CreepsMcPasta Creepypasta Radio - "My Father Owned An Amusement Park" Creepypasta

Episode Date: January 18, 2021

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Starting point is 00:00:01 I've been having dreams about that summer. Persistent dreams. I can't fall asleep without seeing my dad's face. It's why I started seeing a therapist in the first place, because of those dreams. They always start when I first saw the theme park. We're in his office. I must have been sad because he claps me at the back and says, There's no reason to cry, no reason at all.
Starting point is 00:00:25 His voice scratches at my ears, that I remember. There's little I remember of my father. He says that has something to do with the trauma, but I don't think so. He was quiet when I was young and absent when I was older. That did more to cover him up than anything he did. But he did a lot of things. My dad owned the theme park. He built it.
Starting point is 00:00:49 He bought some old farms property and built a roller coaster on it. I don't know whether it was the divorce that caused it or it caused the divorce. It's not like I can ask. He wasn't even planning and even selling to it. tickets to the place at first. My dad was never particularly stable. My mom got full custody for the first few years after the divorce and he moved halfway across the country as soon as the papers were filed. That's where he built it. They negotiated terms when I was about 11. I would stay with him during the summers, but I stayed at my old school. That always made sense to me. Summer was peak season.
Starting point is 00:01:27 He built the roller coaster first. I remember that. He hired a bunch of contractors, painted it green, and then called it Nessie. That thing broke down three times a week, I swear to God. I can't believe they even let us keep it running. That thing was a death trap. Then came the carnival games. Those types of things with water guns and two small hoops. He hired a couple of townies to do that to man the stands too.
Starting point is 00:01:56 It's been a while, a long while. I'm sorry if I don't get everything right. It all blew up from there. We had more attractions when I was 17. There were bumper cars themed like a circus, with elephants and clowns and chipped paint. Those were always popular. His favourite was the Tunnel of Love.
Starting point is 00:02:17 I don't think we ever got more than six people to ride on that a day. I guess I should say why I said we. My dad, even though he was very well off, was a cheap geyser. Or maybe he was trying to get closer to me. I don't know. I don't know a lot about my dad looking back. Whatever it was, he made me work there through the summer. He never left that park, I swear.
Starting point is 00:02:42 He would just hand me the keys to his place and then say he'd get back when he could. He always came home at one in the morning and left at five. He always went back to the park, setting everything up, doing paperwork. I was 17 when it happened. I had already decided by then. By the time I left that place and turned 18,
Starting point is 00:03:03 I would never look back. I hated that damn theme park. I hated it so much. It was all he could talk about too. He always said this place had a history, even though he built it ten years before. That summer, I was mainly running the bumper cars and the coaster, as my dad squirled himself in an office at the edge of the property.
Starting point is 00:03:24 I know everyone who worked there that summer. There weren't ever more than 20 in the best of years, but that year we had 13. I was the only one from out of town. Everyone else was from the surrounding area. Townies, my dad called them, as if he hadn't been a history professor 11 years earlier.
Starting point is 00:03:44 There were about five of us that always hung out and messed around. There was Chuck, who went to the college nearby and needed extra cash. There was Landon, a year older than me, who was always the odd man out,
Starting point is 00:03:55 with his black-died hair and metal t-shirts, and who he knew nothing about. We always joked with increasingly unconvincing tales about his family, life. There was Sarah who worked there since I did, but legally, so she was 22 at least. Then there was Lucy.
Starting point is 00:04:12 This was her first year at the park, and I was crushing on her hard. I could barely get a sentence finished around her. It was almost sad, really, how much I fell for this girl within the first week. Chuck and Sarah teased me mercilessly.
Starting point is 00:04:26 I can't remember her voice. It's crazy what you forget. It's like a silent movie when I think about her. but I know she had a pretty voice. God, I don't know what she's doing now. I hope she's all right. I know we never talked after that summer. How could we really?
Starting point is 00:04:44 How could anyone? I'm really getting ahead of myself again. Every time I tried to tell this story, I just jumped to the end. What else am I supposed to jump to? I shouldn't, I know. Lee says that doesn't help with the sessions, but it makes me, quote, relive the trauma without contextualizing it. That just sounds like a bunch of BS to me.
Starting point is 00:05:08 I remember that summer a lot when I actually tried to think about it. I can remember the way the paint peeled off the sign. I can remember the way that one bumper car, Red 3, kept breaking down because a couple of kids managed to slam it against the wall at full force. I can remember the day the first kid disappeared. It was bright and sunny. The place was overrun with locals. I was leaning against the control panel for the coaster.
Starting point is 00:05:34 as some guy bathed up his cotton candy a couple feet left of me. She came up to me, crying. God, she was crying. She wasn't worried or angry or scared. She was already distraught. Did she know somehow? Did she figure it out? She ran up to me and screamed about some lost kid.
Starting point is 00:05:56 I called it in on my walkie-talkie. Chuck made some joke about it, which she heard and started crying louder about. Not here, he says. I checked with Andrew, who's manning our customer relations desk, which is our BS name for a help kiosk. Not here, he says. I check with Sarah on the bumper cars, see if they have any kids running around there.
Starting point is 00:06:17 Not here, she says. I check around concessions. Not there. I check around walkie-talkies for another five minutes before we do a search. It takes an hour before we call the cops. My dad shut down the park early that day. to help the investigation, he said. I can remember how he said it,
Starting point is 00:06:38 and I can smell the whiskey on his breath. The police searched for three hours, in the park and the woods around, as this mother's wailing the whole time. I can remember how that sounds. It's stuck in my head. I don't think I'll ever forget it. They called off the search of midnight, I heard.
Starting point is 00:06:58 They say they'll fully search the woods in the morning. My dad came home on time that night, He slept soundly. The police do it again in the morning, with less effort, but they don't find him. Nobody ever saw that kid again. It's a sad thing, sure, but that's happened before. Sometimes people disappear. It's sad, but you keep on going.
Starting point is 00:07:24 The next three weeks passed in a flash. I remember the energy of the place afterward. All of us were shaken up by it, but Lucy was definitely the worst off of all of of us. She'd never really done that sort of stuff before, and all this missing kid stuff messed with her bad. I remember Chuck making a joke about it, and then she left in a half. Must have been 30 out. We were closing up for the night. It was the first time we really talked. We had made jokes or whatever, but that's when we actually started to trust each other. We started dating a week later. I don't remember how it started, but I knew I was happy.
Starting point is 00:08:03 brief moment. I had a normal summer. The second kid disappeared not long after that. It was a dad this time. A single father worried out of his mind. Thomas Earhart. I remember seeing the kid getting cock and candy and then running around. I saw a lot of kids around there, but I remember him. Red hair, glasses, teeth missing from his mouth. I don't know why I remember that kid. Memory is a strange thing and sometimes it picks up on only the least important stuff. That time, it caught him. I was watching him. I know that.
Starting point is 00:08:42 Something about him struck me. I guess it's sort of an intuition. He vanished into that crowd. Thomas Earhart. I remember his name, even now. I remember the picture the cop showed me. That same kid smiling, happy, with a family. There were two sisters, two parents.
Starting point is 00:09:02 They were so happy. God. They were so damn happy. He was never seen again. He vanished into that crowd, screaming, laughing. And then we never saw him again. It was the same routine. We searched for an hour, and then the police were called, and then nothing.
Starting point is 00:09:24 They took our statements and then found nothing. They always say I had the problem of not seeing it sooner, but the cops had the same information I did. They knew what I knew. They did nothing. I'm getting out of order. I jumped to the end, but I know I don't want to go there. Not yet.
Starting point is 00:09:45 After Thomas disappeared, I was reassigned. I had been working on bumper cars for the past two weeks, but I got reassigned. My dad put Chuck on the bumper cars because he caught me smoking outside the back of the park. He always hated me smoking, called it morally abhorrent, that it would tear up my lungs. They were his cigarette. He reassigned me to the tunnel of love because he knew I hated it.
Starting point is 00:10:12 I was overjoyed. Lucy was working just next door. Every second I wasn't watching the tunnel, I would let the controls go an autopilot and then flirt with her. Of course, when it didn't break down. That thing broke down every damn day, even when it couldn't have had more than a dozen people going on it a day.
Starting point is 00:10:31 I guess I should explain the ride. just a little bit. It was a dark ride, a slow meandering trot through the world of love, whatever kitchy BS that is. There was this disgusting river water below the boats as the boats moved from room to room so you could admire the scenery.
Starting point is 00:10:51 It was never my thing. I don't think it was anyone's thing. It just was. My dad had to have put a lot of money into it. There were dioramas and little paintings on the walls and a second track to put the, the boat's home for maintenance. That second track was really just the tunnel
Starting point is 00:11:08 into a storage area, a couple of dilapidated props, and some crap he bought from a garage sale. And then, there were the animatronics. I hated those animatronics. Big cartoon animals, pink and with hearts everywhere.
Starting point is 00:11:24 There were teddy bears and chickens and all these animals with eyes that were too damn big. They gave kids nightmares whenever they went on it, and couples who were the only consistent group to go it never came back after they saw those things. I told my dad to take them out so many times, just let it be a dark ride,
Starting point is 00:11:41 but he couldn't let that happen. My dad was a mess at home and in his office, but he obsessed over the tunnel. He couldn't do anything but think about that thing. That's why it reeked of cleaning supplies. He was cleaning it every single day whenever it was closed, even as someone dipped from one room of the ride to another. This was his small world,
Starting point is 00:12:03 and he wasn't going to let me ruin that. He was something compulsive. We knew that. He had been like that around certain rooms of the house before the divorce. I worked on that ride for the rest of the summer. It was supposed to be completely normal, even as those kids disappeared. We had something bad like that before, but never together. The police kept looking, but an officer on the premises wasn't a common sight anymore.
Starting point is 00:12:30 They told us that they believed it was just a random chance that the police. These two got lost in the same time, told us to keep a lookout. That was supposed to be it. I began thinking of getting out of there again. I told myself I'd work another year, maybe move out here, even though I hated the place, because Lucy and I were starting to seem somewhat serious, even though it had only been a month and a half. You were kids. Everything seemed like it would last forever.
Starting point is 00:12:59 The third kid disappeared at the end of June. A girl. Her name was Charlotte. I remember all of their names. The police swore on the place, and then we had to shut down the park. My dad hated that. He was a cheap geyser, and losing a whole day, even to this, seeing like the loss of the century. That was the first time I saw Detective Green.
Starting point is 00:13:24 I'll call him that, because his name was kind of like that. Big bald guy, probably around £300, £600, £6.4.3. My dad was dwarfed by him. Detective Green told us that there was an active investigation. Landon, the weirdo, had a cousin on the force. He was the one who told me that they thought it was somebody who did it. Three kids disappearing within two months wasn't a coincidence. That made my stomach sink.
Starting point is 00:13:52 Even though I hated the place, I still felt a little bad for my dad. He put his whole life in this place and if they shut it down, a week with a low overhead could kill the place. I know that probably wasn't what I should have first thought of. Those were kids. They vanished, disappeared. I still think of Tom's first, red hair, glasses, disappearing into the crowd. He seemed invincible, running around, and I couldn't imagine someone wanting to hurt that kid.
Starting point is 00:14:20 I couldn't comprehend it, that any of these people, wondering through the park, could have done it. Hundreds of strangers, hundreds of suspects. The whole thing scared me, even though I wouldn't have admitted it. it. We were all pretty messed up about it. Lucy especially. Everyone. Except Landon. Landon had always been weird. Loved true crime, horror movies, anything scary. He was a year or two older than me. Went to the university nearby, I think. We barely talked to him, I'll be honest, because London always creeped me out. He was a friend, I guess, but I knew we talked smack about him a lot. We were kids. I feel awful about how we treated him. We knew better. At least we should
Starting point is 00:15:08 have. Landon was never waited out by all these disappearances, even as much as we were. I'll never forget what he told me when talking about it one day. It was bound to happen some time, he said. I never liked talking to Landon. Police swarm the place after they shut it down. We still worked there some days, but they shut it down to any public presence. They didn't want to contaminate the evidence or whatever, but they had no proof that the kids were anywhere on the property. The woods outside the park were just short of being a state park. The rangers were looking for those kids day and night, and having an officer in the park wouldn't have done anything. I wonder if Detective Green did that for a reason.
Starting point is 00:15:53 I have no real clue what went on in that guy's head, not even now. All I know is that he weirded me out. A lot of things weirded me out. Maybe it was just the circumstances, but green would always look at me like I was a monster. We worked in the park, just checking and rides, making sure everything was functional. That was the only concession my dad could ring out to the cops. If the park rides broke down while closed, and we didn't get to them until reopening, we'd be screwed. That I was all right with. I needed that check. Moving out of my mom's house was never going to be cheap. That's funny.
Starting point is 00:16:32 I was always focused on the future those days. And now. I can't stop thinking about the past. They promised they'd reopen the park after two weeks
Starting point is 00:16:48 if they didn't find anything. They'd check that place from head to toe. The roller coaster, the bumper cars, the backshed, the offices, even taking a glance
Starting point is 00:16:57 to the tunnel of love. But they didn't find a thing, not a shred. The police department shifted to what's coming through the forests, but everyone in the town knew they had messed up. If they had focused on the forest in the first place, then those kids wouldn't have had more time to fall into caverns or vanish into the woods.
Starting point is 00:17:15 Three kids disappearing, and ran the same time, in a theme park, is a horrific coincidence, we said. We were trying to rationalise it because we couldn't believe that someone could have taken those kids. I remember all five of us hanging out, smoking outside of a convenience store, way past midnight. It was the hottest August night I can remember. My dad would have been either asleep or at work by then. Either way, he wouldn't have noticed I was gone. We were dumb kids.
Starting point is 00:17:45 I remember that. We thought the world was going to be ours, and that seems so realistic. I thought I was going to make myself something. That summer killed a lot of things in me. Lucy always made me feel like everything was going to be all right. That's why I liked her at first. She kept me at ease. We were smoking in the parking lot
Starting point is 00:18:04 talking about how the police messed this up. Three kids. Three kids missing. I don't remember who said it, but someone got the idea we should go into the theme park, do some detective work ourselves. Maybe it was just because we were stoned out of our minds,
Starting point is 00:18:20 but it seemed like a good idea. At least to half of us. Landon thought it was stupid, ran off, and Sarah had no interest in skulking around that place any more at night than she did at day. That left Chuck. me and Lucy, but she barely wanted to go. The place looked so much worse.
Starting point is 00:18:40 In the day, it was charming and a bit rickety, but at night, all the wrong things stood out. The shadows of the coaster were silhouetted black against the dark blue sky. The only thing lit was the do not enter sign, a little hint of brightness among the night. The whole thing gave me the creeps. I didn't let myself show it.
Starting point is 00:19:01 Chuck turned back as soon as we had come, leaving the two of us. Screw this, he said. We should have followed him away. I fished the flashlight from my glove compartment and flicked it on, bathing the fence in the flickering light. I remember that too. I remember the way the light glittered off the fence shining in the night. We tried to push the gate open, but my dad had locked it with a chain.
Starting point is 00:19:26 He didn't want anyone to get in. I navigated around the fence, searching for a hole in the place. Lucy told me to give it up, but I kept urging her forward. This bug of doing this is too scared to get anyone besides kids. I was an asshole back then. It took me about 15 minutes before we found a hole in the mesh.
Starting point is 00:19:47 I could barely fit through. Even though I wasn't the tallest, Lucy followed in after me, clutching at my arm. She was shivering in the heat. We took to the bumper cars first. Their shadows were massive with a flashlight. drenched on the walls in dark. All the magic, the bare hint of it my father had managed to accumulate,
Starting point is 00:20:07 vanished in the harsh shadows and light of the night. My teeth began to chatter when I remembered the girl, Charlotte. She had vanished around the bumper cars. We continued walking, but I stopped talking. Lucy was right about this, I realised then. I never should have gone there. We went to the darts next, then the concessions. Lucy saw a rat by the cotton candy and screamed to high heaven.
Starting point is 00:20:35 We went to the roller coaster, but that had been shut down for repairs a week earlier. Everything was always breaking down. Everything. They were patchwork reconstruction, barely able to continue going. I don't think my dad spent more than a penny on that place looking back. It's like he wanted it all to end with an accident. We wondered throughout the whole park, ducking under cobwebs and searching into the corners my dad wouldn't want us to go.
Starting point is 00:21:02 We looked through his office, this short, fat building, that we could see the rest of the park, hidden next of the log flume. The door was locked, but if you'd jiggle the window, just right, you could get it open. I'd done that a dozen times
Starting point is 00:21:15 there's still run from his cabinet. It was covered with papers, head to toe. It looked like the place had been ripped apart. If the police really had investigated thoroughly, maybe that was their work. Detective Green had probably read every single document in here. The place looked like a tornado had gone through. We got out of there,
Starting point is 00:21:36 quick. I didn't want to linger and leave a trace. My dad was methodical. My stomach twisted up as soon as we got back outside, as soon as I noticed it. Do you smell that? she had said, and I can still see her there, standing in the night. The wind was blowing from the north end of the park. Bleach. I started walking towards the tunnel of love, not even thinking about what I was doing. Everything goes in slow motion as I look back on it. It feels like it took an eternity to walk from my dad's office to the tunnel. I told myself there was nothing to fear. Nothing had gone wrong.
Starting point is 00:22:18 It didn't stop my stomach from twisting up further. I was never that good of a liar, not even to myself. In the day, it had been kitchy, maybe a bit rickety. but it looked haunted in the middle of the night. The smell of bleach overtook me. It couldn't have been that long since it was sprayed, minutes even. It could have been minutes since my father put another spray of disaffectant in there,
Starting point is 00:22:43 and I still think of that all these years later. What if he had seen me? What would he say? What would he do? We stalked inside, moving as slowly as we could. We were afraid because it hit us then. We made us realize what tree. truly could have been happening.
Starting point is 00:23:01 The place was horrifically dark and it felt like my flashlight was barely peeking through it. I fumbled for the power switch right under the main console. It was a great, big lever and I yanked it down, making the whole place a light.
Starting point is 00:23:15 We were supposed to be stealthy, of course, but I didn't even think of it as I turned the switch on. We rarely pulled the full lights on in the tunnel. Usually we do a lesser rig. A couple lights to instill a romantic atmosphere.
Starting point is 00:23:31 The place would be lit in purples and pinks, bright Valentine's colours. It hid all the dirty parts, the holes in the wall, the dirty water. The place was drenched in that hideous light as soon as we pull the lever. I'd never seen it like this for long. The wallpaper was old and faded,
Starting point is 00:23:49 ripped apart at the edges. All of it covered in hearts and mould. Cupid looked rotten. The carts began moving through the unclean sludge of the water, filled with sick and stale water, missing its weekly cleaning, turning brownish in the fluorescence. The river smelled like sewage. Everything else smelled like bleach. The walls, the floor, the air, everything.
Starting point is 00:24:13 We had to cough to get through the stench. She asked me to head back then, to turn the lights off. She didn't want to venture any further, but I didn't let her. We have to find out, I'd said, but I don't think I really knew then. What I could have found. I don't think I ever had a chance. I got in one of the boats, careful not to get any of the water on me.
Starting point is 00:24:37 Lucy followed, more out of duty than any want. The boats began to move, sluggishly through the muck. I could hear it creak. No cute music to hide it. I could hear Lucy start to breathe heavier as the boat moved further and further along the track, the scent growing ever stronger. I don't think my hair was even on end.
Starting point is 00:24:57 I wasn't brave. I just didn't understand what was happening. I hadn't figured out what the smell under the bleach, under the mess, was. It was some mystery scent, something I couldn't quite place, deep and slightly fruity. I know it now.
Starting point is 00:25:14 I know it like I know the back of my hand. Everything seemed a lot clearer, with fluorescence on full blast. The hearts and the cupids were scattered around the ceiling. I could see now with the cupids with little baby dolls he'd attached cardboard wings to. We moved further.
Starting point is 00:25:31 The music started up then, which I know made both of us jump. The smell of bleach got stronger as we moved further and further. I clutch the flashlight. She was talking to me then, telling me we should turn back or something. I wasn't paying attention.
Starting point is 00:25:47 All I did was stare forward as the boat slowly moved ever onwards. I wasn't thinking. I couldn't figure out what was going on. Even now, is hard to put it all together. The image is flash and swap and all I know is that we're getting
Starting point is 00:26:03 closer. As I write this, I can see us there, trapped in that damn boat, waiting for it all to end. Because I know where it ends. I know what happens next. I've been having this nightmare for months, years maybe.
Starting point is 00:26:19 I always dreamt about this moment, sitting in the boat, knowing what happens next. Sometimes Luce is there, sometimes not. Sometimes it's my dad sitting in the seat next to me, and no matter how loud I yell, you can never hear me. I always wake up before we get there. It feels like a century before we finally made it to the animatronics. I say that, but they didn't move.
Starting point is 00:26:45 They were big dolls standing still as preset music began to play. They seemed so different in the normal light than they did in the pink one. The cartooning faces seemed closer to plastic. The heads are plastic And the bodies are some sort of plush suit I'd never really looked at them closely My dad had always said that it was too dangerous The step near them
Starting point is 00:27:05 To let the professionals handle it What if I had looked early enough What if I'd seen what he had done They were plastic and fluff But they rigged of bleach and the scent beneath I wanted to run really I wanted to get out of there as soon as possible Because every bit of me told me
Starting point is 00:27:24 This was wrong but instead I stepped off the boat and onto the side of the ride where the animatronics, the mannequins, stood so still. I wanted to vomit as I edged closer. Lucy was yelling now, telling me to get back in the boat, but I didn't listen. I moved to the mannequin, a pink bear whose eyes were glittered blue and whose paint had been chipped off,
Starting point is 00:27:48 and I pulled off the plastic head. The real one beneath almost came off with it. The face had rotted like a pumpkin, melting and greying as the innards came pouring out. I could barely tell that it was a human face, but I could make out the barest pieces, the red hair, the glasses. I could make out Thomas, the boy I'd seen in the posters and in the park who had vanished into the crowd. The next few hours were a blur. I have no memory of leaving the tunnel, going through the park or calling the police. It took them a day to arrest my dad.
Starting point is 00:28:25 and a month for them to try him. I went home to live with my mom after that, and I never came back to that town. I never came back to that amusement park. I don't think I ever could have. All I think about when I look up that place, read about it, or think of it, is what those families could have had,
Starting point is 00:28:44 what those families could have had if my father hadn't taken it away from them. Every time I think of it, in the end, I get out of sync. I get back to the beginning of the dream, Back when I was 11 years old, when my dad first told me to the park. But I wasn't sad. No, I wasn't.
Starting point is 00:29:03 How could I be, with my father owning a theme park? I was so happy. Everything's staying with it now. I can't think of my dad without thinking of what he did. But I was so happy then. He took me across the park and there's this one sentence that really stuck with me then. There's no reason to cry. No reason at all.
Starting point is 00:29:25 He clapped into the back, looked over the park, still halfway in construction, and smiled. I realised now he wasn't talking to me. He was looking dead on, right out the window of his office, straight out the tunnel of love.

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