CreepsMcPasta Creepypasta Radio - "I Was Sent Away to a Young Offenders Camp, Something’s Very Wrong Here" Creepypasta

Episode Date: November 26, 2020

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Starting point is 00:00:26 MCHOTCWIT. Foodingsupplement forcrige-mach by the apotheker. It was the final straw for everyone involved. My mother, father, principal, peer worker, they were all sick of me and my destructive behavior. At 17 years old, I had a pretty impressive resume. Property damage, antisocial behavior, aggravated assault, and my most recent addition, arson.
Starting point is 00:00:51 I really screwed up. Well and truly, for the last time. I thought for sure I would be taken away to Juvie. I wish I could lie to you all and say, I came from a broken home, that I got in with the wrong crowd, that I was just a lost soul who needed guidance. That wasn't the case. I burnt my high school to the ground after my permanent exclusion. Call it rage or anger.
Starting point is 00:01:16 Call it petty if you want to. I was actually trying to finish school with good grades, but the principal never let me be anything but a thug. I never stole the money from the school accounts like they said. I'm not as take savvy as they made me out to be. It was an obvious setup from the principal to gain some payback for all the hassle I caused him over the years and of course to get me out of school for good That I take no responsibility for I tried to convince my mom
Starting point is 00:01:42 Begged her in fact to hear me out She shook ahead when the police cuffed me I'm sorry Brody But I just don't believe a word you say anymore And then they dragged me away It was the last time I would see my home after I was sentenced My lawyer, Mr. Fairhurst, was actually pretty good, and made a sympathetic case for me. The judge, however, had well and truly had enough of seeing my face.
Starting point is 00:02:09 There was no winning situation in that scenario at all. Of course I didn't show it, but I was terrified of being sent away. I didn't know what to expect. To my surprise, I wasn't sent away to Juvie. You have a chance, Mr. Jackson, to redeem yourself. The judge said, when he passed down his judgment. One year had a reform facility to prove you can be an outstanding citizen to society. Don't make me regret my decision.
Starting point is 00:02:39 I was initially confused what the reformed facility actually was. I hide Mr. Fairhurst while the judge continued talking. After the sentencing had finished, he slid me a leaflet. Stanley side corrections camp, a place of redemption and forgiveness. Feeling lost, feeling like there's no way back to. from your mistakes, praying for a miracle. Stanley's side corrections camp is here to help you reform.
Starting point is 00:03:04 Is this a damn joke? I said, scoffing at the pictures of overly happy young men and women raft building, kayaking, and sitting with an acoustic guitar by a campfire. Not to mention that they all look like models. I wasn't fooled by the fancy advertising.
Starting point is 00:03:20 They're seriously sending me to a kiddie camp to sing Kumbaya for a year? Mr. Fairhurst sighed. I could tell. He was exhausted by me and was glad he didn't have to represent me anymore. I don't blame him. I know I'm hard work, and I didn't make any of it easy for him, or myself. It's no joke, he said, sternly, and it's no walk in the park either.
Starting point is 00:03:43 You got very lucky, Mr. Jackson. This isn't a vacation. It sure is a look like one, I said. I was to be escorted to Stanlyside right away. I didn't even get a chance to say goodbye to my parents. My dad sat in the courtroom with both his arms crossed. He was only there as support for my mom, who sat as still as a statue after my sentence was passed.
Starting point is 00:04:07 She just stared at me when I got took away, without even a welling in a tired eyes. My mom used to be my biggest supporter and defender. She was the reason why I tried to change and become a better person. I was doing well in school, and even got most of the teachers on my side by working hard and applying myself. I proved I could do it, that I could be someone else. But it was one last screw up too many for my mother. It broke my heart to see the way she
Starting point is 00:04:32 looked at me. It was like I was the biggest disappointment and regret of her entire life. I was surprised to find I wasn't travelling to Standyside in a prison ban. When the guide escorted me to my transport, it was a silver car. I wasn't allowed to bring any personal items with me, and even books. Everything I needed would be provided for me at the camp, I was told. It's not like I had anything worth taking with me anyway When I got into the car The driver turned to face me He was a young guy
Starting point is 00:05:06 If I had to guess early twenties All white teeth Blonde hair and chubby cheeks He smiled at me as I clipped in my seatbelt I noticed but didn't make an attempt To return the gesture back at him I'm Bart He said
Starting point is 00:05:21 I flooded my eyelids That's seriously your name Is your second and a second named Simpson too, or would that just be too much of a coincidence? Oh, he's a joker, Bart said, noddingy said, genuinely impressed. I think we're going to get on just fine, Brody. I made my head back and closed my eyes. I couldn't remember the last time I slept properly.
Starting point is 00:05:46 Bart put on some song I'd never heard before and began to drive away. He hummed along to the tune of the song, much to my annoyance. I tried to sleep for half an hour into the journey, but too much was racing through my head, and Bart still continued to hum away song after song. Since I couldn't sleep, I decided to talk to Bart. I wasn't really in the mood for talking, but I was curious about Stanley side, so I asked what it was. Bart shifted his eyes to the rearview mirror to meet my own. Didn't you read the leaflet?
Starting point is 00:06:20 No, I said. I'm asking what it really is. You can't time with it's going to be all fresh air and marshmallows with a fire every night. Well, that's exactly what it's like, he said, using one of his hands to emoge his point. Redeeming yourself doesn't have to be an unpleasant experience. I still wasn't convinced. B.S. You know what I did, don't you? They don't send people like me to somewhere that isn't unpleasant. You're wrong, he said, and seemed lost for words for a moment.
Starting point is 00:06:52 I was about to close my eyes again when he carried on. I think Staniside is exactly what you need. Being in that environment will do the world of good. No internet, no phone, no excuse to get into any trouble. Everyone loves it there. Your pitch is good, but I'm still not convinced on the product, I said, shrugging. What do you do there anyway? I'm assuming you're not just the driver.
Starting point is 00:07:18 You're right, he said. I'm one of the camp counsellors. I sneered, rubbed my hand over my face. Jesus Christ. We drove for hours, or so I assumed. I didn't have a phone, let alone a watch to tell me what the time was. I guessed it was well into the afternoon. My stomach rumbled and I tried to convince Bart to stop off somewhere, but he refused.
Starting point is 00:07:46 All he could offer me was a bottle of water that rolled around on the floor on the back seat. It had clearly been there for a while. I found myself getting bored again, no longer able to take the awkward silence between myself and Bart. So, if you're a counsellor, why did you drive all that way to pick me up? I asked. He adjusted the volume of his radio. We always pick our campers up. His answer made me laugh and he squinted at me in the rearview mirror. What? God Bart, really? Campers? Well, it's more endearing than the alternative term, isn't it?
Starting point is 00:08:27 I didn't answer him, but his question was food for thought. anyone could dress it up how they liked. The matter of the fact was that I was going to be spending the next year of my life as a prisoner. I was more or less dead to the world. We'll be there soon, Bart said, breaking me away from my deep thought. The reflection of his smile in the rearview mirror was actually comforting. Bart kept his promise. Twenty minutes later, we drove through a large frame made of tree trunks, which, to my surprise, had no game.
Starting point is 00:09:02 The area around the entrance was surrounded by tall oaks that seemed to go on for miles. I leaned forward from my seat to peer up at the high wooden frame. It also had a sign at the top. It read, Camp Stanlyside. Until I saw it with my own eyes, I didn't believe Stanleyside would look like an actual summer camp. But there they were. The rustic red cabins, a mess hall, a playing field with archery targets and a huge lake. I observed the campers through the window.
Starting point is 00:09:36 The campers stared back at me with a mixture of grins and general curiosity. They were all dressed just like kids at a camp, and, considering the age of them all, it made them look like they were attending an 80s-themed college party. The standard uniforms seemed to be great t-shirts, with Camp Stanley side printed on them, tube socks, white sneakers, and, much to my chagrin, black short shorts.
Starting point is 00:10:00 I was expecting a lot of the campers to look very, roughed up, but they really did look like the people in the leaflet. It was damn weird. After he pulled up, I said to Bart, there is absolutely no way I'm wearing those shorts. He didn't say anything when he got out of the driver's seat, and, after he did, I caught a cheeky grin on his face as he slammed the door. I'm not joking, I said to myself in the empty car, crossing my arms.
Starting point is 00:10:29 Outside the window I saw a group of people walk over to meet Bart. They were dressed like the campers too, but they were older and wore red t-shirts instead of grey, the other counsellors, I assumed. A mixture of guys and girls, six of them in total. Bart was talking to a man in the middle of the group, who I guessed was around 40. Their conversation was inaudible to me with a distance and the window between us.
Starting point is 00:10:56 It wasn't hard to figure out that the guy Bart was talking to was the big boss. I noticed there was a lot of nodding going on, a lot of smiling. The man in the middle looked over at me briefly and bowed his head at me, then carried on talking away. I was disturbed from my casual observation
Starting point is 00:11:13 of the conversation when there was a knock on the window. I was so immersed in what the councillors could possibly be talking about that I jumped from the shock interruption. I rolled the window down to see a guy leaning over to meet my face to the window. He was really told,
Starting point is 00:11:28 and looked like he belonged in an apricrombiad. Can I help you? I asked, making it known I was annoyed by his disturbance. The tall guy gave me a half-hearted smile. I'm Luke, he said. I'm supposed to show you around. Initially, I didn't move. I just stared him out,
Starting point is 00:11:48 thinking that eventually he would look away and get lost. But he didn't. He waited patiently. Lucky, lucky me, I said. Popping my head, side of the way. aside. When I got out of the car, my legs felt like jelly from sitting down for so long. Luke had already marched off, assuming I would follow him. It was clear to me from the moment we met that Luke saw himself as a leader and expected me to be a follower. Showing me around
Starting point is 00:12:16 was the only exception. I was no one's follower. Nevertheless, I dragged myself behind him, begrudgingly. What's your name? Luke said, as he paced on. I knew full well. He already knew what it was, because he'd been instructed to carry out my induction. What do you want it to be, pretty boy? Luke stopped and faced me. I was grateful because I was out of breath and who's hard to keep up with the speed of his long legs. He folded his arms and raised his left eyebrow.
Starting point is 00:12:48 Are you going to be a problem? I couldn't take him seriously, the way he tried to be authoritative in those shorts. I smirked and tried not to laugh. Jesus, take a joke, it's Brody. Luke didn't give me any indication that he registered what I said and continued to walk ahead. I sighed, rolled my eyes and carried on. I was given the tour of the grounds.
Starting point is 00:13:15 There wasn't anything I didn't expect to see, and it wasn't a hard place to navigate, which I guess was the point. After all, Stanley side was a dressed-up prison, so it's not like they would want their prisoners to go far or be out of sight. Luke wasn't an enthusiastic tour guide, so probably wasn't doing it justice. I had a feeling I was getting the abbreviated version because I was so disinterested in everything he showed me. It was a camp with grounds big enough of various activities. What else was there to say?
Starting point is 00:13:46 The only thing I couldn't help but notice was how happy everyone looked. The campers looked and acted just as artificial as the place itself. At the end of the tour, Luke finally showed me to my camp. cabin. It was a duplicate of all the others that surrounded it, the same shade of red. The cabin walls were made of wood, matching the exterior and overall aesthetic
Starting point is 00:14:08 of the camp. It was six beds in total, and overall, it was very bare, just as I expected it to be. No luxury here. This is your bed, Luke said, and pointed to the bed in the far corner. It was dressed in baby blue sheets,
Starting point is 00:14:24 just like all the others. The required uniform was folded neatly on my bed for me. I had the shorts and rolled my eyes. The air in the cabin was muggy and stale. It was actually suffocating. I began to sweat and decided that maybe the uniform wasn't so unappealing if it was going to be that hot most of the time.
Starting point is 00:14:45 It's my cabin too, so we'll be rooming together, Luke said with distaste. I think this would be a good time to go over some expectations. Wait, so you're not a counsellor? I asked with relish. "'Your bed should always be made when you're not in it,' Luke proceeded, ignoring my question. "'You should always be hygienic in the camp uniform, so you may as well get rid of your clothes. "'You won't need them anymore.' "'Except for when I leave here,' I said defiantly.
Starting point is 00:15:13 "'So I'll keep them, thanks.' "'Luc ignored me again. "'In your storage, you have plenty of spares to wear, as well as sweatshirts and search for when it's cold. "'Always be respectful to everyone. "'That includes your fellow campers.' and he said that with emphasis. No smoking, drinking, drugs. All meals should be eaten in the mess hall.
Starting point is 00:15:34 What are you in for? I asked, bored of his ramblings. Luke's face hardened, and never ask another camper why they're here. It's forbidden, he said. Dinner is in an hour. Shows are two doors down. No time like the present.
Starting point is 00:15:51 Then he twists his nose before turning on his heels. Weirdo, I muttered when he was. walked out the cabin. I tucked at the front of my t-shirt when I walked into the mess hall later, conscious that it was a little too tight. I felt like an imposter wearing the camp uniform, and also a little bit ridiculous. But I thought it was better to blend in than to stand out in this place. Perhaps that's what they were all already doing, I wondered, sure that everyone's true colours would come out sooner or later. The noisy atmosphere in the mess hall made my head pound. campus laughed and talked away, shuffling large bites of food into their mouths, sat in their little cliques.
Starting point is 00:16:32 I just wanted to go to sleep, but I hadn't eaten since the day before, so I walked in with the intention of grabbing a quick bite and sneaking back out. I made my way through the rows of smiles, nods, waves and intrigue from the strangers before me. I made no intention to grace them with the same courtesy. I just held my head high and marched into the serving area. The staff looked like they were closing up for the night. but the cook served me a burger. That might as well have been charcoal and cold concrete fries.
Starting point is 00:17:03 Looks delicious, I said to her when she passed it to me. My sarcasm didn't faze her. I managed to find an empty bench hoping to stay invisible from everyone. Of course, that didn't happen. The way some of the campers looked to me was making me lose my appetite
Starting point is 00:17:21 more than the food was. I spotted Luke with his little entourage, They talked amongst themselves as he stared at me with his chin resting on top of his clasped hands. I wanted to tell him to get lost, but I thought it was best not to cause a scene in my first day. I saw Bart approach me from the corner of my eye, dressed in his red councillor t-shirt. Now he fitted in with the rest of the clones. I couldn't help but notice how thick his body was and how muscular his legs were. He gave me serious body envy.
Starting point is 00:17:51 You should try and make some friends, he said. Luke's a great guy. He'll be a good influence on you. Bart sat down, but I didn't meet his eyes. I just picked him my food. I don't need any friends, and I don't need anyone to influence me. I do a good job of influence myself. So, you're going to sit alone for the rest of the year?
Starting point is 00:18:15 Bart asked. Everything here is built on teamwork and bonding. You'll have to get along with people sooner or later. I was tired and couldn't take anyone. or BS. I can get along with people. I just don't need to make friends with a poster child over there, I said, nodding my head in Luke's direction,
Starting point is 00:18:34 which seemed to remuse him. I bit a big bite out of my burger, which Bart took as an indication I was done with talking. He got up to walk away, but I stopped him. Bart, Can I call my mom? His face dropped. I'm sorry, but there's no phone calls here,
Starting point is 00:18:54 for anyone. Uncle John's rules, he said, shrugging. Uncle John? I sneered, finding the name not only hilarious, but downright creepy. Bart pointed over the man he was talking to earlier when we arrived. Uncle John waved to us, confirming that he had been watching us talk. He's the camp leader. Before any of my fellow cabin buddies came back from the mess hall,
Starting point is 00:19:26 I grabbed a hoodie from my drawer and went for a walk on the grounds. I made my way past the rows of cabins looking over at a couple of people sat around a fire I couldn't understand how everyone was so happy the matter of fact was that this was a prison I was angry and had so much rage bottled up inside of me
Starting point is 00:19:46 I just wanted to go home and move on from all my mistakes I walked out to the main camp past all the cabins into an area surrounded by trees the smell of damp wood that filled my sinuses were satisfying I suppose the fresh air was one advantage to being at the camp. I found myself wondering towards the lake. It was a big open space surrounded by more trees on either side
Starting point is 00:20:09 and the moonlight shined on its rippling surface. Occupied near the docks was some kayaking boats and oars and I wondered how long it would take me to kayak my way out of Stanley's side. I guessed I wouldn't make it far. They probably had security somewhere around here to stop us getting away. They just weren't making it obvious. It was peaceful to be alone without other people around, just a faint sound of crickets which soothed me. I walked further out onto the dock and took my shoes and socks off to rest my feet in the water.
Starting point is 00:20:40 It was ice cold, but it felt amazing. I was daydreaming for a while, just staring out into the lake, thinking about my mom and how much I let her down. I wanted to call her. I wanted to tell her I was sorry and that I never meant to hurt her. Then I remembered the way she looked during my sentence. Deep down, I knew she was done with me, even if she never said it. She didn't have to say it. I saw it.
Starting point is 00:21:10 My eyes welled up. I tried to fight it, but in the end, I let the tears come. My tears stopped at a halt when I witnessed something large, briefly rise to the surface of the lake, making an almighty splash from its impact. The heavy sound made me jump up. and put my feet out of the water in a flash. Whatever it was, it was just as quickly back below the surface. It was dark, and the moonlight only made the thing's silhouette more mysterious.
Starting point is 00:21:40 I briefly thought it might have been an alligator, but it seemed far too large, like it wasn't even exposing its whole exterior. I didn't even know if they had alligators around there, because I had no idea where I actually was. After my heart stopped pounding, I watched closely as the ripples in the water settled under the moon. My trance was broken when someone called my name. Brody?
Starting point is 00:22:04 Brody! I recognised the voice. It was Bart calling behind me. I turned around sheepishly. He looked angry and worried at the same time, even though it was dark and I could see the pink flush on his chunky cheeks. You can't be out here alone, ever. Did Luke not explain that to you?
Starting point is 00:22:24 I shrugged. He must have missed that part out. Bart shifted his heart. from me to the lake. Come on, let's get you back to your cabin. If you ever do this again, I'll have to ride you up. I jumped off the entrance to the docks, dodging the three tiny steps below.
Starting point is 00:22:42 So you're letting me off? How generous I've you, counsellor. But I grabbed my arm with a little more force than I liked. If it had been anyone else, I would have smacked them square in the face. He was even more flushed when he pulled me closer. I'm not missing around, Brody. Don't ever come out here alone.
Starting point is 00:22:59 ever again, do you understand me? Bart's insistence actually frightened me. His wide eyes looked over at the lake once more. Come on, let's go, he said, still holding a firm grip in my arm. We walked away from the lake in silence, and we stayed that way until he escorted me to the outside of my cabin. I went to open the door and stopped. Bart, are there alligators around here?
Starting point is 00:23:28 No, he said, shaking his head. Why? I saw something in the water. His face was only slightly pink now. It was probably just a big fish. Okay, I nodded. No, in full well it wasn't. But there was no use in trying to explain something I couldn't actually see.
Starting point is 00:23:51 But whatever it was, it didn't look... Natural. I knew it would only make him dismiss me. me or say I was imagining things. So, I just kept my mouth shut and turned to open the door to the cabin. Inside, Luke eyed me suspiciously. The other boy smiled my way and said hello. I gave them a quick small smile before I turned around one more time to say good night to Bart.
Starting point is 00:24:17 Good night, Brody, he said. I remained there until I closed the door. Despite my exhaustion, I couldn't sleep at all that night. I kept thinking about how I was going to cope with being away for a year and also what I saw in the lake. I couldn't get it out of my mind. And eventually, it became the only thing I could think about. It began to rain outside,
Starting point is 00:24:40 and the pitter-patter sound it made on the roof was comforting. It also drowned out the sound of Josh's snoring, one of the boys in my cabin. But soon the snoring stopped, and all six of us shot up in our beds. The sound that came from outside was like a loud horn, an air siren, an almighty repetitive roar. It was so clear and so loud that it felt like it was coming from just outside the door.
Starting point is 00:25:05 What the hell is that? I said, panting. Another boy called Rich went to answer me, but Luke spoke before he could. It's an escape, siren. Someone's tried to run away. They'll be gone in the morning, Josh said, which made Luke purse his lips. Josh looked away from Luke and shook his head before. placing it on the pillow. Pete and Ricky, the other two boys, followed his lead. It'll stop soon, Luke said to me, go back to sleep.
Starting point is 00:25:36 And then he turned on his side. I stayed, sat up, and listened until the sound finally faded out. My heart continued to pound moments later, and even if the boys were used to the sound, I couldn't help but notice that they all seemed terrified. Even Luke, though he was better at hiding it. I wished to be anywhere else in the world before I finally found sleep. Breakfast the next morning was unusually quiet, a far contrast from the night before at dinner.
Starting point is 00:26:07 I sat on the end of a bench and observed glum faces, occupied with their deep thoughts. I knew the looks in their faces. They were troubled or worried. Eventually, Uncle John stood before us all near the surfing station. I am going to call an assembly to address what you'll probably be. all already aware of. He began. Last night, Jessica sadly left us.
Starting point is 00:26:32 She was caught with contraband and had to be dealt with accordingly. We will all miss Jessica, but please, don't let her ignorance dampen our spirits. Dealt with accordingly, I thought. What did that even mean? I didn't have a chance to know who Jessica was. Whatever she was caught with must have been bad. Luke said the siren was for an escapee. something didn't add up.
Starting point is 00:26:58 It's a beautiful day, Uncle John continued. So let's embrace the beautiful weather. I want us to feel joy, express laughter and enjoy the rest of our day. Here, here, Luke shouted, banging his cutler in the table. Everyone else followed suit. Uncle John sat down with the counsellors in a brisk fashion. They all smiled at him as he did so. I briefly caught Bart's eyes,
Starting point is 00:27:23 and even though he was smiling, he eyed me cautiously. The volumes slowly went up amongst the campers until they were back to their old selves from the night before. It was like nothing had disturbed them and they weren't phased by this Jessica girl's absence anymore.
Starting point is 00:27:41 The whole thing felt off to me. I glanced over at Luke and wondered why he lied to me about Jessica. I'd been at Stanlyside for a week and started participating in the activities despite my initial reluctance. It turned out I was really good at painting
Starting point is 00:27:59 I started off slow by painting stupid things like fruit and then started painting trees in abstract colours It relaxed me and took my mind off of everything I still hadn't come round to the idea of the camp But I tried to make the most of my time and keep a low profile I also warned to pretty much everyone in my cabin Except for Luke One day we got into an altercation over my bed of all things
Starting point is 00:28:23 He came strutting him like he always did thinking he was the king of the cabin and demanded I make my bed. I'm sick to death of telling you, he said. That's funny, because I'm sick to death of hearing you tell me. He placed both his hands on his hips and towered over me. I'm serious. I told you how we need to keep our beds made, or there's consequences. I took this as a threat and stepped up to him.
Starting point is 00:28:49 Sure, I was a hell of a lot shorter than him, but I didn't find him intimidating just because he was praised as the golden child. Luke, if you really want to have a dig measuring contest, then come on, let's go, but I guarantee I'll win. All the other boys watched in anticipation. Josh even stood directly behind Luke with his arms folded, daring me to do something. Even if we had been getting along, it was easy to see where his loyalties lied. I moved even closer to Luke and tiptoed so my height nearly matched his. Your mess has an effect on all of us, Luke said, and my cabin is always spotless.
Starting point is 00:29:25 got it? If you really want to make the bed, then do it yourself, I said, then blew my kiss with my pout. This provoked him to snap and grab me in a headlock. I managed to tackle him to the ground
Starting point is 00:29:37 and went to punch him until the other boys got me off of him. No, you can't do that. Rich pleaded. Luke's right, just, please make your bed. Luke and I were both out of breath. He sat on the floor,
Starting point is 00:29:52 eyes in fury. Now, if I did my hand, no point in starting a war, over an unmade bed. Fine, I will, I said, continuing to hold my hand out. He pushed it away and got to his feet. Everyone, out!
Starting point is 00:30:07 Luke yelled in the direction of the other boys. I stayed putt as they left without question. You need to realize what's going on here, Brady. Look, I'm not here to step on anyone's shoes. I'm just here to do my time and leave. He laughed and shook his head. I don't want you to screw up our lives, just because you can't stay in.
Starting point is 00:30:26 line. Thanks for the concern, I said with a sly wink. But I'm hardly doing drugs behind the mess hall, am I? Luke got in my space this time. His eyes are on fire. If you carry on the way you are, leaving a mess everywhere you go, isolating yourself from everyone and cussing after every other word, you will be gone just as easily as if you were doing drugs.
Starting point is 00:30:49 Like Jessica, I asked, exactly. I watched his face relax and he went to leave without another word. Until I said, You said the siren was for risque a piece the night it went off. Luke didn't turn around. So? Jessica didn't run away. She was caught with contraband.
Starting point is 00:31:10 So why did they raise the siren? It's not a siren, he answered. What was it then? Luke's body suddenly started to quiver. You'll find out, he said. Then he left the cabin abruptly. A week later, I started to sit with my cabin buddies during meals. I was sat on the opposite end of the table, away from Luke, and we never conversed.
Starting point is 00:31:39 Pete was a talker, and didn't know when to shut up. It was like it was a broken record and kept talking about the same things he thought were funny, and they all laughed along. After the second or third time, it just got annoying. But I tried to reserve my usual sarcastic nature to show them, and Luke, I was making an effort. I didn't bother to quiz Luke any more about the siren, or whatever it was. It was clear we were never going to be best friends.
Starting point is 00:32:07 So, even if we did some other activities together, we went back to ignoring each other once we were in our cabin. I got bored of archery, playing baseball and painting every day. I decided I wanted to do something new. We were in the cabin one morning when I said, We want to go kayaking. It was like I just told Rich that someone had died. He started hyperventilating, and I thought he was having a heart attack.
Starting point is 00:32:33 The boys rushed over, and Luke met him at eye level. Rich, Rich, look at me, Luke said, pointing his fingers to his eyes. You don't have to go to the lake, okay? He was just a suggestion. Despite Luke's calming technique, Rich continued to panic, shaking his head. The eyes, Rich said, breathlessly. The eyes. My mouth was wide open. I looked at Josh in confusion, holding my hands up.
Starting point is 00:33:02 I'm sorry. I didn't know it was a trigger. To my surprise, Luke answered me, amicably. It's fine, don't worry. Rich is a fear of water. I kneel down next to Luke. I'm really sorry, Rich. I didn't know.
Starting point is 00:33:19 We can do something else, okay? His breathing started to slow down after a while. Sorry, guys. I don't know what came over me. It's fine, Luke said. Brody, why don't you show us how to paint today? The request came as a surprise. I saw it for what it was, an extension of his hand.
Starting point is 00:33:41 He wanted to start getting along. I'd love to, I said, and he smiled, genuinely for the first time. I hadn't thought about the leg much since the one and only night I went there. I remember that thing I saw and wondered if Richard or also seen it. Maybe that's why he was scared of the water. He said, the eyes. The eyes, like it wasn't the water itself he was scared of. But what might be in it? After dinner that night, Bart asked me if I wanted to go for a walk. We didn't talk much since you called me sitting by the lake. I agreed, and I thought it would be nice to get away from hearing one of Peter's repetitive
Starting point is 00:34:22 stories. The evening was cool and crisp, and it amazed me how the camp I found so alien when I first arrived became so normal to me. A group of people sang by the fire, and I actually found myself smiling at them. So far, I couldn't complain about Stanley's side. It really was a good place for reflection, and to do things I never in a million years would have done before. You've confirmed, Bart teased.
Starting point is 00:34:49 I saw that smile, Brody Jackson. he actually made me blush from the embarrassment of being caught. Well, it is exhausting being cynical every waking moment. I suppose I can let my guard down a little here, right? I'm glad you've made some friends. Even Luke, if I'm not mistaken. Hmm, I hummed. He's not so bad, I guess, even if he's a people-pleaser.
Starting point is 00:35:15 Well, I'm glad you've come round to him, Bart said. He's a good guy. I noticed Bart shivered. He was wearing nothing but a t-shirt and shorts. I knew he wouldn't fit him, because he was much broader and bigger than me. But I took off my hoodie and passed it to him. Here, I said. He looked surprised.
Starting point is 00:35:37 Look, Brody, I think you're a great guy, but... Dude, don't read too much into it. I said, I'm just offering you my hoodie. It's cold and I'm pretty warm, so just take it. He nodded and put it on, even though he'd tightened around his arms. We carried on walking down the rows of cabins Until the sound of someone blowing a conch blared through the entire camp My face dropped and everyone around us stood to attention
Starting point is 00:36:01 Campers came out of the cabins with dread written all over their faces I looked at Bart as he bit his lip and closed his eyes Follow me he said He started to walk away Wait Bart what is it? I said As people rushed past us in a hurry But I continued to bite his lip and considered me for a moment
Starting point is 00:36:23 before he turned and followed the crowd. I saw Luke running out of the mess hall and he spotted me. Josh, Ricky and Pete, followed behind him. Where's Rich? I asked. But they followed the herd without saying a word. Everyone was heading to the lake. When I arrived, all the campers,
Starting point is 00:36:45 the councillors and Uncle John stood on the mountain near the dock. Bart stood with his hands together, looking at his feet next to Uncle John. Everyone stood anxiously, awaiting Uncle John to speak as he walked at the top step of the dock and opened his arms out to us all. We provide an excellent environment here at Stanley Dale. All of you are lucky to be here. You're all lucky to have escaped a much worse fate.
Starting point is 00:37:09 And yet, some of you show your gratitude by deceiving us. The blood rushed to his face and a vein popped out of his neck. Gone was the enthusiastic leader, encouraging us. to bask in the joy of the day. What stood before us was a man striking us down, expressing his anger. He reminded me of a god, ready to cast down his infinite power.
Starting point is 00:37:33 Here, here! Bloop chanted, raising his fist in the air. The others followed. Even the counsellors. Even Bart, reluctantly it seemed. I didn't move. I just listened and took in the campers' reactions. One of your fellow campers
Starting point is 00:37:48 has lit you all down and shamed you all with his dissoning. seat. Uncle John continued. My heart sunk when he said he. The only person missing from the crowd was rich. He tried to deceive us, tried to run away from this little corner of paradise we created just so you can all redeem yourselves in an environment where you can forget the disgusting human beings you used to be. Uncle John's ramblings made by blood boil. I wanted to run from the crowd and hit him, knock some sense into him. His phone. demeanour shine through, and so did the demeanour of Stanley Dale in general.
Starting point is 00:38:26 It wasn't a reform facility or a prison. It was a cult, and everyone had been sucked in by it. Bart and the other councillors walked away briefly during Uncle John's speech, and returned after he finished. They were grabbing Rich forcefully by his biceps. He yelled and struggled. Please, no! I saw the terror in his face and wondered why nobody was doing anything, saying something.
Starting point is 00:38:51 Bart gritted his teeth the more rich struggled. At any moment, I thought he was going to swipe him across the face. I felt my feet ready to fly off the ground until Luke appeared next to me. We can't do anything, or it'll be us next. He whispered, Don't move. I shook my head. I'm not going to stand here and do nothing, I said.
Starting point is 00:39:16 They're going to hurt him. I went to march up to Uncle John, but Luke grabbed to my arm. and held me back. Bart glanced over at us, noticing the commotion. I glared back at him with utter hatred. How could he participate in this, I thought. It was all just an act, being Mr. Nice Guy. This public scrutiny was vile.
Starting point is 00:39:38 Poor Rich didn't deserve it. No one did. Richard, Uncle John began. You have broken your promise to become a better citizen of society. You have betrayed all of us. and for that you must face the consequences. You've ruined your chance, and now you must walk the dock.
Starting point is 00:40:00 Rich struggled even more and screamed hysterically as Bart and the counsellor dragged him up the dock looking out over the lake. Here, here! Luke bellowed again behind me and everyone followed his lead. I tried to run again, but Luke wrapped his arms around my stomach and tightened his squeeze.
Starting point is 00:40:18 He was ridiculously strong. You can't. save him. Rich was repeatedly pushed forward until he was at the end of the dock. He looked back at us all, a blubbering mess. My stomach ties in from the anxiety, which wasn't being helped by Luke's grip.
Starting point is 00:40:35 Bart and the other counsellor stood back as Rich coward. Uncle John stood patiently. I convinced myself they were going to push him in the lake, like it was on a plank in a pirate story or something. His biggest fear is water, I remembered. But then I thought about what I saw on my very first day.
Starting point is 00:40:53 It clicked. Luke, what the hell is in that lake? He didn't respond. He just tightened his grip even more, making me feel like I was going to puke. And then the sound came. The horrible air siren, that big, almighty roar,
Starting point is 00:41:11 and it deafened us all. Some of the campers looked away like it just hit them in the face. When it stopped, there was a momentary silence. Not a gasp or breath could be heard. And before my eyes, it erupted from the lake, erect, towering high above rich like a skyscraper. My eyes expanded. Every fear I've ever had hit me all at once,
Starting point is 00:41:34 like a cluster of stones. Before all of us was a dark, shiny-scaled, giant cobra, stretching out its diamond-shaped hood. Jesus, I managed to whisper. His blood-red eyes reflected in the moonlight with a menacing gaze as it expanded its jaw, and hissed its fork-like tongue, revealing two extremely long, extremely sharp fangs. Riches screamed deafened my eardrums as the giant servant crashed down on him. In the blink of an eye, and instantly, Riches screamed deafened my eardrums as the giant serpent crashed down on him in the blink of an eye, and instantly impaled him with his fangs. My mouth trembled. The rest of my body went numb.
Starting point is 00:42:17 I wanted to scream, but nothing came out. Everyone watched on, some in shock, others with no remorse. The black cobra slid its giant head off the dock back into the water. It took Rich's mangled body with it. Uncle John turned to us all, grinning with both arms out. The judgment has been cast. Here, here, everyone around me chanted before they started to scatter away and walked back to camp. Luke let go of me and followed them without saying a word.
Starting point is 00:42:50 I wiped away the tears that fell from my eyes, which Uncle John saw. He bowed his head like he just committed a good deed. I didn't look at Bart when he approached me. He opened his mouth and I was ready to go ballistic, but he decided not to say anything. I was the only one left standing as I looked at the ripples on the lake, trying to come to terms with what I had just witnessed. When I returned to the cabin, no one else was there. I couldn't even look at Rich's bed.
Starting point is 00:43:22 I went to sit on my own bed and noticed the hood I gave to Bart earlier was folded on the end of it. I threw it off my bed and kneeled on the floor, attempting to rip it to shreds until it gave my hands friction burn. The next day, I walked into the mess hall
Starting point is 00:43:39 and all action stopped. There was a silence from everyone. Uncle John waited with patience, Bart couldn't even look in my direction. They all stared at me and anticipated what I would say or do, but I just smiled brightly at Luke and his grim face. It's a beautiful day, isn't it? When I sat down, the laughter and joy resumed,
Starting point is 00:44:08 and echoed through the mess hall.

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