CreepsMcPasta Creepypasta Radio - "The Thing in the Elevator Shaft" Creepypasta
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At the end of a long bartending shift, I caught the concierge standing on a chair inside the elevator,
opening the trap door on the ceiling and tossing raw meat through it.
He had no idea I was watching.
I'd gone to the basement to change a keg inside the big cooler,
and I guess he walked right past without noticing.
It freaked me out a little, so I ducked back in and waited until I felt he had gone.
Was he using poisoned meat to exterminate rats?
This old place had been built 100 years ago
I'd never seen any rats
But maybe this was the reason why
The Hotel Louise
Once luxurious
Had become run down in recent decades
Its rooms turned into cheap apartments
Hoping Pete the concierge had left
I poked my head out
No sign of him
The closed elevator still sat on the basement floor
I guess Peter decided to take the stairs
Good idea
I judged the stairs myself to the fifth floor
where I rented a room in the 30-story tower
Everything inside my room belonged to the hotel
Except what few clothes I had
And what little food I kept
Drifting into the city a few months without a plan
And still in shock from my wife's recent death
I took a job bartending at La Bar de Luis
On the first floor
At once elegant, now aging dive of warped pine floors
And graffiti scratched tables
The place didn't do much business
and before long I was the only bartender.
The kitchen only had one cook, Rodrigo,
so if you wanted something to eat, he had to be working.
Likewise, if you wanted something to drink,
I had to be behind the bar,
which I usually was.
I had nothing else to do.
In the morning, I got back in the elevator to head down to open the bar.
I was met by my only friend in the building,
Lindsay, a seven-year-old girl who lived across from me.
"'Good day, Mr. Bartender,' she said from under an oversized ship captain's hat.
"'What floor will it be?'
"'The usual,' I replied, and take the long way.'
She giggled, a running joke between us.
She knew I was in no hurry to get to work.
Lindsay had short, dark hair that curled to her shoulders,
a pixie face and a fearless, inquisitive personality.
She seemed like the only fully alive creature in this dusty old place.
She liked to pretend the elevator was a ship and could take her anywhere.
No one minded, except of course Pete, the besnickety concierge who chased her off whenever he caught her.
She hid behind the control panel as we reached the ground floor so Pete wouldn't catch her.
I glanced up at a large trapdoor on the ceiling.
Had I really seen Pete throw raw meat up there?
Pete always took steaks from the kitchen at the end of the night,
but I'd assumed he cooked them at home for a late night's supper.
Thanks for riding the Lindsay shuttle, the girl whispered as the door opened to the lobby.
Hope you enjoy the trip.
As always, I replied, slipping a folded dollar bill into a hand.
It didn't take long for Pete to spot me.
His face screwed with worry over the headaches of running the place,
which he did do, concierge being an outdated title for his job.
I worried over whether he'd seen me last night, but if so, he didn't let on.
If it's not too much trouble, he sneered, there are customers awaiting your service.
I nodded, and good morning to you, Fussy Pants.
Pete was in his 50s, not a hair out of place, his clothing as nearly pressed as that of a West Point officer.
And, I knew by customers, he meant Mrs. Downing, an old widow who had about as much life outside
this place as me and Pete did.
Every morning she waited for me to open.
If I started opening at 10 instead of 11, she'd no doubt be waiting at 9.30 instead of 10.30.
I poured her a draft, adding a splash of tomato juice and a shot of bourbon and a glass on the side.
Halfway through the beer, maybe an hour from now if she was feeling rowdy, she'd down the shot with a grimace.
While making small talk with Mrs. Downing, I set up the bar for the day.
Nothing much different ever happened around here.
Every day, Groundhog Day.
until I saw a team of medics hurrying through the lobby.
I hurried from the bar to follow.
I found Pete slumped over in a chair by the elevator.
A couple of residents huddled nervously around him.
A short time later they took him out on a stretcher.
In some pain, he looked for me, trying to tell me something, finally spitting it out.
On my desk, there's a bag.
The old man's medicine.
Then they took him away.
We learned a while later that his appendix had burst, but that they had gotten it in time,
and he'd only be at the hospital about a week.
As much as I couldn't stand up the stuck-up dick, his loss was immediately felt.
Now it fell on me to order the liquor, and Rodrigo, whose only English consisted of a handful of curses,
had to order the food.
Packages for residents immediately began piling up in the lobby,
maids began milling around chatting, and the janitors loitered smoking joints in the alley by
the dumpster. A few hours after they'd taken poor Pete, I remembered about the medicine and found
the paper pharmacy bag on his desk. So, I was finally going to meet the old man. The old man
occupied the top floor and no one ever saw or heard from him other than Pete. The old man
owned the building and supposedly never left it. It'd been up on the presidential suite as long
as anyone who could remember, including Mrs. Downing, who had been here since Kennedy was in the White
else. I left Mrs. Downing in charge of the bar, which simply meant if anyone happened to show
up, she would tell them I'll be back in ten minutes. While waiting for the elevator, I glanced
inside the bag. Inside was a small vial, marked with the word I couldn't pronounce, alongside one
I could. Anti-venom. Okay then. Lindsay again piloted the elevator.
Where to, Mr. Bartender? Five, so you can get off.
Lindsay's young brain worked fast
And seen the pharmacy bag in my hand
She understood
A voice and excited whisper
You're going to see the old man
I nodded
Can I come? Please
I want to know what he looks like
You know it's not allowed Lindsay
Come on I'll stay in the elevator
I don't make the rules captain
But I promise to tell you everything in the way back down
That satisfied her
She got off on our floor
where I knew she would wait, watching the old dial above the elevator door.
When the elevator began speeding up again, my nerves became jittery.
The old man.
Only Pete knew everything about him, and Pete wasn't much for chatting.
The elevator didn't even go to the top floors unless the old man released it, and Lindsay had sure tried.
Of course, I did know one thing about him now.
For some reason, he needed anti-venom.
The elevator stopped on the 29th floor, but the door didn't open.
It just sat there for what felt like an internable long time.
Not knowing what else to do, I hit the top floor number on the console again.
A frail voice came through the speaker.
Pete?
No, sir.
Pete's in the hospital.
I work in the bar.
I have your medicine, sir.
The elevator started rising again.
Another long moment passed.
then the door opened into a massive room, dimly lit like a forest dripping with blue moonlight.
I stepped out into what I now call the silver suite, an ornate palace adorned everywhere with silver,
but apparently inhabited by a hoarder.
My description won't do it justice.
Silver curtains that allowed practically no light from outside, silver chandeliers, antique wooden tables,
mounted with silver bowls, tea pots and vases, piled on the floor,
around it all was stacks of newspapers blurting headlines from decades ago.
I took a few hesitant steps into the silver suite.
My eye soon went to a long silver tub which had steam rising from it.
Adjacent the tub, with its back to it, sat the only chair in the room.
My skin crawled.
I wanted no part in anything near that tub.
Guessing someone might be listening, I cleared my throat and spoke.
into the empty room.
I'll just
leave this on the floor, sir.
I voice cracked over a speaker.
Sit, young man.
Sit in the chair.
I hedged over to that chair
beside the tub.
In the dim light and under the hot steam,
the bath water was dark,
but I could see enough to realize
nothing was inside it.
Sitting down on the chair,
my back to the tub,
I looked around.
I crossed the room.
I noticed what looked like large, dried skins, the color of charcoal hanging on silver hooks
along the wall.
What animal I couldn't tell from here.
The lights began to dim even more until the room reached a level of silver twilight right
before full night.
Then I heard water stirring behind me.
Glancing again at the tub, I noticed now that it actually extended through the wall into
the adjacent room, and someone was now sliding onto the water under a table.
side. A lump formed in my throat, but I quickly turned straight forward, sensing whoever was
entering, presumably the old man, didn't want to be seen. Shivering, I irrationally worried
he might reach out from the water and touch me from behind. A gravely whisper came from behind me.
Pete is not well. Appendicitis, I replied, he will be at the hospital for some days.
afraid to look over my shoulder
I sought out reflections in the various silver bowls and teapots on the tables
and made out sitting in the tub
a figure so drenched in shadow
that I could see nothing but silhouette
You run the bar
The old voice said
Pete approves of you
So I wanted to see you for myself
If anything should happen to Pete
I would need a replacement
I wanted no part of that job.
In fact, already I was thinking it might be time to start planning another bus ride, another beginning, maybe Pittsburgh.
My skin is very sensitive, the old man said.
But you mustn't think of me a monster.
I'm just old and peculiar.
Pete, no doubt, felt uncomfortable at first too.
Well, I'm not one for prying, sir.
Excellent. We might work very well together.
Like Pete, you would be richly rewarded.
I felt the water staring again.
In the reflection on the teapot, I caught sight of a frivolously long,
slender hand emerging from the tub and enfolding by an old big troller record player.
Did the teapot distort the image?
Those fingers seemed impossibly long, as though they might have four or five joints.
It had to be a trick of the reflexion.
A moment later, soft jazz came from the record player.
A man like me, he said, it depends on a handful of others, but can trust so few.
Are you trustworthy?
I thought of my poor wife dying, who I had stayed with to the very end,
before I panicked and fled, leaving her to take her last breaths alone.
I tried to be, I told the old man.
but I've also failed.
A good answer, the old man squealed.
None of us are perfect.
Compromises must be made in order to live.
Remember that.
Next time we shall visit longer.
Leave the medicine on the seat.
Without hesitation, I hurried to my feet,
without turning toward the tub,
placed a bag in the chair.
I walked back to the elevator on legs like a shaky stool,
Have a good day, sir, I said, punching the down button.
But I had to wait for the elevator to return.
While I did, I finally turned back to look directly at the tub,
but the old man was no longer on this side of the wall.
A ding sounded the elevator's opening doors,
and I hopped in, pressing the ground floor button about eight times,
as if it would make it go faster.
I didn't start breathing again until the door closed,
and the elevator was on its way down.
Of course, it stopped at the fifth floor first.
Lindsay.
Jumping on board, she demanded answers.
Did you see him? What was he like?
What is the top floor like?
Before I could attempt to reply,
the elevator ground to a sudden halt between floors.
The lights flickering.
The car rattled and creaked.
Remembering Pete's weird actions last night,
I looked up nervously at the unusually large trap door.
Lindsay looked scared at first, then recovered, saying,
Don't worry, sir, we'll have this fixed in a jiffy.
But her eyes went to the ceiling too.
A sound came from above, something like pattering feet.
Then the elevator started moving again.
We both exiled.
Well, she asked as the door opened on the lobby.
We'll talk later, Captain.
Right now, I have to find out how to get this elevator checked out.
In the meantime, you stay off it.
She crossed her arms defiantly.
Don't you know, a captain never abandons her ship.
Consider it shore leave, I said, hurrying through the lobby.
What's that?
Just stay off the elevator.
I'd only spoken to her mom a few times,
but the situation was very troubled.
A single mother, two other kids beside Lindsay,
a baby and a toddler.
Word was the mom had a monkey on her back.
which I suspected had something to do with a girl
spending so much time hanging around the old place.
I swept into Pete's office for his list of services,
plumbing HVAC, electrical, a long list,
but nothing with the elevator.
I stormed off to the bar
when naturally only Mrs. Downing waited.
I topped off a beer, asking,
I've been looking through Pete's contacts
and I can't find anything for elevator repair.
Her face went dark.
She actually looked frightened.
Can't it wait till he comes back?
No, I explained.
I just got stuck for a few seconds coming down.
Trust me, she warned.
You don't want to get them involved
if you don't absolutely have to.
She made them sound like a secret police or something.
Are we talking about the same thing?
She leaned over, glancing nervously around
as they're worried someone might be listening.
My advice is don't call them,
but if you do, let me know so I won't be around.
She stared uncomfortably into her beer
as though wishing I'd never brought it up.
This is ridiculous, I thought,
grabbing the phone book and looking through the yellow pages.
But Rodrigo, who at some point had come from the kitchen
and stood behind me, shook his head.
What? I asked.
You not call them.
The look on his face became so grave
that I closed the phone book, deciding he could wait.
The rest of the day was uneventful.
Here and there someone came in for a drink.
Once I caught Lindsay playfully poking her head in from the bar's entrance,
knowing it was off limits to her.
As always, I made a show of chasing her way,
and she ran towards the stairs, laughing and pointing to make sure I knew
she was avoiding the elevator.
Later, I overheard a middle-aged couple whispering something about the elevator,
but other than that, no problems.
At the end of my shift,
late at night and long after I'd seen or heard anyone go through the lobby, I decided I should
ride the elevator, not because I wanted to, but because I felt some responsibility.
When those doors closed, my heart rate increased, and when the elevator started up, I barely breathed.
If this thing got stuck now, who would hear the alarm?
My eyes went to the trapdoor above. The cables creaked with a shaft,
making the elevator feel like the hold of an old ship sailing.
When the doors opened on my floor, I practically jumped through them.
Passing Lindsay's door, I heard a baby crying and a TV turned up.
Life at Hotel Louise remained chaotic without Pete, but mostly things remained routine.
Mrs Downing drank beer and tomato, Rodrigo cursed in at least two languages,
and Lindsay adventured on the high seas of the elevator shaft.
Hearing of no further problems with it, I refrained from having to call the apparently dreaded elevator repair people.
It had become Groundhog Day again, until one afternoon a scream echoed through the lobby.
Everyone ran to where the screaming resident stood before the open elevator.
Inside the car, a young man who lived in the 11th floor lay butchered.
I quickly scanned the lobby for signs of a wild animal.
Something had torn through and fillet the mantar rib cage.
but there were no signs of an animal,
no bloody pawprints on the faded marble floor,
and no one had seen anything.
The police came and did their thing.
They examined the body, questioned those that found it,
and questioned those of us on the ground floor
as to whether we had seen anything unusual.
They asked if anyone living here might have a wild animal as a pet,
but were informed that no pets were allowed.
After most of them had left and the body had been removed,
Lindsay broke the rule and came to the bar to see me.
she was scared
I gave her a Shirley temple
and reassured the cops would catch
whatever animal had gotten loose
but she shook her head
under the big captain's hat
it wasn't an animal
she said
I came out from behind the bar
and sat down beside her
her look gravely serious
she said
his girlfriend did it
what do you mean
she slurbed a drink before
answering. I was with them, until we got to my floor.
Lindsay, I said, but cut myself off. For that moment, a fearsome crew stormed in from the lobby.
The elevator repairman. Eight of them. Wearing blue jeans in work boots, black work gloves,
some carrying toolboxes. But they also wore dark polyester jackets, like something you might see
on an FBI response team and tinted glasses like proverbial men in black.
And they had tactical radios with ear and mouthpieces.
Everything about them looked government,
except their jacket said,
Elevator repair.
Don't say a word, I whispered to Lindsay.
Now, I know what you're thinking.
Lindsay had possibly seen the killer.
The only clue anyone had,
and here I was keeping her quiet.
But my reason was simple.
I was terrified for her.
I sensed these men were a threat,
and she would be in danger.
My original plan was to keep her quiet until they left, then bring her to the police.
But something about the way the remaining cops deferred to these elevator repairmen changed that plan too.
I told her to hurry home, using the stairs of course, and stay quiet about everything.
The repairmen cleaned the mess in the elevator, of course, but see more focus on looking for witnesses to anything unusual.
They found few people to talk to. Residents and staff steered well clear of them.
I noticed that, before leaving, a few of them rode the elevator to the top floor.
Were they visiting the old man?
Over the next several days, I didn't see anything of Lindsay.
I guessed maybe she had told her mother, who had made her stay inside.
During that first night, when the building grew deathly quiet,
weak cries occasionally echoed to the elevator shaft.
Mrs. Downing just muttered that it was just people on the other floor.
Once someone heard a scream, but we argued imaginations were starting to run wild.
Then, Pete returned, a bit thinner and greyer, but otherwise back to his old self,
though he did seem quite troubled about what he learned had happened.
More days went by, and then things returned to normal.
Even Lindsay's mom apparently liberated her, so once again she took command of a ship.
She met me with a grin when I hopped on to head for work.
Good morning, bad...
Good morning, Mr. Bartender.
Where to?
Nineteen.
Her mouth half opened in surprise, but she hit the button.
We started up.
A little sightseeing, she asked.
I thought we could talk.
Her expression grew slightly dark.
Okay, she said.
Did you tell anyone about what you saw?
She shook ahead.
Good, I said.
We arrived at 19, and the door opened to an empty hallway.
It always feels weird when the doors open and there's no one there.
Like time seems to slow while you wait.
It had to be the girlfriend, Lindsay began when the doors closed,
because when I got off on my floor, it was just those two.
But there were people waiting in the lobby, I reminded her,
and there was no one on it when it arrived, except the victim.
So she must have jumped off on two, Lindsay told me,
her face suggesting she thought I was dense.
Then she took the stairs.
She didn't live here, you know.
She was his girlfriend.
The cables groaned as we slowly descended.
Both shot a nervous glance at the ceiling.
What did she look like? I asked.
Oh, very pleasant and pretty.
I liked her.
She always talked to me, like you.
We arrived on one, and she hid behind the console so Pete wouldn't spot her.
I took the five spot behind her ear as the door opened.
saying softly,
let me know later if you remember any more details.
Yes, sir.
Later that night, I learned
that Lindsay had gone missing.
The long, interminable day dragged on much the same as most of than did.
Mrs. Downing made, back in my day's small talk,
Rodrigo cursed with improving English,
and I caught Pete, practicing his sneer in a mirror.
He sneered at me when I caught him.
I was a little surprised, even disappointed,
that not once all day did Lindsay make me chase her giggling from the bar entrance.
Her smile was the sunrest way to know this place wasn't entirely infested by zombies,
including my own undead self,
but I wasn't actually worried until the elevator took me home at the end of my shift
and the door opened to my floor.
Instead of the usual empty hallway,
I found several elevator repairmen escorting Lindsay's mom from her apartment.
She carried the baby and held the hand of a toddler,
while some of the men carried overnight bags.
Her eyes were red, clearly from crying.
Right away, I knew something terrible had happened.
I tried to grab her arm, but the elevator repairman,
like the Secret Service guarding a president, kept me away.
Where's Lindsay? I demanded, but they hurried her off toward the elevator.
Was she sick?
My instinct told me something truly terrible had happened.
I walked in a daze to my room, stood there a long moment with a key.
The elevator door closed, leaving me alone in the hallway.
No, I had to know more.
I hurried back to the elevator and pressed the down button.
It remained unmoving on the first floor, so I ran down the stairs.
By the time I got down, the lobby was empty.
I ran to the street in time to see the black SUV,
emplacing with elevator repair service on the doors, speeding from the curb.
Should I call the police?
Suspecting that in this case, police would not help, might not even show up.
I stood there, helpless, running over useless ideas in my head, determined to do something.
The lobby showed no sign of activity.
Pete's office was, of course, empty.
Rodrigo had gone home.
All the lights were off in the bar, of course.
But wait.
Someone was sitting there in the dark, a bottle on the bar in front.
I charged into the room to find.
and Pete, sitting there distraught, drinking right from the bottle.
Whatever happened to Lindsay, that asshole knew.
I spun him around and shoved him against the bar.
Where is she?
He didn't even pretend not to know.
Couldn't bring himself to look at me.
Where?
There's nothing we can do, he wrote.
Had Lindsay seen something about the murder and talked?
Listen to me, you sniveling weasel.
He finally looked at me, tears forming in his eyes.
I told her not to ride that elevator, he said.
I told her.
What does that have to do with anything?
Spit it up, all of it.
She's in the elevator shaft.
What?
She's in the elevator shaft, damn it.
So was the kid's girlfriend, but you saw what it did to him.
It's too late.
Come on.
I dragged him into the lobby.
What he was saying sounded.
absurd, but every single one of us has at some point in our life seen something totally, horribly
impossible to believe. Sure, your mind tricks you into forgetting, but take it from me. Someday,
it'll all flood back, and you'll wonder if you had just dreamed it. Before we got to the elevator,
it dinged. We stopped in our tracks, staring at the door, waiting breathlessly for it to open,
wondering who or what might be coming off at this late hour. When it finally opened, we'd
He said out, fury in his eyes.
They talk her, he shouted, Lenina.
Rumors were probably spreading through the building.
No, Pete said.
She's still here.
He gestured toward the elevator.
Rodrigo's face went pale and he made the sign of a cross.
Wait here, Pete told us, and went into the janitor's closet.
He returned with a ladder and a tall bag.
I was about to pull the emotion.
Emergency stop in the elevator to make sure it didn't move, but Pete stopped me.
We don't want to send any alarms.
We let the doors close, us inside.
He then reached into the bag, pulled out a hammer and handed it to me.
My weapon.
He gave Rodrigo a long screwdriver, adding an apologetic shrug,
reducing a round of multilingual cursing.
He took out a hatchet for himself.
I made him trade it for my hammer.
Lastly, he pulled out a pair of heavy electrical gloves.
Give me one of those.
I put one of the gloves on.
Pete inserted a key into the control panel
and the trap door on the ceiling opened with a whoosh of pneumatic air.
The door was almost as big as the whole ceiling.
He placed the ladder and led us up.
There was no light inside the shaft,
so we opened flash apps on our phones.
On the roof, we stopped to scan the walls with our beams.
Jesus, what a horror.
Everything in the shaft, as far as I could reach, was covered with spiderwebs.
The cinder block walls, the guiding rails, the pulling chains, the electrical cables.
However, this was not normal spiderweb.
I grabbed a fistful.
It looked to be made of pure, finely spun silver.
This whole place, Pete explained.
All of these places were built on silver wealth.
All of them?
Pete stepped on a huge button
and the trapdoor closed with another whoosh.
While he examined the rooftop control console,
brushing web off it,
I spotted something on the floor.
Lindsay's captain hat.
Myodios, Rodrigo whispered in horror at this.
My voice trembling with anger,
I ordered Pete to get this thing moving up.
Up we went, but slowly.
The rooftop console operates the car at reduced speed.
I white-knuckled a hatchet, exploring the shaft of my beam, all of it covered with silver webs.
Pete had to stay crouched with his finger on the up button.
Where the walls were visible beneath the web, it looked like nothing I'd ever seen.
Built of honeycombed concrete blocks and strangely deep cracks between them.
Stop, I commanded.
An area between the floors where the web stuff was extra thick caught my attention.
I cleared it with a hatchet, revealing an opening wide enough for someone to crawl.
through. The beam from my phone
revealed the dark tunnel, covered in
silver web. What the hell
is this? I asked. An air vent?
I don't think so, Pete replied.
This building was built for
her. Her? I asked, turning to him.
He just nodded gravely.
Inauthentie, so I said,
bring us up. The elevator car
lifted slowly into the dark shaft.
A couple weeks ago,
I saw you throw a meet up on the elevator roof.
Pete closed his eyes for a moment.
Been doing it for years, he said.
I hoped it would be enough.
Coming to another horizontal passageway,
we again stopped so we could clear the web and expect inside.
God, the idea of having to crawl into one of those
was enough to bring me to the edge of panic.
Again, I probed its length with my beam of light,
but it came nowhere near reaching the end,
and she could be deep inside,
beyond the reach of my light.
Then a muffled sound of crying
came from higher up.
Shh.
We stopped and listened.
Nothing.
I signalled Pete to bring us up.
Agonisingly slow,
foot by foot,
nervously looking around
for any sign of something moving,
we ascended.
Then I spotted something
coming down towards us.
My heart thundered
and my lungs locked.
I tried to hit it with my light.
What's that? I shouted.
Just a counterweight, Pete explained.
And I'd noticed it was moving down at the same speed we were moving up.
Of course, the counterweight, part of the elevator system.
I went back to shine in my light on the shaft walls.
But as the counterweight was about to pass us,
luckily Pete hit it with his phone beam,
just as a spider the size of a human uncurled from behind it and leaped onto Rodrigo.
He had time only to gasp as the ungodly thing
shot its mouth into his shoulder, injecting poison with his fangs.
I swung at its black body with a hatchet, feeling some of its eight eyes on me,
my hand stinging as the hatchet struck solid mass, barely penetrating its shell-like armor.
The elevator had stopped rising when Pete jumped away from the console.
I raised the hatchet to strike again, but the spider jumped back onto the counterweight.
Rodrigo slumped, convulsing to the roof.
Pete returned to the console and started lowering us, raising the counterweight and the spider higher,
but I yanked his hand off the console to stop our descent.
Are you crazy?
He screamed.
Keeping an eye on the spider,
which had black liquid oozing from where I'd hit it,
I examined Rodrigo.
Let's get him inside.
We rolled him toward the wall so we could open the trap door.
I kicked the button and the hydraulic door opened.
The ladder laid fallen inside.
Holding Rodrigo by the arms,
we lowered him as far as we could
before dropping him to the elevator floor.
Drewl steamed down his face.
He had become essentially paralysed.
I shut the trap door and faced the spider,
showing the hatchet and hoping it understood.
I held a finger for Pete to be quiet.
We listened.
Again, barely audible, came crying from high above.
Take it up, I whispered.
We slowly ascended, keeping a wary eye on the spider
as the counterweight passed us.
I leaned over the edge of the roof
and kept my light on the thing,
which made it shrivel into a defensive posture.
The counterweight descended
beyond the reach of my light, and the spider
remained perched on it as far as I could watch
it.
We went back to scanning the walls above.
It was hard to shake the feeling
that somehow that thing had screwed back up
and might attack from beneath the elevator car.
There, Peter whispered hoarsely,
right there.
He shined his flash at a spot on the wall
where the web was long and thick,
and, as we lifted towards it,
we could see it wrapped tightly around
something. My heart raced and my blood ran cold. I couldn't stand the thought of that thing doing
this to her. Before Pete even stopped the elevator, I started feverishly brushing the silver web from her.
Pete joined me, and while he began clearing a body, I frantically rub the stuff from her face. As I pulled
the threads from her mouth, then her nose, I cleared the eyes and almost screamed.
Empty socket. Pete kept pulling on the silver thread.
on the stomach and chest.
So horrified and terrified was I
that only now did I realize
this was not a seven-year-old girl.
We had found the dead young woman
Lindsay had seen on the elevator that day
when the young man who had lived in the building
was butchered.
Blood still trailed from her eyes down her face.
She had not been dead long.
Pete, perhaps still not understanding,
kept reflexively clearing the web from a body.
Come on, I said,
but he gave her one last sweep of the hand
and it opened a hole in a stomach.
He jumped back.
Damn.
I hit the hole with a light
and saw baby spiders
the size of tarangels scrying out
already jumping to the roof of the elevator.
Damn it, damn it!
We stunted them like Irish river dancers.
One of them jumped from the dead girl
onto my arm.
I flung it off, but then another landed
to my shoulder and bit me.
Damn it!
I swiped it off,
moving away from the nest as much as I could.
We kept stomping,
Spider still jumping onto the car while I hit the up button on the console.
Slowly we lifted past the body.
I felt the whole shaft began to spin.
My legs growing rubbery as the poison hit my system.
My brain's still digested in what I had learned.
That huge button for the trap door, I struggled to say.
Pete kept searching the walls above us with his beam.
I told you, this whole thing was built for her.
I stood there fighting the cobwebs, losing all sense of time, aware only that we were ascending,
unable to direct the light from my phone, unsure how many floors up we were, whether we were nearing the old man's floor.
I worried my wobbly legs would fail me and I'd fall into the shaft.
Pete remained silent.
After what felt like a long time, my head started to clear.
I was able to move my flash beam around those dark walls covered in threads of pure silver.
And then my beam hit it.
A little wrapped body, wrapped hanging on the wall.
A muffled cry came from within.
As soon as we reached her, I ripped the threads from her face, pulling them from her mouth.
She gasped for air.
I was clearing her eyes.
When the mother spider climbed back under the elevator roof from below.
Lindsay screamed.
Pete screamed.
I broke away from the girl to swing my hatch out of the thing.
Pete went back to freeing her.
I swiped at the spider, but it was so fast, and it now understood the weapon in my hand.
I couldn't get close through his body with any of my swings.
It paired me with its legs, jabbing and blocking.
A spider leg thrust forward and pulled Pete's leg out from under him, and he fell clinging to the roof, his legs hanging off it.
Lindsay screamed.
I reached down and pulled Pete back up.
I picked up the hammer, which Peter dropped, and right as the spider dived towards me, I threw the hammer at its face.
The claw lodged into one of its eight eyes
It hissed in anger
Trying to shake it out
I finished freeing Lindsay
Pulling her into my arms
A moment before handing her to Pete
So I could focus on the spider
Now trying to pull at a lodged hammer with its legs
My first thought was the throw of the hatchet
But if I didn't kill it
We would be left defenseless
Then a crazy idea
I switched the hatchet to my left hand
The one with a rubber glove
And hacked at the power cable
running along the wall, showing us with electrical sparks.
One more strike severed it.
Holding the cable in one hand, I reached the console,
but the spider jabbed at my hand.
I pulled away, tried again, managed to hit the down button.
We slowly descended.
The power cable pulled free of the wall,
little by little as I held it.
When I had enough slack, I held it forward toward the spider.
It snapped at the cable with its jaws, closing around the end,
and, drawing a huge charge of cool.
current which jolted it right off the roof.
I hurried over to Lindsay, who Pete was still holding, and brushed more web off, inspecting her
up and down.
You came, she said, choking tears.
I held her close.
Let's get her inside, I said.
Nodding, Pete started for the trap door, when suddenly the elevator shot downward.
I dropped to my knees, hugging Lindsay protectively.
I panicked thought.
That thing had severed the cables.
Pete hugged the roof
The elevator fell
Each floor zipping by
But at some point
My mind was able to recognize
That the acceleration had stopped
And the descent was even
And then it hit me
Rodrigo
I risked a glance down
Over into the shaft
Aiming my phone while holding Lindsay
The bottom was rapidly coming towards us
But we were not falling
The elevator slowed
As we approached the lower levels
But then I saw three
Black spiked legs
clinging to the bottom of the elevator.
Somehow she held on underneath.
As the elevator stopped, Pete opened the trapdoor
and waited while I jumped through with Lindsay in my arms.
I landed with a safety roll, keeping her shielded.
Pete dropped down right after me.
Rodrigo was sitting on the floor by the console,
completely out of it.
The G button lit up.
In its confusion, he had sent us down.
The door opened into the lobby.
I scooted to my feet, still holding the girl,
punched the bee button and bolted out the door.
Pete helped Rodrigo out.
We stood there a few feet away as the door closed
and the elevator went down to the basement.
The ungodly screech of a wounded creature
reached us through the elevator.
Then an alarm went off and the bee light started blinking.
I suspected the elevator repairmen
would be on the way.
Quickly now, Pete ordered us.
We dashed out the door to the street.
Redrigo leaning on Pete like a man just awoken from anesthesia.
He took a moment for Pete to hail a cab.
We helped Rodrigo into it on one side while I climbed in with Lindsay on the other.
But Pete did not get in.
Her mother is at the Marriott, he said, is assertive self-returning.
Take him to the hospital first.
I nodded, exhausted.
What will you do?
There are no cameras in the building, for obvious reasons.
I can clean most of this up before they get.
here. He pulled out his wallet and handed me all the cash he had. $700. After you drop off the
girl, just go anywhere. He started to pull away from the door and stopped to make sure I understood.
Don't ever say anything to anyone, he said, don't think you can do something. You can't. There are
buildings like this all over, hundreds of them, maybe thousands, hospitals, office towers, any place.
Somewhere inside each is an old man or maybe an old woman.
who's been there an impossibly long time
who trusts very few people
could be a doctor, a broker
anything. There's a lot of
power and they know how to protect it.
Forget about what you saw
convince yourself it was a bad dream
and who would believe it anyway.
With that
he shut the door and ran back inside.
I took Rodrigo to the hospital
his mind slowly coming out of its fog
he'd be okay.
At first my plan
was to have the doctors check out Lindsay too, but I decided against it.
She too seemed okay, asking me where a mom was.
In a perfect world, I'd have the doctors clearer.
But there would be questions.
The police would get involved and remembering what Pete said.
They have a lot of power, and they know how to protect it.
I didn't trust the system would protect her.
So I took her to the Marriott.
We visited the desk,
then after making sure there were no elevator repairmen low.
lurking around, I knocked on the door, holding Lindsay by the hand.
Her mother, I still rubbed red, opened the door and clutched the daughter with indiscernible relief.
I didn't stay with them more than a few minutes.
Her mother didn't ask me anything, and I didn't offer much.
When it was time to leave, I took out the cash Peter given me
and tried to press it into the mother's hands, but she refused it.
I understood that the elevator repairman had paid her off with a large sum.
With much sadness, I left them.
What kind of life would Lindsay have with a mother
who had allowed herself to be bought off?
But then, I guess she had made a rational choice to save her other children.
Who knew what she'd have been told?
Hopefully, the whole thing would have the effect of helping her get her priorities right.
An hour later, I was on a bus out of town, running again, I guess,
and convincing myself I wasn't.
Pete was right.
I needed to trick myself into thinking
it was all a nightmare,
something cooked up by a tired and distraught mind.
I suspected I would eventually succeed.
But one thing I knew,
if I was ever again in a tall building,
I would be sure
to take the stairs.
