Just Creepy: Scary Stories - Deep Woods Horror Stories That Will Keep You Out of the Woods
Episode Date: January 19, 2026These are 2 Deep Woods Horror Stories That Will Keep You Out of the WoodsLinktree: https://linktr.ee/its_just_creepyStory Credits:►Sent in to https://www.justcreepy.net/Timestamps:00:00 Intro00:00:1...8 Story 100:21:37 Story 2Music by:►'Decoherence' by Scott Buckley - released under CC-BY 4.0. www.scottbuckley.com.auBusiness inquiries: ►creepydc13@gmail.com#scarystories #horrorstories #deepwoods 💀As always, thanks for watching! 💀
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I'm going to sound crazy. I know I am.
If someone had told me this story a week ago, I would have laughed in their face and told them to lay off the campfire whiskey.
I am an experienced outdoorsman.
I grew up tracking in the Pacific Northwest, and for the last decade, I've been doing solo excursions into some of the deepest pockets of Appalachia.
I know what bears look like when they have mange.
I know the weird screaming sounds bobcats make.
I know what a sick deer looks like, and I know what a healthy deer looks like.
and I know how different the woods feel when something big is moving through them.
Or, I thought I did.
I need to get this down while my hands are still shaking,
while the adrenaline is still hot in my veins,
because part of my brain is already trying to sand the edges off.
It's already offering me explanations.
Sleep deprivation, stress, imagination,
the way shadows look wrong when you're alone long enough.
I keep catching myself reaching for the most comfortable answer.
That's the scary part.
Not what happened out there.
The scary part is how fast my mind is willing to lie to me so I can function.
Four days ago, I drove out to a remote access point on the Tennessee and North Carolina border.
One of those places where the pavement turns to gravel, and then the gravel turns to rutted dirt,
and then the road just stops and becomes a suggestion.
There are trails in that region, if you want them.
But my whole point was getting away from trails.
I wanted the kind of quiet you can't buy.
I wanted to scout for the upcoming season.
Mark a few waypoints.
Find water sources that don't show up on the easy maps.
And spend a couple nights alone in a place that doesn't care whether you exist.
I packed like I always do.
Hammocks set up with a rainfly, under quilt, a small stove, water filter, headlamp,
backup batteries, med kit, emergency blanket, cordage, knife,
a little bit of food that doesn't require thinking.
I carried a satellite communicator because I'm not stupid,
and I told my wife roughly where I'd be because I'm not selfish.
I had a paper map, a compass, and GPS on my phone,
and I had a point four four on my hip for bears.
Not because I'm looking to play cowboy,
but because I've had two, too close encounters with black bears and thick brush,
and I promised myself I wouldn't be helpless if one decided I was food.
The first 12 miles were hard but normal.
Bushwhacking always is.
You're fighting laurel, stepping over blowdowns,
sliding down slick leaf-covered slopes where the ground is basically ball bearings,
and you're constantly making small decisions.
Left of that boulder, right of that deadfall,
drop into that drainage, climb out here.
I moved slow and deliberate, like I always do,
because getting hurt out there is how you die,
and getting lost out there is how you become a story.
Late afternoon, I found what I was looking for,
a rocky creek bed with water still moving even in a dry stretch,
and a slightly elevated bank with two solid trees at the right distance from my hammock.
The air smelled like damp leaves and hemlock,
and there was that steady, reassuring sound of water over stone.
I set the hammock, strung the tarp, filtered water, ate,
and watched the light fade the way it always does under a dense canopy.
fast and absolute, like someone closing a door.
That first night was fine, standard noises, far off owl,
occasional squirrel doing whatever squirrels do at midnight,
a couple of deer moving through leaves.
I slept in chunks, woke up once or twice,
checked the fire I'd built small and safe, and drifted back off.
The second day started fine too, fog in the low areas,
thin beams of light cutting through the trees,
everything wet. I moved around my camp, looked for sign, took a few pictures of tracks near the
creek, and did what I came to do. Around late morning I started noticing little things that didn't fit.
The first was a set of prints in a soft patch near the water. Hoof prints, but not right. Too long.
The split looked too deep, like toes instead of the normal clean split of a deer. And the stride was
weird. Deer don't walk like that. They have a
rhythm. These prints looked like something heavy trying to imitate that rhythm and failing,
like a person trying to walk in someone else's shoes. I told myself it was mud distortion. I told
myself it was a deer with an injury. I told myself what I always tell myself, don't get spooked
by one odd detail. Around noon, the vibe shifted. If you've been deep enough in the woods,
you know what I mean without me trying to make it poetic. There's a normal background layer,
birds, insects, the soft constant chatter of life.
Even when it's quiet, it's not quiet.
Then sometimes it goes dead.
Like someone hit a switch.
The air still moves, but the living noise drops out.
It's not subtle.
It hits you in the chest.
You stop without meaning to stop.
That's what happened.
The birds stopped.
The little skittering sound stopped.
Even the creek felt louder because everything else pulled back.
My first thought was predator, cougar, bear, something that makes the smaller stuff shut up and hold still.
I stood there for a long time, hand on my holster, scanning.
I listened for breathing.
I watched the tree line.
I looked for movement that didn't belong, nothing.
Eventually the woods restarted, like they were pretending nothing happened, but the watched feeling stayed.
It wasn't the normal something is near feeling.
It was more personal than that.
It felt directed, like attention, like someone had found me and was now deciding what to do with that information.
That evening, right at dusk, I went down to the creek to top off my water.
I was crouched there, filtering, when I heard a snap on the ridge above me, loud, thick wood, not a squirrel, not a rabbit, something with weight.
The sound stopped me mid-motion. I slowly stood up, turned and looked up through the trunks.
20 feet up the ridge between two hemlocks was a deer, a doe.
That's what my brain labeled it first, because the outline was close enough and the world is easier
when you name things.
But it was wrong.
It was too tall.
Its legs were too long and too thin, like dry sticks holding up a body that didn't match them.
Its torso looked hollowed out.
Ribs showed under patchy gray-brown fur that hung in uneven clumps.
The posture was what got me.
A deer is alert in a specific way, ready to bolt, weight shifted, ears moving, head
flicking. This thing was rigid, static, like it had been posed and then forgotten. I waved my arms
and yelled, hey, get out of here. I've done that a hundred times. Deer don't argue with you.
They pick a direction and vanish. It didn't flinch. It didn't stamp. It didn't even blink
the way a normal animal blinks, quick and moist and alive, it rotated its head slowly toward me.
Here's something people who don't spend time outdoors don't realize.
Deer eyes aren't meant to focus like ours. They're on the sides. They turn their heads to
keep you in view, and they do it in a way that always looks slightly sideways, because that's how
they're built. This thing turned its head forward. Both eyes lined up on me like a person looking
you in the face. I felt my stomach drop.
I didn't think Skinwalker or Monster.
I thought very clearly, that is not a deer.
The eyes reflected the fading light with a sick yellow-green shine,
and they looked wet and wide and aware in a way that made my skin crawl.
A deer can look at you, and it still feels like an animal.
This felt like something inside it looking out through it.
We stared at each other for a full minute, maybe more.
It's hard to judge time when your body is dumping chemicals into your blood.
bloodstream. The only sound I could hear was the creek in my own breathing. Then it made a sound,
not a bleat, not a snort, not the alarm wees deer make when they're spooked. It sounded wet and
gutteral, like fluid moving through a throat that wasn't built for sound. And then a sharp
clicking inhale that reminded me of someone trying to suck air through their teeth. It wasn't loud,
but it hit me like a warning. I drew my gun. I didn't care about regulations. I didn't care
about rationality. I cared about the simple math of distance and violence.
Back off, I yelled, and my voice cracked in a way that made me angrier because I could hear fear in it.
It jerked its head, not smooth but twitchy, spasmodic, and then it moved backward into the laurel.
That's the part that still doesn't sit right. It didn't turn and bound away. It didn't crash through
brush the way deer do. It just retreated.
like something pulling it back, and it made no sound at all as it slipped into a wall of thick
undergrowth where, realistically, anything that size should have snapped branches and rattled leaves.
The laurel barely moved. I stood there for a long time after it disappeared, gun out,
listening. I didn't hear it run. I didn't hear it go downhill. I didn't hear anything.
That night I didn't sleep. I fed the fire until it was bigger than I normally ever allow.
hot, bright, stupid, the kind of fire that makes you visible from far away. I didn't care. I wanted light,
and I wanted heat, and I wanted a boundary. I sat there with the revolver in my lap and my back against a tree,
turning my head slowly, scanning the darkness beyond the fire's reach. Somewhere out there,
just beyond the circle of light, something walked. At first it was soft, leaf litter shifting, a deliberate step,
Pause, another step. It circled. I could track it by sound the way you track someone walking
around your house at night. And then it changed. Sometimes it sounded like two feet. Sometimes it sounded
like four. Sometimes it sounded like it was dragging something. I told myself it was multiple
animals. I told myself it was my imagination mixing sounds. But the circling felt intentional
like it was testing the edge of the light. Around three in the morning, the sun.
smell hit. It rolled in like a wave, copper, like old blood, mixed with that sweet rot
stink you get from Roadkill that's been cooking. It was so strong it made my eyes water. I gagged,
actually gagged, and I put my shirt over my nose like that would help. Then, from the darkness
behind me, maybe 30 feet out, close enough that I should have seen a shape if it moved, something
spoke. It wasn't a human voice, not really. It was flat, monotone, like somewhere
reading words without knowing what they meant. Like a voice synthesized badly, pushed through a torn
speaker. It said my name. It drew the vowels out in a strained groan, like it was enjoying the
shape of the sound. I felt every hair on my arms rise. My finger tightened on the trigger and my brain
screamed at me to fire, but something else held me back. Some primal awareness that shooting into blackness
is how you waste ammunition and reveal your position. I threw more.
wood on the fire instead, hands clumsy, heart punching my ribs. The voice came again, closer,
or just louder. I didn't answer. I didn't yell back. I sat there staring into the dark
until the sun finally started to lighten the sky, because daylight is the only thing that
made me feel even slightly less trapped. At first light I packed up. Forget scouting, forget
pride, forget the idea that I could handle it. I was leaving. I was hiking out fast, with my
head on a swivel and my nerves buzzing like live wire. I kept thinking I'd see it between trees.
I kept expecting that wrong posture, that forward-facing stare. The woods felt wrong on the way out,
even in daylight. The quiet came in patches, like something was following me in waves.
My GPS did a weird thing twice, jumped my position a couple hundred feet, and then corrected.
That can happen under canopy, I know that, but it happened at the same time the silence dropped,
and my brain connected those events whether I wanted it to or not.
At one point I found a small animal carcassus, something like a raccoon or possum,
laid out in the open like it had been placed there, not torn apart like a predator kill,
not gnawed, just opened.
neat in a way that didn't match nature.
The smell was fresh enough that it hadn't bloated yet.
I didn't stop.
I didn't look too long.
I kept moving and told myself not to be dramatic.
About four miles from my truck,
I came into a bowl-shaped clearing filled with tall grass,
ringed by trees,
a natural little amphitheater.
The moment I stepped into it,
the silence returned like a door slamming,
instant, heavy.
My body reacted before my mind did.
My hand went to my gun, my mouth went dry.
In the center of the clearing, about a hundred yards away, it stood.
It was facing away from me at first, and for a split second I had the stupid thought that it might actually just be a sick deer.
Daylight makes you want to believe that.
But then it shifted slightly, and I saw the length of it, the way the spine jutted sharply under hide.
The fur was worse in full light, matted, falling out in clumps, revealing slick gray skin.
underneath like wet leather. The shoulders looked wrong. The neck looked too long and too straight,
like it didn't have the right muscles. I started backing up slowly, trying to retreat into the trees
without triggering a chase. I kept my steps careful, heel to toe, because I didn't want to snap anything.
I snapped a twig anyway. One stupid dry piece of wood under my boot, and in that silence it sounded
like a gunshot. The creature didn't turn its head. It stood up. I don't mean it reared
like a deer or rose like a bear. Its back legs straightened, its front legs lifted off the ground,
and it rose into a standing posture with a series of loud pops, joints cracking, tendons shifting,
like a person stretching after being cramped too long. It teetered for a second on those thin hind
legs, then steadied. It was tall, seven feet, maybe more. The front limbs, what should have been deer legs,
hung down at its sides, too long, ending in hooves that were split and spayed in a way that made
them look like gnarled fingers from a distance. It swiveled its whole body to face me, slowly,
and when it did, the illusion of deer broke completely. The snout was wrong, retracted,
like it had been pushed back into the skull. The face wasn't human, but it had a human wrongness
to it. Flatened plains, stretched skin, bone structure that made my brain want to recognize it
and couldn't. The skin looked tight over the skull, as if it didn't fit. The eyes were huge,
bulging, that same wet yellow shine, and the mouth. It was smiling. A wide, lipless grin
filled with flat, grinding teeth that were too big for the jaw, like they'd been shoved into a
mouth that wasn't meant to have them. Then it opened that mouth and made a sound I will carry for the
rest of my life. It was the mimicry of a baby crying, but wrong, too loud, too distorted,
overlapping with itself like three recordings slightly out of sync. It didn't sound like distress.
It sounded like bait. It took one step toward me, a jerky, lurching, human step. The grass
bent under its weight. My body decided before my mind could argue, I turned and ran. I didn't
care about being quiet. I didn't care about scratches. I tore through briars and laurel,
scrambling up ravines and sliding down slick embankments, breath tearing out of me. Behind me it
crashed through brush. It wasn't silent anymore. It wanted me to hear it. It wanted me to feel
it closing the distance. The baby cry sound warped into something else mid-chaise. It became
laughter for a second, high and broken, then snapped back into the crying.
At one point, over the pounding of my own footsteps, I heard it speak again.
Not my name this time.
It sounded like my wife's voice calling out, worried and sharp, exactly the way she sounds
when she can't find me in a store.
It said, David, where are you?
That almost stopped me.
That's the trap of it.
Your brain wants to turn.
Your body wants to respond to the voice you love.
And then the smell hit again, copper and rot blasting past me like hot breath.
and the spell broke. I kept running because nothing about that voice belonged out there.
I risked one glance back and immediately regretted it. I caught a glimpse of it between trunks,
too tall, moving like it was forcing a body to do a job it hadn't practiced. It stumbled once,
caught itself, then lunged forward again, arms dangling, head tilted, mouth open in that horrible
grin. The eyes locked onto me even through the trees, and I had the same.
sudden cold certainty that it was enjoying this. I hid an old logging road about a mile from my
truck, and it felt like stepping out of a nightmare hallway into a bigger room, open space, straight line,
visibility. I sprinted down that road like my life depended on it, because it did. I could hear it
behind me, still coming, but the rhythm was different on the open ground, more awkward,
like it was fighting the mechanics of its own legs. That gave me just enough.
When I finally saw the glint of my Ford F-150 through the trees, I almost cried.
I fumbled the keys so badly I dropped them twice.
My hands didn't feel connected to my body.
I got the door open, threw myself inside, and locked it.
And then I looked up just one time because I couldn't help it.
At the edge of the woods, where Shadow met the pale dirt of the road,
it stood half hidden behind a tree, upright, still, watching.
It didn't come into the open.
It didn't rush the truck.
It just stood there, like it understood something I didn't.
Like the line it wouldn't cross was its choice, not mine.
And then in a voice that sounded like my own voice played back wrong, it said very softly,
David.
I didn't wait to see more.
I started the truck and tore down that service road doing 60,
suspension be damned, gravel spitting behind me.
I didn't look in the mirror again until I hit paved road.
and even then I kept expecting to see it jogging upright along the tree line,
keeping pace like it had all the time in the world.
I've been home for two days.
I haven't slept more than an hour at a time.
I keep waking up at the same time every night, heart hammering, throat dry,
like my body is still out there running.
I've checked the locks on my doors more times than I can count.
I've turned on every outside light.
I've sat in my living room with the TV on just to have another.
human voice in the house. Last night, I stepped onto my porch to take out the trash, and I
smelled it for a second, just a faint trace, copper and sweetness, like something rotten on
warm metal. It was gone as soon as it came, but it was enough to make my stomach flip.
I stood there in the cold air listening like an idiot, waiting for the world to go quiet.
It didn't. The neighborhood sounded normal, cars far off, a dog bar.
a wind chime down the street.
But I swear to you, on everything I care about, I heard from somewhere I couldn't place,
a flat, monotone voice draw out my name like it was tasting it.
I don't know what it was, Skinwalker, Wendigo, Fleshgate.
I don't care about the name.
Names make people feel like they've categorized something, like it sits safely inside a folklore
box.
All I know is that something out there mimicked and hunted and played with me like I was a problem
it wanted to solve for fun.
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Don't go alone.
Don't assume experience makes you untouchable.
And if the woods suddenly go quiet
and you see a deer looking at you
like it has eyes on the front of its face,
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Don't try to prove you're brave.
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I've gone back and forth on whether to post this
because the kind of people who read anything set near Yellowstone
already have a folder in their brain labeled tourists exaggerate.
I get it.
If I read this a year ago,
I'd assume it was a campfire story dressed up with brand name gear
and trail jargon to sound legit.
I also know what it feels like to take something weird and round it off
until it fits inside normal explanations,
until it's a funny story you tell at breweries,
not the thing that wakes you up at 3 in the morning
with your heart already sprinting.
So I'm going to do this the way I wish someone else had done it for me,
as a confession with specifics,
where we parked,
what we carried,
the slope angles,
the pace,
the points where the trail physically makes shortcuts impossible.
I'm going to include the parts that make me sound careless,
and the parts that make me sound paranoid.
I'm going to include the details I keep trying to leave out,
because they make it worse,
and I'm going to start with the one,
fact that's still the cleanest in my head, because it's the hinge everything swings on.
We passed an elderly man in modern all-black hiking gear on a steep single track,
heading the same direction we were running. We never left the trail, never took a fork because
there weren't any, never had a place to cut around him because the slope was a drop on one side
and a wall of rock on the other. We held a running pace for five miles, fast enough that you
can measure it in breath and cadence, not about. And,
30 minutes later we met the exact same man already ahead of us at an overgrown dead end.
Then we turned around and ran back down, and we never passed the original version of him,
the one we'd left behind us on the climb, on the only trail back.
That part isn't creepy, that part is impossible.
Mara and I weren't locals, but we weren't the kind of people who show up in brand new boots
in a plastic water bottle either.
We'd been staying in Gardner for a few days because she'd had a stretch of work she could do
remotely, and I'd stacked my schedule so we could have a week of what we kept calling real air.
We'd been in the park twice, Lamar Valley at sunrise, the boardwalks around Mammoth in the
afternoon, and the crowds did exactly what crowds always do. They made the place feel smaller than it
was supposed to feel. So we decided to do what we always did when a landscape started to feel like
a postcard. We ran. I'm not going to put the exact trail name in here because I don't want this
turning into some stupid dare. But I will say this. It was near Yellowstone, not inside it,
on the north side. Public land, trailhead off a dirt road that turns into washboard,
and then into something that makes you stop and check your spare tire. The route we chose
climbed hard, fast, one of those steep lines that looks like a mistake on a topo map, because the
contour lines get so tight they turn into a bruise. It was late summer edging into fall. That shoulder
season where the mornings feel like metal and the afternoons feel like nothing at all. The sky had that
high, rinsed out look you get at elevation. We got to the trailhead early enough that the parking
area was still mostly empty, one dusty Subaru, a pickup that looked like it lived on that road,
and our rental. This matters because I've already heard the obvious explanation. You pass two
different guys who looked similar. I'd accept that if we were on a popular trail. This wasn't that.
This was quiet enough that we could hear our own breathing in the click of gravel under our shoes.
It was quiet enough that when a bird moved in the brush,
both of us instinctively looked because bear country rewires your attention.
We were trail-running light.
I had a vest with a bladder and soft flasks,
a small first aid kit, a foil blanket,
a headlamp because I'm the anxious one,
and bear spray in the front pocket where it thumps your sternum every time you bounce.
Mara had her own vest with water and snacks,
and, because she's always colder than she thinks she'll be, a thin wind shell rolled tight like a cigar.
We both had our phones, but service was a rumor out there.
I had my watch running GPS because I log everything.
That's another detail that comes back later, in a way I wish it didn't.
We started up at an easy pace, the kind you do at the beginning of a steep run because you can either be patient now or pay for it later.
The trail immediately committed.
That's the only word for it.
It cut up a slope of loose dirt and rock with scrubby pines scattered like they'd been thrown.
In places the trail was a bench, carved into the hillside.
On your right, the mountain rose in broken shelves.
On your left, it fell away into a long, angled drop littered with boulders and deadfall.
There were no switchbacks at first, just a stubborn line that made your calves burn
and your lungs feel like you were drinking air through a straw.
There also weren't any real out-point.
No side trails.
No open meadows where you could run around someone without them noticing.
The vegetation was thick enough to snag you,
and the slope was steep enough that stepping off trail felt like stepping onto marbles.
About 40 minutes in, give or take, I'm anchoring it on a photo Mara took of the valley behind us.
We saw the man.
He was coming up the same direction, but slower, obviously.
He was an older guy, maybe late 60s or early 70s.
gray hair visible under a black cap, slim build, but the kind that comes from age more than fitness.
And he was dressed like someone who'd walked into an outdoor store and asked for the modern version of Invisible.
Black long-sleeved top, black pants, black gloves. Even his pack was black. Not a bright stitch
anywhere. No reflective tape. No loud color that says, please don't lose me in the woods.
The weirdest part at the time wasn't the color. It was how new everything loved.
looked. It was clean in that way gear looks clean when it's been taken out of plastic, not dragged
through dust and pine needles. He had a pair of trekking poles strapped to the side of his pack,
also black, also clean, and he wasn't using them. He was just walking with his hands loose at
his sides like someone on a sidewalk. We slowed as we approached from behind because you don't
blast past someone on a narrow trail unless you want to be an asshole. I called out,
on your left the way you do mara said something polite i don't remember what the man stopped not stepping aside so much as simply freezing in place and turned his head slightly like he'd heard something far away then he moved to the right toward the mountain side and stood there with his shoulder almost brushing the rock we passed him close enough that i could have reached out and touched his sleeve he didn't look at either of us his face was turned toward the
the rock wall and his eyes were angled down. I remember thinking he looked like someone trying to avoid
conversation, which is fair. Not everyone wants to chat, but there was something else in his posture
that made my skin tighten. He wasn't resting. He wasn't catching his breath. He was just
waiting. Like a person who had been told. Stand here until you're told otherwise.
As we went by, I glanced down at his shoes out of habit. Trail running.
probably, because that's what most people wear now, even if they're hiking. They were black, too.
No mud, no dust, no scuffing. It was like he'd stepped onto the trail from a showroom.
Mara looked back over her shoulder once we'd gone a few yards and then leaned close to me,
still moving, and said, he didn't even look up. Maybe he's tired, I said, because I always reach
for normal. She shrugged and then, a moment later said, also, he's a little. He said, he's
We didn't have bear spray.
That seems small, but out there it's like forgetting your seatbelt.
People might do it.
But an older guy alone, in steep terrain, with no visible spray, no bell, no bright colors.
Something about it pinged as wrong in a way I couldn't articulate.
We kept running.
The next few miles are a blur of effort.
The grade steepening, the trail narrowing, our pace slowing into a run-walk pattern where
you run the runnable and power hike, the pitches that feel like ladder.
We talked in fragments, whether, how far we wanted to go,
whether we should turn around at the ridge or push to the lookout ruins that were marked on my map.
The trail climbed into a band of thicker timber where the air smelled like sap and cold soil.
It got darker.
Our footfalls sounded softer.
In there, you stop hearing the big landscape and start hearing the small noises,
twigs snapping under your own shoes, your breathing,
the occasional low whisper of wind.
It was also where the trail got even more committed.
The slope on the left opened into a ravine, not a valley, steeper, more sudden.
If you stepped wrong and went down, it wouldn't be a fall you bounce from.
It would be a fall you don't come back from without help.
We never saw the man again, not behind us, not ahead of us.
That alone wouldn't mean anything.
We'd passed him.
We were moving faster.
distance grows quickly on foot, except that the trail for the next several miles had long sight lines
in places where it crossed open scree or cut across bare rock. You can see ahead, you can see behind.
And more than once, without either of us saying it out loud, I found myself glancing back down
the trail, expecting to see that block of black moving in the green and gray.
I never did. About five miles from where we passed him, again, anchored by the road of the road.
my GPS later, not my memory, we rounded a bend and came out into a small flat area that
looked at first glance like a clearing. It wasn't a meadow. It was more like a shelf. The
hillside had leveled out just enough to form a little pocket before the trail continued up. Only
the trail didn't continue. It ended in brush, not a junction, not a sign turnaround. Just
a wall of waist-high shrubs and young trees and dead branches tangled together like the place
had decided to swallow the path. Mara slowed first, because she's more observant than I am when
I'm tired. She lifted a hand and I almost ran into her. Is that? She said and her voice did
something I didn't like. It went thin. The man was there. He was standing maybe 20 yards ahead
at the very end of the visible trail, where the dirt path just stopped and became overgrowth.
He was facing into the brush, back to us, black silhouette against green.
He looked exactly the same.
Same hat, same pack, same clean shoes, same gloves.
And because the brain hates the impossible, my first thought wasn't teleportation.
It was, we somehow looped.
Or, we passed him and didn't notice.
Or even, there are two men dressed the same.
But the terrain behind us was a narrow single track carved into a slope.
There was no loop, no fork, no alternate trail.
And the distance, five miles, is not a, you didn't notice.
You can't be 30 minutes behind someone for five miles when you are running and they are walking,
unless time itself is playing games.
Mara whispered, that's him.
I didn't answer because my throat had gone dry in that specific way it does when adrenaline shows up too early,
before your brain has decided what to do with it.
We approached slowly, almost unconsciously dropping into that cautious gait you use around animals,
because you don't want to surprise them,
because your instincts don't know the difference between a bear
and a thing that feels like one.
As we got closer, the clearing felt wrong in little ways.
There were no fresh footprints in the dirt beyond ours.
No scuffs from his shoes.
The trail was dusty.
You could see our prints clearly.
You should have been able to see his.
There was also no sound from him, no breathing, no shifting weight.
He stood like a statue.
Sir? I called, and even in the moment I hated how normal my voice tried to make it sound.
No reaction. Mara moved up beside me, and I felt her hand brushed my arm, not affectionate,
just anchoring.
Hey, I said again, louder. Are you okay?
He did something then, not turning, not speaking.
He tilted his head slightly like he was listening to something deeper in the brush.
Then, without turning, he took one step forward into the overgrowth.
The brush should have moved, branches should have bent, leaves should have rustled.
It was thick enough that when we got there later it grabbed at our clothes.
But when he stepped forward, nothing made room for him.
The shrubs didn't part.
They didn't shake.
It was like he stepped into an image.
Mara sucked in a breath so sharp it sounded like a gasp you hear in movies.
And she said my name, just my name, like a warning.
The man took another step.
And this time the brush did move, but not the way it would if a human body pushed through it.
It moved inward toward him, like something accepting a shape.
He still hadn't turned.
We still hadn't seen his face.
I don't know what I would have done if he'd vanished right there in front of us.
Maybe my brain would have snapped back into denial.
Maybe I'd have laughed like a person on the edge of hysteria.
Maybe I'd have stepped forward to prove I wasn't afraid.
But he didn't vanish.
He stopped.
half swallowed by leaves and then he finally turned his head. Not his body, just his head,
rotating slowly until his profile came into view. The skin on my arms tightened. There are
expressions your brain flags as wrong before you can name why. It was that. His face was
too smooth for his age, like an old photo that's been digitally softened. His cheekbones
look sharp, but not from fitness. His eyes were dark and away.
that didn't reflect light.
And when his gaze landed on us, it didn't feel like being looked at.
It felt like being recognized.
He opened his mouth like he was going to speak, and Mara's phone buzzed.
We both flinched because it was the first modern sound in a place that had felt old and quiet.
Mara looked down, thumbed her screen, and then her face did something I still can't forget.
Confusion first, then a kind of dread that spread like a stain.
What? I whispered.
It's a notification, she said.
From the trail app.
What does it say?
She didn't answer right away.
She just stared.
Her lips moved silently like she was reading and rereading to make sure her eyes weren't lying.
Then she turned the screen toward me.
The message was simple, automatic.
The kind of thing you get when you've been in one place too long.
Are you still moving?
Below it, a small line, GPS.
P.S signal lost. My watch vibrated at the same time, as if it had been waiting for her phone
to break the spell. I looked down. The screen showed our route as a thin line climbing up the
mountain, and then, right where we stood, it showed a straight jump, a hard, impossible line,
like someone had picked us up and moved us 50 yards off the trail into the brush behind the
man. Do you see that? Mara said, voice shaking now.
Yes, I said, and I hated how small the word sounded.
The man, half swallowed by leaves, made a sound that I can only describe as a breath that didn't come from lungs.
A dry exhale like wind through dead grass.
Then he spoke.
He said very clearly in a voice that did not match his face.
You're late.
It wasn't loud.
It wasn't angry.
It was flat.
Like reading an appointment time.
Mara's hand gripped my forearm hard enough to hurt.
I felt her nails through the fabric.
What? I said, because my brain was still trying to behave like this was a normal interaction.
The man's eyes stayed on us, unblinking.
You're late, he repeated.
Then, and I swear to you this is true, he smiled, not with warmth, not with humor.
It was a stretching of skin, a bearing of teeth, like a dog showing you it can bite.
And in that moment, the thing that snapped me out of denial wasn't the teleportation or the GPS glitch or the weird voice.
It was that I realized with absolute certainty that he knew we were there before we got there.
Like he'd been waiting at the end of that trail for a long time.
Like the passing on the trail part had been for our benefit, not his.
Turn around, Mara whispered, and her voice had gone into that quiet, serious register she uses when something is actually wrong.
I didn't argue. I didn't ask questions. I did the only thing my body wanted to do.
I backed up. The man watched us retreat.
He didn't move. He didn't step out of the brush. He just stood there half inside the overgrowth,
as if the boundary between trail and whatever was beyond it mattered.
We turned, and we started down. At first, we moved fast, but not panicked, just urgent,
controlled. The way you move when you've decided you're leaving, but you don't want to trigger
whatever might chase you. Then the trail dipped back into timber, and the light changed,
and the sound of our breathing got loud in our ears, and urgency tipped into fear.
You know that feeling when you're running and you sense someone behind you,
not hearing footsteps, not seeing a shadow, just that primitive awareness that your back is exposed.
It hit me like a physical shove.
I looked over my shoulder, the clearing was already out of sight,
swallowed by the bend and the trees.
Still, my stomach dropped as if I'd seen him.
Don't look back, Mara said, and she said.
and she said it like she'd read it in a rulebook.
Did you? I started.
Yes, she said, and that was all.
We ran downhill carefully at first because the trail was technical,
and the last thing you want is to eat dirt and snap an ankle out there.
But adrenaline makes you sloppy,
and within minutes we were moving faster than we should have,
sliding on loose gravel, catching ourselves on trees,
swearing under our breath.
And then we rounded one of the open scree traverses,
the kind where the trail is a thin line cut into a steep slope with nothing but air and rock below you
and Mara stopped so abruptly I almost plowed into her again.
What? I said. She pointed ahead down the trail. The man was there, not behind us, ahead,
standing on the narrow bench of trail like he'd stepped out of the mountain itself.
Same black clothes, same pack, same cap, facing uphill, toward us,
like he was waiting for us to come to him this time.
The part of my brain that still wanted normal screamed,
there are two of him.
The part that had already accepted the impossible whispered,
No, there is one.
And it doesn't move like we do.
We were maybe 40 yards apart,
on a narrow bench with rock wall on one side and drop on the other.
No easy way around without either approaching him or stepping off trail.
Mara's breathing turned into small, fast sounds,
like she was trying not to hyperventilate.
The man didn't move.
Then he lifted his hand palm outward,
not a wave, not a greeting, a stop signal.
And he spoke, voice carrying oddly in the open air.
You didn't pass me, he said.
My mouth went dry again.
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You didn't pass me, he repeated, and this time his voice was different.
Older, raspier, closer to what his face looked like it should sound like.
You only thought you did, Mara said.
we, and then stopped, because what do you even say to that?
The man tilted his head studying us.
Then he glanced down the slope toward the ravine,
and for a second his expression changed.
Something like disappointment, something like hunger.
Not here, he murmured, almost to himself.
Then he looked back at us and smiled again,
that same wrong stretching and said,
Too many eyes.
I swear my body moved before my brain,
decided. I grabbed Mara's wrist and pulled her back uphill, away from him, because the only
thing worse than him being ahead was us being forced to approach. We retreated around the bend
we'd just come from, back into the trees. What do we do? Mara hissed. We go up, I said automatically,
and then realized how stupid that sounded, up led to the dead end. Up goes back to him, she said,
voice tight. Down goes to him too, I said, and my own voice cracked on the last.
last word. We stood there both breathing hard, both listening. There was no sound of footsteps,
no rustle of brush, no clack of trekking poles, nothing, just our own breath and the distant,
faint sound of wind. Mara looked at her phone again like it might be a rope thrown to us,
but the screen was blank now, not dead, just unresponsive, like the touch didn't register.
My watch did the same thing. The buttons worked but the map wouldn't scroll.
The route line was frozen, and that's when I realized something that made my stomach drop even further.
If we were truly on a single track with no forks, and the man was ahead of us, and the dead end was behind us,
then we were trapped on a line with him occupying both ends, like a bead on a string.
We go off trail, Mara whispered.
I looked at the slope beside us, dense brush, rocks, a steep angle that would be hard even without fear.
Off trail in bear country is a last resort, but the man had just proven that trail might be a rule that mattered to him.
Okay, I said, okay, we go off. We picked a spot where the vegetation looked slightly less punishing and started scrambling uphill, away from the bench cut.
It was awkward and loud, branches snapped, dirt slid under our shoes. We used our hands digging fingers into roots and rock.
After maybe 30 feet, no more than that, Mara's foot slipped.
She caught herself, but her ankle rolled hard.
She made a sharp sound like pain trying to stay quiet.
Are you? I started.
I'm fine, she said immediately too fast.
Keep going.
We climbed until we were above the trail enough that we could see down into it through gaps and branches.
We crouched behind a boulder with scrub growing around it and tried to slow our breathing.
down below the trail was empty.
I waited for him to appear, for black to move through green.
Nothing.
Minutes passed.
My sense of time got slippery.
The kind of slippery that happens when fear makes you count seconds and then forget what number
you're on.
Mara whispered, what if he's behind us now?
Then we keep moving, I said, though I didn't know where moving led, when up was cliff
and down was him.
We started traversing uphill, aiming for what looked like a rock.
rocky band, less brush, maybe a chance to move laterally without leaving a trail of broken branches.
As we moved, I kept expecting to hear something, a branch snapping below us, a foot sliding
on gravel, anything that would anchor the fear to a real predator. We got to the rock band and
followed it, half crawling, half scrambling. Mara's limp became more obvious. She tried to hide it,
but every few steps she'd wince and catch herself. Then through the trees, we saw something that
didn't belong. A strip of black fabric caught on a branch, like a glove, like a sleeve. Mara froze,
so did I. We hadn't been here before. We'd climbed straight up from the trail. There shouldn't have
been anything up here but brush and rock and pine needles. Mara reached out slowly and touched the
fabric. It was a glove, black, clean. She pulled it free. It was warm, not sun warm. The shade was cool.
The air up there had a bite. It was warm like it had just been on someone's hand.
Mara looked at me, eyes wide and whispered,
He's up here.
Before I could answer, we heard a sound below us, not footsteps.
A voice, low, close enough to make the hair on my neck rise.
It said, Mara.
Her name pronounced perfectly.
Neither of us had said her name on the trail, not once.
We'd called each other babe and hay and watch your footing.
We hadn't used names because no one uses names when you're alone together in the woods.
The voice said it again, a little loud.
her. Mara. Mara's face went white in a way I've only seen once before, in an ER waiting room
when a doctor walked out and someone's life changed in a sentence. I didn't tell him, she whispered,
not to me exactly, but to herself. The voice came again, from a different direction this time,
like it had moved without traveling. David! My name. My stomach dropped so hard it felt like
nausea. Then the brush on the other side of the rock band shifted, not rustling from wind,
not a small animal, a deliberate parting.
The man stepped out onto the rock above us.
He was close enough that I could see the fine dusting of gray stubble on his chin.
And here is the part I keep trying to rationalize,
because it's the part that makes me sound insane.
His clothes were still clean, his shoes still looked new,
but his skin looked wrong, like it had been pulled too tight,
like there was something under it trying to press out.
He smiled, and he held up his hand.
He was wearing a black glove.
On one hand, the other hand was bare.
And it was the hand that looked wrongest, fingers slightly too long,
knuckles too pronounced, nails too pale.
He looked at the glove in his hand, the missing one,
and then back at Mara and me.
You dropped it, he said softly.
Mara's breath hitched.
I did something that I'll be embarrassed about until I die,
but I'm going to tell you anyway,
because it's honest. I sprayed bearspray. I didn't aim carefully. I didn't give a warning. I didn't
think about wind. I just yanked the can and fired a bright, furious cloud straight at him.
The orange mist hit him full in the face. He didn't flinch. He didn't cough. He didn't blink.
The spray dispersed around him like fog around a post. And then he laughed. It wasn't a human laugh.
It was like the sound a person makes when they're trying to imitate laughter from memory.
Mara grabbed my arm and yanked me and we ran, up, not down, because down was the trail and the trail
was his string. We scrambled higher into rock and trees, lungs burning, legs slipping. Mara cried out
once when her ankle gave, but she kept moving. I half dragged her, half pushed her, adrenaline
turning my strength into something ugly and desperate. Behind us I expected pursuit, footsteps,
crashing brush, anything. Instead, we heard him.
speaking calmly like he was walking with us.
You're doing it wrong, his voice said, somewhere too close.
You can't go that way, it said from the other side.
You'll come back, it murmured, and the words were almost gentle.
Mara started crying, not loud sobs, just tears leaking while she ran,
and I've never felt more helpless than watching her pain and fear,
and knowing my decisions had put her there.
We reached a steeper rocky pitch that forced us to slow and use hands.
Above it, through the trees, I saw a strip of open sky, and what looked like a ridge line.
If we get to the ridge, I gasped, we can... I didn't finish because I didn't know what we can meant.
Call for help, no service, go a different direction, into unknown terrain.
But the ridge felt like a boundary, and fear makes you believe in boundaries.
We climbed. My hands scraped rock, my shoes slipped.
Mara's breathing turned ragged.
Somewhere below, the man's voice kept appearing at.
disappearing like a radio-scanning channels. Then we crested the ridge, and the world changed.
Not dramatically, not like stepping into a different dimension with purple skies. It changed in a way
that made my brain stutter because it was so subtle and so wrong. The ridge was supposed to drop into a
view of the valley we'd been climbing out of. Instead, it dropped into a tight basin I didn't recognize.
dense timber, no visible road, no familiar peaks. The air felt colder, the light looked different,
like the sun was at a slightly wrong angle. Mara stared panting and whispered,
Where are we? I looked at my watch again, and this time it came back to life like it had been
waiting for us to reach this point. The time displayed made no sense. It was earlier than when we'd
started. Not by minutes. By more than an hour. My stomach churned. That's not,
I started. Mara pulled her phone out again. The screen lit, no bars, but the map app opened,
and on it, our blue dot wasn't on the trail we'd been on. It was miles away, deeper into the
backcountry, on a faint, dotted line I didn't remember seeing on my downloaded maps.
I felt like I was going to throw up. Then behind us, the man's voice said softly,
There you are. We turned. He stood on the ridge with us. No sound of climbing.
No crash of brush. Just there. As if he'd been there all along. He looked at Mara's ankle,
then at my bearspray can still in my hand. You can't burn what isn't yours, he said. And I don't know why,
but that sentence hit me like a shove, like I'd stepped into something that belonged to him.
Like the trail wasn't public land, wasn't near Yellowstone, wasn't part of the world we thought
we were in. Mara backed away and her heel hit loose rock. She stumbled. I grabbed, I grabbed
The man smiled again, and his eyes, those dark, flat eyes, shifted past us, looking
into the basin like he was watching something approach.
Not yet, he murmured.
And then the wind changed.
It came up cold and sharp, smelling faintly of something metallic, like wet stone.
The trees below rustled, and for a moment I thought I saw movement between trunks.
Not him, not a person, but something low and quick, like shadows being dragged.
The man's posture changed.
He straightened slightly like someone standing to attention.
Mara whispered,
What is that?
The man didn't answer her.
He spoke to the air, to the basin, to something we couldn't see.
They're not ready, he said.
Then he looked back at us, and for the first time his expression wasn't hungry.
It was almost irritated.
Wrong day, he said, like we'd shown up when the office was closed.
And then, as casually as a person said,
stepping off a curb, he stepped backward. Not down the ridge, not into brush, backward into empty
air, and he was gone. Mara and I stood frozen, staring at the space where he'd been,
no sound, no shimmer, no dramatic fade, just absence. I didn't wait to see if he'd come back. I didn't
debate, I didn't try to understand. I grabbed Mara and we started moving down into the basin
because standing still felt like dying.
The next hours, however many hours they were,
because time had already proven it wasn't behaving,
were pure survival.
We followed the faint dotted line on the map
because it was the only structure we had
and because the alternative was bushwhacking blind
through terrain that could end in cliffs or deadfall or something worse.
Mara's ankle swelled fast.
She tried to tough it out,
but after a while she couldn't put full weight on it.
I took more of her packweight, I supported her.
We moved in a grim, limping rhythm that felt like punishment.
We heard things.
I need to be careful how I say this, because it's easy to make it sound like paranormal nonsense.
We heard things that didn't fit, footsteps pacing us with no visible source, branches snapping
in patterns that mimicked our cadence, a low murmur once that might have been wind and might
have been voices. Once late afternoon by the look of the light, we found a place where the ground
was disturbed, like something large had been dragged through pine needles. There were no clear tracks,
just a smear of flattened debris, and beside it, caught on a root, was another black glove.
This one was dirty. This one had pine needles stuck to it. This one, when I picked it up with
shaking fingers, had something inside it, not a hand, a small flat piece of plastic, a keycard,
like the kind you use at a hotel.
I flipped it over.
On the back in faded print was a name,
a last name that matched mine.
I dropped it like it burned.
Mara stared at it, tears streaking dust on her face.
That's not possible.
I didn't answer because I didn't have anything left inside me
that could hold possible as a concept.
We kept moving.
As dust came, we started seeing signs that made no sense in a different way.
Human signs in a place that
felt like it didn't want humans. Old flagging tape tied to branches, sun bleached, a rusted
tin can half buried in duff, a piece of rotting wood with a nail in it that looked like it had
been part of a structure. And then, just before the light went thin and gray, we saw a clearing
ahead. In it, an old dead end, not overgrown brush like the one we'd found before. This was
a literal end, a wall of rock with a narrow crack in it, like a seam.
faint dotted line on the map stopped there. Mara's grip tightened on my arm. No. I wanted to say,
we can go around, but the clearing was ringed with brush and steep slopes. The crack in the rock
looked like the only path forward. The air here felt different, cooler, heavier. The hair on my
arms rose, and then from the crack a voice drifted out, not the man's voice, a younger voice,
a voice that sounded like Mara. It said softly, David,
Mara froze so hard she nearly fell.
I felt my blood turned cold because the voice wasn't behind us.
It wasn't beside us.
It was inside the rock.
The crack widened slowly, like someone pulling open a door that was pretending to be stone.
And in the shadow behind it, I saw black, a silhouette, a person standing just inside, waiting in all black gear.
But this time, it wasn't the elderly man.
It was me.
Same build.
Same vest outline.
Same bear spray can shape on the chest, same posture, shoulders forward from fatigue.
Except the face, what I could see of it in the dim was wrong.
It was too still, too blank, like a mask that hadn't learned expressions.
Mara made a sound that was half sob, half choke.
The thing that looked like me tilted its head, exactly like the man had.
And then it smiled.
And I understood, in a sick flash, what the man had meant when he said.
You didn't pass me. You only thought you did.
Because on that first trail, when we passed him and he stared at the rock wall and didn't look up,
maybe he wasn't avoiding conversation.
Maybe he was waiting for us to go by so the trail could close behind us.
Maybe the thing we'd left behind was never a person who would continue walking up.
Maybe it was a marker, a doorstop, a way to make sure we couldn't find the world we started in
by simply turning around and running back down.
My mind wanted to break.
I could feel it searching for any normal explanation to cling to.
Heat exhaustion, panic, a bear, a person pranking us.
But none of those explained why the thing in the crack had my shape,
or why the voice inside the rock knew our names.
I did the only thing I could do.
I refused to participate.
I grabbed Mara and I turned away from the clearing, away from the crack,
away from the thing that wore my outline,
and I started moving uphill through brush again.
because the trail on the map had ended, and whatever was ahead was not something we could survive.
Behind us, the voice that sounded like Mara called again,
David, wait.
Then in a softer tone, like a lover soothing you, it said, we can go back.
And then I heard the elderly man's voice layered underneath, like two recordings playing at once.
You're late, it murmured.
Mara started to collapse, pain and fear finally over.
overwhelming her. I hooked my arm under hers and half carried her. My legs screamed. My lungs burned.
The light drained. We climbed until we couldn't see the clearing, until the voices faded behind us.
And then we found something that saved our lives in the dumbest, most normal way possible.
A trail. A real trail. Wider. More worn. A line of dirt with actual bootprints.
Actual broken twigs. A trail that smelled like humans had been on it recently.
Mara sank to the ground, sobbing now, and I dropped to my knees beside her, hands shaking so hard
I couldn't even unclasp my pack. I looked at my watch, the time was normal again, late evening.
The GPS map showed a route that didn't match anything we'd done, but it showed us on a known
trail system closer to a different trailhead, still remote, but connected. I don't know how
to explain that transition. I don't know if we climbed out of whatever pocket we'd fallen
into, or if it let us go because it got what it wanted, or if some other rule saved us when we
refused the crack. We followed that trail downhill in the dark with my headlamp bouncing, Mara limping
and leaning on me. We moved for hours. We saw distant headlights at one point and cried with
relief like children. We eventually reached a parking area with cars, real cars, a cooler in the back
of a truck, a dog barking, a man in a flannel who stared at us like we were ghosts.
He asked if we were okay, and I tried to explain, lost, injury, no service.
And the words came out broken and stupid because my brain was still stuck on the image of myself
smiling from inside rock.
He drove us to where we could get help.
Search and rescue got involved briefly, mostly to make sure we weren't leaving someone
else out there.
They asked if we'd seen anyone on the trail.
I said yes because I couldn't, not.
I described the elderly man in all black gear.
One of the S-A-R guys, an older man with a weathered face, stopped writing and looked up.
All black? he repeated.
Yes, I said.
He exchanged a look with someone else.
The other person, a woman with a radio clipped to her vest, went very still.
Did he have a black cap?
The S-R guy asked.
Careful.
Yes.
Clean gear?
He asked.
Yes.
Mara whispered, voice hoarse.
The S-R guy exhaled slowly, like someone who did.
just had a suspicion confirmed. Then he said, okay, in a tone that meant the opposite of okay.
Where exactly did you see him? We told them as best we could pointing on a map. The Sargai's
jaw tightened. That trail doesn't dead end, he said, more to himself than to us. I stared at him.
It did. He looked at me then, really looked, like he was measuring whether I was delirious.
It doesn't, he said again. Not on any of the maps, not on any of our roots. It
climbs to a ridge and continues, unless you went off trail.
We didn't, I said automatically, and then remembered we had gone off trail to avoid him,
and my stomach sank because my own narrative was already starting to tangle.
Mara spoke up. We followed the trail until it stopped.
The SR guy's eyes flick to hers, then away. He scribbled something, then closed his notebook.
I'm going to be straight with you, he said, lowering his voice.
people get turned around out there more than they think.
It's steep.
It messes with your sense of distance.
Exhaustion and fear do weird things.
I nodded because that's what you do when someone offers you a lifeline back to normal.
Then he added quietly,
But you're not the first to describe someone in black on that line.
My mouth went dry again.
What do you mean? I asked.
He hesitated, then shook his head slightly like he decided he didn't want to be responsible
for planting something in our minds.
Just get checked out, he said, and don't go back up there.
They treated Mara's ankle, a bad sprain, not broken.
They gave us water and blankets.
They asked more questions.
They eventually let us go.
We drove back to Gardner in silence.
The town lights looked unreal.
The smell of food from a restaurant made me nauseous.
I kept expecting to see black gear in the rearview mirror.
Back at our rental, Mara showered with the door open,
because she didn't want to be alone.
I sat on the bathroom floor and stared at my watch data.
This is the part that still makes me feel like I'm going to crawl out of my skin.
The GPS track from my watch showed our route.
It showed us climbing the trail like normal.
It showed the spot where we passed the elderly man,
marked by a brief slowdown.
Then it showed five miles of steady progress.
Then, near the supposed dead end, the track did something I've never seen.
It doubled back on itself in a tight loop, like we'd been running in a small circle, except we hadn't.
Then it showed a straight line jump, like the one I'd seen earlier, off the trail into nothing.
Then it went blank for a stretch. No data.
Then it resumed on a completely different trail system miles away,
exactly where we'd found the normal trail at the end.
As if a hand had picked us up and set us down.
Mara's phone had something worse.
She'd taken a photo earlier on the climb, a quick shot of the vat.
with the trail snaking below. We looked at it because we wanted proof we'd been there,
proof it was real. In the bottom left corner of the frame, partially hidden behind a tree, was a smear
of black. At first I thought it was shadow. Then I zoomed in. It was the elderly man,
standing off trail in the trees, watching us. But the timestamp on the photo was from before
we'd passed him on the trail, as if he'd been ahead of us in the woods, waiting. While another
stood on the trail to let us pass. Mara started shaking so hard she couldn't hold the phone.
That night, neither of us slept. Every time the wind moved outside, I heard that voice inside
rock saying my name. The next morning Mara asked me something I didn't want to answer.
Did you pick that trail? She said, sitting on the edge of the bed, eyes raw. Yes, I admitted.
Why that one? She asked.
Why not something normal?
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I opened my mouth to say because it looked fun or because it was empty, but the truth was uglier.
because on the first day we'd arrived at a coffee shop, I'd seen a flyer on a bulletin board,
not a glossy park poster, a cheap printout, a missing person notice, an older man,
gray hair, a photo that looked like it was taken in the 2000s.
The name was blurred in my memory now, but I remember the words, last scene and the general area.
I'd looked at it and then looked away, because those flyers are everywhere near wild places,
and you either let them haunt you, or you learn to compartmentalize.
But I'd also thought stupidly,
we'll be careful, we'll be fine.
I told Mara about the flyer.
She stared at me, and there was a coldness in her expression that hurt more than anger.
Do you think that was him? she asked.
I don't know, I said, and my voice sounded like someone else's.
I don't know if he was him.
Mara swallowed, eyes shining.
Do you think he's dead?
The honest answer is that I don't know if dead is even the right category for what we met.
Because here's what keeps me up.
If that man was a missing person, why was his gear clean?
Why did he act like he was waiting?
Why did he know our names?
And if he wasn't human, why did he care about timing?
Why did he say wrong day, like some schedule mattered?
Why did he say not yet, like he was negotiating with something in the basin?
And why?
This is the part I can't say out loud to anyone in real life.
Why did the thing in the rock look like me?
I wish I could tell you the story ends with a ranger explaining a weird GPS glitch,
or with us discovering the real trail junction we missed,
or with a rational answer that makes this all a stress-induced hallucination.
But the end is smaller and worse.
We left, early.
We cut the trip short.
We drove away from the park and its edges and its big open skies.
We went back to our apartment. Back to normal. Mara healed. Her ankle is fine now. She runs again.
I run too, but something changed in me. I don't like narrow single track on steep slopes anymore.
I don't like dead quiet timber. I don't like places where the trail feels like a string.
Sometimes, when I'm running in my own neighborhood, I'll pass someone dressed in black, just a normal person on a morning walk.
and my chest tightens so hard I have to stop.
And every once in a while, I'll check my watch data after a run
and see a brief straight line jump,
a tiny glitch where GPS drift cuts across a block,
and my hands will start to shake
because my brain immediately goes back to that overgrown dead end
and the man half inside leaves,
and that smile that didn't belong on a human face.
I haven't told my parents,
I haven't told most of my friends,
I haven't posted this anywhere under my real name.
I'm posting it here because if you tell people in your life that you met something impossible near Yellowstone,
they either laugh or they look at you with pity, or they decide you're the kind of person who wants attention.
I don't want attention. I want an answer.
Or failing that, I want one simple thing.
For someone who reads this and recognizes the pattern, the black gear, the dead end that shouldn't exist,
the way time slips and the trail becomes a line you can't escape,
to take it seriously enough to not go up there and see for themselves.
Because the worst part isn't that we saw him ahead of us when he should have been behind.
The worst part is what I realized later,
staring at Mara's photo with that black smear in the corner.
We didn't pass him and then meet him again.
We passed one of him,
and the one that mattered was already ahead of us,
waiting at the end,
before we ever set foot on that trail.
Like the trail wasn't leading us up a mountain.
Like it was leading us to an appointment.
And for 30 minutes, five miles, one steep single track with no shortcuts or forks,
we ran hard to make it on time.
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