other side.
I fumbled for the flashlight, every instinct screaming at me not to turn it on,
but I couldn't just sit there blind.
My fingers found the switch, slick with sweat.
I took a deep breath, counted to three, and flicked it on.
The beam cut through the blackness, and for a split second, I wished I hadn't done it.
The light landed on a figure crouched low, maybe ten feet away.
Its face was obscured, hidden beneath a hood or hair, I couldn't tell, but its body was twisted
at an unnatural angle, one arm bracing the ground, the other stretched toward me.
The light hit its face, and it recoiled, letting it.
out a low hiss. Its movement was jerky, like a puppet pulled by invisible strings. Before I could
process what I was seeing, it scrambled back into the shadows, vanishing as quickly as it had appeared.
I couldn't breathe. My chest felt like it was caving in. My flashlight trembled in my hands,
the beam darting back and forth, but there was nothing, no sign of it. Just the endless,
oppressive dark. I had to move. Staying there.
wasn't an option anymore. Whatever that thing was, it knew where I was. Slowly I stood, my
legs shaking so badly I nearly collapsed. I scanned the area one last time, then started walking,
trying to keep my steps as quiet as possible. The fog had rolled in while I was hiding,
blanketing the forest in a thick suffocating gray. My flashlight barely cut through it. Every tree
looked the same. Their twisted branches reaching toward me like skeletal.
hands. The trail was gone. I had no idea where I was. I stumbled through the underbrush,
each step crunching louder than I wanted. The whispers followed me, growing louder,
then fading, like they were weaving in and out of the fog. Every so often I'd hear a footstep
or the faint scrape of something dragging along the ground. I was too scared to look back.
Then I found it, a clearing. At first, I thought I'd made it to the shore. At first, I thought I'd made it to the
shelter, but as I got closer, my stomach dropped. In the center of the clearing was a ring of
branches, arranged in a perfect circle. Strange symbols were etched into each one, crude and uneven,
as though carved by a shaking hand. In the middle of the circle was a hole, deep, fresh, and wide
enough to fit a person. I stumbled back, my flashlight catching on something else. Footprints.
bare, human footprints, large and staggered, leading from the hole to the tree line.
My throat tightened, and I swung the light around, expecting to see those glowing eyes
staring back at me.
The forest was empty, for now.
I turned and ran.
I didn't care about the noise anymore.
Branches whipped at my face.
Roots snagged my boots, but I didn't stop.
My only thought was to get back to the car.
I didn't know how far I was or if I was even heading in the right direction, but I had to try.
When I finally broke through the trees and saw the trailhead, relief hit me like a wave.
My car was there, untouched, just as I'd left it.
But as I got closer, something caught my eye, a handprint smeared across the driver's side window.
It was muddy, the fingers impossibly long, and it was fresh.
I didn't stop to think.
I yanked the door open, threw myself inside, and locked it.
My hands shook so badly I could barely get the keys into the ignition.
When the engine roared to life, I floored it, gravel sprang beneath the tires as I sped out of there.
In my rearview mirror, I saw it.
A figure standing at the edge of the forest, its head tilted, watching me.
Its glowing eyes were the last thing I saw before the road curved, taking me away from that place.
I didn't stop driving until I was halfway home.
Even now, I don't know what I saw out there.
I just know I'll never go back.
And sometimes, late at night, I still hear those whispers.
Christmas Eve was supposed to be chill and peaceful.
I'd planned it perfectly.
Lily's family would come over.
We'd sit around the fire pit, drink a few beers, and call it a night.
No drama, just a quiet evening at my place.
tucked far enough from town to feel like we were on our own little island.
But now, as I sit here writing this,
I can't shake the feeling that my life changed forever that night.
It all started normally enough.
Around 7.30 p.m., I was out back clearing out the fire pit.
The snow crunched under my boots as I tossed out last week's ashes and stacked fresh logs.
It was cold, but the kind of cold you get used to when you live in the Midwest,
sharp but bearable. The air felt heavy, though, too still. Normally, there'd be coyotes yipping in the
distance, maybe some wind stirring the trees. Tonight, nothing, just silence. Rusty, my German shepherd,
trotted along beside me, sniffing at the air like he'd caught a strange scent. I patted his head
absent-mindedly. Relax, boy, I said, though I was trying to convince myself more than him. By the time
Lily's parents pulled up in their truck, I'd managed to push the weird feeling to the back of my mind.
I greeted them, handed Mark a beer, and helped her mom carry some casserole dish into the house.
For the next 20 minutes, I forgot about the stillness outside. We laughed, talked about Christmas
plans, and for a while, everything felt normal. At 8.30, I decided to step out and light the fire.
I grabbed the lighter, and Rusty followed me to the back door. His name,
clicking on the floor like he was on edge. As soon as I opened the door, he froze. His ears
perked up and his body went rigid. What's wrong, buddy? I asked, peering into the yard.
The fire pit was barely visible in the dark, just a black silhouette against the snow.
Beyond that, the tree line loomed like a wall. My breath fogged in front of me as I stepped
out, trying to ignore the way my chest tightened. Rusty stayed behind, groumed.
growling softly. He didn't follow me, and that should have been my first sign to go back inside.
I crouched by the pit, flicking the lighter and watching the flames catch. The fire hissed and
popped, casting flickering shadows that danced on the snow. That's when I heard it. A low whistle,
faint, but unmistakable. It wasn't coming from the house or the wind. It was coming from the woods.
I stood up slowly, my eyes fixed on the tree line. Probably.
the wind, I muttered, though even as I said it I knew that wasn't true. The whistle came again,
longer this time, and Rusty barked sharply from the porch. My gut twisted. It wasn't an animal.
It sounded off, almost human, but not quite. Okay, time to go, I said, walking briskly back
toward the house. Rusty bolted inside as soon as I opened the door, his tail tucked between his
legs. I barely had time to lock the door before the scream ripped through the air. It was like
nothing I'd ever heard, half human, half animal, and full of rage. My body locked up for a split
second every nerve in me screaming to run. Rusty went berserk, barking and growling at the back
door, his teeth bared. I didn't even think. I bolted to the window and yanked the curtains aside.
A figure stood at the edge of the firelight, tall and impossibly thin. Its limbs were too long,
its movements jerky, like a marionette being controlled by someone who didn't know what they were doing.
Its face. God, its face. It was too pale, stretched tight over its skull, with eyes that glowed faintly yellow.
It twitched, then darted toward the house. I slammed the curtains shut and yelled for Lily and Mark.
Lock the doors. Now! My voice cracked with panic. Rusty barked even louder, throwing himself at the door.
My heart pounded as I grabbed the rifle from the cabinet and fumbled to load it.
Lily ran into the room, her eyes wide.
What's going on?
Something's out there, I said, my voice barely steady.
Something's coming.
Before I could explain, a loud thud shook the back door.
Rusty growled low, his body pressed against my leg.
Whatever was out there wasn't going away.
It wanted in.
I don't know how long I stood there.
Rifle clutched in my hands, staring at the back door.
Rusty was growling so low it sounded like a vibration more than a sound.
The thud stopped for a moment, and I let myself hope, just for a second, that maybe it was gone.
Then it hit the door again, hard enough to rattle the glass.
James, what the hell is out there? Mark asked, his voice tight.
He was standing just behind me, holding the revolver I'd handed him earlier.
I couldn't bring myself to answer. I didn't know what to say.
I don't know.
I finally muttered, but it's not normal.
We stood there, every muscle in my body tense, waiting for the next sound.
When nothing came, I slowly peeled back the curtain just enough to see outside.
The fire pit was still blazing, casting long, flickering shadows against the snow.
But the thing, it wasn't there anymore.
It's gone, I whispered, though I didn't believe it.
Creatures like that don't just leave, mark motion toward the door.
We can't just stand here waiting for it to come back.
Let's check the yard.
Make sure it's really gone.
I nodded, my stomach churning.
Every instinct told me to stay inside, but Mark was right.
We needed to know what we were dealing with.
I slung the rifle over my shoulder and eased the door open,
the cold air hitting me like a slap in the face.
Rusty stayed behind, whining softly as I stepped outside.
The snow crunched under our boots as we moved toward the fire pit.
The flames cast just enough light to see the ground clearly, and that's when I saw the tracks.
They were massive, hoof-like, but too wide and irregular to belong to any animal I knew.
They circled the fire pit, then trailed off toward the woods.
Do you see this? I whispered. My voice barely audible.
Mark nodded, his grip tightening on the revolver.
We were about to head back to the house when I heard it again. That low, haunting whistle.
It was closer this time, coming from the revolver.
from the trees just beyond the firelight.
I raised my rifle, my finger hovering over the trigger.
Then they appeared, two of them, moving in from the tree line.
My heart nearly stopped.
They were tall and gangly, their limbs too long and their movements wrong, like they didn't
understand how bodies were supposed to work.
Their faces were obscured by the shadows, but I could see enough to know they weren't human.
One of them crouched low, its head jerking unnaturally as it led out a low ground,
that made my stomach turn.
Mark, I started, my voice barely above a whisper.
We need to...
One of them lunged.
I fired instinctively, the crack of the rifle
shattering the silence.
The recoil hit my shoulder hard,
but I didn't have time to think about it.
The thing recoiled, but it didn't fall.
It stumbled back,
then twisted its body in a way that made my skin crawl,
like it was trying to decide whether to attack again.
Mark fired his revolver,
and this time the creatures darted back.
into the woods, their movements fast and jerky like spiders scuttling away.
Back to the house, I yelled, and we didn't waste a second. We sprinted across the yard,
the firelight fading behind us. My heart pounded in my ears as I fumbled with the door,
slamming it shut as soon as we were inside. Lily was waiting for us, her face pale.
What happened? she demanded. There's more than one, I said, my voice shaking. They're still out there.
We barricaded the doors with furniture, every window locked and covered.
Rusty barked furiously at the back door, pacing back and forth like he was ready to tear through it himself.
I was about to suggest calling the sheriff when the sound came again.
Not a whistle this time, but a loud, deliberate thud against the side of the house.
They weren't done with us.
I checked the rifle, my hands trembling.
Mark stood beside me, his revolver still in hand.
If they want in, they'll have to fight for it, he muttered.
The thuds grew louder, coming from all sides of the house now.
Windows rattled, and a faint scratching sound came from the back door.
Rusty growled low.
His body pressed against Lily's leg as if he was trying to protect her.
And then it stopped.
No thuds.
No scratches.
Just silence.
Do you think they're gone?
Lily asked.
Her voice barely a whisper.
I shook my head, the hair on the back of my neck standing on end.
No, I said. They're still out there, waiting.
A face pressed against the glass of the back door.
Its eyes glowed faintly yellow and its mouth stretched into an unnatural grin,
revealing jagged, uneven teeth.
It slammed a long, spindly hand against the glass, cracking it.
Get back, I yelled, raising the rifle.
And then the glass shattered.
The glass shattered before I could even.
and pull the trigger. Shard sprayed across the floor, glittering in the dim light, and Rusty
lunged forward, barking like he'd lost his mind. Lily screamed, and I shoved her and Mark back
toward the living room. My heart hammered so hard I could feel it in my throat. Stay behind me,
I shouted, raising the rifle. The thing outside, the thing, was halfway through the door now,
its spindly limbs folding awkwardly as it squeezed through the frame. Its skin looked wet, almost
and its head cocked sharply as it fixed its glowing yellow eyes on me.
It smiled.
God help me. It smiled.
I didn't hesitate.
I fired point-blank, the recoil slamming into my shoulder as the shot rang out like a thunder clap.
The creature staggered, letting out a scream that sounded like nails on a chalkboard.
It recoiled.
Black Icor sprang across the walls, but it didn't fall.
Instead, it twisted its body in a way no living thing should be able to move.
its limbs snapping back into place with a sickening crack.
James, run, Mark yelled, his revolver firing off in rapid succession.
The creature darted back out into the night, its movements as jerky and unnatural as before.
But the damage was done. The back door was wide open, snow blowing in, and the house felt exposed, vulnerable.
I slammed the door shut, dragging the broken remnants of the kitchen table in front of it.
We can't stay here, I said panting.
They'll be back.
Mark nodded, reloading his revolver.
Lily was clutching her mother, both of them pale and shaking.
Rusty was growling low, his eyes locked on the shattered door.
What the hell are they?
Lily whispered.
Her voice cracked and tears streaked her face.
What do they want?
I don't know, I said, my voice hoarse.
But I'm not waiting around to find out.
We gathered what weapons we had left.
a couple of shotguns, Mark's revolver, and my Glock from the truck.
The fire extinguisher caught my eye, and something clicked in my brain.
The fire.
The moment I'd lit it earlier, everything had started to go wrong.
And now, with the door wide open, I could see the tracks circling the pit like a predator stalking prey.
They're drawn to the fire, I said, my voice low.
We need to put it out.
Mark frowned.
and if that doesn't stop them,
then we fight, I said.
But we don't leave that fire burning.
We barricaded Lily and her mom in the living room with Rusty,
shoving every piece of furniture we could find against the doors.
Mark and I made our way to the fire pit,
stepping into the bitter cold.
The snow reflected the faint moonlight,
but the woods were pitch black.
I could feel the weight of the darkness pressing in on me,
every nerve in my body screaming that we were being watched.
Mark was the first to notice them.
Over there, he whispered, pointing toward the tree line.
I followed his gaze and felt my stomach drop.
Three figures stood just beyond the firelight, their bodies unnaturally still.
One of them tilted its head, and I swear I saw its grin widen.
Hurry up, Mark hissed.
I grabbed the fire extinguisher, my hands trembling as I aimed it at the flames.
The hiss of the extinguisher cut through the silence.
and the fire sputtered and died, leaving us in near total darkness.
The creatures didn't move.
They just stood there, watching, and then they screamed.
It wasn't a sound I'll ever forget, like a mix of static, animal cries, and pure rage.
The noise was so loud it felt like it was drilling into my skull.
Mark fired his revolver, and I emptied my Glock into the nearest figure,
but they didn't scatter like before.
They came closer.
the house, I shouted, grabbing Mark by the arm. We ran, the snow crunching beneath our boots,
the sound of the creatures crashing through the underbrush behind us. I didn't dare look back.
My only thought was getting inside, barricading the door, and holding them off.
We burst through the front door, slamming it shut and shoving a bookshelf in front of it.
Rusty barked wildly, throwing himself against the barricade like he could hold it himself.
Lily was crying, her mother clutching her tightly.
We put out the fire, I said, gasping for air, but it didn't stop them.
Mark reloaded his revolver, his hands shaking.
Then what the hell do we do now?
The answer came sooner than I wanted.
The thuds on the walls started again, louder this time.
Windows rattled, and the roof creaked under the weight of something heavy.
I gripped the rifle, sweat dripping down my face despite the cold.
And then, just as suddenly as it started, the noise stopped.
The silence was deafening, oppressive.
Rusty stopped barking, his ears perked as he stared at the front door.
My heart pounded in the stillness, every second feeling like an eternity.
Finally Lily spoke, her voice barely above a whisper,
Do you think they're gone?
Before I could answer, there was a single sharp knock at the door.
The knock echoed through the house like,
like a death knell, freezing all of us in place. Rusty started growling again, low and guttural,
the hair along his back standing on end. My fingers tightened around the rifle until my knuckles
ached. I didn't move, didn't breathe, my mind racing with possibilities. Knock, knock. This time it was
louder, harder, like it was mocking us. My legs felt like lead, but I forced myself to step
toward the door. Mark grabbed my arm, his face pale.
Don't, he said through gritted teeth.
You don't want to see what's out there.
I have to, I whispered.
My voice was barely steady, but I had to know.
Whatever was out there wasn't going to stop.
I peephole and my blood ran cold.
One of the creatures was standing on the porch.
Its head tilted at an impossible angle.
Its face was barely recognizable as human.
Skin stretched thin, eyes sunken but glowing faintly yellow.
its grin was too wide, its teeth jagged and uneven. It raised one impossibly long arm and knocked again,
this time dragging its claws down the door, the sound like nails on a chalkboard. I stumbled back,
shaking my head. We can't stay here, I said, my voice barely audible. We have to go. Now.
What are you talking about? Lily's mom cried, clutching her daughter. Where would we go? They're
everywhere. I didn't have an answer. All I knew was that staying meant dying. We'll take the truck,
I said, glancing at Mark. Grab the keys. I'll cover us. Mark nodded, and for the first time I saw
fear in his eyes. He handed Lily and her mom the revolver. Stay behind us. Do not stop no matter what.
We moved fast, barricades scraping across the floor as we shoved furniture aside.
Rusty barked wildly, pacing at the door as if he knew what was coming.
I grabbed him by the collar, praying he wouldn't bolt the moment we stepped outside.
I threw the door open and immediately fired around into the air, hoping to scare them off.
The creature on the porch screeched and scrambled back into the shadows, its limbs moving unnaturally fast.
We bolted for the truck, Mark and I firing at anything that moved.
Rusty stayed close, his teeth bared, his body vibrating with tension.
The truck was only 20 feet away, but it felt like a mile.
shadows darted between the trees and that god-forsaken whistle started up again rising in pitch until it felt like my skull was splitting get in i yelled yanking the driver's door open lily and her mom piled into the back seat rusty leaping in after them mark climbed into the passenger seat and i slammed the door shut fumbling with the keys my hands were shaking so badly it took three tries to get the engine to turn over the headlights flicked on
illuminating the creature swarming the yard. There were at least five of them now,
their faces twisted into unnatural grins, their eyes glowing like embers. One of them
crouched low, its limbs contorting as it prepared to pounce. "'Hold on!' I shouted,
slamming my foot on the gas. The tires spun on the icy driveway before catching, and the truck
lurched forward. The creature leapt, slamming into the side of the truck with a sickening thud.
The whole vehicle rocked, and Lily screamed.
I swerved, trying to shake it off, but it clawed at the window, its face pressed against the glass.
Mark leaned out the passenger window, his revolver in hand, and fired point-blank.
The creature let out a horrible screech and fell away, disappearing under the wheels.
We barreled down the driveway, the truck fish-tailing on the icy gravel.
The woods closed in around us, the headlights barely cutting through the darkness.
I could see them in the rearview mirror, their gangly bodies moving impossibly fast,
keeping pace with the truck.
Faster, Mark yelled, but the road was too slick.
One wrong move, and we'd end up in a ditch, or worse.
As we neared the edge of the property, I saw it, the biggest of them all.
It stood in the middle of the road, easily ten feet tall, its limbs stretched unnaturally long.
Its face was almost human, but the biggest of them all.
The mouth stretched wider than it should, the jaw unhinged like a snake's.
It raised its arms, claws glinting in the headlights.
"'Brace yourselves!' I shouted, gripping the wheel.
I didn't slow down.
The truck hit the creature head on with a sickening crunch, its body crumpling under the impact.
The windshield cracked and the truck skidded, but I kept it steady, my heart hammering
in my chest.
When I looked back, the thing was already trying to get.
get up, its body twisting grotesquely as it clawed at the ground. We didn't stop. We tore down the
road, the creatures fading into the darkness behind us. The whistle followed us for miles,
faint but persistent, like a warning. When we finally reached the main highway, I pulled over,
my hands shaking so badly I couldn't hold the wheel. Lily was sobbing in the back seat,
her mom holding her tightly. Mark was silent, staring straight ahead, his face pale and
drawn. We're not going back, I said, my voice trembling. Not ever. Mark nodded. We'll sell the place.
Burn it if we have to. We sat there for a long time. The engine idling. None of us ready to move.
The dark woods loomed in the rearview mirror, but we didn't look back. Whatever had happened
on that property, whatever those things were, we left them behind that night. At least I hope we did.
I should have known it was going to be one of those nights the second we missed the first turn into Greenville.
Matt had the directions, or what passed for directions, in one hand and his phone in the other,
scrolling through his playlist like picking the right song was somehow more important than telling me where the hell to go.
The GPS had crapped out miles back, and all I had to go on was a screenshot of a text our friend sent,
which was barely legible because of her cracked screen.
Just take the left after the old oak, and it's at the end of the road.
You can't miss it.
Spoiler alert.
We could, and we did.
Dude, we've passed that creepy tree like three times now, I muttered,
gripping the wheel tighter.
The gnarled old oak loomed in the glow of the headlights,
its twisted branches clawing at the night sky like it wanted to grab us.
Are you sure this is the right way?
Matt didn't even look up, swiping to the next song.
Relax, man.
It's got to be around here somewhere.
Besides, this is setting the vibe, right?
Creepy woods.
Spooky neighborhood.
Perfect for a Halloween party.
I didn't reply, too focused on navigating the pitch-black road.
Greenville wasn't just dark.
It was suffocating.
The trees crowded close on either side of the car,
their shadows swallowing the narrow road.
Every now and then, I caught a glimpse of something strange,
a rusted swing set half buried in weeds.
A mailbox leaning at an impossible angle, and once, a dilapidated house with no windows.
I tried not to think about how long it had been since I'd seen another car.
Finally, Matt perked up.
There, that's got to be it.
He pointed to a driveway on the right, just visible between the trees.
It was long and unlit, with no sign of life at the end.
I hesitated.
Are you sure?
It doesn't look like there's a party here.
Matt shrugged.
It's Greenville, bro. Nobody leaves their porch lights on. Let's just check it out. Worst case,
we're at the wrong house. I wasn't convinced. Something about the driveway made my skin crawl,
but I couldn't put my finger on it. The air felt heavy, like the woods were pressing in on us.
Still, I turned in, my tires crunching on gravel as we slowly crept forward.
The house at the end of the driveway was completely dark. The curtains were drawn tight,
and the porch looked like it hadn't seen a broom in years.
No jack-a-lanterns, no fairy lights,
no faint thump of base from the backyard, just silence.
And not the peaceful kind.
The kind that makes you check over your shoulder
even when you know there's nothing there.
This doesn't feel right, I said, my voice low.
Maybe we should turn around.
Matt rolled his eyes.
Come on, man, we're already here.
I'll just knock on the door and see if it's the right place.
I don't think...
What's the worst that could happen?
He was already out of the car before I could stop him,
his phone flashlight cutting a weak beam through the darkness.
I stayed in the car, gripping the wheel so hard my knuckles ached.
My gut screamed at me to leave, but I didn't want to be that guy,
the paranoid one who ruins the night because he's too chicken to check a stupid house.
Still, my eyes stayed glued to the upstairs window,
where I swore I saw a curtain twitch.
A shadow shifted behind the glass.
just for a moment.
Matt, I called my voice shaking.
Maybe we should...
The crack of shattering glass cut me off.
For a split second, I thought Matt had broken something,
but then the sound of gunfire ripped through the night,
and my windshield exploded in a spray of shards.
Get down, Matt screamed, diving for the ground as another shot rang out,
this one slamming into the hood of the car.
I ducked, my heart pounding so hard I thought it might burst.
The night erupted into chaos.
the echo of gunfire bouncing off the trees.
And then I saw it.
In the upstairs window, framed by the darkness,
was the silhouette of a man.
The muzzle flash lit up his face,
a wild, hollow-eyed expression,
twisted with fear or rage or both.
He wasn't yelling,
but I could see his lips moving,
screaming something I couldn't hear over the gunfire.
Matt scrambled back toward the car,
his phone flashlight swinging wildly.
Derek, go, go!
But I couldn't move.
I was frozen, staring at the man in the window as he raised the rifle again.
With shaking hands I threw the car into reverse.
The tires spun uselessly on the gravel for half a second before catching, jerking us backward.
Another shot shattered the rear window, and I ducked lower, barely able to see over the dashboard.
The car skidded wildly as I backed onto the road, my breath coming in shallow gasps.
Go, go, go, Matt shouted, slamming the door shut as I straightened out and floored it.
The tires squealed as we sped away, the roar of the engine drowning out the sound of my heartbeat.
The woods blurred past us, the shadows dancing like they were chasing us.
Only when we were halfway down the road did I realize my hands were covered in blood.
For a moment I thought it was mine.
Then I glanced at Matt, slumped against the door, clutching his chest.
I think I've been hit, he whispered, his voice barely audible.
The woods seemed to close in tighter around us, the darkness pressing against the shattered windows.
I gritted my teeth and pushed the accelerator to the floor, praying we'd make it out alive.
The sound of gunfire was still ringing in my ears. My brain couldn't process what had just happened.
One second we were pulling into a driveway. The next, we were being hunted.
My hands trembled on the wheel as I floored the gas pedal, the shattered windshield throwing shards
of moonlight into the car like glittering knives. Every breath felt like it could be my last.
Matt, I yelled, my voice cracking. Are you okay? Say something. He groaned, slumping further into his seat.
My stomach dropped as I glanced at him. Blood was soaking through his shirt, dark and shiny
in the faint light. His phone, still clutched in his hand.
flickered weakly. The glow from it cast shadows over his face, pale and damp with sweat.
Keep driving, he weased. Just get us out of here. Another shot cracked through the night.
The rear window exploded, spraying the back seat with shards of glass. I jerked the wheel
instinctively, the car swerving dangerously close to a ditch. My knuckles were bone white on the wheel.
the steering column shaking as I pushed the car harder than it was meant to go.
Every bump in the road felt like it might tear the wheels out from under us.
In the rear-view mirror, the house disappeared into the shadows,
but I had a feeling that the shooter wasn't done.
The road was so narrow, so dark,
and I kept expecting headlights to appear behind us,
or worse, the glint of that rifle barrel again.
My mind raced with possibilities.
Was he chasing us?
Was he reloading?
Hang on, man, I muttered mostly to myself.
We're going to make it.
Matt coughed, and I heard the wet rattling sound that came with it.
My stomach twisted.
I stole another glance at him.
His eyes were barely open, and his chest rose and fell in shallow, uneven gasps.
Stay with me, Matt, I said, panic creeping into my voice.
Just hang in there, okay?
We're not far.
He didn't answer.
his phone slipped from his hand, landing on the floor with a dull thud.
I couldn't look down, couldn't reach for it.
My entire focus was on the road ahead.
The trees were blurs of black on either side of us, closing in like walls.
The beams of my headlights barely cut through the thick darkness.
Every shadow looked like it could hide something, some one.
And then it happened.
A figure darted into the road ahead of us, just a flash, something humanoid, dark,
and quick. My instincts screamed and I yanked the wheel to the side. The tires skidded, the car lurching
violently. For a second I thought we were going to flip, but the tires caught the edge of the pavement,
jerking us back onto the road. What the hell was that? I whispered, but Matt didn't answer.
I glanced at him again, and my chest tightened. His head had lulled to the side and his breathing
was weaker than before. No, no, no, I muttered. Not now. Don't you quit on me,
man. I could see a faint glow up ahead, the first sign of civilization in what felt like forever.
Streetlights. We were close. I pressed the gas pedal harder, ignoring the rattling protest of the
engine. The wind whipped through the shattered windows, cold and biting. My shoulder throbbed
where the glass had sliced it, but I couldn't stop. I wouldn't stop. As we hit the main road,
the glow of the hospital sign came into view. The sight of it was almost enough to make a
make me cry. I sped into the parking lot, the tires screeching as I slammed on the brakes in front
of the emergency entrance. I jumped out of the car, the cold night air hitting me like a slap.
Help! I screamed, running to Matt's side. Somebody help us! The ER doors slid open, and a group of nurses
and paramedics rushed toward us. Their faces were blurred in my vision, my head swimming with adrenaline
in exhaustion. Hands pulled me back as they opened Matt's door,
carefully pulling him from the car and placing him on a gurney. Blood dripped onto the asphalt
as they wheeled him inside. I stood there, frozen, as the doors slid shut behind them.
The parking lot was silent now, except for the distant hum of cars on the highway.
My hands were shaking uncontrollably. My legs felt like they might give out,
and for a second I thought I was going to collapse right there. But I forced myself to
move, stumbling toward the ER doors. Inside, the fluorescent lights were harsh, blinding after
the darkness of the night. A nurse tried to talk to me, but her voice was drowned out by the
pounding in my ears. All I could do was mutter, is he going to be okay?
We'll do everything we can, she said, guiding me toward a chair. I sank into it, my head in my
hands, as the events of the night replayed over and over in my mind. The shooter's face,
the sound of the gunfire, the way Matt had looked when I realized he'd been hit.
It all played in a loop, each detail more vivid than the last.
I didn't notice the blood still dripping from my shoulder or the way my clothes were sticking to me,
soaked with a mix of sweat and glass dust.
All I could do was sit there, staring at the door Matt had disappeared through, waiting for news.
Time had lost all meaning.
The waiting room was a fluorescent purgatory.
the hum of machinery and muffled voices filling the void where my thoughts should have been.
I couldn't sit still. Every few minutes I got up and paced the linoleum floor,
my shoes leaving faint red smears with every step. My shoulder throbbed from the gash I hadn't
had time to think about. It didn't matter. The only thing that mattered was Matt.
I kept replaying it in my head. The gunfire, the shattering glass, the shadow in the upstairs window.
Each time the details got sharper.
see the man's face now, wild-eyed and gaunt, the rifle steady in his hands. What had he been
shouting? I strained to remember, but all I could hear was the deafening crack of the shots,
and Matt's labored breathing as we raced away. The doors to the ER opened and my head snapped up.
A nurse walked out, clipboard in hand, but she didn't look at me. She called another name,
ushering a family toward the back. My heart sank again. How long had it been? An hour, two,
It felt like days.
Finally, a doctor stepped into the room, his face calm but unreadable.
My chest tightened as he called my name.
I shot up from the chair, nearly tripping over my own feet as I followed him into a quiet corner.
He spoke slowly, his words deliberate, but my brain felt like it was wading through molasses.
Matt is stable, he said, and the weight in my chest eased, just a little.
The bullet collapsed his left lung, but we've re-inflated it.
It missed his heart and major arteries, which is the good news.
He's in the ICU now.
We're monitoring him closely, but his prognosis is good.
I nodded, my head bobbing like it was on strings.
Can I see him?
Not yet, the doctor said.
He needs rest, but I promise, we'll let you know as soon as he's ready for visitors.
The relief was overwhelming, and I had to put my head in my hands to keep from falling apart right there.
Matt was alive. He was going to make it. But the doctor kept talking, his voice growing heavier.
The police are here, he said. They'd like to speak with you about what happened tonight.
I nodded again. My movement stiff. Of course they were here. How could they not be?
The car was probably still sitting outside, riddled with bullet holes and coated in red.
I forced myself to stand a little straighter as the doctor guided me toward a pair of officers waiting near the entrance.
Their questions came hard and fast, their faces unreadable as they scribbled notes into their pads.
I told them everything.
The party.
The wrong address.
The house at the end of the driveway.
The shots.
The face in the window.
My hands wouldn't stop shaking, but I kept going, spilling every detail I could remember.
When I finished, one of the officers exchanged a look with his partner.
That address you described, he said.
It belongs to a man named Edward Moore.
marks. He's had issues. Issues, I repeated, the word catching in my throat. What kind of issues?
Break-ins, the officer said. Two in the last year, one of the burglars told Marx that his friends would be
back for revenge. He's been paranoid ever since, fortified the house, bought that rifle legally,
and basically turned the place into a fortress. He's convinced someone's coming for him.
The pieces clicked together in my head, a horrible puzzle falling into place.
He thought we were there to rob him.
The officer nodded.
That's his claim.
He fired because he thought you were intruders, said he saw movement outside and didn't want to take any chances.
I clenched my fists, my nails digging into my palms.
We didn't even get out of the car before he started shooting.
We know, the officer said.
That's why he's being charged with attempted murder.
This wasn't self-defense. It was reckless. He's lucky neither of you were killed.
Lucky. The word felt like a slap in the face. I wanted to scream at him, to tell him how close we'd
come to dying because some paranoid lunatic couldn't take a second to think. But the rage was
swallowed by exhaustion. I was too drained to fight, too wrung out to do anything but nod and let
the officers leave. Hours later, I finally got to see Matt. Walking down the ICU corridor felt
like trudging through quicksand, every step heavier than the last. When I reached his room,
I stopped in the doorway, bracing myself for what I might see. He looked fragile, lying there
in the hospital bed, tubes snaking out of his chest and monitors beeping softly beside him.
But when his eyes fluttered open and he saw me, a weak smile spread across his face.
You made it, he croaked, his voice barely audible.
Damn right I made it, I said, forcing a grin as I stepped close.
sir, you scared the hell out of me, man. He chuckled, then winced his hand moving to his chest.
Don't make me laugh. It hurts. I wanted to tell him everything. The shooter, the police,
the hospital staff calling him a miracle. But the words stuck in my throat. Instead, I sat beside him,
silent, until he spoke again. You saved my life, he said, his voice softer this time.
No, I replied, shaking my head. You saved mine. Matt didn't argue. He didn't have to. We both knew the truth.
If he hadn't been holding his phone, if the light from it hadn't drawn the shooter's aim,
it would have been me who took that shot, and I wouldn't have made it. Matt recovered,
but the scars of that night never left me. The sound of gunfire haunted my dreams,
and every time I passed a darkened window, I felt a chill crawl up my spine. I learned later
that Edward Marks had pleaded no contest and been sentenced to five years in prison.
Five years for nearly killing us.
It didn't feel like enough, but at least it was something.
Fear makes people do crazy things, Matt said.
Maybe he was right, but fear wasn't an excuse,
and I knew I'd never step foot in Greenville again.
Some nightmares are better left behind.
Be careful out there.
The road out of town seemed narrower than I remembered.
Jason's truck jostled over the uneven,
gravel, dust kicking up behind us like a cloud trying to catch our tailgate. He was in the driver's
seat, one hand loosely gripping the wheel, the other tapping to the beat of some old country
song crackling through the ancient speakers. I wasn't paying attention to the music. My eyes were
fixed on the dense wall of pine trees crowding the road on either side, their trunks standing tall.
relax jason said catching my gaze you look like you're expecting bigfoot to jump out or something i snorted but my grip on the edge of my seat didn't loosen it's not bigfoot i'm worried about this place looks off like the kind of spot people go to disappear jason laughed the sound sharp in the tight cab of the truck that's the point caleb no cell service no crowds just us and nature you'll love it i
didn't answer. Instead, I squinted at the hand-drawn map sitting on my lap. Jason's co-worker had scribbled it
on the back of a diner napkin, complete with misspelled landmarks and vague instructions like
turn at the big rock and head past the old fence line. It was the kind of map you'd see in a bad
horror movie, the one the protagonist finds clutched in a skeleton's hand. Jason veered the truck off
the main road, pulling into what I guessed was the parking lot. It was nothing more.
than a patch of dirt surrounded by brush, the trees leaning in so close it felt like they were
eavesdropping. This is it? I asked, scanning the area. No sign? No trailhead? Jason grinned,
hopping out of the truck. That's how you know it's a hidden gem. Come on, grab your pack.
I followed him reluctantly, slinging my gear over one shoulder. The trail, or what I assumed
was the trail, was barely visible. It cut through the underbrush,
brush like a fading memory, overgrown and forgotten. Each step we took felt like we were trespassing,
the forest whispering its disapproval with the rustle of leaves. We walked in silence for a while,
the air thick with the smell of pine and damp earth. The only sounds were the crunch of our
boots and the occasional snap of a twig underfoot. It should have been peaceful, but my nerves were
on edge. Something about the quiet didn't sit right. It wasn't just quiet. It was still,
Still, no birdsong, no insects, just nothing.
You feel that?
I asked, breaking the silence.
Jason glanced over his shoulder.
Feel what?
I hesitated.
I don't know, like we're not supposed to be here.
Jason rolled his eyes.
You've been watching too many movies.
It's just a trail, man.
Lighten up.
But I couldn't.
My eyes kept darting to the shadows between the trees,
half expecting to see movement.
I told myself it was just my imagination,
but my gut was telling a different story.
After an hour of hiking,
the forest opened up into a clearing,
and I stopped dead in my tracks.
Jason's so-called mountain meadow was a swamp.
The water was stagnant and murky,
choked with algae and surrounded by a ring of decaying trees.
The air reeked of rot,
and a low buzzing of flies added to the oppressive atmosphere.
Hidden gem, huh? I said, trying to keep the sarcasm out of my voice.
Jason scratched the back of his neck, looking sheepish.
Okay, maybe it's not what I expected, but hey, it's quiet.
Too quiet, I muttered.
That's when I saw it.
Across the swamp, partially obscured by the trees, was a tent.
It was old and sagging, the fabric stained with streaks of green and brown.
But it wasn't the tent that caught my attention.
It was the figure standing near it.
Jason, I said, my voice barely above a whisper.
What? I pointed.
He followed my gaze, his eyes narrowing.
What the hell?
The figure was motionless, standing just at the edge of the water.
They were too far away to make out any details.
But something about their posture didn't sit right.
It wasn't natural.
It was stiff, like they were frozen in place, watching us.
I raised a hand in a half-hearted wave, unsure of what else to do.
The figure didn't move, didn't wave back.
They just stood there.
Jason let out a nervous laugh, probably some camper or a hunter.
Then where's their gear, their fire, and why are they just staring?
He shrugged, but I could see the tension in his shoulders.
Who knows? Maybe they're shy.
Let's set up camp.
We climbed a small hill overlooking the swamp,
and pitched our tents in the flattest spot we could find.
Jason tried to lighten the mood,
cracking jokes as we unpacked,
but I couldn't shake the feeling that we were being watched.
Every time I glanced back at the swamp,
the figure was still there, unmoving.
By the time the sun dipped below the tree line,
the figure had vanished.
Jason claimed not to notice when it happened, but I did.
One moment they were there, and the next, the swamp was empty.
I told myself it didn't matter
that it was just some loner minding their own business
but as the shadows lengthened and the air grew colder
I couldn't help but feel like we weren't alone
something about this place wasn't right
and I had a sinking feeling we were about to find out why
the fire crackled softly
its light flickering off the surrounding trees
like the forest itself was alive and breathing
Jason sat across from me
his face glowing orange in the firelight
laughing at one of his own jokes.
I tried to laugh with him, but my eyes kept drifting past his shoulder, scanning the dark woods
beyond our camp.
Still thinking about that guy by the swamp, Jason asked, his voice teasing but low enough to match
the quiet around us.
Can you blame me?
I said.
Who just stands there like that?
No gear, no fire, nothing.
Jason shrugged, poking the fire with a stick.
Sparks floated into the air like tiny fireflies.
Probably just a weirdo.
You know how these backwoods types are.
They like their privacy.
That's not privacy, I said, glancing toward the swamp's direction.
That's something else.
Jason didn't respond.
He just tossed the stick into the fire, leaned back in his camp chair,
and closed his eyes like he was settling in for a nap.
I envied how easily he brushed things off.
For him, a lone figure standing in the woods was an oddity to laugh about.
For me, it was a reason to keep one hand near my knife.
The woods around us were impossibly dark.
The fire was the only source of light,
and beyond its reach was a wall of blackness
that seemed to press in closer with every passing minute.
The forest was quiet again, too quiet.
No wind, no crickets, no distant howls.
Just silence, thick and heavy.
I shifted in my seat trying to relax,
but my mind kept replaying the moment at the swamp.
the figure standing there, unmoving, the way they vanished without a sound, it was wrong.
Everything about this place felt wrong.
Jason's eyes snapped open, and for a second, I thought he'd finally felt it too, that creeping
unease that had been clawing at me since we arrived.
But his eyes weren't on me.
They were locked on something behind me.
I turned slowly, my stomach tightening like a coiled spring.
There, just beyond the firelight, was a figure.
the same one from the swamp.
They were closer now, no more than 20 feet away, standing just at the edge of the light.
Their silhouette was sharper this time, long, matted hair that hung over their face,
clothes that looked tattered and dark.
They weren't watching Jason.
They were watching me.
My voice caught in my throat.
Hello?
Jason stood up slowly, his hands half raised like he was trying to calm a spooked animal.
Hey man, you okay?
you lost or something?
The figure didn't move, didn't speak.
They just stood there, swaying slightly,
like the wind was pushing them.
Except there was no wind.
My heart hammered in my chest as Jason took a step forward.
Look, if you need help.
Before he could finish, the figure turned and bolted into the woods.
The movement was sudden, almost unnatural.
They didn't stumble or hesitate,
just melted into the trees with a speed that made my skin crawl.
Jason lowered his hand.
exhaling loudly. Well, that was weird. Weird, I snapped, standing up so fast my chair tipped over.
That's all you've got? Weird? Jason looked at me like I was overreacting. What do you want me to say?
The guy's probably just some crackhead or a squatter who didn't want us calling the cops.
Does that seem normal to you? I gestured toward the spot where the figure had stood,
standing there watching us, not saying a word, then running like that?
Jason didn't answer right away. Instead, he walked to the edge of the firelight, squinting into the trees as if he could spot the figure lurking in the shadows. I'll admit, it's creepy, but I'm not about to pack up and hike out in the dark because of some weirdo. I wanted to argue, but he wasn't wrong. The thought of walking back along that overgrown trail and pitch-black darkness made my skin crawl. Still, the idea of staying here, knowing that someone, or someone, or something,
something was out there watching us, wasn't much better.
We keep the fire going, Jason said firmly, as if he'd made the decision for both of us.
If they come back, we'll see them.
And if they don't come back, I asked lowering my voice.
What then? Jason gave me a shrug.
Then we get some sleep and leave first thing in the morning.
Either way, we'll deal with it.
His confidence didn't calm me, but it gave me a plan.
and that was better than nothing i stoked the fire until it was roaring then sat with my back to the tents scanning the darkness for any sign of movement jason tried to keep the mood light cracking jokes and telling stories but even he was quieter than usual neither of us was laughing much
at some point i must have dozed off because the next thing i knew jason was shaking me awake his face was pale his eyes wide with fear
kaleb he whispered his voice shaking their back i bolted upright my pulse pounding in my ears jason pointed toward my tent and i followed his finger there crouched low to the ground was the figure
they were close enough that i could hear their breathing shallow raspy and uneven their head was tilted slightly like they were studying us when they realized i was awake they bolted again disappearing into the woods without a sound
My knife was in my hand before I even realized I'd grabbed it.
We're not sleeping, Jason said firmly, his voice steadier than I expected.
We keep the fire going until sunrise, and we leave the second there's enough light to see.
I nodded, unable to speak.
My hands were shaking, but I tightened my grip on the knife and forced myself to stay alert.
The woods around us were alive with shadows, and every crack of a branch made me flinch.
For the rest of the night we sat in silence.
the fire blazing between us like the only thing keeping the darkness at bay.
I couldn't shake the feeling that the figure wasn't gone.
They were still out there, watching, waiting,
and I was certain that if Jason hadn't woken me up,
I wouldn't have been alive to see the sunrise.
By the time the first gray light of dawn began filtering through the trees,
I felt like I'd aged a decade.
My hands were cramped from gripping my knife all night,
and my eyes burned from staring into the dark,
trying to spot any hint of movement.
Jason sat across from me, pale and silent,
clutching a long branch he'd sharpened into a makeshift spear.
We hadn't said much since the figure disappeared hours ago,
and the silence between us felt as heavy as the night.
Let's go, Jason said finally, his voice hoarse.
We've got enough light now.
I nodded, my body stiff as I stood.
We packed in near silence,
rushing to stuff gear into our bags with jittery hands.
Every snap of a twig made me flinch, my head whipping toward the sound.
The fire had burned low, just embers now, but we didn't bother stoking it.
The thought of staying here one more second was unbearable.
As we hoisted our packs, Jason gestured toward the trail.
Stay close. Don't stop for anything.
We descended the hill, the swamp coming into view.
In the daylight, it looked even worse than before, like a place that had been forgotten by
nature itself. The tent was still there, slumped and decaying, but there was no sign of the figure.
Still, I felt their presence, like they were just out of sight, lurking in the shadows of the trees.
The trail was narrow and overgrown, the underbrush clawing at my legs as we moved quickly
through it. I kept my eyes forward, but my ears were tuned to every sound behind us.
The stillness that had unnerved me the day before was gone, replaced by the occasional snobes.
nap of a branch or rustle of leaves that seemed just a little too close. After about 20 minutes,
Jason stopped abruptly, holding up a hand, wait. What? I whispered, my voice barely audible.
He pointed to the ground. There in the soft dirt of the trail were footprints, fresh ones.
They were larger than mine, uneven, like whoever made them had been dragging one foot.
They led in the same direction we were heading, toward the truck. They were ahead of us, Jason said,
his voice tight. At some point during the night, my stomach dropped. I wanted to turn around,
run back the way we came, but I knew that wasn't an option. We had to keep going. Jason started
walking again. His movement's slower now, his head constantly swiveling to scan the trees.
We reached the truck faster than I expected, but the sight of it didn't bring the relief
I thought it would. My breath caught in my throat when I saw the muddy handprints smeared across
the windows. They weren't random. They were deliberate, placed in the middle of each window like
someone had pressed their hands flat against the glass to peer inside. Jason cursed under his breath
and reached for the driver's side door. Let's just get out of here. Wait, I said, grabbing his
arm. What if they're still here? What if? He yanked the door open, cutting me off. The inside of
the truck was empty, but the smell of damp earth wafted out, faint but unmistakable.
Someone had been here. We threw our packs in the back and climbed in. Jason turned the key and the engine sputtered to life. He backed out of the clearing so fast the tires kicked up a spray of dirt and leaves. I kept my eyes on the woods, half expecting to see the figure standing at the edge of the trees, watching us leave. But there was nothing. Just the endless stretch of trees and darkness. The drive back was silent. Jason kept his eyes on the road, his knuckles white on the steering wheel.
I didn't even look at the passenger side window.
I didn't want to see if something or someone was pacing us through the trees.
When we finally reached the main road, the tension in the cab broke like a dam.
Jason exhaled shakily, his hands loosening on the wheel.
Sheriff's office? he asked, glancing at me.
I nodded.
Yeah.
The deputy didn't laugh at our story like I thought he might.
Instead, he listened carefully.
his expression growing darker as we described the figure, the tent, and the handprints on the truck.
When we mentioned the footprints, he leaned forward, his jaw tightening.
You said this was near the old Green Creek Trail, he asked.
Jason nodded.
Yeah, why?
The deputy sighed and leaned back in his chair.
We had a missing hiker reported in that area a couple of months ago.
Young guy, mid-20s.
We found his tent near the swamp, but no sign of him,
figured he'd wandered off and got lost in the woods.
But now, he shook his head.
You boys are lucky you got out of there.
Lucky, Jason scoffed.
We were one wrong move away from.
He stopped, his jaw clenching.
The deputy stood and grabbed his hat.
I'll send a team out to check the area again.
But my advice, stay out of those woods.
We didn't need to be told twice.
Back in the truck, Jason broke the silence first.
I don't care what anyone says.
I'm never setting foot in those woods again.
I nodded, gripping the door handle like it might fly open if I didn't.
Same here.
We drove the rest of the way in silence, leaving the forest and whatever was in it, behind us.
But even now, I can't stop thinking about it.
About the figure watching us.
About the footprints on the trail and the handprints on the truck.
About how close we came to being another unsolved mystery.
and about how, no matter how much time passes, I'll never go back to those woods, not for anything.
The dirt road stretched out ahead of me, nothing but darkness and endless Montana trees on either side.
My truck's headlights carved weak tunnels through the thick shadows, but even then, I could barely see ten feet in front of me.
It had been over a year since I'd been to the cabin, and I was kicking myself for not coming back sooner to clear the trail.
Overgrowth scraped against the truck like claws dragging down the sides, the crunch of branches
beneath my tires breaking the otherwise suffocating silence.
I finally got a glimpse, the faint outline of the cabin emerging from the trees like a ghost.
Relief washed over me.
I threw the truck into park and killed the engine.
For a moment, I just sat there, staring at the cabin under the pale glow of the moon.
It looked smaller than I remembered, almost high.
hunched under the weight of the mountain behind it.
I stepped out, pulling my jacket tight against the chill.
The air up here had a way of biting right through you,
the kind of cold that didn't care how many layers you had on.
The smell of forest and rain was sharp, almost too sharp,
like something had been recently disturbed.
I ignored the weird feeling creeping up my neck
and grabbed my duffel bag from the back seat.
The porch creaked under my boots as I climbed the steps.
It always creaked, but tonight it was.
was different. Hollow. As I fumbled for the keys, I caught myself glancing over my shoulder.
There was nothing but trees and darkness, but I still couldn't get rid of the feeling that something,
or someone, was staring at me. When I unlocked the door and stepped inside, the cold hit me
like a slap. It wasn't the usual kind of cold, the kind you expect from a place that's been
empty for months. This was different, sharp, almost unnatural. I flicked on the light. The back
window was shattered. Glass was everywhere, glinting like jagged stars across the floor.
My first thought was an animal, a bear maybe, or a coyote. But as I walked closer, the broken
edges of the glass caught my eye. It looked like something had broken in, not out. I did a quick sweep of
the cabin, my heart pounding harder with each step. Bedroom, bathroom, kitchen. It was all exactly
as I'd left it. No overturned furniture. No signs of anyone rifling through my stuff. Nothing missing,
at least not that I could tell. Just that broken window, cold air creeping in like an unwelcome
guest. I tried to calm myself down. Bears didn't think twice about smashing a window if they
smelled food. Hell, I'd heard of them tearing through car doors for a pack of gum. Still, I couldn't
lose the tension coiling in my chest. Something about the scene felt odd. I found an old tarp in the
shed and nailed it over the window, muttering to myself about the hassle of fixing it. By the time I
was done, the moon had risen higher, casting long shadows through the cabin. The firewood was stacked
where I'd left it on the porch, so I hauled some inside and got a fire going. The crackle
and warmth helped a little. Sitting in the armchair with a drink in hand, I tried to relax,
but every sound outside made my ears perk up. The wind moaned through the trees like it was alive,
carrying faint rustles that I told myself were just leaves. The light from the fire danced
across the walls, but the tarp over the window flapped faintly, just enough to set my teeth on edge.
I checked the time. Just after 11 p.m., I added another log to the fire, letting
the heat build. Then I shut off the lights, locked the doors, and crawled into bed, setting my
alarm for dawn. As I lay there staring at the ceiling, I couldn't help but replay the image
of the shattered window in my mind. If it wasn't a bear, what was it? The cabin was so quiet I could
hear my own heartbeat. The fire in the next room popped occasionally, but that only made the
silence between the noises feel heavier. Just as I was finally starting to drift off,
off. The wind outside picked up again, rattling the tarp against the cabin. For a second,
I thought I heard something else beneath it, like footsteps crunching through the leaves. But that
was impossible, right? I squeezed my eyes shut and forced myself to sleep, trying to ignore
the nagging feeling that I wasn't as alone out here as I'd hoped. I woke up gasping,
like I'd just surfaced from a deep, dark lake. My heart was pounding so hard it felt like it might
break through my ribs. I reached for my phone on the nightstand, and the glow from the screen
told me it was 2.17 a.m. I didn't know why I was awake, no nightmare, no sound that I could remember,
just this awful, heavy feeling pressing down on my chest, like something was wrong. The cabin was
silent, too silent. The fire in the next room had burned down to embers, and the only noise was the
faint whistle of the wind outside. For a minute I sat there, trying to convince myself that it was
just a bad dream. But something felt off. The air in the room was colder than before, sharp enough
to raise goosebumps on my arms. I slid out of bed, moving slowly so the creek of the old floorboards
wouldn't echo too loudly. My flashlight sat on the dresser, and I grabbed it, gripping it tightly
like a weapon. I told myself I was being ridiculous. This was my cabin, my space. There was no one
here but me, but that thought didn't stop the hairs on the back of my neck from standing on end.
When I cracked open the bedroom door, the cold hit me immediately, an icy wave that sent a chill
down my torso. I stepped into the hallway, aiming the flashlight toward the living room. The beam
cut through the darkness, revealing the usual, the couch, the fireplace, the chair where I'd been
sitting hours earlier. The tarp over the broken window was loose, flapping gently in the breeze.
and on the floor, glistening faintly in the light, were muddy footprints.
My breath caught in my throat as I took a step closer.
The prints were big, clearly a man's boots, and the mud looked fresh, still wet and dark.
The trail started at the broken window.
My flashlight followed the footprints as they wound across the living room floor,
leading straight toward the hallway.
Toward me.
I froze, my pulse hammering in my ears.
The prince continued down the hallway,
stopping just outside my bedroom door. The door I'd just come through. I turned and looked behind me,
the flashlight shaking slightly in my hand. My stomach dropped when I saw the rest of the trail.
The prince didn't stop at the door. They continued into my bedroom, up to my bed. The blood drained
from my face as my mind raced to piece together what that meant. Someone had been in my room.
Someone had been standing right next to me while I was sleeping. My flashlight beam flicked to the floor,
again, desperately searching for another trail, Prince leading away from the bed, back to the window,
or even the front door. But there was nothing, no exit trail. Whoever it was, they hadn't left.
I wanted to run. My body screamed at me to turn around and bolt for the door, but I couldn't move.
I felt trapped, like if I made a sound, whatever, or whoever was still here would hear me.
I swallowed hard and forced myself to step back toward the bedroom. My hands were clammy as I
grip the flashlight, angling it toward the floor beneath the bed. I leaned down slowly, every
nerve in my body on fire. The beam of light swept across the floor, catching shadows, dust,
and a hand, pale, still, and unmistakably human. I shot upright, the blood roaring in my ears.
My chest felt tight, my breaths shallow and quick. Without thinking, I spun and bolted down
the hall. The flashlight smacked against the wall as I sprinted for the front door.
door, my hands fumbling for the lock. Behind me, I swore I heard movement, something scraping against
the floor, slow and deliberate. I didn't look back. I couldn't. My fingers finally found the lock,
and I yanked the door open, the icy night air slamming into me. I sprinted to the truck,
my feet slipping on the gravel as I struggled to pull the keys from my pocket. My hands were
shaking so badly I dropped them twice before finally getting the door unlocked.
I threw myself inside, locked the doors, and started the engine.
As the truck roared to life, I glanced up at the cabin.
My headlights washed over the front window, the tarp flapping in the wind.
For a split second, I thought I saw a shadow move inside, just beyond the firelight.
I slammed the truck into reverse and tore down the dirt trail,
branches whipping against the sides as I drove faster than I ever had before.
I didn't stop until I reached the main road, miles away.
My mind was racing, replaying every terrifying detail.
The prints, the hand, the noise behind me, I couldn't make sense of any of it.
I don't know who or what was in that cabin with me.
But I do know one thing.
I'll never set foot there again.
